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Post by jessie on Apr 18, 2010 0:23:47 GMT -6
This is my first Donna and Ray story, hope you like it.
Ray was at home, and he had another fight with Donna in the morning. Ray hated Donna working all the time, he wanted her to spend more time with him. He made a wonderful dinner on the BBQ, and she came home, picking up a burger, and went and sat on the couch.
"Ray walked in what are you doing"? "Sorry, I have to read these papers for tomorrow, it will be a late night, I can't sit outside and talk."
"Fine, I'm going to a bar, and listen to some music"
"Can't you just stay home, and watch some TV in the bedroom"
Ray stormed out without answering, and drove to the bar, he loved to hang out there. He sat and ordered a beer, and sat listening to the band. He was shocked when a young woman walked over, and sat beside him." Hi my name is Mindy , you seem lonely, can I have a beer with you"?
"Nice meeting you Mindy , I'm Ray, but I'm married, and not really in a good mood. You seem nice, but really you won't be happy hanging around me tonight"
Mindy smiled " how do you know, maybe I'm here to cheer you up"?
"How old are you girl"?
"25 , I'm not a girl, I'm all woman"
Laughing, "You really are beautiful, why are you here"?
"Same reason you are , I'm lonely, we can have one night together , and there is no strings attached."
"I have to go home tonight Mindy, but thanks for offering"
She stayed and Ray ordered her a beer, and it lead into 3 or 4 more . Ray was laughing, and he decided to go home. Ashley jumped up, and followed him outside. She held on to Ray , and he laughed, "I think I have to call a cab, I drank too much."
"Let just sit in your trunk for awhile, and talk"
Ray stared at Mindy, and he walked to the trunk, they got in and were all over each other. They made love, and after she pulled her skirt on, "Ray that was amazing. You have to meet me tomorrow night, you have to know we are meant to be together."
Mindy my head is killing me, remember no strings attached, that was amazing, but I'm married"
"You think you can just make out, and walk away"?
"Yes, I do you met me in a bar, girl, you shouldn't sleep with a guy hours after meeting him"
"How dare you Ray, you think I'm a tramp, what are you"?
"I'm stupid, and I didn't say you were a tramp"?
"Mindy does up her top, you will meet me tomorrow or else"?
"I'm not meeting you, stop being pathetic, you got what you wanted"
She scratched his face and screamed," I swear I will say you raped me"
"You stupid freak, you scratched my face, and you were all over me, I didn't rape you"
"Did you wear a condom Ray, if I'm pregnant you will pay".?
Ray got out of the truck, he got sick, Mindy got out, and smiled
"Poor Ray , your scared now, you shouldn't play if you don't want to pay"
Ray stared at Mindy, "who are you, what do you want"?
"I want you cowboy, whenever and wherever I want you"?
She walked to the bar, "goodnight cowboy, tomorrow at 8pm. I know who you are, and I know were you live, don't make me come to you. She walked into the bar, Ray jumped into his truck and drove home. He got out of the car, and walked into the house. Donna was still working on the couch, she smiled " how was your night"?
"Good Donna , I'm taking a shower," he walked to the bathroom
She was shocked she got up, and followed, she heard the shower going. She took off her clothes, and got in and Ray jumped .
"Donna what are you doing"?
"OMG what happened to your face Ray"?
"I was in a fight at the bar, the lady scratched me"
"You fought a lady Ray"?
"No, I fought her boyfriend, she tried to protect him".
Donna went to touch Ray, he got out of the shower. She was shocked and turned off the shower. She got out, "Ray what is wrong with you."?
"Donna I don't want to talk, I'm sleeping in the guest room. Just leave me alone tonight."
Ray stormed out, and went to the other room. Donna sat on the bed, "what happened tonight Ray"?
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Post by melindajo2000 on Apr 18, 2010 0:47:55 GMT -6
OMG... what is going to happen to Ray... Donna is going to kill him and that psycho girl is going to go nuts! ...awesome story, Poor Ray LOL...Love it so far
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Post by jessie on Apr 18, 2010 22:05:47 GMT -6
Chapter 2
Donna walked over to the guest room, and knocked. He didn't answer her so she yelled his name " open the door Ray".
