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Post by melindajo2000 on Jun 6, 2010 22:26:19 GMT -6
great chapter, I love the love scenes, too bad Jock has to be that way. I hope Jessie is okay. I loved Sanda calling a witch and JR saying that about Marilee having her name on the bathroom walls lol
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Post by Sanda on Jun 6, 2010 22:44:13 GMT -6
Great update Jessie. I LOVE it that I got to punch Marilee. I am soo glad that Bobby thinks it is sexy that I punched out Marilee. I hope that Jessie is going to be ok. Please update soon. I really LOVE how you write me and Bobby in your stories.
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Post by jessie on Jun 7, 2010 23:51:58 GMT -6
This chapter is wild
Chapter 17
Jock walked into the guest room putting Jessie down. Miss Ellie ran in "what happened to her"?
" I found her and Ray they were in each others arms. I called her a Tramp she went crazy, and fainted"
"Jock leave, I will take care of her".
"Ellie she won't wake up, what is wrong with her"?
" I don't know this is to much for a 17 year old. What is wrong with Ray"?
"Gary brought her to Ray Ellie, he is going to get it"
"Go to the BBQ, I won't be down for awhile". Jock walked out shutting the door. Miss Ellie walked over, " Jessie look at me"
Jessie looked at Miss Ellie" I love him, I'm not a Tramp"
" I'm sorry my husband said that, he is from the old school. Your parents are going to be so angry Jessie"
" I love him, he loves me , don't tell my Parents. They will never let me near Ray again, I swear we didn't do anything"
"Sweetie I have to you are underage"
Jessie turned away from her, Miss Ellie touched her arm. " I promise you , everything will be ok".
Melinda walked into the room, "is she ok"?
" No, she is upset, "
Melinda walked over, "Jessie you will be ok, Ray does love you , he won't give up on you"
" Melinda, that is not helping anything"
" I will stay with my friend, she needs someone who understands what she is going through".
Miss Ellie stood up, " OMG you slept with Gary, didn't you?"
Melinda jumps up, "No we didn't,"
Jessie sat up looking at Miss Ellie, who yells "this is to much, now my son, did something so awful". She went storming out of the room, screaming his name. Melinda starts to cry, " OMG what have I done, she thinks Gary made love to me".?
" OMG Melinda you seen what Jock did to Ray, what will he do to Gary"?
Sanda and Sue Ellen walked into the room, " what is going on"?
Jock walked into the room with Gary, dragging him . "Did you slept with Melinda"?
Sanda and Sue Ellen held on to each other. Jessie jumped up, " no he didn't you big bully, what are you going to do kill your own son. Me and Melinda are not rich, so we are some trash in your eyes".
He let go of Gary, he walked over to Jessie. " What did you just say to me"?
" You are a bully, you hit Ray , how dare you"?
Melinda ran over , " No Jessie be quiet, "
" No, I'm not going home, I'm staying with Ray".
" Get your things, I'm taking you home right this minute".
" I'm not going, I'm going to be 18 on June 18, you can't stop us than"
Miss Ellie walked in, " Jessie your not staying here with Ray".
" Stop me", Jessie ran out of the room, everyone was shocked as Jock went after her. Gary stood up, " No Daddy leave her alone". He ran out , as Miss Ellie grabbed Gary, " Stop you all are out of control. "
" I'm in love with Melinda, she is 18 , I will marry her , just like Ray asked Jessie".
Miss Ellie let go of Gary, as he ran down the stairs to find Jessie and Melinda. Jessie ran outside, " JR was shocked seeing Jock chasing her as she was running toward Ray's place. JR starting running, screaming at his Father to stop. Jessie, stopped, she saw Ray walking toward them, she wanted to run, Jock grabbed her. " Stop Girl, you and Ray are through, you will go home and eventually find someone else. "
Ray walked over let go of her Jock," fired me , I don't care"
" What you want to be fired boy"?
" I love her, and I love you, but she means the world to me". Ray has tears in his eyes, Jock is staring, as Jessie was crying.
Miss Ellie and the rest of them walk over. Jock let go of Jessie she ran into Ray's arms. He lifted her , I 'm not letting you go promise". Miss Ellie walked over to Jock, " what are you doing"?
" We will talk to her parents, they belong together". Jock started to walk to the house, he walked over to Gary, "at least Ray was man enough to tell me to my face, you let me praise you , I'm ashamed of you"
" I love her Daddy we kissed, that is all. I didn't tell you because Jessie is right, your a bully"
" You and Ray think your so amazing, and you can care for these 2 girls. You both explain to their parents, and if they let you have their daughters, you can live in Ray's cottage."
