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Post by melindajo2000 on Jun 12, 2010 2:39:46 GMT -6
poor Jessie I hope the Ewings will be nicer to her now. loved this chapter. hope they can get enough food to eat
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Post by Sanda on Jun 12, 2010 11:32:29 GMT -6
Great update Jessie. I hope that the Ewings will be nicer to Jessie now that she has diabetes. Please update soon. Melinda, I LOVE your banner of Niles and Daphne.
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Post by jessie on Jun 12, 2010 12:33:43 GMT -6
Chapter 22
Melinda and Ray walk out to the family, and say she woke up for a few moments.
Miss Ellie asked if she is OK?
"She is very weak and pale, and she knows Jock hates her"
Jock is shocked " I don't hate the child"
"You said horrible things to her Mr. Ewing. She is sweet ,she fell in love with me, that doesn't make her a bad person. She didn't do anything wrong today, she worked really hard, she cleaned those stalls, and I didn't hear her complain once. She is perfect, and I'm scared to death, I can't take care of her properly".
Jock walked over touching Ray shoulder, " we will help you,"
"Thank You but I want to take care of her".
Gary walks over, "Ray you need help, you barely have food for yourself".
" What are you talking about boy"? Jock looks at Gary
" He has bread and beer , in his house nothing else"
"Is that how you live Ray"?
" Yes, because I grab a burger out usually, I didn't have anything really in the house. I was going to go shopping on Thursday".
"Oh Melinda and Jessie were going to go from Saturday to Thursday without eating"?
" Stop yelling at me, I know it was wrong"
"Jessie is going back to her parents, I'm calling them right now"
"No Mr. Ewing, I will do everything right this time, please don't"
"I'm sorry Ray, she is sick, I won't stand here and let something bad happen to her."Jock walks away , and dials Jessie's parents.
"Hello".
"Hi, this is Jock Ewing, I'm calling you about your Daughter"
" OMG , is something wrong with Jessie"?
" She is in the hospital , she collapsed, she has diabetes"
" OMG no, is she ok"?
"She was in a coma, but she talked to Ray, so I think she will be"
Jock was shocked when her Father came on the phone suddenly.
" Mr. Ewing right, what are you doing calling here"?
" Your daughter is in the hospital she has diabetes"
" She is your concern now, stop calling here"
" I know you are a drinker, but are you that heartless"?
" She choose to leave this family to go with that cowboy "
"Yes she did she is 17 years old, she needs her Ma Ma"
" Stop calling here , she is no longer our concern, she is Ray's problem now". He hung up on Jock, who was shocked and so angry, he wanted to hurt the man. He hung up and walked down the hall, and went into Jessie's room. He walked over to the bed, touching her face, she opened her eyes, " Ray"
"No sweetie it is not Ray, it is me"
Jessie was scared, and Jock touched her hand, " I'm sorry Jessie"
"Really"
"Yes, Ray explained everything to us, I know you were helping him. I called your parents and told them what happened"?
" Is my Mom coming"? Jessie was crying
"No Sweetie, you Dad won't let her, you have me and Miss Ellie we will help you"
" No, I want Ray"
" You have Ray he can't look after you like he should"
" No, he doesn't want me either"
" Oh he does Jessie, but I want you to live at Southfork, until you got your diabetes under control."
" I can't I won't leave Ray"
" He can stay with you in the guest room"
" You would allow that"?
"Yeah, and Melinda can stay with Gary, you guys would sneak around anyway".
" Your not as scary, as I thought, you are pretty sweet"
" Hey I'm not sweet, you better watch that mouth of yours" Jock smiles, "Will you do it"?
" Yes, if Ray will".
" He will for you, he would do anything". Jock went to get up, "I better let you go back to sleep"
" Mr. Ewing please keep me company, I'm scared".
Sitting down he held her hand, "Sure I will stay as long as you need me". Jessie smiled, and he sat and talked to her.
Bobby called Sanda,
"Hello Bobby".
"Hi Sanda what did your parents say"?
" They are not happy, but they said I can come, to see Jessie. How is she doing Bobby"?
