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Post by jennifer1983 on Sept 25, 2010 2:24:07 GMT -6
Great update Jessie.
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Post by jessie on Oct 14, 2010 14:31:58 GMT -6
Chapter 6
Lucy, Mickey and Ray got to Ray's house, and went inside. Ray called Donna, she came out of the bathroom, and saw Mickey and Lucy. Ray kissed Donna, and whispered, "they have wonderful news". Lucy smiled, "Well first Sue Ellen came out of her coma finally". Donna smiled, "Oh that is amazing Lucy, JR and John Ross must be so happy".
"JR is but John Ross doesn't know yet. We also have some great news, and I hope you will be happy for us".
"Tell me Lucy, your killing me", Donna smiled,
"I'm 3 months pregnant , me and Micky are going to be parents". Donna was shocked she looked at Ray, he was smiling, and she walked over to Lucy. "Are you ready for this Sweetie, you will have to grow up fast"?
"What I'm not grown up enough now Donna"?
"Not really Lucy, you and Mickey still have issues. You both have tempers, and you both frankly need to grow up, and be responsible".
Ray smiled, "Donna is just worried, this is going to change both your lives forever". Mickey smiled, hugging Lucy, "I know it will but we couldn't be more happy. I'm sure we will make mistakes along the way, but I think we will make great parents. I respect what you have to say Donna, and I admit, I have to grow up, but I have really change a lot recently. I have a great job, I'm saving money, and I haven't had a beer in 1 month".
"I'm sorry for coming off so mean, I know you both will be fine. You can always depend on me and Ray, but I'm sure you both will be fine. Would you both like something to eat, I was going to get myself a snack"? They say yes, and the four of them went into the kitchen.
At the hospital
JR walked into the room, and saw Sue Ellen sitting up. She looked better but still was extremely sad , and depressed. He kissed her cheek, and whispered, "You feeling better Sugar"?
"Yes, a little better", The door opened, and a Doctor walked in. JR smiled, "you are new, are you here for Sue Ellen"?
"You are JR her husband right"?
"Yes, I am".
"Good, we can start our first session together. I'm Dr. Andrews, I came here to talk to you both about your problems, and to see if we can help you both get through this mess".
JR shook his hand but he hated being put on the spot. Dr. Andrews walked over to Sue Ellen. "I promised you , I would come back did you tell JR about the session"?
"I never got a chance". Dr. Andrew looked at JR. "You look upset, tell us what are you thinking"?
"I'm thinking , I made mistakes in the past. I don't think I need a shrink, I need to be there for my family. I can't see talking to you ,will make it better"?
Sue Ellen stared at JR, " I knew you wouldn't do this for me, you will never change".
" I want to change Sue Ellen, I'm just a private person you know that"
"Really if you are so private, why do you make a mockery of our marriage?. You flaunt your conquests in my face. Go home JR, I want to be alone, I'm tired of fighting for this marriage to work. It takes two, why bother"?
"I'm willing to talk to Dr. Andrew's it is just hard Sue Ellen".
"It is hard for me too JR", he held her hand, and Dr. Andrew smiled, "the first session will be the hardest".
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Post by jennifer1983 on Oct 15, 2010 2:05:47 GMT -6
Great update Jessie.
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Post by melindajo2000 on Oct 15, 2010 10:28:33 GMT -6
very good update Jessie, Donna sounded just like herself, I dont think she'd be to thrilled with Lucy and Mickey going to have a baby but Ray might be more supportive . loved this chapter
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Post by jessie on Dec 27, 2010 1:04:56 GMT -6
Chapter 7
Dr. Andrews, told JR to sit in the seat beside Sue Ellen. He grabbed a seat.
'Ok who wants to start, tell me about your marriage". Sue Ellen looked at JR, he put his head down. Sue Ellen whispered, "Our marriage has been nothing but a joke, the only good thing to come out of it, was John Ross. We even messed that up too, I had an affair on my husband, I'm so ashamed. I wanted to hurt him, like he hurt me. I got pregnant, we didn't know if JR or Cliff was the Father? JR treated me so badly, I deserved it, I wanted to play like JR, but I only hurt myself. I couldn't even touch my baby, because I hated JR, and Cliff, and I took it out on my child. That is the kind of person, I am, maybe this is crazy, our marriage is over anyway". JR jumped up, "Over after all this, I want to make it work, can't you give me another chance"?
"A chance, I gave you so many, I was a fool. Do you have any idea how I felt, seeing you having sex with Holly? Don't you dare say you were not enjoying it. Why did you do it JR, you promised you would never hurt me again, but you lied"?
"I can't explain, it was stupid, I didn't want to really'.
"OMG you didn't want to really, you are one sick freak".
"Sue Ellen, I will walk out of here, if you call me another name".
"Go, I don't care".
"You want me to leave, do you really"?