" Your kicking me out of the house"?
" Yes, no son of mine will disrespect me". Jock walked into the house, and Gary grabbed Melinda, "you heard him, we can be together, at Ray,s if you want me".
Ray smiles, " we will be cramped but all we need is 2 bedrooms right".
JR walks over, " Ray, you think you can take care of Jessie and yourself"?
" Yes, JR, all I have to do is talk to her parents".
" Ok you and Gary , really blew it Dad is mad. Gary he won't help you , do you really want this"?
" Yes, I will find a deceit job and me and Melinda will get our own place. I will live with Ray for now, it will be fun the four of us".
Sanda runs over, " No, Jessie, Melinda, your going to leave me and Sue Ellen"?
Melinda walks over , " No we are not leaving you both, we will always be friends. I know this sounds stupid, but I can't live without Gary".
JR laughs, " You 4 had sex, you are to much"
Gary yells, " We disn't have sex, so show them respect".
Sanda walked away and Bobby ran after her. She started to cry,
"Sanda what is wrong"?
" We came for the weekend, and now I'm losing 2 friends. They made love to Ray and Gary, and they are giving up their lives for them. If that is what happens, forget it".
Bobby smiles, " Sanda you are to sweet, your upset your not going to be with them right".
"Yeah, and I won't see you, I'm not stupid Bobby. You won't wait for me, you will be with someone else next week probably"
" I won't , I'm not like that, I'm a one woman man"
Sanda laughed, " What did you say"?
"I'm a one woman man"
" You are to sweet Bobby, " I love you".
" You know what Sanda, I have a great idea"
"What"?
"You want to be near Melinda and Jessie right"?
" Yeah, I'm not marrying you yet Bobby"
" I know that silly, my Dad has a program for young adults going to college".
" I'm starting college next september why"?
" You can work on the Ranch, you can see them and me"
" You think he would give me a job"?
" He loves me," Bobby laughs, " he will for me"
Sanda jumps into Bobby's arms, " your amazing Bobby"
" Hey I'm being selfish, I'm doing this for me"
" Oh Really , I thought you were doing it for me"?
" Well both of us really"
" You know Bobby , Jessie's and Melinda's parents won't let them stay here".
" Your probably right, but if they do, I will talk to Daddy about that job"
" What about Sue Ellen"?
" I'm sure JR, will have her here all the time, he gets anything he wants".
" Your Daddy , he is really mad".
" Yeah but he will come around, he will let Gary back home".
"With Melinda"?
" She might have to live with Ray and Jessie"
" They can be three's company, and Ray can be Jack". Sanda laughs
" Too funny Sanda, lets go get something to eat, all this drama is to much for me".
" Me too, are we the only normal ones Bobby"?.
" I think so or we are the crazy one's," They both laugh, holding hands, and run to get something to eat.
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Post by Sanda on Jun 8, 2010 0:04:46 GMT -6
Great update Jessie. You were kidding this chapter was wild. I LOVED the scene between me and Bobby at the end of this chapter.
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Post by melindajo2000 on Jun 8, 2010 18:30:36 GMT -6
this was a wonderful chapter, I love Melinda living with Gary and that he stood up for her to Jock. I'm glad they will be living with Ray. I lol'd when Sanda said it would be like three's company. I hope you update this soon. Bobby was funny too when he said JR gets whatever he wants. Nice job
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Post by jessie on Jun 8, 2010 20:31:35 GMT -6
Chapter18
Miss Ellie ran in the house, grabbing Jock's arm.
"What are you doing Jock, you said they can live together"?
"Ellie you saw how they were acting, maybe living together they will learn it's not easy".
" You are putting Gary out of the house"?
"Yes, Ellie, we are going to take them all home. Ray and Gary, will talk to the parents, I'm sure we won't be returning with them"
" Melinda is already saying, she is 18 she can do what she wants. Jessie threatened suicide, so I think we have a problem"
"Ellie lets go the BBQ, is over, we will get this over with. JR can drive Sue Ellen and Sanda, and we can drive Jessie,Ray, Melinda and Gary".
