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Post by Sanda on Nov 20, 2011 19:05:13 GMT -6
wow he is scary, I hope he doesn't hurt Melinda, I think she is in over her head. She should have left with Jessie. She is like a prisoner. Love this story I agree with everything that Melinda said about this chapter. I hope that you update this awesome story again really soon.
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Post by jessie on Nov 20, 2011 23:44:47 GMT -6
Chapter 15
Melinda smiled, "I bought a few outfit's, I hope you like them"
JR didn't say anything , Melinda put the clothes down on the couch, and walked over to JR.
"Would you like me to order something for lunch"?
JR turned, "I asked one simple request , and you couldn't do it"
"What are you talking about"?
"Why did you go in the one room, I told you to stay out of"?
"I didn't I don't know what your talking about, I'm going to make a sandwich". She walked away but JR grabbed her arm. He dragged her down the hall opening the door pushing her inside.
"Tell me again you were not in here"?
"Ok I was but what is the big deal"?
"The big deal is you lied to me"
"I'm sorry but you scared me, lets get out of here"
JR grabbed a photo of Sue Ellen, "Is this what you wanted to see? Or is it my boy, or did you think you would find some deep dark secrets".
"You are to much, what is that album all your lovers or past ones I should say"
"Yeah I have had lovers, and I have moved on, when I say it is over"
"Well I will make it easy for you this is over, I'm not putting up with this crap"
She went to leave but he grabbed her arm pulling her close. "I say when you can leave"
"JR your hurting me let go"
JR grabbed her lifting her on the desk, "You want to do it in here"?
"No that is sick, I'm not letting you touch me"
JR moved close, "Really I can't touch you"
Melinda was shaking as JR touched her knee, touching her chin.
Melinda pushed his hand away, "No"
JR smiled as he took his coat off throwing it on the couch. Melinda was staring at him, as he started to take his tie off. She couldn't believe the nerve of him. She got off the desk, but he wrapped his arm around her, "You can't leave me, because you want this as much as me"
"No I don't want to be treated like I'm a piece of meat"
JR smiled, "I know just what you like". He turned her around touching her lips as he moved his body against hers. She whispered, "JR let me go, I can't do this"
"Oh you can, and you know it". He lifted her on the desk, she didn't resist, but she just stared as he started to unbutton her blouse. He whispered, "Now we will forget all about this, you can make it up to me, you know how"
Melinda wiped tears from her cheek, as he whispered, "kiss me"
She turned away but he whispered, "Now"
She turned, she started to cry, he got angry throwing the album off the desk making her jump.
"I hate seeing a lady cry, if you want to leave go"
Melinda got off the desk, and ran across the hall to the other room. JR kicked the desk, and sat on the couch. He shut his eyes, he was so angry, but he knew he better not lose his temper because he knows what could happen when he does. He had Harry who helped him get out of a situation with a lady that got out of control, but Harry said he wouldn't do it again. JR finally got up walking to the bedroom seeing Melinda sitting on the bed, holding her cell phone.
"Who did you call"?
"No one yet"
"Melinda I want you to stay, I'm sorry if I scared you in there"
"You did scare me your so controlling"
"You made me mad you went in my personal room, how dare you"
"I'm sorry"
JR walked over sitting beside her, "Will you stay"?
Melinda looked at him with tears in her eyes, she didn't know what to say. He touched her cheek making her shut her eyes his touch drove her crazy, but she knew she should run, but she didn't know if she had the strength to really do it.
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Post by Sanda on Nov 21, 2011 0:50:00 GMT -6
OMG JR is awful in the chapter. Melinda needs to run faraway from JR and Dallas.
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Post by melindajo2000 on Nov 21, 2011 9:35:29 GMT -6
I agree with Sanda, Melinda should leave JR but will she? JR was really scary, but I dont know what she will do. awesome update
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Post by jessie on Nov 22, 2011 15:44:14 GMT -6
Chapter 16
Melinda whispered, "JR you are scary, I can't do this anymore"
"Please stay, I just lost my temper, and you lied to me"
"Is this all a game JR are you really going to leave your wife. Do you make love to me, than go home , and be the family man"?
"No she is a drunk, and a unfit Mother"
"Maybe because you hurt her"
"No she deserves my contempt, she slept with my worst enemy, just to hurt me"
"You should talk your sleeping with me"
"Are you trying to get me angry Melinda"?
"No but I don't understand the games, just leave her let her move on"
"My Family worries about her she bats her big brown eyes, telling them I'm awful, and they fall for her lies"
"Do you care for her at all"?
