Lucy's Story Forever yours

[jessie]

New Lucy story, I wrote because your such a fan Melinda. Hope you enjoy this story.

Chapter 1

Lucy walked over to Sue Ellen, "don't ever talk to me again. We are going to bury Mickey because of you. I don't want you at the funeral"

Sue Ellen ran over grabbing Lucy's arm, "Please forgive me Lucy"

"Never Sue Ellen". she walked away, and Sue Ellen screamed out. "Stop Lucy, please forgive me". Lucy ran over smacking Sue Ellen, and she cried out. JR ran over, "Enough Lucy, she will live with what she has done, the rest of her life. She won't go to the funeral, either will I, we will respect your wishes". Lucy screamed , "Mickey's is dead". Just as she said it, she felt someone shake her awake, and she opened her eyes. She was shocked and scared,she touched his face, and whispered "Mickey"

"Yes it is me, why were you screaming Mickey is Dead"?

" OMG Mickey why do I keep having this dream"?

" I think it is because in someway you feel guilty because Sue Ellen is still in the hospital in that coma"

"She has been in that coma for 3 months, JR goes there everyday".

"Yes he does, and he should it was his fault, she had that accident".

"If I didn't stop you from getting in that car, maybe you could have stopped her"?

"You did what you thought was right, that man slammed into her car out of revenge. We both could be in the hospital right now".

"The dreams are getting worse Mickey, I hit her in my dream".

"Hit her why"?

" I thought she killed you, but she looked so sad. I hate these dreams Mickey".

"Lucy go see her you haven't seen her since the accident".

"I know Mickey because seeing her like that will make me feel worse".

"Everyone has gone to see including me, go for me. Maybe after you see her, the dreams will stop.

"Mickey, I love you", Lucy hugged him, and he touched her face, and kissed her. She smiled, " Fine, I will go see her, but maybe you can come too"?

"Sure I will come , and I bet you will feel better. You just talk to her, the Doctor thinks she can hear peoples voices."

Lucy smiled, " I love you Mickey, but we keep putting off the wedding, our Baby will arrive before we make it to the alter".

"How can we marry, when JR and Sue Ellen are suffering"?

"We can get marry, just us, and after have a bigger wedding". Mickey smiled, " Now that is a great idea Lucy". He laid her back, and she giggled, as he lifted up her nightie. She moaned when his lips, moved over her body it made her shiver. He got up pulling off his boxers, and she smiled, "Come here you sexy man". Mickey jumped on the bed, and they went into each others arms. He brought his lips over hers, as they became one. He entered her, and they both were totally and completely giving themselves to each other. He brought her to her release, as he came to his. They laid side by side, both trying to catch there breath. He put his hand on her tummy, and leaned over whispering, "good morning Angel, Daddy loves you". Lucy giggled, and she leaned over laying in his arms.

To be continued

[jennifer1983]

Great start to your story Jessie.

[melindajo2000]

Wow you really keep outdoing yourself. This is amazing!! I dont know what else I can say but thank you for writing this, this is a perfect story well except for Sue Ellen and I hope she will be okay. I hope that JR will prove himself to her. This has so many possibilities. You know how much I love Lucy and Mickey and this is a wonderful story. Thank you Jessie. Please update soon

[jessie]

Chapter 2

Lucy and Mitch came downstairs, they sat at the dining room table. They were the first to get to breakfast. Mickey smiled, "When are we going to tell everyone your pregnant"?

"Not yet Mickey, I don't feel right, we will soon"

They smile when JR walked in sitting down. "Hi you two, your here first ?

"Yeah we are starving", Mickey smiled

JR whispered, "You both should try sleeping at night, you party to much"

"JR OMG". Lucy says

"Just kidding", they waited for Clayton, Miss Ellie and Bobby to come down. The boys were at day camp, so it was just the adults. Mickey gave Lucy a look and she said , "JR I'm going to the hospital today to see Sue Ellen"

"Really I thought you said you couldn't"?

" Mickey made me realize that is wrong, maybe I can wake her up". JR smiled, " Oh Lucy I hope so she isn't waking up for me".

"JR you hurt her that day, but she loves you so much".