" Ok lets go, this has been a weekend of hell"
They walk outside, and tell everyone it is time to go. Everyone put their stuff in the car, and JR and Bobby left with Sue Ellen and Sanda. Jock yelled, "you 4 in I'm really not in a great mood, so hurry up. They all got in, and Miss Ellie and Jock sat in the front. Everyone was quiet, when Jock turned around, you better prepare, yourself for your Parents, disappointment". Jessie laid her head on Ray's shoulder, she knew her Father was going to be nasty, especially if he was drinking. Melinda held Gary's hand when he touched Melinda chin, Jock yelled, " not in my car boy".
Jessie laughs, "Mr Ewing how young were you when you married Mrs. Ewing"?
" She was 18, and I was 21, but we were mature"
" We are too, Sir," Ray says
" Oh you both met these girls Friday, and slept with them by Saturday, and your in love, very mature,"
Melinda shook her head, Gary yelled, "Daddy you are showing no respect, we didn't make love, how many times do we have to say it"?
Jock yelled, " Gary, I will throw out of this car, if you disrespect me again".
" Sorry"
They drove for hours, no one said anything. They stopped at Melinda's house first. Jock yelled telling them all to get out of the car.
" Why me and Ray Sir"?
" Because her parents, might want to know, Melinda isn't the only stupid girl"
" Your rude, "
" Yeah and your stupid, get out of the car". Ray jumped out, " Jessie don't yell back at him, he will get worse". They walk up to the door. Melinda opened the door, her parents stood up smiling. They saw the look on everyone's face, they sat down. Jock moved Melinda towards her parents. "Tell them what happened now Melinda"
"Mom, Dad, I'm sorry, but I love Gary, we want to be together.". Her parents were speechless, and they both stare at Gary.
"Mom, I'm 18 years old, I can do what I want with my life. I want to go back to Southfork, and live with Gary. We plan to marry one day, I promise I will be ok"
Her Father stood up, " you slept with this man, after knowing him, 2 days"?
" No you don't understand, I love him, so much. We haven't made love".
"I'm ashamed of you Melinda, what happened to you"?
" I'm in love, I'm going to be with Gary, I want your blessing".
" Get out of this house, I don't want your Sisters, to see you like this".
Jock walked over, you want her to leave"?
The father ran at Gary, " you animal, what did you do to her"?
" I love her , I'm sorry your upset".
"You rich people, don't care that your boy, ruined her life"
" I'm sick my Son slept with her,"
Melinda was crying, "OMG we didn't sleep together"
Her Mother walked over, "Melinda no, please don't' leave us"
" Ma Ma I love you, but I have to, I love him". She grabbed her daughter, crying making Miss Ellie cry. Melinda pulled away, and ran outside, her Father walked over to Gary. " You hurt her , I will kill you".
" I won't promise", he walked back and ran after Melinda". Jessie ran out , and Jock looked at her parents, " we will watch over her". They turn their backs away from Jock and Ellie". They walk out and get in the car, and drive to Jessie's house. She was shaking so bad, Ray whispered, " you will be ok"
They got to Jessie's house, they walk up to the door. She walked in, her Mother smiled, " Jessie, I missed you honey". Jessie could see her Father was drunk , like usual, they just stared at each other.
"Jessie who are these people".?
" Ma, Ma, I'm going back with them, I'm going to marry Ray"
" What did you say"?
" I love him Ma Ma, he cares for me, and he was wonderful".
Jessie Father jumped up, " you what girl"?
" Daddy calm down, I want to marry Ray"
" You left Friday, and you slept with Ray, how old is he"?
Ray walked over , " I'm 22 Sir, I didn't make love to your Daughter"?
" She is 17 you sick animal, where was the Supervision"?
" Daddy he isn't sick, he loves me, we were good ".
" Mike, slapped her knocking her to the floor. Jock walked over, do that again, and I knock you to the floor".
" She is my daughter, I gave her to you 1 day, and you turned her into tramp".
Ray walked over helping Jessie up, " Daddy you can call me any name you want. Ray is a deceit man, I really believe he loves me, I'm going to live with him".
Mike walked over to Jessie, " you want to live with him"?
"Yes, he will marry me when I'm 18 ."
"Go you are no longer my daughter, when he hurts you don't you dare come running home to us. "
" I won't I would rather run to the streets, it is better than watching you drink yourself to death, and making everyone miserable". Michael grabbed her , " you are dead to me", he pushed her right into Jock's arms. "She is your daughter now, that's if you want her"?.
Miss Ellie was devastated , " Jessie lets go", she pulled her into her arms".
