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Post by jessie on Dec 28, 2010 20:57:03 GMT -6
This is a story, I'm starting for Jennifer, she gave me a idea, and I'm writing this story, with her suggestions and my own too . This revolves around season 3, before Lindsay and Danny got together.
Plot line by Jennifer and Jessie
Written by Jessie
Chapter 1
Lindsay showered, and was coming out of the bathroom, wearing just a towel. She smiled as she saw him laying in bed, only wearing his boxers. She walked over , and got in bed touching his face. He opened his eyes, and smiled as he pulled her over him. She laughed, "Mac we are going to be late for work".
"I'm the boss so don't worry girl". She giggled, as she brought her lips over his. He rolled her under him, and just looked at her. He knew he shouldn't be involved with Lindsay, but at the moment he didn't care. She made him feel alive, she was the first person that has made him want to get married again . He vowed he would never marry again, after his wife's death. Lindsay changed that he was planning on asking her to marry him, on their 8th month Anniversary, which was in 2 weeks. She had no idea, but he was going to make it really special. They made love, and finally got up, looking at the clock.
"8 am Mac we are in trouble".
"Go make some toast, I will shower, and change quick". He ran in the shower, while she got dressed, and went and made them both a coffee to go, and toast. He walked out she handed it to him, and they locked up, and went downstairs to the parking lot. She smiled as she got in her car, and he got in his. Mac let Lindsay drive off first, he ate his toast, than started the car. He was about to drive off, when he heard screaming. He thought he was imagining it at first, but he stopped the car , and got out. He definitely heard a lady screaming, and she was in trouble. He ran toward the screams, praying he got there in time. He didn't hear the woman anymore, but he saw her by the elevator. He ran over grabbing her, but he was shocked looking in the elevator. He was shocked, he saw 3 people dead, by gun shot wounds, he pulled the woman away, as he called for help. She was crying, "my daughter the girl is my baby".
"Oh God, I'm sorry, please I can't let you go near the bodies".
"Who would do this she is only 18 years old"?
"Do you know the men with her"?
"One is her Ex boyfriend, they broke up 6 months ago".
Mac heard the Police cars coming, he called the office, and told them what was happening. Stella said she would be over with the others. Mac ran over as the Police show up, and he told them, his team were on the way. They walked the Mother to the Police car, and they took her to the Police Station. Stella , Danny and Lindsay showed up in separate cars. They walk over to Mac, he looked at Lindsay, she was shocked she just left him. Sheldon showed, up and walked over to the bodies. He couldn't get use to seeing young people dead, and he walked over taking the evidence needed before the bodies were taken away. Stella touched Mac's arm, "are you ok Mac"?
"No, I can't get the Mother's screams out of my head".
"Mac, we will find the animal that did this"
"Yes Stella we will, but can we give that woman her daughter back"? Mac walked away, Stella and Danny were confused, but Lindsay ran over grabbing Mac's arm.
"Mac talk to me".
"Lindsay, who would do that to 3 young people, did you see their bodies"?
"Yes, we see this all the time, calm down".
Lindsay just give me a few moments, I need to be alone". He walked over, watching Sheldon, he vowed the killer or killers were going to pay, he was going to bring the Mother that peace at least, that her Daughter didn't die in vain.
To be continued.
This is my first story like this, hope you like it..
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Post by melindajo2000 on Dec 28, 2010 21:14:14 GMT -6
this is really good so far, you are so good at writing crime scene stories, I could never do it! Brilliant stuff, great ideas Jessie and Jennifer
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Post by Sanda on Dec 28, 2010 21:49:56 GMT -6
Great start to your new story Jessie. Unfortunately, I have never seen episode of CSI:NY. I can't wait to read more of your new story.
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Post by jennifer1983 on Dec 29, 2010 3:10:44 GMT -6
Great start to the story Jessie. I just hope Lindsay and Danny don't get involved with each other in this story.
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Post by jessie on Dec 30, 2010 23:01:47 GMT -6
Plot line by Jennifer and Jessie
Written by Jessie
Chapter 2
Sheldon collected the evidence, the bodies were taken to the lab for Sid to do the autopsies. Mac and the team went back to talk to the Mother, she was brought over to their offices. Mac walked in, and the Mother looked so withdrawn, Mac felt horrible for her.
