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Post by jessie on Jan 15, 2011 22:01:21 GMT -6
CHAPTER 11
Stella drove to Mac's place, and parked, and went up to his floor of his condo. She went to his door, and knocked. She heard Lindsay's voice say, "Who is it"?
"It is me Stella, Lindsay"
Lindsay opened the door, "Stella I don't know what to say"?
" I found out, I overhead Mac talking to you, on the phone"
"Oh God Stella was he upset"?
"No he wasn't happy, that I knew at first. I don't understand why you both kept this from me"?
'We were going to tell you all in time"
"I'm your friend Lindsay".
"I know, I wanted to tell you, but I couldn't Stella" They walked into the living room, and sat down. Lindsay smiled, "Stella don't get angry, but you liked Mac didn't you"?
"Me why would you say that"?
'I saw it everyone did, but you never made your move".
"Lindsay I don't believe you"
"Don't you tell Mac I told you this, but I made the first move"
"You did"?
"Yes, he wouldn't you know Mac, but one night I went for it". Stella smiled, 'You went for it girl"
"Well remember the case where the 5 family members were murdered? We worked double shifts, we wanted to solve that case, and we did fast. We all were drained, the rest of you went home. I went into the office, Mac was so down. I went over to him, and asked him to come to my place to talk and have a drink. He said no at first, but than he agreed, and the rest is history"
"OMG that night you, and him hit it off".
"Yes". Lindsay laughed, and Stella smiled, "Wow you are something Lindsay. You are pregnant, that surprised me"
"I know it is fast, but I'm happy about it".
"Really Lindsay a baby is a lot of work"?
"I know, and I'm ready for it, and I know Mac is ok too".
"I really can't see you both together, but I'm happy for you both"
"Why can't you see us together because of our age"?
"No you are so trusting , Mac is so different than you"
"Mac is amazing Stella, he is romantic, funny, but yes he is sad at times. He had a rough life, but I make him happy".
"When are you guys going to tell the team"?
"Soon, I will have to , I will be showing in no time".
"Mac might want you to quit"
"I'm not quitting my job, I can be a Mother and keep my Job"
"Mac might see different".
"We will be fine Stella". They heard the door open, and Mac walked in.
"Hi you two". Lindsay got up, and walked over kissing Mac on the cheek. He walked over sitting down with Lindsay.
"What were you guys talking about"?
"You"
"Oh that would be boring"
"Never". Lindsay smiled, Stella got up, "I'm out of here, it is late".
"I will walk you downstairs, to your car"
"I'm fine Mac".
Lindsay smiled, "Take her, I will be in bed waiting". He walked out with Stella, and took her to her car. Mac leaned down, "Drive home safe Stella, see you tomorrow"
"Mac"
"Yeah Stella"?
"You guys make a great couple, who would have thought". Mac smiled, "Yes who would have thought"?
Stella drove off, and Mac went upstairs to Lindsay.
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Post by melindajo2000 on Jan 15, 2011 23:16:40 GMT -6
great update I'm glad that the truth is out
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Post by jennifer1983 on Jan 16, 2011 1:21:53 GMT -6
Great update Jessie. I can't wait till the others find out and I also hope you update again soon.
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Post by jessie on Jan 16, 2011 21:15:38 GMT -6
Chapter 12
The next morning Mac woke up , Lindsay wasn't beside him. He jumped up, she was dressed, and she had breakfast waiting for him. She smiled, "Toast and cereal, no eggs, and bacon sorry".
"Your feeling better"?
"Yes, much I'm going in today"
"Why don't you take a few days off Lindsay"?
"No, I will need time off soon enough, but I'm not quitting my job Mac"
"Lindsay I wasn't asking you to quit "
"Ok because Stella thinks, you might soon enough".
"Well I will talk to Stella, but if I'm going to be honest, I'm worried".
"I know, if you didn't worry, I would be shocked".
"Lindsay maybe we should tell the others today"?
