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Post by jessie on Apr 24, 2010 0:23:36 GMT -6
This is my Miss Ellie, Jock and Digger storyline. Hope you like it, I haven't done one like this before.
Chapter1
Miss Ellie was sitting at home, when she ran to the phone, when it rang. She smiled " when she heard his voice.
"Hi, Ellie"
"Hi, Digger , I thought you weren't going to call"?
"Your Father he hates me Ellie, he wants you with Jock, I can't believe that"
"Digger Daddy is just worried about some problems he is having. He likes Jock, but I will talk to him, don't worry."
"Can you come out tonight or not"?
"You can't come up to the house to get me. Daddy will go crazy, I will meet you at the west gate, Ok"?
"Ellie this makes me angry, why do I have to sneak around"?
"Please Digger just meet me ok"
"Ok see you in 1 hour Ellie, love you"
"I love you too Digger", she smiled, and hung up
She jumped seeing Garrison standing behind her. "You were talking to Digger Barnes, Daddy is going to kill you"
"Garrison please don't tell Daddy, Digger is a good man"
"Ellie I don't disagree with that, but Daddy wants you with Jock"
"I like Jock, but Digger is the man I love"
"Jock is rich , he can help Daddy, why don't you understand that"
"I'm suppose to give up everything to save this land, is that fair"?
"No it isn't, but sometimes you have to sacrifice yourself to help your family"
"I'm going to see Digger, promise you won't tell Daddy"
"I won't but you will end up hurting Digger in the end, that is cruel Ellie"
"I will marry Digger one day, this is my life not Daddy's or yours"
She ran upstairs, and changed, and left to see Digger. She sat by a tree , and jumped up when he drove up. She ran to his car , jumping in, and they drove off. Digger didn't say anything at first, until Ellie reached over touching his face. He pulled his car over, pulling Ellie into his arms. They kiss he smiled " lets go sit at the beach, and just talk".
"I would love that Digger", they drove off, and got to the beach. They sat by the water holding hands. The wind was blowing in their hair, she leaned her head on his shoulder. Digger touched Ellie's face, " you won't give up on us promise".
"I love you Digger, I won't ever give up on us". They kiss, and sit by the water for hours, until he realized he better get her home. They drove up to Southfork, and she prayed Digger would get away before anyone, saw them.
She kissed him on the lips, when she heard her Father screaming. "Ellie you get out of that car this instant"
"Daddy please, we love each other, don't be so rude". Ellie got out of the car, she was crying, Digger was about to drive away.
Aaron Southworth walked over putting his hand on the car. " You stay away from my Daugher she is going to marry a deceit man Jock Ewing, do you understand me"?
"You are going to force her to marry someone she doesn't love"?
"Get off my property, and never step foot on it again"
Digger pulled away, and sped off the property. Aaron glared at Ellie, " go to your room, I'm really disappointed in you".
"I'm disappointed in you Daddy", she ran into the house, and up to her room.
She grabbed a photo of Digger, sitting on the bed, she touched it." I will marry you Digger Barnes, and you are a deceit man, and I love you". She laid back, and cried herself asleep.
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Post by melindajo2000 on Apr 24, 2010 0:55:47 GMT -6
wow...this is awesome and so original! I wonder if it is going to stay true to canon or if you are going to do something different? It will be fun seeing where you go with this and seeing your version of Digger.
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Post by Sanda on Apr 24, 2010 23:36:06 GMT -6
Jessie, I LOVE your new story Torn between two Lovers. I can't wait to see where this story goes.
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Post by jessie on Apr 25, 2010 15:04:46 GMT -6
Thanks for your sweet comments, it means alot.
Chapter 2
Ellie was awake all night she was so angry, she couldn't stop the tears from flowing. Garrison knocked, and Ellie screamed " Go away, I don't want to talk"
Garrison opened the door, "Ellie I know what happened last night , Daddy is livid, he forbids Digger ever stepping foot on this land."
"Garrison, I love Digger , I 'm not letting him go"
He sits on the bed, " Ellie do this for Daddy, you will like Jock to if you give him a chance. He is handsome, strong, smart, and has lots of money"
"I don't care that he has lots of money Garrison, I adore Digger we are in love. Jock probably is a deceit man , but I don't love him"
"Ellie Daddy will never allow Digger to marry you"?
