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Post by jessie on Oct 25, 2011 0:18:21 GMT -6
New Story for you Melinda, I hope you like it. It is based on the movie 9 1/2 weeks with Kim Basinger, and Mickey Roarke. It is based on JR meeting Melinda they both are in their 20's, and a romance starts. Melinda is shy, sweet, beautiful, and just wanting to make friends, she meets JR, and that is where the story begins. It won't be exactly like the movie, but I got the idea from that film, but it won't be the exact same of course. I hope you like this Melinda. If you don't just tell me, and I will end it.
Chapter 1
Melinda was 21 she was a Manager in a fairly large advertising company. She loved her job she was saving money, she wanted to go back to school again, but she had to make ends meet, so she took this job, and she was grateful for it. She moved to Dallas, and was grateful that they gave her a chance, and she was happy, she lived in a small condo, she had a really good life. She just wished she had romance , but she knew she was hurt so many times in her life, she was afraid to open her heart up again. She met men but after 1 or 2 dates she ended it, because she was either to hard on herself, or them.
It was a Friday afternoon, she left work at 4pm, and was walking downtown Dallas looking in the shops. She saw a new dress, and she admired it from the window, but she almost ran in to get it, but why bother she didn't have anywhere to wear it. She couldn't wear something that elegant to work, she was about to leave when someone walked up behind him.
"That would be beautiful on you, why don't you go in , and buy it"? Melinda turned seeing the most amazing man standing in front of her. She thought his blue eyes were amazing, and his smile was naughty but adorable. She could tell right off the bat he was a sweet talker her heart was racing so bad, she almost couldn't catch her breath.
JR smiled, "You don't speak or you don't like me"?
"I'm sorry, but I don't know you, and why would you come up to me, and tell me to buy a dress"?
"Because you were admiring it, and it is stunning, and I think it would suit you perfectly"
"You do"?
He smiled, "My name is JR Ewing"
"JR Ewing of Ewing Oil"?
"That is the one"
"I heard of your company, it is nice to meet you. My name is Melinda, and thank you about the dress. I don't have anywhere to wear it, so I think I will pass on buying the dress"
"You don't have anywhere to wear it, are you saying a stunning beauty like yourself isn't taken already"?
"I'm single, and I enjoy it that way"
JR smiled, "Well I'm single too, and I like it too but we could be friends"
"Oh Mr. Ewing you want to be my friend"?
"Oh yes it would be fun, you can let me buy you that dress, and tonight I will wine, and dine you, and I'm sure by tomorrow, you will be mine"
"Oh God you are something, I have to go"
JR yelled, "Wait let me buy you the dress, and let me take you out to dinner no strings attached"
Melinda smiled, "Why would you buy a complete stranger a dress"?
"Because I can"
She smiled, "I guess you can, I'm going to take you up on that offer". He grabbed her hand, and they both ran into the shop.
To be continued.
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Post by Sanda on Oct 25, 2011 0:43:05 GMT -6
Great start to your story Jessie. I hope that MelindaJo, will like your new story.
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Post by melindajo2000 on Oct 25, 2011 10:33:55 GMT -6
Oh JR is trouble already I can tell lol. I really like this story I hope you update soon
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Post by jessie on Oct 25, 2011 12:45:14 GMT -6
Melinda I'm glad you, and Sanda like this story. Oh man JR and Melinda are something in this chapter. I love writing this story it is going to be a wild one, but fun. ;D
Chapter2
Melinda and JR were looking around, but she lifted the dress she was looking at. She couldn't believe it was 5 grand, and she put it down, but JR walked over. "What is the matter, you don't like it"?
"I love it but look at the price tag". He smiled, "I'm buying it don't worry about the cost"
"Forget it JR, I don't need a new dress". He grabbed it , 'Go try it on now"
"What no"?
JR touched her chin, "I said go try it on". Melinda was shocked he was forceful but in a playful mood. She took it, he turned her around, "I want to see you in it". She walked over, the lady pointed to the room. JR smiled walking over to the lady, she laughed, and pointed to the room. He walked back, and was happy no one else was in the dressing room. He knocked Melinda whispered, "This is taken". JR opened the door she covered up, "JR what are you doing"?
He walked in shutting the door, and he moved close to her. He pulled her close as he brought his lips over hers. She was about to resist but she was totally taken in by JR. She grabbed his shirt pulling him even closer, he smiled, "Now that is my girl".
