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Post by Sanda on Dec 14, 2013 23:26:55 GMT -6
Great update Jessie. I don't blame Daryl for being mad at Carol for not wanting to back to the prison with her but I also sympathsize with Carol and I understand the reasons why doesn't want to go back to the prison with Daryl and face Rick everyday after he abandoned her and left all alone and she found Emma and Alex and she was raped by Phillip aka The Governor. I also don't blame Carol one bit for slapping Daryl across the face for saying that Emma was not her kid Sophia. Daryl deserved the slap that Carol gave him for that nasty and cruel comment he made about Emma. I hope you update this awesome story again really soon. I am so glad that Carol has Emma and Alex in her life after the cruel way Daryl treated her in this chapter even though the hopeless romantic in me wants Carol and Daryl patch things up and for them to be together with Emma.
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Post by melinda on Dec 15, 2013 18:09:23 GMT -6
oh daryl, why don't you understand? lol I hope they can resolve things and he can be more sensitive to her. I love this please update soon
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Post by jessie on Dec 15, 2013 21:24:40 GMT -6
Chapter 26
Alex walked upstairs, and walked to Emma's room she was on the bed looking at her book.
"Hi Sweetie what are you doing"?
"Daddy something is wrong with Mommy she is crying"
"Emma I will go check on Carol but will you stay here until I come back"
"Yes Daddy". He gave her a kiss, and got up, and walked out closing her door. He walked down the hall, and knocked on Carol's door, and he heard her say she will be right there. Alex waited he heard the door unlock, and Carol looked so pale Alex walked over not saying anything he just held her as she cried in his arms. She finally stopped, and walked over sitting in the chair as Alex came in shutting the door.
"Carol you , and Daryl had a fight is it because you wouldn't leave with him"?
"Yes he doesn't understand I can't go back"
"Because of the man that sent you away"
"Yes Alex he hurt me , and I am not welcome there, I don't think I ever fit in there."
"I think he cares about you, and he is hurt but he has a temper which I don't like"
'He has a temper but he would never hurt me, but he hates me right now"
"He said some cruel things to me I can only imagine what he said to you"
"Alex, I need to be alone tonight you understand"
"Yes but can I have your weapons"?
"God you think I would hurt myself, I wouldn't do that to you, and Emma"
"I hope not because that little girl down the hall loves you like a Mom, and it would devastate her if she lost you now"
"Alex it hurts so bad, I feel so empty inside, and seeing him so upset hurts so bad"
Alex walked over, and touched her shoulder, and said, "He is a fool turning his back on you, I never would ". He walked out leaving her speechless. She got up, and walked over to the window looking out wondering if he would return but she knew he would not turn his back on his family back at the Prison. He was a man of honor, and she admired him for everything he does for the Group, but she hated herself for thinking this but she wished just this once he chose her.
Daryl had been walking for about 2 hours, and he couldn't count how many times he was about to turn around, and go back to the one person he could honestly say he loved. He kept walking he needed to get to the Prison, and tell the others what happened, and tell them what happened to Carol. He was not sure what he would say to Rick because right this moment he hated the guy, and it hurt because he was like a Brother to him but after what he did to Carol he could never forgive him. He hated himself for walking away from Carol after everything she did to protect Emma, and what she did for the Group for years. He was so angry that she wouldn't return to the Prison with him but she has changed just like Rick said but for the better. The first time he saw her she was shy, she was married to Ed, and had a little girl. She was running around trying to feel like she was helping out but at first she was pushed aside like the lady with the kid, and the husband that did absolutely nothing to contribute to the Group. Merle made more than one sick joke about her but Merle in the end told Daryl that Carol had turned into one of the Strongest Group members, and that was a lot coming from Merle. He knew it took a lot out of Carol to say she was staying because he could see she cared for him just as much as he cared about her. He hurt her, and he hoped she could forgive him because he knew as long as he lived he would never forgive himself. He could see the Prison in the distance, and he knew tonight the group will find out what Carol did she killed their worst enemy, and she did it for a little girl she just met. Rick was so wrong Carol belong with the Group she belonged right by his side, but because of Rick he lost the person that made him change, and made him care but without her he could see his old self coming back, and it scared him.