Bernice ran over, " Jessie, I love you baby, don't leave"
" I got to Ma Ma", she hugged her crying. Miss Ellie could see Mike was getting more upset, "come on, Jessie lets get home"
Ray put his arm around Jessie they walked out, Miss Ellie looked at Bernice. " I promise you , she will be ok, you can visit her anytime you want".
Michael yelled, "Get out of our house".
Jock stares, " I never understood, why Jessie became so attached, to Ray. I fully understand now, she wanted to get away from you". They both left and drove the 4 of them home.
JR dropped Sue Ellen off, she was so upset, she kissed JR goodbye. He touched her face, " I will see you soon, don't worry."
" I lost my friends JR"?
" No you haven't if they return to Southfork, that will be more reason to come and visit. She hugged JR, and they kissed goodbye, as she ran into the house.
JR drove Sanda to her house, and Bobby got out. He walked Sanda up to her door. He touched her face, " I will miss you Sanda, and I will call you every night".
"I don't want to let you go Bobby"?
" Oh your not letting go of me , I will get you to Southfork for the summer promise". He wiped the tears from her cheek, "we will have our day Sanda, " I will marry you one day"
"Marry me, you really mean that Bobby"?
" Oh yes", he brought his lips to hers, and they kiss.. She wrapped her arms around him. He smiled, " remember , I'm your escort to the prom"?
" I can't wait Bobby". He turned waving, he ran to JR's car. He opened the door. " I love you Sanda, you remember that"
" I will " , he got in and drove off, she stood watching his car leave. She started to cry, but she knew everything would be fine, she trusted him , he wouldn't let her down. She ran in the house, and dreaded telling her Parents what happened with Jessie and Melinda".
Jock finally got home at 10pm, he went right to Ray's place. He turned, your home good night. They all got out, and Jock drove off. Miss Ellie looked at Jock, " should we leave those girls there Jock"?
" Yes, they have to learn the hard way, love isn't easy".
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Post by Sanda on Jun 8, 2010 20:40:29 GMT -6
Great update Jessie. I can't wait to hear what my parents have to say when I tell them that Melinda and Jessie slept with Gary and Ray. I felt bad for Jessie and Melinda's parents when they were told that their daughters had slept with Gary and Ray. Please update soon.
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Post by melindajo2000 on Jun 8, 2010 21:06:09 GMT -6
great chapter, thanks for updating again. I hope everything works out for everyone. At least Jock defended the girls when they needed it the most. I think he does care and will come around when he gets to know the girls. I hope he will forgive Gary.
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Post by jessie on Jun 9, 2010 23:34:37 GMT -6
Chapter 19
Sanda went into the house, and her Parents both hugged her. She sat down, and started telling them about everything.
"Mom, Melinda and Jessie, are living at Southfork, with Ray and Gary"
Her parents are speechless, and Sanda went on and on about her and Bobby. Her Father jumped up, "Sanda what do you mean Jessie and Melinda are living at Southfork with 2 boys"?
"Men Daddy".
" Men ok their parents are allowing that"?
" Melinda is 18, they can't stop her, and Jessie is really in love".
"Sanda you did not sleep with anyone did you"?
" No, Bobby is so nice, Daddy, he is a gentleman. Ray and Gary are nice too, Melinda and Jessie didn't sleep with them. Ray going to marry Jessie on her 18th birthday".
" OMG this is crazy, you left on a friday, and by Saturday night all this took place"
" You both would love Bobby, we are going to get married someday. He said he would wait forever for me. I think I will wait until , I marry. Bobby said the Ewing family have a program, where they help out young people, during the summer, to make money for College. You said I have to have a job, I want to work there , and I can be close to Jessie and Melinda".
"Sanda what kind of family would allow all this to happen"?
" They are good people Ma Ma, they couldn't stop love"
" Sanda Jessie and Melinda can't love these guys, this quick. They both will be hurt bad, and their lives are ruined now".
" They are in love Dad, and I'm in love with Bobby. I won't do anything , I don't want to do. I want to work at the Ewing Ranch, please don't say no".
" Go to bed Sanda we will talk tomorrow ok"
" OK Ma Ma, Bobby is going to take me to the Prom. You will love him, he is perfect. Sanda ran upstairs to her room. Her parents sat down, trying to absorb what they just heard.
Sanda called Sue Ellen, letting the phone ring.
"Hello"
"Sue Ellen , how did you Mom take everything"?
