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Post by melindajo2000 on Nov 28, 2011 7:05:34 GMT -6
JR is something hope Ashley is strong enough to deal with him. I hope Ashley doesn't get hurt . great chapter!
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Post by jessie on Nov 28, 2011 14:59:12 GMT -6
JR does something creepy in this chapter Chapter 7 "Ashley go get dressed , than we can go out". "I'm going to shower why don't you go to your place, and change clothes" "Why my clothes from yesterday smell or something"? "No I didn't mean that" "I know it is a good idea, I will take these keys, and come down once I'm changed. If you are not ready, I will let myself in, and wait in the living room" "Wait we are going to fast for me" "What breakfast go change, I will be back soon". He grabbed the keys, he locked the door, and left. Ashley walked to her bedroom making the bed first than she picked up the phone, calling her Mom. "Hello" "Mom it is me Ashley" "Hey baby girl how are you"? "I'm fine I miss you Mom" "Well you are coming home for Christmas it is weeks away" "Mom I met someone " "Ashley take it slow, I don't want you hurt" "I am Mom, but he " "He what"? "Nothing he is different you would like him" "Ashley something is wrong what happened" "He said I was a Ice Princess, and that I feel sorry for myself" "That jerk how dare him" "Mom I'm scared to let anyone in maybe he is right" "Don't you dare let him push you into anything you didn't sleep with him did you"? "Mom no but that is personal" "Ashley listen to me you have to keep your guard up Sweetie" "I know he kind of scared me, but he is taking me out to breakfast, I'm so confused" "Ashley come home now spend a few weeks with me, and your Father" "Mom no I will be fine, I just needed to hear my Mom's voice" "Call me tonight if you don't I will be on the first plane to Dallas" "Mom I will call" "What is this guys name"? "JR" "Oh well don't let this man scare you promise" "Promise Mom" "Bye call me" "Bye" Ashley hung up, she grabbed her housecoat going into the bathroom leaving the door open a little. She got in the shower, and was washing her self, and washing her hair. JR came down coming into the apartment , he heard the shower going. He went to go to the living room but he was drawn down the hall going in her room standing by the wall. He saw Ashley come out of the bathroom with a housecoat on, drying her hair. She stopped, and whispered, "JR you here"? JR didn't say a word he held his breath thinking she would be upset knowing he came into her room while she was showering. She walked over to her dresser grabbing her panties, and bra, and socks putting them on the bed. She pulled her housecoat off, he put his hands over his mouth he almost gasped she was beautiful, and he wanted to go over to her, and tell her how much he needed , and wanted her. She pulled her panties on but turned getting a feeling someone was there. "Who is there JR please tell me if your there"? He still didn't say anything she grabbed her bra putting it on, than ran over almost tripping trying to get clothes. She was freaked out, but she knew JR wouldn't spy on her, she was just reacting to this morning. She put her blouse on, and grabbed a pair of slacks, and was pulling them up. JR was staring he felt so aroused, and sick at the same time he went to leave but banged the doorknob making her cry out. "God JR is that you please answer me". She was petrified when JR laughed, "Yes, I was wondering what took you so long" "You were watching me"? "No I just came down now, I wouldn't watch you for God sake" "I had this feeling someone was here" "I just came in now Ashley stop being paranoid" "I'm sorry forgive me" "Come on lets go" Ashley walked over to him, he held her hand as he guided her down the hall.
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Post by melindajo2000 on Nov 28, 2011 16:31:54 GMT -6
JR is terrible, I felt bad reading this... I don't like him very much lol..but your writing is excellent. keep it up!
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Post by jessie on Nov 28, 2011 20:19:34 GMT -6
I know this story is different, and creepy, but I have a plan for this story. I hope you will continue to read it, but if it is to much I understand if you don't want to. I get ideas, and run with it, but thanks for all your comments , but I understand if some of my stories may not be what you expect or like. I will finish this one eventually. I find this one challenging, I love writing those types.
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Post by Sanda on Nov 28, 2011 21:48:18 GMT -6
Great updates Jessie. OMG JR was creepying me out in the last two chapters the way he was scaring poor Ashley who is blind. Jessie, I will continue to read your awesome story.
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Post by jessie on Nov 29, 2011 1:49:23 GMT -6
Chapter 8
JR took Ashley to one of his favourite restaurants, he likes to eat at if he is having breakfast. He prayed he didn't see anyone he knew but normally he could careless. They went inside, and sat at a booth, the waitress said she would bring them both a coffee. Ashley smiled, "What would you recommend for breakfast"?
"I love the bacon, and eggs, but I don't know what you like"
"Maybe a toasted western just with onion, and tomato"
"Sounds good". Ashley smiled but JR was shocked when Marilee, Vaughn, and Jordan walked over.
