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Post by melindajo2000 on Sept 12, 2010 16:40:46 GMT -6
great chapter JR is so bad in this story I hope Melinda and Gary make up
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Post by Sanda on Sept 12, 2010 22:06:14 GMT -6
Great update Jessie. JR was awful in the chapter. I hope that Melinda and Gary will make up soon.
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Post by jessie on Oct 1, 2010 17:43:58 GMT -6
Chapter 18
Melinda's Mom came upstairs, to see Melinda. She knocked at the door. "Melinda can , I come in and talk to you"?
"Yes, Ma Ma".
Melinda was laying on the bed, and her Mom walked over sitting beside her. "Sweetie your scaring me and your Father. What happened tonight to upset you so much"?
" I thought Gary was different, he is no better than JR".
"OMG did he hurt you Sweetie"?
"He broke my heart, he was kissing another Woman while I was sitting at the table".
"Kissing"?
"Yeah one of JR's girlfriends, a very nasty young lady". Her Mom hugged her, and Melinda couldn't stop crying. They both jump when they heard Gary yelling Melinda's name. Melinda walked to the window, and her Daddy was telling him to leave. Gary saw Melinda from the window, and yelled up. "Melinda please listen to me, JR set me up. I swear, I never touched Marilee, she started coming on to me". Melinda wanted to believe him, but she was so angry. "Melinda please come down, I don't want to go with you thinking, I would hurt you that way". Melinda looked at her Mom, " I don't know what to think"?
"You can see what he has to say, if you don't believe him, send him packing". Melinda smiled, and ran downstairs, and outside. "Daddy, I will talk to him, I'm ok". He touched her face, "I'm right inside if you need me". Melinda watched her Dad go in, and she walked down to Gary. He touched her face, and Melinda pulled away. Gary was so upset, he had tears in his eyes. "Melinda you can't believe, I would want her over you. JR set it up, he is so awful he hates me. He wants you Melinda don't let him break us up". Melinda started to cry, "Can we ever be happy Gary, with him always coming after us"?
"Can we go for a ride Melinda, just the two of us"?
"What you don't want Marilee , and JR to join us"? Gary smiled, "Don't be funny, please lets go for a drive". Melinda ran to the door, "Daddy I'm going for a ride with Gary, I won't be long".
"Melinda are you sure Sweetie"?
"Yes, I want to hear what he has to say". Melinda ran to Gary, "Lets go". He opened the door, and she got in. Gary walked over to the driver side, and got in, and started the car. Gary took Melinda to the bluffs, so they could be alone. He pulled out a blanket, and smiled, "lets go over to the point, it is beautiful Melinda".
"Gary maybe we should stay in the car"
"Melinda please", he put his hand out to her, and she grabbed it. They walked over, and he was right, it was secluded, and beautiful. Gary put the blanket down, and they sat down, looking at each other. Melinda laughed, "Oh man I'm a sucker for a good looking guy, I can't believe I'm here right now".
Gary smiled, he moved real close holding her hand. "Melinda please tell me you believe, I was set up today with Marilee".
" I believe you, but it didn't look good"
"No, it didn't but she was all over me when you showed up".
"Why would JR want his girlfriend to do that"?
" Because he doesn't really like her, he uses Marilee. She would do anything for him. It is actually sad, but she is just as bad as JR. She allows him to do it to her, she has no respect for herself".
"I'm sorry Gary, I don't feel bad for her, she is horrible".
"Have you forgiven me Melinda"?
"Yes, I know it was a setup, but it hurt Gary".
"It won't happen again, I promise". Melinda smiled as he touched her chin, bringing his lips to hers. He laid her back, and he kissed her passionately". She touched his chest, "Oh Gary slowdown"?
"I need you Melinda"?
Melinda stared at Gary, and she didn't know what to say?
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Post by melindajo2000 on Oct 1, 2010 18:07:30 GMT -6
im glad you updated this chapter I'm glad she forgave him. its not his fault his brother is a jerk. I cant wait to see what happens next!
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Post by Sanda on Oct 2, 2010 0:37:04 GMT -6
Great update Jessie. I am soo happy that Melinda forgave Gary. Please update soon.
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Post by jessie on Nov 30, 2010 0:26:34 GMT -6
Chapter 19
Melinda sat up, "Gary I can't , give me time please".
"Oh God forgive me Melinda, I just love you so much"
"I love you too, but please slowdown, I have never been with a man that way before".
"Melinda, I won't ever act this way again".
"What I said, I'm not ready yet, I didn't say ever". Gary smiled, he touched her cheek with his thumb. "You are so beautiful, Melinda".