"Really I'm fine with it, I was waiting for you to want to".
"I'm not ashamed, why not"? Lindsay smiled, "Go eat, I'm just having plain toast".
"Your not better Lindsay"?
'No, I'm making sure, I don't get sick, I will eat lunch promise". Mac sat down, they ate, and they grabbed their things, and left for the office. They got there, they parked, and went inside. They saw Stella at her desk, she waved, and they walked over. They all were around, talking before they started to work. Mac smiled, "Since you all are here, can you join me in my office for a minute"? They all followed, Lindsay sat on the couch, while the other stood thinking Mac was going to talk about the case.
"Well I don't know how you all will feel about this, so I will just say it. I have been dating someone from the office for a few weeks, we are going to move in together right now, and we have more news, we are expecting a baby.
Don, Adam, Sheldon, Danny and Sid all stare at Stella. Mac laughed, "Guys wrong girl, the lady I'm talking about is on the couch right now" They all stare at Lindsay she smiled, "OK guys your going to catch flies, I know it is shocking, but it isn't that bad is it"?
Stella laughed, "I for one think it is great news". Sid walked over shaking Mac's hand, "Wow this is shocking but sweet, congrats to you both".
"Thanks Sid it means a lot".
"Wow this is to much for me to take, Mac I thought you didn't like Office romance". Don says
"I don't it happened, I'm not ashamed Don".
"I'm happy for you both really, but I didn't see this coming".
Adam walked over, "This is so cool, I knew it, I'm sorry, I saw the looks for weeks. I keep it to myself, because I thought if I was wrong, I would be fired. I knew you had it bad for Lindsay Mac, I knew it".
"Ok Adam, enough", Mac laughed.
Sheldon shook Mac's hand, "Hope everything works out for you both".
"Thanks Sheldon"
Danny was looking at Lindsay she smiled, "Danny say something"?
"I don't know what to say, you and Mac, I never saw this coming".
"I love him Danny, be happy for us".
"I am, have a great life both of you". Danny walked out, and everyone looked at Lindsay and Mac. "What was that about"? Mac looked confused.
Stella shook her head, "I think Danny had a thing for Lindsay, but never made a move because you said no Office romance".
Lindsay looked at Mac, "I didn't know anything about that".
"Oh God", Mac walked out of the office, to find Danny.
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Post by jennifer1983 on Jan 17, 2011 1:52:01 GMT -6
Great update to our story Jessie. I'm glad that Mac told everyone and I also hope Danny will be alright with Mac and Lindsay's relationship, Oh and I also hope you update again soon.
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Post by melindajo2000 on Jan 17, 2011 14:43:36 GMT -6
great update, love the little details you put into this
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Post by jessie on Jan 18, 2011 22:24:54 GMT -6
Chapter 13
Mac walked out, and saw Danny sitting at his desk. Mac walked over, "Danny do you want to talk"?
"No Mac, not really"
"Danny I can see you were upset in there. I love Lindsay, I'm going to make her happy, can't you be happy for us"?
"I am Mac, it is just a little much ok. You walked around being all high and mighty about no romance, and you and Lindsay really"
"It happened, we both felt something, and she came to me, and I have been blessed ever since"
"You really love her Mac"?
"Danny we are having a baby, of course I love her. Do you want to talk about Lindsay"?
"No, just don't hurt her Mac, she is someone Special"
"I know that Danny, don't worry". They smiled, Mac turned, "We better get back to work, we have a case to solve"
"Yes, we do". Mac walked into the office clapping his hands, "back to work". Sid , Stella, Sheldon, and Don smile, and walked out of the office. Lindsay walked over, "how is Danny"?
"Ok he is a little hurt, but he will be fine"
"I swear I didn't know he wanted to ask me out"
"I know Lindsay, who wouldn't want to date you"? Lindsay touched Mac's lips, "I better get back to work, maybe we can have lunch together"?
