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Post by melindajo2000 on Mar 15, 2011 14:51:21 GMT -6
This takes place in Goodbye Farewell and Amen, the final episode
Chapter 1
Saying goodbye to everyone would be hard enough…Margaret Houlihan realized that the moment she had heard the long awaited words: "This is the sound of peace." It had only been a few days since Hawkeye had been released from the hospital. Now everyone was preparing to leave for home, anxious to rebuild their lives. Margaret wasn't quite sure what to expect once she left the 4077. After much deliberation she'd finally decided to accept a position as charge nurse at Dallas Memorial Hospital. It wasn't what her father wanted her to do, but her mind was made up. But as happy as she was to have settled her career, there was one piece of her life puzzle that was left to be resolved. And that piece was standing less than a foot in front of her, a dark haired surgeon by the name of Benjamin Franklin Pierce.
"Pierce…You up for some company?"
Margaret ran up to her colleague as he walked alone. It was a welcome change of company. She'd been quarreling with Charles a lot lately. Prideful and arrogant, Charles had made it clear to her in no uncertain terms that he did not appreciate her help in landing his new hospital job. All she'd wanted to do was to see that his skill and intelligence be recognized; certainly she realized that his aptitude would speak for itself once hired. Why Charles couldn't get past his male ego and recognize this was beyond her.
At any rate she hadn't had much of a chance to speak with Hawkeye since his release, and she wanted to be certain that he was okay. Margaret had recognized the sign of fear and uncertainty in his eyes when he returned back to work from many a new staff member; she'd just never thought she'd live to see the day to see Hawkeye Pierce lack confidence. Her heart ached for him, though she dared not tell him so.
"Sure." He grinned his boyish smile at her. Everything had happened so fast after his release from the hospital; it would be nice to have a few last minutes with someone who had come to mean so much to him. "Hope you can keep up the pace."
"Can't believe tomorrow we're leaving. I thought we'd never go home!" she stopped when she saw how he flinched at the word home.
" He was going to tell you goodbye, Hawkeye." She said, referring to his best friend in the world who had left. B.J. had left in such a hurry that he hadn't had time to even write Hawkeye a good-bye note. Hawkeye had still been in the hospital and hadn't been informed of B.J.'s discharge.
"I'm sure he was. Just like Trapper was." Hawkeye said. "They were all going to say goodbye. But they couldn't and they didn't. But it doesn't matter now. I'm going home. You're going home. We're all going home. And that's the end of it."
But Margaret knew Hawkeye well enough to know his sarcasm masked deep feelings of hurt. She felt for him and everything he'd been through recently. First he had a nervous breakdown (as if that wasn't bad enough) but then his best friend left without getting the chance to say goodbye. It was breaking her heart to see her friend like this. She held out her hand as if she were going to touch his arm and tried twice to do so.
"You don't understand. He wanted to tell you that he was leaving. He went over to see you when you were…well, he said he tried to tell you. He just couldn't find the right words."
"Hey buddy, I got my orders, I'm leaving would have sufficed. Time to go home now. See ya! I'll write. Nice knowing you. Any of those would have done the trick. Margaret…" his voice cracked with emotion. "He didn't even try."
Margaret stopped in her tracks and touched his arm. "You're not listening to me. He did try to tell you. I don't know how to put this. B.J. was just worried about you- we all were. We all lo- were so worried about you…" she looked away, as if she blurted out something she shouldn't have said. She wasn't one to wear her heart on her sleeves, for sure, but the end of the war had stirred up her emotions. It was the end of an era. And she was standing here saying goodbye to someone she wasn't so sure she was ready to leave.
"He went to see you in the hospital. B.J. was going to tell you then that he was leaving. But he just couldn't find the right words. It's not his fault, and it's not your fault. If you're going to be angry then blame this …"
"I know. You don't have to say it. Blame the war. I know. I've been doing that a lot lately, you could say." He stared off into the sun.