" Not great, I didn't say everything"
" Bobby told me about this program, where you work at the Ranch, ask JR to get you in too"
"I don't know if my Mom will after hearing what Jessie and Melinda did"?
" Sue Ellen are you mad at Jessie and Melinda, they are in love"?
" No, I miss them, who would have thought they would do this"?
" Do you think it will work out for them"?
" I hope so but I have a feeling no".
"Goodnight Sue Ellen, I better go to bed"
" Talk to you tomorrow, Sanda goodnight, they hung up. Sanda sat on her bed, looking at the ceiling and all she could think about was Bobby.
Back at the Ranch,
Ray, Gary, Melinda and Jessie were sitting on Ray's porch". Melinda was sitting on Gary's lap, and Jessie was standing looking over the land. Ray walked over , Jessie what is the matter"?
"My Mom, did you see her face, my Dad is going to blame her"
"Why"?
"He didn't want me to come here, she talked him into it"
" Do you regret doing this, I would understand if you miss your Ma Ma"?
"I do, but I dont' regret this", she walked into Ray's arms. He smiled , do you want to go to bed. She blushed, he whispered," to sleep girl"?
"Sure, what about them"?
" They have their room, I'm sure they want to be alone"
" Goodnight Melinda, and Gary, we are going to bed".
" Night," Ray and Jessie went inside, leaving Melinda and Gary sitting in the porch swing.
" Melinda are you ok"?
" Yeah I feel bad your Father is so mad at you".
" He always is , so don't worry about him".
" Gary you truly want me here right"?
" Are you kidding, I'm so happy, you want this as much as I do". She smiled, she leaned into him, as they kiss. Gary got up, lets go to bed, this is our first night sleeping together "
" Oh funny Gary", they walked in, locking the door. They walked to their room, and went inside.
Ray was wearing his boxer, Jessie smiled, " I don't have pajamas, I left my bag in Jock's car".
He walked over smiling ," do you need pajamas sweetie".?
" Oh yes, I'm not sleeping without them".
" Oh you are sweet Jessie"
" I'm sorry, you think I'm a child, this is new to me"
" I don't think your a baby, Sweetie, you are my girl. I know what you can wear" he ran to the closet grabbing one of his plaid shirts." We will go out and buy some pajamas tomorrow". She smiled, and ran into the bathroom to change, he laughed she was shy . She walked out, it is big but comfy. She walked over, "what do you think"?
"Oh sexy, he pulled her close, she brought her lips to his.
"Ray can I ask you something"?
"Anything Jessie"
" I know I'm not like women you dated in the past. I don't bore you do I"?
Ray stood up, lifting her into his arms, "Bore me, are you crazy". He laid her back, you go to sleep girl, it was a long day". She snuggled under the blankets, he got in beside, her.
"I'm so sorry,"Jessie smiled
Hey what are you sorry for"?, he smiled looking at her.
Jessie whispered, "That I'm not ready yet Ray"
"I told you, I can wait forever, but our wedding night will be perfect". Jessie smiled, as she snuggled in his arms, and they drifted off asleep.
Melinda and Gary were changing , Melinda in the bathroom, Gary in the room.
She walked out, and got in bed, he pulled the blankets over her. He laid on top of them, to make her more comfortable. Melinda smiled, "This is strange, but I like being here with you Gary.".
He touched her face, and kissed her cheek, "Sweet Dreams Angel". She laid in his arms, and fell asleep.
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Post by Sanda on Jun 10, 2010 9:38:54 GMT -6
Great update Jessie. I am happy that my parents were understanding about what happen at Southfork. I am happy that they didn't scream at me. Please update soon.
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Post by melindajo2000 on Jun 10, 2010 11:16:46 GMT -6
great chapter, I'm glad everyone was happy in here; I'm glad Sandas mom was nice to her. This chapter was perfect. Please update soon
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Post by jessie on Jun 10, 2010 16:26:13 GMT -6
Chapter 20
The next morning Ray woke up to Jessie sitting up staring at him.
"How long have you been up"?
" 2 hours, I can't sleep, but I'm so tired".
" Your worried about your Mom"?
" Yeah, but I can't call her , my Dad might answer".
" I have to go to work for a few hours Jessie"
" On Sunday Ray"?
" Yeah , remember , I have you and me to take care of now".
" I will find a job, but I don't know where to start"?
" You don't worry we are fine right now, come on lets shower ,and get breakfast".
"Shower you go first Ray"?
" Yeah, ok Sweetie" . " He smiled, he kissed her cheek, and whispered, "you can sleep a little longer".
