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Post by melindajo2000 on Dec 28, 2010 22:47:48 GMT -6
Jock is coming down awfully strong on Ray when Lucy knew what she was doing. I hope Lucy stands up for Ray now but I'm glad they have a place to live at least this is getting good! I'm glad Melinda stood up to Gary too, he deserved it but I'm glad she ran after him too, very good update
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Post by jessie on Jan 3, 2011 19:09:12 GMT -6
Chapter 12
Melinda grabbed Gary's arms , "I'm sorry you feel like I betrayed you, but Ray and Jessie deserve a second chance Gary'.
'I will tolerate Jessie, the poor thing is stuck with that man, but I will never forgive Ray"
"He is your brother it happened so long ago, Gary please"
"Are you coming home with me, or do you want to stay here for Ray and Jessie"?
"I will see them later, I will come home with you". Gary walked ahead, Melinda hated seeing Gary this way. She ran over, "Will you wait for me, I'm your wife do you remember"?
"Yes, I'm sorry, I'm so mad".
"Lets go home Gary". He wrapped his arm around her, and they both walked to the car.
Jock was pacing when the Doctor walked out. "Jessie is going to be ok, but no more stress or she could miscarry the baby. She said she will see you Ray".
Jock and Ellie look at Ray, who walked past them. "Ray"
"Yes Sir".
"Bring her to your home, but your not welcome at the house"
"Yes Sir". Ray walked away feeling horrible, as Sanda and Bobby walk over.
"Daddy I understand what Ray did was wrong, but he is hurting, and he is sorry"
"Do you love Lucy Bobby"?
"You know I do, but she admits it was partially her fault".
"It was his, end of discussion". Jock grabbed Ellie's hand, "lets go Ellie". They left, Bobby and Sanda sat on the bench waiting for Ray. "Bobby this is such a horrible mess, why was Ray so stupid"?
"I don't know Sanda, we just have to be there for him ok".
"I love Jessie, seeing her suffering because of his mistake, makes me angry".
"Do you want to go home, I thought we could drive them home, if they needed a ride"?
"I will stay for Jessie Bobby". Sanda laid against him, and he wrapped his arms around her.
The Doctor stopped Ray, "You can take her home, but please remember no stress".
"Yes Doctor thank you"? Ray walked in, and the Doctor smiled, "I will see you at the front desk, after you sign her out". Ray walked over, "Jessie I'm so sorry, are you ok"?
"Ray they wanted to rape me, they were disgusting, they touched me"
Ray felt sick, "Jessie they didn't do anything"?
"No, I was so scared, why did you hurt me" Ray walked over lifting her into his arms, "I'm so sorry Sweetie, I promise you, I will never hurt you again". They both hear the door shut, Ray turned, Lucy walked over.
"Jessie OMG I'm so sorry you were hurt, Ray doesn't deserve what the family are doing to him"
Jessie looked at Lucy she walked over holding Jessie's hand. "I was jealous of you and Ray, I went after him years ago. He wanted to stop, I went after him, but my Family won't believe me".
Jessie hugged Lucy, and Ray whispered, "Lucy please go if Jock or Gary find you in here, I'm dead".
"Ray I'm so sorry". Lucy ran out of the room, and Jessie looked at Ray, who walked over , "lets go home Jessie".
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Post by melindajo2000 on Jan 3, 2011 22:46:26 GMT -6
I'm glad Gary and Melinda made up even though he's still being stubborn about Ray. I feel sorry for him having the family turn on him. I hope Lucy speaks to Jock but I doubt it will do any good. awesome update
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Post by Sanda on Jan 4, 2011 1:10:46 GMT -6
Great updates Jessie.
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Post by jessie on Jan 4, 2011 23:20:21 GMT -6
Chapter 13
Jessie and Ray came out, and Sanda got up hugging Jessie.
"How are you Jessie"?
"Better you stayed"?
"Yes we are going to drive you to Ray's place"
"Ray should we go there, Gary and Jock really don't want us"? Bobby walked over, "Jessie yes go to Ray's place, you will be safe there".