Ever since that day in the O.R. when he accused the nurse of trying to smother a patient, everyone had been worried sick about Hawkeye. Margaret herself had been worrying about him, but for much different reasons than everyone one else. She herself had found herself reevaluating her feelings towards him. Once the thorn in her side, he had clearly become so much more to her. He had always been the clown, the cutup, the tower of strength for those around him. The more she thought of him, the more she found herself thinking of their one night of passion. Soon she began to daydream about kissing him, wondering what it would be like to hold him in her arms. At first she just chalked it up to simply girl fantasy, perhaps a sign of pent-up exhaustion. But with all of the other emotions-worry, compassion, caring…Margaret was starting to see way too many signs to doubt the direction her feelings were leading her. What she was going to do next, however, was a mystery. Could she even talk to Hawkeye, even if she wanted to, in his condition? Oh, this wasn't going to be easy. But there was no time for worrying about these things. Margaret's mind was made up. She just had to talk to the captain.
Margaret spoke up about B.J. "Well he didn't know he was leaving until the last minute. Everything was so sudden. He wanted to tell you. Please don't be angry."
"I'm not."
"So…do you have any plans for when you get back?"
"Not really. Just going to take it easy for a little bit. Not so anxious to test out the old nerve machine if you know what I mean." He sighed.
"I'm sorry. I didn't mean to.."
"You didn't do anything." He stared off into the sun. She wondered what he was thinking.
"Anyways…we're at my place. Wanna come in for a drink? Me, you, an open bar…." He grinned as he opened the door. "no time like the present."
"Why you…I'd rather be caught in the pouring down rain than to be caught dead walking into your tent!" she cried indignantly.
"Aha..you just don't want to be caught. If that's the case I can always have Charles play doorman. Whattya say?"
"Oh…I don't know why I even bother with you! I try to be civil with you and you go back to being a despicable uncivilized primate ingrate. "
Margaret stormed off. She knew that she'd overreacted but she couldn't help herself. After all who would Hawkeye Pierce be without some come-on disguised as a compliment? Maybe that was a good sign that he was feeling more like himself. Who knows? She could reason it all she wanted to, but this was no time for logic. She had less than 24 hours to decide whether or not to take a chance and fight for a man who she wasn't sure was capable of giving her what she deserved. Hawkeye was standing there making jokes at her expense when she was ready to finally face her feelings. How dare he! Well if that's the game he wanted to play, let him. Maybe love was just a game to him anyways, and she sure didn't want to be on the losing end of it.
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Post by Sanda on Mar 15, 2011 15:22:33 GMT -6
Great start to your new story MelindaJo. I LOVED the sitcom M*A*S*H.
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Post by jessie on Mar 15, 2011 18:51:16 GMT -6
Great start to your new story, I love when you write about Hawkeye, and Margaret. Hope to see a update soon. Jessie
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Post by melindajo2000 on Mar 19, 2011 15:26:09 GMT -6
Chapter 2
Finally Margaret made it back to her own tent, in which she proceded to scream. That man had angered her so! Only Benjamin Franklin Pierce could take a perfect moment and distort it into something dirty and haughty. If he had only a clue of the depth of the feelings that she was about to reveal to him, than perhaps he wouldn't have made those awful childish jokes. He wouldn't have invited her into his tent. Rather, she could have had the opportunity to invite him to her own tent. The rules would be different on her turf. Here she could call the shots and know who would be coming and going. Here she knew every object, every article, every fixture-they all belonged to her. She owned them, much as she owned the feelings that she was finally willing to share with a Captain Pierce. In here, perhaps, she could control how much he could have. He couldn't take more than she was willing to give him. She would watch and see just how much he wanted, if he wanted any at all. But it would all be done in the safety of her own environment. Ah yes, safety….you must have a safety plan in place when it comes to dealing with the matters of the heart. Practical, if not altogether romantic. But practicality is good. Romance is fine if you like uncertainty and suspense. But romance can never fix a flat tire. It's best to be practical. Her dad had drilled that in her from the time she was an infant. And what her father hadn't taught her, the army instilled in her. Somewhere along the way Margaret had learned to use both sets of skills. Maybe this time she could get it right.
It's not as if she hadn't tried her practical romantic skills before. There was Frank Burns. For practical purposes, they made the perfect couple. He adored her. They both adored the army. They both shared the same aspirations for their careers. But romance had a say in when Margaret realized that she wanted something more than just a married man making empty promises to her. So Frank had to go. Hello, Donald. Donald was military- a practical choice. He was the kind of man that her father would be proud to call son-in-law. And oh the romance- Margaret adored him! She would ask how high to his every "jump". But really, Margaret, was it so practical for Donald to continue to see other woman even after you were married? He was just not good enough for her. The practicality overruled the romance, and once again Margaret suffered for it.