She smiled, " ok, I would like that."Ray ran into the bathroom, Jessie held his pillow , and shut her eyes.
Ray came out, and he touched Jessie's arm. "You go in now, than we will go out, and make breakfast". Jessie got up, running into the shower, and than came out, and got dressed.
Melinda and Gary were in the kitchen when Ray and Jessie came out. Ray went to the fridge, "sorry guys, I only can offer you guys toast. I get paid Thursday, we will get more stuff for breakfast". Jessie took the bread and got out the toaster. She put the four slices in the toaster, she got down some plates. She grabbed the toast , and buttered them bringing them to the table. She put more toast in, and asked if everyone wanted peanut butter?
"Gary was playing around, " Jessie you sure are a great cook".
" We only have toast sorry".
Ray glared at Gary, " why did you say that Gary"?
" I'm kidding, you would think you both would be relaxed after your shower sex".
Jessie cried, "We didn't have a shower together".
Jessie dropped the toast, bending down to pick it up . " OMG Ray, I'm sorry, I won't have any,"
Ray got up picking up the toast, " put some more in Jessie, don't worry about it".
" It is ok, I'm not hungry".
" Jessie stop being sorry for everything OK", Ray yelled
Jessie ran into the bedroom, Melinda and Gary stare at him. " This is your fault Gary, why did you start this crap this morning"
" I was joking around Ray"? Ray walked away , and went to Jessie.
"What Melinda, your mad too"?
" Yeah do you want to be kicked out of here too"?
" Jessie is to sensitive"
"Your right, so why try and embarrass her"?
"Melinda I'm sorry, I just make jokes, and think everyone will be ok about it. "
" Stop please Gary , this is scary for me and Jessie".
"Sorry Melinda , I will apologize to her , when Ray leaves for work".
" OK eat your toast since, you made everyone else lose their appetite".
"More for me than"
Jessie sat on the bed, Ray walked in, " Jessie I never should have yelled at you".
Jessie was crying", Everyone thinks I'm making out, but I'm not"
" So who cares"?
" Me, he doesn't think I'm proper".
Ray smiled, " he is here with Melinda he can't judge you Sweetie"
You think so, I'm not cheap"
"No you are so sensitive Jessie"
" I always have been, I'm sorry".
Ray laughs, "Now your sorry for being sensitive"?
"Yeah", Jessie smiles, " Can I come to work with you Ray"?
" I'm cleaning out the stalls, and feeding the horses, you won't want to do that"
"Yeah, I can help you, and we can go to the pond after"
" Ok you can help, it will pay for the bread you wasted".
Jessie put on her jeans and blouse, " Ray, I have to get my bag, from the Ewing's".
" After we get the work done". They walk out and go to the stables.
Melinda and Gary, were just laying around, when the phone rang.
"Hello'
" Melinda it is Sanda, how are you and Jessie"?
"Great Sanda, and you, was your parents ok"?
" Yeah they were shocked about you and Jessie"
" I'm shocked to Melinda, but we are going to be ok".
" Have you seen Bobby "?
"No he is at the main house, we are at Ray's home"
" Is it nice Melinda"?
" Surprisingly it is nice, but small, Jessie is out with Ray now"
"Really doing what"?
"Can you believe it Jessie is cleaning up horse stalls, that is gross".
" I might be doing that this summer, so stop it".
" I miss you Sanda, I hope you can visit sometime'
" I might be coming all summer, if Bobby can talk to his Father"
"I can use one of those jobs, Sanda, to help Ray out"
" What's wrong"?
" There is no food here, except beer , bread and peanut butter".
"oh Man Jessie hates Peanut butter".
" She didn't eat anything, call again Sanda, tell Sue Ellen we miss her"
" I will, love you both, and be careful Melinda".
" I am Sanda, don't worry about me". They hung up, Melinda walked over, "she said there is jobs here for the summer"
"Yeah Daddy always hires some students, to help them out"
" Maybe, I can get one of those jobs"?
" Oh Melinda Daddy is mad at us, probably not"
Melinda sat beside Gary, and laid her head on his shoulder.
Sanda called Southfork, and was put on hold. Bobby came to the phone , and Sanda said "hi".
"Sanda, I have been thinking of you all night"
"Really Bobby"?
"Yes, I was going to phone, late last night, but I thought I might wake your parents".
" You probably would have, they were ok, but shocked about Jessie and Melinda".
"Did you tell them about me"?
