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Post by Sanda on Jan 21, 2011 0:50:00 GMT -6
Great updates Jessie.
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Post by jessie on Jan 22, 2011 0:29:06 GMT -6
Plot line by Jennifer and Jessie
Written by Jessie
CHAPTER 16
The next morning they woke up when the alarm went off. Mac got up showering first while Lindsay made breakfast. Her stomach was feeling upset, but not as bad as before. Lindsay smiled, "I made your favourites, but I'm going to shower, I'm not actually hungry"
"Oh your sick again"?
"Yeah morning sickness Mac, and looking at your breakfast isn't helping." Mac smiled, he ate while she ran and showered, and got dressed. They drove to the office together, there was no need to have separate cars anymore. They went up Don was waiting for Mac, they were going to got to the Drug house to question some of the other dealers. Lindsay hugged Mac, "Be careful Mac, you can't trust those guys"
"Lindsay really , I know that don't worry, you stay close to the office for the next few days"
"Yes I will, I'm a little tired, but when the morning sickness is over, I should be fine". Mac kissed Lindsay, and he left with Don to go to the Drug house. They took Mac's car over, and went up to the door. They knocked Barry answered, and turned, "Oh great you two again, what do you want"?
"Do you want to spend some time in jail with your friend"?
"No, it is so wrong you are holding up his bail, he is so angry".
"Barry you don't seem as bad as the others, don't you care a young girl got killed for nothing"?
"Yes, Amy was a cute kid, I told her to stay away from Mason"
"Why Barry you knew this was going to happen"?
"No, I didn't know, or I would have told her. I just knew Mason was in deep, he wanted out, but they pulled him back in"
"Who"?
"I'm not saying, he wanted out, but he owed so much money he couldn't ".
Mac looked around, "are you alone today"?
"No couple of people are upstairs, but you can't go up there"
"Go get them Barry, tell them we are down here"
"No come back later, I'm not disturbing them sorry". Mac laughed, "We will go disturb them". Mac ran upstairs, and Don ran up after him telling Barry to stay where he was. Mac knocked on one of the bedroom, and he heard someone yell. "Get lost, or I will kill you". Mac yelled, "Detective Taylor, open the door, or I'm coming in". Don got to the top of the stairs, and he whispered, "Mac, we need back up, we don't know who is in this house, there is so many rooms. We also need a warrant"
"Don it is fine, I'm just asking questions", they heard movement, Mac yelled, "Open the door, or I will come in". Don heard a noise, and he yelled "Mac duck ". Mac didn't have time, Don heard gun fire, and Mac went down. Don yelled Mac's name, he moved over, and Mac was awake but was hit. Don pulled him away from the door. He pointed the gun at the bedroom, door while calling for help. He turned to Mac, he was in pain, Don heard the door open, Don yelled, "Stop or I will shoot". The person ran out pointing a gun, Don shot, and he saw a young lady fall down. He ran to the room, he saw a man jumping out the window, he couldn't go after him, he couldn't leave Mac. He ran over, checking the girl she was barely alive, he yelled, "Why did you do that, why didn't you put the gun down"?
"Help me, I don't want to die"
"Don felt sick he put pressure on her wound, yelling, stay awake, help is on the way. He looked over, "Mac talk to me, don't you dare leave me"
"Don"
"Mac what don't go to sleep Mac, Lindsay will kill me". Mac shut his eyes, Don screamed Mac, he panicked, he left the girl, and moved over to Mac.
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Post by jennifer1983 on Jan 22, 2011 1:54:31 GMT -6
Oh my god I hope Mac doesn't die Jessie oh and I hope you update again soon.
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Post by melindajo2000 on Jan 22, 2011 10:57:12 GMT -6
great update I agree with Jennifer hope he's okay
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Post by jessie on Jan 22, 2011 23:16:35 GMT -6
Plot line by Jennifer and Jessie
Written by Jessie
CHAPTER 17
Don was frantic, he yelled, "Mac open your eyes, don't you die on me. I'm not going to live with Lindsay raising, your baby all by herself". Mac opened his eyes, "Oh why are you yelling Don"?
"Mac stay with me , why did you come up here, I told you not to"?
"Lindsay Don tell her, I love her, I'm sorry".
"You tell her yourself, you stay here, or I will kill you myself'. Mac tried to smile, "Oh nice Don".
'I'm sorry, but your not going anywhere, Oh I hear the ambulances now"
"How is the girl"?