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Post by Sanda on Dec 15, 2013 23:37:25 GMT -6
Great update Jessie. I feel horrible for all of all four of them in this chapter. I hope that Carol and Daryl both come to their senses soon and make up really soon because they belong together forever. I also feel horrible for Emma and Alex as well when and if Carol leaves them and goes back with Daryl to the prison to face Rick and the rest of them at the prison after Rick abandoned her to deal with the Walkers and Zombies . I hope you update this awesome Carol, Daryl, Alex, and Emma story you are writing again really soon. I really love this Walking Dead story you are writing and posting on my message board.
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Post by jessie on Jun 6, 2014 23:29:48 GMT -6
Chapter 27
Daryl got to the Prison, and Rick saw him, and was so glad he was worried something happened to him. He opened the gate along with Maggie.
"Daryl thank God you are back we were so worried"
"Really Rick you were worried" Rick looked at Daryl and he could see he was real angry, and when Daryl was in this kind of mood it was best to stay out of his way. Daryl started to walk to the Prison but he turned, and said.
"Meeting tonight I have things to say to the Group"
"Daryl you didn't find Carol did you"? Rick said but Daryl kept walking and Maggie looked at Rick, and said.
"God he didn't find her turned did he. I never seen him so angry, and upset. I wonder what this meeting is about"?
"I don't know but I think if Carol was dead he would have killed me"
Maggie smiled, "You might be right come on lets tell the others we are having a meeting"
Rick told Maggie to go tell the others he would keep watch.
"I think Daryl wants you to hear what he has to say. I will send out a couple of guys out to replace you in a little while"
Rick said ok as Maggie went into the prison. Rick stood staring out the gate, and wondered what happened while Daryl was gone. He knew Daryl was upset about Carol, but he told her to leave for her own safety. He knew Tyrell would lose it, and maybe even kill her, and he couldn't have that. Carol was his friend, and he missed her, and he owed her so much for helping out with Judith, and Carl. He didn't know why or how but Carol changed and he couldn't have her here anymore after what she did. Rick knew he made the right decision as the Leader but as Carol's friend he knew it was a horrible mistake, and he hoped nothing happened to Carol. He knew she was strong, and he knew she would find another group, and go on, but thinking she was killed just hurt to much so Rick had to put it out of his mind because it hurt to much to think he was to blame if she did die out there alone.
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Post by Sanda on Jun 7, 2014 1:29:28 GMT -6
Great update Jessie. I am so glad that Daryl is finally back at the prison so he tell everyone at the prison exactly how he feels about them and Rick abandoning Carol. I don't blame Daryl one bit for being angry at the group for abandoning carol. I can't wait for the council meeting to happen so Daryl can rip them all a new one abandoning Carol. I love this Carol and Daryl story you are writing. I hope you update this again really soon.
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Post by jessie on Jun 10, 2014 0:03:55 GMT -6
Chapter 28
Everyone was sitting waiting for Daryl who went to his cell. Rick and Maggie knew what the meeting was about but the others had no idea. All they knew Daryl was angry, and he called this meeting. Rick didn't want Carl in the meeting but he was upset he felt he had a right to be here. Rick ended up saying he could stay because he would find out the truth anyway. Carl sat beside Rick as Glenn, Maggie, Beth, Hershel sat together. Bob, Sasha, Tyresse, Michonne and a few other sat waiting for Daryl. They heard Daryl's cell door bang, and they heard him coming down the hall. He walked in, and they knew Daryl this was not going to be a friendly meeting. He just stared at Rick, and than he finally began to talk.
"I guess you want to know why I called this meeting"?
Hershel smiled, "Yes we can see you are upset"
"Have any of you wondered where Carol is"?
Hershel looked at Rick he knew what Carol did but he thought it was best he kept his opinion to himself. He had mixed feeling on what Rick did. He didn't think it was right that Rick kicked her out of the Prison without having a meeting. He hated the thought of her being out there all alone. He was mad at her for taking it upon herself to kill two of their own. He also was smart enough to know Carol did it because she felt there was nothing else she could do. Hershel knew Karen and David would not be sitting here with them. All the sick were dead the only ones that survived the illness were Glenn, and Sasha. All the others died from the flu like virus.
Hershel finally said to Daryl, "Yes I knew she was gone"
Glenn turned to Hershel, "Gone what do you mean, Rick said she went on one of the runs, and was missing. I thought that was why Daryl was out there looking for her"?
