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Post by jessie on Jul 30, 2010 22:15:18 GMT -6
This is a sad update, everything happens to Jessie, because I can't have anything happen to Melinda and Sanda. I don't know how you would react to it. Chapter 6 The Bank Robbers were getting angry , that their demands were not being met. They were pacing, they see a radio, on one of the tellers desks. It was battery operated, so they turned it on. All the electricity, and lights were out. The only lights were the emergency lights, that come on if the power goes out. It was enough for the Robbers to see all the hostages. The cop looked over at Gary, who shook his head, that he shouldn't start something. They all are listening to the news, and are shocked, when channel 12 said, there was a cop inside, he was a undercover cop. Everyone was looking around, wondering who it was ? Gary shut his eyes, hoping they didn't think it was him or Ray. The Bank Robbers ran over, " one of you are a undercover cop, who is it"?. Everyone was frightened, everyone stayed quiet. The one Robber ran over grabbing a lady who was screaming. Jessie and Melinda were crying, he held the gun to her head. Gary shook his head, and shouted," it is me" Melinda stared so did Ray, who yelled, " you are not a cop Gary , what are you doing"? " Let her go, I'm a cop , don't hurt anyone else". "Get up you idiot, what were you planning all this time"? " I wasn't planning anything, I just wanted everyone out safe". " I will make you pay, you coward" The Cop is staring at Gary, who stands up, walking toward them. "Get over there by the wall". Melinda screams , "he isn't a cop, he just wants to be a hero". The Robbers runs over grabbing Melinda dragging her over to Gary. "She is calling you a liar, are you a cop"? " Yes, I just met her, please leave her alone". " No, maybe you will learn a lesson today". " Don't let her go , she is just trying to protect me". The Robber threw her to the ground pointing the gun. Jessie jumped up running to Melinda, " No please don't hurt her". The Robber pointed the gun at Jessie pulling the trigger. Ray screamed as Jessie went down, and Melinda screamed crawling over to her. The Second Robber yelled, " why did you do that for, she wasn't hurting anyone"? " She was suppose to sit down and shut up, she didn't listen". Ray moved over toward Jessie putting his hand over her wound. He brought his face to hers, "you hold on Jessie, why didn't you stay still"? "Melinda she is ok"? " Yes, she is right here beside you". Melinda touched her face, " Jessie why did you do this"? " Melinda it hurts help me". " Oh Ray she is bleeding so badly". "Help me add pressure to her wound, she can't die". Gary was in shock, the cop, was so angry. The Robber walked over kneeling beside Jessie. " I liked you too Sweetie, now your going to die". Melinda and Ray moved over her, trying to protect her. " I'm not going to shoot her again, she is going to bleed to death. It is that idiots fault", pointing to Gary. Gary was shaking when the two Robbers turned their backs on the Officer and Gary. They both stood up running at the Robbers, Gary tackled one, and the Officer tackled the other. Gary was punching the one, who shot Jessie he wouldn't stop. He had a rage in him, because this man didn't care about human life. The cop put handcuffs on the one guy, and ran over stopping Gary, as he put the second set of handcuffs on the Robber. Gary stood up, shaking, he walked over kneeling down, " OMG is she going to be ok"? "She has to be Gary, she tried to help me. She has a baby girl, who needs her Ma Ma". Gary hugged Melinda, and all of sudden police ran into the bank. They ran over looking at Jessie, and the EM-T's were brought in. They rushed her out first, they were talking to all the hostages. They let Ray, Gary, and Melinda go with Jessie. Melinda went in the ambulance, while Gary and Ray rode with the police. Bobby saw Gary in the police car, and went running after him. A Officer yelled, one of girl were shot, they are going to the hospital. Stacey and Sanda were shocked, "one of the girls were shot"? " Yes, I think her name is Jessie". Sanda screamed , " OMG, I have to be with her", she went running toward her car. Bobby and Stacey ran after her, and the three of them drove to the hospital.
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Post by Sanda on Jul 30, 2010 22:46:17 GMT -6
Awesome update Jessie. OMG I hope that Jessie is going to be OK. Please update soon.
