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Post by melindajo2000 on Dec 2, 2011 1:06:08 GMT -6
he is really bad trying to force her to do stuff she doesn't want to do, while he is married, he really is sick...excellent writing!
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Post by Sanda on Dec 2, 2011 13:47:53 GMT -6
Great update Jessie. I don't like how rude JR is being to Ashley in this story. I LOVE that JR was going to Subway to get Ashley a Subway sandwich. I LOVE eating at Subway.
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Post by jessie on Dec 2, 2011 15:23:25 GMT -6
OK this is my most upsetting chapter to write. This story is hard to write, but one of my most challenging, I have plans for this one, that will be different, hope you continue to read. I understand if you don't, I wouldn't expect you to read it if you don't like it. Chapter 12 1 week later Ashley was still making JR wait, and he was getting a little frustrated. He has never been with anyone that wouldn't make love after a few times being together. He had a few nights away from her which was OK with Ashley, because the nights he demanded to sleep over she couldn't sleep she felt so tense. JR knew it but he wasn't going to stop trying. It was Thursday afternoon Ashley had a meeting with one of the Representatives that comes from the store to see her vases, and other little ornaments she sells. They said they were selling like crazy. She was happy they gave her another big order. She said she would have the items ready in 2 weeks. They they left she went to the kitchen to get a water when she heard someone knocking on the door. She walked over thinking they forgot something, and opened it. "You forgot something" Marilee and Sue Ellen were standing at the door. Sue Ellen glared at Marilee, "She is blind"? "I'm right here, who are you"? Marilee grabbed Sue Ellen's arm, "We are the building Christmas commity can we come in, and chat"? "I don't think so" "Sweetie we are not going to hurt you, we want to know what you think of all the plans we have for Holiday Events this year. We want everyone input" "I recognize your voice, but I can't place from where"? She said to Marilee but Marilee whispered, "I think we met in the laundry room, I live upstairs on 9b" "Oh sorry" Sue Ellen grabbed Marilee, "Lets go" Marilee shook her head, "May we come in Ashley" "Ok I guess it would be OK, who is your friend"? "This is Sue she lives on the first floor". Ashley smiled, "Hi Sue" She put out her hand Sue Ellen took it, "Hi". They walk in, Ashley took them to the living room, "Please sit down". Sue Ellen and Marilee sat on the couch. "May I get you a water or tea or coffee"? "No hard liquor sweetie"? Marilee asked "I don't really drink, I might have some wine" "Really I see Bourbon are you lying"? Sue Ellen asked very abruptly. Ashley was startled, "No I'm not lying, that is my boyfriends bourbon, but you can have a glass if you like" "My husband loves Bourbon, does your drink a glass before bed, and supper, and before sex"? Ashley didn't say anything Marilee smacked Sue Ellen's arm. She whispered, "This is to much" "Who are you both"? "The committee, I'm sorry Sue, and her husband are having trouble. The bourbon threw her off, she is really sorry" "Yeah I'm sorry I hate little Tramps that take other women's husbands, they make my skin crawl" "I'm sorry your upset, but I don't understand why your acting this way with me" "I saw the bourbon, and I lost it, I could pull the hair out of the little witch that is bedding my husband. I bet she is all young, and sweet, and acts all innocent, but she is a Tramp" "Maybe you should both leave, I'm not feeling well" "Why we are all girls here, just talking no harm done" Sue Ellen yelled. Ashley walked over sitting in a chair, she was nervous. Marilee motioned for Sue Ellen to go check out the rooms for evidence of JR. She got up, Ashley jumped, "What are you doing"? "May I use your bathroom"? "Yes it is down the hall". Sue Ellen left Marilee smiled, 'So the plans for Christmas, we are thinking of having a little get together on the last Saturday before Christmas" "That would be lovely, I'm not sure I can attend" "Why you and your boyfriend have plans"? Ashley smiled, "I might go see my parents, I really miss them" "Why don't you go back, and live with them"? "I like it here why would you say that"? "Because are you not scared living alone being blind someone could come in, and hurt you or kill you" "Oh God that is so horrible thing to say, please leave my home" "Oh come on you think it all the time, I'm not going to hurt you. Your new boyfriend do you really know everything about him"? "I guess" "Your the talk of the building you know" "Why"? Sue Ellen walked back shaking her head, Marilee put her hand up. "Well I was just saying everyone sees how he looks at you. He is a great catch, why he likes you so, is a mystery" Sue Ellen smiled, "I guess she uses her vulnerability, and her disability to get what she wants" Ashely stood up, "Please leave, I don't use my disability, and I don't like what your implying. We are friends, I have not slept with my boyfriend, but that is none of your business" Sue Ellen walked over close, "You didn't sleep with him but did you have sex with the cowboy" "No" "Liar" Ashley jumped as Marilee grabbed Sue Ellen, "Lets go" "No maybe I will teach her a lesson what happens if you screw with another mans wife" Ashley ran to the door, but Sue Ellen put her foot out trying to stop her but she fell hitting her face against the wall. Ashley turned putting her hand out to Sue Ellen, and Marilee they were horrified, she was bleeding bad, Ashley fell to the floor as the both of them froze, not knowing what to do?