"I don't need his permission Garrison, I can marry him anytime I want"
"Daddy will disown you Ellie, is that what you want"?
"No", she started to cry
"Daddy wants you downstairs for breakfast in 1/2hour Ellie"
"You are kidding right"?
"No I'm not he is really upset, get ready and come down ok"
"Yeah, I will be there "
Ellie got a shower and dress quickly, and jumped when the phone rang. She picked it up, and said "Hello".
"Ellie it's Digger"
She sat on the bed, "Digger I'm so sorry, my Daddy was wrong treating you that way"
"Ellie, he is going to keep us apart, I love you"
Ellie started to cry " I love you too Digger, I don't know what to do"?
"Lets run off together, and get married"
"Just leave my family , my Daddy would kill me "
"You want to be with Jock than"?
"You know that answer Digger, I have to go my Daddy is ordering me to breakfast"
"I'm sorry, but I hate your Father"
"He is a good man Digger, he is just in trouble. He needs Jock, and is using me to get him to help".
"Wow Ellie wonderful Father you have"
"Digger I have to go, but I will call you later. I really do love you, I will make sure everything works out."
"Goodbye Ellie", he hung up
Ellie hung up the phone, she walked to the mirror. She wiped the tears from her eyes, and ran down to breakfast. She walked into the dining room, and she was shocked, "Jock was sitting their with Garrison and Daddy."
Ellie have some manners, " Jock came over today to spend the day with you"?
"The day Daddy" ?
"Yes the day Ellie sit down, and eat"
Ellie sat beside Jock, she smiled, "good morning Jock"
"Good morning you look great Ellie"
Thanks Jock, she smiled, she tried to eat but her stomach was doing summer Sault's. She felt sick, she hated her Father for doing this. Jock was so handsome, but he wasn't the man she wanted. They all finished breakfast, Jock got up," are we ready to go Ellie."?
"Where are we going Jock"?
"You go get your coat, you will find out when you get there"
Ellie jumped up, glaring at her father, "fine I will be right back". She ran upstairs, she was so angry. "You will find out when you get there, OMG he is so arrogant" . She grabbed her coat, and walked down the stairs.
Jock smiled, " lets go we are wasting time". Ellie left without saying goodbye to Garrison or her Father.
Ellie walked to Jock's truck, and was having a hard time getting in. He grabbed her putting her on the seat. She turned, "don't ever grab me like that again, I'm a lady".
Jock laughed, "Yeah a little lady, who needed help. I won't, I will let you struggle the next time. It will be fun to watch as he shut the door. Ellie kicked the dash board, "I hate this man, and you Daddy"
Jock got in seeing her kick the dashboard, "hey don't do that ", he laughed. They drove off with Miss Ellie pouting looking out the window, and Jock laughing to himself.
Garrison turned to his Father " Daddy she doesn't love Jock, she wants Digger"
I don't care she will do this for the family, he walked into the house. Garrison turned to see Jock's truck sped off the property.
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Post by melindajo2000 on Apr 25, 2010 22:20:09 GMT -6
awesome, it will be fun seeing if Jock can get her to change her mind, she is stubborn!
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Post by jessie on Apr 26, 2010 19:26:48 GMT -6
Chapter 3
Jock drove smiling, he loved seeing Ellie all worked up. They drove, and he parked his car, "we are here Ellie"
"You got to be kidding, a Cattle auction"?
"I told your Daddy, I was coming here, he said you would love it"
Jock got out, walked around opening the door. He smiled " Can I help you , or do you want to get down yourself"?
I can do it , Ellie got down, Jock started to laugh. Ellie turns " are you laughing at me Jock Ewing"?
"You are so stubborn, it is crazy"
Ellie yelled " let's go to the auction, I wouldn't want you to miss a second"
They walk in," would you like a drink or something"?
"No thank you, they walk in, and get a seat up front"
Ellie was livid, how dare her Father say she would love this?
The auction started, " Jock was bidding and Ellie was watching, she found herself enjoying herself. She was at awe, and amazed at Jock at work. He smiled " what do you think of this next bunch Ellie"? She smiled " they look great but don't ask me"? The bidding came to a end, Jock and Ellie walked out, he smiled, " lets get something to eat".
Sure I would love that, they walked to a country diner. They ordered, and were laughing and talking. Ellie smiled " Jock was actually not as bad as she thought. They left and walked to the truck, he let her get in without helping. They both drove home, he was talking and Ellie was listening, and she found Jock very interesting. He got her home, and she got out, it was 9pm, and she was exhausted, she smiled " thank you".
