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Post by jessie on Sept 5, 2010 0:27:32 GMT -6
Thanks for your comments , glad you love this story. It was the one, I was afraid to write for a long time. ;D
Chapter 5
Lucy got to the house, and Jock and Ellie ask her what is wrong? She didn't answer them, and ran into the house, and upstairs. Sue Ellen came right after, and Jock walked over, "did you and Lucy have another fight, what is wrong with you both"?
"It wasn't me, ask Valene"? Sue Ellen ran in the house, and Miss Ellie was so confused. "Jock what is going on around here"?
" I don't know but I will find out, here is Valene coming". Jock and Ellie were waiting, when JR drove up. Valene saw him, and his Parents, and she didn't know what to do? She kept walking and Jock yelled, "Valene Ewing stop this instant, what is going on with Lucy"?
"She is mad at me, I need to talk to her"
"Oh I suppose Sue Ellen is mad too"?
"Yes, Sue Ellen is mad, I'm sorry I don't want to talk about it". JR ran over, "what is going on, everyone looks upset"?
" I don't know JR, Lucy came running home like she was running from the devil. Sue Ellen came back looking like she had been punched in the stomach, you tell me"?
JR is glaring at Valene, but he runs in the house, and Valene ran after him. She was yelling his name, not thinking about other people hearing anything. JR stopped at the bottom of the stairs, and yelled, "You couldn't keep your mouth shut, one time Valene, and you ruined everyone's lives".
"Lucy heard me and Sue Ellen fighting over it".
"You had to tell Sue Ellen, you couldn't let me tell her".
"JR Lucy knows you are her Daddy".
They hear glass shatter in the living room, and Valene is shaking. JR shook Valene, what is wrong with you , be quiet". He walked to see who it was, thinking it was Sue Ellen or Lucy. He walked in, and Gary is standing there the look on his face, was a look of shock disgust, and hatred. JR felt sick, "Gary I'm sorry, I didn't know myself, until yesterday when she told me".
Gary didn't say anything, he walked up to JR, punching him knocking him down. Valene ran over, "Gary stop it was so many years ago, the same night you slept with Marilee, I wanted to hurt you back. I got pregnant, and I thought it was yours, but I hated myself thinking it could be JR's. I had your blood tested, by Dr. Simms and he confirmed it wasn't your baby. It had to be JR's, you two were the only two men, I ever slept with". Gary raised his hand, but stopped himself, he screamed "My brother, Valene".
"I'm so sorry, please forgive me".
"Never, I hate you Valene, this whole family makes me sick. The only person, I thought was mine, truly mine, is his. I will never forgive you for this Valene, not as long as I live". Gary ran out, and Valene was crying. JR got up, he put his hand on her shoulder.
" I ruined everything JR".
Sue Ellen opened Lucy's door, and a shoe came flying hitting her in the face. Sue Ellen screamed, and Lucy jumped off the bed. "OMG I thought you were my Mother"
"You threw a shoe, I think you broke my nose", She was bleeding and Lucy sat her on the bed. She ran and grabbed a cold cloth , and a towel, helping Sue Ellen. She started to cry, so did Sue Ellen, they just hugged each other.
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Post by jennifer1983 on Sept 5, 2010 2:50:35 GMT -6
Great update Jessie.
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Post by melindajo2000 on Sept 5, 2010 10:00:48 GMT -6
Poor Gary I dont blame him for going after JR. what is Jock and Miss Ellie going to say? Jock is going to be be ticked lol. excellent work Jessie
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Post by jessie on Sept 5, 2010 18:16:39 GMT -6
Chapter 6
Sue Ellen touched Lucy's face, " I'm so sorry you found out that way"?
"You all knew all this time, and never told me"
"The only person who knew was your Mom. She was either scared, or didn't want to lose your Daddy , and lied. JR just found out, but I'm just as shocked as you. All these years, I thought your Mom, and JR hated each other, and it was a front to cover up the truth".
"I hate JR, he isn't my Daddy Sue Ellen"
"He is but Gary is your Daddy too. You can't push Gary aside now, it wasn't his fault Sweetie".
