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Post by melindajo2000 on Jun 20, 2010 7:29:19 GMT -6
oh what a place to leave it ... please update sooon. They really should have spoke up and told JR the truth, I didn't like how they sold Jessie out. She has enough problems without worrying about JR. Still wonder what Gary's going to do. Please update soon!
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Post by Sanda on Jun 20, 2010 10:24:26 GMT -6
Great update Jessie. I didn't like how Sue Ellen and Melinda sold Jessie out. They should have told JR the truth. Please update soon.
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Post by jessie on Jun 20, 2010 17:25:06 GMT -6
Chapter 26
Gary and Melinda left the room, and decided to go down , and raid the fridge.
They went to the kitchen, and were looking for something good to eat. Gary walked over hugging Melinda, " we will be fine, I will marry you and we will be happy, and someday, I want to have little kids running around. ".
" You mean that "?
" I mean it, Melinda, I love you". Melinda hugged Gary, she loved him dearly, but she knew their families, were not going to happy they are getting married so young.
Ray sat beside Jessie, and he smiled, when she woke up "are you ok now Jessie,"?
" Yes, I'm feeling better, I'm still tired Ray?
"You have diabetes, it is scary Sweetie"
" Oh I'm so scare of needles Ray, Mr. Ewing is helping me with them.".
Jessie started to cry, Ray laughed, " Oh my sensitive girl, I will learn how to give you, your shots too".
" Ray I love you, but I'm hungry". She smiled , as he touched her face, "lets go get something than.
Sanda and Bobby were coming back from a small walk. Sanda was so quiet, she was worried about her friends. "Doll face, what is wrong"?
"I'm mad at Jessie and Melinda right now"
" You Sanda, you all are so close"
" We still are, we will be fine, I'm just worried about them", she hugged Bobby. They walked over to the pool, she seen Jessie and Ray come out. Sanda ran over hugging her, and Jessie smiled, " where is everyone"?
" I don't know, how are you feeling"?
" Good, I had a great nap", she giggled, and Ray winked at her.
" You both didn't nap did you,"? Sanda scolded her.
"Sanda I did, I'm pretty weak, Ray really is amazing, he is taking good care of me."
" I feel the same way about Bobby, he is real special too"
Bobby called Sanda over, and she went to him. Jessie looked at JR he was glaring at her, she got nervous, and Sue Ellen walked over hugging her.
"Hey you look tired didn't you sleep"?
" Yeah, not really, why is JR staring at me, like he hates me"?
" Don't worry about that, tell me about Ray"?
" He is wonderful Sue Ellen, he really is amazing".
JR walked over, " Yeah he sure is Jessie"
"Are you mad at me JR, why are you acting this way"?
" You and Ray have been nothing but trouble"
Sue Ellen and Sanda were shocked, so was Ray who stormed over. " Shut up JR, she has been through enough"
" Yeah Ray , you fool you will have to marry her , because she is sick, and you would be a idiot to push her away now"
" He doesn't have to if he doesn't want to", Jessie is crying.
Ray grabbed JR , " what is wrong with you stop hurting her"?
" You hurt her , you both should get out of my sight, you both make me sick". JR screamed
Sue Ellen yelled at JR, " stop it now, what is wrong with you"?
" You know Sue Ellen, my family has been through enough with your Friends".
Jessie ran and Ray punched JR, and Jock and Ellie ran out. " What is going on out here"?
Ray yelled, " You all had enough of me and Jessie, don't make this idiot tell us. We will spend the night at my place, and then we will leave . I don't want to be here , not with you sick people". Ray went running after Jessie, Jock yelled for him to stop.
"JR what happened, why is Jessie and Ray upset"?
" Forget it, they should tell you, she should leave here"
Miss Ellie ran over to JR, " that child is weak, and sick why hurt her feelings now"?
" She is a tramp, Ma Ma", Melinda and Gary heard everything, she screamed, " A Tramp, she isn't a Tramp". Melinda screamed.
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Post by melindajo2000 on Jun 20, 2010 17:57:14 GMT -6
I hope that they aren't mean to Melinda and Gary but something tells me they will be, especially Jock. I hope that Miss Ellie stands up for them. I love it that Melinda is pregnant and that they are getting married. JR is being the same old rude jerk that he always is. He shouldn't talk to Jessie the way she is in her condition. Wonderful chapter
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Post by Sanda on Jun 20, 2010 20:17:56 GMT -6
Great update Jessie. I hope that Jock and Miss Ellie aren't mean to Melinda and Gary now that Melinda is pregnant. JR is soo mean and arrogant in this chapter. Please update soon.
