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Post by jennifer1983 on Jan 10, 2011 1:54:23 GMT -6
Great update to our story Jessie. I can't wait to read how Mac feels about Lindsay I hope he's in love with her.
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Post by jessie on Jan 11, 2011 0:43:23 GMT -6
Plot line by Jennifer and Jessie
Written by Jessie
Chapter 7
Mac smiled just staring at Lindsay touching her cheek. "Lindsay I'm falling in love with you. Your the only person who can make me forget my past, and make, me want to build a future with."
Should we do the test"?
"Yes, I put the boxes in the bathroom, should I come with you"?
"No, I can manage, it will be about 10 minutes or so, before we know". She went to the bathroom, Mac sat wondering if she was pregnant, or was she sick with a flu bug? He shut his eyes, and Lindsay walked back sitting on his lap. "Your not going to fall asleep on me are you"?
"Are you kidding, I'm nervous".
"Your hoping I'm not aren't you"?
'No, your wrong, a big part of me wants a child with you. I think you would be a wonderful Mother to our baby. I'm just thinking about Amy, and her poor Mother. I would lose it , if someone hurt our baby Lindsay".
"Mac, don't think that way, if you do , you will go crazy".
"How long do we have to wait"?
"5 minutes, I'm getting nervous". Lindsay touched Mac's face, and kissed his cheek.
"Lindsay how is your stomach"?
"A little upset, but it probably is nerves". He smiled, "Is it time yet"?
"You are impatient aren't you"?
"Yes, I'm shaking here". She got up, together they walked into the bathroom. They lifted the stick, and look at it. They both are quiet both waiting for the other to speak first. Lindsay whispered, "OMG Mac, we are pregnant". Mac thought his legs would give out, he was so excited. He lifted Lindsay bringing his lips to hers. She kissed him, and he smiled, "OMG it really is true, I made a baby".
"We did Mac, I helped". Lindsay was laughing, as Mac carried her to bed. He laid her down, and he sat beside her. He touched her stomach lightly, and whispered, "I can't believe this, you made me so happy".
"I'm going to start to show eventually , we will have to tell the others soon".
"Give it a litte more time, but we will".
"Your afraid they will be angry, or not understand"?
'I told you before, I'm not scared of that. I'm worried if they say some unkind words, it might hurt you".
"Together we will be fine, and nothing anyone says, would keep me from you". He touched her face, "You sleep, your exhausted, we will celebrate another night".
"Mac can you just hold me"?
Mac laid beside her pulling her into his arms, and held her tight. They feel asleep in each others arms.
Amy Mother left her house, she wanted to get some air. She couldn't stay cooped up in that house, while her Daughters killer is walking around free. She walked down the street, and got on a bus taking her to a hangout Amy told her she went to once. She came home she was afraid, Mason was getting in to deep. She knew she had to find answers why her Daughter was going to be buried tomorrow before her 18th Birthday? She knew she may be putting her own life in danger, but she knew at this point, life without her Daughter wasn't worth living anyways.
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Post by Sanda on Jan 11, 2011 0:50:50 GMT -6
Great updates Jessie. This story is really good.
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Post by jennifer1983 on Jan 11, 2011 2:03:27 GMT -6
Great update to our story Jessie. I'm glad that Lindsay is pregnant, I also can't wait till Mac and Lindsay tell everybody about their relationship and I also hope you update again soon.
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Post by melindajo2000 on Jan 11, 2011 18:08:43 GMT -6
awesome updates Jessie, I agree with Jennifer, I am glad that Lindsay is pregnant and I can't wait for everyone's reactions
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Post by jessie on Jan 12, 2011 22:12:25 GMT -6
Chapter 8
Mrs Hughes got to the place Amy told her about. She looked at the place, it gave her the creeps. She walked up to the door, her hands were shaking so bad but she knocked. She wiped tears from her eyes, the door opened, and a man was standing there in his boxers, she could tell he was on something.
"Yeah Lady what do you want"?
"I don't know why I'm here, my Daughter Amy is dead, I need answers, she came here before do you know her"?
"Lady it is cold , go home this isn't somewhere you want to be". He went to slam the door, but she pushed it open.
"Please I need to know what happened to her"?
"I don't know what happened to your Daughter go home". Mrs Hughes screamed, and another man walked to the door. "What is going on here, who are you"?
"My Daugther Amy Hughes, she is dead, and I need answers".
"Come in". She was shocked but she walked in, and the man slammed the door. He grabbed her arm dragging her into the living room throwing her into a chair. Barry ran over, "Come on she is upset about her daughter let her go.".
Alex smiled, "Your pretty girl she was Mason's girl right"?