"My Mom slept with JR how disgusting, who would want that man"?
"Thanks Lucy", Sue Ellen got up, and went to the bathroom. She looked in the mirror, and her face, looked a mess. She was going to have a black eye, great people will think JR did it.
"Sue Ellen , I'm sorry but he is horrible, I hate him".
"Ok Lucy, at the moment so do I, but he was lied to also".
"Is that why my Mom gave me to JR, she wanted me with him"?
"I don't know, you have to ask her Lucy".
" Your my Step Mom Sue Ellen". Lucy smiled, and Sue Ellen laughed, "Oh that is scary girl". They heard, Lucy's door open, and JR and Valene walked in. Lucy screamed, "Get out of my room, or I will hurt you". Sue Ellen walked out of the bathroom, and Valene and JR were shocked seeing her face. "OMG Sue Ellen what happened to you"? JR ran over to her.
Lucy yells, "I thought it was her, and I threw a shoe, hitting Sue Ellen in the face. I wish it was you Valene, not her". Valene started to cry, "I'm your Mother Lucy please listen to me".
"Never, your not my Mother, and he will never be my Father. I guess I don't have a Daddy anymore".
"Yes you do Gary is your Father Lucy". JR says
"Really you slept with my Mother you disgusting man".
Sue Ellen laughed, and Valene and JR looked at her. "I'm sorry, I'm with her on that one".
"Get out of my room now", Lucy walked over, and picked up this beautiful Snow Globe that Valene, had made for her. It was a photo, of her Lucy and Gary inside. Lucy smashed it against the wall shattering it, into a million pieces. Valene was devastated, and ran out of the room. JR was shocked, " I know you are angry, but that was something you treasured, you will regret that later". Lucy ran over hitting JR, and Sue Ellen grabbed her pulling her back. JR walked to the door, "I'm sorry Lucy, I really am". He walked out shutting the door, and Lucy was crying. She walked over kneeling down, looking at the glass. Sue Ellen walked over, " I will get Teresa to help clean this up, how about me and you go out just the two of us"?
"Really you want to go with JR's child".?
"Yes, I want to go out with you Lucy".
"Fine, no tricks , I don't want JR"
"No JR, get ready, and I will have Teresa come up". Sue Ellen walked out of the room. Lucy walked over picking up the picture of the three of them, and she sat on the bed. She had tears falling down her cheeks, she touched the photo, touching Gary's face. She whispered, "Goodbye Daddy", she dropped the photo, and went to the closet, to get changed.
Sue Ellen told Teresa about the mess, she said she would clean it up, after they went out. Sue Ellen walked upstairs, going into her room. She noticed JR on the balcony, she walked out, and touched his shoulder. He turned, "Oh Sue Ellen, are you ok"?
"I'm sore, tomorrow will be worse, I don't think anything is broken. I'm going out with Lucy, just to talk. She is angry, maybe she will come around JR".
"No she won't , I don't blame her Sue Ellen".
"JR",
"Yes", JR looked at Sue Ellen
"You really just found out, that isn't a lie? It wasn't set up, years ago, that is why Valene didn't really fight for Lucy"?
"No, I didn't know, If I did would I allow her to treat me the way she does"?
"JR you didn't treat her great either".
"Exactly, I didn't know, I feel sick".
"JR why after all this time, did Valene start this mess"?
"I don't know Sue Ellen, I was thinking the same thing"?
"Gary won't forgive her, what than"?
"Gary knows he found out by accident, he punched me. He said he hated her , and ran out of this house. I hope he isn't drinking again, Ma, Ma, will blame me".
"Do you care about Valene JR"?
"What no I want you not Valene, it was the worst mistake of my life"
Sue Ellen started to cry, and JR hugged her, and whispered, " I'm sorry Sugar". She walked away, "I will be back soon, please stay home, so we can talk JR".
' I will be here, I have a headache, and I'm sure it is going to get worse". Sue Ellen got ready, and left, JR sat on the bed, and laid back. He looked at the door, and for the first time in his life, he felt completely lonely. He shut his eyes, and realized, how Sue Ellen must feel every time, he walked out the door, leaving her alone.