" Better but she has diabetes, she has to change her whole lifestyle".
"Oh no she has to give herself needles"?
" I thinks so why"?
"She is petrified of needles, she won't do it"
" She will have to Sanda"?
"Bobby she is really scared to get a needle, you really think she will jab herself".
"I don't know, but is Sue Ellen coming with you"?
"Yes, so do you want us to grab a bus or what"?
" No I will call the limo place, it should be there in 1 hour"
" Ok, I will see you at your home".
"Yes, and then me and JR, will bring you to the hospital."
" Thank you Bobby, you really are sweet".
" I can't wait to see you Sanda, don't worry Jessie is going to be ok"
" Yeah with her friends help, bye Bobby". She hung up, and her Parents were standing there.
" Oh, I didn't see you standing there"
"Your really going Sanda, I'm so afraid something will happen"
" Ma Ma, I'm going to see Jessie, she needs me and Sue Ellen"
" Jessie needs her Parents, bottom line".
" I know your disgusted with Melinda and Jessie but they are in love"
"We are not disgusted with them, we are upset with their choices. I love those girls, I have known them for 14years, and I hate thinking Jessie is suffering"
" I know Ma Ma, you were great with them , but she needs me".
"Ok you go see your friend, and call us everyday. Please don't do anything that you will regret. I love you , and I trust you Sanda"
She hugged her Parents , and ran upstairs to get her stuff ready , and call Sue Ellen.
Back at the hospital
Miss Ellie and Ray walked into Jessie's room and were shocked to see Jock there. He turns," she just fell asleep, she is really weak".
" Jock what are you doing in here"?
"Don't worry I wasn't yelling at her, we had a great talk" He smiled, at Ray," lets go outside and talk", Miss Ellie will stay with her. She walked over to Jessie, and Ray and Jock left the room.
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Post by melindajo2000 on Jun 12, 2010 12:43:30 GMT -6
Jock was really nice in this chapter, hope he stays nice to everyone. Jessie's father was really bad. Wonderful chapter
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Post by Sanda on Jun 12, 2010 13:26:27 GMT -6
Great update Jessie. I LOVE how understanding my parents were about me needing to see my friend Jessie who is sick in the hospital. Jessie's father is horrible not letting her mother visit her in the hospital. Jock is very nice to Jessie in this chapter. I hope that he continues to stay nice. Please update soon.
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Post by jessie on Jun 15, 2010 21:40:53 GMT -6
Chapter 22
The Doctor walked in with insulin and needles, planning on showing Jessie how to inject herself. She just woke up, and she saw the doctor put the needles, on the tray. She sat up grabbing on to Miss Ellie who was shocked she was shaking. Dr. White, touched Jessie's shoulder, "you have to learn this or we can't let you go home"
" I can't give myself a needle, I don't like them."
"Jessie look at me this is serious, you have to do this. I want your boyfriend to learn too, and maybe one more person. It doesn't hurt that much, we will get started , and it will get easier , as time goes on". He lifted up the needle, "Jessie screamed, "No, give me pills".
Miss Ellie touched her face, " I will be here with you, calm down".
"No", she was crying, "anything but needles".
Jock walked over, "Jessie you have do this, or you won't get better. You are a young lady now, you and Ray are getting married, and someday will get married, Sweetie you better get use to needles, or you will have a painful, pregnancy. You let the doctor teach you, and Ray, and I will learn just in case". Jock motioned to the doctor, to start, he showed her how to fill the needle up, and was about to insert it, into her legs, Jessie held her breath, as Jock held her hand. He put the needle in, and tears fall down, Jessie face, the Doctor finished, and smiled, " that wasn't that bad was it"?
"Yes, it was," Jock smiled, hugging her, Ray and Miss Ellie looked at each other, they knew Jock was bonding with her big time. The doctor grabbed a orange, and handed it Jessie, and made her practice, injecting the needle, over and over. Ray and Jock also learned, " Jessie smiled, ' Jock touched her face, " you were brave Jessie, I will tell you a secret, I hate needles too. " She smiled, " you Jock"?
