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Post by jessie on Jun 20, 2014 16:41:32 GMT -6
A short story hope you like it.
Vic has been trying to find Corrine, Cassidy, Matthew and Megan. He was giving up hope she was really in hiding, and the thought of never seeing his children made him so angry. He was at home watching TV, and drinking a couple of beers getting more upset thinking about Corrine, and her taking the children away from him. He suddenly got up grabbing his coat, and he left the house. He knew he shouldn't get in the car after a couple of beers but he didn't care at the moment. He wondered if she went into hiding too. He drove to where she lived before, and had to laugh she still had the same car. He got out of the car, and he realized another car was sitting beside hers. He knew he saw this car before but he couldn't think of who's car it was. He ran up the stairs, and knocked trying to stay calm waiting for her to tell him to leave. He waited, and he thought she would answer but he never expected Dutch to open the door, and he was not wearing one of his cheap suits. He was wearing jeans, and a tee-shirt.
"Vic what are you doing here"?
"I was going to ask you the same question where is Danny, and my Son"?
"I will get her just wait here"
"You are not inviting me in to see my son"?
"It is up to Danny I said wait here" Dutch shut the door, and Vic wanted to kick it in he was so angry. What the hell was Danny thinking having Dutch around. Were they a couple the thought of Dutch raising his boy made him feel a rage that he knew he would lose it if she didn't come out to speak to him in a minute.
He heard the door open, and Danny came out and said, "Vic why are you here"?
"Oh I don't know maybe I want to see my Son"
"You are not going to do this to me now Vic. You have not even called in months ever since that last day I saw you when Ronnie was arrested. I am happy, and Lee is happy, and we do not need you in our life"
"Is Dutch living with you now"?
"That is none of your business"
"Oh yes it is when my Boy is living in the house"
"Dutch is a good man, and a great role model. How dare you suggest he is a bad influence that is you Vic Mackey"
"I am Lee's Father, and I demand to see him right now"
"You are drunk, and I will not let you see him when you are acting this way. You go home, and call me, and I will talk to you when you are sober"
Danny turned to go in the house but Vic yelled, "You will be sorry Danny, I will not go away, and that is a promise" She watched as he walked down the steps, and got in his car, and drove off. Danny stood there for the longest time she knew this day would come but she really hated Vic Mackey for coming into her life again, and she knew Vic would not go away easy.
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Post by Sanda on Jun 20, 2014 20:23:06 GMT -6
Great start to your new story Jessie.. I feel bad for Vic in this story because he wants relationship with his son Lee. I hope that Danny softs up and let's Vic she his son Lee when he sober. Enquiring minds want to know if .Danny and Dutch are an item in your new story . I hope you update this story again really soon. I love all of your stories you are writing and posting on my message board.
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Post by jessie on Jun 22, 2014 1:15:58 GMT -6
Chapter 2
Vic drove home he walked into his home, and banged the door shut. He was so angry with the women in his life. Corrine took his kids, and God knows what is happening to them right this moment. He was picturing Corrine with another man, and that man being the Father figure in his kids lives. He hated thinking someone else was being called Daddy. He loved his children, and Corrine knew it. He never would harm them so why she kept them from him was beyond him. He did things wrong but he wanted to provide for his family, and he did. He knew if he ever came in contact with Corrine it wouldn't be a good reunion. She will regret keeping his kids from him.
Vic walked to the fridge, and grabbed a beer, and sat at the kitchen table. He was shaking he was so angry, and thinking about Danny treating him like he has no rights to Lee. He might have had sex with her, and they never were really together but he was the Father none the less. The thought of pencil head Dutch being part of Lee's life was sickening to him. Dutch probably hooked up with Danny in hopes that Vic will find out, and he knew it would kill him. Danny can play house with Dutch but when he takes her to court, and files for partial custody she will see how serious he is about being a Father to Lee. He lost his other children, and the chances of ever seeing them again was slim. He was going to be part of Lee's life no matter what. He didn't care what the courts had to say if they say he can't be part of his life he will take matters into his own hands. The last couple of years have been hell, and he knew he was to blame for it but no one was going to keep him from being in Lee's life he was the only child he had left and he was not going to lose him too.
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Post by Sanda on Jun 22, 2014 1:49:25 GMT -6
Great update Jessie. I feel horrible for Vic in this story. I hope things work out for Vic in this story and that he gets to have a relationship with his kids. I love that Vic was thinking of Dutch as a pencil head in this chapter. You write all of the different characters of The Shield perfectly even though i don't think I have seen an episode of this show. I hope you update this story again soon.
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Post by jessie on Jun 23, 2014 1:07:30 GMT -6
Chapter 3
Dutch walked out of the bedroom, and saw Danny sitting on the couch.
"Danny why are you out here it is late? You have to be at work early tomorrow so do I"?