"I will never forgive myself, I didn't stop her from driving away".

"JR it is over now, focus on getting Sue Ellen back with us. I will admit, I really admire you for going to the hospital everyday spending hours with her".

"I want to be there when she walks up. I want my face to be the first face she sees. I miss her so much, I look back at that day , and realize, I was truly a fool".

Mickey smiled, "May I ask you something Sir"?

"Yes, but call me JR "

"Ok JR, Sue Ellen is so beautiful, why did you cheat"?JR was shocked so was Lucy, but JR smiled, "Mickey good question, but I don't have a answer. I was wrong, but I was so self centered, and I only cared about myself really. Sitting in that room with Sue Ellen seeing her still, not moving, or smiling, makes me die a little each day. If I lose Sue Ellen, I don't know what I will do? I love her so much, and when John Ross cried the other day for his Mother, it broke my heart. I took his Ma Ma away from him, all because of my stupid fling with Holly."

"I think Sue Ellen will come back to us, she is just healing" Mickey says

"Hope so Mickey", JR smiled, as Clayton, Miss Ellie and Bobby walked in. They all had breakfast, and Bobby left for work. JR decided to go to the office for a few hours. He would let Lucy and Mickey spend some time with Sue Ellen without him being around. Lucy and Mickey were driving to the hospital, and Lucy was nervous she didn't know why? They got to the hospital, and parked, and went inside. They went to the nurse's unit, the nurse walked them to Sue Ellen's room. They went inside, and Lucy was shocked seeing Sue Ellen laying in bed, not moving. She was so pale, and she looked so sad Lucy thought. Lucy walked over picking up her hand, and whispered, "I'm finally here Sue Ellen, I'm so sorry I didn't come sooner. To be honest , I felt guilty, I didn't let Mickey get in the car that day. I never thought this would happen, please wake up Sue Ellen. John Ross, and JR miss you being at home. Grandma is so worried, and Clayton told me he feels like your his Daughter. Sue Ellen, you don't want them getting sick with worry, so fight to come back to us. I don't have anyone to fight with". Lucy smiled, " I have some news well me and Mickey have some news for you. I'm pregnant, 3 1 /2 months to be exact. We want to get married, but we have to wait for you to wake up. I was going to have you and Donna stand up for me. I know we haven't gotten along but I really do care about you Sue Ellen". Lucy started to cry, when there was no response from Sue Ellen. Mickey walked over, " it will take time Lucy, she will come home to us". They both sat looking at Sue Ellen, they both were willing her to open her eyes.

[melindajo2000]

wonderful update, I hope Sue Ellen wakes up and I'm glad JR was feeling sorry for his actions, I think he means it. I'm glad he was treating Mickey normal and not looking down his nose at him although there was a comment he did make about him being better for Lucy then the normal boys she brought home. Love this story

[jennifer1983]

Great update Jessie.

[jessie]

Chapter 3

Mickey asked Lucy if she wanted to go get a coffee?

"No Mickey you go, I don't want to leave her. I will wait here, but you can bring me a chocolate milk"

"Ok I will be right back, are you ok"?

"Yes, I'm fine go JR should be here soon anyways". Mickey walked out, and Lucy got up walking to the bed. "Sue Ellen if you hear me, please listen to what I have to say. JR really has changed, and for me to say this it is really strange. He is here all the time, I'm sure you know that already. He sits here waiting for you to wake up. He comes home, and comforts John Ross, he wants his Ma Ma back so badly. I know you had a lot of problems, but I think you and JR has a good chance of saving your marriage. I'm really sorry, that I didn't let Mickey get in that car that day. I didn't want you to get hurt, but I didn't want Mickey hurt either. I don't know if things would have changed if I allowed him too, but maybe it would have been worse? I know I'm the last person you probably care about, but I care about you Sue Ellen. I can't believe I'm saying this I always have liked you Sue Ellen. I just loved to bug you, it was fun because you let me. Pam put me in my spot, you were afraid of Granddaddy, you didn't really go after me. I'm so sorry for that, maybe when you come home we can get to know each other better"? Lucy jumped when JR walked up behind her touching her shoulder.

"Hi Lucy, I'm sorry I scared you like that".