"Would you like a glass of water, or coffee"?
"No thank you , who did this to my Baby".
"Your Daughter what was her name"?
"Amy Hughes". Mac wrote it down, "how old is she"?
"She just turned 18 years old, she is to young to have enemies".
"I'm sorry we have to ask these questions, to see why your Daughter was murdered today".
"It had to be Mason, he was trouble, he was bad news. I told her not to get involved with him, but she didn't listen. I was so happy when she broke up with him, but why was she with him today"?
"Maybe they didn't break up, she might of lied".
"Amy wouldn't lie to me, we talked about everything. I would know if she was lying, she was a good girl, she didn't deserve to die like that".
"Do you know who the other man was in the elevator"?
"No, I never seen him before, just Mason". Patricia couldn't stop crying, when Mac touched her arm. "Mason why was he bad news"?
"Drugs he got Amy hooked, but she was clean for 3 months. I should have charged him with Statutory rape, but she begged me not too".
"Where is her Father right now"?
"He passed away from Cancer 2 years ago, I think that is why she got messed up with Mason in the first place. It is my fault, I was so depressed, she found comfort in his arms, when I should have been there for her". Mac got up, "We will talk more later, you should go home and rest. I will get a officer to drive you home".
"Thank you, please find my Daughters killer".
"I will promise, the person or persons will pay". She hugged Mac, and he walked her out, and told the Officer to take her home". Mac went to his Office, he sat down when Lindsay walked in shutting the door.
"Mac I can't believe this happened, are you ok"?
"Yes, I hate all the senseless violence, especially of young people. I think we have to find out who, the other man is? Mason was involved in Drugs, it could be a drug deal gone bad. I don't know why Amy was there, the Mother said they split up"?
"Mac come on, you know kids lie to their parents all the time".
"I know Lindsay, she was a good kid, who was in the wrong place, at the wrong time, I just know it".
Lindsay walked over, putting her hand on Mac's cheek. She smiled, "I will come over tonight, we need each other Mac".
"I would like that, but I don't want you coming upstairs on the elevator alone. We will go home at the same time, and drive home together".
"Mac I hate keeping our relationship a secret, I don't care what people think".
"Lindsay please not yet, maybe after this case". Lindsay moved close, and she kissed Mac. They both pull away when Stella walked into the office, just staring at them. Lindsay grabbed a file, I will make the calls Mac, I will let you know what I find out" Lindsay walked out, not looking at Stella, who walked over to Mac. "Were you kissing her"?
"No, I gave her a hug, she needed it, what do you want Stella"?
"Sid wants to see you". Mac walked out of the office, Stella stood for a moment, wondering if something was going on between Lindsay and Mac, but she shook her head realizing it was crazy, thinking that.
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Post by jennifer1983 on Dec 31, 2010 2:54:28 GMT -6
Great update Jessie.
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Post by jessie on Dec 31, 2010 20:29:45 GMT -6
Plot line by Jennifer and Jessie
Written by Jessie
Chapter 3
Mac and Stella go in to see Sid.
"Sid what have you found"?
"This is a sick crime, they were stabbed multiply times. I have sent the tests to the lab, to see if the were drugs in their system. The young girl Amy, Mac she was beaten before her death. She was stabbed to end it, she is so young". Mac felt sick seeing Amy on the table, all he could think of was her Mother. Why was she with her Ex boyfriend , and the other man? Stella walked over, "the other two guys, what was the cause of death"?
"This one his name is Mason, he was stabbed 10 times, but the fatal stab was to the heart. This guy his name, is Alex Morris he is known to the Police, he is bad news, why were they with him"?
"The Mother said Mason was into drugs, Amy broke up with him, but I have no idea why they were together"?
"Mac, she made love to someone before she died. I have sent the swabs to the lab, I will let you know if it was Mason she slept with"
"Oh God her Mother is going to be so upset".
"Mac we see this all the time, Mothers don't think there children can do no wrong"
'Sid I have this feeling she was a good kid, somehow today she walked into something that got her killed". Sid smiled, "I will finish up, I will send all the results to your office, once I'm completed".
"I have this massive headache, I'm going to go home early. Stella is in charge, but call me if anything strange comes up". Stella smiled, "I will help Sid go home Mac, you look beat". Mac walked out, and went to his office. He picked up his cell phone, and text ed Lindsay.
