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Post by melindajo2000 on Jan 22, 2011 16:03:09 GMT -6
great update, hope all six of them do go out that would be fun... lovely writing as always
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Post by jessie on Jan 29, 2011 21:52:08 GMT -6
Chapter 75
1 week later
JR and Jennifer went over to Sue Ellen's new Condo before going to the restaurant to meet Mavis, Punk, Clayton and Miss Ellie. Sue Ellen came to the door, "Oh I wasn't expecting you , come in".
JR and Jennifer came in, they look around, "wow you have done a lot to the place already".
"Yes, it is starting to feel like home, Bobby picked a beautiful place". The doorbell rang, Sue Ellen smiled, "One minute ". Sue Ellen ran to the door, and smiled, "Oh hi Keith, I have company, but I think they are leaving soon, to go out to dinner". Keith laughed, "Well I only brought dinner for two, so that is good". She told him to come in, she smiled seeing that JR was shocked that she was being friendly with someone so fast. JR, Jennifer this is Keith my neighbor, he has the cutest dog. We met the other day, he asked me out to dinner, and I opted to stay in".
"Why going out is better"? Keith smiled, "I will put this on the table, nice meeting you both". Jennifer walked over, "He is cute, be good Sue Ellen".
"He is a friend guys, I could use one, unless you want me to call Cliff".
JR laughed, "Go have dinner, but remember if you have any problems call us".
"Go have fun, and be nice to Punk, he is sweet JR"
"Yeah Daddy loved him, but he doesn't love me". Jennifer smiled, "He loves you, but he loves to scare you". JR touched Sue Ellen's hand, "Take it slow your getting over a bad divorce"
"We are just friends, bye see you tomorrow, I'm coming to the ranch for a ride with the boys"
"Your not bringing, chicken boy"?
"JR no go, bye". Jennifer and JR walked to the elevator. JR smiled, "What do you think about Keith"?
"He seems nice, they are friends, Sue Ellen just wants someone to talk to ". JR hugged her, and they went on the elevator. They got to the lobby, they left, but didn't notice the man sitting on the couch reading a paper turn, and glare at them.
Sue Ellen walked into the kitchen, "Keith what did you bring"?
"Fried Chicken and Mash potato". Sue Ellen smiled, "Oh Keith just what I needed something to go straight to my hips". She walked over grabbing a couple of plates, he smiled, "Oh your hips look just fine to me". Sue Ellen laughed, "Hey no flirting remember the rules, friends remember".
"Can't blame a guy for trying right"?
"No I guess not". She walked over, and sat down.
JR and Jennifer got to the restaurant, and went inside. They walked over, the others were there already. JR smiled, 'Have you been waiting long"?
Punk smiled, "Yeah 1/2hour, do you need a watch for your birthday"?
JR smiled, "I guess I do can I have one pretty please". Everyone cracked up including Punk. They ordered drinks, Mavis leaned over, "Jennifer you look stunning tonight, did you do something with your hair"?
JR smiled, "Yeah she brush it before she came in". Miss Ellie swatted JR's hand, "You are being bad, she went to a hairdressing, it is obvious".
"Really, I guess, when I'm around her , all I see is her eyes". Jennifer giggled, "Nice JR, that is so sweet". JR leaned over kissing Jennifer, making the others smile.
They all were dancing having a great time, JR was surprised. He thought it was going to be boring, but it was fun, being with Mavis, Punk, Clayton and his Ma Ma.
1 hour later
Sue Ellen walked Keith to the front door. She opened it, they saw a man standing by the elevator, they assumed he was waiting for it. Keith walked out, and she giggled, "dinner was great, thanks it was fun".
"I know your busy tomorrow, but maybe Sunday, we can have dinner again".
"Sure but this time it is on me, maybe I will make my famous pizza". Keith touched her cheek, "Goodnight Sweetie, if you ever need anything , I'm right next door".
Sue Ellen kissed his cheek, and waved as she shut the door. Keith smiled, and started to his door, the man turned, "excuse me, can I ask you something"?
Keith just opened his door, and smiled, "sure what is it"?
"I came to see a friend, she wasn't home, she lives down the hall. I forgot my cell phone, she might have forgot , I was coming, can I borrow your phone"?
"Sure I will get my cell wait here" , Keith walked in, the man walked in shutting the door. Keith turned, "Excuse me, I said wait outside, how dare you step foot in my condo"?
