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Post by jessie on Jun 26, 2010 23:42:40 GMT -6
New Story, just what I need to do. LOL.. ;D
Chapter 1
Melinda, Jessie, and Sanda were going to dinner and a movie. Jessie and Melinda needed to go to the bank. Sanda stopped the car outside the bank while they ran in. They bumped into Ray, and Gary, going in, getting money to go for some drinks with Bobby. They walked to the line up, and the 4 of them were talking. Bobby and Sanda were outside, watching their watches wondering why they were talking so long? Sanda saw a car stop, and she saw 3 men jump out wearing all black. She had a bad feeling, but she laughed, thinking she has watched to many movies . She got out of the car, and smiled, at the man sitting in the car behind her. She got back in the car, and rolled down the window thinking it was getting mighty hot in here. She whispered to herself. " What is taking so long, guys"?
Inside the bank, Jessie and Melinda got their money, and Ray and Gary were talking to them. They were distracted, and were laughing saying they were going to a movie with their friend who was waiting outside. Gary smiled, " would you three like us three to join you "?
" You want to go see a movie with us"?
" Yeah that might be fun, it is Friday why not"?
"Sure, we will tell our friend, we and going to the Cineplex, on Wilson, you know the place"?
" Yes, Bobby is outside, just wait, while we get our money". Ray and Gary were getting money out of the bank machine, when they heard a loud gun shot, and someone yell , everyone on the floor, or we will kill you. Jessie and Melinda went down, holding each other, and Gary and Bobby laid down too, but moved close to the girls. The 3 men were running around, and yelling, and pulling down the shades in the bank. Sanda heard the shots so did Bobby, they got out of their cars. The police run down the street telling them to get away from the bank. They yell there is a robbery going on. The car that brought the 3 men took off, and the Police chase them. Sanda is in shock, Bobby runs over grabbing her hand running her down the street. She is screaming her friends names. He stops, you can't help them right now, the Police will get them out of there. Sanda is crying and Bobby holds her to him, scared for Gary and Ray.
Inside the bank, the 3 men are demanding money from the tellers, and they tell everyone to move against the walls. Jessie and Melinda are scared but do as their told as Ray and Bobby sit beside them. The one man is yelling at everyone, to stay calm, and not to move, or try anything stupid. They hear the Police telling them they are surrounded , and they should give themselves up. They look at each other and yell," if these police don't let us go, I guess we will start killing hostages, one by one."
People are screaming and frantic, but Jessie and Melinda didn't move at all. Ray touched their faces, "we will be ok, promise"?
Jessie says," I can't die, I take care of my daughter, Macy, she only has me".
Melinda held Jessie, "we are going to be fine, don't worry about Macy she is safe with my sister".
Gary was watching the 3 men, and he knew they meant business, he just prayed the Police know what they are doing, before anyone gets hurt.
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Post by melindajo2000 on Jun 27, 2010 0:31:37 GMT -6
wonderful start. you come up with the most brilliant ideas. i hope no one gets hurt
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Post by Sanda on Jun 27, 2010 13:53:06 GMT -6
Great start to you new story Jessie. You have the most brillant ideas for your stories. Bobby is soo sweet taking care of me outside the bank while we wait on word about Jessie, Melinda, Gary and Ray. I hope that no one gets hurt.
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Post by jessie on Jun 27, 2010 16:00:09 GMT -6
Chapter 2
The Bank robbers were losing it, because the Police were yelling demands at them. They grabbed the Bank Manager, and was pulling him to the back. Jessie and Melinda were crying, when the Manager was yelling for someone to help him. Gary went to jump up but Ray held him. "Gary don't be stupid they will kill you".
"We are suppose to sit over here, and do nothing"?
"Yes, don't make them come over here Gary".
One of the bank robbers walked over, and stood in front of Gary. " You both are carrying on a talk when I said no one should speak?".
Ray yelled, " We are sorry we will be quiet".
" Was I talking to you, I heard him talking not you".
Gary stares, " I won't open my mouth again sorry".
He yells, " What were you talking about"?
