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Post by jennifer1983 on Jan 14, 2011 1:52:07 GMT -6
Great update Jessie.
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Post by jessie on Jan 16, 2011 0:30:18 GMT -6
Chapter 6
JR woke up it was Christmas morning, he looked at Jennifer, and touched her face. He suddenly felt horrible, he didn't have a present for her. She opened her eyes, and sat up, "Oh what time is it"?
"Merry Christmas Jennifer , it is only 7".
'Merry Christmas JR". He touched her face, "Normally I wake up, and have my son running in, waking me up. This feels really strange knowing he is not here"
"He is with his Mom JR, next year he will be with you".
"I know, you must miss your family so much Jennifer"
"Yes, I miss them a lot, but I being here with you is fun"?
"Are you kidding, I can't believe how blessed , I was that you came into my life last night".
"JR look at me, lets enjoy today". She jumped up, she walked to the balcony, and laughed, "OMG JR it snowed last night, can you believe it"? JR got up, and ran to the balcony, and laughed, "Oh this is the first time in so many years, this is amazing".
JR pulled her hand, "Lets get dressed, and go outside, and go for a walk"
"Ok". She tried on some jeans of Sue Ellen's they fit perfect. She put on a sweater, and JR walked in staring at her.
"What oh this is your Ex wife's clothes, you said I could borrow some".
"Yes you can, you look great lets go". They went downstairs, and went outside, and were walking looking at the land, the snow made everything look so beautiful. She turned, "JR what do you want to do today"
"Spend the day with you, do you have to go to your family"?
'No, I want to spend Christmas with you, but can we go back inside, I'm freezing"?
"Sure sorry". They went inside, the phone was ringing. JR ran to get it.
"Hello"
"Dad Merry Christmas"
"John Ross , I miss you so much"
"I miss you to Dad, Mom said Merry Christmas too"
"Tell her I wish her a great Christmas too"
'Dad".
"Yes John Ross".
"Are you alone"?
"John Ross, I have a friend here, you don't worry about me. You have fun with your Mom, she deserves that. I love you, see you after New Years, I have someone for you to meet"
"Dad call me tomorrow ok"
"I will bye". JR hung up, he turned, Jennifer could see he was emotional. She walked over, "JR he called, that proves he loves you, and he misses you too".
"I know Jennifer, want some champagne, and orange juice"?
"Sure".
He ran to the kitchen to get the orange juice. He came back, getting two glasses, and grabbed the champagne. He poured them both a glass, and he handed it to Jennifer. She smiled, and they took a sip together.
"Yum JR this is good".
JR put his glass down, and smiled, "wait here , I minute". He ran upstairs, and came down, and sat beside her. He whispered, "Merry Christmas Jennifer". He put a necklace, with a ring on it in her hand.
"Is this yours JR, you don't have to do this"
"I do, I want to prove to you, I really like you, and I would like to see this work"
"JR thank you"
"This is my necklace, and this ring belongs to my Daddy. I would never give this to just anyone Jennifer. My Father meant the world to me, and I want you to wear his ring around your neck. Please take care of this because it means the world to me".
Jennifer put it around her neck, and JR smiled, "Oh it looks perfect". They brought their lips together, and kissed.
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Post by jennifer1983 on Jan 16, 2011 1:10:50 GMT -6
Great update Jessie.
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Post by Sanda on Jan 16, 2011 17:03:26 GMT -6
Great updates Jessie. JR and Jennifer are soo cute and adorable together.
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Post by melindajo2000 on Jan 17, 2011 14:31:12 GMT -6
I like that he gave her Jock's ring, that was a nice gesture... great update
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Post by jessie on Feb 26, 2011 18:38:23 GMT -6
Chapter 7
Jennifer whispered, "I don't have anything for you JR"
'I don't need anything but your company, I dreaded coming home Christmas Eve, but meeting you was like a miracle". She smiled touching his face, "You are so different than the other men, I met in the past. You are so gentle, and Kind but strong, and so very handsome."
JR put his glass down, and moved closer to Jennifer. He touched her cheek. "You are different too, you don't know anything about me Jennifer. If you did you probably would run away, and never look back".
"Why would you say that JR"?
"I'm alone for a reason really, I am selfish, and I have hurt many people mostly Sue Ellen, and even my boy. They loved me, and I pushed Sue Ellen away, and now she is with another man. I have my boy but if I'm not careful, he will be gone too. My Mom loves me, but I upset her so much she moved away with her Husband, who I hounded for years, because I hated that he was taking my Father's place. He never could, my Mom still loves my Daddy, but Clayton is special to her too. He made her laugh again, but I was to selfish to realize that. I love my family, but I don't know when to stop, and I'm a person who cares about me before others. I want to change, I really do, and maybe having someone like you in my life will help".
Jennifer smiled, 'Thank you for telling me all that it couldn't be easy for you. I know you are a good man or you never would have stopped to help a complete stranger on the side of the road. You never once scared me, normally I'm petrified to trust people. You brought me here, and I'm not lying this is the most amazing Christmas , I ever spent with anyone. Last night was sweet, and it was fun just talking. You were so kind staying awake listening to me go on and on about my family.. I'm falling for you JR, and for you to give me this ring of your Dad's makes me realize, I'm special to you too. I would love to get to know you better, and I would love to be part of your life, if you want me"
JR touched her face, "Oh I want you Sweetie, you will never know how much" She moved close, and they brought their lips together. She laid in his arms, on the couch, they snuggled, but they both were content, just having each other on Christmas Day, because no one should be alone on Christmas.
