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Post by jessie on May 27, 2010 13:20:36 GMT -6
Hi Melinda, glad you like the story, but how I'm writing JR, is how I would picture him. He had a thing about Gary, and I can see him going after his girls. You will have to wait and see what will happen, but who do you want her to end up with?
Chapter 7
JR ran ahead and Melinda ran to catch up to him. "JR Ewing, you promised , you would take me back anytime , I wanted"
" I don't remember that", JR laughs
"Take me home now, I'm getting mad"
"Melinda you are safe with me, I wont take advantage of you. There is a place , just around that corner, where we can sit and talk" JR grabbed her hands, and pulled her with him. She followed but she was so nervous, she thought she would be sick. She got to the spot, and he smiled, " sit we will talk ok"
She looked he pointed to a huge rock , " JR what kind of girls do you date"?
" Sweet girls like you".
"Yeah they are sweet, until you use them and throw them away"
" Who told you that Gary"?
" Yeah you slept with his girl, and just left her in the barn after"
" She wanted me, but she wasn't the one"
" That was cruel, how do you think she felt"?
" Great after being with me"
" Oh God take me home, you disgust me at the moment"
"I'm kidding", he lifted her up, sitting her on the rock. He moved close, and she put her hands up. " I like Gary, I was really stupid coming here today"
" You don't want me Melinda, really are you sure"?
" JR stop ok".
He moved close, and she leaned back he touched her leg. She pushed his hand back, and he laughed. " You want me so bad, it hurts, I can see it in your face"
" I want Gary, he is deceit, and kind and sweet"
" You don't want the bad boy, the lover, and the man who will make you feel so good"?
Melinda felt tears come to her eyes, JR was confusing her so much. He touched her chin, "your different than all the other girls, your special"
" She was shaking and she couldn't stop, her heart was racing. She stared into his eyes, as he brought his face closer. " I have wanted you from the moment, I saw you Melinda"
" No, lets go please"
He brought his lips to hers, but was willing her to make the first move. She wanted to feel his lips against hers, she was feeling stuff, she never felt before. She moved closer, and they kissed, as she shut her eyes. He kissed her hard and deep and she felt his body against hers, so close , touching , and she felt his hands lift her shirt, he was doing things, that made her body feel like it was on fire. He leaned her back, and she whispered " no JR, I can't".
"Melinda , I promise I won't hurt you".
She shut her eyes, as he continued kissing and his hands roamed up her skirt. She suddenly remembered Gary, and what she felt with him, and she screamed " no JR stop"
He moved away," what are you a child"?
She cried, " I'm not ready for this , and Gary"
"Gary, lets go, I'm so tired of wasting my time on you"
She jumped up, angry and hurt she ran ahead. He yelled " wait I'm sorry, I didn't mean that".
" Shut up , your awful and cruel. I never want you to touch me again"
" I will take you home, calm down"
" I will walk home, I don't want to go in your car"
" Melinda stop", JR grabbed her arm and shook her. " I brought you here , I will take you home".
" Don't touch me", she pulled away and ran. She was so angry with herself, she felt cheap, and she hated herself more than JR. She couldn't forget Gary, he was so sweet, and she ruined everything. JR yelled, " Stop running Melinda".
She turned, " I'm walking , I will be ok". She turned, but tripped, and fell, hitting her head off a rock. JR screamed, " no Melinda, "
He ran over, and she was unconscious, and he lifted her to wake her, and noticed all the blood. He couldn't breath, he screamed, " OMG why did you run"? He lifted her running her to the car, putting her in the backseat. He jumped into the car, and sped off driving to the hospital. He was yelling her name, but she didn't move. He started to cry, thinking she might die, how would he explain this? He got to the hospital, screaming for help. A couple of Doctor near by ran over, seeing Melinda, they all rushed her into the emergency.
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Post by melindajo2000 on May 27, 2010 16:31:41 GMT -6
Oh no, I hope Melinda is okay. JR is awful for pushing Melinda but she is confused, its easy to see why, who can resist JR? He's right, how is he golng to explain it but thats a little selfish. I hope she ends up with Gary. But she might make that impossible. I dont know if he can forgive her for messing aroun with his brother. Please update soon!
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Post by Sanda on May 27, 2010 20:39:51 GMT -6
Great update Jessie. I hope that Melinda is going to be Ok. JR is awful to make Melinda fall down. I hope that Melinda ends up with Gary. JR is awful for going after Gary's girl but could totally see him doing that on the show. Pleasee update soon.