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Post by melindajo2000 on Jul 30, 2010 23:17:53 GMT -6
wow very suspenseful I hope Jessie will be okay. I love this story
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Post by jessie on Aug 21, 2010 21:17:25 GMT -6
Chapter 7
They got to the hospital, Jessie was rushed right into surgery. Melinda, Ray, Gary were in shock, Melinda started to cry, she still had Jessie's blood on her hand. She was shaking, when Ray walked over, "we can't lose her". He hugged her, Gary stood by the wall, he felt so guilty. He started to cry, he would never forgive himself if Jessie died . He slid down the wall, he screamed, "God please don't let her die , forgive me" Ray and Melinda walk over they sat beside him, they both held his hand. They all sat with their eyes shut, they couldn't get the moment Jessie was shot out of their heads. Gary looked at Ray, " I thought I was doing the right thing Ray, why did she jump up"?.
"She loved Melinda, if it wasn't Jessie, it would be Melinda in there".
Melinda started to cry, as Sanda and Bobby , and Stacey ran in . Stacey screamed Melinda, she ran into her arms." Oh I was so worried, I would lose you . I love you Melinda, I'm so sorry for saying those hurtful things". Stacey has tears running down her cheek, "Is Jessie ok, please don't say she is gone"?
"It is so bad, she is in surgery, she saved me Stacey". Sanda knelt down, touching Melinda , she hugged Sanda, they both were crying so hard. Bobby walked over hugging Gary, and then Ray, they were never so grateful, that they had each other. Ray walked to the door, where the surgery was being performed. He started to cry, Bobby saw him, he walked over, hugging him. " I just met her, OMG, I can't lose her, she is so sweet. I should have stopped her, but she was so brave".
Bobby has tears in his eyes, " come on lets sit down, we will all pray, she makes it through the surgery."
Bobby walked him over to the others. He sat down, looking down at the ground. Bobby walked over hugging Sanda, they were holding each other so tightly. Stacey looked at Melinda, "OMG Macy, what will happen to her, if something happens?".
"Jessie is going home, don't say that", Melinda shut her eyes, she couldn't stop the tears. It was several hours, they all were getting so worried, when the Doctor walked out. He walked over, " You all are here for Jessie"?
Melinda jumped up, " Yes, please is she ok"?
"He smiled, " She survived the surgery, she will have a long recovery, she will need her friends to help her. She is so lucky, if the bullet was 1 inch to the left, she would have died instantly. She has lost a lot of blood, and was given 4 transfusions already. The next 24 hours will be critical, if we can get her through that, I think she has a great chance at a full recovery".
Melinda hugged Stacey, "she has to be ok".
Sanda and Bobby hug, he held her so tight. Gary walked over to Ray hugging him, " she is going to be fine, she has to be "
Melinda turned, " Can I see her , just for a minute"?
"I will allow 2 people in there only, for 1 minute "
Melinda looked at Sanda who turned, "tell her I'm here, let Ray see her".
"You sure Sanda"?, Ray says
'Yes, she might fight knowing she has a sweet guy like you waiting for her". Ray hugged Sanda, " thank you". He held Melinda's hand, and they walked with the Doctor to see Jessie.
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Post by Sanda on Aug 21, 2010 21:51:58 GMT -6
Great update Jessie. I LOVE how everyone was taking care of each in the waiting room while Jessie was in surgery. I really love how Bobby was taking care of me in this chapter. The six of them will be bonded for life because of what happened at the bank. I love this story soo much. Please update soon.
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Post by melindajo2000 on Aug 21, 2010 23:52:07 GMT -6
I love this chapter, Gary shouldnt feel bad, it wasnt his fault. I like how Melinda and Sanda are going to see Jessie, I hope she will be okay. love this story
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Post by jessie on Sept 4, 2010 13:07:54 GMT -6
Chapter 8
Ray and Melinda walked over to Jessie, she tried to smile. She was hooked up to a lot of machines, but she was breathing on her own. Ray held her hand, and Melinda kissed her cheek. Jessie whispered, "Is Gary ok Melinda"?
"Yes, Gary is fine, and Sanda is right outside this door. They only let 2 people in, she thought you would like to see Ray".
"Yes, we went through so much in there"
'Yes we did, I'm so sorry Jessie", Ray said
"Sorry for what, you were so wonderful, you kept me calm".