"I have to get our things at the hotel first"? Ray says
"Sure come on". They walked out going to the hotel, Ray ran in, and than they settled their bill. Than Bobby and Sanda drove them home. Bobby drove up to the house, Sanda and Ray got out, and Bobby shook Ray's hand. "I better go home, I don't want Gary to think, I'm not on his side too". Jessie smiled, "God he made a mistake Bobby, can't you forgive him"?
"I do Jessie, but Gary is hurting too"
'Go to Gary, we are fine, thank you Sanda". Jessie turned running up the stairs to the house. Bobby smiled, "I'm sorry Ray".
"Go we are fine". Bobby drove off, Ray walked up to the house, and opened up the door. Jessie ran to her room, and laid on the bed. Ray locked the door, he leaned against it, he didn't know what to say to make her feel better? He walked in, "Jessie you should eat something, please talk to me"
"I can't Ray". He walked over, and laid beside her, she turned. "Ray why don't we go some place , and start fresh"
"You want to leave Sanda and Melinda"?
"What do you think Ray, no but I hate how Jock and Gary are treating you"?
" I deserve it Jessie, I can deal with their hatred, as long as I have you".
"You have me, and our baby, Ray". He smiled, and she leaned on his chest, and he whispered, "I promise you , it will be ok Jessie".
Sanda and Bobby got to the house, Melinda and Gary were outside. Bobby walked over, "Are you ok Gary"?
"Just Dandy Bobby"
"Ok Gary we get it, your angry, Ray is paying, he is over at his house. He won't come over, so don't worry".
"Bobby if Lucy was your Daughter would you forgive Ray so easy"?
"I'm not fighting with you, I won't write Ray off ok". Bobby grabbed Sanda they ran inside. Lucy drove up, and Gary got up, "where were you Lucy"?
"Out Daddy".
"You didn't go see Ray did you"?
"Daddy please give this up, Ray isn't to blame for everything. I hounded him day and night. He wasn't my first either, so he didn't ruin me, as you say. You made mistakes, but you know what me and Ray made a mistake, if Jessie can forgive us, why can't you"?
"Jessie is a idiot". Melinda jumped up, "Jessie is no idiot, she loves Ray, she is telling you , she was to blame too. I know Ray was wrong, but haven't you done something you regret"?
"No". Gary yelled
Lucy stared, "Oh really leaving me here for Grandma and Grandpa to raise wasn't a regret. You were a drunk if you were here, I probably wouldn't have turned to Ray, maybe your to blame" Lucy ran into the house, Gary was in shock, he felt sick. He jumped up, "I'm going to have it out with Ray once and for all"?
"No, Jessie has been through enough Gary".
Gary didn't listen he ran to the car, getting in, and took off to Ray and Jessie's place. Melinda screamed, Jock, Sanda and Bobby ran out, she couldn't stop crying.
"Where is Gary going"?
"Something bad is going to happy, he is going after Ray" Sanda grabbed Bobby, "we have to get over there, Ray he is in no shape to fight Gary". Bobby and Sanda, ran to the car, and Melinda jumped in the back seat.
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Post by Sanda on Jan 4, 2011 23:41:50 GMT -6
Great update Jessie. I hope that nothing bad happens to Ray.
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Post by melindajo2000 on Jan 4, 2011 23:48:21 GMT -6
I agree with Sanda I hope Gary leaves Ray alone very good update
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Post by jessie on Jan 5, 2011 19:32:51 GMT -6
Chapter 14
Jessie watched as Ray walked out of the shower, wearing just a towel. She smiled , "Oh don't you sexy, all bruised up.". Ray smiled, "Oh who is in a better mood"? He walked over, and Jessie giggled, as he pulled off his towel. He got on the bed, and brought his lips over hers. She touched his cheek, 'Ray you are so handsome". He laid her back, as he brought his lips to her stomach. She giggled, Ray laughed, 'You are to cute, I'm trying to be sexy, and your giggling"
"It tickles". He whispered, "I need you Jessie, are you ready"?