She wasn't his girl, she dated him , he caused her death because of his drugs use". Alex smiled, "Do you know Mason owed me money, and he is dead, so is your Daughter".
"Oh God your a drug dealer, I'm out of here". She got up, he smiled, "Hey you want to know about Amy don't you"? Mrs Hughes stared at him. "What do you know"?
"That she cried for her Mommy while she died". Barry screamed Alex, "stop for God sake".
"She cried for me, OMG". Mrs. Hughes was hysterical.
"Yes, she begged for her life, Mason actually tried to be a gentleman, but they both died , it is sad but life goes on". Mrs. Hughes ran at Alex, and hit him, she was pushed back. She screamed, "You are a sick man". He grabbed her throwing her outside the door. She was screaming she dialed Mac's cell phone # that he gave her.
Mac and Lindsay just drifted off asleep, when they jump hearing the phone. Mac got up running to the phone, "hello"
"Mac help me, he knows something about Amy"
"Who knows Mrs Hughes"?
"I'm at main and Wilson street, it is a drug house Amy told me about. The man in there said Amy cried out for me. I wasn't there Mac, my baby died, and I wasn't there".
"Ok I'm coming , don't go back in that house". Mac ran putting his pants, and shirt on. Lindsay sat up, "Mac what are you doing"?
"Amy's Mother is trying to find answers she is going to get herself killed. I have to go to her, you stay here, and sleep. I will be back soon, I love you Lindsay". Mac ran over kissing her, and ran out the door, calling Don.
"Hello Mac".
"Hey Don, sorry but I need you to meet me at Main and Wilson, there is a drug house there. Please hurry, Mrs. Hughes is there she is in trouble.
"Don't worry Mac, I'm on my way". They both raced to her hoping, she would be ok, when they got there.
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Post by melindajo2000 on Jan 12, 2011 23:25:07 GMT -6
great update, I can't wait till Mac gets to that house
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Post by Sanda on Jan 12, 2011 23:36:12 GMT -6
Great update Jessie.
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Post by jennifer1983 on Jan 13, 2011 2:00:31 GMT -6
Great update Jessie. I can't wait till mac and Lindsay tell everybody about their relationship and I hope you update again soon.
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Post by jessie on Jan 13, 2011 22:43:59 GMT -6
Chapter 9
Don got to the house first, and ran up to Mrs. Hughes.
"OMG what were you thinking coming here alone, do you understand how dangerous that was"?
"I have to find out why my Daughter died"
"That is our job not yours".
"It is my Job, I was suppose to take care of her. I wasn't there when she needed me the most. He said she cried out for me, do you know how I feel"? Mac ran over, "OMG thank God, I thought you were home safe, what were you thinking"?
"Mac she is upset someone told her, they know the Daughter cried out for her".
"Don take her home, I'm going in to question the people in there"
"I'm not leaving you alone Mac, we will put her in the car". She cried out, "lets me come with you".
"No, you will stay in the locked car, or we won't question anyone".
"Ok Mac", she let them walk her to the car, she said the man was named Alex, he knows something Mac". He touched her face, "Ok take it easy, and don't you dare leave this car promise"
"I won't " They locked it, and ran up to the house. They pounded, Barry opened the door. He was shocked when Mac and Don walked in pushing him toward a wall. Alex ran over, "who do you think you are"?
"This is Detective Mac Taylor and I'm Detective Don Flack. We hear you met Mrs. Hughes, and you told her some disturbing news".
"OMG you are here because of that stupid woman, her Daughter is dead who cares"? Mac grabbed Alex pushing him to the ground. "Her Mother cares, and so do we, she was 17 years old you piece of crap".
"I didn't kill her, I was just playing with the Mother". Mac grabbed him up, he turned him around putting handcuffs on him. "Well you will be playing with us at the station you fool. You think it is funny that a child was killed in the most violent way? I guess you don't care, because you sell drugs to kids younger". They were pulling him out of the house, he yelled to Barry to call his Lawyer. Mac turned, "Yeah Barry call his lawyer, and you better find one for yourself, I'm going to lock you all away". Barry was shocked he ran to the phone calling Alex's lawyer.
Mac put Alex in his car, and Don drove Mrs. Hughes to the station. They went inside, and took Alex to a interrogation room. Mrs. Hughes was put in Mac's office, and told to wait there. Mac wanted to question him, he normally didn't but this guy made him sick. He sat down across from Alex, and he laughed, "Oh is this good cop bad cop"?
Mac smiled, "You really are a smug son of a gun aren't you"?
"Yeah don't you love me"? Mac jumped up, "Oh I could hurt you , stop before I do".
"Oh man I'm so going to have your badge".
"Oh Really there isn't a scratch on you , but we could put some bruises on you if you like"?
