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Post by jessie on Aug 20, 2010 2:20:01 GMT -6
A New story, hope you like it
chapter 1
Miss Ellie was so happy, all her boys were under the same roof, and she wanted this visit with Gary and Valene to be a happy one. She sat everyone down, and demanded that everyone, put their hard feeling aside, and get along for once. Gary and Valene were in the guest room, and they all had a lovely supper the night before. Jock and Ellie still expected everyone to get up early 8am to have breakfast together it was Saturday, so they didn't have to rush out for work.
Sue Ellen woke up, and leaned over noticing JR was out of bed already. She got up going to the bathroom, thinking he would be in there but he wasn't . It was only 7:15am, and she put on her housecoat walking to John Ross room, he was asleep already. She noticed everyone's else's doors were closed. She knew he took off to meet his latest fling, and it made her sick. She was tired of making excuses. She walked downstairs, she would have her coffee, so she could settle her nerves. She made the coffee, and was going to go out on the deck. She was just about to go outside, when she heard voices coming from the den. She knew it was JR's voice but she wasn't sure about the other voice. She walked to the door, knowing JR would kill her for ease dropping, but she didn't care. She listened, and she was happy the door, was open very slightly. She stood by the wall, so no one would notice her, and she was shocked the second voice was Valene. She couldn't understand why JR, and Valene were in there alone? She could hear Valene crying, and she heard JR, saying, "don't you dare, try to cause trouble now Valene. I will not tolerate it, do you understand, it happened, it will stay a secret"?
Sue Ellen heard Valene says, " you might feel alright about it , but I can't live with it anymore". She heard Valene start to cry, and JR grabbed her, "promise me you will keep your mouth shut".
Sue Ellen dropped her coffee cup, and she heard silence in the den. She ran so fast up the stairs, she knew they didn't see her. JR walked out seeing the coffee cup, but didn't see anyone around. He walked to the living room, then the kitchen. Valene walked out, "Someone heard us , what if it was Gary or Sue Ellen"?
"Go to your room, forget what we discussed today". Valene ran upstairs to her room. She looked at Gary, he was still sound to sleep. She got in bed looking at him, she felt sick keeping this secret from him. She shut her eyes, scared to death wondering, who heard them, and how much they heard?
JR walked upstairs, he went to his room, seeing Sue Ellen laying on the bed. He walked over looking at her, thankful she wasn't the one who heard him and Valene. He laid on the bed, and couldn't help but worry wondering who was outside the door? He shut his eyes, and Sue Ellen looked at him, she knew he was keeping something from her. She knew it was bad, but she was so afraid, it would destroy the family. What could JR and Valene be hiding from everyone"?
She drifted off asleep, and was awoken by JR telling her to get up. She dressed, and got ready for breakfast. Her and JR were leaving the room, just as Valene and Gary came out. Gary smiled, " Good morning you two, did you sleep well"?
Sue Ellen glared at Valene, and smiled, " Yeah just great", and she walked downstairs, not waiting for JR. Valene and JR knew who was outside the door this morning it was Sue Ellen, they both felt sick, "what did she hear"?
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Post by jennifer1983 on Aug 20, 2010 2:53:18 GMT -6
Great start to your new story Jessie. I'm just wondering what secret that JR and Valene are keeping.
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Post by melindajo2000 on Aug 20, 2010 10:18:27 GMT -6
great start, I am really curious to know what is going on. I hope you update soon Jessie
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Post by Sanda on Aug 20, 2010 15:35:11 GMT -6
Great start to your new story Jessie. I wonder what secret JR and Valene are keeping. Please update soon.
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Post by jessie on Aug 20, 2010 18:08:36 GMT -6
Chapter 2
Everyone went to breakfast, Jock and Ellie liked seeing everyone at the table. JR and Valene could see Sue Ellen was angry, she wouldn't look at either of them. JR touched Sue Ellen's hand, she pulled away, Miss Ellie noticed.
"Sue Ellen is something wrong"?
" Yes, I'm sorry, I'm feeling ill, please excuse me". She jumped up, leaving the table, and ran upstairs. JR stood up," excuse me, I better make sure everything is ok". He got up, walking upstairs, everyone ate breakfast, but everyone was quiet. JR walked into the bedroom, Sue Ellen was on the balcony, sitting in a lounge chair. He walked out, " Sue Ellen what is wrong"?
Sue Ellen didn't answer him, she keep looking over the land. He sat in the chair beside her, touching her shoulder. She pulled away, and JR grabbed her. "OK your angry, talk to me about it, don't act this way".
"Talk about what, I'm not feeling well, go have breakfast".
" Ok I know you heard something this morning that upset you. I'm sorry you found out that way, but pushing me away, doesn't help".
" I'm tired of your cheating, I really am, go have your fun. I will from now on too, remember that". Sue Ellen got up walking into the bedroom, JR ran after her, turning her towards him".
" What are you saying Sugar, that your going to have another fling"?
" Yeah, just like you, how could you with your Brothers wife".
" Valene"?