"Yes", as he pulled her dress up, and he pulled her panties off. She laughed, "Oh do you think the Doctor would think this is resting"? He parted her, and whispered, "I don't want to hurt you, tell me if something doesn't feel right". He started, and she laughed, "Wait protection"
"Oh God", she laughed, he forgot for a minute, they were having a baby. "Your bad Jessie". He moved down, as he entered, she cried out, but from pleasure he knew she was ok. She grabbed his shoulders, as he brought his mouth over his. She smiled but they both jumped when Gary came through his door, by kicking it. Jessie pulled her dress down, just as Ray tried to grab his pants. Gary walked into the room, "Oh God you sick freak, your enjoying yourself while our family is suffering"
"Get out of my house, how dare you walk in on me and my wife"
Gary laughed, "Oh but you didn't mind that you violated my Daughter, maybe you will have a daughter, how would you like someone to violate her"? Jessie got up, she walked over, 'Gary please leave, we will leave Southfork, we can't live like this".
"Shut up, you were making out with him, how can you let him touch you"?
"I love him, he is a good man, get out of my house".
"I feel sorry for your baby, having parents like you both". Ray had enough, he ran over punching Gary. Jessie screamed, "No Ray please stop". Ray grabbed Jessie, "go in the living room now". Gary got up, and ran at Ray, Jessie ran to the door, screaming, as they both were punching each other.
"Stop please". Jessie slide to the floor, Ray saw her, and went to walk to her. Gary punched him, in the back, making him, fall to the ground, in pain. Jessie was shaking, Gary walked over kicking Ray, "Leave this land, or I will kill you". He walked over and glared at Jessie, "Call the police Jessie, I will tell them Ray is a pedophile".
'Go please". Gary saw her crawl over to Ray, she cradled him in her arms. Bobby , Sanda, and Melinda ran in seeing Ray. Bobby grabbed Gary, "What have you done"?
"I showed the scum, what pigs like him deserve". Melinda was horrified, she ran over to Jessie who was in shock. "Jessie Sweetie, look at me, I'm so sorry"
Sanda walked over, "Oh God Gary , what is wrong with you"?
They all jump when Lucy ran in, with Jock running in behind her. "Daddy stop this, or I will leave here, and you will never see me again". She looked over seeing Ray on the floor, she ran over, "Oh God Ray, what did he do to you"? Gary went into a rage, and ran over grabbing Lucy, pulling her away from Ray. She was screaming, she pushed him away. They all froze when Jock yelled, "Enough, this ends today".
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Post by melindajo2000 on Jan 5, 2011 23:04:14 GMT -6
wow what Gary did was awful... really cant wait to see what happens next, this is some of your best writing!
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Post by jessie on Jan 6, 2011 19:11:59 GMT -6
Chapter 15
Jock walked over telling Bobby to help him get Ray off the floor. They helped him up sitting him on the bed. Melinda and Sanda helped Jessie up, she was crying. Jock yelled, "Enough with all this fighting, Miss Ellie is so upset, and I can't stand it anymore. I hate what you did Ray, you betrayed me, in the worst way. Lucy was my Granddaughter, and you carried on with her behind my back. She told me and her Grandmother everything, and I believe her Gary. We have to put this behind us, and start over. He made a mistake, he is going to be a Father. I don't want to lose my Grandchild, so this fighting is over. Gary yelled, "Daddy you won't dictate what I can and can't do"
'I don't care if you and Ray ever talk again, but you will never act the way you did today again"
"Maybe me and Melinda will leave Southfork, and start over somewhere else". Jessie turned hugging Melinda, "Oh God don't go you, Sanda and Ray are all I got". Ray looked at Gary, "I'm sorry, I was a idiot, but I can't take it back. You never have to talk to me again, but don't leave Southfork, it would devastate Miss Ellie. She would eventually blame me, and I would hate to hurt her more than I already have".
"Oh Ray you are so caring , and thoughtful, but when you had your way with Lucy, you were selfish, disgusting, and vial"
"Ok Gary say your peace, but please don't take Melinda from Jessie, and Miss Ellie, and Sanda"
Gary looked at Melinda, she was pleading with her eyes. Gary walked over, "I love you Melinda, do you want to stay here at Southfork"?