"Lindsay I'm going home, pack up, and meet me down in the parking lot in 5 minutes". Mac grabbed his coat, and walked out, going to the parking lot, and opening his car door. He saw the elevator open, and Lindsay come out running over to Mac.
"Your leaving early, I had to make excuses , are you ok"?
"Not really, I will follow you to my place, don't race, I don't want you going into the parking lot alone". Lindsay smiled running to her car, getting in. She drove off, with Mac following her all the way. They got to the apartment, and parked side by side. Lindsay got out grabbing her purse, while Mac put his arm around her . They walked to the elevator, Mac was having flashbacks to what he saw this morning. He felt sick seeing 3 young people dead like that, but it was the Mother that affected him the most. He knew how she was feeling, the anger, the confusion, and the despair, knowing, your loved one was gone. He got in the elevator, and pushed his floor. Lindsay leaned into him, and smiled. "You don't think Stella suspects something is going on between us"?
"I don't know we will have to be more careful"
"Sheldon said something weird this morning , but I think he was just teasing." Lindsay said
"What did he say"?
"He said he called my apartment 5 times last night, and wondered why I didn't answer"?
'He called your apartment, why not your cell phone"?
'I don't know Mac, he wanted to go out for dinner. He said I'm a great listener, he loves being with me". Mac laughed, "Oh Sheldon better watch out, your mine".
"Don't worry Mac, I don't want anyone but you". He kissed her, as they walked off the elevator, to go to his apartment.
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Post by melindajo2000 on Dec 31, 2010 20:53:03 GMT -6
great update Jessie, how they will solve those crimes... will be interesting finding out
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Post by jennifer1983 on Jan 1, 2011 1:00:08 GMT -6
Great update to our story Jessie.
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Post by jessie on Jan 3, 2011 1:31:23 GMT -6
Plot line by Jennifer and Jessie
Written by Jessie
Chapter 4
The next morning Lindsay got up showering, making breakfast for Mac. It was only 5:30 in the morning, she walked over waking him up. She smiled , "go get your shower, than come and eat" He got up kissing her , and ran and got a shower. Lindsay walked into the kitchen, to put the coffee on, and grabbed the bacon. She put it in the frying pan, and grabbed the butter. She suddenly felt sick, she turned the stove off, running into the small bathroom. Mac came out doing up his shirt, he was confused she was fine one minute ago.
"Lindsay are you ok"?
"Oh God No my stomach, I was fine 5 minutes ago".
"That is strange, you don't look good"?
"Oh I can't finish breakfast, the bacon is on the stove". She turned getting sick, just mentioning the bacon. Mac smiled, "God your not pregnant are you"?
She turned, "What no, I'm not pregnant"?
"Ok, I don't know much about woman problems, but I do know food smells trigger morning sickness".
"I probably got a flu bug stop go eat". Mac went to the kitchen, and fried up the bacon, and made a egg. He put it on the plate, as Lindsay came in to get a tea. Mac smiled, "Oh this is good, normally I have cereal, I love bacon and eggs. You have to have greasy food once in a while". She turned seeing him eating she ran to the bathroom, slamming the door. Mac looked at the food, he smiled, "OMG this can't be happening" He smiled, "How are we going to explain, this"? He got up throwing the food out, he lost his appetite, he rinsed the dishes off. She walked out of the bathroom, "Mac, I can't go to work, I'm really sick". He walked over "go back to bed, I will say you called in sick, I will come home early , and bring a pregnancy kit to make sure".
"Mac for God sake I'm not pregnant".
"Ok we can just confirm, that is the cop in me". Lindsay smiled, "Fine bring it, and maybe some soup".
He touched her face, "I will call you". He walked out after he locked up, going to the parking lot. He looked over at the other elevators, remembering what happened yesterday. He got in his car, and drove to the offices. He walked into the office, and checked his desk, and was happy to see the report from Sid. "She did have sexual relations with Mason, he turned the paper, and ran to Sid with the file.
"Sid , Amy had Rohypnol in her system, why would Mason use a date rape drug"?
"I don't know Mac, but she had sex, but with the amount in her system, I don't know how she knew what she was doing"?
"Oh God, Mason he had Cocaine in his system, but Alex was clean"?