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Post by melindajo2000 on Dec 2, 2011 18:11:21 GMT -6
I feel terrible for Ashley I cant wait to see what they will do next, hopefully Sue Ellen will do the right thing. Great work on this story!
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Post by Sanda on Dec 2, 2011 20:12:23 GMT -6
I feel horrible for Ashley as well. I also hope that Sue Ellen does the right thing as well. Please update this awesome story again soon.
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Post by jessie on Dec 3, 2011 2:20:33 GMT -6
Chapter 13
Marilee grabbed Sue Ellen, "Why did you do that"?
"I didn't mean to what are we going to do"? Marilee ran to Ashley, and knelt down. "Get me a cold cloth hurry she is bleeding real bad".
Marilee touched her chin, "Ashley you will be ok"
Ashley whispered, "Help me please"
Sue Ellen ran over kneeling down with a couple wet towels. She was cleaning the wound they knew she probably would need stitches. Sue Ellen whispered, "We have to call 911"
"No wait we will get her to her bed, and clean her up"
"We can't leave her like this"
"It is a bump I'm not going down for this"
Ashley cried out, "Don't hurt me anymore please"
Marilee tried to calm her down she was so afraid. Marilee helped her up, and they got her to the bed, she laid down. Sue Ellen was cleaning her face up, but she turned, "It is real bad, she needs help"
"You will go to jail, it will heal in time".
They didn't realize the time was going by, when they heard someone come into the apartment. Marilee grabbed Sue Ellen, "God it is him he will kill us"
"No we will kill him this is his fault"
"What are we going to do"?
"Nothing we can do but confront him". JR came into the bedroom, "Ashley you didn't greet me". He was shocked, "What the hell are you two doing here"?
"We paid your little friend a visit" Sue Ellen said JR looked over seeing Ashley. "OMG what did you two do". He walked over seeing her face he felt sick. Ashley moaned he touched her face, "Ashley"
"JR thank God your here some ladies came here, and attacked me."
Sue Ellen went to go over but Marilee pulled her back. JR glared at them to shut up.
"Who were they"?
"They said they were the Christmas Committee, I believed them but they were acting crazy. The one lady said her husband was cheating, and it was like she was accusing me, I don't understand"
"What happened to your face"?
"I ran but I think one of them tripped me, I don't get it"
"Well no one is here, they must have thought you were someone else"
"No we have to call the Police, they might come back"
"You want the Police can you identify them"?
"What no but they hurt me"?
"They won't come back I promise, I will take care of you"
"No JR they have to pay"
"Shh I will go get your medication, just rest for a minute". He got up glaring at Sue Ellen and Marilee. They walked out of the room he shut the door.
He grabbed Sue Ellen, "You hurt her"?
"She is sleeping with my husband, I should have killed her"
"Go home, I will be home later, I'm going to make you regret this both of you"
"What I'm suppose to deal with that little Tramp sleeping with my husband"?
"I'm not sleeping with her, she is different she didn't deserve this"
"Your not having sex JR that is bull"
"I'm not she is so different than anyone I have ever met. I can't believe you did this, I have to make sure she is ok. I will be home get out of here now"
Sue Ellen glared at him but she knew she better go. She walked out so did Marilee, he shut the door, and leaned against it. He walked to the kitchen to get her sleeping medication, he wanted to make her rest, than he would go home, and deal with Sue Ellen. He walked to the room Ashley whispered, "JR"
"Yeah it is me I checked the house no one is here"
"JR your not married are you tell me the truth"
"Again Ashley no I'm not married, that women probably picked you because she is angry, and wants to lash out"
"Why me"?