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Post by jessie on Jun 21, 2010 1:29:21 GMT -6
Chapter 27
' Gary you and Melinda go to your room, and stay there tonight. I don't think any of you should be together right now. We have had enough of the fighting, it ends now. ".
"I'm going to Ray's house, he is more family than all of you". Gary screamed
" Ray is coming back here with Jessie, she needs me to care for her".
" Did you hear JR, calling Jessie a tramp, she is virgin and she will marry Ray. She isn't a tramp , he made her feel like crap" Melinda was crying.
JR yelled, "I'm sorry everything is to much, you and Jessie are ruining Gary and Ray's lives.
" JR, you had no right laying into her, she was sick". Gary screamed
" Wow Gary do you love Jessie and Melinda now"?
Gary ran over punching JR, and knocking him down. " I love Melinda, and I care about what happens to Jessie. You only care about yourself, your cruel, mean, and I hate you"
Gary grabbed Melinda, and they started to walk to Rays house.
Jessie ran all the way to Ray's house, she was sitting on the veranda crying when he arrived. "Jessie I was calling you , why didn't you stop? OMG your burning up, the doctor said your body , can't take stress right now."
"Ray, I can't go back there , one minute, they like me the next, I'm a Tramp. I can't live there, and I can't go home, where am I going to go"? She was crying so hard, Ray was worried she was so warm. He held her close, "Shh your staying with me, we will leave here , I promise".
" I didn't do anything wrong, but love you. " Why did he turn on me like that"?
" I don't know sweetie, that is JR, he is one cruel, jerk".
"I'm so sorry Ray, maybe I should go home, maybe my Dad will let me"
" No, your not leaving me, I won't let you go now".
" I can't live with them thinking , I'm some cheap girl, because I'm not". She stood up, and fell into his arms, he lifted her up carrying her into the house. He laid her on the bed, and she shut her eyes, and he ran and grabbed a cool cloth, wiping her face. She opened her eyes, " I'm so tired of all this Ray".
" Shh go asleep , I'm right here". She shut her eyes, and he started to cry himself he was so angry, she was treated so badly.
Melinda and Gary walked in, Ray just got Jessie asleep, he walked out to talk to them in the living room.
"What are you both doing here"?
" We want to stay here, for awhile, we had a blow up at the house"
"Why did JR treat Jessie so badly"?
Gary walked over, "He said he is upset about us, but he really doesn't want things to change around here"
" Fine stay , me and Jessie are leaving in the morning". He walked back into their room, and shut the door.
Melinda started to cry, " this is crazy Gary".
" No, it just happened Melinda, it is nobody fault"
Back at the Ranch
Sanda and Bobby were sitting by the pool, she was so upset. She was crying seeing everyone fighting.
"Bobby what is going to happen now"?
" My Dad is angry, everything will be ok"
" You really think so, he was so angry"?
"You know Sanda we really are the smart ones in the bunch"
"Yeah and we are the youngest go figure".
" Want to go riding"?
" Now, after all this happened,"?
" Yeah , what better time, lets get out of here"
" Sure, why not", she smiled, as he kissed her, bringing her close to him.
"Bobby you sure are sweet not like JR"
"He was a jerk today, but he isn't all that bad"
"Jessie didn't deserve that"
"No, she didn't, lets go before Daddy comes out , and sends us to our rooms"
" Ok, " They get up , and run to the Stables.
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Post by melindajo2000 on Jun 21, 2010 5:46:49 GMT -6
I hope Jock comes around and doesnt turn his back on his own son. Hopefully Ray and Jessie dont leave either. Great scene with Sanda and Bobby. wonderful update
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Post by Sanda on Jun 21, 2010 9:44:07 GMT -6
Great update Jessie. I have to agree with Sanda that she and Bobby are the smartest ones of the bunch. ;D My parents would be soo proud of me and Bobby. I hope that Jock comes around and helps out his son Gary. Please update soon.
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Post by jessie on Jun 21, 2010 20:59:38 GMT -6
Chapter 28
Jock was in his room when Miss Ellie walked in. "Jock can we talk we need to discuss what happened downstairs"?
" There is nothing to discuss, they already ruined their lives".
" I know what your saying, and I agree they are to young for marriage, but we can't stop them from making their own mistakes."