"Yeah of drugs, he is bad Mac, I don't know what Amy and Mason were doing with him"?
"Thanks Sid". Mac ran out getting Stella, they were going to go to Amy's school, to talk to her roommates, and friends". Stella smiled, "Mac Lindsay phoned in sick"?
"Oh really thanks for telling me, she hasn't been off all year"
"No, it is not like her, she sounds really sick".
"I will call her later, thanks Stella". Mac walked to the elevator, she looked at him, he turned, "are you coming or what"?
"Yes Mac, chill out". She ran on the elevator, as he pushed the button to go to the garage.
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Post by jennifer1983 on Jan 3, 2011 2:40:19 GMT -6
Great update to our story Jessie. I hope Lindsay is pregnant.
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Post by jessie on Jan 8, 2011 20:42:18 GMT -6
Chapter 5
Mac and Stella got to the college, they went to see the Dean first. They were brought to her dorm, which she shared with Ashley and Megan. Mac and Stella knocked on the door, Megan answered, "Oh I thought you were my boyfriend".
"No we are here we want to ask you some questions about Amy"
"Your the Police"?
"Yes, I'm Detective Mac Taylor, and this is Detective Stella Bonasera "
"Oh come in, if you like". They walked in, looking around, Megan walked over pointing to Amy's bed. "This is her bed, her things are still here, her Mother is coming this weekend to get them".
"Were you and Amy close Megan"?
"Close as in friends yes, she was a sweet kid, who would kill her"?
"We are trying to find that out, the week before her death, was she acting different"?
"A little she was worried her Mother would find out she was seeing Mason again"
"They were dating again, for how long"?
"Not long, he came to her, he was scared he wanted her to help him. I know he was bad news, but he was pretty cool actually. He really loved Amy, he said one day he would marry her. She loved him, but she was tired of the drugs. He was going to get clean, he promised her. He just said he had to get away from some guy that was keeping him in the business."
"Did he say a name"?
"No but Amy knew him, he hurt her once. You can't tell her Mother she would die that Amy never told her.".
"What are you talking about"?
"I hate telling you this but Amy is gone, so it wouldn't hurt. This guy that Mason owed money to, raped Amy she was hurt real bad. Mason begged Amy not to tell because the guy said he would let him off the money he owed. Mason hated asking her to do it, she did it for him, but that is why she broke up with him". Mac looked at Stella, he felt sick that she kept this to herself, and let this man hurt her like this. Megan grabbed her books, "I have to go to class, I can't miss them, I'm already in trouble".
"Go we want to go through her things, we will lock up".
"I'm really sorry about Amy, can you tell her Mother". Mac smiled, "Yes we will, but Megan don't ever do what Amy did"?
"I wouldn't Sir, thank you". Megan left Mac, was looking through her stuff. She had pictures of herself with Mason. He showed Stella they actually looked happy. Mac whispered, "Oh God what did this child go through, she must have felt so alone". Stella touched Mac's shoulder, "Your taking this case to heart, maybe you should take a back seat, and let me and Danny take over"
"I'm not backing down Stella, I will get justice for Amy's Mother".
"Ok Mac sorry".
"Don't worry go tell the Dean to come up, I will look around some more until you come back".
Stella left, Mac opened his cell phone, and called home.
"Hello"
"Lindsay how are you"?
"Not great Mac, I can't keep anything down"
"Maybe you should go to the Doctor"?
"No, I probably have a flu bug"
"No you probably are pregnant, Lindsay".
"Bring home a Pregnancy test than, we will confirm it tonight".
"Lindsay"
"Yes, Mac"
"I love you, I just wanted you to know that"
"Mac are you ok, you seem so down"?
"This case is getting to me, but I will see you soon".
"Mac"
"Yes".
"Can you bring in some soup from the deli we love".
"Sure Lindsay, go rest I will see you soon"
"Bye Mac". He hung up, and smiled when Stella and the Den walked in.
"We will need most of this stuff for evidence".
"I will let the Mother know, she is coming this weekend". The Dean says.
"I will call her, she will understand". Mac says.
Mac walked over to Stella, "I'm sorry how I acted earlier, I'm just tired, and a little stressed".
"That is ok Mac, should we pack up all this stuff"?