" Nothing, " Gary stares at him. He smiled, " Oh we have a tough guy here, but what would he think if his woman is roughed up.?
" I don't have a woman"?
" Really these two are not with you two"? Pointing at Jessie and Melinda.
" We met today, please leave them alone".
He grabbed Melinda, who held on to Jessie. The robber pulled Melinda in front of Gary, " what were you saying , tell me and your new friend here"?
"Ok I was saying it was awful, your hurting that man for nothing"
" Oh that is what you were saying", he pushed Melinda on top of Gary.
"That is so noble of you Sir, we will leave him alone, but guess what, I have to use someone else as a statement. You and your new friend are fine, so who should I choose next him" he pointed to Ray, "or this scared little lady"? as he pointed to Jessie.
"Stop, I'm sorry, I will be quiet, please leave them alone". He grabbed Jessie pulling her to the bank manager. " Guess what either you , or her come back there with me, you choose"?, he pointed at Hal the bank manager.
Melinda was about to scream but Gary put his hand over her mouth. Jessie just stared at Hal, he started to cry, "leave her alone, she is so young, take me". He dragged Jessie back throwing her on Ray, and smiled, " you 4 better keep your mouths shut, I'm so fed up with you all already". Jessie was shaking Ray held her close, whispering "your ok, " as he rocked her back and forth. They saw the man push the bank manager to the back room, and they heard a gun shot. Jessie and Melinda were crying, Ray and Gary were shaking they couldn't believe what just happened? The man walked out, "I wonder if Hal regrets making that choice, little lady". He laughed, and walked over to his friends.
Out side the bank
Sanda was frantic, my Friends we have to get them out of there. The Police yell, " we are doing everything we can to get everyone out of there safe". Sanda and Bobby, heard over the radio, that one of the hostages, just was killed and thrown out the back. Sanda collapsed into Bobby's arms, but he heard it was a male hostage. Bobby was frantic, not knowing if his Brother or Ray were killed. He touched Sanda's face, and she cried, " OMG they killed someone in there".
" It isn't your friends, it was a man".
" OMG , a man".
"Yes, Sanda, your two friends are still alive".
"What about your brother and friend"?
" I don't know Sanda, I can't believe this is happening".
They see more Police cars arrive, and Sanda and Bobby hold each other, they seen this in movies, but it was so terrifying in real life. They knew they couldn't do anything to help their loved ones. They just knew they weren't leaving until they were released.
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Post by Sanda on Jun 27, 2010 16:23:50 GMT -6
Great update Jessie. Poor Bobby and Sanda waiting outside the bank for news on their loved ones inside the bank. I LOVE how Bobby is taking care of me while we wait on news about Jessie, Melinda, Gary and Ray. Please don't let anyone get hurt. Please update sooon.
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Post by melindajo2000 on Jun 27, 2010 17:20:26 GMT -6
this is so good, I hope everyone is okay. I thought for a minute Gary might get hurt. I love this story already. please update soon
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Post by jessie on Jul 4, 2010 19:04:52 GMT -6
Chapter 3
Sanda and Bobby were standing outside, both in shock, not knowing what to do? They over heard it was a bank manager that was shot and killed. Bobby hugged Sanda glad it wasn't his Bother and Friend, but also horrified, thinking they were killing innocent people. Sanda was shaking and Bobby touched her face, "maybe you should leave here, and I can call you once we hear some news".
"You think I would leave my friends Bobby, I won't".
" Ok, your shaking , you have to calm down, or you will collapse".
"Why is this happening, we never should have stopped here"?
' How would we know these guys, would rob a bank"?
"Should we call their families or wait"?
" I don't know , I can't think lets wait a minute".
Sanda yells to a Police Officer, " Please get them out of there"
" We are trying Mame, we are doing everything we can".
Inside the bank
The robbers were talking, and everyone was silent. You could hear people crying, and they yelled telling everyone to shut up. The head teller, wouldn't stop, and the one Robber ran over pointing his gun. " you be quiet or I will end it for you now".