"Go away Donna, I need to be alone"
"Why what happened tonight, at the bar"?
"It is you Donna, I need time from you , go away"
Donna was devastated she ran to her room, and slammed her door, and fell on the bed. She couldn't stop crying, and Ray felt sick hearing her. He was so angry with himself, he sat up all night thinking about how he was going to get out of this.
The next morning Donna was in the kitchen making coffee. Ray came out, and sat at the table, she asked if he wanted a coffee?
"Yes, that would be great"
Donna brought the coffee over, and she sat at the table too. They both looked at each other but didn't talk. Finally Donna asked " why are you so angry"?
"Donna you push me away , I would have never gone out last night"
"I'm sorry your upset , but this is my job, you have to deal with it"
"Really you don't give me the time of day, I'm suppose to deal with it"?
"I have to leave Ray , we can talk tonight ok"?
"I'm busy tonight so I will see you whenever". Ray jumped up leaving the house, driving off in his truck.
Donna sat staring at his empty seat, " what is wrong Ray"? Donna started to cry, but grabbed her briefcase, and left for work.
Ray worked around Southfork, trying to forget his problems. Clayton walked over, "Ray is something wrong "?
"No, why"?
"You seem really distant but you forgot to lock the gate over there. We could have lost 20 horses, that is not like you Ray"
"Everyone makes mistakes Clayton, sorry I'm not perfect like you" . Ray walked away, Clayton stood staring at him.
Ray got home at 5, and was happy Donna was not home yet. He showered and changed, he laid on the bed, thinking about tonight. He drifted off asleep, and was awoken to Donna laying beside him. He went to get up, but Donna grabbed him. He stared into her eyes, he felt sick hurting her. She touched his face, he brought his lips to hers. They both kissed, and before they know it they were taking off each others clothes. They both made love, and after , Donna laid on his chest, whispering " I love you Ray"
He touched her face, " I love you Donna" .
Donna fell asleep, and Ray looked at the clock it said 7:30 , he got out of bed changing. He left a note, and ran out of the house. He drove to the bar. He wanted to turn around and go back, but he got out, and went inside. He looked around, and didn't see Mindy, he prayed, she was bluffing, and wouldn't show up. Something in his heart told him, that wasn't happening. He only had a ginger ale, he didn't want any alcohol in him. He sat listening to the house band, and he watched as the door opened, and was happy, each time it wasn't Mindy. He looked at his watch, and smiled 8:10 maybe she isn't coming. He saw the door open, and his worst fear, walked through the door. She smiled , and walked over and sat down, trying to kiss Ray. He pulled away, and she became angry.
"Ray do you really want to hurt my feelings"?
"Mindy what we did last night was stupid, I never should have done it. I love my Wife, and I know this would kill her. Please just forget what happened, and we can go on with our lives"
Do you think I care what you want, I care about myself? I have liked you for months, and set my sights on you. I have seen you sitting in that spot for months, drinking your sorrows away. I followed you home, and I know what your wife looks like. Your not happy, so don't lie to me, why would you be here"?
"I have problems, but we can work it out, but not if you do this"?
"Do what you tore my clothes off last night, are you saying you didn't want it too"?
" Mindy I'm sorry I made a mistake, you are young, you can find someone to love"?
"I just did you."
"Why did you pick me Mindy,"?
"You looked so sad, and I wanted to make you happy"
Ray just stared, Mindy reached over touching his face. He pushed her hand away, and she screamed " you are mine"
Everyone in the bar, turned Ray was shocked, he knew Mindy needed help.
Ray stood up, and threw money on the table, and walked out the door. Mindy jumped up," running out, you can't leave me"
"Mindy this is over stop it"
She started ripping her clothes, "I will say you raped me"
Ray grabbed her putting her in his truck he yelled," where do you live"?
"I'm not telling you", she screamed
Ray was screaming, and people were looking at them. Ray started the truck, and drove out of the bar.