"Yes, I want you to leave, I want to be alone".
"To bad, I'm not going, I'm going to make this marriage work. I almost lost you, I have been here ever since you had the accident. I deserve your anger, but for John Ross we are going to get this right".
Sue Ellen laughed, and JR grabbed her arm, 'I'm serious".
"You were serious the other times, you will hurt me again, you can't help yourself".
Dr Andrew stood up, "OMG I have my job cut out for me, you both are so messed up. You both have hurt each other, in the worst way. JR hurt you Sue Ellen, but you let him, why didn't you walk away the first time he hurt you"?
"I tried to pretend it wasn't happening, but when I almost got raped, I realized what he was all about".
"Ok you were almost raped, what are you talking about"? Dr. Andrew looked at JR with disgust.
"It was my fault, I slept with this guys wife, he came to Southfork for revenge. He treated her badly, and I'm sorry about it".
"He treated me badly, he man handled me. He watched me as I dressed, he threatened he was going to rape me, if I didn't do as I was told. He wanted to rape me in front of you, he went into details what he was going to do. He touched me, it made me sick, so don't you downgrade what happened". JR looked at Sue Ellen in shock, "I didn't know you are holding this all in".
"You don't know a lot JR, because you were never home".
Dr. Andrews put his hand up, "OK this is really bad, you both have so many issue, this isn't going to be dealt with one or two sessions".
"Oh of course not, you want as much money as you can get". Dr. Andrews glared at JR, "How dare you, if you kept your zipper up, and came home to your family, none of this would have happened". JR walked out of the room, Sue Ellen put her hands to her face, Dr. Andrew walked over giving her a needle, to make her sleep.
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Post by jennifer1983 on Dec 27, 2010 4:03:45 GMT -6
Great update Jessie.
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Post by melindajo2000 on Dec 27, 2010 23:09:15 GMT -6
great update u really know the family dynamics very well powerfull writing
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Post by jessie on Mar 24, 2011 13:56:46 GMT -6
Chapter8
JR came home, John Ross saw him, and ran over jumping into his arms. "Daddy how is Mommy is she coming home soon"?
"John Ross Mommy will be home soon, go play with Christopher". Lucy walked over, "JR how did the session go today"?
"Great Lucy, it was lets blame JR for everything, I'm not seating through that crap. We could work this out ourselves, if everyone just minds there own business"
"JR you have to be the most selfish man on the planet. She went through so much , she almost died, and you can't take the heat. You hurt her over, and over, don't you get that"?
"I'm going to lay down, I'm tired". JR walked into the house, Lucy watched him in disgust. Mickey walked over, "Come on forget about him, lets go swim with Christopher, and John Ross"
"Mickey can you watch the kids, I want to go upstairs, and change. I have to go check on Sue Ellen, he walked out of the session. He doesn't deserve her, he really doesn't"
"Ok, I know your upset with him, but they have to work it out together"
"I know that Mickey, but she needs friends, and I want to be there for her"
"Go I will stay with the kids, I will order pizza, they will be fine"
"You are amazing Mickey, I don't know what I would do without you"
"You don't have to worry about that girl, hurry up, and get back soon.".
"I love you Mickey". She kissed him, then touched his face, "tonight we will have a romantic night just the two of us"
"Great lets hope the kids don't tire me out".
Lucy walked into the house, and changed, grabbed her purse, and ran downstairs. She waved at Mickey and the kids, she got in the car, and drove off.
Mickey smiled, "Guys who wants to go to Pete's for pizza, and wings"?
"I do , I do".
"Lets go change, I'm starving, it is to hot out here". The kids ran into the house, to change. Mickey was walking in, when JR walked out.
"Mickey the boys are excited, you are taking them out for dinner"
"Yes Lucy went to the hospital, I thought it would be nice, since everyone is out. You can join us if you like, John Ross would love that"
"No, I will sit out here, and enjoy the peace. Lucy had to go to the hospital, to stir up trouble I suppose"
"No she is worried about Sue Ellen, you walked out on her again"
'Is it any of your business Mickey"?
"Yeah it is Sue Ellen is a part of the family, she is hurting, she needs all our support. You have not been the Husband you should be, look in the mirror JR, you put her in the hospital"
"No she picked up the drinks that night Mickey, I didn't cause the accident"
"Oh this is useless Lucy might be right, how sad JR, you are going to lose someone really special, and maybe than you will realize, what you have"
JR smiled, "Run along Mickey, have fun with the boys"
"I will JR, but remember your boy loves his Mother, and he loves you, think about him for a change, if you can". Mickey walked away, and ran upstairs to change. The boys ran outside, "Dad where is Mickey"?
"Changing, you both be good, have fun, and don't eat to much"
"Dad we are having pizza, Pete's is so good, you should come"
"No John Ross, I'm not in the mood for pizza, but we will talk later".