"How dare you touch my wife, now you will pay"?. He pointed the gun, and shot. Sue Ellen was in the kitchen, she swore she heard a gun shot, but she listened to hear something else. She ran to the door, making sure it was locked. She moved away , and listened, and than smiled, "great Sue Ellen your hearing things now".
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Post by jennifer1983 on Jan 30, 2011 2:37:54 GMT -6
Great update Jessie.
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Post by melindajo2000 on Jan 30, 2011 21:13:35 GMT -6
wow I hope he's okay Don's psycho...
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Post by Sanda on Jan 30, 2011 21:38:37 GMT -6
Great update Jessie.
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Post by jessie on Feb 15, 2011 22:34:25 GMT -6
Chapter 75
JR and Jennifer were dancing while Punk, Mavis, Clayton, and Ellie were watching. Punk laughed, "I have to admit old JR, is good for Jennifer, I never seen her more happy".
"She is happy Punk, JR loves her, and he has really changed". Punk touched Mavis's hand, and whispered "Care to dance Beautiful"? Mavis smiled, "I thought you would never ask". They got up, Clayton smiled, "Ellie would you care to have a spin around the dance floor"?
"Sure". They all were dancing, the song came to a end. Punk walked over, "Hey would you like to switch for a dance, I would love to dance with my lovely niece"?
"Sure Punk". JR took Mavis's hand, while Punk took Jennifer"s. The Song, " When a Man Loves a Woman" by Percy Sledge" was playing. Punk smiled, "Sweetie you really are happy"
"Yes Uncle Punk, you have to stop worrying about me"
"Never Jennifer, you mean the world to me, I will never stop worrying about you". Jennifer smiled, "Fine but don't get on JR's case anymore, he has been amazing."
"I see that, I will give the guy a break".
"Uncle Punk, our baby will be coming soon, I'm so excited, yet nervous".
"Don't be nervous you will be a perfect Mother"
"Thank You Uncle Punk, that means a lot to me". JR and Mavis walk over, "What are you both being all serious about"? Jennifer hugged JR, "Oh nothing, we were talking about the baby"
"Oh God are you having pain"?
"No, I was saying I'm nervous, and he said I would be a great Mom".
"You will be, what are you worried about"?
"Nothing, who wants dessert"? JR smiled, "Oh you have a sweet tooth Jennifer".
"Oh it is cravings JR". They all laugh, and walked to the table. JR looked out at the dance floor , his Mom, and Clayton looked so happy out on the dance floor.
Miss Ellie and Clayton walked over, and sat down. They all ordered dessert, and coffee. They were talking as the dessert came, and they were eating it. It was getting late, they all walked outside. Jennifer hugged, Mavis and Punk, and said she would see them soon. They all went to their cars, and JR told his Ma Ma he would see them at home.
JR opened the door for Jennifer, she got in, and he walked to the passenger side door. They smile as they were driving home. They drove past Sue Ellen's condo, and saw Police Cars outside, and JR freaked out. They parked, and he walked over to the officer, and asked what was going on?
"Oh there was a murder on the 7th floor tonight". JR looked at Jennifer, "Oh God Sue Ellen". He touched Jennifer's face, "Stay in the car, I have to go see if she is ok".
"I'm coming with you". JR took her hand, and they went inside. The Officer told them they couldn't go up. He explained he needed to see his Ex wife, she lived on the 7th floor. The elevator door opened, and the Officers walked out with Sue Ellen. She saw JR and Jennifer she ran over hugging them.
"Sue Ellen what happened"?
"Keith is dead, he was shot, I thought I heard a gun shot. I thought I was just scared being alone. Than I heard someone scream, it was the lady down the hall. She saw a man run out of Keith's condo, and run down the stairs. She looked into his apartment, he was murdered, JR he is dead. I just had dinner with him, who would kill him, he was so nice"? Sue Ellen was hysterical.
"Shh you are coming to Southfork"
"They want me to come down for questioning".
"Can she come tomorrow morning, this is to much for her. He was a friend of hers, she is scared".
"Sure come down in the morning, here is the names of who to ask for". Sue Ellen took the card, Jennifer wrapped her arms around her, and the three of them walked out together. They walked to JR's car , JR pulled out, and none of them saw a car following right behind them.
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Post by Sanda on Feb 16, 2011 1:10:06 GMT -6
Great update Jessie. Poor Sue Ellen.
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Post by jennifer1983 on Feb 16, 2011 6:49:52 GMT -6
Great update Jessie.
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Post by melindajo2000 on Feb 16, 2011 22:32:34 GMT -6
great update... Sue Ellen is in trouble... hope that they can get to the bottom of this fast
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