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Post by jennifer1983 on Jan 27, 2011 0:49:21 GMT -6
Great update to our story Jessie. I'm glad that Mac survived, oh and I hope you update again soon.
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Post by jessie on Jan 29, 2011 19:33:55 GMT -6
Plot line by Jennifer and Jessie
Written by Jessie
CHAPTER 21
The next morning Lindsay was getting dressed. Her stomach was upset, but she didn't tell Mack. She didn't want him worrying about her all day. She brought him a omelet breakfast, and touched his face. "I will call you from work, so keep the cell close. The nurse is coming, so you be nice, and listen and do what your told"
"Oh Lindsay, your not afraid to leave me with a cute young nurse"?
"No, I'm not ". She heard knocking at the front door, "Oh the nurse is here, I will be right back". She ran to the door, but smiled when she opened it. She was a little taken back, when Steven reached out his hand, and introduced himself. He was handsome, and so kind, but she laughed inside, knowing Mac was not going to be a happy camper. She let him in, and took his coat. She showed him around, and the told him to help himself to anything in the kitchen. She took him to see Mac, Lindsay walked in, and smiled, "I would like to introduce Steven". Mac was smiling, but he dropped his book, when Steven walked in, and laughed, "Oh your that happy to see me"?
'Lindsay is this a joke"?
"No, he is the best, I requested a male nurse, because I knew you would be much more comfortable with one".
"Lindsay can we talk", Mac said , while Steven laughed, "I will go get your medication, be right back". Lindsay giggled, "Boy he is sweet, and so cute Mac"
"Oh Lindsay this is cruel, a male nurse how embarrassing".
"Why he is here to help you, beside, I'm not going to work, and leaving you with some young nurse, who might fall for my guy".
"Lindsay a guy, he will have to help me go to the bathroom, that is so wrong".
"He would be better, he could carry you if he had to ".
"Oh that isn't happening, and take that grin off your face"
Lindsay walked over, "I have to go, I will call, your not mad are you"?
"No, but I'm not happy". Steven walked in, "Don't worry Mac we will bond real fast, and don't be shy around me, ask for anything".
Mac smiled, "Can you get me a ", Lindsay cut him off, and pointed a finger at Mac, "be nice, see you soon". She kissed him, and ran to the door. "Play nice boys". She walked out, laughing all the way to the elevator. Mac smiled, "I don't need you right now, really".
"Well it is time for a sponge bath".
"Yeah like that is happening, go away"
"Ok let me change your bandage, we will forget the sponge bath for now".
"Lindsay can do that, she would enjoy it actually." Steven laughed, so did Mac.
Lindsay got to the office, and went inside. Stella and Danny walked over, "How is Mac"?
"Great he is with Steven"
'Steven who is he"?
"His male nurse, he wasn't getting some cute young thing taking care of him". Danny and Stella were laughing thinking Mac probably is having the worst time.
Don walked over, "Lindsay how are you, and how is Mac"?
"I'm fine, Mac is getting better everyday. You should go visit him Don, your the only one who hasn't so far".
"Lindsay I'm sorry, I really am"
'Don, I'm sorry for being so mean to you. Mac told me it was all him, he was careless, this case really got to him".
"I promise you, we will solve it". Lindsay hugged Don, "I know we will for us, but especially for Mac, and the family of the victims. Don wrapped his arm around her, and they went to see Sid in the lab.
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Post by jennifer1983 on Jan 30, 2011 2:41:05 GMT -6
Great update to our story Jessie. I hope you update again soon.
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Post by jessie on Jan 31, 2011 0:22:13 GMT -6
Plot line by Jennifer and Jessie
Written by Jessie
Chapter 22
Lindsay called home, and Mac answered, "Hello"
'Mac it is Lindsay, how is it going"?
"Not great but you knew that when you hired this guy".
"Mac just be good, he is the best they say"
"Yeah I believe you, he is ok, but I'm not letting him give me a sponge bath"
"Really, are you saving that for me"?
"You bet, how is the case"?
"We are running some leads, I'm going out with Don now".
"Be careful Lindsay"
"I will be, I'm not taking any chances Mac".
"Call me later Lindsay".
"Love you Mac, I will". They hung up, Mac wished he was at work, but he knew he had to sit patient, and get better before that was happening.
He laughed when Stella walked into the room. She smiled, "OMG can you get his number for me"?
"Who sponge boy, you think he is cute"?
"Yes, are you blind Mac"?
"Stella grow up girl".
She walked over, "I was over seeing Amy's Mother, and I thought I would stop by".
