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Post by jessie on Sept 21, 2010 19:05:36 GMT -6
New Story , this is for you Jennifer, hope you like it.
Chapter 1
Everyone went home early from the office. This was the night of the Oil Baron's ball. This is the first time JR was going dateless. He missed Sue Ellen but she was happy with Don, he lost her, and he had to deal with it. JR went home, and showered, and changed, he came down and everyone gathered for drinks before they went to the ball. He saw Marilee, she walked over, and JR really didn't want to hook up with her again. They all went to the Ball, and JR was having a bourbon. He was watching all the couples, they were having fun, dancing and having drinks. He walked to the lounge, just to get away from all the crowds. He was standing by a window looking out, when he heard someone say, "OMG what is wrong with me"? He looked over, the lady dropped her purse spilling everything out on the floor . He laughed, she had enough in the purse. He ran over, "can I help you"? He knelt down, helping her put the things back in her purse. He looked at her face, and he was speechless she was beautiful, but he never saw her before. She stood up, "Thank you, I'm so clumsy sometimes, I really didn't want to come here today"?
"My name is JR Ewing".
"Nice to meet you JR, I'm Jennifer Gibson".
'"I guess your husband is waiting for you, I better not keep you"
"Husband, I don't have one of those". Jennifer laughed, and JR couldn't help but smile back at her. She when to walk away, but JR grabbed her hand. "So your all alone here tonight Jennifer"?
"Well, I'm with my Aunt and Uncle , do you know the Anderson's"?
"Punk and Mavis"?
"Yes, I have been staying with them for awhile. They felt bad leaving me alone, so they wanted me to come. It is so beautiful here, but I feel out of place".
" I'm alone, and you are, why don't we go back in there , and have a dance"?
'Why Mr. Ewing, I would love that" They walked in, and he walked her to the dance floor. He moved real close, and she wrapped her arms around him, as they danced across the dance floor. The song "Woman in Love " came on and Jennifer couldn't help but smile. JR really loved having Jennifer in his arms, he hasn't been with anyone since Cally left. Jennifer was different than some of the other woman, she was beautiful, but had a natural beauty. She wasn't full of herself, and she was funny. He looked into her eyes, "thank you for this dance, it was really nice".
"Thank you JR".
"Maybe later we can talk out by the lounge, after the speeches. I know your Aunt and Uncle would want you with them. Maybe someday we can go out on a real date, just the two of us".
"You want to go on a date with me"?
"Oh yes, sometime real soon". Jennifer was walking to her Aunt and Uncle she turned back, and noticed JR watching her. She smiled, he liked her, and she hated to admit it but she really liked him to. All through dinner, JR and Jennifer would looked over at each other. Bobby and the Family notice, and laughed, "JR what is wrong with you"?
"Nothing that is Jennifer we met earlier". Miss Ellie smiled, and whispered, "don't you hurt Mavis's niece JR, I will hurt you if you do".
"Ma Ma"
" I mean it". JR smiled, and whispered, "I don't plan to hurt her". They finished dinner, and the speeches were done. JR walked out to the lounge, wondering if she would show up? He was about to walk back to the Family, when she walked over to him. He smiled, " I thought maybe you weren't coming"
' Oh my Uncle wanted a dance, I think he is afraid of us being together". JR smiled, "Oh he doesn't think I'm good enough for you".
"No, he is worried, I had a nasty break up with my boyfriend. I was really depressed, he doesn't want me hurt again".
" I won't hurt you Jennifer promise".
" I didn't think you would, but I have to get going soon. My Aunt is tired, but if you like to call me at their home that is fine". JR walked over, he pulled Jennifer into his arms, and kissed her so passionately. He touched her chin , and smiled, "Oh Jennifer count on it, I will call". He walked away, and Jennifer thought she would faint, she has never been kissed like that before. She touched her lips, as she watched him walk out the door.
To Be Continued
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Post by melindajo2000 on Sept 21, 2010 20:48:04 GMT -6
I love it that you are writing a story for Jennifer and I love it that she is related to Punk. Miss Ellie will have a fit if he hurts her lol
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Post by jennifer1983 on Sept 22, 2010 2:35:37 GMT -6
Jessie I like the story you started for me.