"I don't know she is bleeding bad, I had to shoot her Mac".
"I know Don, it's bad, I can barely breath "
"Don't talk help is coming". He saw the Paramedic's run up, going to the girl, and Mac. Don watched them work on them both, he yelled, "come on get them out of this place, and to the hospital"
"Calm down, we have to get him settled". Don turned "I'm sorry, but he has to be ok".
Don turned seeing them doing CPR on the girl. They were frantically trying to revive her, they eventually said she was gone. Don heart sank, he hated that he killed her, but she gave him no choice. He couldn't worry about her now, he had to focus on Mac. They got him settled, and were running downstairs with him on the stretcher. Don followed, the Paramedic's said he could meet them at the Hospital. Don ran to the car, and was following the ambulance. He grabbed his cell, and dialed the office.
Stella answered, "Hey Don"
"Stella something bad happened, Mac is hurt bad".
"What Don Mac, how"?
"He was shot, he is on the way to the hospital. It is really bad, I don't know if he is going to make it . You better get Lindsay, bring her to the hospital, hurry".
Don hung up, and Stella had to hold her desk, she sat back in her chair. Her hands were shaking, the thought of losing her friend, was unbearable. She finally got up walking over to the other evidence room. She walked in, Sheldon, and Lindsay smiled.
"Stella what is wrong, you look sick"?
"Lindsay it is Mac, he was shot Sweetie, Don said we have to get to the hospital".
Lindsay looked at Stella than Sheldon, "No you are mistaken, he can't be shot"
"Don called he was, please Lindsay lets get to the hospital, Mac needs us". Lindsay was shaking, Sheldon, and Stella had to help her to the elevator. She was in shock, she didn't cry, talk or do anything but stare. Stella got in the back seat with her, while Sheldon drove to the hospital. Stella held her hand, Lindsay looked, "he is going to marry me Stella, we are having a baby".
"I know he will fight to stay with you"
"Why did this happen now, I'm finally happy, he loves me". Stella started to cry, she pulled Lindsay into her arms. "We won't lose him Lindsay we can't". Lindsay finally broke down, she was crying so hard, Sheldon almost had to pull over, he was so emotional, himself. They finally got to the hospital, and the three of them ran in to the Emergency area. They saw Don , Lindsay ran over, "Don what happened"?
"We were at the Drug house, Mac went upstairs, and someone shot through the door hitting him".
'Why didn't you back him up"?
"I did , it happened so fast Lindsay"
"Is he going to be ok Don, you saw him last"?
"He is bad, I really don't know, they had to revive him once". Lindsay screamed, and sat on the chair, crying. Stella , Sheldon, and Don were speechless, they were afraid of losing Mac, but they knew Lindsay would have a breakdown, if she lost him now.
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Post by jennifer1983 on Jan 23, 2011 1:42:04 GMT -6
I hope Mac doesn't die Jessie, oh and I hope you update again soon.
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Post by jessie on Jan 23, 2011 21:45:49 GMT -6
CHAPTER 18
They took Mac to the operating room, they said it would be a 5 hour operation. Stella sat beside Lindsay holding her hand, they both were so devastated. Sheldon walked over with a pillow, and a blanket. "Lindsay why don't you try, and sleep, we will wake you once the Doctor comes out"
"You think I can sleep Sheldon, God why did he go to that place"? Don walked over, "Mac wanted this case solved for the Mother , he wasn't thinking straight".
Lindsay got up running at Don, "Are you blaming Mac, he is the best, you are to blame".
Stella walked over, "No Lindsay the girl that is dead is to blame, I'm sorry don't blame Don".
"He didn't protect Mac".
Don ran down the hall, and Sheldon ran after him. Lindsay sat down, "I'm sorry I can't lose him, I shouldn't blame Don".
"We know your are hurting we all love Mac Lindsay".
"He is really happy with me Stella, how could this happen now"?
"The job we have this can happen anytime. I really believe Mac is a fighter, he won't leave you , and the baby".
'I won't survive without him". Lindsay leaned into Stella, she hugged her close, and prayed Mac would pull through.
Sheldon grabbed Don's arm, "She isn't thinking straight, we know it isn't your fault"
"He ran upstairs not thinking about his safety. I went up after him, I told him to duck, I heard the gun snap. He froze, and then he went down. I couldn't do anything it happened so fast, she blames me Sheldon".
