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Post by melindajo2000 on Nov 14, 2011 13:50:51 GMT -6
great update I love this chapter, Jessie was right to call out Melinda but I understand Melinda being hooked on a relationship, I hope it doesn't tear apart her friendship with Jessie. Your writing just gets better all the time, I love the dynamics here, I say that all the time but they are so interesting good job
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Post by jessie on Nov 14, 2011 22:20:56 GMT -6
Chapter 10
Jessie brought out the coffee she grabbed the wine, and put it in the kitchen.
"Jessie I had a couple I'm fine"
"Melinda you were fine until today"
"God maybe I should have been alone tonight"
"To bad I'm not leaving you alone, I love you, why I don't know"?
"Because we are friends forever" Jessie sat beside her, "Yeah"
"They both smile, they were talking Jessie was just listening she was trying not to nag. She prayed Melinda would come to her senses she didn't trust JR Ewing, and she knew he was trouble. Melinda smiled, "Why don't we put our PJ's on Jessie, you are spending the night"
"Sure but JR won't show up will he"?
"No he is with his boy"
"I don't want to hear this Melinda, this isn't our place, I don't have my PJ's here"
"Well there is a closet of them in there"
"Oh Gross his Wife's clothes Melinda'
"No they have tags on them"
"You know what that means right"
"He has other women yeah "
Jessie went to the room with Melinda she laughed, "Who is this idiot he thinks he is so cool, OMG this is $1000.00 I saw it at that store we went to last month. This guy is not cheap, but he still is gross"
"Jessie he is so hot I swear"
"To much info shh"
Jessie grabbed the nightie she was pointing too, and smiled, "I'm wearing this I will feel like someone"
"You are someone special Jessie"
"Not this special my last boyfriend bought me Turtles so cool" Melinda laughed, "Turtles is cool chocolate"
Jessie tried it on, and twirled around Melinda put on a nightie, and sat on the bed. "Come sleep in here with me, I don't want to be alone tonight"
Jessie jumped on the bed it was huge, she looked at Melinda, "You guys didn't have sex in here did you"?
"Yeah"
"Oh no I'm not sleeping in here" Melinda laughed, "Fine help me change the sheets you really are to much". They changed them, and Jessie got in bed, and yelled, "Melinda where are you". Melinda laughed it was huge Jessie was being silly. They were laying there talking when the phone rang.
"Don't get it Melinda it is him"
"I have to Jessie please be quiet"
Jessie turned away Melinda hated being mean to her but she was a grown woman she had to make her own mistakes.
"Hello"
"Hey Darling miss me"?
"Yeah JR it wasn't cool , but I understand why you left"
"Melinda my son is everything to me, but I don't want this to ruin what we have"
"What do we have JR"?
JR laughed making Melinda shiver she hated when he did that. "JR please"
"Melinda after today you know how I feel don't you"
"Yeah you like making love, that is about it"
"I can't sleep Melinda , I called maybe you can help me"
"How can I help"?
"Talk dirty to me". Melinda turned looking at Jessie, "I can't "
"Melinda please I need you to"
Melinda put the phone done, "Jessie can you give me some privacy just for a moment"
"No I'm trying to sleep"
"Jessie please"
Jessie jumped up storming out of the room, but turned, "Fine I will be on the couch". She shut the door Melinda put the phone to her ear.
"JR you there"?
"Yeah where did you go"?
"I'm here I can't do what you asked"
"Than do as your told"
"JR stop do you respect me at all"?
JR whispered, "Remember how you felt when I caressed you this afternoon, remember my lips going over your body." Melinda was shutting her eyes, imaging what JR said she started to moan, making JR smile. He kept going making Melinda lay back, as she did everything he said to do. He loved the control he had over her, she has never been so drawn to anyone like she was with JR.
Jessie was on the couch when she heard Melinda yell out, she couldn't believe her ears. She put her hands over her ears knowing Melinda was having phone sex with JR. She hated seeing Melinda being taken in by a man like JR. She put the pillow over her head, and started to cry.
