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Post by jessie on Apr 25, 2010 19:59:26 GMT -6
Chapter 8
Ray was losing so much blood, Donna pleaded with Mindy to let her call the ambulance. Mindy sat on the bed, she screamed " no this is all his fault.". Donna felt sick she touched Ray's face,"dont' you give up Ray, hang on".
Ray opened his eyes, " Donna remember the first time we met, I loved you from that moment."
"Ray what went wrong, why did it come to this"?
"This is my fault Donna, none of this is your fault "
She looked at Mindy with tears in her eyes," for GOD sake call for help"
Mindy just stares rocking back in forth.
Donna jumped when they heard banging at the door. She jumped up pulling it open. The Police and Clayton ran in, holding guns pointing them at Mindy. She jumped up , "get out of here, he has to die, he used me".
Donna and Clayton knelt down talking to Ray, as the EMT's came running in. They got Ray ready for transit, and Donna looked at Mindy. She was screaming while the Police were trying to get her handcuffed. She looked at Clayton, "she is crazy something is serious wrong with her".
"I know Ray didn't want the Police involved, but Sue Ellen and Miss Ellie said we had to call"
"Thank GOD you did Clayton, he would have died, she wanted him dead"
Clayton hugged Donna, "Come on drive with me to the hospital, lets go see Ray"
"What if he dies Clayton, I really do love him"?
"Ray is strong he is a fighter, and he loves you. You both can get through this, I know you can". The Police, were bringing Mindy out she looks at Donna, " I hope he dies, he truly doesn't deserve to live"
"You need help, you really are sick"
Mindy tried to run at Donna but the Police pull her out. Donna hugged Clayton, as he walked her to his car.
The drove to the hospital, and go to the Emergency unit. They ask if Ray was brought in yet?
Yes, he was rushed into surgery, they needed to stop the bleeding. Ray and Donna sit in the waiting room, for 2 hours, finally a doctor came out. He walked over " your Ray's wife"?
"Yes, how is my husband"?
"He is still critical, he was stabbed in the lung".
"OMG will he be ok"?
"We don't know we have to wait and see? We stopped the bleeding, but he still has a long road ahead of him. He is awake, but he can't speak because of the tubes." Donna got up, "can I see him"?
"Yes come with me, for a few moments,"Donna walked with the doctor, and she walked over to Ray. She held his hand, he looked at her, but couldn't speak. She touched his face, " Ray I'm here, I won't leave you until your all better". Ray shut his eyes, she see's a tear fall down his cheek. She wiped it away, and she smiled " the first time , I saw you Ray Krebbs, I knew you were the man for me".
He looked into her eyes, and she touched his forehead. I don't know if I can forgive you for cheating on me, but I promise I will try".
Ray shut his eyes, and Donna pulled up a chair holding his hands.
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Post by melindajo2000 on Apr 25, 2010 22:25:01 GMT -6
This story gets better and better with each chapter already. Hopefully Donna forgives him. Hope you update soon
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Post by Sanda on Apr 25, 2010 22:57:17 GMT -6
Great update Jesse. I agree with MelindaJo that this story gets better and better all the time. I hope that Donna can forgive Ray for cheating on her.
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Post by jessie on Apr 28, 2010 23:40:40 GMT -6
Chapter 9
3 days later, Donna watched as the Doctor took Ray off the ventilator . She hated seeing him suffer, and finally he calmed down. She walked over Ray, " so sorry you have to go through all this"
"Donna I'm so sorry", he could barely talk
"Shh don't talk Ray, you have to give it time"?
"Mindy stabbed me"?
"Yes, she stabbed, you I was there with you remember"?
"Where is she Donna"?
"She in this hospital, but the police are with her. She is going through tests, something is seriously wrong with her."
"I'm such a fool, I'm so sorry Donna"
"hey lets not talk about Mindy, or the affair"
"Can you forgive me Donna"?
Donna, started to cry, " I don't know Ray, I'm so confused, and hurt, why did you do it"?
"Donna it was the worst mistake of my life, I can't lose you"?
"I love you Ray, but you have to give me time OK"
"Is Clayton ok, she hurt him too"?
"He is ok, but he is worried about you"?
