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Post by jennifer1983 on Oct 2, 2010 2:10:03 GMT -6
Great update Jessie. I hope I choose to stay the night at the condo with JR.
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Post by melindajo2000 on Oct 2, 2010 11:11:15 GMT -6
great chapter, this was fun and I am anxious to see what happens next I agree with Jennifer I think they should go to the condo
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Post by jessie on Oct 3, 2010 0:55:44 GMT -6
Chapter10
Jennifer and JR were dancing the night away, and she hated that the BBQ was coming to a end. She had the time of her life, and she loved John Ross and the family. Punk walked over, "Jennifer, are you coming, it has been a long day, we want to get going"?
JR stared at Jennifer, as she was about to tell Punk she was coming. She realized she couldn't, she whispered, "I'm staying with JR tonight"
'What no, come on we are going home now"
"Uncle Punk please, I want to be with JR, I'm fine".
'He might hurt you Jennifer, than what"?
"I'm a big girl, I will be fine, if he does it is my business".
'Fine, I'm not happy about this at all". Punk walked away, and Mavis smiled, "see you tomorrow Sweetie". She ran to catch up with Punk. Jennifer turned, "I'm sorry about that he is so protective of me".
"That is great , but I don't plan to hurt you Jennifer. I want you to come to the condo with me. Don't if your really not comfortable, and are worried you would hurt my feelings".
'I want to JR, or I would have gone home with my Aunt and Uncle". JR smiled, 'Great I was hoping you would say that. Lets go say goodnight to John Ross, and we can go". They went into the house, and went to see John Ross. JR knelt down, "I'm going out for the night, Pam and Bobby are going to watch you. Please promise me you will be good for them".
"I will Dad, I always am, where are you going".
"Out but I will see you tomorrow ok". John Ross hugged him, and waved to Jennifer, and went to see Christopher again. Jennifer smiled, "he is a really good boy, you raised him well".
" His Mom is great with him too, he is a good kid though". They left after saying goodbye to everyone. They were driving in the car, and Jennifer stomach was doing flips she was so nervous. They got to the condo, and went inside, and took the elevator up. The door opened, and he held her hand taking her to his door. He opened it, and she walked in looking around. It was so beautiful, and big, she loved the balcony. She walked over opening the door, going out feeling the fresh air it was nice. He walked up behind her, wrapping his arms around her. "Jennifer your ok, you were mighty quiet all the way here"
" I'm sorry, I was just thinking about today, it was so much fun. I l love your family, and friends, all except you know who"?
"Marilee, Sue Ellen hated her too". JR took her hands, and walked her into the living room sitting her down. He smiled, "what would you like to drink"?
" A glass of white wine would be nice". He walked over pouring her wine, and getting a glass of bourbon for himself. He brought them over, and sat beside her. She was sipping her wine, while JR was talking, he was making her laugh. He took the wine out of her hand, and put it down. She smiled, as he moved close bringing his lips to hers. She pulled him to her kissing him back passionately. He touched her face, and stood up, putting his hands out. She put her hands in his, and he pulled her up. He whispered, "should we retire to the bedroom Jennifer"?. She looked into his eyes, and whispered, "Yes JR"..
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Post by jennifer1983 on Oct 3, 2010 1:52:28 GMT -6
Great update Jessie. I'm glad that I went to the condo with JR.
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Post by jessie on Oct 3, 2010 23:40:08 GMT -6
Chapter11
JR and Jennifer walked to the bedroom, and he shut the door. She stood looking around, as he walked up behind her wrapping his arms around her.
He touched her shoulder roaming his hands down her arms. She shut her eyes, and leaned into JR. She loved feeling him so close, she felt safe in his arms. She turned around facing him. He traced her lips with his finger, before bringing his lips over hers. She touched his chest, and he smiled, 'do you want me to stop Jennifer"?