"I should have been the one, who tried to save Melinda not you".
"She is one of my best friends, her and Sanda are my Family. OMG Macy who is going to take care of my baby"?
"I will, and Sanda don't worry about her Jessie".
"They said I will be in here a few days, but when I leave I won't be able to do things".
"Me and Sanda will be with you don't worry".
"You and Macy, can come live at my place Jessie". Melinda was shocked, but Jessie smiled, ' Ray a small child would drive you crazy".
"No I love kids, and I kind of fell in love with Macy's Mom".
Jessie started to cry, and Melinda whispered, " maybe this is to much excitement, how about we let you rest for a bit"?
"You will come back later", Jessie shut her eyes, and went back to sleep. Ray touched her face, and they both left to tell the other's how she was. Sanda ran over, "How was she Melinda, is she ok"?
"She was talking but she is very weak, and so pale. She is going to need a lot of help, but Ray offered his place".
Gary smiled, "Really Ray you better clean up than".
"You can help me mouth piece ", Ray smiled,
"She hasn't excepted yet, but it might be a good idea. Her small place, is not very good, and Macy would love the animals on your land".
Sanda smiled, " Just think we would be close to you guys too. We would visit everyday for sure", she hugged Bobby. They all went to the cafeteria for a coffee, and a donut. They were laughing, and it was like everyone knew each other for years. Ray smiled, "Macy what is she like"?
"She is a mini Jessie actually, adorable but she loves to talk".
"Really"?
Stacey laughs, "Yeah all day every waking minute. Why do you do that, what is this"? Stacey was laughing but smiled, "I wouldn't change anything about her".
Ray smiled "When can I meet her"?
"Tonight if you want, I'm taking her home to my place" Melinda says
"What would have happened if we lost Jessie"? Ray says
Gary shut his eyes, "don't say that Ray, I'm sick with guilt already". They went back to the floor, and the nurse said they should go home for the night, she was given a sedative. They left leaving their numbers, and Ray smiled, "Melinda why don't you and your sister, and Sanda bring Macy to my house for a BBQ, we can see how she likes me, and my place"?
"Right now Ray"?
"Yeah it is only 6pm, I'm starving, and Gary and Bobby will be there".
Sanda smiled, " I love the idea, lets do it". Melinda said she would take a cab to get Macy, Stacey went with her. She got the directions to Ray place. Sanda Gary and Ray left to go to Ray's but stopped off to get food first. Ray hoped Macy liked him, because he sure did like her Ma Ma.
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Post by Sanda on Sept 4, 2010 14:03:18 GMT -6
Great update Jessie. I hope that Macy likes Ray. Please update soon.
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Post by jessie on Sept 26, 2010 14:03:57 GMT -6
Chapter 9
Ray, Sanda and Bobby were getting the BBQ stuff ready. They saw a cab pull up, and Bobby ran over paying the driver. Melinda and Stacey got out, and then Macy. She ran over hugging Sanda, and ran back to Melinda who knelt down, "I would like you to meet some friends of ours. "Macy this is Bobby, and this is Ray, your Mommy really likes Ray. This is Gary , they all wanted to meet you "
"When is my Mommy coming home, I miss here"? Macy was about to cry, when Ray walked over. "Hello Macy so nice to meet you, your Mom is getting better as we speak. She loves you so much, and she is going to be home real soon".
"You like my Mommy she is nice isn't she"?
"More than nice, but so are you Sweetie"
Macy smiled, " You have horses Ray"?
"Yes, well I don't own them but I take care of them".
"Oh can I pet one please"?
"Can we eat first, than I will take you over to see them"?
Macy jumped up and down, and ran over to Sanda. "I'm going to pet a horse Sanda, you will come to".
"Yes, we all will sweetie, but first you have to eat".
"Ok, but I only want a little bit".
Melinda walked over lifting Macy into her arms. "You have to eat something, Mommy would be mad at us , if we didn't take good care of her only girl".
'Your her girl to Melinda, so is Sanda and Stacey".
"Yes, we are so we all have to eat, so Mommy doesn't get mad ok".
"Ok can I have a hot dog, with ketchup Melinda"?
"Yes you can, Ray you have hot dog right"?
"Yes, I was going to have a couple of them too".