"JR fancy meeting you here , and who is this pretty young thing". Jordan said making JR look at Ashley but he motioned for them to shut up. Jordan smiled, "OK"
Marilee smiled she couldn't believe JR was with a young blind girl, this was low even for him. JR touched Ashley's hand, "These are business associates, Marilee, Jordan and Vaughn, this is Ashley a friend"
"A friend JR really" Marilee said with a smile JR got up, "Ashley I will be right back, I don't want to bore you with Business talk" JR pointed to their table Vaughn, and Jordan followed JR but Marilee leaned down. "Sweetie eat a hearty breakfast JR has a healthy appetite you will need all the energy you can get"
"Pardon"
"Have fun sweetie, but I'm sure you already have". Marilee walked away Ashley was angry she didn't like Marilee's tone at all. JR grabbed Marilee, "What did you say to her"?
"Nothing about your wife, and child JR she is blind you really are sick"
"She is a friend you are sick"
"JR you want that young lady so bad I can see it on your face. You will not leave Sue Ellen for the little blind girl or anyone. You can have any lady why her, she will be devastated"
"Shut up Marilee"
"Why her"?
"She is special, I'm drawn to her"
"JR leave her be, and come play with me after breakfast"
"No sloppy seconds is not my cup a tea anymore" Marilee almost smacked JR but she whispered, "You will regret that JR, I swear you will"
JR walked away, and sat down whispering, "I hope she wasn't to crude Ashley"
"I don't like that lady to much, she was implying stuff, I didn't like"
"I use to date her, I stopped she is angry so never mind what she said'
"That is OK" The waitress came taking their order. JR was feeling pretty low about this morning he decided to come clean. He thought if he did it in a restaurant she wouldn't react badly he hoped.
"Ashley this morning when you thought someone was looking at you in your room"
"I'm sorry I think I was upset about our fight"
"No I want to come clean, I was watching you, I'm so sorry"
Ashley whispered, "Oh God you didn't"
"I couldn't help myself, I froze when you thought someone was there, I wanted to run, but I couldn't"
"You watched me get dressed"
"Yes no big deal I have seen woman undressed before"
Ashley started to cry shocking JR he looked around he didn't want people to notice.
"Ashley don't cry please everyone is looking"
"You violated me in the worst way" She screamed at him, making everyone look over. Marilee, Vaughn, and Jordan were shocked.
"I'm going to take you home"
"You think what you did was OK it was no big deal"?
"I didn't say that I'm sorry"
"Your sick, what is wrong with me I let you into my life this is my fault"
JR went to touch her she whispered, "Don't touch me"
"I was trying to come clean, I should have never told you"
"Did you enjoy yourself JR, watching me against my will"?
"You are making me out to be some sick pervert"
"You are you had no right"
"Shh Ashley I swear lower your voice"
The waiter came over, "Sir is there something wrong"?
"She is upset we are leaving" JR threw some money down, and knelt down, "Lets go Ashley we will discuss this in private"
"No"
JR pulled her up practically dragging her outside. She went she was in shock, Marilee whispered, "What was that about"?
"What did you say to her"?
"Nothing to cause that she is upset"
"Don't worry about it she is his concern" Marilee looked at the menu, she hoped it wasn't her fault she has never seen JR more angry she was actually afraid for Ashley.
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Post by melindajo2000 on Nov 29, 2011 7:29:15 GMT -6
poor Ashley, I would be upset too, I hope nothing bad happens with her and JR...great update as always
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Post by Sanda on Nov 29, 2011 12:28:16 GMT -6
Great update Jessie. Poor Ashley. I feel horrible for Ashley who is blind gettnig involved with JR.
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Post by jessie on Nov 29, 2011 16:49:42 GMT -6
Chapter 9
JR pulled her to his car she whispered, "Your hurting me"
"What was that in there"?
"You know what happened in there, Oh God your insane"
"Get in the car, I'm taking you home"
"I will take a cab"
"Now" She jumped he whispered, "No more scenes, I'm taking you home". She got in the car, he walked around noticing people looking but he was so angry. He got in, 'Put your belt on"
"JR please this is my fault, just let be get a cab"
"Be quiet". She put the belt on she didn't say another word, JR looked over at her. He was so angry she called him a pervert, that was going to far. He has been nothing but nice, and he came clean, and she disrespected him in front of all those people. He drove up to the condo, and went into the basement parking lot so she wouldn't see the security guard. He had to get her home, he was going to have it out with her alone not in front of people. He parked she didn't take her belt off he walked around. "Come on"
He reached in taking the belt off, she got out. He held her arm almost running her to the elevator. She cried out, but he ignored her getting in the elevator. They got to her floor, he had the keys in his pocket, he opened the door.