Melinda sat up after JR whispered, "I have to go, I know I can sleep now , how about you"? Melinda was shaking he could make her do anything, she whispered, "Goodnight JR". He hung up Melinda got up she walked to the door. She walked down the hall seeing Jessie on the couch, she walked over touching her leg.
Jessie sat up, "Melinda I heard you , this is not you"
"Jessie I swear I don't know what is wrong with me, but I know I can't walk away. God forgive me but I need you to understand."
Jessie hugged her but she whispered, "I'm scared for you Melinda"
"I'm scared for myself". They got up going to bed, but they knew they wouldn't get much sleep they both were so upset, but little did they know JR fell asleep like a baby, he was so satisfied with himself.
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Post by Sanda on Nov 14, 2011 22:40:18 GMT -6
Great update Jessie. Jessie was soo cute in this chapter covering up her ears when Melinda and JR were having phone sex in the other room. ;D I hope you update this awesome story again really soon.
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Post by melindajo2000 on Nov 15, 2011 0:49:32 GMT -6
I'm glad she has Jessie so she doesn't totally lose respect for herself it is interesting reading about how the aftereffect of JR's interactions with Melinda cause her to be, I never would have thought about writing that, you are making this a vyer unique story good job, cant wait for more
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Post by jessie on Nov 15, 2011 1:18:47 GMT -6
Chapter 11
Jessie and Melinda were up most the night Jessie finally fell asleep Melinda looked at the clock it was 7am. She was exhausted but she got up going to the bathroom to take a shower. Her whole body ached she felt horrible. She hated that Jessie was so upset it was obvious Jessie cared about her, and maybe she should run away from JR, and never look back, but could she? She got in the shower, and stood letting the water fall over her it felt so good. Melinda turned off the shower, and sat on the stool putting cream on her arms, and legs. She sat just staring into space, she needed sleep but what she hated more she wanted a glass of wine. She never drank, she had a problem but she was doing so well no alcohol in over 2 years. Jessie helped her than she has been nothing but amazing. She wrapped the towel around her, and looked in the mirror, she actually didn't like what she saw. She was beautiful but she looked pale, and she looked so tired, her mind wouldn't stop thinking about what she should do. She took a couple of Tylenol, and was going to go back to bed. She jumped out of her skin when she heard Jessie screaming .
Melinda ran into the bedroom seeing JR on the bed, and Jessie was under him. Melinda yelled, "JR for God sake get off of her"
"What the hell who is this"?
"My friend didn't you realize it wasn't me"?
"No I just saw her sweet butt out of the covers, and I grabbed it" Jessie sat up pushing him, "You pig how dare you"?
"Honey your in my bed so cool off"
Jessie jumped up, "Your more disgusting than I thought". Jessie ran over grabbing her things, JR laid back, "You like my pretty things though you owe me for wearing that".
Melinda grabbed Jessie , "Go in the guest room, and change I will be there in a minute"
Jessie ran out, JR laughed, "Oh you should have told me you wanted a threesome Sweetie"
"Shut up JR , I don't believe you"
"Hey you knew I was coming over, I skipped breakfast to get my Morning treat"
"Your not getting anything, Jessie is next door"
"So who cares". Melinda went to walk away but JR got up, "No one walks away from JR Ewing"
"Really"?
"Really you walk out this door, I promise you it is over". Melinda whispered, "She is my friend you scared her"
"What I copped a feel she is cute but your breathtaking"
"JR not now please understand she is my friend"
JR walked over to the bed, "Get rid of her, I give you 15 minutes".
"JR no"
"15 minutes get rid of her now"
Melinda turned she looked back as he laid back on the bed. She walked to the bedroom Jessie was sitting on the bed, she was holding her legs, not getting dressed. Melinda walked over, "Jessie I'm sorry he didn't know you were here"
"He is crude , and vulgar Melinda please he isn't right for you"
Melinda head was hurting she whispered , "Get dressed, and go I will call you later"
"I'm not leaving you "
"Jessie you are leaving, I love you, but I need to deal with JR on my own"
"He is using you can't you see it"?