"You like hot dogs Ray, my Mommy likes them too? She only will eat them on the BBQ."
"Well that is what we are going to do". Bobby started the BBQ, and Gary helped him. Ray and the others were talking to Macy. Ray smiled, " Melinda, Stacey what would you like to drink"?
Melinda wanted a cooler, and Stacey wanted a diet Pepsi. Macy got off of Melinda's lap," can I have a pop to Ray. My Mommy doesn't let me drink much pop, but she isn't here".
Melinda smiled, "Sure one sweetie, Mommy is right to much pop isn't good for little girls".
"Why can Stacey have it she is girl"?
"She is a big girl, but you can have one ok".
"Thank you Melinda, but don't tell Mommy ok".
"I think Mommy would be ok with it Sweetie".
Macy giggled, " I have accidents when I have to much pop". Ray smiled, "I will go get it , want to come with me Macy".
"Ok", she took his hand and walked with him. Stacey giggled, "She likes Ray Melinda, thank GOD about that".
"Macy likes most people Stacey, she only hated Jessie last boyfriend with reason. It took Macy to tell me he hit Jessie, she didn't tell anyone. I was so happy when she finally walked away from that idiot".
"Melinda, I don't know if I can ever forgive myself"
"Why Stacey"?
"When you three left me with Macy, I said horrible things about Jessie in my head. I thought how dare her go out, and I have to watch her kid. I didn't mean it, I love Jessie and Macy".
"Stop that is over, but you have to control that temper girl".
"I know, don't tell Jessie, I was acting that way. She is like a sister, I would hate to hurt her".
"I won't but you will help with Macy, until Jessie is better"
"Of course, I will do anything to help out".
Macy came back, "look orange pop, Ray has all kinds Stacey"
"Yum orange pop, can I have some".
"Ok but you have your own can, I can only have one".
Stacey was laughing, "OK you keep yours, and I will have my own".
Ray came over , "who wants the first hot dog"?
Macy got all excited she dropped her pop, and started crying. She leaned down trying to put it back in the can. Melinda lifted her up, "hey you don't you cry it was a accident. Lets go wash your hands, than you can have your hot dog." Macy put her head on Melinda's shoulder, " I want my pop". Sanda ran over with another orange pop, "Macy wash your hands, and you can have a brand new can ok Sweetie". Tears were streaming down her face, and Melinda wiped them away.
"Thank you Sanda", Macy smiled, but her eyes were still full of tears. Melinda walked into the house, and Stacey, and Sanda started to cry. Bobby and Gary walked over, "Guys it is ok, she is fine".
"She could have lost her Ma Ma".
"She didn't so don't think about that. Lets make this a great night for that little girl, she is missing her Ma Ma like crazy".
Sanda hugged Bobby, and Stacey smiled at Gary, and they all waited for Melinda and Macy to return.
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Post by melindajo2000 on Sept 26, 2010 18:15:36 GMT -6
wonderful chapter Im glad you updated, Macy is cute
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Post by Sanda on Oct 14, 2010 17:26:48 GMT -6
Great update Jessie. Macy is soo cute in this chapter.
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Post by jessie on Feb 20, 2011 15:54:11 GMT -6
Chapter 10
Melinda and Macy came out, and she ran over to Stacey and Sanda, "Look all clean". She walked over, "Sorry Ray for making a mess, I didn't mean to "
'I know it was a accident, now you sit at the table, and you won't spill your pop again ok"?
"Ok". Melinda lifted her up, and she was eating her hot dog, and taking sips of her pop. Gary walked over sitting at the table, with Melinda , Stacey, Sanda and Macy. "Hey guys after supper maybe we can all go for a walk"? Macy put her pop down, "Excuse me, but we are going to pet the horse first, Ray promised".
"Oh can you go with Ray, Sanda and Stacy, and I can keep Melinda with me"?
Macy pouted, "No, I want Melinda with me, you can come too". She picked up her hot dog, Sanda and Stacey laugh, as Gary was shocked, and whispered, "Wow she told me didn't she"?
"Gary she is a child, she is missing her Mom, she is so use to us girls, she needs to feel I'm not going to go away too. It will be different when her Mom is home."