Now this time…. Practicality would suggest that Margaret stay away from Hawkeye. They're too different from each other. They might argue; Lord knows they've had their share of fights in the past. She likes structure; he's anything but. He loves to look at the ladies. She needs a man to give her constant attention. But he's the one who goes to any length to make sure people are giving him attention! Sure, she knows she's too loud. But isn't he too loud when he goes around singing and making constant jokes?
Most people would say that these are reasons for a couple to not be together. In fact, these are the same reasons that Hawkeye and Margaret themselves decided against a relationship. But that was then….before she realized how much she loved him. Before she realized how much she stood to lose by letting him go without telling him she loves him. She's lost men that she thought loved her. Once they were gone she didn't put up a fight….they weren't worth fighting over. But this one is different than any man she's ever met. She's decided it's time to go against her inner instincts and stand up and fight for what she believes in. And what she believes in is Hawkeye Pierce.
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Post by jessie on Mar 19, 2011 17:06:44 GMT -6
Wonderful update I love your M.A.S.H stories Melinda. I love how you write Margaret, she was one of my favourite characters. I love your story, thanks for sharing it with us.
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Post by melindajo2000 on Mar 27, 2011 20:18:08 GMT -6
Chapter 3
In the course of 24 hours, Margaret had managed to alienate herself from her two closest friends at the 4077, Charles Winchester and Hawkeye Pierce. Margaret closed her eyes and thought of the recent events. She was angered by both men's stubbornness, although she couldn't see the reflection of her own behavior. After packing, she had given in to her migraine and slept it off. After an hour, she woke up, still hurt, still seething over the hurt both men had caused her.
What started over a retrieved book turned into a battle over words with Charles. His wounded pride instilled a need for him to inflict pain upon Margaret. And she reacted in the only way she knew how. She rehashed the past with an old argument over his lack of sterility in the operating room. Of course she was right, and she had to bring it up. Anyhow that had led to a heated argument which was quite draining if truth be told. But she wasn't going to let their friendship end this way. It was time to call a truce with both men, starting with Charles. Hopefully he wasn't in the tent, as she wasn't ready to deal with Hawkeye quite yet. After brushing her hair, she made her way out the door.
She walked over to the mess tent, where he was still conducting the musicians.
"Charles, may I speak with you for a minute?" she walked up to him.
He shrugged his shoulder out of annoyance. "Back again? Haven't you had enough? I certainly have!"
"I don't want to fight. Please," she pushed his hand down gently. "I only want to talk. It's important to me. I don't know if we'll have another chance."
"For the record, I did not touch my nose. I am always the model of sterility."
"You did touch your nose! I saw you!"
"How dare you question my judgement? I.."
"You did, you did, you did."
"Why on earth would I do such a thing?"
"Because you have a nasal obsession. You are possessed. You cannot help yourself. You simply cannot resist touching your nose. You.."
"Margaret, if you came here to rehash this argument you are wasting your, and my time. I must ask you to leave. I am a very busy man. I have better things to do than defend myself against baseless accusations."
The female major sighed in frustration. "Look, Charles. I didn't come here to argue. Au contraire, I..I just wanted to let you know that I feel bad about what happened earlier."
"By continuing the argument? I must say you have a strange way of apologizing."
"I am not apologizing! I have done nothing to apologize for. I helped you because I thought you deserved that job. You're a fine surgeon and it's not fair that you were overlooked for reasons that had nothing to do with your skills. So what if I placed a telegram? What's the big deal? I'd think you'd be a bit more grateful. I didn't land you the job. You did. All I did was lend a hand. A little less attitude and a lot more gratitude would go a long ways. I don't see where it would kill you to be a little bit …just a little bit…thankful for those who show you a little bit of kindness. If I've learned anything in this place it's that no man is an island. Say what you want but there's something to be said about being part of a team."
He looked at her, and for a minute she thought that she'd gotten through to him.
"Are you quite finished, Major?"
"Aggh. You are impossible!" she shrieked.
"Likewise. Now if you'll excuse me, I have business to attend to."