"Lindsay is hurting she loves Mac, they are having a baby. We love Mac, but to her, this is so much bigger. It isn't fair, but we all know this is our destiny, it could happen to any of us. Mac is a fighter, if anyone can survive this it is him".
"I hope so Sheldon, I will never forgive myself if he doesn't".
Sheldon smiled, "Lets go back, and stay with Lindsay and Stella". They walked back together, and Lindsay stood up, walking over to Don, and hugged him.
"I'm sorry Don, I don't blame you".
'Thanks Lindsay, I understand".
Sid, Adam, and Danny came running down the hall. "What happened, we just heard about Mac"?
'He was shot, he is in surgery, it will be another 3 hours"
"Oh God, how did it happen"?
Don explained, than they all sat , none of them talking, just praying Mac would survive this. It was 5 1/2 hour later when Dr. Simpson walked out, and walked over to the team.
Lindsay jumped up, "Please tell me he is ok please". Dr. Simpson touched her arm. "He survived the surgery, he lost a lot of blood. He had 3 transfusions, but he is holding on. The next 24 hours will be the critical time. We are doing everything we can to make sure he will be ok, but time will tell if he is strong enough to pull through. He is awake we will allow , 1 person only in at this moment." They all say Lindsay, she walked with Dr. Simpson, to Mac's bed. He opened his eyes barely, he couldn't speak because of the tubes down his throat. She could see he was scared, and he was so pale, she almost didn't recognize him. She took his hand, "Mac, I'm here, you are going to be ok". He put his hand to his mouth.
"No Mac you can't take that out, you have to rest, and get strong. You know I need you, and so does our baby. Please just rest, and fight don't you give up". He blinked his eyes, she knew he was telling her he wouldn't. She touched his cheek, and whispered, "I love you Mac Taylor". He lifted his hand, putting it to his heart, than pointed at her. She partly cried, and laughed, "I know you love me too, shut your eyes Sweetie". Mac did, she sat in the chair, holding his hand. She just knew in her heart he wouldn't leave her, he would fight as hard as he could, to come back to her , and the baby.
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Post by jennifer1983 on Jan 24, 2011 1:48:42 GMT -6
I hope Mac survives Jessie, oh and I hope you update again soon.
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Post by melindajo2000 on Jan 24, 2011 11:03:36 GMT -6
great update, I also hope he will be okay as well
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Post by jessie on Jan 25, 2011 0:10:15 GMT -6
CHAPTER 19
2 DAYS LATER
Lindsay wouldn't leave Mac's side, he was getting better everyday. Lindsay was happy the tube was coming out of his mouth today. She hated that he had it, because he wanted to talk, but he couldn't. The Doctor came in, "Lindsay you should leave, this isn't pleasant"
"No, I'm not leaving him, please let me stay".
Mac shook her head, but Lindsay took his hand, "I'm not leaving you Mac". The Doctor walked over, "Mac this will be uncomfortable, but hold your breath, until the tube comes out." Mac was scared so was Lindsay, the Doctor started to remove it, and he was right it was awful. When it was out Mac was coughing and he gasped for air. It was a few moments later he calmed down. He tried to talk but it was hard, his throat was so sore. Lindsay whispered, "Don't talk Mac, let me do all the talking, I like that anyway'. Mac tried to smiled, but he whispered, "How is the case going"?
"Don worry about it Mac, Don , Stella and the rest of the team are working overtime trying to solve this case. We are going to find the guy who got his girlfriend to shot you too." "The girl she died"?
"Yes Mac, please stop think about getting better".
"I promised the Mother Lindsay, I would find her Daughter's killer".
Lindsay grabbed his hand, putting his hand on her stomach. "You promised me, and our Baby a life. You promised me you would marry me. You get better, you fight, and you will let the others work this case. You have to have faith in them, they love you Mac."
"I know Lindsay, I'm sorry"
"You went up without backup Mac, you are not like that"
"This case is bothering me, I feel so bad for the Mother. She only had her Daughter now she has no one. I promised her Lindsay, I can't let her down".
'You haven't let her down, we will find her Daughters Killer". Lindsay turned when Stella, and Don walked in. Don smiled, "Oh Mac you scared the crap out of me".
"I know I'm sorry, I could have got us both killed".
Stella walked over, "Mac how are you feeling"?
"I feel like I was shot in the chest". Lindsay smiled, "Great you still have your weird sense of humor Mac".
"I was shot in the chest, can you imagine that"? Lindsay felt tears come to her eyes, "Mac you were lucky, we almost lost you".