"JR I'm not this type of girl"
"What sweet, sexy, and mine"
"JR this isn't a game, please go out". He smiled, 'You don't want me to leave". He pulled the dress she was holding away from her putting it on the hook. She was in her underwear, and bra. He brought his lips down her neck making her moan out. He laughed, "Oh you are so beautiful". He brought his lips down her body, and moved over her breast, she whispered, "Oh JR stop". He undid her bra, he came back up to her mouth, "You want me to stop, I will but I think you want this as much as I do". She was shaking inside, her whole body ached for JR. He whispered, "Say it Melinda, say you need me too"
She looked at him, "I need you, I need you now". She moved close, JR didn't give her time to change her mind, he pulled his belt off, pulling his pants down kicking them aside. He removed his boxers Melinda stared he was so sexy, and she could see exactly what she was doing to him. He whispered, "Remove your panties or I will". She removed them, he whispered , "Come here Sugar". She walked close bringing her lips over this chest, and moved down his body. He shut his eyes, she smiled, "Oh Mr. Ewing, you need me too". He lifted her into his arms, and moved her to the wall, and entered her. She cried out but he put his mouth over hers to cover her moans. He was aggressive, it startled, and aroused Melinda so much. She has never been with a man like JR Ewing, and she whispered , "Oh JR'. He smiled, "Oh Melinda , I bet you don't want me to stop now"
"Oh No JR". He smiled as he continued to make love to her. He loved to see her face, he was bringing her to her release several times, he touched her face, "You ready"
"Yes". He came to his release , making they both collapse on the bench in the dressing room, they totally were drained of every last ounce of energy.
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Post by Sanda on Oct 25, 2011 12:56:14 GMT -6
Great update Jessie. OMG I LOVE how wild Melinda and JR are in this chapter. OMG I LOVE that JR and Melinda made love in the dressing room at the store.
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Post by melindajo2000 on Oct 25, 2011 13:44:06 GMT -6
wow this was wild, I love this story already... I can JR working his charms, he would be hard to resist glad you updated!
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Post by jessie on Oct 25, 2011 14:19:26 GMT -6
Chapter 3
Melinda got up pulling her panties on. "I can't believe I did this, JR you are bad"
"Oh Darling you were wild too, and you loved it". He sat on the chair not moving to get dressed. She grabbed her bra, "Get dressed they probably are calling the Police on us"
"No I told her if she gives us privacy for 1/2 hour, she gets a dress on me , and she was happy to do it"
Melinda laughed, 'You think you can do anything you want because you are a Ewing"
JR looked at his watch, "I have 10 more minutes, come here, lets not waste our time"
Melinda laughed, "I'm not making love to you again". He laid back, "I bet". She walked over , "I'm not"
He just stared at her, and she was drawn to him like a drug. She wanted to turn away but she couldn't his eyes were willing her to give herself to him once again. She moved close as he touched her waistband of her panties, and smiled. "We don't need these on do we"
"JR" . He sat up bringing his lips to her belly, she arched her back, he was driving her crazy. He knew how to please a woman in every way. He slowly pulled down her panties, she stood in front of him, but he stood up laying her on the bench. He whispered, "Lets make this count, now we only have 7 minutes". She smiled but he parted her with his body, and entered her fully shocking Melinda who yelled out in pure ecstasy. He moved bringing her closer, and closer to her release than he stopped just staring at her. She opened her eyes, he touched her lips, "I thought you said you never would make love to me again"
"JR"
"You are mine say it"
She was shaking she needed JR he held her close, but stopped making love. She whispered, "I'm yours JR'". He whispered, "That is my girl", as he smiled as he moved over her bringing her to a shattering release she was shaking in his arms. She held JR tight as he came to his release he laid beside her, and whispered, "Now we better get out of here, tonight is going to our night, the only person I want you to see in your eyes is me. I will not share you with anyone, I'm going to make you so happy you will purr"
Melinda sat up, but she smiled as she touched his face. "I'm sure I wouldn't look at anyone else you truly are amazing"
"You bet, but you were loud, I bet that woman is out there jealous wishing she was the lucky lady in here". Melinda got up smacking his bare butt making a loud noise shocking even JR. She smiled, "Oh wow I made a mark on that sexy butt, remember I'm yours, but I better never see you with another woman, because you won't be happy seeing me mad". JR grabbed his underwear, "Oh don't worry about me Sugar, you and Me have so much love to share, I will make you exhausted, that you wouldn't have the energy to be with anyone else". Melinda smiled, "You are sick but I must be too because I love you JR Ewing". She jumped into his arms, as she brought her lips over his. He laughed, "Oh man you are naughty you can't get enough of me, as they made love all over again.
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Post by Sanda on Oct 25, 2011 15:45:01 GMT -6
OMG Jessie I LOVE this story so much, I LOVE how wild Melinda and JR are in this chapter. ;D I hope you update this awesome story again soon.
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Post by melindajo2000 on Oct 25, 2011 16:01:47 GMT -6
she has it bad already, JR is too much..this is such a good story, I can only imagine what they will do next lol.. please keep writing
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Post by jessie on Oct 26, 2011 10:57:40 GMT -6
Chapter 4
Melinda and JR were getting dressed, he laughed, Melinda smiled. "What are you laughing at JR, this is your doing"?
"I know it was fun"
"I'm not this kind of person we just met"
"I'm irresistible, I warn you"
"You are if my Mom knew what I just did"
"Don't tell your Ma Ma, I won't tell mine either". Melinda laughed, "Where are we going tonight"? JR got up pulling her close, "Well you will have to wait, and see"
"Your not going to tell me"?