"Blow your business out your wazoo!"
With that, she stormed off into the unusually warm day.
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Once again, she managed to twist a conversation into a fight.
This isn't my fault. Charles is just too hard-headed. I give up. He can keep his book and his job for all I care. I've got bigger problems to deal with.
That bigger problem was Hawkeye Pierce. For a long time she had put off dealing with her feelings, but now there was no way she could avoid them. Loving him was more difficult than she would have liked it to have been.
Love? Is this what it is? I know that I care for him…but do I love him? That sounds so strange...how could any woman in her right mind allow herself to fall in love with Hawkeye Pierce? After all, he's a man on the go, a confirmed bachelor, happy to come and go as he pleases. I've tried this before and look where it got me. He made it perfectly clear he didn't want what I wanted. I wanted safety and the comfort of a man who wanted me for who I am. I don't want to be jerked around and I don't want empty promises. I've been through that before.
Most of all Margaret wanted to be true to herself. The heart wants what it wants, and in this case it wants a dark haired surgeon from Crabapple Cove. If she could survive the war, certainly she could handle a conversation with the man she longed to be with. The hard part would be the initiation. How would she begin? What would she say? Was there ever a right way to tell a friend that you've fallen in love with them? There was only one way to find out. Margaret had to face her fears.
She wasn't normally gun shy when it came to men. When it came down to it she wasn't afraid to put her heart on the line for the man she loved.
Lord knows I've given them everything I've had. Look at Frank. I gave him everything. Everything. I put my reputation on the line for that man. I did everything in my power to make it work. I would have waited forever for him if only he had given me the least little bit in return. But he took, like a thief who thought he'd never be caught. He took all I had to offer but gave nothing in return. And I was okay with that. And that was on me. Did I really stop and think about what that relationship was doing to me? Did I ever stop and think about how I was selling myself out, and for what…an hour of fun every now and then? A picnic that could only be held in secret, like some sort of backalley game, was nice…like a desert…but I deserved the main meal. And Frank could never be the main meal. I was okay sneaking around and playing games. I was okay knowing that everytime he made a phone call it was to his wife. I was okay watching him eagerly wait for his mail each week. And the sad part was that I really wasn't okay with it. I had convinced myself that I was. I'd become someone else for Frank. I swear I will never do that again. Oh did I watch him take those calls and read those letters. And not even ten minutes later it would be 'Oh Margaret Can I see you tonight? I want you, I need you, I can't live without you.' I watched him tell his wife how much he loved her and a half hour later I would kiss him. What kind of woman had I become? If I saw that woman on the street today I wouldn't recognize her. I changed for a man and I don't want to do it again.
That's what scares me about Hawkeye. We talked about this before. He accused me of wanting to change him. But I don't want him to change me. He said that I'm vain. So I like to be told that I'm pretty….big stinking deal! He should have known that at that time I needed to hear it, especially after Donald had just called me 'sturdy'! So Hawkeye was wrong there. He doesn't know me well enough to know what I like and what I need. But I do. And maybe he's right. Maybe I am a bit vain. Maybe I do like to be told I'm pretty after all…that's not a crime. I will not…I refuse..to apologize for that! Maybe a long time ago I would have denied that that was important to me. But not anymore. If I talk to Hawkeye and this subject comes about then he needs to know that this is important to me. Like it or leave it. But I will not apologize for being me.
Hawkeye did say that he thought we were too different to make this work. I don't agree. I wonder if he feels the same way? Back then I was tired and confused. I had just found out that Donald was carrying on with another woman. I was in no way ready to fight for what I wanted. After what happened between Hawk and myself I knew what I wanted…I can't lie! I could see how wonderful we could be together. I felt the magic and it wasn't my imagination. He felt it too and I know he did. But the timing wasn't right. But is the timing right now? After tomorrow I may never see him again for as long as I live. This is my chance and I have to take it. I'm not Darlene. Darlene and Hawkeye would never have worked out but Margaret and Hawk just might. And there's only one way to find out.
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Post by jessie on Mar 27, 2011 20:27:46 GMT -6
Awesome chapter Melinda, I loved it, great writing. I love how you write Margaret in your stories.. I can't wait to see what will happen next? Update soon. Jessie
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Post by jennifer1983 on Mar 28, 2011 0:10:58 GMT -6
Great update Jessie.