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Post by jessie on Sept 22, 2010 21:54:03 GMT -6
Chapter 2
Jennifer was home at Punk and Mavis's home the next day. She couldn't get JR out of her head. She wanted him to call but she was sure he wouldn't. Punk walked into the living room, noticing Jennifer daydreaming. He touched her, and she almost jumped out of her skin.
"Jennifer what is wrong, are you thinking about JR Ewing"?
"Yes, I know you warned me about him, but he was so nice, and a perfect gentleman".
"I'm glad Jennifer, but just remember what I told you"
'Yes, Uncle Punk", she sat down, and Punk sat beside her. "Here take my car, take good care of it. Go see JR at his Office, you know where they are, I showed you the other day. You be careful Jennifer, my Brother would hate me if you got hurt". Jennifer got up hugging Punk, and ran upstairs to change. She put on a pretty dress, she fixed her hair and make up, and went downstairs. She got in the car, and drove into town. She parked, and went to the Ewing building. She asked the front desk, what floor they were on, they told her, and she went up the elevator. The door opened, she almost stayed on, and went back down. She walked out, and went to the front desk. Phyllis smiled, "How can I help you"?
"I don't have an appointment, but I would like to talk with JR Ewing please". Sly got up, "I'm sorry you can't just come in, without an appointment". Jennifer was about to leave when JR's door opened, he came out holding a file. "Sly I want these sent out right away, keep copies". He handed her the folder, and turned seeing Jennifer.
"OMG what are you doing here Jennifer"?
" I was in town, I thought I would come in to see you. Your Secretary said your busy, I will leave".
"Don't be silly come in my office, it is so nice seeing you again". Jennifer followed JR into the office, and sat down, as he shut the door. He walked over sitting down. Jennifer was shy all of a sudden, she didn't know what to say? He smiled, "Jennifer are you ok, how about I take you out to lunch"?
" Really I didn't come here for that"
"I know, I asked, we both have to eat"
"Yes we do", Jennifer smiled, she got up, looking at some pictures he had on a cabinet. She picked up the one of John Ross, "Is this your Son"?
"Yes, John Ross he is handsome isn't he"?
"Yes, just like his Daddy", Jennifer smiled,
JR got up taking the photo out of Jennifer's hand putting it down. He moved close bringing his lips to hers, she shut her eyes, JR was everything she ever dreamed of. She couldn't believe what Punk was saying about him. He touched her chin, "Penny for your thoughts Jennifer"?
" Oh I was just thinking, but can I ask you a question"?
"Sure anything"?
"JR I heard rumors about you, I'm not a person who sleeps around. If you are being kind to me for that reason, I should leave now. I really think your nice, but I won't be used JR, I want to get to know you, but I won't do anything I'm not ready for"
"Wow Punk told you stuff , I see. He is right, I was a player, but I have changed, I really want to find someone, I can spend time with. I want someone who likes me for me, and not because I'm JR Ewing".
Jennifer smiled, " Great lets go eat".
JR touched her face, " Lets Jennifer, you sure are different than most women I know".
"Good , it is time for a change". They both smile, and left to go eat.
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Post by melindajo2000 on Sept 22, 2010 22:17:11 GMT -6
i dont blame Jennifer for being cautious but hopefully he has changed. awesome chapter Jessie
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Post by jennifer1983 on Sept 23, 2010 1:56:12 GMT -6
Great update Jessie. Jessie may I ask where I'm from in this story you can use my hometown it's Alpena,Michigan.
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Post by jessie on Sept 23, 2010 20:35:10 GMT -6
Chapter 3
JR and Jennifer went to the Cattleman Club for Lunch. Jennifer was impressed, when JR was walked right into the restaurant to a cozy booth. They sat down, and she ordered a glass of white wine, while JR had a bourbon.
JR and Jennifer were looking at the menu. Jennifer smiled, "What do you enjoy in here JR"?
"Oh the steak, and the burgers are amazing".
" Maybe I will have a burger, and salad". JR smiled, " sounds good, I will have the same." They placed their orders, and were having their drinks. JR smiled, " Jennifer how long have you been with Mavis and Punk"?
"Oh 3 months, I'm from Alpena,Michigan, I was going to return, but my Uncle wants me to stay here".
"Did something happen"?
"Oh I had a bad break up, my boyfriend was a jerk".