"Donna if I lose you, it will kill me"
Touching his lips, shh she kissed his lips.
Smiling he started to shut his eyes, " she sat in the chair, and couldn't stop crying. She left the room for a moment, to get a coffee. She see's Clayton and Ellie, and she smiled " he is sleeping. You want to go down , and get a coffee with me"?
They went down, and got their coffee's and sat down. Miss Ellie touched Donna's hand, "you ok"?
"He asked me if I can forgive him,"?
"Can you sweetie"?
"I just don't know Miss Ellie, it hurts so bad. I loved him, and I never would have done that to him".
Clayton smiled " Donna he made a mistake, don't walk out of his life."
" I want to say I will forgive and forget, but right now it hurts so bad. I need time to deal with this, and he needs to make me trust him again. Is he going to run out every time he gets angry, and sleep with someone"?
Miss Ellie whispered " I don't think that will happen, but it is your life you have to make the decision."
"I know, and I will think really hard, and I love him so much".
They got up , and walked back to Ray's room.
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Post by Sanda on Apr 29, 2010 21:06:22 GMT -6
Great update Jessie. I hope that Donna will be able to forgive Ray for his affair with Mindy.
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Post by melindajo2000 on Apr 30, 2010 2:39:18 GMT -6
Hope Donna will be there for Ray since he really needs her, this was really good Jessie
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Post by jessie on May 3, 2010 21:10:29 GMT -6
Chapter 10
Ray was getting better but was in alot of pain. Donna came everyday, but couldn't say if she could forgive him. Ray was getting depressed, thinking he lost Donna for good totally made him ill.
Clayton walked in seeing Ray looking out the window.
"Ray how are you doing today"?
"Ok, I just came back from therapy"
"Where is Donna , I thought she would be here"?
"She needed some air, I think she is going to leave me. I know I deserve it for what I did. I would take it back but I can't. I love her Clayton, the thought of losing her scares me"
"It is her decision, if she can't forgive Ray you have to let her go"
"Could you let Ellie go, just like that"?
"I didn't cheat on her , Ray you did"
"Look at Sue Ellen she forgave JR over and over "
"She paid for that big time, by getting hurt over and over again"
"I won't cheat again Clayton, I made a mistake"
"Yes you did , one that really destroyed Donna Ray"
Donna walked in, " Hi Clayton, nice of you to come, and see Ray everyday".
"I miss him at Southfork, I want him to get better really quick"
Donna smiled " me too Clayton"
"I'm going down for a coffee, can I get something for either of you"?
"I don't drink coffee anymore Clayton," Donna smiled
"Really you love coffee Donna", Ray smiled
"oh I love coffee Ray , it makes me ill"
Clayton smiles " OMG Donna are you pregnant"?
She smiled " Yes 10 weeks, I found out today"
Ray started to cry, " Donna walked over Ray, we are having a baby"
"We wanted this for so long, what have I done"?
"Ray why did you do this to me, we would have been so happy".
"OMG Donna you have to forgive me, please"
"I heard you talking to Clayton about Sue Ellen, I don't know how she did it"?
"She loved JR, she forgave him, and look how many times he hurt her"
"Ray one time is enough, I don't know, if I can"?
"The baby Donna , that is my child"
"I would never keep this baby from you, but I don't know about us"?
"Donna please don't do this, I'm so sorry"
Sorry Ray, she ran out of the room.
Ray looked at Clayton, " I lost her, and it is my fault".
Clayton walked over smiling, " You have not lost her yet, fight for her Ray".
"You heard her, she can't forgive me"?
"She is hurt, you can't blame her, but try"
Ray looked out the window, Clayton didn't know what to do?
Donna walked outside, and sat on a bench. She touched her stomach, " hey little one, I'm so sorry. Your Daddy, and me just might not make it , he made a huge mistake. I'm sorry baby, I don't know if I can forgive him? I love him with all my heart, but he broke my heart. She sat on the bench and cried. She finally got the nerve to go back in , to see Ray. She realized, she had to make a choice , and make it soon.