'Yes, more than anything, but if you can't stop this hatred for Ray, maybe we should leave". Lucy walked over, "Daddy please it is over, Ray is a great man, he is going to be a Father himself"
"Yes I know Lucy, but when his baby is born, he will understand how I feel. He will wonder everyday if someone will hurt his child, and what he did to this family is really unforgivable in my eyes".
Gary looked over at Ray, "I will stop the fighting, but I won't think of you as a brother ever again". Ray whispered, "I'm so sorry Gary".
"That really means nothing Ray". Gary walked to the door, "Melinda, Lucy do you want to come with me, I'm going home". Melinda and Lucy walked over to Gary, and left. Bobby and Sanda walked over to Ray, and touched his shoulder. "See you , and Jessie tomorrow". They walked out, and Jock turned, "Ray I'm not happy with you, but your my son. I will let you both be alone, goodnight". Jessie ran into his arms, "Thank you Mr. Ewing".
"Stop with Mr. Ewing it is Jock, take care of yourself sweetie, and take care of my precious Grand baby". Jessie touched her stomach, "I will promise". He walked out, Jessie turned looking at Ray who was holding his back. She walked over ,"Ray you are in so much pain". She sat beside him, he touched her face, "Jessie I'm really sorry, I ruined everything".
"You didn't ruin anything in my eyes". She whispered, "Lay back, you need rest , your back. I will go get you some Tylenol for the pain".
"Oh I'm so sorry, our night was ruined"
"Oh we will have many more". She got up going to the kitchen getting a glass of water. She grabbed a couple of Tylenol, but she couldn't stop crying. Ray yelled, "Jessie are you ok"?
Jessie wiped the tears from her eyes, "Yes, I will right in". She walked to the bedroom, Ray was standing up, wearing a towel. Jessie smiled, "Ray what are you doing, you can't"?
"If your gentle with me, we will be fine". Jessie smiled putting the water , and pills down. She walked into his arms, he was in pain, but seeing her smile, meant the world to him.
"To be continued"
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Post by melindajo2000 on Jan 6, 2011 19:18:50 GMT -6
I'm glad Jock put an end to the fighting its about time someone did. Miss Ellie really needs some peace in her house and I hope she can get it now... Gary is being so stubborn, I hope he and Ray can work things out. Lucy did the right thing and I'm glad Jock listened to her. I hope that they can put all of it behind them now but its up to mostly Gary, hopefully Melinda can be a good influence on him. wonderful update Jessie
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Post by Sanda on Jan 7, 2011 21:15:48 GMT -6
Great updates Jessie. I am soo glad that Jock put an end to all of the fighting. I hope that Miss Ellie will finally have some peace in her house.
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Post by jessie on Jan 8, 2011 18:29:48 GMT -6
Chapter 16
Jessie sat up smiling, "Oh your in pain now, that was your own fault, but I loved every minute of it". Jessie touched his chest, he whispered , "don't or I will start all over again". She went to put her nightgown on, he whispered, "wait, not yet".
"Ray we have to take it easy, we were pretty wild a minute ago".
"Do you know how beautiful you are"? Jessie turned away, he touched her face, "do you"?
"Why are you doing this Ray, I'm the girl next door type, not the beauty queen like Sue Ellen. Melinda and Sanda are gorgeous, I'm the girl boys want to be friends with not the one they can't take their eyes off of".
"You are kidding Jessie, your even more pretty this moment, you have stood beside me through everything. I hate that I hurt you, but I promise it won't happen again".
"I'm cold Ray can I put my nightgown on please"?
"Of course". She did, he watched as she grabbed his Tylenol, and water. 'Take this, I never should have made love to you, when you were sore like that".
"Oh you made the pain go away girl, you were wild".
" Yes I was, that isn't me, I don't know what got into me"?
"Oh I sure would like to see that girl back even for a few moments".
