A fight between two brothers over 1 girl

[jessie]

Hey Melinda, you might love this story, you guys got me hooked on writing this fun stuff. Another story , I pray you will love.

This takes place before Val came into the picture.

Chapter 1

Gary came home from high school, he was on cloud nine, he meet the most amazing girl. He ran in, and was telling Bobby, all about this girl, he met today. She just arrived in Dallas, her Father was a Oil man too, but he just moved here recently. Gary sat on the bed, telling Bobby all the details, and Bobby was all ears. He loved Gary, and thought the world of him. Gary and Bobby didn't really get along with JR much, because he always pushed them away.

Bobby yells, "Did you kiss her yet"?

" I just met her dork, I can't kiss her until, I ask her out on a date"

"Did you ask her, or not"?

" Yeah friday, we are going to the new, diner up the street".

"The one that plays all the oldie songs"?

" Yeah she said she loves that kind of stuff"

"Gary is she hot, tell me "?

Smiling, " She is adorable, sweet and innocent but yes hot Bobby".

"OMG are you going to bring her to Southfork"?

" I want to but Daddy and JR make me nervous"

" Why who cares what JR thinks"?

" I do remember the last time, he slept with my girl"

"No really , what did you do"?

JR walks into the room, "nothing Bobby, she wanted me"

" JR you dumped her the next week, she was so hurt"

" I'm not getting tied down, I love to play the field"

" You really are disgusting JR,"

" Gary you have a new girl, tell me all about her, what is her name"?

" You won't get near her JR, besides, she wouldn't want you"

Smiling, " how do you know Gary"?

"Get lost JR, please, I was having a nice conversation with Bobby".

"What is her name Gary"?

"Melinda if you must know, and If I invite her here, don't make a move"

" Oh what will you do if I do"?

" Hurt you JR, she is someone special don't put your filthy hands on her".

JR laughs, " Oh Gary, she won't want a boring loser like you. Don't worry, anyone sweet and innocent, is not my type". JR walked out, and Gary threw the pillow. " I can't stand him sometimes, he drive me crazy".

" Gary I want to see her, ask her out for ice cream or something"

" You want me to take you out to meet her"?

" Yeah , I will tell you if JR would make a move or not"

Gary laughs, " you know JR like a book don't you little brother"?

" Yeah so call her unless your chicken"

"Fine," he dialed her number, and he was surprised she answered.

"Hi Melinda"

"Gary, I wasn't expecting your call so soon".

" My little brother wants to go out for ice cream. How about I pick you up, and the three of us go for one"?

" Right now Gary"?

" Why not are you game Melinda"?

" Sure Gary, pick me up anytime"

Bye, see you soon", Gary hung up, and smiled, "lets go Bobby, and be nice, I don't want her scared off".

" Oh I'm the little charmer you know that". Bobby giggled

Gary and Bobby drove to Melinda, home, and he got out running up to the door. Gary knocked and Melinda came to the door . She was wearing a pink halter, and white shorts. Her hair was in a ponytail, and she shut the door, and he smiled. " You look nice, lets go, and don't be alarmed if Bobby is annoying".

" I won't but I'm sure he will be fine".

Bobby was sitting in the backseat, he was staring. He sat back, and whispered, " Oh Gary, your in trouble if you bring her home".

To Be continued,

[melindajo2000]

I love this! I really cant wait to see where you go with this... this is so good already. These stories are so awesome, this is one of my favorites please updates soon. I wonder who she will choose but it will be fun watching

[jessie]

Chapter2

Melinda and Gary got in the car, and Bobby smiled, when Gary turned, "Bobby this is Melinda"

" So your Gary, new girl"?

Gary turns around, " Bobby I swear, I will kick you out of the car".

Melinda giggles, " Why Gary, I like that you called me your Girl"?

Gary smiles, and he pulls out and drives, to the mall for a ice cream. Bobby is in the back seat ,and Gary is glaring at him, though the rear view mirror. They got to the mall, and parked, the three of the them walk into the mall. Gary grabbed Bobby whispering, " keep your mouth shut, Bobby"?

" What she is your girl right"?

" Stop".