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Post by melindajo2000 on May 3, 2010 21:24:04 GMT -6
I'm glad she's pregnant. I don't think it was fair of Ray to compare her situation to Sue Ellen's and JR's though. Hopefully she can forgive him..awesome chapter!
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Post by Sanda on May 3, 2010 22:57:13 GMT -6
Great update Jessie. I am so happy that Donna is pregnant. Ray was way of of line to compare their situation to JR and Sue Ellen. I hope that Donna will be able to forgive Ray. Please update soon.
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Post by jessie on May 8, 2010 1:09:17 GMT -6
Chapter 11
Donna walked in, and Ray was sitting alone, Clayton went home. He saw Donna, and she walked over standing beside his bed. He turned away, he didn't want to hear she was leaving him. He shut his eyes.
"Look at me Ray, I have something to say"
Ray turned looking at Donna, who had tears in her eyes. She started to cry, "Ray I should walk out that door, and file for divorce, what you did was so wrong. I didn't deserve that, I work and you hated my long hours, too bad. I have worked closely with men, and never once, have I crossed a line. If I slept with someone, you wouldn't forgive me, I know it Ray. I'm so angry right now, I want to smack you , but I love you Ray. I don't know if I can do it Ray, but I'm going to try to forgive you ? I want this marriage to work, for our baby. If you ever hurt me again, I will leave you so fast your head will spin. I will nurse you back to health and together we are going to work on this marriage. You have so much to make up for Ray. I still can't believe you did this to us, with that young girl. You are lucky to be alive, but she could have hurt me or Clayton. I won't bring this up again, but if your angry or upset ,don't run out the door, confront me, and lets talk about it. Ray Krebbs, you broke my heart, I hope in time, you can mend it back to health. Donna touched Ray's face " I adore you, but at the same moment , I'm totally disappointed."
"I deserve everything you said, and thank you Donna for giving me another chance. I will never hurt you again, I promise. I love you Donna, and I'm truly sorry for hurting you."
They both hug, and turn when the doctor came in. Ray smiles, " Doctor when can I go home"?
"Soon Ray but you will need therapy , and you will be in pain for awhile".
Ray looks at Donna, " go to Southfork, and get a rest Donna, you look exhausted. You can come back later maybe you can bring me a burger"?
Donna smiles," sure I will bring you a burger and fries, if Dr. Michaels says it is ok"?
Sure I can't see why not, Donna kissed Ray, and left. Ray went to therapy and returned to find two Police Officer's in his room. He was shocked but Dr. Michaels helped him into bed. He asked the Officers, "what is wrong"?
"We don't want to alarm you , but Mindy escape from the psychiatric ward tonight. We don't know how, we think she stoled the keys off one of the nurses"?
Ray couldn't breath , he panicked," my wife she in danger"
Ray asked for the phone, Dr. Michael handed it to him. He dialed Southfork, and Bobby answered .
"Hello"
"Bobby put Donna on, it is a emergency"
" I can't she left 15 minutes ago, to grab your food, and come to the hospital".
"Ray laid back , "OMG what if she gets my wife"?
"Bobby yells," Ray what is wrong"?
"Bobby, Mindy the woman who stabbed me escaped tonight. She will go after Donna, I just know it"
"OK I will go to the burger place to see if I can find her. Stay calm Ray, she probably is fine"
"Bobby please hurry, she is pregnant"
Bobby was shocked , " she is pregnant, OMG congratulations"
"Yeah but if Mindy hurts her, my life is over"
" I will see you soon Ray, I will go look for her". Ray hung up, he couldn't believe this was happening. All because he was such a fool, and now Donna and his child might pay the ultimate price for his stupid mistake.
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Post by melindajo2000 on May 8, 2010 12:37:06 GMT -6
I really hope that Mindy doesnt get a hold of Donna and the baby. that would be awful. I hope the Krebbs do work on their marriage. great work as always!
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Post by Sanda on May 8, 2010 15:00:08 GMT -6
Great update Jessie. I hope that Mindy doesn't hurt Donna and the baby.
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Post by jessie on May 15, 2010 18:08:14 GMT -6
Chapter 12
Donna left the hamburger place, and got in her car, and drove to the hospital. She parked and got out, grabbing the bag. She started walking to the hospital, but had a strange feeling. She looked around, but smiled, " Stop girl your being paranoid". She ran into the hospital, and down to Ray's room. She walked into the room, and Ray smiled " OMG your OK"?