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Post by melindajo2000 on Apr 18, 2010 23:31:24 GMT -6
poor ray is in trouble ... great chapter... he better find a new hangout lol
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Post by jessie on Apr 19, 2010 19:22:44 GMT -6
Chapter 3 Ray drove with Mindy screaming at him in the car. He yelled " shut up, and calm down".
"Don't tell me to shut up, who do you think you are"?
"Fine but your acting crazy, we had a one night stand, nothing else"
She leaned over " punching him while he was driving, he tried to keep the car in control. She was screaming " I'm no one night stand, you wanted me"
He stopped the car, " grabbing her arm , "where do you live"?
"I'm not telling you, can't we just go somewhere Ray? I love you" , she starts to cry, Ray stares, shocked.
"I will take you to a hotel, but I'm not staying"
"Ray don't just walk away, after I gave you my heart"
Ray grabbed her shaking her " we had sex in my van, it was a stupid mistake, it wasn't love".
"How can you say that, I would do anything for you"?
Ray felt sick he started his car up, and drove to a motel. He signed in, and took her to the room. He told her he had to leave but he would come back tomorrow to see if she was ok. Mindy pulls him on the bed , kissing him. He jumps up, "Stop it Mindy, I don't want this, please stop".
"You leave me Ray, I will kill myself"
"Ray is frantic, what am I going to do"?
Mindy pulls off her blouse," you want this Ray, you did last night"
Ray grabbed a blanket wrapping it around her, " your sick Mindy".
"I'm not sick, how dare you say that"?
"Mindy what about your Parents, lets call them"?
"OMG I don't have anyone but you Ray", she is crying hysterically
His head was spinning, " he said lay down and rest Mindy, I will be here when you wake up".
"Your lying, you will leave me, everyone leaves me"
"I won't promise", she laid down, and drifted off. Ray paced, he didn't know what to do?
He picked up the phone, calling Donna
"Hello"
He put the phone against his leg, he wanted to cry. He brought it back to his ear." Hi Donna"
"Ray I have been waiting for you all night"
"Donna I went out of town to see some horses, I wont' be home until tomorrow."
He heard Donna start to cry
"Donna, you ok"?
"Ray are you punishing me for working so much"
"No, I'm looking at horses"
"Ray your not with a woman are you "?
"No Donna how could you say that"?
"Your acting really strange, I would die if you did"
Mindy turns," Ray who are you talking too"?
Donna heard but Ray whispered " I have to go Donna see you tomorrow". The phone went dead.
Donna stood holding the phone she sat on the couch, and started to cry. She pushed the one person that meant everything to her , away. "How could you Ray, if you loved me you would have talked it out."?
She walked to the bedroom, got the suitcase out of the closet. She put it on the bed, and she broke down crying..
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Post by melindajo2000 on Apr 20, 2010 10:40:22 GMT -6
I hope Donna doesnt leave him... I love this story, Mindy is crazy! can't wait till Donna gets a hold of her though LOL
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Post by jessie on Apr 21, 2010 1:18:46 GMT -6
Chapter 4
Ray sat in the chair all night watching her sleep. He felt sick that he started up with her in the first place. He wanted Donna in his arms, he started to shut his eyes. He was dreaming of all the good times with Donna. He started to drift off, and was awoken to Mindy jumping on his lap. She was kissing him, and he couldn't get her off him. She was holding him tight, and she took her clothes off. He finally got her off him, he screamed " enough you got to stop, I don't want you. I love my wife, please tell me what I can do to make you stop".?
"You can't get rid of my Ray, I won't let you go"?
Ray held his head, "this is a nightmare, what a fool, I am"
Mindy runs into his arms " please Ray make love to me"
"No, it won't happen again, I don't want you"
She sits on the bed," I will kill myself, I swear"
Ray knelt down, "your young sweetie, you can find someone else. Someone who will love you, your pretty, I'm not the man for you"
"You used me , how could you"?
"I was drunk, and made a mistake, but it can't happen again"
She was staring at him, " I will hurt her "
"Who will you hurt"?