"Oh I thought I was going to go too. I had some wild dreams, I saw people that we solved their cases. They told me it wasn't my time, it was kind of nice, and scary at the same time".
Don laughed, "Did you see the light Mac"?
"I don't know, I think I did, but I kept hearing Lindsay talking to me".
"You heard me when you were out"?
"Yes, one time you yelled at me, and said you were angry at me. I knew I couldn't leave this world, when you said you wouldn't forgive me"
"Oh you heard that, I'm so sorry". Lindsay kissed his cheek. The Doctor walked in, "Out all of you, I need to check him out". Lindsay smiled, "I don't want to leave him". Stella put her arms, around her, "Come get some of the lovely hospital coffee girl".
"I don't drink coffee, but I could use a juice". Lindsay walked over, "I will be right back".
"Go you need a break, Doc here is going to keep me company".
"Love you Mac". She walked out with Stella and Don. The Doctor smiled, "That girl loves you Mac, she wouldn't leave your side".
"I know Doc, that is the girl, I'm going to marry". They both smile, and the Doctor started his exam.
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Post by jennifer1983 on Jan 25, 2011 1:07:58 GMT -6
Great update Jessie. I'm glad that Mac survived, oh and I hope you update soon.
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Post by melindajo2000 on Jan 25, 2011 13:39:33 GMT -6
good update I like how Lindsay stood by him when he needed her the most
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Post by jessie on Jan 26, 2011 22:31:11 GMT -6
Plot line by Jennifer and Jessie
Written by Jessie
CHAPTER 20
1 week later
Mac was going home, but he had to have 4 weeks bed rest. Lindsay got help, and she booked some holiday time, to take care of him. Mac wasn't too happy, he wanted to get back to work. Lindsay put her foot down, and he couldn't fight her on it.
Lindsay and Stella drove him home, he needed their help to get upstairs. They took him to the bed, he laid back.
"Oh it is so nice to be home, it will be nice having you beside me Lindsay."
"Mac your not ready for that"?
"Your bad girl, I meant sleeping beside me". Mac smiled, Stella touched Lindsay, "he is the naughty one, I know what he meant".
Stella smiled, "I'm going to get going, I will keep you posted on the case promise. We are working round the clock to solve this. Don is going crazy, he wants the guy who is responsible for you being hurt".
"Stella has Amy's Mother called"?
"Yes everyday, she is really upset you got hurt. We said your doing better, and I told her we would never give up on finding justice for Amy"
"Thanks Stella, remember I will be back, so don't get comfortable in my chair".
Stella laughed, "Mac you have the most comfy chair, I'm not letting that go".
"Ok you can have my chair, but not my office". Lindsay sat down, "Don't worry about that, you will be back, but you will never be careless again".
"I won't Lindsay, I promise". Lindsay brought her lips to Mac, and they kiss. Stella walked to the door, "I will let myself out, but you too, be good".
"Stella wait, I will walk you to the door". Lindsay got up , "I will be right back, don't get up". Mac laid back, "I won't boss". Lindsay giggled, "I'm not really being bossy, but you don't listen". She walked Stella to the door, she hugged her. "I will be at work tomorrow, I have a nurse coming in tomorrow. It is a male nurse, I'm not having some young thing taking care of my guy"
"Oh Mac is going to kill you Lindsay"
"I know, but who cares". Stella left, Lindsay walked back to the room. She walked over grabbing his pajamas, and walked to the bed.
"Lets get you into these". He laughed, "Oh I'm not going to get lucky"?
"Not today Sexy". He pouted, Lindsay laughed, "Oh you big baby, give me some help getting you undressed". She took his shirt off, she saw the bandage, she touched it. Mac put his hand over hers, "Lindsay I'm so sorry, you were so scared, all I thought about was losing you, and never seeing my baby".
"Mac I was so scared, I thought I lost you, and it killed me". He pulled her close, she laid beside him. They held hands, and looked into each others eyes. He brought his mouth to hers, as they kiss ever so gently. She smiled, "Oh this is nice, I'm so glad your home".
"Me too Lindsay". They laid just holding each other, they both thanked God Mac was spared.
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Post by Sanda on Jan 26, 2011 23:06:19 GMT -6
Great updates Jessie. I am soo happy that Mac survived.
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Post by melindajo2000 on Jan 26, 2011 23:18:52 GMT -6
I lol'd at the part about Mac being naughty and at the male nurse... very good update Jessie
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