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Post by jessie on Dec 26, 2010 0:59:39 GMT -6
Hope you had a wonderful Christmas, and a Happy New Year. Here is a short story for you, hope you like it.
Christmas Eve
JR left work, it was Christmas Eve, but he was in no hurry to get home. He lost Sue Ellen she was in London now with Don. He never thought she would be happy without him, but she was. John Ross was with her for the Holidays, he missed his Mom deeply. JR knew Bobby was going away with Christopher, for the Holidays, and his Ma Ma and Clayton went on a Cruise with Mavis and Punk. JR knew it would be the most depressing Christmas ever. He was almost home, when he noticed a car was stalled on the side of the road. He almost drove by, but he saw a young lady standing by the car all alone. He stopped , and got out, asking her if she needed any help?
"Yes, my car staled, and I called for help, but due to Christmas, they say it will be over 2 hours, before someone can come".
"You look frozen, how long have you been out here"?
"Over a hour, it took that long, just to get through to them".
"I live 5 minutes from here, let me take you to my place".
"Oh I don't think so, I will wait".
"I'm freezing, you sure, I promise you, I won't hurt you".
"I know you wouldn't , I'm just not sure". JR smiled, "I'm JR Ewing, have you heard of that name"?
"As in Ewing Oil"?
"Yes Darling, I live at Southfork, it is really warm there. I'm going, do you care to join me"?
"No but thank you". JR smiled, and started to walk to his car. Jennifer was freezing, she had tears fall down her cheek, and they actually froze in seconds. She yelled, "Wait, I will come, I'm dying out here". JR smiled, "Ok lets go, I can get you a nice cup of hot chocolate, or a something stronger." She ran over , he opened the door, and she got in. JR got in, and smiled, "what changed your mind"?
"I'm cold, and you were the first car that stopped tonight. I think you are very kind, and you have such a caring face" JR smiled, "Caring, I like that". They drove to Southfork, and she smiled, "You live here, it is beautiful".
JR got out opening the door, and Jennifer got out. He smiled, "lets go in and get warm". She followed him into the house, she was surprised only Teresa and Raoul were home. She smiled, "Your all alone at Christmas"?
"This year, but I have been a bad boy, I deserve it". Jennifer was shocked that he said that, "Bad boy".
"Oh I'm talking about my Family, they are not impressed with me. They left me all alone, even my boy wanted to go to his Mother"
"Well that is nice JR, she deserves to be with her son too".
"I know, I'm happy she got him this year". Jennifer took her coat off, he took her into the living room, and she sat down. JR walked over to the bar, "would you like something Jennifer"?
"I will have a rye and ginger ale please".
"Rye and Ginger girl, nice, would you like to call your family"?
"Oh that is ok, they don't live in Dallas, I was spending Christmas alone too. I had to transfer here recently, and I can't afford to go home right now. I was looking forward to going home, taking a bath, and going to bed". JR handed her a drink, and smiled, "you can spend the night with me if you like"?
Jennifer was shocked she just looked at him, with her mouth open.
To be continued
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Post by melindajo2000 on Dec 26, 2010 4:00:49 GMT -6
great start, cant wait to see what Jennifer's reaction will be
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Post by jennifer1983 on Dec 26, 2010 4:40:57 GMT -6
Great start to your new story Jessie I like it.