"Your precious wife, if I can't have you she can't either"
Ray grabs her shoulders, and shakes her ," don't you ever say you will hurt my Wife"
"Will your Wife understand, what you did to me in the truck" ?
"No she probably will leave me, even if she does I won't be with you"
"I'm younger and prettier than her"
"You are pretty but Donna is everything to me. I have to make this up to her. Mindy I beg of you, please, stop this now"
"I will tell her, she deserves to know who she is married too"
Ray stands up, "I will tell her, Mindy"
"You Liar, your just saying that"
"No, I mean it", he walked over to the phone
Mindy runs over grabbing the phone, throwing it.
"What is wrong with you Mindy, your insane"?
"Your right, I'm insane thinking a man would love me, not just use me"
"Ok, I admit I used you, it was wrong, I'm so sorry"
"Yeah the last guy was sorry too"
"What are you talking about, you did this to someone else"?
Smiling yeah, "he is sorry he used me to"
"What made you let him go"?
"I didn't he had to die, than I found you".
Ray backed up to the door, "you killed someone"?
"Well if you run someone over by a car, and he took 1 month to die, is that murder"?
Ray slide down the door, listening to her talk, his head was spinning. She walked over," Ray don't make me hurt you".
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Post by melindajo2000 on Apr 21, 2010 10:11:44 GMT -6
wow he really needs to tell Donna and they need to get help .... such an awesome story Jessie!
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Post by jessie on Apr 21, 2010 22:34:54 GMT -6
Chapter 5
Donna had packed, and went to Southfork to talk to Miss Ellie and Clayton.
Miss Ellie saw Donna " Oh what is wrong you look so upset, did you sleep at all last night"?
No, it is Ray he said he went looking at horses. He said he wouldn't be home until morning. I heard a woman's voice, he is having an affair , I know it. He hates me working, but to do this I can't forgive this"
Miss Ellie says " he wouldn't do that Donna, he adores you."
Clayton turns away, "Clayton do you know something"?
"No Donna but he has been distant, and rude recently. I think something is seriously wrong with him"
"I'm leaving my bags are in the car, I will let you know, where I am when I decide which hotel to stay at"
"Your not going to a hotel, your staying here in the guest room"
"Your Ray's family, I can't intrude" Donna started to cry
Miss Ellie smiled " don't be silly , you are family too. I love you Donna, I would be insulted , if you stayed at a hotel"
"Thank you Miss Ellie, it means alot to me."
"Lets get you to your room, Sweetie, we will figure out what is wrong with Ray"?
Donna and Miss Ellie walk inside, Clayton sat at the table. He dialed Ray's cell phone, and waited for him to pick up.
"Hello"
"Ray it is Clayton, where are you"?
"Why are you worried, I'm not a work yet"?
"Ray something is up with you, what is it"?
Ray broke down, "I made a huge mistake Clayton"
"OMG Ray you slept with someone, Donna is right"?
"Donna spoke with you"?
"She is here Ray, she has left you"
"Good she will be safe there ,"
"Ray you sound funny, are you ok"?
"No, I don't know what to do, I need your help"
"Where are you, "?
"Manor Motel on Greenwin Blvd"
"Is that woman still with you Ray"?
"Please come here Clayton, I will explain everything"
"I will be there in 1 hour, Ray I'm really disappointed in you"
"I'm disappointed in myself Clayton"
Clayton hung up, and Miss Ellie came out," where is ray"?
"Miss Ellie I'm going to see him at a Motel"
"She is right he slept with someone"?
"I think so Ellie, but he is really upset, I'm going to see him"
"What is wrong with Ray and JR hurting the women that love them"?
"JR , I would expect this from, but not Ray Miss Ellie"
"Go see him, I'm so confused and disappointed"
Clayton left Miss Ellie sat she was getting a migraine.
Sue Ellen came out of her room, she heard Donna crying. She walked over knocking on the door.
Donna saw Sue Ellen , "sorry if I disturbed you"
"What is wrong Donna,, you seem so upset"?
"How can you deal with this all the time Sue Ellen"?