"Yeah go for it". Mac got up, "I will be back in a minute". He walked out, he had to get out of that room for a minute. He needed to compose himself, he opened up his cell phone calling home to speak with Lindsay.
"Hello"
"Lindsay, just wanted to let you know, I'm ok. Mrs. Hughes is fine, we have a Drug dealer here, Lindsay I want to hurt him".
"Your questioning him"?
"Yeah I know this isn't my usual way of working, but for her Mother, I feel I have to "
"Mac don't lose your cool please".
"Lindsay I love you, and I will be home soon. You need your sleep Lindsay , your carrying my baby, go sleep, and dream about me".
"I will come home soon".
"I will". Mac put his cell in his pocket , he turned and jumped seeing Stella staring at him.
'You and Lindsay , OMG Mac what are you doing, she is pregnant"?
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Post by melindajo2000 on Jan 13, 2011 23:17:47 GMT -6
wow, Stella knows, cant wait to see what she has to say to him
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Post by jennifer1983 on Jan 14, 2011 1:58:44 GMT -6
Great update Jessie. I agree with Melinda I can't wait to read what Stella has to say to Mac and I also hope you update again soon.
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Post by jessie on Jan 14, 2011 23:36:18 GMT -6
Chapter 10
Mac turned , "Stella you don't knock before coming into a Office"?
"You never cared before Mac, did I hear right"?
"I'm going back to talk to the idiot, I left him with Don". Stella grabbed Mac's arm, "I asked you a question, answer me".
"Yes, me and Lindsay are together, I love her Stella. We didn't plan on it, but yes she is pregnant, and we are happy about it".
"Mac do you really think it is proper"?
"We didn't set out to fall in love it happened Stella. I love her, and I'm not ashamed to admit that".
"Why keep it hush hush than Mac"?
"Because we knew everyone would act like you Stella"?
"What I'm shocked, I'm not judging you, I'm your friend Mac. I would think you would tell me, if not the others".
"We were going to but we wanted to wait, you can understand that".
"Wow you and Lindsay, I never would have thought"
"Why the age Stella"?
"yeah you are old Mac, she is a baby"
"Oh Stella stop, she is young, but I'm not rocking the cradle "
"I'm bugging you, I think it is cool really".
"Really Stella, I'm sorry, I should have told you".
"Yeah you should have, both of you should have".
"Don't be hard on Lindsay, she is pregnant, she isn't feeling well"
"Really she is home alone sick"?
"She has morning sickness, she is fine, I hope".
"Would you like me to check on her Mac, I can stay with her until you get home"?
"Ok but be careful in my underground Stella"
'I have a gun, don't worry Mac".
"I do worry, I wouldn't want anything to happen to my best friend ". Stella smiled, Mac walked to the door, and Stella waved. She walked out, she grabbed her coat, and went to her car, and drove over to Mac's place.
Mac went to the interrogation room, he smiled Don was yelling at Alex.
"Oh I see he is getting on your nerves to Don".
"Yes, he is annoying Mac, he really is a punk".
"Well you know what, we are going to talk to all the other Drug dealers tomorrow. We will tell them all we bonded with Alex tonight. He was really helpful, and than we will see how smug Alex is"
Alex went pale, "You can't do that, they will think I'm a snitch".
"You are right, well we can fib".
"I don't know anything about Amy and Mason, they died, but I had nothing to do with it. I hate Mother's that come around after their children go missing, acting like they care. If she was such a great Mother, why is her Daughter dead"? Mac walked over kicking the back of the chair, making Alex fall backward. Mac yelled, "I told you to stop rocking on your chair, look what happened you fool".
"Please stop this, I will tell you who might be involved".
"Might be Alex"?
"Ok I know they wanted Mason dead". Mac and Don lifted him up, and bang the chair. Alex was petrified of them, he knew if they went to the streets using his name, he was dead. Mac yelled, "Who is to blame Alex"?
"Oh God promise you won't tell anyone, I told you". Mac glared, Alex screamed , " Ben Stevens, he is sick he would skin me alive, and make his people watch".
"Oh great, maybe we will hand you over to him"
"No please".
"Oh you are crying like a baby now, you make me sick". Mac walked out slamming the door. Alex was shaking, "God he isn't going to use my name is he"? Don sat down, "No fool, we are not going to write your death sentence, but pigs like you would deserve it".
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Post by jennifer1983 on Jan 15, 2011 0:58:36 GMT -6
Great update to our story Jessie. I'm so glad Stella is happy about Mac and Lindsay being together and I also hope you update again soon.
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Post by melindajo2000 on Jan 15, 2011 18:04:57 GMT -6
great update, I like that Stella approves and is going to check in on Lindsay
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