"My head hurts stop Jessie just get dressed, and go". Jessie pulled away from her, and started to dress, but she was crying. Melinda sat on the bed Jessie just walked out of the room, she didn't even say goodbye. Melinda got up, "You are my friend Jessie please don't be upset"
"Yeah call me later" Jessie grabbed her purse, and coat, and left. She got to the elevator she hated leaving her, but Melinda gave her no choice.
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Post by Sanda on Nov 15, 2011 1:39:43 GMT -6
Great update Jessie. OMG JR is something else grabbing Jessie in bed thinking that Jessie is Melinda. LOL
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Post by melindajo2000 on Nov 15, 2011 6:58:58 GMT -6
JR is something, I hope Jessie and Melinda will still be friends, JR is awful here, I love this story cant wait for an update
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Post by melindajo2000 on Nov 17, 2011 8:56:19 GMT -6
looking forward to an update, this is an awesome story you captured JR so well here
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Post by jessie on Nov 17, 2011 14:17:38 GMT -6
Thanks for the lovely comments Melinda. I was worried about this story, but I agree I see JR being this way. Chapter 12 Melinda felt cold inside she pulled her housecoat even tighter to her as she walked down the hall to the bedroom. She walked in seeing JR waiting with his dirty grin, and nothing else on. He smiled, "See I'm waiting patiently is that frigid ice princess gone"? "Yes she is gone your so cruel" "Hey has she got laid before tell me is she a virgin"? "No she is not a virgin why do have to be so crude , and vulgar" "Well I have some business associates that would like Jessie, they are old but they will give her pretty things for sex" Melinda ran over, "Shut up I mean it" JR grabbed her arm pulling her down to him. "Shut up , and make me happy" Melinda went to smack him but he grabbed her arm laying her back as he pulled her arms above her head. "Get off of me JR" He smiled, "You don't want me to leave" He moved all his body weight over her she could feel he was aroused by what was going on which made her more angry. "JR please stop not like this" He opened her housecoat bringing his lips over her neck making her shut her eyes. She couldn't believe she loved how he made her feel but she hated him too. "No JR" He whispered, "Do you really want me to stop". He moved down her body making her cry out. He was doing stuff she never done before, and she grabbed his shoulders pulling him to her mouth. He laughed, "I knew you love this, as much as me" "JR shut up , and make love to me" "With pleasure" JR lifted her in his arms, she wrapped her legs around him, and they kissed. He leaned her back as he surged inside, she arched to accept him fully. A swell of pleasure surged through him, kissing her deeply as his hands roamed her body. She gasped and let out a harsh cry as he felt a shudder ripple through her entire body. He wanted more, he couldn't stop. He couldn't get enough, but she pulled his face up to hers and kissed him open mouthed, wet and deep. He reached the end of his restraint, and felt the dark waves of pleasure roll over him like a runaway train. They both held each, both not understanding, what is happening between them? He collapsed beside her shutting his eyes. She laid staring at the ceiling feeling totally satisfied, and totally ashamed of herself. She was losing every ounce of her dignity but at the moment she didn't care she felt wanted, and she knew JR probably will hurt her or destroy her in the end. She looked at him, and she smiled, "Now that was some morning delight" Melinda slapped his arm as she leaned on his chest. "JR can't you be more romantic" He jumped up, "I have to go to work, but I have some rules for you" "Rules are you kidding" "No I want you when I want you, and where ever I want you" "Ok now that is it JR" "You don't have to work for that company, I'm going to give you whatever you want. I'm giving this place to you, this is our place. The locked room over there is off limits never go in there" "Why"? "Because I said so" "God JR" "Off limits, I will need you sometimes thoughout the day. I might come over for a visit, or I might ask you to meet me somewhere. I will give you my credit card, I want you to dress the way I like " "You don't like the way I dress"? "No it doesn't show off your assets" "What are those"? JR smacked her butt, "You know what I like" "Hey JR maybe I can come to your office for a quickie would you like that"? JR was walking to the bathroom, he smiled, "I can arrange that I love quickies" "Yeah I know you do" "Make me some coffee, I will shower" He walked in shutting the door Melinda put her housecoat on, and walked to the kitchen. She pulled the mugs down she was shaking, she put the kettle on the stove. She started to cry, she really didn't know what to do she wanted to run away, but part of her was drawn to JR, and knew she would come running back, because he made her feel so alive yet dead at the same time she couldn't understand it.