" Do I think it is right, no, but I also hate the thought of them out there on their own. Jessie needs us she doesn't have a Father figure, she looked up to you Jock"
" That is not our fault Ellie, Ray and Gary have to care for them "
" They want Jessie having 4 small meals a day, she hasn't eaten probably since this morning. I know I will blame myself if something happens to Melinda or Jessie"
" What do you want me to do Ellie"?
" Come with me to Ray, lets bring the 4 of them home"
" Ellie you really can get me to do anything"
" You know it is right Jock"
"I know lets go talk to the four of them"
Ray fell asleep beside Jessie, who woke him up saying she felt weird.
" Jessie what is wrong"?
" Ray, I haven't eaten all day, I feel dizzy, and sick"
" OMG what is wrong with me, I only have beer. I will ask Gary to get you something ok"
"I'm scared what if something is wrong, he said he would be angry, if I went in again, from not eating"
" OK, don't move, I will ask Gary, to go to the diner down the street. What do you want Jessie"?
"A sandwich would be fine, I don't want you to spend much money".
Ray ran out Melinda and Gary were sitting on the couch. " Guy's Jessie doesn't feel well , she hasn't eaten since 8 this morning it is 9pm, can you go to Ben's down the street get her something"?
" OK is she on a special diet"?
"Yes, Miss Ellie has the papers, what am I going to do"?
" Phone Ma Ma, she will be ok"
"No, get her a sandwich, if she still is sick, I will call her"
" Ray don't be proud, Jessie needs to be careful"
"Your family treated her like crap today, JR called her a Tramp. She doesn't need them, I will care for her".
" You didn't even think about feeding her Ray"
" This is new to me, guys, stop ok"
They heard a bang, and Jessie screamed, they all ran into the bedroom. Jessie was on the floor, she was crying.
" Why did you get out of bed Jessie"?
" I have to go to the bathroom, my legs gave out, Ray"
"Gary go now get her something to eat".
" Do you have money Ray"?
Ray pulled his wallet out of his pocket, take whatever you need hurry up. Melinda walked over, "I'm staying with her".
They all jumped when Miss Ellie and Jock walked into the bedroom.
"What is going on in here"?
Miss Ellie ran over touching Jessie face, " OMG your hot, what happened Ray"?
" Leave we don't need you too, you both are so disgusted with us".
Jessie grabbed Miss Ellie, " I don't feel well".
"Have you ate anything Sweetie"?
" No not since the hospital"
" That was 8am in the morning, Ray what is wrong with you"?
" She was sleeping, OMG this is all my fault"
Jessie looks at him, " No Ray, your wonderful"
Jock looks at Melinda," have you eaten"?
"No, all this mess, has everyone confused"
"Jessie and Melinda are coming home with us, you both can come with them or stay here"
Gary looks at Melinda, " Fine I will come".
Jessie looks at Ray, " your coming right"?
Ray jumped up running out of the house, Jessie screamed, and Miss Ellie grabbed her. Jock stormed out the door chasing after Ray.
Back at the house Sanda and Bobby wondered where everyone was?
"They knew JR took Sue Ellen out, but where was everyone else? They went to the kitchen, and Sanda was going to make something for Bobby to eat. She laughed, " Bobby , I hope you like french toast, because that is my specialty. "
" I love it, " he sat at the kitchen table, and watched her cooking. He smiled, she was singing while cooking, and he thought that was adorable. His Ma Ma does that, and that was comforting thinking Sanda was like her. She poured Bobby a glass of milk and herself one too. She brought over the two plates, and they sat down eating . He could see himself married to Sanda someday, she would be the perfect wife. They finished, and she washed the dishes, and put them away. They walked to the living room, and he asked her if she wanted to watch a movie? She got up looking at the selections, and she laughed, " I can see 4 men live here, but this looks interesting".
Bobby laughs, " you haven't seen "Gone with the wind"?
" No".
"This is my Ma Ma favorite movie, she would love to watch this with you".
" Why can't I watch it with you"?
" It is a romantic film Sanda"?
" Yeah , my favorite, you won't do that for me"?
Bobby smiled, " Hand it over, you know I would".
Sanda sat down smiling, waiting for Bobby to sit beside her. He did and they started watching the movie, and he wrapped his arm around her. She looked at Bobby, and he smiled, " this feels so right Sanda".
" Yes, it does Bobby,", she laid her head on his shoulder , and they watched the movie together.