" Yes, Bobby, and you get to meet them, the night of the Prom"
" I can't wait, JR is going to take Sue Ellen there too".
" I don't know if I can wait that long to see you Bobby"?
" It is only 6 days away Sanda , we can wait. I will call you every night, and we can talk together."
" I would love that Bobby".
"Sanda I talked to my Dad about that job"
"You did, what did he say"?
"Well, they are ok about it Sanda, it is your Parents you have to sell"
"OMG really when can I start"
"Anytime, but how about , I bring you to Southfork, after the Prom."
"I will talk to my Parents, they have to let me go".
"Call you tonight , we can talk longer"
" Goodbye Bobby, I love you"
"Bobby, can I ask you one favor, but don't tell Ray, or Gary"?
"What Sanda"?
" Ray is struggling Bobby, there isn't much food at the house. Can you help them out just a little bit"?
" Sure Sanda, you really are a Sweetheart"
" No Doll face, remember,", they both laugh, and hung up with each other.
Back at the Ranch,
Jessie was helping Ray, and he couldn't believe how hard she was working. He walked over, "Jessie great work, we might get to the pond earlier than we expected".
Ray wrapped his arm around her, kissing her , and smiling. "You are so warm, are you feeling oK"?
"I'm fine, it probably is me working so hard, she laughed.
He touched her face, " we will cool off at the pond". They both hugged each other, and jumped when Jock and Ellie walked into the stables'
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Post by Sanda on Jun 10, 2010 17:13:07 GMT -6
Great update Jessie. Gary and Melinda and Ray and Jessie are going have a rough time making ends meet. I LOVED it that I wanted Bobby to help out Gary. Melinda, Ray, and Jessie. That would totally be me in real life.
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Post by melindajo2000 on Jun 10, 2010 19:09:13 GMT -6
great chapter, Jessie is going to develop a thick skin living with them Ewing boys lol. I love Jessie and Ray together. Keep updating please
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Post by jessie on Jun 12, 2010 1:45:23 GMT -6
Chapter 21
Jock walked over yelling at Ray, " Do I pay you to make out in my Stables"?
Jessie starts to cry, " I was helping him, we just kissed"
" Girl don't lie to me, do you think I'm blind"?
'We are not lying Sir, we didn't' do anything wrong"?
" Your not getting paid for today Ray, go home".
" He worked 5 hours , you can't do that" Jessie was crying.
" You young lady, are nothing but trouble for Ray. "
Miss Ellie walks over , " Jock enough she is a child".
" No longer Ellie, she is a woman now, not a respectable one".
Ray yells, " Stop , Sir, she helped me , we both worked and we didn't fool around".
" Leave your docked pay for today, we will speak tomorrow".
" Fine come on Jessie"
" No, it is not ok, don't do this, we didn't do anything wrong".
" Get her out of here Ray, and never bring her here to fool around again".
" We didn't fool around". Ray screamed at Jock.
Jock grabbed him, " don't you ever raise your voice to me again. Do you understand, what I'm saying, Jessie wait for Ray outside now"?
" Ray, I don't feel well" Jessie said
Miss Ellie looks at her, she walked over " Jessie what is wrong"?
Jessie collapsed and Jock turned running over, so did Ray. She was completed unconscious, they lift her and bring her to Jock's truck. The four of them drove her to the hospital. Ray was frantic, he yelled," she was hot, but I thought it was because she was working hard".
" Ray why was she working when I pay you to "?
" She wanted to help, "OMG is this my fault"?
Miss Ellie reassured Ray it probably is just stress. They drove to the hospital, and run in, they took Jessie into the back , and made the rest wait.
Melinda and Gary were sitting at home, joking around. She smiled, " Gary you don't work like Ray"?
" No, I'm a Ewing, but I don't want to work in the Oil business".
" You don't like working like Ray either"?
" NO, I don't know what I want to do yet"?
"We will have to help Ray, it is not fair, he needs to care for Jessie too"
" I know , I will get a job, but lets not worry about that now"
" Do you think your parents will let you move back at the House"?
" Yeah but not with you Melinda".
" I could live here with Jessie and Ray, at least you would be with your family".
" I would rather be with you 3, maybe, I can talk my family into taking Jessie"
" Why she wouldn't leave Ray"?
" I really like her she is a sweetheart, but she is way to shy"
" She has had a rough life, seeing her Mom and Father having problems. She is really sweet Gary, don't ever talk bad about her"
" I'm sorry, Ray wouldn't let her go anyways"
" Ray is good to her Gary, she really loves the guy"
" It is getting late, I can't believe they stay by the pond, at this time".