"I would love it if you stayed here Jennifer, I would really like to get to know you". Jennifer blushed, he was handsome, and a sweet talker. She loved being with him, she could see women staring at him. She laughed to herself, thinking he was her, not them. JR leaned over touching her hand, and she put her hand over his.
'Jennifer there is a midnight concert over at the park. I have a friends son who is playing there. I wasn't going to go, but I wouldn't mind going with you."
"I would love that JR, I love going to concerts".
"Me too, tell me more about yourself Jennifer"
' Oh I worked at a hospital back in Alpena,Michigan. I don't know, if I'm staying here, I better think of finding a new job. I don't want to live with Punk and Mavis forever." JR smiled, "Oh he would love for her to have her own place. He knew Jennifer was going to be a regular part of his life. The food came, and they both were eating.
"Oh this is good JR, I love burgers".
"Really , I love a woman who eats what she wants, and not be afraid of what people think".
Jennifer smiled, "well you will love me later, when I order that cheesecake, that is on the menu ". JR smiled, " Oh you have a sweet tooth "?
"Yes sort of, I don't eat out much". They finished eating, and they ordered cheesecake. It was amazing, she shared with JR. They left, when JR held her hand, "would you like to go walk in the park, before taking you back to your car"?
" Sure I would like that ". They walked over to the park, and he held her hand as they walked down the boardwalk. She hasn't been with anyone since Pete, and her split up. She looked at JR, he wrapped his arm around Jennifer, and pulled her close. They walked for awhile, than they sat on a bench, just holding hands, and looking at all the people. JR touched Jennifer's face, and brought his lips to hers. She kissed him, but she couldn't believe how he was making her feel. She pulled him close as they kissed passionately. They stop just looking into each others eyes. He smiled, " this has been a wonderful afternoon Jennifer". She smiled, "Oh yes it was, she knew after this afternoon, she was staying in Dallas , she couldn't walk away from JR Ewing.
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Post by melindajo2000 on Sept 23, 2010 20:58:32 GMT -6
I'm glad she is staying in Dallas this is a wonderful story
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Post by jennifer1983 on Sept 24, 2010 2:15:25 GMT -6
Great update Jessie. I'm glad that your going to have me stay in Dallas.
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Post by jessie on Sept 24, 2010 22:32:09 GMT -6
Chapter 3
JR took Jennifer to Punk and Mavis house, she wanted to change for the concert. She went in the house, and told JR to sit in the living room. He walked in, and she smiled, "make yourself a drink, I will be down soon". She ran upstairs, and she walked into her room. Mavis knocked on her door, and Jennifer opened the door.
"Aunt Mavis, I am going out again, I came home to change"
"Can we talk Jennifer"?
"Sure come in", Mavis walked in, and they both sat on the bed. Mavis smiled, "Jennifer, your were hurt badly by Pete, I'm really worried about you seeing JR Ewing"
"Why he is really nice Aunt Mavis"?
"I'm glad Jennifer, but he has hurt a lot of people. He is a player, well he was he hurt his ex wife Sue Ellen".
"Maybe, but people change, he really likes me"
"He probably does Jennifer , your beautiful and young. He is older, but he wants one thing, don't do anything your not ready for"
"I know that, and I told him that, and he understood".
"Ok I will let you get ready for your date, I just love you Sweetie".
Jennifer walked over hugging Mavis, "I love you too, and I appreciate you worrying about me, but I will be fine promise". Mavis left the room, hoping Jennifer was right.
JR was sitting on the couch drinking his bourbon when Punk walked in. He sat across from JR and stared at him. JR laughed, "OMG Punk, I feel like I'm 17 again, what is on your mind"?
"Jennifer don't hurt her, she had enough pain from her last boyfriend".
"We are friends, I really like her, I won't hurt her"
'JR I'm not kidding, I adore your Daddy he is my best friend. I will hurt his eldest boy badly if he hurts my only niece". JR smiled, "noted, I won't cross you Punk".
Jennifer walked in wearing jeans and a pretty white blouse, that fell over her shoulders. She was beautiful, and JR got up, walking over kissing her cheek. Jennifer walked over kissing Punk on the cheek,"I will be out late, we are going to a midnight concert at the park. Don't you dare wait up for me, I will be fine. JR will take care of me right JR"?
"She will be fine Punk, she will be home right after the concert". Punk touched Jennifer's face, "have fun Jennifer, see you at breakfast". Punk walked out leaving them alone.