"You had fun Ellie, I thought maybe you hated it"?
I actually liked it , she smiled, as he took her by surprise. He pulled her into his arms, and brought his lips to hers. She put her hands on his chest, trying to push him away, but she wrapped her arms around him. They kissed passionately, she pulled away, "no we can't do that". She ran into the house, and Jock smiled " we just did Ellie". He walked to his car, and drove off.
Ellie ran to her room, she sat on the bed, she couldn't catch her breath. She looked at the picture of Digger, she started to cry. She was so confused she had feeling for two men, both different, but both so wonderful. She walked over picking up the picture of Digger, she touched his face," I'm sorry ".
She went, and got dressed for bed, she got in . She laid awake thinking about the kiss with Jock, she smiled hugging her pillow. She fell asleep realizing she had to make a choice between two men, who she was falling in love with. She didn't want to break either one's heart , but she knew she had to.
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Post by melindajo2000 on Apr 26, 2010 20:03:49 GMT -6
That was cute and fun, I imagine that's how a date with Jock would go. You did a great job with this chapter!
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Post by Sanda on Apr 27, 2010 22:00:22 GMT -6
Great updates Jessie. Please update soon.
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Post by jessie on Apr 27, 2010 22:53:58 GMT -6
Chapter 4
Ellie woke up when the phone was ringing, she answered.
"Hello"
"Hi Ellie it is Digger"
Ellie smiled " Digger your calling early"
"Can you meet me in town, I need to see you."?
"Where do you want to meet"?
"Bernie's Diner "
"I will meet you for lunch ok"?
"12 Ellie see you than, I love you"
I love you too Digger, she hung up. She laid back, she felt so guilty she couldn't get the kiss with Jock out her head. She got up, and showered, and got dressed, she knew Father would send for her if she wasn't down there. She ran down, and Garrison smiled " hey Ellie you look happy".
"I am Garrison, good morning Daddy"
"Good morning Ellie, how was your date with Jock"?
"A date Daddy we went to a cattle auction, you said I love them"
"Did you hate it Ellie"?
"It was fun, but you shouldn't do stuff like that"
"Jock is a great Man , don't push him away Ellie"
"Daddy, I know you admire him, but you want me with him because of money. He is rich and he can help you with your financial problems".
He jumped up," how dare you Ellie", he walked out of the dining room.
Garrison glared, " Ellie he has a bad heart are you trying to kill him"?
"Garrison why don't you marry a rich gal , so you can sacrifice yourself for the family"
Don't go there Ellie, " I saw you kiss Jock",
"You saw were you spying on me, that is sick"?
"I was on my balcony, I was worried about you. I do love you Ellie"
Ellie started to cry " I love this family, but I'm so confused."
"You have feelings for both men, don't you"?
"Yes, Garrison, and I will have to hurt one of them"
Garrison got up, kissing Ellie on the cheek, you have to decide. I hope you make the right choice, he walked out leaving Ellie alone. She got up , she went to see her Father, asking if she could take the car into town.
She knocked on her Fathers door, he yelled " come in"
"Daddy I want to go in town to shop, can I take the car"?
"Not to meet Digger Barnes"?
"No, just to shop"
He handed her the keys, he smiled, " go have fun".
She ran to the door, she smiled " thanks Daddy, I love you". She ran to the car, and drove into town. She got there early but she got a great seat, and waited for Digger. She saw him arrive, she waved, he walked to the table. He leaned down, kissing her on the mouth. "You look so pretty Ellie, how did you get away from your Father".?
"I lied, and I hated doing it"
Digger smiled " lets eat, they ordered, and ate. They paid their bill , and walked outside. He touched her face," can we take a walk"?
Sure she held his hand, and they walked. They sat on a bench, and just talked , he leaned over kissing her passionately. She leaned into him, and he smiled " if your Daddy saw us now"
Ellie smiled , "We both would be dead". They kiss again and she jumped when she heard someone yell Digger's name. She looked up seeing Jock Ewing running over grabbing Digger. He punched him, knocking him to the ground.
Ellie screamed " Jock what are you doing"?
"What are you doing Ellie, what was our kiss last night"?
"Digger stood up you kissed him Ellie"?