"Sounds like a plan, something good, we can go to the Deli downstairs"
Lindsay walked out, and went to see Sheldon, they were going over the evidence. Don walked in, "Mac there was another killing , they think it was a drug deal gone bad".
Mac and Don grabbed their coats, and left the office. They went to the crime scene, Mac couldn't believe how brutal the crime was. He couldn't even recognize, if the victims were men or ladies? Sheldon arrived, he walked over, "OMG this was even more violent than the other crime".
Sheldon was talking evidence, "they have been dead for a few hours. It was gun shots, they were shot several times". Sheldon noticed something in one of the victims hands. He had to pry out his hand, and noticed a piece of paper. He grabbed tweezers, opening up the paper, and noticed, some writing. "Mac look at this". Mac walked over kneeling down, he was shocked, at what the note said.
"I'm doing your job, getting the scum off the streets. You should be happy, I'm doing what you can't". It was signed the, Cleaner.
Mac looked at Sheldon, "OMG this is someone that is a Vigilante?
"We didn't find any note at the other crime, maybe it isn't related"?
"Maybe Sheldon, but I think it is because they are all drug dealers"
"Mac why would anyone kill a 17 year old girl"?
'Someone that saw her with a enemy, I bet it is someone, that lost a love one. It could be a Father who lost a teen to drugs"
"Well that would be thousands Mac".
"I know Sheldon, but go back 3 months, find all teens who died in a drug related death". They took the bodies away, Don walked over , "Mac this person won't stop, and they are getting more daring"
"I know, the worst thing is they think they are right"
"Mac I'm going back to the office, I'm going to go through all the clothing of the last murders. We maybe missed a note, if it is the same killer he would have left one".
"Lets go back, to the office, I will help you look". They left forensics, collected all the fingerprints, and other evidence.
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Post by melindajo2000 on Jan 18, 2011 22:58:12 GMT -6
great update Jessie glad Danny's ok
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Post by jennifer1983 on Jan 19, 2011 1:23:22 GMT -6
Great update to our story Jessie. I'm glad that Danny is alright with Mac and Lindsay's relationship and I also hope you update again soon.
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Post by jessie on Jan 19, 2011 19:56:30 GMT -6
Chapter 14
Mac and Don went back to the office, and were going through the clothes from the previous murders. They were checking the pockets, and they were going through Amy's clothes, when they saw a pocket in her jean jacket, that was inside. They check inside, and they both stare at each other, when they saw a note folded really small. They open it slowly, and put it on the table, and read what it said.
Gone everyone should be happy. My life ended 6210, so their lives end today. Cleaner
Mac looked at Don, "I knew this was related, what is 6210?
"I don't know Mac"?
"Don it could be jun 2 2010, maybe someone this person loved died that day". Mac ran out , and ran to Sheldon , "Any luck"?
"So many people died with drug related deaths"
"Try jun 2, 2010"?
"Why that day"?
"Just check, we got a clue, it might mean nothing". Sheldon said he would come in his office once, he got the info. Mac walked back to the office, and sat looking at the photos of the young people dead. He couldn't stop looking at Amy, she is so young. He picked up the phone, calling her Mother.
'Hello".
"Hi, it is Detective Mac Taylor, how are you"?
"Horrible, have you found out anything"?
"No not really, I'm worried about you promise me you won't go out on your own"
"I won't but don't stop looking please Mr. Taylor"
"I promise you, we won't ever stop". She whispered, "Thank you" , and hung up.
Sheldon walked in, "I have some hits, 10 actually all these people died do to drugs jun 2 , 2010"
"Can I see the pictures"?
Mac looked at them, he went through the photos, and didn't know where to start first? Sheldon smiled, "Go home Mac it is 8pm, you haven't eaten lunch, you promised Lindsay, she ate alone"
"Oh God did she tell you that"?
"Yes she left 2 hours ago, she went to your place".