Melinda smiles, " are you boys coming or should I go buy my own ice cream. Gary smiles, " we are coming, Bobby needed someone to tie his shoes, he's still is a baby"

"Funny Gary" Bobby walked ahead of Melinda and Gary. Melinda held Gary's hand , and leaned into him. Gary never felt this way about a girl, they walked over to the ice cream stand. Melinda said she wanted chocolate sundae, and Gary ordered the same. Bobby wanted a banana split, Gary paid, and told Bobby to bring to ice cream to the table, once it was ready. He walked over to a booth, and sat across from Melinda, holding her hand. She smiled, " I was shocked you called today, but I like it".

" I just thought why not, every girl loves ice cream right"?

" I don't know , but I love it"

Bobby walked over, bringing the ice cream, he sat beside Gary. Gary, handed Melinda her ice cream, and their hands touch. Bobby is staring seeing them both looking at each other. He was shocked when he saw JR walking over, he stopped at the table, and sat down beside Melinda.

"What are you two losers doing here"?

Gary glares at JR, " leave JR, I have a guest, who doesn't want to listen to your dirty mouth".

JR stares at Melinda, " Oh your Gary's new girl, not bad. She is pretty Gary, I was wrong saying she isn't my type".

Melinda is confused, but she found herself intrigued by JR. He put his hand on her leg under the table, and smiled," if your ever interested in a more mature date, call me I'm JR Ewing"

Melinda was shocked, JR jumped up winking at her, and smiled, "see you idiots at home".

Gary was so angry,but didn't want to lose his temper in front of Melinda. "I'm sorry, he is such a idiot, he has no manners"

" That is your brother Gary"?

" Yeah but not by choice".

Melinda tried to smile, and picked up her ice cream. She was feeling really uncomfortable, because she really liked Gary, but she felt something when JR touched her. She turned, and saw JR talking to his friends, and he noticed her looking, he smiled.

Bobby looks at JR, and then Melinda he shut his eyes. In his head he thought not again, Gary will not be able to handle it this time. Bobby jumped up, walking over to JR, "leave her alone JR, she is Gary's girl, he is your brother".

"Bobby can I help , she likes me".

" JR I will never speak to you again, if you hurt Gary"

JR looked over at Melinda, " he planned to have her, and he couldn't care less if Gary got hurt. Bobby walked over to Gary, "lets go home Gary, I don't want to be here anymore".

" Bobby sit down, I'm not leaving".

" Fine I will walk home".

Gary stood up, " Bobby you can't sit down".

" Please lets go", Bobby stared at Gary

Melinda got up, " it is ok, I have alot of homework anyway". She leaned over to get her purse, Gary noticed JR staring , he grabbed Melinda's hand, and they walked out. Melinda couldn't help herself, she smiled, when JR waved goodbye.

They drove Melinda home, Gary walked her up to the door, as Bobby stayed in the car, he climbed into the front seat. He watched as Gary, kissed Melinda, he turned away. He yelled JR, why do you hate Gary so much"?

Gary got in the car, " what is wrong with you Bobby"?

"JR is going after her, I'm telling you Gary"

" This time he won't win, you can bet on that"

Bobby smiled, " wow your going up against JR"

" Yeah , and I'm going to win the girl this time. He smiled, lets go home, Gary pulled out and drove to Southfork.

Melinda ran upstairs, and sat on the bed. She touched her lips, remembering Gary's kiss , she touched her leg where JR touched it. She laid back, "OMG what is happening to me"?

[Sanda]

Jessie, I LOVE this story sooo much. I wonder who Melinda is going to choose. Please update soon.

[jessie]

Chapter 3

That night Gary waited outside on the deck for JR. He saw his car. JR got out, and saw Gary , and laughed.

" Oh you wanted to make sure , I got home safely"

"No JR, I want to kill you at this moment".

" What is wrong Gary, is it the pretty, little thing you were playing with today."?

"Yeah, Melinda she is mine JR, don't make a play for her"

" It is a free world , If she wants a more mature, lover , she knows where to go. "

" I'm not her lover, she is not that type of girl"

" She is to young for you JR"

" Gary , I'm going to bed, I'm tired, I had a long day"

" Did you use some girl, and tomorrow your going to break her heart"?