"Deal with what"?
"The cheating, and the affairs, it hurts so bad"
"Ray slept with someone, I can't believe that"?
"He did, because he was upset , I was working all the time"
"I'm sorry Donna, it does hurt, but now I'm so numb, I don't feel anything"
"Why do you stay, you are beautiful Sue Ellen"?
Sue Ellen started to cry, I"m pathetic, but I love him, and hope someday, he will love only me"
Donna got up and hugged Sue Ellen, " I'm sorry your not pathetic, JR is for hurting you".
They both sat on the bed talking.
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Post by melindajo2000 on Apr 21, 2010 22:57:10 GMT -6
great update, I hope that Donna will forgive Ray
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Post by jessie on Apr 23, 2010 22:54:01 GMT -6
Chapter 6
Miss Ellie was sitting outside, she was upset about this mess with Donna and Ray. She knew JR and Sue Ellen had problems, but she thought Ray and Donna were solid, and loved each other .
Clayton sat down , Ellie you can't get so upset. They have to work out their problems, on their own.
"Ray how could he do that to Donna, I really don't understand Ray or JR. They have wonderful wives, why hurt them like that"?
"Ray is a wonderful man , he is deceit and caring. I know for a fact he loves Donna like crazy. I have no idea what made him do this" ?
Miss Ellie got up, "I'm going to lay down for awhile, I feel a migraine coming on"
"Do you want me to come with you"?
No, she walked in, Clayton felt so bad, she was so disappointed.
Clayton opened up his cell phone, dialing Ray's cell phone
"Hello"
"Ray where are you, what were you thinking"?
"What is wrong Clayton"?
"Donna is here she left you, why would you sleep with another woman, why ruin your life" ?
Clayton yelled," answer me Ray"
"I don't know Clayton, I'm in big trouble" ?
"Trouble what do you mean,"?
"I'm with her now, she is crazy Clayton. I made a mistake, that I don't know how to fix"?
"Where are you Ray, I want to come and see you"?
"I'm a Manor Inn, on Dixie Blvd,"
"Your with her Ray, your going to lose Donna"?
"Come Clayton, you will understand, everything once you get here"
Clayton hung up, grabbing his keys, and ran to the car. He drove to the Inn, and parked seeing Ray's car. He got out and Ray opened the door, and told Clayton to come in.
"Ray where is she"?
"She is showering, she is crazy Clayton. She has threatened to hurt herself, Donna, and me. She even said she hurt someone from her past, he is dead"
"OMG Ray why did you start up with this woman"?
"Donna is never home, I went to a bar, and she was there. I didn't plan on doing it , she followed me outside. We got in my truck, and it happened. I'm not proud of myself, but she has something seriously wrong with her."
They both jump, Mindy runs up smacking Ray, "I'm not sick you freak"
Clayton grabbed her sitting her on the bed," you stop that"
"Who are you old man, get out of here"?
"I'm like a Father to Ray, you have to stop this right now. He doesn't love you , it was a one night stand. You are a big girl who sleeps around, you must know you might get hurt. You have to move on with your life, and be more careful next time"
"You think I'm just going to let the love of my life walk away. He touched me and made me feel so special. I can't let him go, this might be my last chance at happiness"
Clayton stares at Ray who says, " see what I mean"?
Mindy starts crying " Ray why are you making me feel so bad."?
Ray screams, " I'm married Mindy, can't you just understand that"?
I won't let her have you, she wasn't the wife you needed. You never would have slept with me, if she was".
Ray sat down, he screamed " what am I going to do Clayton".
Clayton walked over sitting beside Mindy," we will get you help, you really need it."
She lunged at Clayton scratching his face, Ray jumped up pulling her off Clayton. "OMG your face Clayton , I'm so sorry"
Clayton ran into the bathroom, he came out holding a towel to his face." Ray call the police , you can't stay with this woman"
No Mindy pulled the phone out of the wall, Clayton grabbed his cell phone. Mindy pulled it out of his hand, throwing it against the wall, smashing it to pieces. She yelled " get out of here, and leave me and Ray alone".