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Post by Sanda on Mar 28, 2011 8:54:07 GMT -6
Great updates MelindaJo.
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Post by melindajo2000 on Mar 30, 2011 9:11:56 GMT -6
Chapter 4
There is no way to prepare for a conversation like this. Confronting one's feelings is difficult enough without adding on the complication of bringing another party into them. Admitting you care is not a step to be taken without absolute certainty, and Margaret had certainly been giving the subject much consideration. 'I love you' is not a panacea to one's realization but rather the beginning, the opening to a floodgate. It is a simple statement of honesty, genuflection, and truth.
Margaret Houlihan sat on the edge of her cold, indifferent cot, the one she'd come to know so well during the course of her life in the war. The cool air hit her face, forcing her to stay in the moment. Her hands were shaking, and not due to the temperature. She licked her dry lips out of habit, not due to their dryness. She ran her fingers through her long platinum hair, separating the strands between her fingers. A deep, soft sigh escaped her lips. She closed her eyes and ran her hand over the dress that lay across her lap, a pale blue chiffon number she'd borrowed from Klinger. On the other side of the bed lay a crimson knee length gown, depending on the effect she was going for. She would certainly get Hawkeye's attention with the crimson dress. But the blue dress was softer, more feminine. He would be forced to pay attention to her in that light, and that was the exact effect she was going for. But the crimson dress would give her the confidence to say what she needed to say. Oh…this wasn't going to be easy. If there was only someone she could trust and get their opinion…..maybe there was one person!
She sat the dresses on the bed and, after taking a few deep breaths, she walked over to the clerk's office.
"Klinger! Thank goodness you're in here. I need your help. Right now." She bellowed. "Are you busy? No…" she didn't wait for a response. "Come with me."
Klinger sighed and got up to follow Margaret. He knew better than to protest.
"I'll be right back, Soon-Li." He promised his fiancée. "I promise."
"Major," he asked as they walked outside. "I don't mean to be disrespectful but I'm trying to make some phone calls. We're looking for Soon-Li's family."
"And you'll make your calls. I just need your expert opinion. I'm going to try on two dresses and I need your opinion." She said as they arrived to her tent. "Wait outside."
After a minute she stepped outside in her crimson gown, and she piled her hair in a very loose bun. She walked out.
"Major!" Klinger did a double take. "Wow, Major! You look terrific! That dress looks just aces on you! I don't know where you're going in that but you'll be the queen of the ball for sure. The men will be eating out of the palm of your hands for sure."
"You really think so?" Margaret smiled in spite of herself.
:"Think so, I know so! Look at you….you look radiant. Don't demote me for saying so, Major. You did ask for my opinion."
Margaret laughed. "That I did. Now give me a few minutes. I have one more dress to try on. Stay right there."
"Going nowhere." Klinger mumbled as the Major shut the door to her tent.
Once she walked out in her blue dress, she was greeted with a smile. "Now that's nice."
"Nice?" she huffed. "Nice!" she walked over and stood nose to nose with the company clerk.
"That's the best you can say is that I look nice?" her voice had now officially raised an octave.
"Yes, you look nice! What's wrong with that! You look pretty. I don't see what's so bad with that." The exasperated Lebanese clerk cried out in frustration. "You do look nice."
"I don't want to look nice! " Her voice continued to crack with increased emotions. "I want you gone! Gone!" She waved at him.
"Look, Major, can I say something to you without you getting offended?" Klinger asked humbly as he waited for her to nod her head.
"I'm not so sure as to why the dress bothered you. The red dress was amazing…I don't know what you need a dress for but believe me…that first dress will accomplish anything you need it to. I wouldn't lie to you. You gotta trust me."
Margaret considered his words for a minute. Could he be right? Could the crimson dress accomplish what she wanted it to? First she had to know exactly what she wanted it to do.
She nodded her head to dismiss Klinger, then sat back down in her tent. She thought some more about what Klinger had said.