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Post by melindajo2000 on Sept 5, 2010 19:06:09 GMT -6
great chapter, i love this story more and more every chapter. The last paragraph was great, I felt sorry for JR
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Post by Sanda on Sept 5, 2010 22:54:09 GMT -6
Great updates Jessie.
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Post by jennifer1983 on Sept 6, 2010 1:57:59 GMT -6
Great update Jessie.
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Post by jessie on Sept 13, 2010 22:09:54 GMT -6
Chapter 7
Sue Ellen and Lucy went to a restaurant, and sat down. Lucy wanted a beer, but Sue Ellen ordered 2 cokes.
"Sue Ellen we are out to forget, why can't I have a beer".?
"Your underage, and liquor doesn't help Lucy Ewing"
"Fine I guess I won't feel better being out with you".
"Lucy I know your angry , and you have every right to be angry, but Valene and Gary are your Parents. JR won't push himself on you , he knows you don't like him. He didn't know Lucy , your Mom kept the secret. I think she did it with good intentions, but it was wrong".
"If you are here to defend my Mother, and that disgusting man your married too , I'm leaving "
"Lucy stop saying that to me, are you trying to hurt me too"?
"No, but he is disgusting he slept with my Mother, his own Brothers wife. Who would do that Sue Ellen, someone respectable, or someone so low"?
" It was wrong, it happened Lucy you and Gary are the real victims in this situation. Please don't push your Dad away, Gary needs you".
Lucy started to cry, " I loved my Daddy, she took him away from me".
"No, you both should talk he loves you Lucy".
"Are you kidding, does he visit or call me no? I wonder if he thought maybe I wasn't his"?
"Your Father wanted to get away from the family, and you were in the middle of all this mess. JR took you away from Valene, but all these years we thought he ran your Ma Ma out of town. It wasn't that way, she wanted you raised by your Grandparents, she knew they would give you a great home, and they did".
"I wanted my Parents Sue Ellen, I didn't care about the great home".
" I know Lucy, I'm so sorry, I don't know what to say"?
"Say this is all a dream, I feel sick knowing JR is my Father".
"Do you think you can talk to JR, and work things out"?
"Never, I will never forgive him or my Mom, I hate them both". Sue Ellen smiled, " Ok Sweetie lets eat, and talk about this later". Lucy smiled, " Are you paying Sue Ellen"?
'Yes, Lucy I'm paying".
Lucy smiled, "With JR's credit card"?
"Both our credit card Lucy"
"I will order something real expensive, Daddy can afford it". Sue Ellen smiled, " Yeah he can", and they both ordered dinner.
Back at Southfork,
Gary drove up, banging right into JR's car. Bobby, Miss Ellie and Jock were outside. JR and Valene ran out, and were staring, when Gary got out of the car drunk. Jock ran over grabbing Gary, "what is wrong with you Gary, what if the boys were outside right now"?
"Leave me alone", Gary went to walk and Jock grabbed his arm. Miss Ellie yelled, "Gary you drove in this condition, you could have killed someone"
" I wish, I killed myself",
Bobby ran over, "what are you talking about, what is wrong Gary"?
"Oh my Wife, and JR didn't tell you all"?
JR walked over, "Gary can we talk alone, so we can explain"?
"Explain what, you are a disgusting man JR".
"Ok fine, lets go inside, our Parents don't need to hear this"
"Why , Daddy guess what JR was the first son to give you a Grandchild"?
Miss Ellie walked over, " You were Lucy was our first, did you have a fight with Valene"?
"Fight not really, but she is a liar, I will never forgive that Tramp"
"Gary Ewing shut up, and go upstairs, and sober up". Jock yells
"Yes Sir", Gary walked away but stopped in front of JR. "You happy now JR, you always ruined my life? You took the only good thing in my life away from me. I hate you, I will never forgive you and Valene".
Valene ran over, and Gary screamed, "Don't you dare touch me, you make me sick".
Jock walked over, " Gary what are you so angry about"?