"Get in"
"JR please just go to your place, I'm sorry this was my mistake"
"God get in"
"No"
He grabbed her taking her in kicking the door shut. He walked into the living room almost pushing her to the couch.
She has never been treated this way she was beside herself. She knew she had to stay calm he was so angry she could feel it. She couldn't understand his anger he was in the wrong.
JR was pacing she whispered, "JR this was a mistake"
"What happened this morning was wrong, but you asked for it"
"What I asked for you to watch me get dressed, that is sick"?
"Say I'm sick one more time I swear you will see what sick is"
"I'm sorry but I didn't ask for it"
"You let me spend the night remember, we snuggled, how do you think that made me feel"
"I told you I wasn't ready for a sexual relationship"
"Really you are sending off vibes, so this is all on you"
"Fine it is all my fault but I want this to end now, please stop yelling"
"No one treats JR Ewing like you did, and gets away with it"
"I lost my temper for God sake you just told me you were watching me like a peeping tom"
"Shut up"
"No you don't scare me , I didn't do anything wrong"
JR walked over sitting beside her making her move away but he moved closer. "You tell me you didn't know I was there the whole time. You probably liked it, and now your acting all virginal"?
"I wanted to trust you, I thought you were different"
"I'm a man, some lady asks me to spend the night, she is not so innocent is she"
"Shut up, this is not my fault"
"You are going to be all alone sitting in this apartment. You are wrapped in some self pity cocoon, I wanted to protect you, and be the person to show you how special you are. I made a mistake, and you make me out to be a pariah, when is the last time a man wanted you Ashley, tell me when"
"I hate you JR"
"Do you Ashley or do you want me to kiss you right this moment"?
"Leave"
"Do you really want me to leave, do you want to be all alone"?
Ashley was shaking, she hated being alone, but what he did was horrible, and she hated how he was making her feel , making her feel because she was blind no one would want her.
JR touched her chin, "Please forgive me Ashley, and I will make you forget all this pain, and loneliness, I will treat you the way you deserve to be treated, just say the word, say you need me, and I promise you will not regret it. If you tell me to leave, you know you will go back to the loneliness, and painful existence your living right now. I'm sorry you are blind, but not many men would want someone like you in their life, I want you Ashley, that is why I did that horrible thing this morning, because I find you so irresistible, do you really think other men will. Your boyfriend left you that is what will happen for you if I walk out the door, but I won't come back, that is a promise "
She was speechless she wanted to scream, "Get out of my home, but part of her wondered if she was worthless, and that he was the only man that would ever want her.
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Post by Sanda on Nov 29, 2011 18:05:36 GMT -6
OMG I really dislike JR right now in this story. OMG JR is awful treating Ashley like crap because she is blind.
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Post by melindajo2000 on Nov 29, 2011 19:44:18 GMT -6
JR is disgusting I hope she gets away from him love your writing though!
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Post by jessie on Nov 30, 2011 18:59:01 GMT -6
Chapter 10
Ashley was quiet, JR whispered, "I'm not trying to hurt you"
"JR please stop, I feel sick"
JR got up, "Do you want a glass of water"?
"I want to be alone, can you go please"
"Ashley don't do this"
"I'm tired JR I don't have energy for this"
"For what"?
"If I'm so pathetic why are you here"?
"Your not pathetic I didn't say that. I said most guys your age wouldn't want to get involved with a lady that has a disability"
"I'm blind but I don't care what anyone thinks, I'm happy being alone"
"Really you like being alone is that the truth"?
"Someone special will walk into my life one day"
"He already did"
"You really JR, you have done nothing but make me feel like crap"
"I have a temper, I have to control it, but you are the only women I would allow to treat me the way you did today"
"You are to much, you hurt me"
"I'm sorry how many times must I say it, I saw you naked"
"Oh God why would you say that"
"You want the truth do you want to know what you did to me"
Ashley jumped up, "No stop "
JR smiled, "Your blushing girl"
"Yeah you saw me naked that is embarrassing"
"Why"?
"You have to ask why"?
"I'm sorry I'm trying to be funny"
"Your not funny JR so stop"
"You really have a temper it kind of turns me on".
Ashley ran over pushing JR taking him by surprise he fell over the coffee table. Ashley screamed she couldn't believe what she did. JR started to laugh, "Great I broke your coffee table, and I think I pulled a muscle in my back"
"I'm sorry I didn't mean to hurt you"
"God I don't think I can get up"
Ashley smiled, "I hurt you that bad"
"Why are you smiling"?