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Post by jessie on May 28, 2010 22:02:52 GMT -6
Chapter 8
JR was pacing after they took Melinda into the exam room. He walked to the phone and called Southfork.
"Hello"
"Ma Ma"
"JR what is wrong"?
" I'm at the hospital"
" OMG what happened JR"?
" I"m ok, I was with a girl, she fell and hit her head off a rock"
" How did that happen"?
" Ma Ma can you come down, here"?
" I will get your Father,what about the girl's Parents"?
" I don't have their phone number, Gary might"
" Gary , how would he know"?
" It was Melinda, Gary girl Ma Ma"
" Melinda JR"
Gary ran down the stairs, "what happened to Melinda"?
" JR , we will be there stay calm", Miss Ellie hung up. Gary ran up to her, " what is wrong Ma Ma"?
" Melinda is hurt she is at Dallas Memorial, she fell and hit her head"
" I left her at home , Ma Ma"
"Gary Sweetie , she was with JR"
"JR no Ma Ma, I left her at home"
" We have to call her parents Gary, what is her number"?
" OMG not again"
" Gary what is her number, call it and see if her parents are at home". He dialed the number, and handed the phone to Miss Ellie. She explained everything to the Mother, who said she was going to the hospital now . Miss Ellie hung up, and turned, and was shocked Gary was gone. She ran and got Jock, and they drove to the hospital.
Gary walked into the hospital, and went to the emergency area. He saw JR, he walked over punching him, without asking him anything. JR got up, " what is your problem Gary"?
" What happened JR, you had to have my Girl"?
" Shut up Gary, she is in trouble, we will talk about it later"
" No now, why JR, your my brother for GOD sake"?
" We didn't do anything but kiss"
" You pig, she was my girl, I really liked her"
" Chill out Gary, she wants you not me"
" What do you mean"?
" She freaked out after the kiss, and was talking about you. She ran and fell, trying to get away from me"
" Did you force yourself on her"?
" You kidding, I don't force myself on anyone, she wanted me but freaked out".
" I hate you JR, I will never forgive you "
Miss Ellie, Jock and Bobby run in, and see JR and Gary yelling at each other.
Jock grabbed Gary, " stop Gary, what is wrong with you"?
" Daddy he went after my girl, ask him"
" JR wouldn't do that Gary"
" OMG, he did she was with him, when she fell"
"She must like your brother Gary, or she wouldn't be with him"
" I hate this family, JR is GOD to you isn't he"?
" No, I'm just saying that, he is your brother, "
" No he isn't , I will hate him until the day I die"
Jock grabbed Gary, and pulled him down the hall, and outside. Miss Ellie stared at JR, " You really had to do it again to him. Your Daddy takes your side all the time, but not me. I'm so disgusted, with you , for hurting him again. You have a sickness, you have to hurt people, of all the girls in Dallas, you had to take his girl"?
" She wants Gary Ma Ma"
" Oh she rejected you, good, but you probably destroyed their relationship now"
" Gary is such a baby, he has to have everything perfect"
" He was falling for this one, I talked to him last night, he really liked her JR"
" I'm sorry Ma Ma, ok"?
"No it is not ok, you better hope that girl is ok"
" She has to be"
" What happened , why did she fall"?
" She was mad at me, and just fell"
Miss Ellie shook her head, and Bobby walked over staring at JR.
"What loser"?
Bobby punched him, yelling, that is for Gary, and Melinda". Bobby walked to his Mom, and they went and sat down, waiting for news.
Jock threw Gary on a bench, and yelled " shut up and listen"
Gary sat but he was so angry, and he wanted to run, and never look back.
" I understand your angry, but hating everyone doesn't make it better"
Gary wouldn't answer he looked away from Jock
" Do you love this girl"?
" Yeah I did Dad"
" Well think about her not your hatred of your Brother"
" Why did she go with him, what is wrong with me"?
Jock looked at Gary, and he felt bad, " nothing Gary "
" Why did she have to go with him, " I was falling for her"?
"JR probably had her head all mixed up, you know your brother"
" They kissed Daddy"
" I know you have to make the decision, if you can forgive that"?
" I don't know if I can"?
" She made a mistake, she deserves a chance to defend herself"
" I'm afraid to hear what she will say"?
" Gary stop running away, face your problems and fight for her if you truly care for her".
" I will never forgive JR Daddy".
"Ok , lets go in, and see if Melinda is OK, that is what is important right now".