" Actually, I made out in the car, have you ever done that before"?

"Gary, pushed JR, " you are sick, someday, you will get yours"

Jock walked out, " what is going on out here"?

"Nothing Daddy, Gary and me are just joking around"

"Gary is that true"?

" Yeah Dad, your special boy is just amazing", Gary ran into the house.

Jock stared, " What did you do to Gary now"?

" It is a girl Daddy, she has the hots for me not Gary"

" Is it Gary's girl"?

" Not really, he hasn't really dated her"

" JR you can have anyone, why pick his girls all the time"?

" Fine, I will leave her alone, but she will be calling me, I'm sure"

"JR you really are a smug son of a gun, go to bed"

"Good night Daddy, see you tomorrow" JR ran inside. Miss Ellie heard everything , and walked out. "Jock not again, why does JR constantly want to hurt Gary"?

"Miss Ellie why do you always take Gary's side"?

" Because you never put JR in his place". Miss Ellie walked into the house, and Jock stayed outside, he was worried, this was going to become a big problem.

The next morning Gary left without breakfast. He didn't want to see JR, he drove to school early. He sat on the grass, and saw Melinda drive up with her Father. She saw him, and smiled, and walked over. " Hi, Gary , how are you "?

" OK , I thought of you all night"

She sat down beside him, " Gary something is really bothering you "?

" I really like you Melinda, and I thought maybe we could go steady"?

Melinda moved her face to Gary's and kissed him. Gary smiled, " does that mean you will be my girlfriend"?

" Yes, I would like that Gary", she leaned her head on her shoulder. " Can I ask you one question Gary"?

" Sure anything"?

" Your brother JR, you don't like him much do you"?

" I really don't want to talk about him Melinda. I really don't want you anywhere near him ok"

" Why what did he do to you Gary"?

" He slept with my girlfriend once, and thought it was ok"

" OMG that is awful, but the girl was wrong to"

" She was but he really hurt her, but I couldn't forgive her"

" He is so different than you"

" Yeah he is more like my Daddy, they both treat me like crap"

" Your Daddy Gary"?

" He is a good man , but he made JR the man he is. He walks around like he is more superior than me. He wants to be just like my Daddy, and I don't want anything to do with the Oil business"

"My Daddy is in the Oil business Gary, that doesn't make you bad"

" Can we talk about us Melinda, not JR and the business"?

" Sure what do you want to know"?

" Would you like to come to my house tomorrow, for a swim after school"?

" Sure I would love that, I can't wait"

" I will pray JR doesn't come home after school. You will love my Ma Ma"

" We better get going classes will be starting soon".

Gary helped Melinda up, " Can I walk you to your locker"?

" I would like that", Gary grabbed her books, and they walked into the school.

He got to her locker, she put her things in. She turned, "see you at spare"?

" Sure I will buy you a coffee", he smiled, see you later. She shut her locker , and Gary touched her shoulder. Melinda turned around, and Gary moved her against the locker, and kissed her. He smiled, " I have been wanting to do that all morning"

"What took you so long,"? Melinda giggled. She waved and walked down the hall, Gary couldn't keep his eyes, off her. He ran to his class, and couldn't keep his eyes, off the clock. He missed her already, and he smiled, thinking she was the one.

[melindajo2000]

I love these chapters!! At first I couldn't tell if it was going to be Bobby and Gary or JR and Gary but its going to be so much fun to read. I am looking forward to your next update. I love this story!

[Sanda]

Great update Jessie. I can't wait to see what happens between Gary and Melinda in your story. I LOVE this story soo much.

[jessie]

Chapter 4

The next day

Gary and Melinda couldn't wait for the day to end. They both were looking forward to their date together. Melinda was waiting for Gary outside, when Bobby ran up to her.

"Hi Melinda, your coming to our house, today"?

"Yeah , I'm waiting for Gary, he should be out any moment"

Bobby smiled, " You are a pretty one, it is no wonder Gary, likes you"

" Thank you Bobby, but I'm sure, he wouldn't be happy you told me that".