Jessie and Melinda were horrified , and they both cry out in fear. The robber turned, " shut up or your dead".
Ray and Gary held them tightly, putting their face near Melinda and Jessie. "Shh he will kill you ". They both shut their eyes, and Ray and Gary stare at each other. The robber yells, " the police haven't met our demands, in 15 minutes, another person goes. I have a idea, who it might be, anyone want to give me a suggestion who it should be"?
Gary felt sick he hoped it was him, not Ray, Jessie or Melinda . He would die if they were killed because he spoke up. The robber walked around looking at everyone. He knelt down , in front of Melinda, "should I take him , he caused so much trouble for you all"?
" No please, don't kill anyone else". Gary whispered , "shh Melinda".
"Melinda pretty name, do you have a family"?
" I'm not married, if that is what you mean".
" Are you lying Melinda,"?
"No, I'm not married, I wouldn't lie".
He got up, walking over to Ray, " maybe you will take the next bullet, for the cause".
" Take me leave the women alone".
"Oh your so brave , that is sweet".
The robber touched, Jessie's knee she was shaking so bad. " Oh you like me I can tell, maybe me, and you can party back there first"?
She turned into Ray, and the Robber laughed, " you boys, are sure lucky with these two, they are fine".
Gary and Ray, both tried to stay calm, they knew he was edging them to do something. The one robber walked over , "it is time who are you choosing"?
He jumped up," not these 4 , I have fun with them". He looked around pointing to a security guard. Everyone shut their eyes, as they pointed to the back room. " Please don't do this, my family needs me".
"Sorry you shouldn't have put yourself in danger , being a guard". He walked back, and everyone, jumped when they heard a gun shot. Ray and Gary put their hands over Melinda and Jessie's ears. The Robber walked out kicking a table, "I will kill everyone in here, if they don't get us that car soon".
Gary looked over , and saw one guy hide something behind him. He noticed it was a gun, Gary started to panic. The man shock his head and motioned to be quiet. Gary shut his eyes, he didn't want to be caught in the cross fire , of a hero, that gets everyone killed.
Outside the bank
Sanda and Bobby hear that another victim, was killed because the demands weren't met. Sanda yells, " Give them what they want, they are killing innocent people".
" We are not giving in to these guys, calm down,or you will be asked to leave".
Bobby held her close, and she was so angry. Sanda yelled over, when Melinda's sister ran over, and Sanda hugged her. Where is Jessie's daughter, Macy"?
" I couldn't bring her here, where is Jessie and Melinda"?
" In the bank, I'm sorry, they are killing people in there".
"OMG, we have to get them out of there"
" We can't Stacey, I hate that we are safe, and they are scared to death".
" I can't lose Melinda, and Macy can't lose Jessie".
" Stacey, OMG they have to be ok, I can't lose them like this".
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Post by melindajo2000 on Jul 4, 2010 20:11:43 GMT -6
that is awful that someone else died. Hopefully none of the gang gets hurt. love this story a lot
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Post by Sanda on Jul 4, 2010 23:06:24 GMT -6
Great update Jessie. I am soo upset that someone else got killed. I LOVE how Bobby is taking care of me outside of the bank while we wait on news about our friends and family. I hope that one else gets hurt. Please update soon.
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Post by jessie on Jul 12, 2010 23:59:16 GMT -6
Chapter 4
The Bank Robbers went in the back, leaving only one to watch everyone. Gary was looking at the guy with a gun, hoping he wasn't going to do something stupid. He would get everyone killed. The Robber walk past, and smiled, " you guys are couples right"?
"No, we just met", Melinda says
"Cool, nothing like finding love , when your life is hanging in the balance".
He smiled, " My Friend in there likes both of you, he might want to take one of you with him".
Jessie started to cry, and Ray held her tight, telling her to be quiet.
"Awe you don't like my friend, well I think he should take you than. He likes women he has to make love him".
Ray was getting mad, and Gary grabbed his arm. The Robber laughed, " Oh are the guys , getting angry"?
" You came to rob a bank, why scare everyone, and kill innocent people"?