The dress would certainly catch Hawkeye's eye. But would he respect her? She wanted-no needed- more than his attention. He was capable of paying attention to only what the woman was wearing. And tonight she wanted to be seen, truly seen for who she really was. Maybe she was selling him short. Maybe he wasn't that shallow that he wouldn't listen to her if she asked him to. Could it be she's getting ready to set herself up for failure the way she's done in the past? Her expectations are that he's going to be an animal and now she's ready to deal with that animal. The problem was, how was the real Margaret to be heard in between the fronts the two people were going to be putting on? Someone had to break first. And for the first time, Margaret realized that that person was her.
It wasn't about breaking. It was about surrender. It wasn't about giving up. It was about willingness to concede that the other person may have a point. If left to her own natural devices she would expect Hawkeye to read her mind and to not act like himself for a minute. And of course, when that didn't happen she would resent him and lash out at him. But tonight had to be different. She couldn't predict the outcome of the night. She didn't have that ability. But what she did have was the willingness to try to do whatever it takes to be heard. And if it meant a little less talk and a lot more listenting, than she could do it.
Margaret didn't have a plan, which scared her to death. She didn't know what she was going to say or how she would say it. The only thing she was certain of is that she loved Hawkeye Pierce and that she would regret it for the rest of her life if she didn't tell him so. Just for tonight she could let go of the need to control the outcome. She could let go of the need to predict what he would say and how he would say it. Sure, it would be a safe bet to say he'd mask his feelings under a direct line of rapid jokes. But tonight she could challenge herself to see past them and see him, to see what he's really telling her. The jokes will be telling, of course. Don't assume, just listen.
Margaret changed back into the crimson dress, and brushed her hair down. She expertly applied her makeup. The hint of love had blended in with the cosmetics and she looked absolutely glowing. Whatever insecurities she had, they remained inward. Outwardly she had never looked better. Her emotions were stirring up rapidly, almost as if she could barely have time to pick just one to let herself feel. Just for the moment, she decided to allow herself to feel serene. She looked good, she was in love, and she was capable. Not sturdy, but capable. With the calming affect of the confidence of her looks Margaret decided it was time to go find Hawkeye Pierce. It was time for a talk, after all.
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Post by jessie on Mar 30, 2011 17:40:31 GMT -6
Awesome writing Melinda, I loved this chapter, I love this story. I'm addicted to Margaret and Hawkeye stories now. I think you made me want to watch M.A.S.H again. I think these stories are some of your best work. You know the characters so well. I love how you write Margaret. I hope you update this one soon, it is one of my favourite stories to read. Jessie
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Post by Sanda on Mar 30, 2011 19:15:32 GMT -6
Great update MelindaJo.
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Post by melindajo2000 on Apr 5, 2011 20:58:06 GMT -6
Chapter 5
Looking every bit a woman in her red dress, Margaret set down her brush and left the safety of her tent. She threw her jacket on blotted her lipstick, then reapplied it once more. Perfect.
No sense in calling me Hot Lips if I can't take advantage once in awhile.
It was now sunset and she opened the door to her tent. Once she left she was immediately greeted with catcalls from a passing soldier.
"You'd better button it if you want to make it back home in one piece, buster!"
"It wasn't me, maa'm." greeted the man with the death wish.
"Stuff it." She said with a smile as she walked towards the Swamp.
Finally. The moment of truth was here. Was it unfair what she was about to spring on him? But she knew she would never have this opportunity again, and she would regret it with everything in her if she didn't take it. Freedom was right around the corner..you could hear it in the air and taste it on your lips. She felt sorry for Hawkeye, not having a chance to say goodbye to his best friend. But who could begrudge B.J the chance to leave the second he possibly could?
It was time.
Breathe.
"Enter." Called Hawkeye in a sing-song voice.
His jaw dropped when he saw Margaret. "Yowza. Hubba Hubba."
"Oh can you be serious?"
"I can be serious. Seriously in love. Seriously. Why don't you take off your jacket and stay awhile?"
She nodded then handed him her jacket. The dress had had its desired effect. His eyes looked like they were about to pop out of his head. Perfect start.
"Hawkeye, we need to talk."
"When you waltz in here looking like a million and a half bucks we can talk about anything you like! I'm all ears. And heart." He placed his hand over his heart for dramatic effect and fell to his cot.
Heart….this was going to be harder than she thought.
"So…how are you?"
"I'm doing much better now." He grinned as he sat up. "So what brings me the honor? Can I get you a drink? I'm running a special. Half-off." He pointed to his shirt. "And the drinks are on sale too."