"Amy's Mother what happened"?
"Nothing, I go by everyday or two, just to keep her informed. She is doing a little better, but I think she is drinking trying to drown the pain. I guess I can't blame her, I can't imagine what it would be like to lose a child this way".
"I know Stella, isn't there anything new on the case"?
"Well yes, we have narrowed in on the Drug Dealers, but we are stumped at the Vigilante, we have talked to so many family members of kids that died due to drugs. We ruled most of them out, but Lindsay and Don are going to talk with a few today"
"Oh God Stella what if they come across the one".
"I doubt they will but he is killing the bad guys, not the Police"
"Yeah until he is cornered right".
"Mac calm down or I'm getting your friend in here. He might have to give you a needle in your butt to calm you down".
"A needle in my butt, why are you saying that"?
"They do that in the movies don't they beside, I would stay to watch that".
"Go Stella you are bad, and don't ask him for his number".
'Fine Meany". Stella kissed Mac on the cheek, and walked out. She said goodbye to Steven, and left , and Steven went to Mac.
"Hey is Stella single Mac"?
"OMG are you kidding, you too"?
"What"?
"She wanted your number, so no she isn't single Steven".
"Really cool, will she visit again sometime soon"?
"Oh I'm sure she might, knowing you are here". Steven walked out, and Mac laughed, texting Stella.
"Stella guess what"?
"What Mac"?
"He likes you too, OMG that is sick".
"Really what did he say"?
"He asked me if your single"?
"What did you say"?
"I told him you liked him, and wanted his number"
"You didn't "?
"Yeah honesty is the best policy, isn't that your line Stella"?
"Yeah , I will pay you back Mac, but I will see you tomorrow"
"Yeah thought so". Stella hung up, and Mac laughed, he missed his team, they were like Family, he hoped they all would be fine.
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Post by Sanda on Jan 31, 2011 0:26:29 GMT -6
Great updates Jessie.
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Post by jennifer1983 on Jan 31, 2011 2:45:06 GMT -6
Great update to our story Jessie. I hope you update again soon.
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Post by jessie on Feb 1, 2011 21:19:20 GMT -6
Plot line by Jennifer and Jessie
Written by Jessie
Chapter 23
Don and Lindsay got to Joseph Peters home, and knocked. Don was a little nervous interviewing people in their homes. The Family didn't want to go to the Police Station they said it was to hard on them. Joseph came to the door, and opened it.
"Hello"
"Hello this is Detective Lindsay Monroe , and I'm Detective Don Flack "
"Please come in, and sit down".
"Don and Lindsay went in, but both of them scanned the home, both thinking Joseph's home was very lovely, but sad also". They saw pictures of his son Mike who died of a drug overdose, at a College Weekend Party. Don and Lindsay sat down, and Joseph, picked up a picture of Mike, and smiled, "he was trying to be a Doctor, can you believe it? I don't understand why he took that crap, we discussed the dangers over and over. His Friends said he got the stuff from this guy on the street, and it was not good stuff. He took it, and went into convulsions right away. These so called Friends were afraid to call for help, because there was drugs, and booze, and sex at this stupid party. They let Mike lay on the floor for 1 hour when they called. My son died a horrible death, I hate his friends, but I hate the man who sold him the drugs.
"Sir do you know who sold your son the drugs"?
"Yes, that punk that died Mason, his face was in the paper. I'm glad he is dead like my son,"
"Sir you didn't do something did you"?
"Me No, I'm not a killer, but I wish I was, I would have loved to kill him, he walks the street selling that crap to kids, knowing he is getting them addicted. I don't know who killed these drug dealers in the paper, but they deserve an award".
Lindsay looked at Don there was something at the way he spoke she had a bad feeling he might be the one. He was so angry, anyone would be but people can't take the law into their own hands. Lindsay stood up, "Don I think Joseph answered enough questions, we should get going". Don was surprised, "Lindsay we are not finished"?
"Yes we are, we have so many others to talk to". Joseph laughed, "You people never stopped them, so someone is doing your jobs". Don got up, "Sir we will be back, we are sorry for your loss"
"Yes so am I". Don and Lindsay left the house, and were walking to the car. Don stopped, "Lindsay what happened in there"?
"I don't know, I think he might be the one, I didn't like being in there with him. I think he should be brought to the station to be questioned, it isn't safe in their homes".
"We have done this a million times Lindsay, what is up"?