"Why don't you keep you mouth shut rich boy. It is guys like you that made us do this. You have your fancy companies, and you fire the little guy that works his butt off for pennies. You people force, the average person, to have to cater to your wishes. I'm not doing that anymore, I'm tired of the rich, guys flaunting their money, getting the women, and the fancy cars, and trips".
The other guys come out from the back , they see him. "What are you doing, talking with the hostages"?
" Yeah, just playing around, this one hates you". He points at Jessie, and the Robber walked over, " You said you hate me"?
" No, I didn't I swear".
"Are you calling him a liar".?
" I didn't say it, please don't hurt me".
" I believe you Sweet thing, that is why this is happening". He jumped up shooting the Robber, and he fell, down crying out in pain. Jessie and Melinda, and everyone were in shock. Jessie was shaking, she started to cry. " Why are you crying , he lied right, I killed him for you"?
"No, OMG, please let us go".
" He was going to die anyway, we just used, him until we figured out a plan. I don't want to share 3 ways, so don't worry, it wasn't your fault".
The man was laying there still alive barely , Jessie was staring at him,as he took his last breath. They walked over, they picked up a phone, " where is our car, we are not kidding, someone else is dying in 30 minutes". He turned looking around the room, he yelled into the phone, "this is on you, get us our demands".
They all jump when the lights, and the air condition goes off. The Robbers go crazy, and point the gun in the air, and shoot several times. Everyone is screaming, and the Police, panic thinking they just caused, another death.
Outside, Sanda, Stacey and Bobby hear the shots. They all are shocked, they see the Police, were rattled, by the gunshots, not just one, several. Sanda holds on to Bobby, she is crying, she screams, "OMG, we are going to lose them". They both see Stacey, run over to the Police, "you have to get my Sister, and her friend out of there. They are all , I have, please, she has a baby girl at home named Macy".
" Mame, step back, you can not come this close to the bank".
" Help my sister", Stacey screams
Bobby and Sanda ran over pulling her back, over the Police line. Sanda is hugging her, she is cyring hysterically, Melinda is all I have.
"Stacey, Melinda is the bravest person, if anyone will survive it will be Melinda, and she won't let anything happen to Jessie".
" How can she go up against men with guns Sanda"?
" I know your scared, so are we, but we have to be brave".
" I was so mean to Melinda and Jessie , I told them I was tired of babysitting Macy".
" I thought you adored Macy , Stacey"?
" I do, I was just angry, I have to say sorry".
Bobby held them both, and they all stood waiting to see what the Police were going to do next?
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Post by Sanda on Jul 13, 2010 1:00:45 GMT -6
Great update Jessie. I hope that Melinda, Jessie, Ray and Gary are going to be ok. Please update soon.
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Post by melindajo2000 on Jul 13, 2010 17:27:29 GMT -6
great update. I hate seeing someone be killed. I hope they will be okay
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Post by jessie on Jul 17, 2010 20:36:14 GMT -6
Chapter 5
Everyone was really feeling the heat, the Police shut the lights, and air conditioners off. The men were getting more angry every minute, their demands weren't met..
The two Robbers were talking in a corner, when the man sitting beside Gary with the gun spoke. "I'm a Police Officer, he is going to kill again, we have to stop him".
" No, I'm not going to get someone else killed, just sit tight".
"We need someone to distract them, and we can get them from behind".
"Who is going to distract these guys"? Gary says
One of these two, he pointed to Melinda and Jessie. They both were shocked, and said "No".
" You might be next, we have to stop them, they have nothing to lose".
Jessie looks at Ray, " I can't die Ray , I have a baby who needs me". She laid her head on his chest, as he held her.
Melinda whispers, " I will do it, these jerks are sick, he is right they won't stop".
" No Melinda " Jessie held her hand, and they scream as the Robbers ran over. " Who said you two can speak"?
Jessie shut her eyes, she wouldn't look at them, as they were screaming.
Melinda yells" We have to go to the bathroom, she was afraid to ask. She is afraid, that is the only reason we were talking. He grabbed Jessie, " is that the truth, you have to go to the bathroom"?