"JR is Lucy's Daddy , how should I feel"? He walked into the house slamming the door, and everyone stared at Valene, and JR.
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Post by melindajo2000 on Sept 13, 2010 22:14:39 GMT -6
great update love this story
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Post by jennifer1983 on Sept 14, 2010 2:44:28 GMT -6
Great update Jessie.
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Post by jessie on Sept 14, 2010 21:38:04 GMT -6
Chapter 8
Jock and Miss Ellie are staring at Valene and JR. Jock walked over, "which one of you want to explain, what Gary just said"?
JR back away, "Daddy it happened once, I just found out recently, I'm Lucy's Daddy". Miss Ellie ran over, "JR you slept with Valene why"?
"It happened Mom, I can't explain why , it was wrong".
"You disgust me JR, you really do". She started to walk in the house, and JR yelled, "Yeah go to your favorite son Ma Ma" Jock and Bobby were shocked, and Miss Ellie turned around. "What did you say"?
"You heard me Ma Ma, Gary isn't innocent, in all this. The same day I slept with Valene, he cheated on her with Marilee".
"OMG why are you telling me this"?
"Because I'm not the only bad guy in this situation. I'm sorry Gary was hurt, it happened, does anyone wonder how I feel"?
"I don't care how you feel JR", Jock yells
'I just found out , I have a daughter, that lived under my roof since she basically was born. She hates me with good right, but it kills me to Ma Ma. Gary is to blame for this mess, but Lucy is his child, I wouldn't expect Lucy to love me now." Jock and Miss Ellie were staring, and Valene yelled, " we made a mistake, but it was my fault, I didn't want to lose Gary, so I kept the truth all this time". Bobby yelled, " Why come here now Valene, and bring this up"?
" I felt sick for years lying to JR and Gary, but if I knew this would happen"
Jock laughed, " Did you think everyone would just pat JR on the back, and say good boy, and smile and say it is ok Valene"?
"Of course not Jock, I'm not stupid, but you thought I was all these years".
"Oh don't Valene, what you and JR did was disgusting and cruel. JR you slept with your brothers wife, that is even low for you JR". Jock and Ellie walked into the house. Bobby was staring, " Poor Lucy and Gary they are the ones that lose. You both still have your Daughter, he lost his. JR I can't believe you, I really can't". Bobby walked into the house, and JR walked over sitting in a chair. Valene walked over sitting beside him, and she touched his shoulder.
"I'm so sorry JR, this is all my fault".
"No it was mine they were right, sleeping with you was wrong"
"We were just reacting to Marilee and Gary. We never loved each other it was all revenge".
"Wow Valene, that makes us sound even more disgusting". Lucy and Sue Ellen drove up, seeing Valene and JR outside alone. Sue Ellen was shocked and hurt, she got out of the car. Lucy was walking to the door, when JR yelled, "Lucy can we talk just for a moment"?
"What do you want JR do you want me to call you Daddy"?
"Lucy stop please"
"I hate you, where is Gary Valene"?
"Lucy Ewing, Gary is your Father, and call me Mom".
"Never again, your no Mother to me, you left me with this Pig". Sue Ellen walked over, " Lucy enough please".
"He is a pig he slept with my Daddy's girl, because he has a sex addiction. Sue Ellen he probably made out with her , while we were out". Sue Ellen looked at JR, who yelled, " Fine go in the house Lucy, I give up".
"What you give up on me"?
"I give up, you hate me, I have to deal with it".
Lucy ran over smacking JR over and over, and he held her tight. She was screaming, when Gary ran out, "get your hands off her JR, or I will hurt you". JR let go, and Lucy stared at Gary, and he walked over touching her face. "Daddy". She hugged him, and he held her tight. Sue Ellen whispered, "Gary take Lucy into the house , she had enough for the day". Valene walked over touching Gary, and he yelled, "Stay away from us Valene".
JR walked over, "Enough Gary, you started this mess with your drinking, and you went after my girl remember"?
"Marilee was your girl JR, you slept with half of Dallas".
"So did you Gary, so shut up".
Lucy looked at Gary, " OMG this is to much, you slept with Marilee Stone"?