"Don't pretend it isn't true, why else was she crying in the Den?She can't keep it a secret anymore, it hurts to much. She is surprised, you have no heart or morals, it doesn't bother you. I should go downstairs, right this minute , and tell Gary. I would but he might drink again, and I wouldn't be able to forgive myself. Oh maybe I should get it on with Gary, what is good for you, should be good or him too".
JR was angry, he shook Sue Ellen," you sleep with Gary, I will kill you".
" OMG you are something, you really are sick".
"I'm not sleeping with Valene, that wasn't what she was crying about".
"You liar, tell me you never slept with Valene before"?
"I can't I did, once, that was all".
"I thought we were happy, why Valene, JR I hate you"?Sue Ellen went to run out of the room, but JR held the door shut.
"Listen to me, I just found this out today myself. I'm so confused, but I can't take back what happened,"
"Like you want to , she was another notch in your belt. You are not all that JR, I don't get why women, fall all over you? Valene she was one person, I thought would never touch you. OMG who is next Pam or Donna, they might be hard JR, they hate you more than I do at this moment"?
" I slept with her 17 years ago once, and everything changed"
"17 years ago, you slept with Valene"?
"Yes, one stupid night, Gary made a fool of himself. It was the Ewing BBQ, and Valene was there with Valene. I had a huge fight with my date Marilee Stone. She wanted revenge, so she set her sights on Gary. He was drinking, and ignoring Valene, Marilee went in for the kill. She wanted to hurt me so bad, she wanted me to know Gary and her had a party in the stables. Valene was so worried about Gary, and I was trying to help her find him. Leslie Marilee's friend was kind enough to tell us he was in the Stables. I took Valene over, and guess what we found, Gary and Marilee, making out in the hayloft, they were having fun. Valene was devastated, and I was mad, I was going to pay Gary back. I took Valene over to the pond, she needed a friend, but I knew she was so upset, it wouldn't take much to make love to her. We were talking , and before you knew it , we were making love. It was one time Sugar, Valene was so devastated after. She hated herself, and she hated me. We vowed we would never tell Gary, she still loved him, and wanted to spend the rest of her life with him."
"Why is she bringing this up now JR"?
JR turned away from Sue Ellen, he hated himself, he couldn't tell her the rest of the story. He knew she would be devastated, but his Parents would never forgive him.
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Post by melindajo2000 on Aug 20, 2010 20:13:59 GMT -6
OMG is this going where I think it is? This is so good, I really cant wait till you update. Poor Sue Ellen and Gary. Love your writing Jessie
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Post by jessie on Aug 21, 2010 16:28:11 GMT -6
Chapter 3
Sue Ellen walked over to JR, "do you still have feelings for Valene"?
"Feelings no, we made a mistake Sue Ellen"
"Why would she want to ruin her relationship with Gary"?
" She feels guilty ok, let it go Sue Ellen, please"
" I don't know if I can JR, I'm so tired of women being thrown in my face all the time. Can't you just be faithful to me, what is wrong with me"?
" Sue Ellen I was with Valene before I even met you"
" I know but now seeing her will make me sick".
"Don't do that Ma Ma, is so happy they are here. If you treat Valene different everyone will wonder why"?
" Fine, I will pretend, I can't wait until she leaves. I hate the thought that Gary doesn't know, that is wrong"
"This is Gary's fault, he cheated on her".
"Oh stop it, blame everyone else, you wanted her, and you got her. I bet you want her right now, I'm going for a walk" . Sue Ellen ran out of the room, and downstairs. She walked out on the deck, and everyone was outside. She glared at Valene, and she could see the hatred in Sue Ellen's eyes.
"I'm going for a walk see you guys later". Sue Ellen says as she is walking away.
"Can I come with you, I could use the walk". Sue Ellen turned looking at Valene. Miss Ellie smiled, "Of course she would want you to join her wouldn't you Sue Ellen"?
"Yes, of course it would be fine", Valene walked with Sue Ellen, they walked neither said a word. They walked for 5 minutes, when Valene touched her arm. "Stop we need to talk about what you heard".
" Don't worry JR told me everything, I will keep my mouth shut".
"Sue Ellen, I'm sorry you heard that way, but you really have to stay out of it"
" Who do you think you are Valene? You came back here, to cause trouble, I can't believe you"?
" I have to think of Gary this will devastate him"
" Yeah but he had fun too, I think Lucy will hate you more"
"Don't you think I know that , and it kills me". Valene was crying so hard, Sue Ellen walked over putting her hand on her shoulder. " She might be ok Valene".
" She hates JR, finding out he is her Daddy , she will hate me forever".
Sue Ellen is devastated , she couldn't believe what she heard. She grabbed Valene, " JR is Lucy's Father "?
"Yes, you said you heard everything, you didn't know"?
" OMG", Sue Ellen put her hands over her ears. She was crying, Valene was in shock, she screamed , I thought you knew"?
Sue Ellen screamed , " JR lied to me again, I'm telling Gary". She started to run, but Valene grabbed her.
"No your not, if anyone will tell him it is me".
"You let that man go on for 17years thinking he was the Daddy. JR knew he treated Lucy like crap, he is so horrible".
"JR didn't know until yesterday, I told him the truth yesterday".
" You really are a piece of work Valene, I hope Lucy despises you".