'I'm going but tomorrow, we are going to talk to the parents, and family of these victims"
'Tomorrow Mac". Sheldon walked out, Mac grabbed his coat, and left. He drove home, he saw Lindsay's car, he walked to the elevator, and went upstairs. He opened the door, he found Lindsay sitting on the couch, watching TV, with a tea in her hand.
"Lindsay I'm sorry about Lunch, I was so busy"
"I know don't worry, but you have to eat Mac"
"You ate already Lindsay"?
"No, I have the dinner on the stove, I just have to warm it up"
"You waited for me"?
"Yes, I worry about you Mac, don't you know that? You get so involved in cases, you don't take care of yourself. Lets go eat, it is chicken, and rice, and veggies"
"Yum all my favourites"
"Right you love burgers, maybe we can have one tomorrow". Mac walked into the kitchen with Lindsay, he helped set up the table. She heated up the dinner, bringing it to the table. She served it up, and sat down. Mac was eating, he reached over, "Lindsay I love you, I will start focusing on us more promise"
"Eat Mac you must be starving"
"I am, but I have something else, I would rather do". Lindsay laughed, "Eat, than you can play". Mac smiled, 'You naughty girl, but after we eat we can retire to bed early"?
"Oh sounds Heavenly". Lindsay laughed, "Mac your too cute". He laughed, and they finished eating.
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Post by melindajo2000 on Jan 19, 2011 22:31:19 GMT -6
cute ending to the chapter... love that she made dinner for him and that they were ready to not talk about the case lol great update Jessie
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Post by jennifer1983 on Jan 20, 2011 1:02:19 GMT -6
Great update to our story Jessie. I hope you update again soon.
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Post by jessie on Jan 20, 2011 22:49:30 GMT -6
Chapter 15
They finished up, and then rinsed off the dishes putting them in the dish washer. Mac walked up behind Lindsay, "Lets turn in Sweetie". She smiled, she held his hand, and they walked to the bedroom. They walked to the bed, Lindsay pulled back the comforter, and sheets. Mac was undressing he walked over in his boxers, and Lindsay smiled, "Oh Sexy Mac"
Mac wrapped his arms around her, and she leaned into him. She smiled as he touched her cheek so softly. She moved her face into his palm, she loved the touch of his hands on her skin. He touched her lips, and brought his lips over hers. She wrapped her hands around him, and they snuggled real close.
"Are you ok Lindsay"
"I'm pregnant, I'm not fragile, I'm fine Mac. You have to stop worrying about me all the time."?
"Lindsay I worry aobut about you, because I love you".
"Oh I noticed you like me Mac, but I was nervous, but I'm happy you finally asked me out".
"Wait here Lindsay", Mac ran over to his dresser, and pulled out a box. He smiled, "I was going to wait for Valentine's day, but why wait Lindsay"?
"Oh Mac what are you doing"? Mac walked over, he knelt in front of her holding her hand. "Will you marry me Lindsay"?
"OMG yes, are you kidding". She went into his arms, she whispered, "I love you Mac" He touched her face, "I love you too, I was going to ask you this Valentines Day. I have had this ring for 3 months. I knew 5 weeks after we started dating, you were the one for me. I miss my Wife who died, but I know she would be happy for me. I know she would love you, and I'm so happy Lindsay. Don't you ever think I would ask you to marry me just because of the baby. The baby just makes this all more beautiful, I'm going to be a great Father, and I promise you Lindsay, I will love you forever". Lindsay was crying, Mac wiped the tears from her cheek, and smiled, "No tears Sweetie".
"These are happy tears Mac, I wanted this day forever". She hugged him, and they held each other , not talking just knowing this was a day they would never forget.
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Post by melindajo2000 on Jan 20, 2011 23:35:41 GMT -6
great update Jessie, I'm glad they are going to get married
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Post by jennifer1983 on Jan 21, 2011 0:49:30 GMT -6
Great update Jessie. I'm glad that Mac and Lindsay are going to get married and I also hope you update again soon.
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