Daryl yelled, "Rick took her on a run, and left her"
"Daryl you know why I did it, and why I didn't tell the others. I was protecting Carol she changed. I couldn't let her stay here anymore not around the children"
Maggie spoke up, "What she took care of Judith like she was her Mother. I don't understand why you would say such a thing"
"She killed Karen and David"
Tyreese stood up, "What did you say"?
Rick turned, "I am sorry she confessed to killing them. I think she did it to protect the rest of us but she had no right"
"She killed Karen"
Sasha stood up, "Tyreese please calm down, Karen was dying, I was with her the day she died. She was losing blood she was coughing so much she could barely breath. I hate that Karen and David are dead but we lost so many from that virus. I don't know what caused it but Carol knew they were dying that would be the only reason she would do what she did"
"You are defending her"? Tyreese said
Sasha walked over giving her brother a hug, and Tyreese sat down he was in shock.
Daryl looked at Tyreese, "I saw Carol, and she told me what happened that day. She said she was scared for the rest of us, and she knew they were going to die, and turn. We saw what happened when the sick died so many others were killed. Carol has been our friend from the first day we all met. She has given everything for this group. She lost her little girl, and really did any of us help her through that. We all just went on like Sophia didn't exist. She had to be dying inside but she took care of your child Rick. She gave up food to feed the younger children. She has been so strong, and she has changed but so have we all. You have no idea what happened to her out there Rick. I will never forgive you for hurting her. How could you think leaving her on her own was the right thing to do? You could have told me, and I would have left with her."
Rick spoke up, "What happened to her"?
"Oh I will tell you, and than I am going to her, and I will tell her, I will never turn my back on her like you did"
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Post by Sanda on Jun 10, 2014 10:11:06 GMT -6
Great update Jessie. I love how protective Daryl is of Carol in this chapter and that he let everyone in the group who attended the counsel meeting have it for turning their backs on Carol after Rick left her to defend herself against the zombies. :'(I don't blame Tyreese for being upset because Carol killed Karen and David. You should be writer for the Walking Dead. I would definitely watch your version of the Walking Dead. I hope you update this story again soon.
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Post by jessie on Jun 10, 2014 16:23:36 GMT -6
Chapter 29
Everyone was staring at Daryl he wanted them to know what Carol was willing to do to save a child from the Governor.
" I was looking for Carol, and I thought I would never find her. I found this guy who was looking for food for his child. I found out Carol was with his little girl back at his place. I went there looking for her but as we got to the house we heard gun shots. I ran to the house I thought for sure Carol was dead. We got to the house, and ran upstairs, and I found Carol in the room she was alive but there was a dead man on the floor. Carol was scared, and she was saying things I didn't understand. She killed the Governor he was going to kill her, and take Emma the little girl. He wanted to leave Carol dead so when the Father came home she would kill him. Carol did everything in her power to protect that child. She had to try and gain his trust knowing he would kill her anyway. She would do anything to protect people so how could you think she would hurt your children Rick"
"Carol killed the Governor" Rick said still stunned at what Daryl just said.
"Yes she killed him but now she has to live with what she had to do"
"Killing him was the right thing to do she should be happy"
"She had to let that man touch her Rick do you get that."
"He raped her" Beth said but Daryl was not going to get into it any further. He needed to leave here, and go back to Carol. She needed him more than anyone else did right this moment. He left her there after treating her so badly. He had to make things right before it was to late. He hated knowing the Governor did thing to Carol that made his skin crawl thinking about, but that didn't matter. All that mattered now was she needed him, and he was going to be there for her no matter what. Daryl turned saying he is leaving first thing in the morning, and he might not be back. He walked out of the room leaving them all there staring at Rick.
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Post by Sanda on Jun 10, 2014 17:45:36 GMT -6
Great update Jessie. I feel bad for Daryl in this chapter having to tell the group that Carol was raped by the governor and that she killed the Governor to protect herself and the little girl she is taking care of. I hope that Carol lets Daryl help her deal with the aftermath of her rape when he goes back to her, Emma, and Alex. I hope you update this story again really soon. I love this Walking Dead story you are writing about what happened to Carol after Rick abandoned her. You are awesome writer. :)You should be writing for The Walking Dead.