"Yeah why wouldn't I be"?
"Mindy escaped from the hospital, she would hurt you for sure"
" What kind of hospital is this, they let her escape"?
" I know I said the same thing Donna"
Donna walked over," here is your burger and fries, hope you can still eat"?
" I can now that your safe", Ray held her hand
Bobby walked in the room, "OMG thank GOD your ok Donna"
" Did Ray call you at Southfork"?
"Yeah I ran to the hamburger place, and they said you left. I was worried, she would have got you here when you parked".
" I had a feeling someone was watching, that is crazy right".
"No she is crazy enough to stay around, she is so angry"
Donna touched her stomach, " I'm afraid she will hurt our baby Ray".
Bobby hugged Donna, "I'm so happy for you both "
Ray looks at Donna," this should be the happiest, time of our lives. I ruined everything , and I pray you can forgive me Donna. I can't lose you and the baby".
"Your burger is getting cold, eat, we will discuss this later." They sat and talked but all three of them were worried about Mindy. They didn't know where she was , or what she was planning? It was getting late, when Bobby smiled " I'm going to take Donna home, I will keep her safe Ray".
" Don't let her out of your site, she will be safe at Southfork".
Ray smiled, " I love you Donna, call me when you get to Southfork. I won't sleep until , I hear from you".
Donna kissed him on the lips, and smiled " I will call, and I'm sure you will be asleep , once we leave here".
Donna and Bobby left and took Bobby's car home. Donna smiled, " can we stop , at my place for a moment , to get somethings"?
"Donna we told Ray we would go straight home"?
" She won't go to the house, we will only be their a moment anyway. I need some books too, I really need to stop".
"Fine, but only grab what you need, and we better hurry home".
Bobby drove to Ray's house, when he stopped the car. They both sat in the car, stunned, Ray and Donna's house was in flames. Donna jumped out, "OMG our house". Bobby got out , pushing Donna back in the car. He called 911 and they said they would be there soon. Donna cried , she looked at Bobby, " she did this, she isn't going to stop". They heard sirens, and Bobby said," they are coming Donna".
" It is gone , look at it Bobby", she couldn't hold back tears
"You both will be fine, we will rebuild it"
" Ray built this home, almost all by himself, this will kill him"
" Let me get you to Southfork, Donna"
She whispered " why did Ray bring this maniac into our lives"?
Bobby was so upset, he drove home, and got Donna upstairs. He got Pam to help her change, and he called Ray.
"Hello"
"Ray I have bad news for you"
"OMG Donna is she ok"?
" Yes she is here, but she wanted to stop at your home"
" You didn't let her"?
" Yes, but your home was in flames Ray, it is gone"
" What Bobby"?
" I think that girl, set your house on fire".
" OMG she is never going to stop".
" Ray we will take care of Donna, be careful. She is totally sick, you can't take a chance. We will build your home again, this time you will let us help you"
" Bobby the house is totaled"?
" Yes, Ray it can't be saved, but you get better. I will bring Donna to you tomorrow"
"Can I talk to her Bobby, I need to say goodnight "?
"Just a minute", Bobby walked over to Donna. " Ray wants to speak to you for a moment"
" I can't Bobby" she laid down , and couldn't stop crying
Bobby walked over picking up the phone, " Sorry Ray , she can't talk right now, she is devastated . She will be ok , I will bring her tomorrow".
" Tell her I love her".
" I will Ray, you take care. " Bobby hung up, and walked over to Donna, "He loves you Donna, he is so upset".
" Did he love me when he slept with her"?
Bobby and Pam look at each other, and the put the blanket over her. Pam told Bobby she would stay with Donna until she fell asleep.
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Post by melindajo2000 on May 15, 2010 21:15:47 GMT -6
not the house.! .she is soo crazy. i hope she is caught soon and that she doesnt hurt the baby
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Post by Sanda on May 16, 2010 16:19:17 GMT -6
Great update Jessie. Melinda is soo sick burning down Donna and Ray's house.
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