" I know , I hope everything is ok, but I'm starving".
Gary gets up looking in the cupboards, he has nothing Melinda. We can have toast again, or a beer"
"Toast would be fine, but save some for them . Jessie hasn't eaten really in days"
" What do you mean"?
" She ate Friday, but she never ate since that meal"
Bobby got a call from the hospital, Miss Ellie told him about Jessie. JR and Bobby were home, and they called Sue Ellen and Sanda.
JR phoned Sue Ellen's house and she came to the phone.
"JR I have been waiting for your call".
" Sorry, I was working, but I have some bad news"
" What is wrong"?
" Jessie collapsed, she is in the hospital, they don't know what is wrong yet"?
" OMG, is she going to be ok"?
" I don't know what happened, but I will call you from the hospital"
" Ok please do, I will be worried all night" JR hung up , and Bobby called Sanda.
" Hello".
"Sanda it is Bobby again, something happened today, that you should know about"
" What"?
"Jessie is in the hospital, she collapsed, my Parents and Ray are with her".
" What happened Bobby"?
" I don't know, I will call you and let you know what is happening"
" Bobby I'm coming there, Jessie needs her friends".
" Will your parents let you"?
" I will ask, I knew she wasn't ready for all this with Ray".
" It might be nothing, just calm down".
"Bobby I'm going to call Sue Ellen and see if she can come too."
" What about School, your Parents will be mad"
"I'm finished, I just have prom, my friend needs me, I will not let her down".
" I will call you in 1 hour if you can come with Sue Ellen, I will get a limo to pick you up".
" We can take a bus Bobby".
" No, ask your parents, and we will send one ok"
" OK, if you see Jessie, tell her, I love her Bobby". Sanda is crying.
" Oh don't cry Sanda, I'm sure she will be fine". They hung up, and Bobby and JR drove over to the hospital together , but they picked up Melinda and Gary first.
Melinda was asking a million questions, and Bobby and JR couldn't answer them. They had no idea what happened? They got into the hospital, and ran in, and Miss Ellie, Jock and Ray were still waiting for news.
"It was 1/2 hour later a doctor came out".
" I'm Dr. Stewart, are you Jessie's parents".
" No, she is staying with us, actually Ray Krebbs". Ray walked over , she is my girlfriend, we are getting married soon. Is she ok, where is she "?
" She is resting, we almost lost her twice".
Jock and Ellie were horrified, " you almost lost her why"?
" She is in a diabetic coma right now, it is very serious. We took blood work and other tests, that child hasn't eaten in at least 2 days. She will have to go on insulin, but her eating habits has to change"
"OMG this is my fault, I'm suppose to take care of her"
" You would never have known about the Diabetes, but her eating yes".
" Will she be ok"?
" Yes, I think so , she just needs rest, I'm only allowing 2 people in"
Ray turns , " I'm sorry , I have to see her, and Melinda you should come". Melinda and Ray walked into the room, they walk over she was pale, and Ray touched her face. " Oh Jessie, I'm so sorry, you never should have gotten involved with me".
Melinda grabs Ray and pulled him away from the bed. " You are not giving up on her now, that would kill her. She loves you, she adores you , so don't you dare walk away from her now" Melinda was crying so hard
" I'm not Melinda, I love her, but can I take care of her properly"?
" We all will get jobs, and help out, and buy the proper foods, and medicine whatever she needs"
Ray and Melinda hug and were holding each other. They both jump, they heard Jessie voice.
" Melinda, you have Gary , leave my man alone".
Melinda ran over, " Jessie you scared us all, how are you feeling"?
" Awful, like I was run over by Jock's truck, he hates me Melinda. He thinks I'm wrong for Ray, I can't lose Ray now. I love him so much".
Ray walked over, " Hey you , you really scared me Baby".
" What happened Ray, why am I here"?
" You collapsed, you have diabetes Jessie"?
"Oh no, not like my Grandma, I can't give myself needles Ray"
" Shh if I have to I will do it, so don't worry about it"
" I'm sorry that Jock yelled at you because of me"
" He was wrong, you worked so hard Jessie".
" I'm so tired Ray", she started to shut her eyes. Melinda and Ray look at each other seeing she was so weak. Ray leaned down kissing her cheek, and they walked out to tell the rest of them , she talked to them.
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