" Yeah, thank you Daddy"
" Come on son, and remember, I love you all the same"
Gary got up, and they went inside.
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Post by Sanda on May 28, 2010 22:12:57 GMT -6
Great update Jessie. I hope that Melinda is going to be ok.
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Post by melindajo2000 on May 28, 2010 22:33:47 GMT -6
You really captured Jock well, I could really see him taking JR's side in this. At least Miss Ellie was sympathetic to Gary and stood up to JR. Someone needed to. I loved it when both Gary and Bobby punched JR. wonderful chapter
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Post by jessie on Jun 3, 2010 21:53:41 GMT -6
Chapter 9
Gary sat waiting for news, when Melinda's Parents run in. Ellie goes over, and tells them the doctor hasn't come out yet. "What happened, how did she get hurt"?
" She fell , and banged her head on a rock"
"Where"?
" I don't know, my son JR was with her"
" JR, I thought she was with Gary"?
JR walked over, " We were talking she got mad , ran and fell."
Melinda's parents stare at JR, but turn when the doctor comes out.
" Are you Melinda's Parents"?
"We are , how is my daughter"?
" She is awake, but sore, and she has a concussion. We want to keep her overnight"
" Can we see her"?
" Yes, come with me"
Gary jumps up, " can I see her after you see her"?
Melinda's Mom, smiled, " sure we will come and get you". They follow, the doctor to her room. Gary stares at JR, " your not seeing her , so leave"
" No, I'm staying"
Jock yells " Stop it both of you, JR go home"
" Daddy, I want to see her"
" Not right now, go, she is Gary's girl"
JR grabbed his coat, walking out without saying goodbye.
" Thank You Daddy", Gary says
" I don't want fighting here, in front of her parents."
Melinda's parents walk back, " you can go see her Gary, but not for long, she is tired".
" I understand," Gary walked into the room, and she started to cry. Gary walked over, " Melinda I'm not here to fight with you. I want you to get better, and then you can tell me why you were with JR"?
" I'm sorry, Gary, he asked me out to talk. We kissed, I'm not going to lie to you, but I regretted it, because I love you"
" Why than, he's not all that"?
" He is a smoother talker Gary, I was so confused"
" Shh you rest, we will talk more, but I can't take you seeing him behind my back".
" Where is he, I don't want to see him right now"?
" My Daddy sent him, home, did he hurt you"?
" He is so full of himself, I got mad, and fell. He didn't hurt me, it was a accident".
" Melinda do you have feelings for JR"?
" He knows how to play women Gary , but you are really special. I hope being with JR, won't end what we had"?
Gary smiles, " you really mean it, that you want to be with me not JR"?
" I want you , if you will have me"?
Gary leaned down, kissing her lips softly, "you rest"
" Will you be here when , I wake up"?
" Yes, I will be outside waiting,", he walked to the door. She whispered, " Gary, you really are sweet, and I'm so sorry".
Gary smiled, and walked out the door, Melinda cried herself to sleep. She was awoken to a hand on her shoulder. She opened her eyes, " Gary".
JR leaned down, " No it is JR"
Melinda stares, " Go away, your going to ruin everything for me and Gary"
" Are you ok Melinda, you scared me "?
" You should have taken me home, when I first asked"
" You really didn't like the kiss Melinda"?
" Stop ," She was crying, she knew if she said she didn't she was lying. JR made her feel things that she knew was wrong. She desired him, but she adored Gary. She wasn't going to lose everything with Gary, to have passion only with JR. She looked at JR, "go away JR, I'm never going to hurt Gary again"
" Melinda, I don't want to use you, I really like you".
" You want to get me in bed, and than walk away, and laugh in Gary's face".
" No, don't act like you know me"
They both turn seeing Gary walk in. He stands staring, " what is going on with you two"?
Melinda sits up, " I told him, I want you not him, he is leaving"
Gary stares at JR, " you heard the lady, leave now"
JR walks to the door, " She will be calling me, once she see's what a boring person , you actually are Gary".
Gary lost it, grabbing JR, and punching him. Melinda screamed, " Stop Gary , he is your Brother".
" In name only, I will never forgive you JR"
JR got up , " Good why don't you leave town, and never look back"
" Why don't you, JR"?
JR walked to the door, " Have fun Melinda, but if you want to be treated like a real lady, call a man, you have my number." He smiled at Gary, and walked out. Gary was livid, he wanted to run out punching him in the face.
"Gary please calm down, he is trying to get you mad"
" Why does he think you will go back"?