" She hasn't moved JR, what is wrong with her"?

"They say there isn't really a reason other than she isn't ready to come back yet".

"JR do you really truly love Sue Ellen"?

"Yes, I always have loved her Lucy, but I made a lot of mistakes".

"I hope she can forgive you JR, I really do".

" This means the world to me Lucy, that your on my side".

"This once, but if you hurt her again, I will hurt you"

"I believe you would, I know Sue Ellen would love knowing you care". Lucy smiled, and JR hugged her. Lucy was walking to the door, and JR followed to walk her to the elevator. They were almost out the door, when they heard a voice.

"JR". They both turn, and JR ran over to the bed. Sue Ellen opened her eyes barely, and he touched her face. "OMG your awake, Lucy is a miracle worker"

"What happened to me JR, my head hurts"?

"You were in a accident, and been asleep for a long time".

"Asleep really"?

"Yes but lets not worry about that". JR turned to Lucy telling her to get the Doctor or the Nurse. Lucy left, and Sue Ellen moaned, "my whole body hurts".

"I know it will get better, the Doctor is on the way"

"JR why"?

"Why what Sweetie"?

"Did you hurt me again, you promised"? Sue Ellen turned away but shut her eyes, and was falling back asleep. JR was devastated, would she ever forgive him. He couldn't forgive himself, for hurting again, after he promised it would never happen.

[melindajo2000]

I'm glad Sue Ellen is awake but I hope she forgives JR and they can start again. I'm anxious to see where this one goes. I hope she understands why Lucy hasnt gone to see her and I wonder what she will think of the events of the past few months. wonderful story so far Jessie

[jennifer1983]

Great update Jessie. I agree with Melinda I hope Sue Ellen can forgive JR.

[melindajo2000]

I hope you update soon, I love this story all of the storylines are great and it really is terrific. Not trying to tell you what to do I would never do that, take your time but you left off at a great place I would love to see a scene with Ray and Mickey

[jessie]

Chapter 4

Thanks Melinda for your wonderful comments. I would like to thank everyone for reading my stories.

The Doctor walked in, and were taking her vitals, while JR and Lucy stood watching. The Doctor smiled, "well Sue Ellen it is about time you came back to us".

"My head hurts really bad"

"It will for awhile, but we will get you something to help with that. You remember the crash Sue Ellen, and the events leading up to the crash"?

"Yes, I wish I didn't remember that night, it was the night my life ended".

"Sue Ellen, what are you talking about"?

"JR he hurt me again, after telling me he would be faithful. I find him in bed with Holly, I felt sick. I went home and drank, like a fool, and got in that car. I hurt myself, but I would have been better off dead".

Lucy walked over, "don't you say that Sue Ellen, what about John Ross"?

"I love John Ross Lucy, but really am I a Mother really"?

"Yes you are, he adores you , and JR so don't you dare feel sorry for yourself. You get better, and be there for him, he needs his Ma Ma". Sue Ellen smiled, "Wow I'm getting a lecture from you Lucy. You really have grown up, I think Mickey really was good for you. I'm glad that Mickey didn't get in that car that day Lucy. I would have died, if I hurt him too".

"Shh forget that, why don't you rest Sue Ellen"?

"I should I'm exhausted", Sue Ellen giggled, but shut her eyes. Lucy looked at JR, he was devastated he hated that Sue Ellen was hurting because of him. He didn't even love Holly actually he didn't even really like her. It was all a sex thing with him, and now he might have pushed the only woman he truly loved, away from him. Lucy walked over, "JR she loves you, give her time".

"Thank you Lucy, Sue Ellen is right Mickey is good for you'.

"Well JR, since Sue Ellen is awake, I have some news"

"What "?

"Don't tell anyone promise JR"

"I won't tell me Lucy"

"I'm pregnant, me and Mickey are having a baby. He asked me to marry him, and I said I would. I want the wedding at Southfork, but I want Sue Ellen with us".

JR touched Lucy cheek, "Congrats on the baby Lucy, but is he really is the man you want to spend the rest of your life with"?