"I hate myself Sue Ellen, so if she does, I will deserve it".
"Yes you will, why say all this now"?
"I hate myself, JR deserves to know, but Gary will never forgive me".
"You think, he will start drinking again, it will be your fault Valene". Sue Ellen ran away to the Stables, and Valene, stood crying, she didn't know what to do?
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Post by melindajo2000 on Aug 21, 2010 16:55:24 GMT -6
wow this is one of your best stories Jessie. I cant wait for everyone to find out. I cant wait to find out Miss Ellie's reaction she probably will be nice to Valene but that is all. Please update soon
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Post by jennifer1983 on Aug 22, 2010 1:49:35 GMT -6
Great updates Jessie. I can't believe that JR slept with Valene and that JR is Lucy's father.
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Post by Sanda on Aug 22, 2010 10:51:18 GMT -6
Great updates Jessie. OMG, I can't believe that JR slept with Valene and that he Lucy's father. I can't wait to read how the rest of the Ewing Family is going to react to the news.
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Post by jessie on Sept 3, 2010 22:20:30 GMT -6
Chapter 4
Sue Ellen climbed up in the hayloft, and was sitting looking out the window up there. She was thinking, when someone touched her shoulder. She jumped and she yelled, "Valene get away from me, I can't talk to you right now".
"Sue Ellen your upset, about something that happened so many years ago. Please promise me you won't say anything to Gary or Lucy, or anyone".
" I don't owe you anything Valene, I should go outside, and scream it to the world".
"Don't you dare, can't you have some compassion for me"?
"Oh what makes me sick there was 3 women, I always thought, I could trust JR would never have. "You , Donna and Pam, you acted like you hated him, but you are sick Valene, how could you lie all this time? JR just found out, he didn't have the courage to tell me, I had to hear it from his lover. Maybe you and JR can marry ,and raise Lucy. Oh your Grandparents raised her all these years. It is funny Lucy hated her Daddy, that is so funny. Do you have any idea how this is going to hurt Lucy? The man she despised all these years, Fathered her on a cheap night of passion. You and JR are disgusting, blame Gary because of his cheap sick one night stand with Marilee. They know it was a one night stand, you and JR really should get a Academy award for all the years, everyone thought you hated each other. Have you both got in on, while you were here on this short trip"?
"No, I don't want JR, I want Gary, and I feel bad about Lucy. I left her here because I felt guilty. I'm sorry your hurt Sue Ellen, but this wasn't about you".
"JR is my husband, how dare you say this is not about me" Sue Ellen was crying and Valene went to touch her and Sue Ellen pushed her away. They didn't know their day was going to get worse. Lucy had walked into the Stables with Muriel, and they heard fighting going on. Lucy being nosey, she went up the ladder, to see who was fighting?. She was shocked when she noticed it was Sue Ellen and her Mother. She motioned to Muriel to be quiet. Sue Ellen was crying, and Valene got up, "Sue Ellen calm down, this is making everything worse".
"Really you haven't seen anything yet Valene, how do you think Gary will react, when he finds out you slept with JR "?
Lucy almost fell off the ladder, she held on, but she was in shock. She couldn't believe her Mother would sleep with JR, the enemy that kept them apart".
"Ok I made a mistake Sue Ellen, what do you want me to say"?
" Why did you have to come back, and say this now"?
" Lucy has to know the truth Sue Ellen it isn't fair to her. It isn't fair to JR either, he has a right to know she is his Daughter". Lucy head was spinning, she crawled up the ladder. "What did you say Mother"?
Valene and Sue Ellen are shocked, Lucy got up, she ran at her Mom, and pushed her. Valene fell backward, and Sue Ellen screamed,"Lucy stop it, JR is your Daddy".
Lucy was crying, "Daddy, NO".
Lucy ran running down the ladder, Valene screamed, "stop Lucy". She went down running out of the stable. Sue Ellen and Valene, went down, and screamed for her to stop. Lucy stopped, she turned, walking back to Valene, she smacked her, shocking Muriel, and Sue Ellen.
"I hate you , I hope Daddy never forgives you. I will never think of that man as my Father, you liar, you left me with him. You coward, you disgust me , I will hate you until the day , I die". Lucy ran away, and Muriel ran after her. Valene fell to her knee's crying, Sue Ellen was so upset she walked over kneeling down beside her. Valene was crying, "she will never forgive me".
"Can you blame her Valene"? Sue Ellen got up, and walked back to the house, leaving Valene alone.
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Post by melindajo2000 on Sept 3, 2010 22:39:21 GMT -6
Wow Lucy knows can she ever forgive Valene. I hope she can it will be interesting finding out. I hope she can but she is stubborn. loved this chapter
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Post by jennifer1983 on Sept 4, 2010 2:36:22 GMT -6
Great update Jessie.
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Post by Sanda on Sept 4, 2010 23:22:12 GMT -6
Great update Jessie. I hope that Lucy will be able forgive Valene in time.
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Post by melindajo2000 on Sept 4, 2010 23:23:34 GMT -6
oh I was hoping for another update hope you update this awesome story soon love it a lot. it is so much fun to read
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