" I won't who cares what he thinks"?
"Don't play a game Melinda, I can't take it. If you want me say it now, but if you have any feelings for JR, let me walk away."
Melinda stares at Gary, with tears in her eyes, as he waited for her answer.
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Post by melindajo2000 on Jun 3, 2010 22:07:35 GMT -6
I loved the update, Gary was right to go after JR, he is so full of himself. I can just see him doing this to his own brother. Good thing Melinda's okay. wonderful writing
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Post by Sanda on Jun 3, 2010 23:19:22 GMT -6
Great update Jessie. Gary was soo right to go after JR. I can just see JR going after Gary's woman. I am glad that Melinda is ok. Please update soon. '
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Post by jessie on Jun 15, 2010 20:30:07 GMT -6
This chapter is dedicated to my beloved cat Callie , who passed away awhile back. Read the story, and you will see why I dedicated it to her. Hope you like this chapter, Melinda.
Chapter 10
Melinda looked into Gary's eyes, she could see the fear in his eyes. He truly thought she would choose JR. She smiled reaching out his hands. He walked over holding her hand, she smiled, " I only want you Gary, you don't listen to your Brother your far from being boring"
Gary had the biggest smile, across his face, she couldn't help but laugh. He leaned down to her face, he brought his lips to hers. He touched her chin, "you won't regret you chose me over JR"
"Never Gary, kiss me again", she smiled,
He brought his lips to her mouth, this time they kissed and they both were breathless. Gary started singing, " She loves me, she really loves me", she couldn't stop laughing. He put up his hands, and yelled " I will be right back, don't go to sleep". He ran down the hall to the gift shop. He saw something he liked, when he went in earlier to get some gum. He saw it, and he smiled, he paid and ran out of the store back to the room. He walked in, holding his hands behind his back. Melinda smiled, " What do you have behind there Gary"?
He pulled out the cutest little stuffed kitten , it was calico, and she had a tee shirt on, saying " I have only eyes for you". She started crying she hugged it, "this is the sweetest gift anyone ever gave me"
" I know it isn't but I loved it, because it is true"
What should we call her, how about Callie"?
Gary smiles, " Great name for a Calico Kitty, one day maybe, I will buy you a real little Callie"
" I would love that Gary, you truly are the sweetest boy , I ever met".
" Sweetest, oh Man, I'm not the hottest guy you ever met"
" Hot you don't flex your muscles, or strut around"
Gary started to flex his muscles, Melinda was laughing. He started strutting across the floor, he was being silly. He undid his shirt showing her his chest. She smiled, " Oh man that is hot, just the shirt Gary don't remove anything else ".
"Oh am I hot now Melinda"? He swung his shirt around, and he jumped when her parents walked in, Gary smiled, " OMG", he ran out of the room. Melinda's Mom and Dad looked at Melinda, she was laughing, they smiled, and shut the door.
"Melinda, what was he doing in here"?
" He was just showing off Daddy, Oh he is so sweet"
Her Parents smile, " Why were you with his Brother at some make out area"?
"We didn't do anything, we just kissed"
" Kissed why, if you like Gary"?
"It won't happen again Mom, Gary is the one for me"
Her Father walked over, touching her chin, "Baby don't fall for this guy so fast".
" I just like him Daddy, you will like him too".
Her Mom laughs, " I don't think he wants to see us again. She smiled, " he is hot Melinda, I want that shirt on him at all times"
" Mom, stop it, but you think he is hot"?
" Both of you stop, this isn't proper, besides Beth, your being bad".
" Oh, I'm joking", she winked at Melinda.
Gary knocked and walked back in, " I'm sorry for acting stupid, in front of your daughter"
" That is ok Gary, but from now on the shirt should remain on ok"
"Yes Mame, I will leave you guys alone, I just wanted to say sorry about what you saw"?
" You can talk to Melinda, me and Thomas, are going down for a coffee". They smiled at Melinda, "be back soon, be good"
" I'm always good Ma Ma".
" Oh you are not", she smiled and left the room
Gary walked over, " I'm so sorry did your parents get angry"?
" No my Mom thinks your hot"
" No way, she said that"?
" Gary, thank you for Callie, and forgiving me for kissing JR"
" Lets make a pact, we never mention JR again"
"Deal, she smiled, he leaned down, "who is the better kisser"?
"I thought we were not going to mention JR again"?
" Just this last time, "Who Melinda"?