"Yes, that is why your Mother jumped at the chance to bed JR".
"You all are sick, you all need serious help". She ran into the house, and Sue Ellen went to walk in. Gary laughed, "Sue Ellen you are beautiful, why stay with him, you know what he is"?
"Yeah Gary, but you are no better obviously". She walked into the house, and Valene Gary and JR just stared at each other.
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Post by Sanda on Sept 14, 2010 23:44:21 GMT -6
Great updates Jessie.
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Post by jennifer1983 on Sept 15, 2010 2:11:15 GMT -6
Great update Jessie.
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Post by melindajo2000 on Sept 15, 2010 15:08:29 GMT -6
In a way I dont feel sorry for Gary because he brought it on sleeping with Marilee but there is a child involved. I thought Jock and Miss Ellie would react the way they did- you really wrote them IC. this gets better all the time and I hope you update soon
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Post by jessie on Sept 15, 2010 19:56:07 GMT -6
Thanks for all your comments about my story, thanks for reading it.
Chapter 9
Gary was still feeling the effects of the alcohol. He walked over pushing JR, who pushed him back, and he fell backward. Valene ran over, "Gary are you ok"?
"Get off of me, I don't need your help. You ruined my life are you happy, both of you"?
JR ran over grabbing Gary, " You are not innocent in all this, Gary. This started with you, sleeping with Marilee. We saw you Gary, so yes we made a mistake but you were no better".
"You are my brother JR, how could you"?
"I'm sorry it happened ".
"Yeah you made a baby, the girl I thought was mine all these years. Wow you had her under your roof, and you didn't know she was yours . She hates you JR, and I have a feeling she will never love you ever. I might have lost her, but so have you two".
Valene was crying and Gary grabbed her, "this is all your fault, you acted like a tramp Valene".
JR grabbed Gary and they both were fighting. Jock and Sue Ellen ran out, and they see Gary fall in the pool. Gary was screaming, when Jock ran over. "Both of you stop this, your Mother is so upset. Lucy is upstairs crying, do either of you care"?
Gary got out of the pool, and Jock yelled, "enough sit down, no more fighting".
Gary was walking into the house, when Valene ran after to him. Gary screamed "stay away from me, don't you get it , I will never let you back into my life. I will look at you, and see you all over him, and I feel sick". Sue Ellen ran over, "what about you Gary, you were all over Marilee, did you forget that"?
"Your defending them"?
"No, I'm sick about what happened, but come on you are just as bad as them".
" I didn't sleep with my Brother's wife".
"No his girlfriend, just as bad".
"Marilee was his girlfriend, but she was dating half of Dallas".
"She still is, but who cares,"?
"I was drinking, I had an excuse".
"You have used your drinking as an excuse so many times. You slept with Marilee, because you wanted to. You have not been around for Lucy she needs a Father. She loves you Gary, go to her, and help her".
" What not Daddy, you are pathetic Sue Ellen"?
"Why"?
Jock walked over, "enough Gary go inside, and go sleep it off. I will help Lucy, you three only think of yourselves obviously".
Valene ran into the house, and JR yelled , "are you happy Dad"?
"I should beat the crap out of you JR, for hurting this family".
"It happened 17 years ago , I didn't know she was mine? I'm sorry, but I can't take it back".
Sue Ellen walked into the house, and Gary followed her. She was walking upstairs, and Gary grabbed her arm. "Sue Ellen what is it about JR, that keeps you in his bed"?
"I'm not talking to you Gary, but look at the yourself in the mirror".
Sue Ellen got to the top of the stairs, and Gary pushed her against the wall. "Who do you think you are talking to? How dare you talk to me that way"?
"Stop feeling sorry for yourself Gary, and be there for your Daughter.".
Gary screamed, " She isn't my daughter"
They heard a cry, and they both look and Lucy was staring at them. She was devastated she ran back in her bedroom, and Sue Ellen looked at Gary. "Are you not going to go to her"?
"No you go", Gary staggered to his room, and Sue Ellen couldn't believe he turned his back, on Lucy, she didn't deserve that.
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