She started to cry , she ran to her car. She got in and drove home, running into her room.
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Post by melindajo2000 on Apr 27, 2010 23:03:49 GMT -6
lovely chapter...she's in a real mess...who will she pick? Poor Miss Ellie all torn up. I love all the drama you've written and the conflict seems natural..you are writing a wonderful story Jessie!
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Post by Sanda on Apr 29, 2010 21:14:15 GMT -6
Great update Jessie. I agree with MelindaJo that Miss Ellie is in a real mess being torn between Jock and Digger.
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Post by jessie on Apr 30, 2010 22:00:21 GMT -6
Chapter 5
Ellie was crying on the bed when Garrison walked in. "Ellie what have you done"?
Get out of my room Garrison, " I need to be alone".
"Daddy is so upset Jock came, they are talking , and it isn't friendly"
"Jock is here, he is telling Daddy about Digger".? Ellie jumped off the bed, she went to the balcony. She could see Jock, and her Father talking, she couldn't believe Jock. Her Father walked away and she saw him go in the house. Ellie stared, Jock noticed her he stared, she got shivers as he stormed to his truck and drove off. She heard her Father screaming her name . Garrison tried to calm him down, but Ellie ran back into the room. Her Father grabbed her arm," what are you doing"?
"Jock told you about Digger, he is such a jerk"
"You swore to me that you were not meeting Digger"
"I'm sorry, I love Digger Daddy"
"You probably lost both of them, who wants a trashy girl"
Ellie was shocked and burst out crying, Garrison yelled " Daddy stop it"
"She is running around with two men Garrison, what kind of girl does that"?
"I was with Digger, you pushed Jock Ewing on me"
"You will make it up to Jock, and never see that loser Barnes"
"He is not a loser, he is not rich , but he is a fine man"
"He is a loser, and you will never see him again"
"You can't tell me what to do, I can be with whoever I want"
Her Father smacked her , making Ellie cry, he stormed out.
Garrison walked over , " I'm sorry Ellie, you didn't deserve that"
Ellie hugged him, and he walked out of the room. Ellie sat on the bed, she cried knowing she might have lost both men.
Her phone rang, she walked over saying "hello"
Ellie it is Digger, " Did you kiss Jock, why"?
"Digger please forgive me , I'm so confused"
"Do you love me Ellie or Jock"?
"I have feelings for you both, but my Daddy isn't going to let you near me"
"Pack a bag we can run away, and get married "
"I can't Digger, my Family needs me, "
"I need you Ellie, you don't care about my feelings"?
You know I do Digger, I love you, I have to go "
"Ellie please don't push me away, your all I have"
"Digger I'm not pushing you away, I have to think"
"Think about what, you care for Jock really"?
Good bye Miss Ellie hung up, she sat on the floor, she couldn't stop crying. She hated hurting Digger, but she saw hurt in Jock's eyes, and it killed her. She sat on the floor for hours, thinking about everything she had to make a choice, but she really didn't want to hurt either of them. She got up, she wiped the tears from her eyes. She picked the phone up, she dialed Jock's phone number.
"Hello"
"Jock it is Ellie, I'm sorry about today"
"Sorry you kissed me, and I see you kissing him, that is bad Ellie"
"Will you come over to talk, I need to explain" ?
"Fine I will be over, but your Father was really angry"
"I know Jock , but I will deal with him"
"I will be there in 1/2 hour Ellie , see you than". Jock hung up
Ellie sat on the bed, she really hoped she was doing the right thing.
Digger was alone in his car, he was so angry and upset. He knew her Father was going to keep her away from him. All his life he had nothing, he drove to a bar. He got out, and went in he went and sat in a booth. He hated being here, he promised himself he wouldn't be like his Father. He was a alcoholic, and he hurt his Mother and Sister and him, right up until his death. He killed his Mother first, he ordered a beer, and when the waitress brought it over he took the first sip. He felt sick, he knew this was a start of a downfall for him, if he couldn't have Ellie he didn't care anymore. He drank the beer, and ordered another one, and hours later he had so many , he couldn't walk. He walked outside, he knew he couldn't drive, he walked down the street, sitting on a bench. He leaned over and fell asleep, and was awoken when the Police were shaking him, saying he couldn't sleep on a public bench.