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Post by jessie on Dec 27, 2010 22:31:26 GMT -6
Chapter 2 Jennifer was shocked, and JR laughed, "In the guest room of course". Jennifer smiled, "Of course". She was embarrassed, she thought he wanted to sleep with her. Little did she know it was exactly what he wanted, but he was going to be a gentleman. He put out his hand, and smiled, "would you like me to take you upstairs, and show you the guest room"? She put her hand in his, and walked upstairs, with him. She couldn't believe how massive the place was. She walked down the hall, he pointed to his room. "I will be in here if you need anything". "Ok thank you". JR took her to the guest room, and opened the door. It was beautiful, she smiled, "this is lovely JR". He walked to the closet, and pointed to the nightgowns, that Sue Ellen left. "If you like to use one of my Ex's nightgowns, you can. Don't worry she wore them once only". He smiled, and pointed to the bathroom, and said use anything you need, the cabinets are full of stuff. "Thank You JR, this is very kind of you". JR went to walk to the window, but his body brushed against her. He said sorry, but part of him, wanted to kiss her. She was so beautiful, sweet and so unlike most of the woman he has been with. He touched her arm, "I'm sorry I didn't hurt you"? "No, you barely touched me". JR walked over opening up the window, "It is hot in here don't you think"? Jennifer smiled, She wasn't hot, but she knew he was nervous being around her. He walked to the door," I will be next door ok" . He walked out shutting the door, he leaned against the door. He hated leaving her alone, he needed to have someone in his arms. It has been months since he has been with anyone. He almost opened the door, but he resisted, and walked to his room. He sat on his bed, he couldn't take it, so he got up going downstairs. Jennifer heard him leave his room, she knew he was upset about something. She went to the door, and walked out, going to his room. She called his name, but she got no answer. She realized he went downstairs, she went back to her room. She walked to the closet, she has never seen such beautiful Negligee's in her life. She tried one on, she felt so beautiful she put her hair up. She smiled as she walked out of the room, and slowly went downstairs. She heard him in the living room. She walked in, he was over by the bar, getting himself a bourbon. She walked over slowly, her negligee flowed behind her. She touched his shoulder, he jumped but turned around. He dropped his bourbon, and just stared at her. She smiled, "I wanted some company, I can't sleep yet". He was speechless, he walked over pulling her over to him, bringing his lips to hers, and they kissed . "To be Continued".
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Post by melindajo2000 on Dec 27, 2010 22:49:06 GMT -6
very descriptive writing, love your style of writing... cant wait to see what happens between JR and Jennifer update soon please
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Post by jennifer1983 on Dec 28, 2010 2:24:31 GMT -6
Great update Jessie.
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Post by jessie on Jan 1, 2011 0:24:31 GMT -6
Chapter 3
Jennifer smiled, "Slowdown JR, your going to fast for me"
"Oh I'm sorry Jennifer, I just thought". JR turned away, and Jennifer touched his arm. "I said slowdown, not to pull away from me". JR smiled, "I'm just happy, that you are here with me on Christmas Eve. My family are all away, I can't blame them, I haven't been that nice this year. I don't get how lucky I am that your car stalled on that road tonight. I will slowdown, here is a glass of wine".
Jennifer took it, and sat down, JR sat beside her. She smiled, "Your wife had lovely taste, all her nightwear is gorgeous".
"Sue Ellen she was glamorous, that is for sure. She is in London now, you can have anything you want up there, she will never be back"
"I couldn't take her stuff JR".
"I know, just saying if you want anything" Jennifer touched his hand, "you have any children"?
"Yes, a son he is with his Ma Ma, I had him last year. It is only fair, but I made her life miserable the past month. I'm so cruel sometimes, I just hate being away from my Son".
"He will be back soon, your lucky you have him all year. Can you imagine, how she feels"?
"I know Jennifer, I'm glad he is there. I'm also glad you are here with me". JR got up, "would you like something to eat"?
"What do you have"?
"Would you mind Potato chips, Raoul and Teresa have the night off"? Jennifer smiled, "potato chips would be fine JR". He walked into the kitchen she stayed sitting on the couch. He walked in carrying a bowl of chips , and sat down. She smiled, as he took one, than she did.
"Yum BBQ chips love them".
"I'm so sorry, this is horrible Jennifer, I'm not a good host".
"JR this is fine, don't worry about it".
"Thanks for saying that". They ate chips, JR was talking about John Ross, and his company. Jennifer listened, she loved listening to his stories, he was so interesting, he was so different than other men she has been with. He looked at his watch," it is almost 2am, maybe we should turn in, you must be tired"
"Yes, it is late, maybe going to bed, is a good idea". JR took her glass of wine, and put it on the coffee table. He took her hand , and guided her upstairs, and walked her to her room. He opened the door, she walked in, and turned to JR.
"I will be right over there if you need anything Jennifer"
"Ok goodnight, see you in the morning, I can cook you a nice breakfast".