"No I care for you"
"Really JR if you really cared you wouldn't treat me this way. I'm like a prisoner that you think you own. I'm here for your sexual pleasures, than when your bored my picture will end up in that book, and you will move on to the next one"
"You really think I'm that awful"
"Not awful, but I don't understand you"
JR smiled, "You don't know me well, but the one person that means more to me than anyone is my Father. I love my boy of course, but my Father means the world to me. He gave me this ring on my 21 first birthday, I have never taken it off" JR took it off walking over to the dresser opening up a jewelery box pulling out a gold chain. He put the ring on it, and walked over to Melinda. "I'm asking you to wear this". He put it around her neck, she was overwhelmed, he was letting her wear his Father's ring. She touched it she felt tears roll down her cheek. He wiped them away with his thumb.
"I would be lost if you walked out on me Melinda don't you understand this is more than just a sexual thing between us"
"JR I don't know if I should wear this"
"Why don't you want to"?
"I do but I can't be your prisoner here, I will not lose my friendship with Jessie."
"What is it with this Jessie"?
"She is my best friend, I owe her so much, no one will make me lose that friendship"
"Fine but the girl doesn't like me, are you going to let her ruin what we have"?
"No, but can you blame her for disliking you"
"Are you talking about me jumping in bed with her, because I thought it was you"
"No the crude way you went about it, and how you demanded her to leave"
"Keep her away from me, I will not tolerate her trying to separate us Melinda"
"She won't she is sweet"
"Yeah sure more like Sour"
"JR please stop"
"Fine I have a racket ball game at 4 today, can you meet me there after the game , around 5"?
"The racket ball club why would you want that"?
"I want you to will you be there or not"?
"I guess where is it"? JR pulled the card out of his wallet. "I will tell the front desk you are my guest, wear something sweet like one of the pretty dresses you bought"
"To the Country club"
JR put his hand up her skirt, and whispered, "Yeah something pretty, I have to go, but I will see you than"
"What about Lunch"?
"To late I have a meeting , than I'm going to the club. We will go somewhere after the club, remember wear something sweet". He kissed her walking out, she sat there wondering what just happened. She walked over to the mirror looking at herself seeing the necklace. She touched it, and smiled thinking for him to give her this he must really like her, because he wouldn't give his Dad's ring to anyone that he didn't think was special. She smiled as she went to look at the dresses to see which one she was going to wear to the Club?
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Post by melindajo2000 on Nov 22, 2011 16:27:06 GMT -6
That was something his giving her that ring, but I still wouldnt trust him. I hope he doesn't come between her and Jessie. good job, thanks for updating
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Post by Sanda on Nov 22, 2011 17:58:10 GMT -6
Great update Jessie. I still don't trust JR.I hope that doesn't come between Melinda and jessie.
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Post by jessie on Nov 24, 2011 23:35:09 GMT -6
Chapter 17
Melinda was sitting on the bed she changed, she was about to take a taxi over to the club. She had a bad feeling about this , but she knew her nerves were shot. She finally got up looking in the mirror, she looked amazing if she says so herself. She smiled as she grabbed her purse, and walked out. She took the elevator down, the doorman couldn't take his eyes off of her. She smiled as he hailed a cab, she got in, and was off to the Club. She got there paying, she stood outside there was so many men outside , and everyone of them were staring at her. She looked around there wasn't many women which freaked her out. She had to admit part of her loved the attention she was getting, it has been a long time since she felt so desired. She walked inside, and walked over to the front desk. The lady looked at her, she said her name, and told the lady who she was meeting. She smiled, "Oh Mr. Ewing of course he is playing racket ball, but you can go down, and watch him if you like"? Melinda said OK she walked down the hall looking into the windows looking for JR. She finally spotted him she stood outside the window, he didn't notice her at first, but when he did he waved, and she waved back. He was playing with a older man she smiled JR sure looked amazing in his shorts, and T-shirt. He kept looking back at her smiling , she smiled back as he finished the game. JR , and the other man came out of the court, JR walked over kissing her cheek. She smiled as he introduced her to Seth Stone, he reached out shaking her hand. He gave JR a look, and Melinda didn't like it, he was kind of rude. Seth whispered, "What a pretty thing JR, I guess you are not finished playing"
JR smiled but Melinda yelled, "Stop being so disrespectful "
Seth smiled, "Sweetheart he is married, who is being disrespectful". He walked away, Melinda glared at JR, "Did you bring me here to make a fool of me"?
"No you let him get to you , he is a jerk Melinda"
"Yes he is he doesn't know me". JR touched his cheek, "And he never will your sweet butt is all mine"
"Excuse me JR"
JR swatted her butt, "Oh stop being all whiny, I can't stand that"
"JR I'm going back to our place, I knew this was a mistake"
"No I want to show you something"?
"No"
"Come on Sugar, you will love this promise"
"I'm not going into the mens changing room JR"
"I know that come on". He grabbed her hand, and walked down the hall. He smiled at a man standing there, he handed him some money, and whispered something to him. The man smiled, "You have my word Mr. Ewing". JR turned grabbing Melinda's hand pulling her into a sauna room. JR shut the door, and smiled, "Surprise we have this all to ourselves"
"Why did you ask me to dress up"?