"Don lets go to the Station now". Lindsay got in the car, and Don ran around getting in. He looked up at the house, he could see Joseph staring at them. He got shivers, he had the feeling Lindsay was right, he just might be the one. Don got in the car, and they both drove to the Station, neither saying a word.
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Post by melindajo2000 on Feb 1, 2011 22:25:46 GMT -6
I hope they do catch the one they are looking for . great update
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Post by jennifer1983 on Feb 2, 2011 3:54:23 GMT -6
Great update to our story Jessie. I hope they catch the person responsible soon too, oh and I you update again soon.
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Post by jessie on Feb 3, 2011 20:45:07 GMT -6
Plot line by Jennifer and Jessie
Written by Jessie
Chapter 24
Lindsay and Don got to the Office, and were telling the Others about Joseph. Everyone agreed it sounds, like he might be the one. Danny said, "Why don't we bring him in"?
"No maybe we will go to the Judge, and ask for permission to follow him 24/7"
"The poor guy he lost his son now we want to stalk him like a criminal". Sid yells.
"Sid he can't kill people even if he is hurting, you know better". Sid storms off, the others were confused, and Stella said she would go talk to him. Stella went to Sid he was looking at some papers when she walked in.
"Stella I know I was out of line, but I'm sorry, that is how I feel"
"Sid we are here to bring the bad guys in. I agree the Drug dealers are the bad guys, but the man killing them is too".
"He lost his son, can you imagine that"?
"Sid what is wrong, you see this type of thing daily"?
"My Sister had a son who was amazing, his name was Andy. He was such a great kid, he would help anyone, and basically did. He went to University, and called everyday to tell his parents he was ok. Then all of a sudden he changed, they later found out, he got hooked on drugs, it started at first as a way to stay awake to get through studying, than it progressed. They got a call one night saying he died from a bad batch of drugs, that many kids died from that month. My Sister is not the same she blames herself everyday, that she didn't go to him to see why he changed so drastically over a month period? She blames herself Stella, but it was the Dealers that put that stuff on the streets. They are murderers, so when one dies, I have no remorse. I feel for the kids that get hooked but not the dealers".
"I'm sorry Sid". She walked over hugging him, and he got emotional, he pulled away from her, and walked into the bathroom. Stella stood staring, this case was affecting so many of them, she hoped it ended soon, with no more murders.
She walked out, she saw Lindsay leaving, she ran over. "Lindsay your leaving"?
"Yeah I will see you tomorrow Stella".
"Bye say hi to Mac, and Steven"
"Steven you met him"?
"Yes today, he is hot Lindsay, OMG you know how to pick them".
"Stella you are bad, but he is cute, but I only have eyes for Mac".
"Great maybe, Steven will be mine". Lindsay walked to the elevator, "OMG Stella, bye". Stella waved, and walked to the elevator. Lindsay drove home, she parked, and went upstairs. She walked into the house, and she could hear Mac yelling. She threw her purse, and coat on the couch , and ran to the bedroom. She laughed, Steven was carrying Mac to bed, and she hid so he didn't see her. Steven smiled, "Mac, I had to you were going to fall, don't be so stubborn".
"Steven don't you ever do that again, I can do this on my own".
"Fine Mr. Taylor, I will go get your medication".
"Steven"
"Yes Mac"?
"Don't tell Lindsay, you had to carry me, that I couldn't walk please"
"Sir you are weak, don't be ashamed, I only did my job"
"Please Steven"
"I won't it is our secret". Steven walked out, and jumped seeing Lindsay. She put her finger to her lips, she had tears in her eyes. Steven shut the bedroom door, and walked over, "Lindsay he will be fine, his legs just gave out".
"OMG I have never seen Mac like that"
"Shh go in there give him a hug, and don't mention this. You have to compose yourself first, Mac will be fine, I promise you". Lindsay hugged Steven, "Thank you , I needed to hear that". Steven smiled, "One of your pretty co-workers came here today to see Mac, she is adorable".
"Stella"?
"Yes that is her, would you mind if I asked her out sometime for coffee"? Lindsay giggled, "No, go for it, I think Stella would love that".
"You think"?
" I know, go get his Medications, I will go see him". Lindsay wiped the tears from her eyes. She opened the bedroom door, she smiled, "Oh Mac I'm home". He laughed, "Oh thank God, Steven is driving me crazy". Lindsay walked over, she went into his arms, and they just hugged.
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Post by melindajo2000 on Feb 3, 2011 21:29:40 GMT -6
I'm glad Stella is getting hooked up with Steven I hope he is nice lol. and I felt bad for Sid, but I hope they find the guy who did it
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Post by jennifer1983 on Feb 4, 2011 3:12:27 GMT -6
Great update to our story Jessie. I also hope you update again soon.