" Yes, I'm sorry, we won't talk again".
"Get up both of you now"
Melinda stood up, and Jessie screams, " No please we won't talk again". She held on the Ray, and the Robber pulled her up by her hair. Ray went to get up, and he was kicked in the stomach by the robber. "You ever attempt to be a hero again, I will put a bullet in your head".
"Please leave them alone, they are young, they didn't do anything to deserve this".
" What we are taking them to the bathroom, unfortunately, we have to watch them go".
Jessie holds on to Melinda, " No, I will wait".
" You are going , get moving, does any other lady have to go"?
All the ladies kept their head down, the robbers smiled, " oh you are shy". He told his partner to kill anyone who moves, he will be busy with his two new friends. He walked Jessie and Melinda to the bathroom, and pushed them inside, he sat on the counter. "You both can go, but keep the door open".
Jessie was shaking, Melinda grabbed her face, " Go Jessie , it will be ok".
Melinda pushed Jessie into a stale, and she went into the other. Melinda was fed up with these two loser, she went and came out, washing her hands. He smiled, "you are pretty cool Melinda right, that was a treat". Melinda stared wanting to get sick, but she looked over as the Robbers pointed his gun. "I'm giving you 3 minutes to go, or I use this. I hate liars , she said you had to go, so go".
" I can't".
Melinda is shocked, "Jessie go for GOD sake go".
" I can't , and this is disgusting".
Melinda ran over shaking Jessie, "Macy needs you , go now".
Jessie is crying, Melinda is devastated, she hated herself but she had to do it. Jessie went and the robber made her real uncomfortable. Jessie came out washing her hands, and started to walk to the door. He walked to the door, smiling, "Oh we are not finished yet, the fun is about to start".
Jessie screamed, everyone in the bank, were shocked. Ray screamed, "you are robbers, now rapists".
" He isn't raping her, I'm sure".
Melinda held on to Jessie, she shut her eyes, as he walked over . He grabbed Jessie, " why did you scream like that"?
" I beg of you don't hurt us please".
He pulled her into a kiss, and Melinda pushed him away. "Kill us you won't hurt us that way".
He pointed the gun, and Melinda yelled, " do it stop trying to scare us". He aimed the gun, pointing the gun at Jessie. They both held each other, when they heard him laugh. " OMG you both are hysterical, get out of here, and shut up."
He forced them back to the others, and pushed them down. "Shut up or you will die do you understand"?
"Yes,", they both say.
Outside the bank
Bobby brought Stacey and Sanda a coffee, they took it. He asked if anything happened while he was gone.?
"No, what are they waiting for"?
" Maybe , they are afraid, if they rush in, a lot of people will die".
" People are dying Bobby, the next person can be one of our friends, or your Brother".
A officer walked over, and Bobby asked if they were going to put a end to this Robbery.?
" Sir, we are doing everything possible, I know you have love ones in there but so does many others"
Sanda screams, " We know that , we are worried about everyone, but why not give them what they want"?
" We can't give in to their demands, because everyone will think they will get away with crimes like this".
" Whatever, we are going to sit here, and wait for people to be killed".?
" Stop we will end this soon, but we don't need slack from the public".
Someone said something over the radio, and Bobby, Sanda and Stacey, heard, a cop was inside the bank.
Sanda smiled, " A Officer is inside, they might end this soon".
The Officer hears they overheard, "Keep this quiet, he is a hostage, so don't get your hopes up".
"OMG does he have a gun"?
" Yeah, he is a undercover cop, he is texting us".
" If they find out a cop is in there they might kill a lot of people". Bobby yells.
"Calm down, we don't want the media to know".
It was to late someone from a small radio station, heard every word, and already called it in.
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Post by Sanda on Jul 17, 2010 23:06:29 GMT -6
Great update Jessie. I hope that everyone is going to get out of the bank safety. Please update soon.
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Post by melindajo2000 on Jul 17, 2010 23:57:50 GMT -6
great update I hope Jessie and Melinda don't get hurt. I love this story
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