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Post by melindajo2000 on Apr 30, 2010 22:54:46 GMT -6
I like Garrison, you write him so well. Ellie needs some support right now. Poor Digger, it was interesting to see him start his downward turn. Really great story!
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Post by jessie on May 1, 2010 21:57:54 GMT -6
Chapter 6
Miss Ellie walked downstairs, and waited for Jock to show up. She saw his truck her stomach ached, she was so nervous. Jock jumped out of the car, seeing Ellie he walked over.
"Hi Jock thank you for coming"
" I only came because of your Father, I don't want to play games ok Ellie"
"I'm not playing games, I'm sorry, I'm so confused". Ellie started to cry, Jock touched her face," don't cry".
"I really like you Jock, but Digger is someone special to me too"
"If you want Digger tell your Father, it is your life"
"That is the problem, when I'm with you I really love it"
"Your telling me the truth Ellie, or is this another game"?
"I think I'm falling in love with you both, and I'm sick about it"
Jock took her hand lets go for a walk, they walked without talking. Eventually Jock put his arm around her, and they walked and stopped by a tree and sat down. Jock moved close touching her face, pulling the hair from her eyes." Ellie, I really think I'm falling in love with you"
She has tears in her eyes, he wiped them away with his hand. He moved closer and brought his lips to hers. She put her hand on his chest, as he laid her back, he kissed her as she wrapped her arms around her neck. He sat up, "Ellie we would be so great together, I'm not a idiot, I know why your Daddy wants us together. He needs help to save this property, but I want you , but if Digger is what you want, I understand.".
Ellie sat up, "I'm sorry about Daddy, he loves this place".
"I know Ellie but your happiness is what is important"
Ellie smiles, "your not all that tough Jock Ewing, your actually sweet and gentle"
He touched her face, " I love you Ellie, you are the prettiest woman in Dallas, and I want to marry you"
Ellie touched his face, " can you give me sometime to think"?
"Sure but please don't keep me and Digger waiting too long"
Ellie touched Jock's face, "Kiss me again". she smiled.
Jock pulled her into his lap they kissed so passionately Ellie was so thrilled. She laid her head on his chest," this feels so right Jock, it truly does"
Jock hugged her so close, she felt so safe in his arms. She looked into his eyes, " Jock I'm sorry I hurt your feelings".
Smiling, " I'm fine, just make your choice, and please pick me"
She smiled, as he helped her up, they walked back to the house. She saw a car driving all over the place coming up the road. She whispered "oh no it is Digger". Ellie ran toward the car, she saw her Daddy come running out. Garrison screamed " Daddy let her handle this, for GOD sake".
Digger was driving he couldn't see where he was going. Jock and her Father and Brother yelled out, when Digger hit Ellie knocking her down. Digger got out screaming "Ellie what did I do"?
He could barely walk he fell, and held Ellie who was awake but hurt. Jock got to Ellie, "OMG don't move, Garrison is calling for help".
"I'm ok I think I'm just bruised, really"
Digger touched her face, her Father picked him up punching him. Ellie screamed "Jock grabbed her Father, stop he is drunk".
"He ran my daughter down on our property, I told him to never come here".
Jock grabbed Digger walking him to his truck. "Sit in here, don't move, and don't start the car."
Digger yells " Jock she is mine not your's."
Jock walks over," you are drunk , how could you do this"?
"I love her Jock, don't take her from me"
Jock walks over to Ellie who seemed to be ok, but he told her not to move. He looked at Digger and for a moment, he felt bad for the guy.
Ellie held Jock's hand," help Digger Jock", he is hurting.
"What do you want me to do Ellie"?
"My Father will have him arrested, please help him"
"Fine let me talk to your Daddy"
Jock walked over talking to her Father, he yelled" no way Jock"
Ellie watched as Jock ran over to Digger's truck. He yelled get in the passenger seat, Jock got in and drove off. Ellie watched as they drove off.
Her Father walked over and Ellie asked," what happened "?
"He said he would help me out, even if you don't marry him if I let Digger go"
Ellie was shocked , " OMG Jock is amazing Daddy".
"Ellie I have been saying that all along"
The ambulance came checking Ellie over, taking her to the hospital for x-rays. She was ok, and she went home with Garrison and her Father.
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Post by Sanda on May 1, 2010 23:03:43 GMT -6
Great updates Jessie. I wonder if Miss Ellie is going to choose Jock or Digger. Please update soon.
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