Gary walked up, " told you what"?

" That you have the hots for Melinda", Bobby laughs.

Gary ran after Bobby, but laughed, " sorry he is really annoying, "

" I think he is adorable, Gary"

" Don't tell him that please"

" I won't are we going for our swim"?

Gary grabbed her hand, " come on lets get going." They ran to the car, and drove to Southfork. Gary almost flipped when he saw JR with sitting on the deck with his buddy Peter.

"Melinda , I'm sorry JR is here, do you want to go somewhere else"?

"No, I want to go swimming, forget about JR"

Gary smiled, " your right, lets go get ready." They got out, and Gary took Melinda to the guest room to change. He changed and waited for her in the hallway, to bring her down. She walked out of the room, Gary couldn't believe how adorable she looked. Melinda walked over, " you have been waiting for me, that is so sweet".

" You look amazing, Melinda, that suit is really nice"

" Thanks, I just got it".

Bobby comes out of his room, "OMG nice Suit Melinda".

Gary yells Bobby," your asking for it, show some respect"

Gary held out his hand," lets go swim, and forget about my 2 brothers ok".

" I will Gary, lets go".

Walking outside, JR smiled, " Peter look at Gary's girl, she is a keeper isn't she"?

Peter smiles, " JR don't bug your brother, let him show off for his girl".

JR got up walking over, " hi Melinda nice seeing you again"

" You to JR, we are going for a swim".

" Have fun", JR walked back to Peter

Melinda and Gary got in the pool, and were swimming and having fun. Bobby kept jumping in the pool, splashing water over Gary and Melinda. Gary grabbed him," get out of here Bobby, enough ok"

" No, this is not your pool"

" Bobby why are you acting like a jerk, did JR pay you"?

" Yeah Gary, please"

Gary grabbed Bobby and they shoved each other. Jock walked out," both of you in the house for a moment".

" Daddy , I have a guest"

" Hello, Gary, in the house for a moment, now"

Melinda walks over, " Gary I will be fine for a moment go"

Gary jumped out of the pool, and went into the house. Melinda sat on the edge of the pool, waiting for Gary. JR walked over sitting beside her, " see how childish, my brother is"?

" Why are you mean to Gary"?

" I'm not he hates me"

JR put his hand on her shoulder, "how do you like the house"?

" It is beautiful, I love the pool"

" So do you really like Gary, Melinda"?

" Yes, I do, we are going steady"

JR smiles, Awe your going steady so adorable"

" JR are you making fun of me"?

" No Darling, but I saw the way you looked at me yesterday"

" Please JR, I don't know what you mean"?

JR pulled her close kissing her, and she didn't resist. He moved away, from her, "remember that Darling, and if you want more call me"

Melinda was shocked, JR walked over to his friend. Gary walked out, Melinda, sorry I had to leave you alone. "JR didn't bother you did he"?

"No Gary, can we go for a walk"?

" You don't want to swim, I thought you wanted to"?

" I did, but it is crowded around here"?

" You sure JR didn't say something"?

" No Gary, can we walk, or not"?

"Sure, he helped her up, wrapping a towel, around her. They walked away, and JR smiled, " Peter I will have that girl, by the end of next week"

" JR, what is it with you and Gary, leave the guy alone"?

" Mind your own business Peter, I didn't ask for your permission"

" I know but she seems sweet, don't use the girl"

" Leave Peter, I guess your Gary's friend. JR got up walking into the house slamming the door.

[Sanda]

Great update Jessie. I LOVE all of these men fighting over Melinda. ;D

[melindajo2000]

wow this was an awesome chapter, little bobby was flirting with me too now! That was such a cute chapter and JR was a snake. Gary turned his back for a minute and there he was. Whats melinda going to do. Poor Gary. LOVE this story! Thanks for writing this

[jessie]

Chapter 5

Melinda and Gary walk, and she was so upset with JR. She was just as upset, at herself for allowing JR to kiss her. She held Gary's hand, and they walked for the longest time. He stopped by a tree , and they sat down. She smiled, " this land is beautiful Gary, you must love it here"

" I do but it is strange, I'm not happy here"

" Why I would just love living here"?