" You Gary, so just kiss me and stop talking". He leaned down , kissing her passionately, he never felt so happy , to be with anyone, like he was with Melinda. He really felt Melinda made her choice, of who she wanted. He just knew JR wouldn't give up all that easily.
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Post by Sanda on Jun 15, 2010 20:38:44 GMT -6
Great update Jessie. That is sooo sweet that you dedicated this chapter to your cat Callie. Please update soon.
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Post by melindajo2000 on Jun 15, 2010 21:08:19 GMT -6
this was a great chapter, that was sweet dedicating it to your cat Callie. Gary was so silly. I'm glad you updated this story, thanks
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Post by jessie on Jun 24, 2010 21:04:45 GMT -6
Chapter 11
The next Day Melinda was being released, her Parents allowed Gary to drive her home. They came and signed her out, and got her settled in Gary's car. He promised he would bring her home, right away. The Parents left, and Gary sat beside Melinda," are you ready Melinda"?
"Yes Gary", she smiled, but tears came to her eyes. She didn't let him see, but she was falling in love with Gary. He was so sweet, and she almost blew it. She smiled, as he was talking away, and all she could see was that beautiful smile. He laughed, " Melinda are you even listening to me"?
"Yes, of course"
" What did I say than"?
" I'm sorry, I was just thinking how amazing you are".
" Amazing that is pretty cool, is that because of Callie"? Melinda was holding her present, " yes, she is a treasure, so sweet". Melinda started to cry, Gary pulled over , leaning over , "are you ok"?
"Gary I'm so sorry about JR, I don't know why I went with him that day"?
" Hey JR is a tool, he probably tricked you".
" I have to be honest, I thought he was handsome, he really confused me".
" What are you saying, you have feelings for JR"?
" I thought , I did but he showed me what he was. I only have eyes for you now, I just needed to be honest".
" Your Parents are probably waiting, but I think we have time for this". He leaned over , bringing his lips to hers, kissing her so sweetly. He used his thumb to wipe the tears from her eyes, "thank you for being honest with me Melinda".
" Your not mad Gary, I will hate to lose you because of him".
" You won't lose me, I'm yours if you really want me".
" I do Gary, you really are the sweetest person, I ever met"
Gary smiled, " lets get you home, and we can talk more later".
They drove to her house, he helped her out of the car. Melinda smiled, as Gary insisted on carrying her to her room. He laid her down, touching her face, " I didn't hurt you did I"?
" No, I probably hurt your back".
" You never", he sat down," I'm sure your Parents will kick me out of here soon".
"Stay" , she held his hand to him, and he put his hand in hers. She smiled, as he looked around her room, lovely girl room".
" I guess, I'm a girl Gary".
He got up looking at pictures of her on the wall. He smiled, "oh you were adorable in these, but you sure are beautiful now".
" Gary , come her sit down, I want to say something to you".
Gary walked over sitting down , he held her hands.
" I know your brother has hurt you in your life. I just want you to know, your more of man than he ever will be. You treat your lady with respect, and so much class. He treats women like property, and yes he gets his women, but you capture their hearts, he just has some meaningless sex. "
" OMG you really don't think much of JR"
" No, I don't he really showed his true self the other day. He didn't cause me to fall , but I know in my heart, he would have used me and walked away"
"Thank you Melinda, I needed that, and I'm so happy you choose me over JR".
" You are better looking too, by far".
Gary got up flexing his muscles, when Melinda giggles. Her Mother walked in staring, " again Gary, are you conceited or what"?
" No Mame, I'm just playing".
" Well you really are handsome, don't try so hard"
"Thank You Mame, I should let Melinda rest, but can I come back later"?
" Would you like to come back for supper at 6 pm"?
" Yes, I would love it, thank you". He ran over kissing Melinda, on the cheek, he smiled kissing her Mother on the cheek too. He waved, and ran out of the room. Melinda was smiling, she looked at her Mother," Oh Mom, I think I'm falling in love".
" I can see that Melinda, but you take it easy ok".
" I will Mom, thank you".
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Post by Sanda on Jun 24, 2010 22:03:34 GMT -6
Great update Jessie. I LOVE it that Gary kissed Melinda's mother on cheek. Please update soon.
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Post by melindajo2000 on Jun 24, 2010 22:50:30 GMT -6
This was a wonderful chapter, at least she was being honest with him and he handled the truth well. Maybe they can start all over again as long as JR stays out of it lol which I doubt. but I like those two together so far. Thanks for writing this today.
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