"Yes, every minute JR, I never knew love until I met Mickey". JR smiled, and Lucy whispered, " I will get going, but take care of her JR"

"I will Lucy, go home and be with Mickey. Lucy you never know what life has in store for us? Go home and live everyday like it might be your last". Lucy smiled, " I will JR, but you take your own advice, make her realize your sorry, and tell her she is the love of her life. This time, don't hurt her JR, mean it ok".

"Go Lucy, tell Ma Ma the good news".

"Bye", Lucy left, and JR walked over, standing beside Sue Ellen. The doctor touched JR's arm, "Give her time JR, she went through a lot, she needs to heal".

"Thanks", the Doctor left, and JR lifted up Sue Ellen's hand, and kissed it. "Sugar, if you give me another chance, I promise you I will make it right this time". Sue Ellen eyes, were shut, and he touched her chin, bringing his lips to hers. She moaned, and JR sat in the chair, just waiting for her to wake up again.

[melindajo2000]

I'm glad Lucy told JR she is being mature maybe Mickey is good for her like he was in the show. I didnt like him at first but after he died I really liked him. I hope JR has changed, I hated Holly. Thanks for updating

[jennifer1983]

Great update Jessie.

[jessie]

Chapter 5

Lucy drove home, and went to Southfork, and Miss Ellie and Clayton said Mickey was with Ray at the Stables. Lucy changed, and went to find Mickey. She was walking over to the Stables, thinking about everything, maybe Sue Ellen waking up today would mean things would change for the better. She got to the Stables, and walked in seeing Mickey helping Ray. She stood just watching him, he really was a great guy. She liked him from the first moment she saw him, she fought the feelings, but he did something to her. He was smug, and a brat at first but she saw a side to Mickey that she knew he was a good person, who had a rough life. I guess that is why she feels so close to him, because they both were unhappy growing up. Ray saw Lucy, and yelled, "hey you what are you doing just staring at us"?

"Oh it was sweet seeing two men with there shirts off working for a change". Mickey ran over kissing Lucy, "how was Sue Ellen today"?

"She woke up Mickey you were right, I feel better going there". Mickey smiled, "Oh man was it you that brought her back"?

"No, I think it would have happened, but you never know".

Ray walked over, " why don't we go to my place for a cold drink, it is hot today. We can also celebrate Sue Ellen coming out of her coma".

"I can't drink Ray, not for another 6 months at least"

"Why six months"?

" Oh your smart think about it"

"OMG you both are having a baby"?

"Yes", Lucy screamed and Ray hugged her, than Mickey. "You are 3 months already, why didn't you tell anyone"?

"Because of Sue Ellen, we wanted to wait". Ray grabbed her hand, "lets go, Donna is going to be happy". They left to go to Ray's home.

Back at the hospital

JR was sitting reading the paper, when Sue Ellen woke up again. She became frantic, and JR jumped up running to her. "Sue Ellen you are dreaming, your in the hospital remember"?.

" JR did I hurt anyone"?

"No, just yourself Sugar, but someone tried to run you off the road".

"What are you talking about"?

"One of my Business Associates, Walt Driscoll, tried to run you down. He thought I was driving, I wish I was".

" It was my fault, I drove drunk I could have hurt someone".

"Shh it is over, we will talk about this when your feeling better".

"Why are you here JR, I would think you would be with your friend Holly"?

"What I did to you is unforgivable, I'm sorry. I don't want Holly, I want only you. I promise you , I will change and be the Husband and Father , I should be".

"You promised to many times JR, I can't believe you again".

"What if I go see someone to see why I do the things I do". Sue Ellen turned staring at JR, "you are willing to go to therapy"?

" Both of us, but you were never to blame for anything that went wrong in our marriage. You loved me, and I knew it I'm so sorry Sue Ellen".

Sue Ellen reached out holding his hand, she whispered, " I forgive you, but you will go to therapy with me".

JR smiled, " Fine that is a start". They both smiled as JR brought his lips to hers.

[melindajo2000]

very good chapter. I'm happy Lucy told Ray. that was funny what he said to her about staring, it made me laugh. I wonder if Donna will worry since she doesnt like Mickey though. cant wait to see her reaction. this is getting better all the time. JR in therapy that should be good, the therapist will get rich lol. very good stuff here Jessie