"I can't sleep why did he have to show up now? All this time I thought maybe he would stay out of our lives. I will not let him take my sweet boy away from me"
"Danny he would never get full custody but he might get visiting rights. I know that scares you it scares me. He thinks I am here because I want to hurt him but he is dead wrong. I am here because I am in love with you, and I already feel like I am a Father to Lee"
"He loves you Dutch but Vic is going to make our relationship sound dirty. I can't believe I ever got involved with that man"
"If you didn't that wonderful little boy would not be here"
"I know but I wish you were the Father not him."
"Danny come to bed we will deal with this tomorrow. I have a Lawyer friend who can help us. We will go see him on our lunch break tomorrow. Vic is not going to take Lee from us"
"He scares me when he is angry maybe I should have let him see Lee. I hated that he was drunk, I am so tired right now"
Dutch held her hand as she got up. They checked on Lee than they went to their room, and got in bed. They snuggled real close, and Danny finally fell asleep in Dutch's arms.
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Post by Sanda on Jun 23, 2014 1:23:14 GMT -6
Great update Jessie. Dutch and Danny are so sweet together in this chapter but I feel bad for Vic. I hope the lawyer that Danny and Dutch go and visit goes easy on them and lets Vic see his son Lee. I want Vic and Dutch to both be a part of Lee's life because Vic is Lee's biological father. I hope you update this story again really soon. This is one of my favorite stories of yours even though I am not familiar the TV show the Sheild.
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Post by melinda on Jun 30, 2014 19:24:34 GMT -6
I love this, this is perfect, I really think this is just an awesome idea which we should have seen great job Jessie!
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Post by jessie on Jul 1, 2014 22:30:20 GMT -6
Chapter 4
The next morning Danny woke and noticed Dutch was not in bed beside her. She got up thinking she must have slept through Lee's cries. She walked to his room, and he was not in his crib. She walked to the kitchen, and she had to laugh Dutch was feeding him oatmeal, and Dutch had more on himself than Lee. He was trying hard to get Lee to eat but Lee was not a fan of Oatmeal, and he let you know it. Lee saw his Mom, and he put his arms out to her. Danny walked over smiling at Dutch as she lifted Lee out of the highchair. She walked over getting a paper towel, and handed it to Dutch than she got one to wipe Lee's face.
"Dutch you can go take a shower I will feed him"
"He hates Oatmeal doesn't he"
"I think so you got more on you than him"
"I know I was trying everything to get him to take it"
"Don't worry he does the same to me"
Dutch got up giving Danny a kiss saying he would take that shower. She put Lee back into the highchair as she got some cheerios which he loved. She put them in a bowl and he started eating. Danny got herself a coffee she walked to the front door to get the newspaper. She opened the door, and was shocked seeing Vic standing there.
"Vic what are you doing here do you have any idea what time it is"?
"I can tell time Danny but you wouldn't let me see my son last night but I am not drunk so I want to see him now"
"God this is not a good time I have to get Lee to his babysitter and I have to get to work"
"I have to work too so let me see him, and than I will leave you and your Lover alone"
"Vic I swear if you try anything I will hurt you"
"I want to see my son is all"
"Fine come in, and I am giving you 10 minutes with him do you hear me"
"Loud and clear" Vic walked into the house with Danny who pointed to the kitchen. Vic was half expecting Dutch to be there but was happy he wasn't. Danny walked over to Lee as Vic walked over smiling as he touched Lee's chin.
"Hey Lee it is Daddy"
Danny was looking at Vic but she didn't want to fight in front of Lee. She knew Lee would know Vic as his Father but thinking Vic would be in their lives just made her ill. She at one time cared for Vic but now knowing all that he has done she couldn't stand looking at him.
"Can I hold him Danny"?
"He is eating but I guess it will be ok"
Vic lifted him up, and smiled as Lee smiled at him. Danny was watching Vic closely she was afraid he would try to run out with him but he didn't.
"Danny I don't want to take you to court but I will. I just want visiting rights and I want to see him without you, and Dutch"
"No way you are not taking him without me being there"
"I am his Dad you will let me have him or I will fight you every step of the way for joint custody"
Danny was so upset she could see Lee was feeling the tension. Danny put her hands out to Lee but Vic said.
"Not yet I just got him give me more time"
Danny wanted her baby but she gave him a few more minutes but she just wanted Vic out of her house but she knew Vic was going to fight her all the way, and it scared her thinking Vic could possible get joint custody.
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Post by Sanda on Jul 1, 2014 22:47:26 GMT -6
Great update Jessie. Dutch was so cute feeding Lee oatmeal in this chapter with Donny's help. I could just picture Dutch wearing the Oatmeal all over his clothes because Lee isn't a fan of it. Babies love to eat Cheerios because they can pick them up easily with their fingers. My aunts great granddaughter Arianna loves to eat Cheerios. I feel bad for Vic wanting to spend with his son Lee and Donny counting the minutes until he was gone out of her house and away from her, Lee, and Dutch. I hope you update this story again really soon. This is one of my favorite stories of yours even though I am not familiar with The Shield.
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Post by melinda on Jul 6, 2014 12:30:16 GMT -6
aw I love this. You do an EXCELLENT job writing for this show. I can hear every word, the dialogue is amazing!
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