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Post by melindajo2000 on Nov 17, 2011 15:36:33 GMT -6
wow this might be your best story ever, I never expected this, it is so good, I think Melinda is in trouble, I didn't like his comments about Jessie . It sends shivers reading it... good job
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Post by jessie on Nov 17, 2011 20:58:55 GMT -6
Chapter 13
Melinda was sitting at the dining room table holding her coffee mug. JR walked out dressed he walked over sitting down, grabbing his coffee taking a sip. He smiled, "I will call you later, I expect you to keep your cell phone free"
"I might go to Jessie's work to see if she is OK" JR slammed down his mug making Melinda jump. "Enough about Jessie, she isn't a baby she is fine"
"You don't understand I have been her friend forever, I won't let you ruin this for me"
JR smiled, "You don't understand you are so lucky I'm putting up with your crap, because I'm losing my patience"
Melinda got up putting her mug in the sink. "JR this is not going to work out, I can't do this" She walked away he jumped up running down the hall, she slammed the bedroom door. He walked in yelling, "Are you a child do you want to be treated like one running away crying because you don't get your way"
"No I'm a fool for putting up with your crap, you think you own me no one owns me" JR walked over pushing her toward the dresser.
"You are hurting me stop"
"Listen to me, you will be here when I call. You don't want to lose what I'm offering"
Melinda pulled away, "Fine I will be here"
"Maybe I will drop by for lunch but maybe not"
"So I sit here all day waiting for your call"
"Pretty much"
"No wonder your wife is a alcoholic you pushed her to it". JR turned, "You keep Sue Ellen out of this do you hear me"?
"I'm sorry but how could she love you"?
JR walked over grabbing her pulling her close. "Just like you do Darling, you love everything I do. I didn't force you, so lose your smug attitude"
"I'm not like this JR"
"Like what a sexy kitten, boy you know how to please a man". He walked over whispering, "I was going to make love to you on the kitchen table you ruined that idea, tomorrow don't cause me to lose my temper, now you lose out" He smiled as he touched her lips, and whispered, "Tonight you can make it up to me, I have plans for you. Go to the store downstairs, and get a few outfits my credit card is over there.". JR walked out, Melinda sat on the bed, she pulled her legs to her chest shutting her eyes. She sat there for so long, she finally got up her whole body ached. She walked down to the living room looking around. This place was so beautiful but she felt so alone. She walked out to the balcony looking over the City, she shivered it was cool out. She turned seeing the man from the night before staring at her. He winked she ran into the penthouse shutting the balcony door. She ran to the bedroom getting dressed, than she laid on the bed, and broke down, she was crying so hard she couldn't stop.
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Post by Sanda on Nov 17, 2011 22:29:07 GMT -6
great updates Jessie. I feel bad for Melinda in this story with all of JR's rules that he has for her to follow.
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Post by melindajo2000 on Nov 17, 2011 23:22:11 GMT -6
boy JR is something else, I couldn't live that way, Poor Melinda, I wish he would leave Jessie out of it. I feel sorry for Melinda tonight lol
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Post by jessie on Nov 20, 2011 15:09:41 GMT -6
Chapter 14
Melinda was sitting on the couch wrapped in a housecoat. She jumped when her cell phone went off.