"Because your a innocent target who couldn't defend herself, I promise you I will find these two women, and they will pay"
"Her name is Sue, the other one didn't tell me her name"
"Ok I will talk to the landlord to see if there is a Sue in the building"
"On the first floor"
"Ok"
"Your really think we shouldn't call the police"?
"No take your medicine, you need sleep"
"I was so scared JR, I thought they were going to kill me"
JR shut his eyes, "Ashley stop forget about them". She took her medication, "JR maybe I should go home to my Parents"
"Never"
"What"?
"I'm taking care of you, trust me for once Ashley"
"I'm tired JR, promise you won't leave me"
"I won't go to sleep" She turned , he touched her shoulder, as she fell asleep. He waited a few minutes he was sure she was out for a few hours he gave her two pills. He got up leaving he had to go home, but he would be back, he was sure Ashley would be ok while he was gone.
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Post by melindajo2000 on Dec 3, 2011 16:49:47 GMT -6
really good jessie
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Post by Sanda on Dec 3, 2011 17:33:19 GMT -6
Great update Jessie. I feel horrible for Ashley in this story.
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Post by jessie on Dec 4, 2011 13:32:10 GMT -6
Chapter 14
JR got home he was so livid he walked into the house, and was surprised to see the whole family, Miss Ellie, Clayton, Bobby, and Lucy in the living room with Sue Ellen. She had been crying, she told them everything, and they were shocked. Miss Ellie saw JR she got up screaming at him as he came into the living room.
'You used a young blind girl for your sexual games JR Ewing"
"What I didn't use anyone"?
"Sue Ellen told us everything all these nights you were with that young lady"
Lucy whispered, 'She is no lady, and she has to be blind to like him"
JR turned, "She is a lady more than you ever will be. I told her I wasn't married, and she would not allow me to sleep with her. She is wonderful, and Sue Ellen and Marilee tried to kill her today"
"I did not it was a accident"
"Really you tripped her"
"Well she was running for the door, I was upset"
"She was scared of you Sue Ellen rightfully so why did you , and Marilee go there"?
"Marilee told me about her, and she helped me find her"
"What were you going to do"?
"Talk it got out of hand she was acting all sweet, and innocent"
Miss Ellie turned , "If she didn't know Sue Ellen she was this is all on JR"
"I know that I hate that she was hurt. JR you left her alone she should go to the hospital"
"Hospital what did you , and Marilee do"? Miss Ellie asked
"She tripped her face was bleeding bad"
"JR why would you leave her like that"? Clayton yelled
"I had to come home, and confront Sue Ellen, she is sleeping"
Bobby stood up, "Lets go bring her back here she can't be alone"
Sue Ellen yelled, "That girl is not coming in my home"
"This is my home" Miss Ellie yelled but calmed down, "She can stay in the guestroom, and JR you will tell her the truth once she is able to deal with it"
"What am I suppose to do leave Southfork"? Sue Ellen yelled
"No stay away from her she will need rest, and JR will stay away most of the time too"
"Mom she needs me"
"No she needs a deceit man not someone like you"
"That is so rude Ma Ma"
Clayton yelled, "No you hit a new time low JR, she is vulnerable, and probably scared she is blind. You had to grab hold of her, and ruin her life, you really are something"
Bobby walked over, "This is not helping, lets go get her" Lucy smiled, "Hey Bobby why don't you hit on her your single"
JR turned, "Shut up Lucy he will never touch her"
"Why not because you never plan to leave her alone"
JR stormed out, and Bobby followed, Sue Ellen ran upstairs.
"Ellie this might be a mistake"
"JR and Sue Ellen hurt that young lady, we will help her heal, and JR will let her go, I have to do this"
"JR never lets go of what he wants". Lucy said but walked out of the living room, and ran upstairs.
"Lucy's right that young lady doesn't stand a chance, and you know it" Clayton sat down, Miss Ellie whispered, "How can do this"?