"I think I'll ignore that. A drink would be just fine."
"Want to go to the officer's club? If memory serves me right you cut a mean Lindy Hoppe. Then again…" he walked over to her. Hawkeye took her hands and stood dangerously close to her. He grabbed one hand, placed one hand behind her back, and began to dance with her.
"Music is overrated." He whispered in her ear, his breath warm breath tracing against the side of her face.
" Hawkeye…" she closed her eyes. The smell of men's cologne permeated the air like the fragrance after the rain. The knowledge that Charles could walk in on them crossed her mind and for a minute she didn't mind. It wasn't the Lindy Hoppe but rather a slow and lingering dance that the two of them shared for a few minutes until Margaret's nerves got the better of her.
"I..can't. I'm sorry." She finally pulled back, touching his chest one last time. "It's not you. It's Charles."
"Charles?" He broke out in laughter. "What does he have that I don't? Is it his luxurious head of hair? His soft supple skin? I know, it must be his radiant glow first thing in the morning."
"Oh stop it." She chuckled. "You know what I mean. "I hardly think that it would be appropriate if he were to walk in on us… dancing…you know what I mean so you can wipe that simple grin off of your face."
"Simple? I'm offended. If we can't dance than shall we sit? He nodded towards the chairs. "Although I'm afraid they might be a bit dusty and I wouldn't want to take a chance on getting your dress dirty. Why don't you take my bed? It may be a bit rusty but it's not dirty." He grinned.
She obliged, rolling her eyes at him.
"I suppose you're wondering why I'm dressed up."
"The thought crossed my mind. Not that I mind. I can't tell you enough how sexy you look." Hawkeye looked approvingly at her.
"I wanted to talk to you. About us." There. She said it. He looked as stunned as she thought he would.
"I'm afraid I don't follow?"
"Hawkeye, I've been doing some thinking. About the war. About going home. And about you. Mostly about you. I know this is utterly unfair to spring this on you but I couldn't live with myself if I didn't get this off my chest. We've been through a lot, Pierce. I know that we haven't always gotten along. But when we did…Maybe you've forgotten about our night together."
"No…of course I haven't."
"Please…" she put her hand in the air. "Let me finish. This is hard enough. I know we had one hell of a time in this war. You've been there for me when I needed a friend. What's more is you've been there when I needed to cry. I never let anyone see me cry. Do you know how hard it is for me to let anyone see me, the real me?"
Hawkeye nodded." I know, Margaret." He said tenderly. "And that means something to me. That means a lot. To know that you let your guard down around me really glad I could help. I know how hard it is for you to let your feelings show. And to know you can be yourself around me-at times- well, that makes me feel good."
"Well it's not easy you know. I can't trust just anyone. And it's not like you made it easy for me to trust you. After our night together I thought that maybe we had a future. I thought that you cared for me."
"I do care for you! Maybe more than I should have. And I just couldn't give you what you needed. You needed someone who could give you one hundred percent. And you deserve that. You should never settle for that. I saw you time and time again going for men who were beneath you. Don't get mad, that came out wrong. But about you and me…the timing was wrong."
She saw her opening. "But what about now?" she asked gently.
Hawkeye was genuinely caught off guard. Was she asking what he thought he thought she was?
"I can see you weren't expecting that."
"I can honestly say I wasn't. I don't know what to say."
"Maybe I shouldn't have said anything. I've been doing some thinking and I realized that I would be lying to myself and to you if I didn't tell you how I feel. And what I feel is more than friendship." She stood up and started to walk away.
Hawkeye said nothing.
No, she thought. It's not going to be like this. I didn't go to all this trouble just to chicken out. If I'm going to make a fool out of myself I'm going to go first-class.
So she did what came naturally. She turned back around and pulled him close and kissed him, catching him off gaurd.
He didn't protest.
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Post by jessie on Apr 5, 2011 23:42:55 GMT -6
Oh sweet update , I love this story, oh I love Margaret and Hawkeye.. You write M.A.S.H stories so amazing, I love reading them. I didn't notice you updated this one, until tonight. Can't wait to see what happens next... Thanks Melinda
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Post by jennifer1983 on Apr 6, 2011 5:03:58 GMT -6
Great updates Melinda.
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