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Post by jessie on Feb 6, 2011 1:45:31 GMT -6
Plot line by Jennifer and Jessie
Written by Jessie
Chapter 25
Lindsay smiled, "Mac how was your Day"?
"Not great Steven is a pain, but it was fun seeing Stella. I'm a little disappointed in her, she thinks Steven is something. What is it about girls and Steven"?
"Stop it Mac, you like him just fine, your just mad, your stuck in this bed, and can't work".
"Your right, I could go to work, and sit at my desk"
'No you can't don't get me angry, I'm pregnant".
"Fine, I'm so sick of being couped up in this Penthouse".
"Mac you will get better if you stop whining. Do you want to hear what happened today"?
'What"?
"We talked to one of the Father's, he is so angry about his son's death. He died of a drug overdose, he is so upset, I don't blame him, but he could be the guy Mac".
"Really did you bring him in"?
'No, we have to make sure he is the right guy. We bring him in to early, and we lose evidence, he walks".
"The poor guy is so angry, but to kill a young girl like Amy, why"?
"Maybe he thought she was a drug dealer, or he is so far gone, he doesn't care , if your with a drug dealer, your the enemy in his eyes".
Steven walked in, "Here is your pills Mac, would you like something else, before I turn in"?
"No, we are fine Steven, but do you have to stay"?
"Yes, your pregnant wife to be, can't take a chance helping you to the bathroom. Well she can use the urinal, if she likes, but that isn't really pleasant". Lindsay smiled, "Steven, I will call you, if I need you, go to bed". Steven walked out, and Mac shut his eyes, "how embarrassing, he had to mention that stuff".
"What you have to go to the bathroom, I think everyone does Mac"
"Lindsay I want to save some of my pride ok".
"Mac, I would let you help me, don't be shy around me. I have seen all your best parts already".
'Lindsay you are bad, come here, and give me a hug".
"No fooling around Mac, not until the Doctor gives his ok".
"I know can we kiss, that might make me feel better". Lindsay walked over laying beside Mac. They stare at each other, he pulled the hair from her forehead, and brought his lips over hers. She shut her eyes, she wished Mac wasn't hurt she needed him, but she knew they had to be good. Lindsay giggled, and Mac smiled, "What is so funny"?
"Well I was just thinking about Stella and Steven, she really likes him"
'It is mutual, he was asking me a million and one questions about her".
"That is sweet, Stella deserves to be happy, she hasn't dated in a long time"
"I know not since she was attacked, but maybe Steven will help her forget that".
Mac whispered, "Are you hungry Lindsay"?
"Yeah a little, I had a sandwich at work, did you have supper"?
"Yeah Steven made some meat dish, it sucked".
"Mac can the guy do anything right"?
"No, he makes horrible coffee too, it was too strong, and he put Sugar in mine."
"Oh poor baby, what would you like"?
"Oh something sweet since, I can't make love to you right now"?
"Ok milk and cookies coming up". Lindsay got up, "Be right back Mac".
"I will be here, don't worry". Lindsay went to the kitchen, and poured the milk, and grabbed a plate of cookies. She almost dropped them, when the phone rang. She ran over grabbing it".
"Lindsay"
"Sheldon what is wrong, it is late"?
"I thought I would let you know, 2 other Drug dealers were killed tonight, it was a horrible scene Lindsay".
"Oh God, we didn't have anyone watching him yet"
"No, what if it was him, you and Don should have brought him in".
"Sheldon how could we, with what evidence, his hatred of drug dealers. We would have to bring half of New York in, if that was the case".
"Lindsay Stella wants you in at 7am, she wants to have a team meeting".
"Ok, I will be there, thanks for calling Sheldon".
'Goodnight Lindsay, sorry for calling, but I thought you should know".
"Bye". Lindsay hung up, she walked over to the counter. She felt tears come to her eyes, she hated the thought of putting a Father away, but if he was guilty he left them no choice. She knew he must be hurting, but taking the law into your own hands, was wrong. She wiped the tears away, grabbed the tray, and walked to Mac.
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Post by jennifer1983 on Feb 6, 2011 4:45:01 GMT -6
Great update to our story Jessie. I can't wait till Mac gets better and i also hope you update again soon.
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Post by melindajo2000 on Feb 7, 2011 21:43:07 GMT -6
great update I do hope they catch the guy I dont know who it is thats doing it but I hope they find him soon.
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