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Post by melindajo2000 on Jun 21, 2010 21:09:18 GMT -6
great chapter, I hope Jessie is alright
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Post by Sanda on Jun 21, 2010 21:15:02 GMT -6
Great update Jessie. I hope that Jessie is going to be ok. I LOVE it that I was cooking French Toast for Bobby. The movie Gone With The Wind is a loong movie. LOL Please update soon.
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Post by jessie on Jun 22, 2010 0:02:25 GMT -6
Chapter 29
Jock ran outside grabbing Ray just before he got in his truck.
" What are you doing Ray"?
" Going to a bar to get drunk, you all won, I'm letting her go"
" What did you just say, your letting her go"?
" Yes , you people think I'm so wrong for her, well you won"
" Get you butt in there, and tell her".
" You tell her, I'm leaving, I had enough"
" You just played a game with her, you disgusting man, you are fired"
" I never used her, I love her, I wanted to marry her "
" She is sick Ray, she needs to get her self and her diabetes under control, she has a father who is a drunk, and treated her horribly. She loves you, if you walk away now, it will destroy her".
Ray jumped in his truck and drove off. Jock was devastated, he stood staring as his truck left. Gary ran out, "OMG he took off how could he Daddy"?
" Gary can you and Melinda walk to the house, I'm going to talk to Jessie".
" Sure but maybe Melinda should stay here".
" No, go and feed her when you get to the house"
" Daddy, I'm sorry about yelling at you, I do love her "
" I know you do that isn't the problem, can you care for her"?
" I will get a job, and I will marry her."
Melinda walked outside, " Where is Ray"?
"Gone, he left her, I'm disgusted with him, you and Gary go to the house".
" No, she will needs me".
" She will be home soon, go and get something to eat, and rest"
" I'm ok Mr. Ewing".
" Melinda, please you have to take care of yourself, me and Miss Ellie will take care of Jessie".
Gary and Melinda were walking back to the house, and she started to cry," this is such a mess".
"Lets get you to the house, Daddy is right we have to start acting like adults, if we want to marry"
Sanda and Bobby were still watching the movie, and Bobby was falling asleep, and Sanda started to cry in certain parts. She woke Bobby up, " how can you sleep during such a beautiful movie"?
" I have seen this Sanda, and it is a girl movie"
"Bobby what did you think of Scarlett"?
" She was beautiful , spoiled, and a pain in the butt in some parts of the movie".
" Your bad, how would you describe me"?
" Your beautiful, smart, kind, and really sexy in a bikini, and you make the best French toast, I ever tasted. "
"Thanks".
"What do you think of me Sanda"?
" Your handsome, sexy, funny, loyal, and the best kisser in the whole world"
" How many guys have you kissed"?
"Oh Bobby , stop". He laughed hugging her, they continued to watch the rest of the movie. They turned when Melinda and Gary walked in. They sat on the couch, and told them what happened at Ray's.
Sanda jumped up, " Ray left her, where is she"?
" At Rays, Mr. Ewing wanted to talk to her alone", Melinda started to cry, and Gary hugged her. " Melinda you shouldn't be upset, besides, we better get you something to eat".
" I'm not hungry, I'm so angry".
"At Ray"?
" Yeah, Jessie's been hurt so much, she isn't well, this will destroy her".
' My Parents will help her"
" She loves Ray, he left her Gary".
" Bobby lets go to Ray's , I want to help Jessie"
"Sanda stay here, my parents will handle this"
"Fine, I will make you something to eat Melinda, you want French toast"?
Bobby laughs, " Is that all you know how to cook Sanda"?
" I told you it is my specialty"
Melinda smiled, " I would love French toast Sanda , thank you".
Sanda and Bobby went to the kitchen , while Gary and Melinda, laid, holding each other on the couch.
"Back at Ray's.
Jock didn't want to tell Jessie what happen , but he finally walked into the bedroom. Miss Ellie turned, " OMG what took you so long, where is Ray"?
" He left Jessie, he said he gave up"
Jessie just stared at him, and was shaking she laid back, and was crying.
Miss Ellie touched her face, " Jessie your coming back to Southfork, now, you can't stay here"
She wouldn't say anything she turned away from Miss Ellie. Miss Ellie looked at Jock, who walked over," Jessie did you hear Miss Ellie we are taking you home"? She still wouldn't say a word, Jock walked over," I will carry her to the car". He lifted her and she was lifeless in his arms, he looked at Miss Ellie, "she is in serious trouble".