"I can get use to you saying that Gary". He smiled, as they laid back just staring into each others eyes. She touched his lips with her thumb, bringing her lips to his. "Gary promise me we won't let JR, come between us ever".
"You kidding, your mine Melinda, I'm never letting you go".
"Is that a promise Gary"?
"Yes, I will marry you someday soon, put your right we have to go steady first".
"Steady I like that Gary". He sat up taking the chain off his neck, and took his football ring off putting it on the chain. He put in around her neck, and whispered, "Now it is official, your wearing my ring".
"Around my neck", Melinda giggled, "I will never take this off".
'Good because than everyone will know the prettiest girl in Dallas is taken".
"Who is the prettiest girl Gary"?
"You silly". They laid in each others arms, just laughing and talking about everyday stuff. She leaned on his chest, and smiled, "Your not angry that I want to wait are you Gary"?
"No, you are right, no rush, I want our first time to be perfect".
"Me too Gary, I promise you won't have to wait to long". Gary smiled, "I will wait forever for you Melinda".
"I'm going to hold you to that". It was getting late, Melinda said they should get going. They walked to the car, and got in and were driving back to the house. He walked Melinda to the door, and she turned kissing him so tenderly. He pulled the hair away from her forehead, and said he would see her tomorrow.
"Goodnight Gary, thanks for coming here tonight, to make amends". Gary kissed her again, and ran to the car and waved. Melinda watched his car drive away, and turned to go inside. She heard someone call her name, she turned she was shocked seeing JR.
"Wait listen to me Melinda"
"What JR, you are disgusting, you won't break up me and Gary, we love each other"?
"Really Melinda, you don't have any feeling for me really"?
"I have contempt for you JR, your not all that , I hate to break it to you".
"No that is Gary, I can offer you so much more".
"Yes, a life of heartache, no thanks, I love Gary, he is more of a man than you ever will be". Melinda ran inside, and slammed the door shut. JR walked to his car, Melinda words hurt him, more than he wanted to admit. He got in his car, and yelled, "have Gary Melinda, you both make me sick". He drove home angry, he hoped Gary wasn't around, he knew he would have it out with him, if he was.
Melinda went to her room, and sat on her bed. She hated JR, but maybe she said to much, she was pretty mean. She laid back, and thought no he deserved everything he got.
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Post by melindajo2000 on Nov 30, 2010 21:40:24 GMT -6
I hope Melinda means what she said to JR, he doesnt deserve Melinda. I like her with Gary and JR is only there trying to cause trouble. I'm glad you updated, thanks Jessie
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Post by jessie on Dec 20, 2010 23:29:49 GMT -6
Chapter 20
Gary got home, and called Melinda from his room. Melinda answered, "Hello".
"Hey Beautiful guess who it is"?
"Elvis".
"Elvis right, what are you doing"?
"Oh reading, you got home pretty fast".
"Yes, I think I went through a few red lights. I couldn't stop thinking about you , I can't wait to see you again".
'Well when will we see each other again"?
"How about tomorrow, would you like to go Christmas shopping with me"?
"Sure I would like that, maybe you can give me some hints about what you want"?
"Surprise me Melinda, can you come to my house Christmas eve"?
"Oh I don't know, my Parents might get upset".
"Please we have a big party here, I will get you home for midnight".
"You better or my Dad will be super angry, beside I can't be out when Santa is coming".
"You believe Sweetie"?
"No I'm kidding, ok I will come to your party. You know JR will be there too Gary".
"So we will ignore him".
"Yeah we can try, but he is annoying he will cause trouble". Gary smiled, "Your really angry at him Melinda"
"Yes, I am, I won't let him come between us Gary".
"Melinda I love you, I know someday you will be my wife".
"I hope so, see you tomorrow goodnight". Gary hung up, and laid back daydreaming about Melinda. He jumped when JR laughed, "Oh I know someday you will be my wife".
"Shut up JR, get out of my room now".
"You shut up, you made it with the little mouth piece didn't you"?
"No she is a lady she isn't ready".
"Oh man you tried she shot you down, like the loser you are".
"I'm not a loser, she wants to wait".
"Did she tell you I stopped by to see her tonight. She wants to wait, because her first time will be with me". JR went to walk away , Gary lost it running over to him knocking him to the ground.
"You liar you were not at her house"
"I was, she lied to you, what does that say"?. Gary felt tears come to his eyes, "She loves me JR, stop please".
"She doesn't love you, If she did she would have made love to you. You are so pathetic, every girl who dates you sees it, but they pity you. Melinda is probably laughing behind your back, you fool". JR walked to his room, and shut his door, he leaned against it, he smiled he knew he just hurt Gary, and he loved it. Gary was so angry, he walked downstairs, and into the living room. He grabbed a bottle and walked back to his room. He grabbed a glass from his washroom, he put the bottle on the bed stand. He picked up the phone, dialing Melinda.