'Ok, she is adorable, but maybe after she falls asleep we can have sometime to ourself"?
Macy whispered, "I can hear you Gary, you are silly". Macy laughed, "I'm not tired yet, and Mommy says Pop makes me hyper, whatever that means"
Gary laughed, "Well Mommy is right you shouldn't have pop". Macy got off the chair, she was jumping, "Oh I have to go to the bathroom badly, hurry". Sanda jumped up lifting her into her arms, running her into the bathroom. Sanda put her down, and she was whispered, "Oh hurry Aunt Sanda, please, I have to go". She lifted her on the seat, and laughed, "Now we know why pop isn't good for little girls"
"No, I didn't go for a long time, I was holding it, because I didn't want someone to eat my hot dog, or take my pop".
"You came in to wash your hands sweetie, why didn't you tell Aunt Melinda you had to go"?
"I didn't want to yet Aunt Sanda".
'Ok lets get your hands clean". They walked back out, Macy ran over, and got in her chair. She touch her can, and smiled, "Good no body drank it, I was scared".
Melinda and Stacey laugh, and Melinda whispered, "Want another burger Sweetie"?
"No, but maybe another pop"
"No more pop, I don't want Mommy mad at me".
"Ok, I just tried". Gary laughed, "God she is something else"
"What do you mean Gary, I'm a little girl"?
"I know it is something people say, when someone is cute like you".
'Oh Gary"
"Yes Sweetie".
"My Aunt Melinda likes you, she thinks your real cute. She told me in the car, and Aunt Sanda said Bobby was a fox, but he doesn't look like a animal. " Sanda coughed on her pop, making everyone laugh. Bobby walked over, "Oh man I'm a fox Sanda, you didn't tell me that".
"Oh this is embarrassing". Bobby touched Sanda's chin, and kissed her. "I like you too Sanda". Macy giggled, "They kissed, only people in love kiss Mommy said that, when we were watching, Young and the Restless".
"Oh Mommy is right, you kiss when your in love".
"Aunt Melinda, why don't you kiss Gary than, you love him right"?
"Young Lady you are going to get us in trouble". Melinda lifted Macy, and whispered, "I'm sorry Gary, she loves to talk". Gary walked over kissing Melinda, and Macy giggled, as Melinda stood in shock, when Gary whispered, "She is right, I sure do love you Melinda".
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Post by melindajo2000 on Feb 20, 2011 23:03:18 GMT -6
aw Macy was so cute lol I lol'd at Sanda calling Bobby a fox and getting busted for it and I loved my part here, thanks for updating. I love this story
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Post by jessie on Feb 26, 2011 14:14:57 GMT -6
Chapter 11
Everyone finished eating, and they all decided to go over to the Stables to pet the horses. Ray lifted Macy, and Melinda was really surprised she took to him so well. Sanda and Bobby were holding hands, while Melinda , Stacey and Gary walked behind. Stacey smiled, "Gary so you really like my sister"?
"Yes I do, she is just what I have been waiting for my whole life"
'Have you been married before"?
"Yes for a brief moment, but that is over, she moved on, and is married now to someone else"
Melinda stopped , "You didn't tell me that"?
"Well it didn't come up in the bank, but I'm happy for her, she is happy. I have something else to tell you, and I'm praying you will be ok with it"
"What is it"?
"I have a daughter she is over at Southfork, Valene let her stay with us, she is 6 , just a little older than Macy. She loves it here she goes to see her Mom quite a lot, but it is best she lives here with me, and my Parents".
"Your wife allowed that, I would never give my child up"?
"She was struggling at first with money, but they are doing well right now. My Parents helped her out, and my Father talked to her, and she agreed to let Lucy live her, but under the circumstances that she sees Lucy whenever she wants too".
'Wow what is Lucy like"?
"Oh spoiled, Beautiful, and a joy to be around. I was going to bring her over but I thought I better explain everything first". Stacey laughed, 'Wow Melinda a boyfriend , and a child fun".
"Go run up with the others Stacey, you are annoying me". Stacey laughed, and ran ahead, Melinda took Gary's hand. "You should have brought her, she is your daughter, and of course, I would be fine with meeting her". Gary smiled, "I know she will love you like crazy". They leaned into each other, and kept walking.