Jennifer looked at her watch," it is only 10pm, what should we do"?
"Lets go and get a good seat, do you have a blanket we can use"? Jennifer ran and got a blanket, some sodas, and walked back to JR. "Ready to leave JR"? They both walked out, and drove over to the park. JR parked the car, and walked around opening the door for Jennifer. She got out, and he grabbed the soft drinks and blanket. They walked over to the band shell, and he put the blanket down, on the hill real close to the stage. She sat down, and he sat beside her, they watched people getting the concert ready. JR looked at Jennifer, she was sweet and so innocent, he realized what Punk was saying. She deserved to be happy, and he wanted to be the man to do it. He touched her face, "Jennifer, thank you for coming here tonight with me"
Jennifer smiled, she whispered, "there isn't anywhere else, I would want to be".
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Post by melindajo2000 on Sept 24, 2010 22:35:06 GMT -6
great chapter I loved the talk that they had, I would hate to cross Punk lol. love your writing
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Post by jennifer1983 on Sept 25, 2010 2:20:07 GMT -6
Great update Jessie.
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Post by jessie on Sept 25, 2010 22:42:29 GMT -6
Chapter 4
Jennifer and JR were holding hands, when people started to show up for the concert. It was pretty packed surprising Jennifer. She leaned into JR's arms, as the concert started. The Band was playing country songs, which pleased Jennifer. "I love Country music don't you JR"?
"Yeah Faith Hill, and Shania are hot".
"Your bad JR, is that all you think of"?
"Well no, I'm thinking about kissing you at the moment". Jennifer smiled, as he brought his lips over hers. She whispered, "watch the band JR".
"Oh I would rather watch you, but fine". She laid her head on his shoulder, and he wrapped his arms around her shoulder. She was clapping, and singing along to some of her favourite tunes. JR was trying to sing, but he really wasn't a music person. Oh he loved to dance, but that was only for special occasions. There was a intermission, and Jennifer laid back on the blanket looking at the sky, while JR laid beside her. They both were looking up, when they saw a shooting star. Jennifer shut her eyes, "make a wish JR". He shut his eyes, and they both made a wish. She giggled, and sat up, grabbing a soft drink handing JR one. She opened it up, and it sprayed all over JR. He yelled, but he couldn't stop laughing, and Jennifer was horrified that she did that to him. He was laughing, "Oh now I'm all sticky, gross".
'OMG I'm so sorry, I didn't realize it would do that"
"It is ok, I will survive, but I can't take my clothes off here".
"No, not if you don't want to get arrested". They both smile, as she helped him clean up, the best they could. She was quiet and JR touched her face, "what is wrong Jennifer"?
"Nothing, I just can't believe I ruined a perfect night"
"You didn't ruin anything, that was kind of funny actually".
"Your really sweet for saying that , but I know you probably want to leave me here, and go home"
"Jennifer enough, I'm fine, and I love being with you. I think your refreshing, your different than the other women in my life. I adored Sue Ellen my Ex, but I lost her. You are the first woman, I met that made me forget about what I lost . You are special, very pretty, but I love that you are shy, and you know what you want. Don't push me away Jennifer, I love our time together. I would love to get to know you better, and maybe we can go steady. I haven't done that in years, it might be fun courting you. I won't hurt you because Punk will kill me, he loves you Jennifer. Lets watch the rest of this concert, let me take you home kiss you goodnight. Tomorrow you can meet me for lunch, and we can go out after lunch, and find you a outfit to wear to the Ewing BBQ. It is next Saturday, I would love for you to be my date. I would honored if you accept , and you can meet my son, I think he will love you".
"JR you really mean all that"?
"Yes, what do you say"?
'I would love to go steady with you JR, and I can't wait to meet your son".
"Good, I love that smile Jennifer". He touched her face, and they kissed, until the concert started again. They both sat watching the concert, but they both couldn't keep their eyes off of each other. JR watched her and he knew someday he would marry Jennifer, and this time, he would do it right.
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Post by Sanda on Sept 25, 2010 23:20:53 GMT -6
Jessie, I LOVE the new story that you are writing for Jennifer.
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Post by melindajo2000 on Sept 25, 2010 23:42:28 GMT -6
wonderful chapter, good thing JR didnt get mad, cant wait for the Ewing BBQ those things are always fun
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