" Yes, me, I'm a big baby with needles, but together we will get over this fear. Besides, do you want Ray to inject you, if he is mad at you, he will have fun".
"Ouch" she pouted looking at Ray
Jock look at her face, she is mad at me already.
Melinda and Gary, went for a walk to the park near the hospital. She was so upset, she hated the thought Jessie was suffering . They walked along the boardwalk both smiling at each other. They were holding hands and leaning into each other. Gary walked over sitting on a bench, he looked into Melinda's eyes. " After what happened to Jessie today, I realized life is so unpredictable. Jessie and Ray are getting married, on her birthday, they say. How would you like a double wedding if they don't mind,? I think she might like having you with her, and I know I would be honored to have you as my wife. I know your Parents, and mine might not be happy, but I don't care, I want you Melinda, if you will help me".
Melinda is shocked, she smiled, " You want to marry me Gary".
" I do, if you will have me, we love each other why wait"?
Melinda has tear in her eyes, Gary wiped them away, she smiled.
"What do you say"?
" Yes, I will marry you, and I would love to have a double wedding with Jessie"?
Gary pulled Melinda into his arms, and held her real close. " I love you Melinda, you just made me the happiest man in the world." She smiled, " We are going to make each other happy, I just know it, but Gary I want a ring".
He laughs, "Oh, you will have one, don't worry".
They ran back to the hospital to see Ray and Jessie. They walked down the hall of the hospital, they saw, Sanda and Sue Ellen, and Melinda ran hugging them. " I missed you both, I have the greatest news".
" Is Jessie Ok, she is in with the Doctor"?
"Yes, she is going to be fine, Sanda , Sue Ellen, will you be mine and Jessie's maid on honors"?
"What are you talking about"?
" We are going to have a Double wedding, Gary, asked me to marry him, and I said yes"
Sanda hugged Melinda , and Sue Ellen hugged her too. JR walked over to Gary, "Daddy is going to kill you, but I admire you Buddy".
"Thanks JR, I love her , and I want to spend the rest of my life with her"
" I think she loves you too Gary, just tell Dad that"
Sanda ran over hugging Bobby, " did you hear that, Melinda and Gary are getting married, isn't that amazing"?
" Yes, Sanda, your not upset"?
" No, they love each other, I'm not ready for marriage yet"
" Someday, I will marry the prettiest girl in the world".
" Oh , I thought you were going to wait for me"
" I am silly , you are beautiful, Sanda, I'm so happy you came".
" I had to see Jessie, and you of course"
Bobby leaned down, kissing Sanda, " I will wait forever for you Sanda"
" You won't have to wait that long silly". They both cracked up and hugged.
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Post by Sanda on Jun 15, 2010 21:49:51 GMT -6
Great update Jessie. I am soo happy that Jock and Miss Ellie were with Jessie when she learned how to inject herself with the needle. I LOVED my scene with Bobby in this chapter. Please update soon.
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Post by melindajo2000 on Jun 15, 2010 22:30:16 GMT -6
Wonderful chapter, I'm glad Jessie learned about the needles and I love it that Melinda is getting married. Wonderful update
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Post by jessie on Jun 18, 2010 0:42:51 GMT -6
Chapter 23
2 days later, Jock, Ellie and Ray went to the hospital to bring Jessie home. JR, Sue Ellen, Melinda, Gary, Bobby and Sanda were waiting by the pool for them to come home. Miss Ellie was planning a little BBQ, to welcome her back. JR was sitting by the side of the pool, he laughed," Daddy and Ma Ma are quite taken with Jessie since she got sick. Jessie is good at getting them on her side."
Melinda got mad, "what do you mean she was good getting them on her side?. She got sick JR, she didn't do it on purpose, besides, she is sweet, what isn't there to like"?
" I didn't mean it bad, she is sweet and Daddy is quite taken with her now"
Gary laughs, " he is he learned how to give her needles. We all know how much he hates needles."