Sanda and Bobby were walking holding hands, and they would stop every once in a while to kiss.
"Bobby I can't believe you live here, it is so beautiful".
"Yes it is, wait until you see the house".
"Do you think your parents will like us all"?
"I know they will Sanda, what isn't there to like"?
"Oh Bobby stop".
"Maybe later, we can go for a drive, just the two of us"?
"Sure Melinda would be fine with that, she is keeping Macy with her, and Stacey anyways, until Jessie is out of the hospital"
"Do you like riding Sanda"?
"Never rode a horse Bobby, I'm kind of scared to try"
"What if you tried one day, with me behind you"?
"Oh I can handle that". she giggled, and he wrapped his arms, around her, and they kept walking.
Ray pointed to the Stables, and Macy got all excited. He walked in, and took her over to show her some of the horses. He smiled, "You don't yell around them ok Sweetie".
Macy smiled, "Be quiet like a library"?
"Well not that quiet, but always watch your fingers. They might think your feeding them, and bite them".
"Oh no". Ray smiled, "Here pat Smokey, he is a friendly guy, and younger than you".
"He is big Ray"?
"Yes he is Sweetie, but he is 3 years old". Macy petted him, and the horse moved closer, and Macy laughed.
"He likes me Ray".
"He sure does Sweetie".Melinda walked over, "It is safe right Ray"?
"Yes Melinda don't worry she is fine". Melinda touched Macy's face, and smiled, "You having fun Macy"
"Yes Aunt Melinda, I wish Mommy was here". She put her arms out to Melinda, and laid her head on her shoulder. Ray whispered, "She is missing her Mom".
"I know, she will be fine in a moment". Macy started to cry, "I want my Mommy". Sanda walked over, "Sweetie she is in the hospital, maybe tomorrow, you can see her"?
"Aunt Sanda, I miss her". Melinda rocked her, everyone felt horrible, but Ray pulled out his cell phone. He dialed a number, and a nurse answered.
"Hi this is Ray Krebbs, I have Jessie's Daughter here. She is missing her Mother can she talk just for a moment, so she can hear her voice"?
"Sure hold on". Ray held on, and he heard Jessie say , "Hello"
'Oh Jessie it is Ray".
"Hi Ray".
"I have someone here who needs to hear her Mommy's voice". Ray heard Jessie start to cry, and he whispered, "Are you ok Sweetie"?
"Yes put my baby on the phone please". Ray walked over, "Macy Mommy is on the phone, she is missing you too". Macy grabbed the phone. "Mommy"
"Baby how are you Macy"?
"I miss you Mommy, you should be here"
"Soon Macy, I love you so much, and I miss you too". Jessie tried not to cry, but Macy whispered, "Don't cry Mommy, I'm being really good".
"You always are baby, you be good for Stacey, Aunt Melinda and Aunt Sanda promise".
"Yes, you know who I really like too"?
"Who".
"Ray, Bobby and Gary they are nice, they gave me a hot dog, and a pop".
"Pop, not milk"?
"One pop but I will have milk before bed ok".
"Ok Sweetie, have fun, see you soon".
"Bye Mommy" She blew a kiss, and whispered, "Did you catch it Mommy"?
"I sure did Sweetie". Macy handed Ray the phone, and he turned, "Jessie you made her day".
"Thank you Ray for everything".
"I will see you tomorrow"
"Can I speak to Melinda or Sanda"?
"Sure he handed Melinda the phone".
"Jessie you ok"?
"Yeah I'm tired, thank you for being a great friend. Tell Sanda and Stacey, thank you too. Give my baby girl a big kiss goodnight from her Ma Ma"
"Will do".
"Melinda"?
"Yes Jessie"
"I love you all you know that right"?
"Jessie you need to rest, your coming home real soon".
"Bye Melinda, the nurse is getting mad".
"Bye", Melinda hung up, and Gary walked over to her. "It is ok, she is going to be fine". Melinda held in tears, she didn't want Macy scared, but she just hoped Gary is right.
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Post by Sanda on Feb 26, 2011 14:58:35 GMT -6
Cute updates Jessie. I LOVE it that I got busted by Macy for calling Bobby a fox. Ray was soo sweet calling Jessie on the phone for Macy.
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