"Yes, all the stuff from her drawers, and her computer, and her clothes. There has to be something here, that can help us". The Dean smiled, "I have some boxes downstairs, I will go get them".
"Thanks". Mac and Stella say. They knew it was a long shot, but they both hoped, there was something they could use.
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Post by melindajo2000 on Jan 8, 2011 21:29:37 GMT -6
greaet updates, I missed the last one, I hope she is pregnant as well, I hope you update soon
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Post by jennifer1983 on Jan 9, 2011 2:17:08 GMT -6
Great update to our story Jessie. I agree with Melinda and hope you update our story again soon.
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Post by jessie on Jan 9, 2011 23:46:00 GMT -6
Plot line by Jennifer and Jessie
Written by Jessie
Chapter 6
Mac and Stella got to the station, and brought Amy's belongings. Mac was surprised, when he was told Amy's Mother was in his Office waiting to speak with him. He told Stella he would be with her in a minute, and went to his Office. "Mrs Hughes, I didn't know you were coming, I'm so sorry , you had to wait".
"Have you found out anything, why my Daughter was murdered"?
"We are doing everything we can to find out why it happened? I promise you once we find out, you will be the first to know. We took her stuff from her dorm, we need it for evidence. You will get the belongings , I promise once we go through it".
"Mr. Taylor, Amy was a good girl, I hear what the news people are saying. They are saying she is a kid gone bad, over drugs".
"Mrs Hughes, I know Amy wasn't a drug addict, but she did get involved with Mason. He was a young man in trouble, but he was in over his head too. I really believe, she was in the wrong place at the wrong time. I have a feeling it was Mason that was the target, she was with him, and they killed her too"
"They were broken up, I don't understand, why they were together"?
"Please go home, I will call you everyday to let you know what is going on. You look exhausted, you will collapse if you don't take care of yourself".
"I have to bury my baby, how am I suppose to feel? They won't release her body, she is sitting in a cold morgue, all alone, and I can't get it out of my head".
"I will take you home personally, I'm so sorry". He helped her up, he walked out, telling Sheldon, he was taking her home, than he was going to go home after. Mac brought her home, and took her inside, asking her if she had someone to stay with her"?
"No, I will be fine, you can go". He touched her face, "I promise you, I will find her killer, and they will pay".
"Thank you". Mac walked to the door, seeing her curled up on the couch made him so upset, and angry. He walked out, making sure the door was locked. He walked to his car, he decided to go to the Pharmacy, to get some pregnancy kits. He needed to think of something other than this case. He drove to the pharmacy, he ran in getting 3 kits, and paid, and ran to his car. He drove to the deli, picking up the soup, and sandwiches, and drove home. He opened the door, and noticed her on the couch, watching TV. He put the stuff on the table, and walked over, and she jumped.
"Oh God, I didn't hear you come in".
"I know what are you watching that you didn't hear me"?
"Don't laugh, Young and the Restless". Mac smiled, "A soap opera nice Lindsay".
"I watched this show when I was young, I still tune in once in a while".
"I bought the kits, and the soup, lets eat first, the soup is still hot".
"Oh I hope I can keep it down, my stomach is still bad'. She got up, Mac walked over kissing her, and whispered, "watch your show, I will get it set up". He walked to the kitchen she sat down, he set everything up, and carried the tray out. She grabbed the bowl of soup, "Oh this smells good so far so good".
"What only bacon makes you sick"?
"Oh God Mac, don't mention bacon please".
"Oh I guess you don't want a sandwich"?
"No not right now, you have one". Mac opened his sandwich, "Should I eat in the kitchen, I have turkey in this"?
"I'm fine she was sipping the soup, and was happy it stayed down. She smiled, "Mac are you sick of me yet"?
"Are you kidding, I love having you around"
"Good because I love being here, maybe I should give up my place".
'That would be fine with me girl"
"Really Mac, you wouldn't mind if I moved in permanently"?
"I already said I would love it, but we will have to tell the team". Lindsay smiled, "Can you hear them now"?
"Yes, but I don't care, I just care about what you think Lindsay"
"I'm falling in love with you Mac, I really mean it". Mac laughed, "Oh girl, you are not saying this because your watching Soap Opera's are you"?
"No Mac it is no joke, how do you feel about me"?
Mac looked at Lindsay, she waited for his reply.
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