She grabbed it, she smiled as she saw the number, and said hello.
"Melinda"
"Jessie are you OK"?
"No I feel so horrible leaving you with him, I called in sick"
"Really Jessie you never call in sick"
"I am sick seeing my best friend being taken advantage of"
"I'm not I know what I'm doing"?
"Really Melinda I can come, and get you end it now"
"I can't not yet but I love you Jessie, I'm so sorry he hurt you"
"I could careless about him, I only care about you"
"Jessie please stay out of this, I can take care of myself"
"You want me to leave you alone"?
"No I need to talk to you, but I need you to understand, I have to deal with this on my own"
"You know he is going to hurt you right"
"Jessie I know but you don't get it"
"Get what"?
"I have never been with anyone like JR"
"God one of them is enough"
"I better let you go but I will call you later, get some rest"
"What you have to sit by the phone waiting for him"?
"He wants me to be here when he calls"
"Bye Melinda we wouldn't want to hurt JR" Jessie hung up on her she shut her cell phone, and laid back, she was all cried out, she felt ill inside. She finally got up walking to the bedroom but she stopped outside the locked door JR was talking about. She tried to open it but it was locked. She went to get the keys he gave her, she was trying them, and was shocked when one of them opened the door. She pushed the door open, and went inside. She was looking around it was a office but it had a couch, and a wild chair. She walked over looking at the photos , there was photos of JR with his wife, and child. They looked happy in the photos, she lifted one up touching the photo. She sat in the chair, just staring at it. She finally put the photo back, and walked over to the desk opening up a photo album, and it had quite a few photos of JR with different ladies. She was flipping through them, all the photos were taken in this apartment. She got shivers thinking he keeps women like trophies for his personal enjoyment, than goes home to his wife, and child. She suddenly felt ill, and ran to the bathroom, and was violently ill. She jumped when the phone rang, she ran over picking it up.
"Hello"
"Melinda "
"JR I didn't think you would call this early"
"Melinda were you snooping"?
"Pardon no why would you ask that"?
"I trust you, I don't want you snooping into my person stuff. I can trust you right"?
"Yeah"
"I will not get upset just tell me the truth, did you go against my wishes"
"No"
"That is the truth"?
"Yes"
"I will see you soon" The phone hung up she was confused how did he know? She walked over looking around the room, she was shaking she was looking for a camera or anything that could explain that strange phone call. She waked over putting the album back, and made sure everything was as it was when she came in. She didn't notice she dropped a Kleenex on the chair she was sitting on from her housecoat. She walked out locking the door, and moving away from it. She went to the bedroom, and decided to get dressed, and go down , and check out the shops downstairs. She didn't want anything new but she didn't want JR angry so she grabbed his credit card, and left.
It was 1 hour later she was trying on clothes, she picked up a few outfits. She grabbed some new lingerie, and walked over paying. She didn't know JR came back to the condo to confront her. He walked in noticing she wasn't there. He noticed the credit card gone so he assumed she went downstairs. He walked to the locked door opening it looking around. He had the room rigged if the door ever opened he was notified by the alarm company. He didn't have alarms going off he wanted to see if the women he brought into his life were truthful or not. He saw a Kleenex on the chair, which only proved his suspicion. He looked at the album, and realized it was moved he always left it in the same spot. It was moved a little so he knew Melinda was snooping , and he was angry. He walked out locking the door walking to the living room grabbing a bourbon. He heard the door open, and Melinda came in carrying some outfits. She saw JR she almost dropped them, but she smiled, "You came home for lunch"? He didn't say a word, she could see he was angry, and it scared her.
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Post by melindajo2000 on Nov 20, 2011 15:41:15 GMT -6
wow he is scary, I hope he doesn't hurt Melinda, I think she is in over her head. She should have left with Jessie. She is like a prisoner. Love this story
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