Ray looked at Clayton ,"go I will handle this"
Clayton walked over, "I will call the police"
No Clayton, I don't want you to, I have to clean up this mess on my own. Clayton turned looking at Mindy, she had so much hatred in her eyes. He walked out fearing for Ray, he got in the car, and yelled " OMG what have you gotten yourself into Ray" ?
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Post by melindajo2000 on Apr 24, 2010 0:06:33 GMT -6
Why doesn't Ray want Clayton to call the police? But that sounds like him too stubborn for his own good...great chapter
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Post by Sanda on Apr 24, 2010 23:52:25 GMT -6
Jessie, I LOVE your story Husband's betrayal. Ray is crazy for having an affair behind Donna's back. Mindy is one crazy woman.
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Post by jessie on Apr 25, 2010 0:51:50 GMT -6
Chapter 7
Clayton drove home, he felt sick but he parked the car. He saw Sue Ellen, Ellie and Donna sitting outside. He knew they would ask about his face. He hated leaving Ray there with that girl, he hated seeing Donna hurt. He got out, and as soon as they saw his face, they all jumped up.
"Clayton what happened to your face, those are scratch marks"? Ellie asked
He looked at Donna, he had to tell her the truth. "The young lady Ray got mixed up with did this. She is beyond sick, she lunged at me like a rabid animal. Ray is scared to death, but he won't let me call the police, she is threatening his life and yours Donna. He loves you, but he is in big trouble and I don't know what to do about it"?
Sue Ellen looks at Donna, who yells " Clayton where is Ray now"?
"Manor Inn, on Dixie Blvd,"
Donna grabbed her purse, and ran to her car.
Clayton yells," Donna stop, she is really out of control"
"So am I Clayton, I need to see Ray". She jumped in the car, and drove off.
She was livid she drove thinking what am I going to do ? She got to the hotel, and saw Ray's truck. She got out, and knocked on the door. Ray opened it , "OMG Donna what are you doing here"?
Donna walked in , seeing Mindy on the bed. They just stared each other down, when Donna turned smacking Ray. "How could you do this to us, all because you couldn't handle me working"?
Mindy jumped up," you hit my man"?
Donna screamed " shut up he is your man, you picked him up in a bar ."
"He loves me, not you, so get out of here now"
Donna laughs, "OMG he loves you, are you really that crazy girl"
He is mine, she ran at Donna, pushing her against the door. She was hitting her , Ray grabbed Mindy throwing her on the bed. Donna was shocked " OMG Clayton is right she is crazy, Ray"
"I know that is why you have to get out of here"
"Lets call the police, she needs help Ray". Donna starts to cry, "how could you sleep with her, I loved you so much"?
"You know I love you Donna, I'm so sorry"
Mindy jumps up, " what you love her Ray"?
"Yes Mindy I love her, not you"
Donna see's something in Mindy's eyes that sent shivers through her whole body. She screamed " Ray she scares me just come with me now"
"I can't leave her like this, and I don't want the police involved".
"Why you can't help her, she needs professional help"?
"Donna go to Southfork, I will come see you soon."
"I'm not leaving you with her, something is wrong with her"
Ray walked over to Donna, hugging her she hugged him back. She cried," please Ray listen to me, I beg of you". She heard Ray let out a cry, she looked at his face, he whispered " help me". Donna was shocked Ray fell to the floor, she looked at Mindy standing just 3 feet away. She was holding a knife, she smiled, "now we both lost him".
Donna looked at Ray, he was bleeding badly, and not moving , she cried, "I'm calling a ambulance".
Mindy smiled, " no your not, he isn't dead yet".
Donna started to cry, " OMG your crazy".
"Yeah your husband never should have picked up a stranger , I guess".
Donna went to the floor hugging Ray, he whispered, Donna I'm so sorry"
She held him, " I know Ray, I forgive you."
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Post by melindajo2000 on Apr 25, 2010 1:05:15 GMT -6
wow, she is crazy, I hope Ray is okay. I didn't see that coming. I love this story!
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