"He is JR Ewing he feels he can do anything he wants"
"He can't this time I will put a stop to it, he will not hurt her anymore than he already has"
"I'm more worried about Sue Ellen she is losing it"
"I know but she could go to jail for this"
"I know but we are using the girl to so the Ewing's don't have to account for what they done"
"I know but do you want Marilee, and Sue Ellen in trouble, and JR having to explain his actions"?
"Maybe they should they all need help"
Miss Ellie held his hand, "Your right but lets try my way"
Clayton pulled her close, "Lets hope your way is the right way, or we all will be sorry it might get worse" She shut her eyes, she didn't want to think that but she scared for her family, and Ashley.
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Post by Sanda on Dec 4, 2011 14:02:30 GMT -6
Great update Jessie. OMG the whole Ewing family is horrible in this chapter ganging up on JR becuase of what happened to Ashley. I hope that poor Ashley agrees to come live at Southfork so that Miss Ellie, Bobby, and Clayton can make her well becuase of what JR and Sue Ellen did to her.
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Post by melindajo2000 on Dec 4, 2011 14:53:58 GMT -6
wow this has a lot of twists and turns, it is so good..keep going please!
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Post by jessie on Dec 6, 2011 1:01:53 GMT -6
Chapter 15
JR and Bobby got to the condo, and went up to Ashley's place. JR went in running to the bedroom. Ashley wasn't in bed, he walked out , "She isn't in there Bobby"?
Bobby looked into the living room seeing her on the couch, she was curled up with a blanket. JR walked over , "Ashley I told you to wait in bed"
"You left me alone, I was sick, I made a mess"
"Shh I will clean it up, but your coming to my Parents home"
"No, I want to stay here"
Bobby walked over, "Ashley you are coming with us, you can't stay here"
"Who is that"?
"My Brother Bobby Ashley no one is here to hurt you"
"I thought those ladies would come back for me"
"Shh they won't hurt you ever again"
"JR tell me the truth are you married"?
"What'?
"Why else would that lady act that way, are you married tell me the truth". Ashley pleaded with tears in her eyes. Bobby was shocked when JR grabbed her firmly, " I will not tell you again no I'm not married".
"JR"
"Bobby watch her I will clean up the mess in the bedroom, and pack her a bag". JR got up, "Don't say anything".
JR walked down the hall pulling her sheets off the bed, he put them in the bathtub. He would come back, and clean up later, he just wanted to take her home, and let her get some rest. He grabbed her suitcase putting stuff in that she might need. He walked over grabbing her stuffed bunny putting it in the bag. He walked out putting the bag down. He walked over to Ashley, "Here put your coat on Sweetie"
Bobby helped as Ashley leaned into JR her head was hurting bad she didn't want to complain. She felt sick again, "JR I might get sick again". Bobby ran to the kitchen to get a bag just in case. JR smiled, "Bob carry the bag for us". Bob picked up the bag as JR walked Ashley to the door. He walked out, and locked the door as Ashley was walking with him. Bobby saw her face, the cut was bad she was black, and blue. He couldn't believe what Sue Ellen and Marilee did to such a defenseless person. They got in the elevator, and went to the garage. JR said he would sit in the back with her. Bobby put her bag in the front seat, and started driving. Ashley leaned her head on JR as he wrapped his arms around her. She felt safe she started to fall asleep. JR knew this probably was a mistake having Sue Ellen, and Ashley in the same house was a mistake. He didn't want to hurt Ashley anymore but he also knew he couldn't just walk away from her. Bobby could see how concerned JR was but he also wanted to hit JR for using her in the first place. He knew this was bound to happen he was a married man, and he heard with his own ears JR telling her he wasn't. Ashley was a sweet girl but Bobby knew first hand what happens to some of the ladies that get involved with JR. Sue Ellen was different, but she has changed so drastically since she married JR, mainly because of how he treated her. It wasn't Ashley's fault but Bobby knew Sue Ellen would hate her, and take it out on her. Bobby wanted to stop the car, and tell JR to get out, and take Ashley as far away from Dallas as he could get. He knew it was out of his hands he was going to have to watch this get worse, because it would , and he just prayed Ashley would be strong enough to deal with what they were putting her up to.
"Bobby"
" Yeah JR"
"She is special, can't you understand why I'm doing this"? Bobby could see she fell asleep, he whispered, "No JR, I don't understand, this is so wrong, and you know it"
JR pulled Ashley close, "Well I don't care what you think"?