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Post by melindajo2000 on Feb 26, 2011 19:37:20 GMT -6
oh you summed up JR perfectly, you know the character very well. brilliant chapter  |
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Post by jessie on Mar 16, 2011 20:54:23 GMT -6
CHAPTER 8
JR, and Jennifer both got up, they decided to go for a walk. They both dressed warm, and went outside. It was cold, but it was beautiful, the snow covered the ground. Jennifer turned, "have you ever seen a more beautiful sight"?
JR was only looking at Jennifer, when he whispered, "No never". She turned, "Oh JR, you are too sweet". He wrapped his arms around her, and they were walking. She was pointing to things, and JR smiled, and was showing her all over Southfork. She has never been anywhere more beautiful than Southfork, she turned, "You lived here your whole life JR"?
"Yes, my whole life, I never really sat back, and really realized how beautiful it really is". She laughed, "You didn't realize, it is amazing". She walked into his arms, and he whispered, "you should marry me, and live here, you would make this place, even more beautiful". Jennifer was shocked, and she smiled, "Did you just propose to me JR"?
"Yes, I hate being alone, and I really screwed up my life. I think you are just what I need. I look into your beautiful brown eyes, and I see such beauty, my heart melts. I think you can make me into the man so many people wanted me to be. I'm falling head over heals in love with you Jennifer, marry me"
Jennifer couldn't speak at first, but she jumped into his arms, "Yes, I will marry you, I know it is a little soon to be thinking about this, but I'm not getting any younger, I'm falling for you too JR" He smiled as he twirled her round , and round. She laughed, and he loved seeing her beautiful smile, he loved that she loved him, even after he told her about himself. He vowed to himself this time he would do it right, and he knew this time, he would be the husband he should have been to Sue Ellen. He lost her, but maybe God was giving him a second chance to make it right, and he was blessed to have Jennifer in his life.
Jennifer put her hands on JR's face, and whispered, "JR what is wrong"?
"Nothing, I'm so happy, you are going to marry me". He put Jennifer down, and smiled, "I will make you happy, I promise you that".
Jennifer went into his arms, and whispered, "kiss me JR". He brought his lips to hers, they kissed. He smiled, "Lets go back to the house, we can celebrate, and get something warm to drink"
"Sure"? JR laughed, "Oh lets hurry it is freezing out here". They both laugh, and walked back to the house, both holding on to each other. They knew what people would think, but they didn't care, they were just happy, to have someone special to share Christmas with.
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Post by melindajo2000 on Mar 16, 2011 22:27:45 GMT -6
I'm so happy he asked her to marry her and that she said yes, they make a cute couple
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Post by Sanda on Mar 17, 2011 0:08:30 GMT -6
Great updates Jessie. Jennifer and JR make a cute couple. I am soo happy that they are engaged to be married.
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Post by jennifer1983 on Mar 17, 2011 3:39:14 GMT -6
Great update Jessie. I'm glad that JR and I are getting married.
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Post by jessie on Mar 27, 2011 19:31:34 GMT -6
Chapter 9
Jennifer and JR got to the house, and he touched her face. "I'm so happy you accepted my marriage proposal"
"JR I know people will think we are crazy, but I don't care"
"We either, they may think you need your head examined"
Jennifer was confused, and she moved away from JR, "are you making fun of me"?
"No, I'm sorry, it is just that most of Dallas hate me. I have done some crazy , and mean things in my past. I really want to change, I'm tired of losing everyone I love. My own Mom can't stand looking at me right now. My son went to his Mom's, because he was mad at me. I deserve to be alone, but I don't want to be, I want to have someone to hold, and someone to share my life with. I don't want it to be to late for me, I thought it was going to be, tonight". JR walked away from Jennifer, and walked over to the dresser, and opened the drawer. She walked over seeing a gun, and she got scared. "JR I hate guns, why are you showing me this gun"?
"Jennifer I was going to end it tonight"
"End what are you talking about"?
"I was so alone, and I knew spending Christmas alone was my punishment for being a horrible person. I was going to use this gun, to end it once, and for all. My Family would have been shocked, but I will tell you, they wouldn't give a crap. Jennifer walked over, smacking JR on the arm so hard, shocking him.
"How dare you want to end your life, so many people want to live, but they are suffering everyday with diseases, that are taking their lives away. You were going to kill yourself for selfish reasons, your Mother, and Son would have been devastated. There is no reason that is acceptable for killing yourself. If that is what I'm looking forward too, I will leave right now. I love you JR Ewing, but I won't wonder everyday, if your going to kill yourself, because your having a bad day"
"I won't Jennifer, I agree I was selfish. I believe, you were stranded on the road tonight for a reason. I think GOD wanted to show me, that life is worth living. I know I have a lot to make up for, but I know I can be a good person, and I'm willing to try"
Jennifer walked over, hugging JR, and whispered, "You scared me JR, don't you ever talk about hurting yourself. I want that gun gone, it will not stay in our room. Promise me you will get rid of that gun JR".
"I will tomorrow, don't worry". JR shut the drawer, and walked over hugging her. She was shaking, JR walked her over to the love seat, they sat down. She leaned her head on his chest, and he held her close, as they both just laid in silence, both hoping their future together would be happy, because they both needed it.
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Post by melindajo2000 on Mar 27, 2011 19:47:07 GMT -6
great update, I'm glad JR found a new reason to live
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Post by jennifer1983 on Mar 28, 2011 0:01:46 GMT -6
Great update Jessie.
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Post by jessie on Apr 3, 2011 11:39:15 GMT -6
Sorry Jennifer had to rewrite all the chapters to take out romance, I know it is boring. The whole story changes when you delete a lot of the scenes.. Sorry, I had to delete the romantic scenes, or the story would be deleted. I wanted to save a couple of yours, so I deleted the romance. I find it hard writing now, so I'm not sure when I will update some of these stories..  |
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