" I love Ma Ma, and Bobby sometimes" Gary laughs

"He is adorable Gary, don't get mad at him he is young"

" I know but sometimes, JR gets him going, and it drives me crazy"

"You and JR really hate each other,"

" You know what, I don't hate him, it is the other way around. He is so afraid , that my Daddy will bond with me, it drives him crazy"

"Why Gary"?

" I don't know it is like a power thing with JR"

" This girl you loved why did she go to JR"?

" You would have to ask her, she really changed after that. She was sweet and quiet, and I fell head over heels in love with her. We did everything together, I thought she felt the same way as me. I caught her in the Stables with JR, they both were undressed, and I knew they made out. I went crazy, and he walked away leaving her there all alone. I hated her and JR, and I said some really disgusting things to her. She ran back to the house, and he didn't drive her home"

"Your kidding"?

" No, he said it was my responsibility, I brought her".

"OMG she must have been devastated"

" Yeah for months she was so different, everyone saw it. She tried to get JR to talk to her but he only used her. I was so angry, I wouldn't even look at her. She quit school, and she really is mixed up now, and the last I heard, she is pregnant'

"Melinda was shocked, and disgusted with JR.

Gary touched Melinda's face, " don't you ever hurt me like that Melinda"

" I won't", she laid into his arms, and he held her close. He touched her chin, bringing his lips to hers. She moved her mouth over the hard edge of his jaw, peppering his face with kisses until he grasped her chin, and fastened his mouth over hers again. He laid her back, and leaned over her, bringing his lips to her neck . She couldn't breath, she was burning up, she has never been with a man, but she desired, Gary's touch. She put her hands on Gary's chest, and he grabbed her wrist placing several kisses against the palm of her hand. She cupped his face, running her thumb over his mouth once move, then delved into his hair, and urged him down to her mouth. Her lips trembled too, and he kissed her softly , gently , cherishing her response. He got off her and picked her up in his arms. She smiled at him, " My Prince Charming"

" We better stop Melinda, or I won't be able too"

" I know that was amazing Gary"

"Lets go back to the house, and change, and get something to eat"

" I like that", she smiled

What they didn't realize, someone saw everything they just did. JR stood on the balcony of his bedroom, and watch his brother having a make out session with his girl. He knew she wanted to be loved, and he knew, just who would be the one, that would have her. He smiled, as he saw them walking up to the house.

Gary and Melinda walked upstairs, Gary touched her face, " "Melinda, go have a shower, and change, and meet me downstairs, in the dining room. I will have a snack waiting for you ok"

"Sure Gary, she walked in her room.

Gary changed quick and ran downstairs. Melinda did take a quick shower, and walked out of the bathroom, into the bedroom. She dropped her towel, and was about to change. She jumped when someone wrapped there arms around her. She turned" thinking how dare you Gary"

She was shocked it was JR, and he smiled, " you look amazing"

Melinda grabbed her towel, " get out of here now".

JR moved close, " I know what you need, and it isn't Gary"

"Gary told me what you are, you use women, and throw them away"

"Gary is just jealous, because women want me not him"

" I like Gary, your just plain mean"

" I saw your little make out session, you would have went all the way, he chickened out"

" No, he had respect for me,"

" I respect you , I would treat you like a women, and you would love it"

"OMG please leave me alone"

JR got so close she could feel his clothes against her skin. His face, was so close she could feel his breath against her face. He touched her shoulder, and brought his lips close. She hated herself she wanted to kiss him but she couldn't hurt Gary. He pulled her close, whispering" tell me you don't want me right this moment"

Bobby banged on the door, " Melinda Gary is waiting , what is taking you so long"?

" Bobby tell him, I will be down in a minute"

" OK hurry"

Melinda has tears in her eyes, " stop JR, your confusing me."

He lowered her to the bed, just hovering over her. " I will wait for you to come to me, I can see it in your eyes, your interested." He turned and walked out of the room. Melinda was so shaken up, she barely could get dressed. She walked downstairs, and saw Gary, and sat down. He smiled, " everything ok Melinda"?