"What"? Ashley moaned but JR whispered, "Go back to sleep, I'm sorry". She leaned into him, and fell back asleep, as Bobby continued driving home.
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Post by Sanda on Dec 6, 2011 1:29:35 GMT -6
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Post by jessie on Dec 12, 2011 16:18:46 GMT -6
Chapter 16
Bobby drove up to the house, he parked, and got out of the car opening the back door. JR woke up Ashley Bobby helped her out of the car. JR got out, and held her hand as Bobby grabbed her bags. JR was walking Ashley inside, she was a little nervous, she didn't know how the family would react to her. Sue Ellen stayed in her room she didn't want to see Ashley. JR walked her into the living room, Miss Ellie and Clayton stood up walking over to her.
"Ma Ma , Clayton this is Ashley my friend"
Miss Ellie looked at JR but took Ashley's hands. "Hi welcome to my home, I'm so sorry you were hurt your face looks so sore" Ashley smiled, "I can't see it that might be a good thing right". Miss Ellie smiled, "Let me help you to the guestroom". Ashley turned, "JR"
"Go with my Mom, I will be up in a minute". Bobby followed Miss Ellie and Ashley upstairs as Clayton whispered, "Sue Ellen is so upset, I swear JR"
"Sue Ellen should be upset she hurt Ashley for no reason"
"She was wrong, but she thought you were having an affair with her"
"I told you I have not slept with her Clayton if it is any of your business"
"She seems so sweet walk away before you destroy her like you destroyed Sue Ellen"
"I didn't destroy Sue Ellen stop with the drama Clayton"
"JR are you going to leave Sue Ellen for her"?
"Again it isn't your business". Clayton grabbed JR, "Don't hurt her that would be the most evilest thing you ever done. She trusts you JR tell her about your Wife, and child"
"I will when I'm ready, I'm going up to see if she is OK"
Upstairs
Miss Ellie walked her into the guestroom, and walked her over to the bed. Ashley sat down, "This is so kind of you taking me in tonight, but I would have been OK at home alone"
"No I think it is best your around people, and your safe here"
Bobby put her bags down, "Would you like me to unpack your things Ashley"
"It is OK, I can manage". Bobby smiled, "Someone still likes a stuffed bunny to cute"
"Oh that is Maggie May, my Parents gave her to me. She is my Buddy I know that is stupid, but I feel safe when she is around". Bobby put it in her hands, and she hugged it as Ellie and Bobby smiled. They turn as Lucy walked in, "Grandma who is our new guest"?
Miss Ellie turned, "Lucy this is JR's friend Ashley she will be staying with us while she is recovering"
"Oh God what happened"?
"Oh I fell it looks worse than it really is"
"You are blind, it looks pretty awful Ashley". Lucy sat beside her, taking the bunny from her arms. "This is yours"?
"Yeah"
"Cute JR gave you this"?
"No my family"
"Oh to cute, maybe we can talk later, would you like me to tell you all about my Uncle JR"?
Ashley smiled, "I would like that"
Miss Ellie gave Lucy a look, she knew her Grandma was angry. She got up, "Nice meeting you Ashley, I will see you around"
"Bye Lucy, don't forget about our little talk"
Lucy smiled, "Oh I won't count on it". She walked out running downstairs, as JR was coming up.
"Oh JR your friend Ashley is a sweet one we are going to have a long talk later"
"About what"?
"You"
JR grabbed Lucy's arm, "You say anything to her I swear you will regret it big time". Lucy pulled away, JR smiled, "I mean it Lucy keep your trap shut". He walked upstairs, as Lucy stood watching him. She wanted to run to Ashley to tell her to run, but she didn't want to cross JR, she never seen him more angry, and serious. She decided to stay out of JR's affairs this time, but maybe she will rile Sue Ellen, and maybe she will blow up, and JR's cover would be exposed. Lucy smiled, thinking she would do just that JR deserved to suffer, he has made the rest of them suffer for so long, it was his turn to feel the heat.
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Post by melindajo2000 on Dec 12, 2011 16:39:36 GMT -6
wow you really have this nicely planned out, this is a sensitive subject but the family dynamics you know so well, I am enjoying seeing you write Dallas again it was cool reading Lucy's reaction to JR-that sounded just like her. Keep up the great work and update soon please
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