"Hello".
"Melinda be honest, did JR come to see you after I left"?
"Oh Gary, I didn't want to tell you, I told him I love you". Gary hung up, and grabbed the bottle, and poured the glass full of vodka. He gulped it down, and whispered, "Gary you are a loser, just face it". Melinda was holding the phone, she was shocked Gary hung up on her. She dialed his number, and he picked up, "What do you want Melinda"?
"Gary talk to me"
"Goodbye, there is nothing to talk about". Gary hung up, and Melinda was devastated. She was crying she grabbed her jeans, and put them on. She put her sweater on, and grabbed her coat, and ran downstairs. Her parents were in bed, she knew she was going to get in trouble, but she had car lessons. She grabbed her Father's car keys, and left the house, hoping the Police didn't stop her because she didn't have her license.
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Post by melindajo2000 on Dec 21, 2010 5:22:37 GMT -6
Oh no I dont want trouble for anyone. what has JR done now? lol. I hope Gary doesnt start drinking and blow something good and let JR have a chance. great chapter
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Post by Sanda on Dec 21, 2010 23:59:45 GMT -6
Great updates Jessie. I hope that nothing bad happens to Gary or Melinda. I don't like JR at all in this story.
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Post by jessie on Dec 27, 2010 19:41:21 GMT -6
Chapter 20
Melinda got to Southfork, she ran up to the door knocking frantically. Miss Ellie answered, "What is wrong Melinda"?
"Please I need to see Gary please"
'He went to bed, everyone is in bed, I was just going up"
"Please Miss Ellie , I need to see Gary". JR walked into the kitchen, Melinda lost it she ran over pushing JR.
"Wow, what is wrong with you Honey"?
"You want to destroy Gary, I hate you, I love him. I made a mistake for a moment, thinking I had some kind of feeling for you. I realized fast, you are not what I want, I want someone deceit, caring, and that is Gary". Gary walked into the kitchen, "Melinda do you feel that way really"?
Melinda ran into his arms, he lifted her up, holding her tight. JR laughed, but Miss Ellie grabbed his arm. "Upstairs you, I will talk to you in the morning"
"Ma Ma".
"Move it, what did you do to cause this scene"?
"Nothing promise, she is crazy". Miss Ellie swatted his butt, and JR followed her upstairs. Melinda smiled, "You scared me Gary, you hung up on me why"?
"He said some horrible things, I believed him. I almost got drunk, but I didn't thank GOD".
"Why you know I love you, and I don't want him"? Gary moved close, "I realize that now, but I was a fool letting him get to me like that".
"Gary I took my parents car, they are going to kill me".
"We better get you home, but first let me do this". He pulled her close, kissing her so passionately. She giggled, "Oh can you do that one more time"? Gary whispered, "I sure can". He brought his lips to hers, and kissed her again. She wrapped her arms around him, and they smiled. They walked out, and Melinda got in her car, and Gary followed in his. They got to Melinda's house, he walked her to the door. She brought her lips to his, and whispered, "I love you Gary Ewing".
"I love you too, how about tomorrow, I take you out to dinner, and dancing."
"I would love that Gary, but JR won't show up will he"?
"Who knows with that goof, but I don't care if he does".
"I don't either, I only have eyes for you Gary".
"Melinda you will be the girl I marry, that is a promise". They both jump when the door opened, and Melinda's Dad was standing there.
"Melinda inside, we have to talk".
"Daddy please 1 minute, I will be right in".
"1 minute, I'm very angry right now". He shut the door, Melinda smiled, "I can handle him, he will yell , and it will be over".
"He knows you took his car, he might ground you".
"I'm going on that date tomorrow, nothing will keep me from you". Gary touched her lips, and kissed her again, and ran down the stairs, and waved. Melinda watched as he got in his car, and drove off. She opened the door , and smiled seeing her parents sitting on the couch waiting for her.
"Melinda what were you thinking taking my car without a license"?
"Daddy I'm sorry, but JR was going to ruin everything, I had to get to Gary".
"Go to bed , you ever do that again, your grounded for life". Melinda smiled, "That is all you have to say"?
"Yes, we like Gary, but never again do you hear"?
"Yes, Daddy, and Mom, I love you". She kissed them , than ran upstairs, and into her room. She laid on her bed, and all she could do was smile.
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Post by melindajo2000 on Dec 27, 2010 21:20:27 GMT -6
fantastic chapter, I am glad that Gary and Melinda made up and that they arent going to listen to JR any longer hopefully anyways. awesome job here Jessie!
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