"Ok Dad", John Ross put his head down, and walked over to Mickey's car. JR saw the disappointment, in John Ross's face, and he felt bad.
"John Ross, do you really want me to come"?
"Yes Dad you will love it promise"
"Ok let me grab my car keys, I'm not going in Mickeys little truck". Mickey walked out laughing, "Why it would be cool, live a little JR".
JR smiled, "Fine lets go". Mickey walked to the truck, the kids got in the small back seat putting their belts on. JR got in the passenger seat, Mickey smiled, "Buckle up JR"
"Oh Right". He put it on, and looked at Mickey, and shook his head, as Mickey started the truck.
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Post by Sanda on Mar 24, 2011 19:25:19 GMT -6
Jessie, I just found this awesome Lucy and Mickey story that you are writing for Melinda. I am soo happy that Mickey and Lucy are having a baby together in this story. I didn't like it when Mickey was killed off the show. I LOVED Lucy with BOTH Mickey and Mitch.
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Post by jennifer1983 on Mar 25, 2011 4:38:16 GMT -6
Great update Jessie.
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Post by melindajo2000 on Mar 26, 2011 10:14:02 GMT -6
great update Jessie I hope JR turns himself around
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Post by jessie on Aug 7, 2012 18:54:42 GMT -6
Chapter 9
Lucy got to the hospital, and went inside, and grabbed Sue Ellen a few magazines. She laughed when the lady in the shop gave her a look, but she grabbed the magazines, and left going to Sue Ellen's room.
Lucy walked in, Sue Ellen was sitting up looking at her food.
"You not eating that wonderful food girl"?
"No look at it Lucy it is gross"
Lucy smiled , "Want me to go down, and get you a sandwich"?
"No I'm not really hungry"
"I heard JR walked out on the meeting today, I'm sorry Sue Ellen"
"I'm use to it Lucy he will never change, he wants to blame everyone but himself for our problems"
"I hate saying this but give him some slack this is hard for him"
"Your taking his side thanks Lucy"
"I'm not taking sides, but look I got you some new magazines these should take your mind off your problems"
Sue Ellen took the magazines, and smiled, "People, Newsweek, and a couple of gossip magazines, Sue Ellen looked at the last one, and put her hand to her mouth, and laughed.
"Lucy Ewing you bought this oh my God were you not embarrassed"?
"No I use to buy that magazine all the time growing up, look at the center fold picture now that is a man"
Sue Ellen opened the magazine, and Lucy laughed seeing Sue Ellen's face as she was staring, and didn't know what to say.
Lucy sat down, and was telling Sue Ellen how John Ross was. Sue Ellen loved hearing that he was doing good.
"Lucy I know after everything I put you, and Mickey through it was hard to forgive me, but you both did. I'm so grateful your helping John Ross he really needs family right now"
"He needs you more, he needs you to get healthy, and he needs you to focus on your health, and your marriage second"
"Are you saying I should leave JR"?
"Not at all, I would love to see you both happy but will that ever happen I don't know. You both need to stop the fighting, and bickering, and focus on that little boy at home who needs his parents"
"When did you get so smart Lucy"
"I think when I met Mickey he is wonderful Sue Ellen we are so happy"
"He is a great man Lucy, you are lucky"
"We are going to have a baby Sue Ellen, can you believe it I'm going to be a Mom"
"Lucy"
"I know it is scary"
"No you would be a wonderful Mother, I'm so happy for you both"
"Get healthy, I'm going to need you when I start showing, and I could use your advice on decorating the nursery"
"I would love to help"
"How about I go down, and get you a soup or something"
"Sure a soup might be nice" Lucy grabbed her purse, and left as Sue Ellen smiled she was happy for Lucy, she thanked God that Mickey was not killed that day, he was amazing for Lucy, and the thought that she almost ended his life made her ill.
JR, Mickey, and the boys got to the diner, and went inside. JR sat down he was a little uncomfortable, but he liked being with his boy. John Ross, and Christoper were talking, and looking at the menu. Mickey smiled at JR, and asked him if he was OK?
"Yeah just thinking I was a lousy husband, more so today than ever before"
"You can always say your sorry"
JR smiled, "JR Ewing admit he is sorry like that would ever happen"
John Ross, and Christopher were staring, and Mickey gave JR a look.
"Yes Son it is the right thing to do to admit when your wrong, your old Dad has to get that through his head"
"Oh Dad"
JR hugged John Ross, and whispered, "Lets eat I'm starving"
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Post by Sanda on Aug 7, 2012 20:16:58 GMT -6
Great update Jessie. I loved the conversation between Lucy and Sue Ellen in the chapter.
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Post by melindajo2000 on Aug 8, 2012 14:59:43 GMT -6
I am so happy you updated this wonderful story. Please continue it is a favorite of mine!!
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