"A blind girl beat up old JR"
"I'm not old come here , and say that"
"No way" JR started to get up, he rubbed his back. "I don't think anything but the table is broken. I guess I know what your good sense is you are strong"
"You made me angry, but you deserved that "
"I guess I did"
Ashley smiled, "I will get you Tylenol"
She walked to the kitchen, and grabbed a glass of water, and pulled down the Tylenol. JR came up behind her, "Now you have to take care of me today"
"I'm sure you will be fine your a big boy". He moved close, "Come on give me some attention, I promise to be a good boy'
She smiled, "Here is the Tylenol, this will help"
JR took the two pills, and drank the water, he took Ashley's hand. "Come on lets go to the couch, I need to sit down"
"JR maybe you should go to the Doctor"
"I'm OK I have been knocked on my butt a few times in my life"
"I'm sure with that mouth" JR smiled, "Oh are you saying I deserved to get my butt kicked"
"Yeah my Dad would have done just that if he saw you spying on me this morning"
"Well we won't tell your Father"
"Yeah he would be on the first plane oh you would be in trouble"
"Ashley just say you forgive me for this morning"
"I don't know if I can"
"Come on please it won't happen again"
Ashley whispered, "No it won't no more sleepovers for you Buddy"
"No sleepovers no fair"
"No your right it wasn't very proper of me, I was really stupid allowing it"
"Why all l heard all night was you talking in your sleep"
"I talk in my sleep"?
"Yeah you kept saying, "Oh Jr, over, and over again".
"You are lying that isn't true". He whispered, "You will never know did you dream about me"?
"No" She smiled as he grabbed her hands, "lets go sit down, maybe you can give me a back rub"
Ashley followed him as he brought her to the couch.
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Post by Sanda on Dec 1, 2011 1:09:28 GMT -6
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Post by melindajo2000 on Dec 1, 2011 5:35:26 GMT -6
great update, I can't stand JR in this... keep up the good work, and update soon!
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Post by jessie on Dec 2, 2011 1:00:37 GMT -6
Chapter 11
Ashley and JR were sitting on the couch. He touched her chin, "are we OK Ashley"?
"JR I like you a lot, but I have to go slow I'm sorry"
"Why"?
"I have to take it slow that is what I need, and want"
"OK but why wait for the inevitable"
"JR stop it"
"What do you want in life"?
"I wished for so long to see again, but that isn't going to happen. I want to be happy, and I wanted a child, but I wouldn't have one now, I couldn't do that to a child"
"Do what"?
"I couldn't stand the thought of something happening to my baby, because I'm blind, and I didn't see her or him in danger"
"That is stupid"
"That is rude JR"
"No but so many blind people have babies"
"I understand that, and I think that is amazing, but I couldn't"
"So you can't have sex because your afraid to have a baby"
"I know there is birth control JR, I'm not a idiot"
"Are you on birth control"?
"JR that is none of your business"
"Well just in case we ever go to that next step"
"Oh God it isn't happening right now JR"
JR jumped up, "I don't get you Ashley we both are lonely, we need someone in our life, and you want to spoil it being this way"
"I don't know you JR"
"You will I want to know everything about you Ashley"
"In time"
"I don't like waiting to long Darling"
"The door is right over there if you can't wait until I'm ready"
"I can see why your Boyfriend walked away"
"That is cold JR he walked away because I was blind, and he couldn't deal with it"
"So you were giving him some loving"
"Oh God you are sick, that is none of your business"
"OK I'm being a jerk fine I will wait as long as it takes"
"Don't do me any favors"
"Why the attitude Ashley"?
"You are being rude, and I'm not impressed". JR laughed, "You are to cute when your angry, your cheeks go all red"
"I'm angry that is why"
"No your not really"
"You are older than me but you act like a teenager"
JR walked over, "How do you know I'm older"?
"I don't know I just sense it"
"Well I am older but not by much"
"JR can you go pick me up a sub"?
"What is a sub"?
"You are kidding right , Subway Sub, a sandwich"
"Your trying to get rid of me, no you make me something"
"What no"
"Yeah I'm your guest go make lunch"
"No you"
"Your joking Ashley you expect me to go out, and buy a Sub sandwich"?
"Yes please"
"No way you are going to lock me out"
"Should I"
"Ashley I'm not going to walk out of here, and never get back in"
"I will let you in"
JR jumped up putting his jacket on, 'Yes I will I have keys". He smiled, "Nice try Ashley"
"JR"
"What"?
"I don't want to get hurt JR, your not just trying to have your way with me, and move on are you". JR sat down, "I don't believe you that is rude"
"I'm blind I'm scared , you keep pushing for us to move on with the relationship, I don't want to be hurt"
"I'm not going to hurt you, I'm single, and so are you, lets be here for each other"
"OK I want a turkey with no mayo, and cucumber slices OK"
"Where is this place"?
"The plaza just down the street, I love Subway Sub"
"OK I will be back" He kissed her cheek, and walked out.
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