"No, I'm just nervous that is all". He smiled, whispering in her ear, "relax and enjoy the evening Jennifer". He moved around her, roaming his hands over her body. She felt him lifting her dress, and her first instinct was to stop him, but she didn't want to. She let him lift her dress, and take it off. He kissed her shoulder, and down her back, making her moan out. He was driving her crazy, and she couldn't take much more. His mouth was sending little electric shocks throughout her body. He started to undress, and she walked over to the bed pulling down the sheets, and comforter. He walked over, and kissed her again, as she sat on the bed. She laid in the middle of the bed, while he got in beside her. He was talking to her, and they held hands, as he kissed her once again. She lost her breath, he was so passionate, he moved down, and started to remove her panties, making her shiver. He smiled as he was looking into her eyes, and he parted her, and they became one. He was moving and she couldn't believe how he was making her feel. She cried out, as he brought her to her release, and he came to his after. They collapsed beside each other, and she laid her head on his chest. She was so overwhelmed, and JR caressed her back, as she laid silent. He whispered, "are you ok Jennifer"?
"Yes, more than ok, that was amazing JR". He smiled, "Oh I was getting worried, you were so quiet".
"JR you really are serious about getting to know me better right"
"Yes, what is the matter, is your Uncle scaring you"?
"Yes, but I was hurt before, I just want to know this is for real".
'Jennifer, I'm tired of playing games with people. I did that with my Ex, and I lost her. I have grown to really like you, and after tonight, I'm not letting you out of my sight Darling. You are my girl, and I plan to court you, until the day, I ask you to marry me".
Jennifer looked into his eyes, and brought her lips over his. They were kissing , and he whispered, " Oh you will be sorry, JR Ewing, can't control himself, when he has a lovely woman in his arms". She giggled, and he flipped her over bringing his lips over hers, and they made love all over again. They laid in each others arms, talking and laughing after, and finally fell asleep in each others arms. Jennifer was so content, and she just knew he cared for her. She held him tight, because she knew he was the man she was going to spend the rest of her life with.
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Post by jennifer1983 on Oct 4, 2010 2:09:23 GMT -6
Great update Jessie.
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Post by melindajo2000 on Oct 4, 2010 13:49:44 GMT -6
very nice chapter, love that side of JR Ewing, who could resist him? excellent writing as always
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Post by jessie on Oct 4, 2010 23:46:41 GMT -6
Chapter 12
JR woke up, and noticed Jennifer wasn't in bed. He got up looking for her, and noticed she was standing out on the balcony. She was wearing his dress shirt only. He walked out touching her shoulder, "are you ok Jennifer"?
"Yes, I wanted to look over Dallas, it is so beautiful from this view".
"Yes, this view is magnificent " Jennifer turned smiling, "JR tonight was amazing, this whole day was beautiful".
"Yes it was what is wrong Jennifer".
"Nothing, I just don't want anything to end this fairytale". JR smiled, " being with me is like a fairytale"?
"You know what I mean, this is something I waited my whole life for. You are the man I dreamed I would be with. I think my Uncle has been scaring me, and I don't want to worry about this, but I do".
JR touched her cheek, "It is freezing out here , all your wearing is my shirt. Can we go inside, and talk about this"?
"Yes, JR", She walked in and he shut the door. Jennifer was cold, he wrapped a blanket around her. They went to the kitchen, and he was making her a tea. She smiled, she couldn't believe JR Ewing was making her a tea. She got up wrapping her hands around his waist leaning into him. He turned pulling her into a kiss. He whispered would you like to skip the tea, and I can find another way to get you warm"?
"JR you are bad".
"Yeah, can you blame a guy for trying". They both laugh, as he turned off the kettle, and he lifted Jennifer into his arms. He walked to the bedroom, and kicked the door shut. He walked over to the bed, laying her down. She couldn't keep her eyes, off of JR, he was the most amazing, and handsome men she ever saw. He moved over to her, opening up his shirt taking it off of her. She couldn't catch her breath, as he feathered her with kisses down her body, making her moan. He smiled, " are you warm yet Jennifer"?