" Yeah Gary, everything is fine"

[melindajo2000]

oh JR is so rotten why can't he leave Gary's girlfriends alone lol. JR is making it so tough for Melinda, you have his charms down perfectly. I love this story!

[Sanda]

OMG, JR is rotten to go after Gary's girlfirend Melinda. I LOVE this story sooo much. Please update soon.

[jessie]

Chapter 6

Melinda had a snack with Gary but she couldn't hardly eat. Gary knew something was wrong, and was worried.

"Melinda I'm sorry if I upset you when I kissed you by the tree"

" You didn't Gary, I'm just tired can you take me home please"?

" Sure, he got up, and she walked outside toward the car. She noticed JR standing by the cars. She prayed he wouldn't say anything about what happened upstairs. She waited while Gary opened the door, and she got in. She wouldn't look at JR, and Gary drove off. JR jumped into his car, and sped off but kept his distance. Gary was so distracted he didn't even notice JR's car. He just knew she was angry, and it was his fault. He got to her house, and parked. JR parked down the street watching. She walked up to her door, and Gary grabbed her arm. " Melinda please talk to me, I'm sorry".

" Gary you didn't do anything to be sorry for"

" What is wrong than"?

" Nothing I'm tired, can you call me tomorrow"?

" I will, your sure your ok"?

" I am", she kissed Gary, and ran in the house. He stood outside, and walked to the car, staring at the house. Melinda was grateful her parents weren't home. She cried leaning on the door, she felt so guilty about JR she treated Gary like crap. She went to the kitchen, and got a glass of water, and Tylenol. She heard a knock at her door, she put the glass down running to the door. She was glad Gary came back, she opened the door, and was shocked JR was standing there smirking.

" JR what are you doing leave me alone"

" I saw how you treated Gary, you don't want him really"

" Your wrong, I feel guilty for not telling him about you"

" What you kissed me back, you wanted that just as much as I did"?

" Your right, ok are you happy, I enjoyed the kiss"

" I see your home alone, so your parents won't stop you from coming out with me"

" I'm not going anywhere with you JR"

" A ride Darling , we can talk about what happened"

" I was a fool, and I have to tell Gary"

" He will drop you so fast if you do that, so be careful"

" Goodbye JR"

" Go for this ride with me, and I promise, I won't do anything you don't want me to"

" You just want to hurt Gary, why"?

" This has nothing to do with Gary , it is all you why I'm here "

Melinda was so confused, she wanted him, and hated him at the same time.

" Come on, we can just talk, and get to know each other"

" You won't try anything with me"?

" No, I will be the perfect gentleman"

" I bet your have never been that"

" Oh you stabbed me through the heart", he smiled,

She grabbed her purse , locking the door," just for alitte while"

" When you want to come back, I will gladly bring you". She walked to his car, and got in. She knew if Gary found out it was over, and she hated herself for taking that chance. JR reached over and Melinda yelled, " you said you wouldn't touch me"

" Your seat belt, my GOD Melinda"

" Sorry", she put her belt on, and JR smiled, " I will take you to my favorite place in the world"

He drove, and the whole time, she wondered where that would be? He parked and she looked around , "where are we JR"?

"Gary never brought you here Melinda"?

"Me and Gary have been on 2 dates, one you ruined at the ice cream parlor, and today, you ruined again"

" Did I , you didn't love when I kissed you? You didn't love feeling my body close to yours."?

" OMG you are the most conceited person, I have ever met"

" That is nicer, than what most people say about me"

" I asked you where are we JR"?

JR got out of the car, " make out cove", he smiled slamming the car door shut. He walked over to her side opening the door. She whispered, "I'm not making out JR"

" We came to talk, it is quiet, no one ever is this far in. I bring all my friends here, they normally enjoy it".

She got out, "JR maybe we should go back, this isn't a proper place for a girl"

He started walking and smiled, " 10 minutes come on"

"JR stop , no, I want to go back"

" 10 minutes" he kept walking and she chased after him.

[melindajo2000]

shes really going to blow things with Gary JR is too bad here. I love this. Whats Melinda going to do... cant wait to find out thanks.