"Because you look so beautiful, and seeing you in that dress so turned me on. Now I want you to take it off, and lets have some fun"
Melinda went to turn to leave but JR pulled her close, and whispered, "You know you are turned on, I can see it , don't deny it". She turned wanting to smack him, but she pulled him close, and kissed him pushing him down on the bench.
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Post by Sanda on Nov 24, 2011 23:38:36 GMT -6
Great update Jessie. OMG JR is so awful. Melinda should run faraway from JR as she can.
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Post by jessie on Nov 24, 2011 23:46:34 GMT -6
I love your comments Sanda and Melinda, I'm writing JR good, I see him this way, am I bad or what. I love writing this, it is wild. ;D
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Post by Sanda on Nov 24, 2011 23:54:02 GMT -6
I love your comments Sanda and Melinda, I'm writing JR good, I see him this way, am I bad or what. I love writing this, it is wild. ;D Jessie, you are writing JR perfectly in character girl. ;D I agree that your story is wild girl and I LOVE it. ;D
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Post by melindajo2000 on Nov 25, 2011 8:23:17 GMT -6
melinda is so bad to give in to JR, but power is something else lol and I agree you totally have JR IC and I can't get enough of this fantastic story of yours. I always look forward to more updates
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Post by jessie on Nov 25, 2011 21:42:57 GMT -6
I hope this story is still ok with you Melinda. Chapter 18 Melinda looked at JR, but she whispered, "It is getting hot in here don't you think"? JR smiled as she straddled him as she pulled his belt off making him whispered, "You go girl" "JR you think you have me figured out don't you"? "Yeah Sugar I have you figured out , you are so into me it hurts" Melinda smiled, "You own this big old company, you run around town thinking you own any lady you sweet talk but do you really know me"? JR went to sit up but she pushed him down putting her finger to his lips. "Shh let me take care of my man". She lifted his t-shirt bringing her lips to his chest but she made sure she moved over his body driving him crazy. She whispered, "Oh you want me JR, say it" "I want you Melinda". She got up pulling down his shorts she whispered, 'You naughty boy you didn't put your boxers on" "You know I don't always wear them". She was teasing him with her hands, he shut his eyes, "Melinda you better get undressed before I start without you". She whispered , "Shut your eyes JR" He shut his eyes, she whispered, "You don't respect me do you JR"? "What"? "Do you respect me or am I just your plaything of the month"? JR sat up , "What is this Melinda"? She jumped up grabbing his shorts, and t-shirt walking to the door. "I'm not your plaything JR, remember that". She walked out, she was walking down the hall when JR came running out in the hall stark naked. Melinda turned she couldn't believe her eyes. He yelled, "Get back here Melinda I swear" Melinda smiled, "JR you are making a fool of yourself" she threw his clothes. She turned but he ran grabbing her arm pushing her against the wall. Men were shocked but they were staring as he pushed against her whispering, "Is this what you want"? "To be a freak show is this what you need a audience" JR pulled her into the locker room, he locked the door. "I swear I will scream if you do not let me out of this room" "You think you can make a fool of me"? "No but you think you can make a fool of me. You invited me here to have sex, who do you think you are"? "I'm your lover" "Yeah lover but what else"? JR walked over moving her against the wall kissing her. She pushed him away, but he came right back. "Stop not here JR" "What do you want from me Melinda, I gave you my Father's ring. I have tried to show you how much I care, and you keep reacting like I'm some evil person" "JR I can't do this" "What love me"? He was so close she could feel the heat coming off of him. She turned her face he brought his lips to her neck, as his hands roamed up her leg, and under her dress. She moaned, "JR I want you, but I want more than this" JR touched her chin, "I will give you the world, if you just trust me" He started to lift her dress, she didn't resist. He brought his lips over hers, she wrapped her arms around him as he lifted her into his arms. The hunger in his eyes entranced her, unable to look away. JR stared at her, and faced her toward him, smiling, he touched her lips, and his hands went to her shoulder. He pulled the lingerie straps off her shoulder, kissing her , and pulling her close. He pulled the lingerie up over her hips, and caressing her back he slowly lifted it over her head. Melinda put her head on his chest ,and they held each other just holding and touching. Melinda, felt so close to JR at this moment, she didn't want to let go. She caressed his shoulders, and put her hands on his chest, and could feel his heartbeat thou her fingers, and the heat coming off his body. They didn't take their eyes off each other, and they knew exactly what the other wanted and needed. They made love, and after JR laid beside Melinda smiling," you take my breath away . I don't know, but I never felt so completely fulfilled, I can't lose you Melinda" "I'm your JR, God help me I'm yours.
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Post by Sanda on Nov 25, 2011 22:25:03 GMT -6
Great update Jessie. OMG JR is awful in this story. Unfortunately I could just picture him behaving like that towards a woman.
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Post by melindajo2000 on Nov 27, 2011 20:55:19 GMT -6
I dont know if I like that hold he has on her, I hope she doesnt get hurt, he says the right things. but is he good for her? good job
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