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Post by melindajo2000 on Jun 22, 2010 5:28:21 GMT -6
I hope Ray comes to his senses. Jock seems to be okay so it seems to be Ray and his pride. Great chapter
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Post by Sanda on Jun 22, 2010 8:58:15 GMT -6
Great update Jessie. I hope that Ray comes to his senses. Bobby is sooo cute teasing me about my cooking. Bobby is also soo cute falling asleep during the movie Gone With The Wind. :)I would fall asleep during that movie as well since it is sooo long. Please update soon.
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Post by jessie on Jun 23, 2010 2:16:59 GMT -6
Chapter 30
JR and Sue Ellen got home from their date, and see Jock drive up beside them. He got out of the car, helping Miss Ellie. They opened the backdoor, and lifted Jessie out of the seat, carrying her inside. JR ran over to his Ma Ma, "what happened to her"?
" That child has gone through so much, you made matters worse"
" I did that to her"?
"Ray left her, we don't know where he went, she won't talk to us, we have to call, Dr. Danvers". Miss Ellie ran in the house Jock already took Jessie inside. Sue Ellen looks at JR, " I never should have brought my friends here"
"They made the choice to get involved Sue Ellen"
" I know that but Melinda and Jessie are in trouble. Did you see Jessie JR "?
"Yeah that was scary, she is in bad shape, Ray left her"
Jock took Jessie upstairs, and Miss Ellie pulled the comforter down. Call Dr. Danvers Jock, and bring her a sandwich up to eat".
"Fine " Jock left the room, and Melinda and Sanda ran into the room.
"Jessie your back, we were so worried", she didn't even look at them, but she stared at the wall. Sanda looked at Miss Ellie, " what is wrong with her"?
" She has had a breakdown of some kind, Ray left her"
Sanda and Melinda got on the bed, touching Jessie, who was lifeless.
Melinda started to cry, Miss Ellie got up, "you go rest, both of you, everyone is needs to help her get through this"
" Is she going to be ok"?
" I hope so , I can't believe Ray, he caused this"
Jock walked in with a sandwich, he walked over touching Jessie face. " Sweetie, take this, you have to eat, you have diabetes, you remember what the doctor said"?
Jessie turned away, and Jock pulled her back, "Jessie eat this".
She was crying, and Miss Ellie thought that was at least something. Jock sat her up, "eat now".
Jessie screamed scaring Jock, who held her face, " listen to me, we won't desert you like Ray, I promise".
" I want me Mom"
Miss Ellie grabbed her purse, looking for Jessie home number. She dialed it and prayed the Mother answered.
"Hello".
" Oh Thank God this is Miss Ellie, your daughter needs you right now"
" What is wrong, what happened "?
" Ray left her, she is devastated, she wants her Mom". Bernice was crying , "OMG my baby, let me speak to her". Miss Ellie was about to hand her the phone, when Thomas came on the line.
" What happen now, you guys don't want Jessie anymore".?
" Please put her Mother back on the line, she needs her Mother's voice right now"
" No, I told you it was your responsibilty now, not ours".
" She has diabetes, she is hurting real bad, and the man she was involved with left her".
"OMG you guys make me sick, she was used up, and now you want to throw her back here. I told her to be a good girl, she disobeyed me, we will never accept her back here".
" Your a disgusting man, if something happens to her it is your fault" Miss Ellie was shocked the phone went dead.
"Miss Ellie looked at Jessie who was staring, " won't my Mom talk to me"?
Miss Ellie started to cry, " Your Father won't let her Sweetie".
Jessie is shaking, " I have no one".
Melinda and Sanda were crying ,"you have us Jessie".
Jessie hugged them, but was crying so hard, Jock and Ellie were so upset. He pulled Jessie to him, " please eat this, and than the doctor will be here".
"I'm not hungry, I will get sick"
" You will get sick if you don't eat".
She took the sandwich, and stared at it, " Ray is a liar "
" I really don't think so Sweetie he is angry"Miss Ellie says
" It was my fault for getting sick"
" No, he was in over his head, you will be ok Jessie"
She dropped the plate on the floor, and Jock touched her face, "you did that on purpose".
"My life is over , I don't care anymore", she laid back and shut her eyes.
Sanda and Melinda couldn't believe what they heard, they held each other. They stayed with her , when Miss Ellie and Jock walked out in the hall to talk to the doctor.
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