"I would love that, see you in the morning". JR kissed her cheek, and walked out shutting the door. Jennifer touched her cheek, she wanted to run to him, she didn't want to be alone. She touched the door, but she couldn't go over there. She walked to the bed, pulling the bedspread down. She got in pulling the comforter over her, and looked at the door. She shut her eyes, and all she could think of, she wished he would walk right back through the door, and into her arms.
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Post by Sanda on Jan 1, 2011 0:45:44 GMT -6
Great start to your new Christmas story about JR and Jennifer.
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Post by jennifer1983 on Jan 1, 2011 0:51:55 GMT -6
Great update Jessie.
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Post by melindajo2000 on Jan 1, 2011 14:16:23 GMT -6
great update Jessie JR and JR are so cute together
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Post by jessie on Jan 2, 2011 0:16:00 GMT -6
Chapter 4
Jennifer sat up she couldn't sleep, she was all hot and bothered, she couldn't believe she didn't tell JR to stay. She has never been romantic with someone on the first date or night together, but there was something about JR, that was different. She got up walking out on the balcony, it was cold, but it felt good against her skin which was hot. She smiled, "Jennifer you are bad, put him out of your mind ". She got a chill, and shut the door, and walked over looking at the pictures of John Ross, and the family. She picked up one, and knew it was Sue Ellen she was beautiful, just like the clothes she left behind. She put it down, and walked to the door, and smiled, "Jennifer you can't what would he think"? She walked over to the bed. She laid back, and laughed, "this is going to be a long night". She shut her eyes, but she imagined him walking in the room, walking over to the bed, she sat up, surprised but happy to see him. She drifted off asleep finally wondering what it would be like to be with JR forever.
JR sat reading a book, he looked at the bedroom door, willing it to fly open. He wanted to go to Jennifer so badly, but he knew it wasn't right. He put the book down, he read 2 chapters , but couldn't tell you one thing he just read. He got up, walking around the room, and finally he opened the door, and walked over to the guest room. He didn't want to wake her so he opened the door, to make sure she was asleep. He noticed her light on, he walked over she was sleeping but she was beautiful. She didn't have the blanket over her, but he would wake her if he tried to pull them up. He turned to leave, but he heard , "JR what is wrong"?
"Oh God forgive me, I was just checking on you Jennifer. I wanted to make sure you were ok, go back to sleep".
"Your missing your family JR, I can tell you are lonely"
"Yes, but I'm a big boy, I feel horrible waking you up".
"Don't I just drifted off now, I couldn't sleep either". JR sat beside her, "your missing your family too"?
"Yes, but can I be honest JR"?
"Yes, I wouldn't want it any other way".
Jennifer laughed, "I love being here with you JR, this night was going to be the worst night of my life, but it turned into one of my best".
"Really you like being stranded with old JR"?
"Yes, one of the sweetest handsomest men in Dallas oh yeah".
"Sweet oh that isn't me, handsome I can handle". Jennifer leaned into him, and brought her lips to his, which shocked JR. He pulled her close, and they kissed for the longest time. He jumped up, "Forgive me Jennifer, I should leave you alone". JR walked to the door, but Jennifer yelled, "Wait JR" .
He turned, and Jennifer got up, and JR wanted her to say don't leave, but he knew it wouldn't happen.
To be Continued,
Jennifer should JR stay or should he go?
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Post by jennifer1983 on Jan 2, 2011 2:30:18 GMT -6
Great update Jessie. I would like it if JR stayed in the room with me.
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Post by melindajo2000 on Jan 2, 2011 11:55:51 GMT -6
great update, This was great, I hope JR stays as well
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Post by jessie on Jan 13, 2011 21:57:08 GMT -6
Sorry I had to delete the romance out of this chapter.. It is kind of hard writing soap opera stories without romance/ Sorry Jennifer I had to rewrite this chapter, making it more Disney like. Chapter 5 JR turned, "you are nervous being in this house alone Jennifer" "A little can you sit and talk for a while JR"? JR sat on the edge of the bed, and Jennifer smiled, "you would think I'm a child excited about Christmas." "You can call your family if you like the phone is right there" "I will in the morning, JR can you lay beside me tonight". He laid down beside her, she smiled as they both talked, and talked to the wee hours, than they finally drifted off asleep.
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Post by melindajo2000 on Jan 13, 2011 22:19:09 GMT -6
very romantic love your writing here Jessie
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