"No it is a secret"
"Your not going to call me are you"?
"Oh I will be calling you don't worry about that"
Melinda grabbed her purse, and JR held her hand, and they walked out with the dress. The lady was standing by the counter, she smiled.
'Did the dress fit my dear"?
"Yes perfect we will take it". Melinda smiled.
JR walked over to the teller, "Darling charge me for any dress you want too"
"I will buy one like this one it is beautiful". Melinda laughed as JR winked at her. He paid, and they walked out of the building. JR smiled, "So where do you live"?
"Maison Ave near Main Street"
"Really is that a house or apartment"?
"Apartment JR and yes it isn't a great neighborhood"
"I have a idea where is your car"?
"I take the bus, I don't drive down here"
"Come on my car is right over there". He walked over helping her in, as he ran around, and got in his side. She put the seat belt on, as JR started the car. They were driving she was talking making JR laugh. He drove up to a Condo, Melinda smiled, "Is this where you live"?
"No I live at Southfork, but this is my private condo". She smiled as he parked, and got out opening the door for her. He took her hand, she grabbed her purse, and dress, and got out of the car. He went inside the security guard waved as JR got on the elevator. They went up Melinda couldn't believe this was happening to her. She felt like she was in some dream, and she would wake up, and be disappointed. JR moved her against the wall, and brought his lips over her. She touched his chest, "JR what are you doing"?
"We are alone have you ever made love in a elevator"?
"No, and I'm not starting now". JR smiled, "Oh man Melinda live a little"
"I made love in a dressing room JR , that was wild enough for me". He laughed as the door opened, they walked out, and he grabbed his keys opening the door. She went in she couldn't believe how beautiful his condo was. She put the dress on the chair, and she walked over to the balcony, and went outside. She jumped when JR came up behind her wrapping his arms around her pulling her close as he nibbled on her neck. He whispered, "I need you Melinda , you are driving me insane". She turned, as she brought her lips over his. He lifted up her dress, and she looked around, "JR not here"?
"Yes here", He moved her against the wall of the balcony, as he used his hands , and mouth to get Melinda so aroused she couldn't resist. She grabbed him , she unbuckled his belt, and whispered, "I need you too". She smiled as pulled his pants down, then he slowly pulled her panties off. He moved close as he kissed her, and his hands were caressing her body, making her moan out. He entered her, she put her head on his shoulder, and was holding him tight. She looked over noticing a couple watching them. She whispered, "JR we have a audience, we have to stop". JR couldn't and wouldn't stop now, he looked over, and yelled to the couple. "Enjoy the show". Melinda was shocked as he smiled his devilish smile , as he lowered his head, and locked lips with her. Kissing her passionately, so deeply, she could swear she felt him hit her tonsils.
He lifted her into his arms, "You are playing with fire Melinda, I want you so bad".
He pulled her close kissing her so passionately, she touched his face. They look into each others eyes. She never fell so hard for anyone in her life, but she knew she wanted JR, and wanted to feel him close. She whispered, " lets go in to the bedroom, I want to be with you JR". He smiled, "No Melinda kiss me" He pulled her close, as their lips connected , while their hands were all over each other.
She looked into eyes, as he took her, and she arched her back , it was amazing , she never experience anything so exciting and erotic in her whole life. He gave himself completely to her, she pulled him close as they both moved, and were doing stuff to each other that she thought she would die. She brought her lips to his, as she trembled and came to a shattering release, and after JR came to his. They both couldn't catch their breaths, they look at each other and she whispered, " OMG JR you are amazing".
JR smiled, "Now we can go back to the bedroom, I'm exhausted". Melinda smiled they walk in but noticed the couple was still watching them. She laughed, "Can you believe they watched us, I never would have done that".
"Well I would watch us too". She laughed as they both ran to the bedroom. They both knew tonight was going to be magical, and they both knew it might not last but they didn't want to lose this moment, and regret not getting to know each other.
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Post by Sanda on Oct 26, 2011 11:57:34 GMT -6
Great update Jessie. I LOVE how wild JR and Melinda were in this chapter.
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Post by melindajo2000 on Oct 26, 2011 12:45:17 GMT -6
omg a couple watched them, that was bad lol love it
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Post by jessie on Oct 26, 2011 12:57:11 GMT -6
omg a couple watched them, that was bad lol love it OMG I feel horrible today, I have a major headache, and backache, and I have to go to the hospital again today, and tomorrow with my Mom. Your comment made me laugh, I hope you don't think this story is to much. lol ;D
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Post by melindajo2000 on Oct 26, 2011 13:18:52 GMT -6
No... I love this story, that chapter was good.. it was fun, I was surprised lol it is a awesome story
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Post by jessie on Oct 26, 2011 13:55:14 GMT -6
Good I'm glad you like it, I know it is wild but it reminds me of the film, 9 1/2 weeks. JR is bad, so I think he is so IC in this story. ;D
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