"Ray don't tempt me, I swear I will be all over you like peanut butter on bread"
"Oh come on now you better get over here Jessie." She smiled she crawled over, he jumped when she was being naughty with her hands. He whispered, "Oh man your hands are freezing, you better warm me up". Jessie pulled the blanket down, and straddled him, but trying to put little weight on him. He grabbed her arms, "don't worry about me, I'm fine promise". She lifted off her nightgown, and brought her lips to Ray. He yelled, "Jessie I can't take much more". She moved taking Ray, and arched her back, she cried out, as she gave herself completely to him. He yelled, "Oh God Ray, are you ready". She came, she cried out as he did, they both collapsed in each others arms, not saying a word. She went to move off of him, but he held her tight, and they both fell asleep, in each others arms.
Back at Southfork
Gary was sitting on the bed, just staring into space. Melinda walked over, "Is this how it is going to be forever Gary"?
"No Melinda, I'm sorry but I'm so angry". Melinda opened her robe, he turned, and immediately got turned on. She was standing in front of him completely naked. She walked over, "Are you in the mood now Gary, or should I get dressed."?
"Come here Melinda, I'm so sorry, I have been treating you awful recently". She walked over, sitting beside him. She brought her hands to his pants, Gary jumped he couldn't believe what she was doing to him. She pulled his belt off, helping him pull his pants down. She moved her body close to his, they both were on fire from their desire for each other. She knew he was ready for her, and she loved teasing him. She whispered, "Maybe we should wait until your in a better mood."?
"I don't think so girl, not now beautiful". Melinda pulled Gary close, and they kissed, and he laid her down, and started to take off his shirt , then he got up, and totally undressed himself all the time they watched each other with their eyes .. He knelled on the bed, and pulled Melinda to her knee's so they faced each other, and he touched her mouth and his lips kissed her neck and he touched her shoulders, and kissed her breasts and Melinda laid back.
He could feel her breathing, and he knew she was losing control, just like him . He caressed her with his hands on her thighs, stroking and caressing her body .When he turned and braced himself above her, he whispered. "Open your eyes, Melinda . See the one who loves you" Her eyes drifted open. They were full of passion . Gary body opened her thighs , he straddled her, and in one swift thrust he entered her, and smiled down at her radiant face. He watched expression of Joy dance across her face in each response to his rhythmic stroking. He watched as he changed tempo, and brought her to even higher levels of arousal. He watched, and could see into her sole when she experienced her fulfillment, and he saw her shine with love when he experienced his.
Sanda and Bobby were out by the pool, just talking having some ice tea. Sanda walked over sitting in his lap, bringing her lips to his. He whispered, "we are suppose to be so happy, but all this mess is causing so much stress. I want everyone to be happy, and put whatever happened in the past, where it belongs".
Bobby touched her face, "I think it will happen in time, Gary just has to cool down. Ray was wrong but he is sorry, and you know what he can't take back what happened, can he"?
"Bobby"
"Yes Sanda".
"Are you tired"?
"No not really why"?
"Well I'm tired, lets go up, and have a nap". Bobby put his ice tea down, and laughed. "A nap sounds like fun". They went inside, and ran upstairs to their room. They went inside, and Bobby shut the door, and he lifted Sanda up, caring her to the bed. He laid her down, Bobby jumped on the bed beside her, kissing her. Bobby wrapped his arms around her, he pulled her into his body , caressing her, savoring her softness, the feel of her hair, as he brushed it away from her face. They both sat up undressing each other, touching each other, making them both totally crazy with desire. Everything else ceased to exist, Bobby laid over Sanda as he surged inside. His mouth met hers as she wrapped her arms around him. They both gave themselves completely to each other. They collapsed side by side, both laughing, she whispered, "now I could go for that nap". He pulled her close, and whispered, "me too Angel".
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Post by melindajo2000 on Jan 8, 2011 19:29:35 GMT -6
one of my favorite chapters, I loved my section this was so nicely written... love your writing style Jessie
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Post by Sanda on Jan 8, 2011 22:06:34 GMT -6
Great update Jessie. I LOVED mine and Bobby's scene in this chapter.
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