"You know I am JR", He smiled as he brought his lips to hers, and they soon were making love again. He was a man who knew how to please his woman in every way. He was making her go crazy, she finally came, and he collapsed beside her after he did. They both just touched each other intimately, and were kissing, until they both drifted off asleep in each others arms. He woke up a hour later, and smiled seeing her sleeping. He knew he didn't want to mess it up this time. Jennifer helped him forget about his past, and he felt like a new man with her. He wanted her to be part of his life, and he vowed he would ask her to marry him, soon. He wanted to talk to John Ross, but he was sure he would be fine. He touched her cheek, "goodnight Beautiful, see you in the morning". He snuggled real close, and fell back asleep.
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Post by jennifer1983 on Oct 5, 2010 2:00:00 GMT -6
Great update Jessie. I hope JR marries me soon.
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Post by Sanda on Oct 5, 2010 14:39:35 GMT -6
Great updates Jessie. I hope that JR marries Jennifer soon as well. Please update soon.
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Post by jessie on Oct 6, 2010 23:16:02 GMT -6
Chapter 13
JR woke up , and was surprised that Jennifer wasn't in bed. He got up putting his robe on, and looked in the bathroom. She wasn't there, so he walked out to the living room, and didn't see her. He was disappointed, he thought she left without saying anything to him first. He heard a noise in the kitchen so he walked over seeing her cooking. He looked at the table, it was set up, and he smiled sneaking up behind her. He walked up real close whispering in her eat, as he wrapped his arms around her. "Hey beautiful, I was so worried you left me"
" You didn't think that JR"?
"Yeah, I did but this smells so good, you didn't have to cook. I could have ordered something up, there is a restaurant downstairs, that delivers"
"I wanted to hope you like bacon and eggs JR, go sit down" He did, watching her, and smiled, he couldn't remember the last time someone cooked just for him?. She brought the food over, putting the plate in front of him. She smiled, "hope your hungry, because I'm starving".
"Me too", they both were eating, and he couldn't believe how good everything was. He whispered, "Oh this is so good, the best breakfast, I ever had. Don't Tell Teresa, she would be hurt".
"Teresa"?
"Oh she works for us, she is really sweet. She would do anything for the family, I have to say the only thing, she sucks at is making a good egg".
"Really"?
"Yeah, but everything else she is pretty amazing. You will find out one day when you live at southfork. She won't let you cook much, she pretty much takes over that part of the house".
"Oh but I love to cook"
"Well you will have to ask her if it is ok. I'm not asking her, she will get mad at me, not you". Jennifer smiled, " Oh I think I will get along fine with her".
"Jennifer, yesterday was really fun, and I really appreciate that you came here last night".
"I enjoyed myself JR", they finished, and she put the dishes, in the dishwasher, and turned it on. They went to the bedroom, and before they knew it they were making love again. He touched her face, and smiled, "I want to take you somewhere special, so lets get a shower, and get out of here". She sat up, "where are you taking me'?
"Hurry up, and you will find out". They both showered together, and made love in the shower. They got out, and dressed, and left the condo. JR drove into Dallas and stopped in front of a Jewelery Store. Jennifer was shocked, when he took her inside. He walked over to the owner, "Hi Ben this is Jennifer, and I want to buy her the nicest engagement ring, you have in this store". Ben smiled, "Hello Jennifer, follow me, and I will show you the selection". They were looking at the rings, and Jennifer couldn't believe the prices. She had a favourite, JR knew which one she liked, but she saw the price, and put it back. JR smiled, "You love this one the Ruby, don't you"?
"Yes, but the price is to much".
"Ben we are taking this one, nothing but the best for my Girl". Ben ran up the bill, and JR paid by credit card. Ben smiled, "would you like to wear it now JR, or should I wrap it up"?
" I would love to wear it", She put it on her finger, and smiled, "it is so beautiful JR".
JR smiled, " Nothing but the best for my Wife to be".
Jennifer kissed JR, and they left, and got in the car. Jennifer whispered, " my Uncle is going to be shocked." .
JR smiled, "Lets go see Punk and Mavis, I have to do this proper. I'm going to have a talk with Punk, and ask him for my blessing to marry you".