" So does Jessie, but she has to do, I guess" , Sanda says
Bobby held her hand, 'want to go for a walk, they might be awhile yet"?
" Sure, if she comes Melinda, tell her , I will be right back"
" Ok Sanda"
Sanda and Bobby walked away, and JR yelled, "stay out of the barn".
" Be quiet JR, that is rude,". Sanda laughed Bobby glared at JR.
Sue Ellen smiles, " JR are you always this annoying"?
" Yeah Darling get use to this sparkling personality"JR laughs
Gary swam over to Melinda who was sitting by the side of the pool. He touched her face, " you don't want to swim"?
" I'm not feeling well Gary, I must be just worried about Jessie"
Gary swam and Sue Ellen walked over," Melinda are you ok"?
Melinda got up, "can you come in the house for a minute"?
" Sure JR, me and Melinda are just going inside for a minute ok"
" Ok hurry back, they should be here soon".
"We will ,"
Melinda walked in the house, and they walked to the living room. Melinda sat down, " Sue Ellen, I'm really scared, and I don't know what to do"?
" What is wrong"?
"I'm so confused, Jessie could have been hurt, did me and Jessie make a mistake"
"I think you rushed things but do you love Gary"
"Yes"
"Than don't worry about it, just be careful Melinda".
Melinda and Sue Ellen walked outside together.
Sanda and Bobby walked and stopped by a tree, it was so hot they sat under it to get some shade. They both sat side by side leaning into one another.
"Bobby do you think everything will work out for Jessie, and Melinda, with Ray and Gary"?
" Yes, I do, they love those girls, almost as much as I love you"
Sanda blushed, and smiled, "I love you too Bobby". He leaned over kissing her, you have to be the sweetest girl , I ever met. You love your friends, and you really have spunk, especially around Marilee". They both laugh.
"Bobby you are coming to the prom still right"?
"Yeah me and you and our dancing shoes"
" Oh stop that", she couldn't stop laughing
" My Mom talked to Melinda's Mom , and they still bought that dress for Melinda, so she could go to the Prom. My Mom talked to Jessie's Mom, her father returned her dress, shoes, and new purse. She can't go to the prom, without the pretty dress. How am I suppose to tell her , that her Father is so cruel? I understand he is mad, but he didn't come when she was sick"
" She has you , Melinda and Sue Ellen, and the Ewings, but Ray is her # 1 right now"
" Bobby do you think your Father will give me and Sue Ellen those jobs"?
" I talked to him, he is thinking about it, I'm sure he will".
Bobby jumped up, helping Sanda up, lets go back to be with your friends, and don't mention that dress yet. I think maybe me and JR can give Ray money to buy her one."
"Bobby Ewing you by far , are the sweetest man , I ever seen"
They kiss, and decide , to walk back, to the rest of them, to see if Jessie, came home yet.?
Jock drove up, and Ray opened the door, helping Jessie. They got out of the car, and she saw her friends. She was weak, but she ran into Melinda's arms, than Sue Ellen's.
"Hi, Guys, where is Sanda"?
" She is with Bobby, she will be back"
Sanda yells, " Jessie your home, she ran over and hugged her.
Ray touched Jessie's face, ' Have a hour nap, then visit with your friends"
" No that is rude, they came all this way to see me"
Jock walked over ," they are here for a few days, they can manage without you for 1 hour"
" Ok Mr. Ewing, I will rest". Miss Ellie took Jessie and Ray to their room. They walked in , and were really impressed with the room. Miss Ellie smiled, " Sweetie, we are having a BBQ, you sleep, and when you get up we will start it "
" Thank you ", Miss Ellie left them alone.
Ray kissed Jessie, " glad your out of the hospital"
"Me, too, I hated it, I'm dying for a nice bath". They walk in and Jessie's, mouth opened, "OMG it is like a pool Ray".
"You go sit on the bed, I will run the bath"?
" Ok thank you", Jessie smiled
Ray winked at her, and ran the water.