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Post by jessie on Jun 28, 2014 22:56:35 GMT -6
Chapter 30
Daryl walked into his cell, and was packing his bag. He put it on the floor, and sat on the bunk, and was thinking about Carol. He hoped she would forgive him for leaving her after everything she went through. He wished it was morning because he knew he wouldn't sleep all night. He sat back, and was staring at the ceiling when someone knocked on his door.
"Go away I don't want to talk to anyone right now"
The door opened, and Daryl really was not in the mood he jumped up seeing Rick.
"You of all people should stay away from me right now"
"Daryl I know you are angry, and I know what I did to Carol was not the right thing to do. I was worried about her and Tyreese."
"That is crap and you know it"
"No it isn't crap, I hate what happened to her with the Governor"
"It is your fault you knew she would be hurt banning her all alone. I should have ran after her maybe she would have been safe. You are right Carol has changed she is stronger than all of us. She does what is needed not like you Rick"
"What is that suppose to mean Daryl"?
"We knew what was going on, and she took matters into her own hands because she knew David and Karen were going to die . I think we all knew we would lose a lot of people but we pretended finding medicine would make things better. She killed David, and Karen, and I hate that she had to do that all alone. She never would harm anyone unless there was nothing else she could do"
"They were part of the Group she should have come to us"
"Yes but look at all the group that died from the same d**n disease that Karen and David were dying from."
"We need you here Daryl, I don't want you to go"
"Rick get out of here before I hurt you"
"Let me go get her tell me where she is"
"No I am going to her she would not want to see you."
"Bring her back, I will make things right"
"She will not come back, and if she doesn't I will not be back either"
Rick walked over, and touched Daryl's shoulder, and said, "We all make mistakes you both can hate me but the others need you both here" Rick walked out, and Daryl sat down thinking about what Rick said. He knew whatever Carol decides to do he is with her but in his heart he hopes she will return because he did feel like the Group was family, and leaving them for good would be a hard thing to do.
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Post by Sanda on Jun 29, 2014 0:50:03 GMT -6
Great update Jessie. I loved the talk between Rick and Daryl in this chapter. I hope things work out for Carol and .Daryl when Daryl goes back to daryl, Emma, and .Alex and that Carol agrees to come back with Daryl to the prison with Alex and Emma in tow. I don't want Carol to abandon Alex and Emma either. Please update this story again soon. I love this Carol and Daryl story you are writing.
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Post by melinda on Jun 30, 2014 19:20:41 GMT -6
this is awesome I am so glad you updated. I love this, I hope you keep going. I feel so bad for Carol here
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Post by jessie on Jun 30, 2014 22:57:14 GMT -6
Chapter 31
Alex came downstairs seeing Carol with Emma at the kitchen table. Emma was coloring but Carol was just staring straight ahead, and Alex hated seeing her so down. He walked over touching her shoulder making Carol jump.
"Oh my God I am so sorry I scared you"
"I should be more alert I was just watching Emma draw you a picture" Carol said
Emma smiled, "Look Daddy this is all of us, and maybe someday we will have a dog that looks like this"
Alex looked at the picture and said, "Beautiful picture Sweetie but I doubt we will have a dog"
"Maybe we can you never know"
Carol smiled, "Yes we never know but don't get your hopes up. I think it is nap time how about you go upstairs, and I will read you one of your favourite stories". Emma got off her seat, and ran to the stairs but Carol told her to walk not run. Emma started to walk but they heard her run up the last few steps.
Alex laughed, "You are amazing with her"
"She is so sweet who wouldn't love her"
"Carol before you go upstairs can I say something to you"?
"Sure is something wrong"?
"Yes I am not blind you are really upset over Daryl leaving like he did. I can see you care for him deeply, and I am willing to go with you to this Prison he lives at with the rest of the Group you talk about"
"I am not welcome there remember the Leader banned me, and I am not willing to grovel for him to allow me back in. I do love Daryl but you heard how he talked to me he obviously doesn't care about me". Carol turned, and walked upstairs making Alex sit down feeling even worse bringing up his name.
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Post by Sanda on Jul 1, 2014 0:07:33 GMT -6
Great update Jessie. Alex, Emma, and Carol are so cute together. I love Alex and Carol heard Emma running up the stairs after they told her walk. hope Alex and Emma go back to the prison with Carol and Daryl when Daryl comes back and claims his woman. Carol and Daryl are so cute together and they belong together forever. I hope you update this story again really soon. I love this walking Dead story you are writing and posting on my message board.
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