"JR you don't have to do that, he might get rude".
"I can handle it Jennifer lets go". JR started the car, and all Jennifer could do was look at the ring.
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Post by Sanda on Oct 7, 2010 0:45:47 GMT -6
Great update Jessie. I LOVE it Jennifer cooked Eggs and Bacon for her and JR. I also hope that Punk and Mavis approve of JR and Jennifer's engagement.
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Post by jennifer1983 on Oct 7, 2010 1:47:29 GMT -6
Great update Jessie. I'm glad that I cooked for JR and I hope Punk approves of the engagement.
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Post by melindajo2000 on Oct 7, 2010 5:27:38 GMT -6
that was nice Jennifer cooked for JR I loved his comments about Teresa and I hope Punk doesn't give him any trouble
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Post by jessie on Oct 7, 2010 23:03:53 GMT -6
Chapter 14
Jennifer and JR got to Mavis and Punks home and parked. They walked inside, and Jennifer walked into the living room. Punk and Mavis were in there having a coffee, when she smiled. "Hi, JR is here, he wants to talk to you Uncle Punk"
"Why me"?
JR smiled, " Punk can we go outside just for a moment? I would love to discuss something with you". Punk got up walking outside, and Jennifer smiled, " he is tough but a good man"
"I know that he is a great friend of my Dad's". JR walked outside, and Punk was standing looking over his land. JR walked over, "Punk I know you think , I will hurt Jennifer, but I promise you I won't".
"Really JR you made many promises to Sue Ellen didn't you"?
"Yes, that was than, I have changed, I'm tired of that life. I lost Sue Ellen, and I deserved it. I have another chance at love with Jennifer, she is really special Punk"
"Yes she is JR, and she has been hurt in the past, it will kill her, if you hurt her now".
"I want to marry Jennifer, but I would love your blessing"
"OMG you just met, you want to marry her"?
"Yes, I'm getting older, I want to have someone to come home to every night. Jennifer is the woman, I want to spend the rest of my life with. Please forget the past Punk, I promise you , I have changed". Punk smiled, "Oh boy if you haven't you and me will have a date with my fist"
"Oh Punk you are one scary man".
"Good we made everything clear, if you want to marry Jennifer, you have my blessing"
"Really Punk"?
"Yeah, you are Jock's boy he loved you. Jock was a deceit man, he had high hopes for you, I wondered why, but I can forget the past JR".
JR put his hand out, they shook hands, and Punk smiled, "lets go have some champagne, and celebrate". JR and Punk walked inside, and Jennifer was scared, wondering what happened? Punk walked over hugging Jennifer, "So we have a wedding coming up".
"Well JR hasn't asked me properly yet, but I would love to marry JR"
JR walked over, " I will ask proper, but not here". He kissed her, and Jennifer held his hand. Punk poured everyone champagne, and they all drank to Jennifer and JR's new life together. JR smiled, "I would love the wedding to be at Southfork". Mavis stood up, " Why not here, this is a new start, your other weddings were at Southfork"?
"I wouldn't mind it here, that is a great idea Mavis". She hugged JR, and whispered, "I can see you love Jennifer, I'm so happy for you both". JR smiled, " I guess now , me and Jennifer should go to Southfork, and tell John Ross. That might be hard on him, he always wanted me and Sue Ellen back together. That won't happen, so I hope he can accept this". Jennifer smiled, " I love your boy, I would never try to take his Ma Ma's spot, but maybe someday, he would love a baby brother or Sister"?
"Oh he would but Darling, I only produce Sons". Punk laughed, and Jennifer smiled, "Oh you never know, I think you would be a great Daddy to a little girl".
"Oh I don't know, I wouldn't let her date until she was 30". Punk laughed, "Oh you are afraid, she would meet someone like you".
"Yeah Punk, I was bad in the past, but that is over. I wouldn't mind a daughter, Jennifer, I'm kidding". Jennifer kissed JR, and whispered, " maybe we will have one of each'?
JR smiled, "That is even better".
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