Jessie was sitting on the bed, when Miss Ellie walked into the room. "You out, I will help her into the tub". Ray pouted, "See you soon Jessie"
"Bye", Ray left, Miss Ellie smiled, "You two are in love, you promise me you will wait until your married. It is so special when you do Jessie"
"I will Mame, but it is hard". Miss Ellie laughed, "Oh it sure is Sweetie". She helped Jessie to the bath, and pulled her bedding down, so she could rest after.
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Post by melindajo2000 on Jun 18, 2010 9:06:45 GMT -6
This is an awesome chapter, JR made me laugh. I do hope that Melinda is pregnant even though Jock would throw a fit. Love this sotry
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Post by Sanda on Jun 18, 2010 9:25:01 GMT -6
Great update Jessie. I hope that Melinda is pregant as well even if Jock gets mad. I LOVED my scene with Bobby in this chapter. Please update soon.
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Post by jessie on Jun 18, 2010 14:54:51 GMT -6
Chapter 24 Jock and Miss Ellie came out , Jessie was sleeping, they wanted to let her have her rest. . They were sitting at the table, when Jock called Bobby and Gary over. They went and sat with them, when Jock was giving them a lecture, on how he expected them to live by his rules. He told Gary, he was allowed to keep Melinda at the house, and he wasn't going to stop them from sharing a room. Bobby was shocked, when Miss Ellie, smiled, " Don't you ask Bobby, you and Sanda are in separate rooms, so is Sue Ellen. We are already worried about Melinda and Jessie. "
"Yes Ma, Ma, Sanda wouldn't sleep with me anyways"
" Good", Jock smiles
Gary looks at his parents, " I know Ray and Jessie are getting married soon"
Jock stands up, "Jessie shouldn't be getting married so young, but I can't stop them, but I will stop you two from doing it"
" I'm going to marry Melinda Daddy , I love her"
" Well good, but wait a year or more, and be sure it is the right thing to do".
" Great, we can stay here, but you are going to dictate, what we can do"?
" Yes, Gary, this is my home, your not getting married yet"
" I am, why you don't care about Jessie, because Ray is not your son. You don't think it is awful, for them "
" Yes, I do, Jessie is a nice girl, but if Ray leaves her, she will be heartbroken". Miss Ellie yells.
" Me and Melinda will stay at Ray's house, while they are here. I don't want your help".
Jock jumped up, walking into the house, and Miss Ellie stared at Gary.
" You will stay here, and you can share your room. She needs to be here where she can eat, and live properly. You and Ray , don't know one thing about women, and what they need and don't need. You both both better grow up, and take care of those two young girls, and you got them both all confused, because you were their first loves. You grow up Gary, we are trying to help you and Ray, so don't be so downright rude to us"
"Ma Ma , I'm going to marry Melinda, I love her, and that won't change".
" Fine Gary, but if you wait a few months, would that make a difference"? Miss Ellie got up , going into the house to find Jock.
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Post by melindajo2000 on Jun 18, 2010 15:08:03 GMT -6
Wonder what JR is going to do. Will he start stuff with Gary or worse yet tell Jock? This gets better all the time
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Post by Sanda on Jun 18, 2010 16:10:20 GMT -6
Great update Jessie. I wonder what JR is going to do now that he has seen the pregnancy kits. I LOVE this story soo much. Please update soon.
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Post by jessie on Jun 20, 2010 2:03:01 GMT -6
MOST OF THIS CHAPTER WAS DELETED, DUE TO RESTRICTIONS ON THE SITE. I PERSONALLY DON'T THINK IT WAS BAD, BUT I'M DELETTING THE LOVE SCENES. Chapter 25 Ray went into Jessie's room, and sat beside her. He didn't want to wake her. She was so cute, he really did love her, but he was worried he couldn't take care of her , the way he should. Melinda, and Gary walked into the room. Ray stood up, "she is sleeping, she seems better" 'Ray" "Yeah Gary" "It isn't your fault, we all are trying. Dad just gave me a lecure downstairs, about what should happen. I'm going to marry Melinda, and I'm going to be the best husband to her". Melinda leaned into his arms, and whispered, "I know you will Gary."
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