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Post by Sanda on Feb 24, 2014 2:31:06 GMT -6
Great update Jessie. Poor Flynn. Please don't let Jesse hurt Flynn. I hope that Walt and Hank rescue Flynn soon from Jesse's evil clutches before he hurts him. I hope you update this story again really soon. I love this Breaking Bad story you are writing for me and Melinda. I miss the TV show Breaking Bad like crazy.
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Post by jessie on Feb 25, 2014 1:32:35 GMT -6
Chapter 7
Jesse was driving, and Flynn was asking, but it was more like begging him to take him home. Jesse almost turned the car around, and dropped the kid off but Walter had to know what it felt like not knowing what was going to happen to his kid. He didn't care about Brock. He was not his kid but not knowing if the kid was going to live or die, and blaming himself , and Walter was to blame made Jesse sick. He turned off the highway, and Flynn asked them where they were going.
"Can you just enjoy the ride, and relax kid, and stop with the million questions"
"My Uncle is going to freak out you don't know who you are dealing with"
"You keep saying your Uncle you don't think your Dad can save you"?
"Of course but he is not like Hank he doesn't like violence really or fighting but Hank is tough, and he will beat the crap out of you"
'If you only knew who your Daddy was kid it would blow your mind"
"How do you even know my Dad you don't look like someone he would hang around"?
"Why I don't stand up to your standards"?
"I didn't mean that you are much younger than him "
"Can you shut up for a few minutes you are giving me a headache"?
"Good I hope it hurts I trusted you, and you tricked me"
"You got in my car of your own free will didn't your parents tell you not to get in cars with strangers. Have you not seen many horror flicks, and what happens to kids that get in cars with strange men"
"Oh God are you going to kill me"?
"No if I was going to do that I would have done it already but keep talking, and I just might change my mind" Flynn felt like he was going to be sick he looked out the window, and all he could think about was his family, and friends, and how they will feel if he was never seen again. He was such a idiot, and if he survives he will wish he was dead after the lecture he will get from his Parents, and Uncle Hank, and Aunt Marie.
Jesse turned down a dirt road, and was driving for another 10 minutes until they got to a house. Jesse stopped the car, and told Flynn to get out. Flynn opened the door but he knew he couldn't run, and there was no use screaming there was no houses even remotely close. Flynn got out of the car when 2 of Jesse's friends came out of the house, and yelled out.
"Jesse what took you so long"?
"Badger, Skinny Pete meet Flynn he is a guest at our party so show some manners"
"A party" Flynn said
Badger came down, "Oh my God Jesse he is just a kid what are you doing"?
"Nothing Flynn wants to party don't you kid"
Flynn didn't say anything he wanted to go home but he knew that wasn't going to happen in the near future so he better just stay calm, and hope Jesse takes him home like he promised he would.
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Post by Sanda on Feb 25, 2014 2:12:33 GMT -6
Great update jessie. Poor Flynn. I feel sorry for Flynn in this story. I hope that Hank and Walter show up soon. Jesse is nuts taking Flynn to a party with Bagder and Skinny Pete. Please don't let anything happen to Flynn. I hope you update this story again soon. I miss Breaking Bad like crazy.
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Post by melinda on Feb 25, 2014 7:01:00 GMT -6
oh wow I wonder where this is going, you are doing a great job with this story! I am looking forward to more.
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Post by jessie on Jun 13, 2014 0:07:50 GMT -6
Chapter 8
Jesse and Flynn walked into the house, and Flynn looked around. He saw people kissing, smoking drugs, and drinking, and he knew his Mom and Dad will freak out knowing he was at this party.
Flynn turned to Jesse, "It was really nice of you to invite me to this party, but I want to go home. My Mom will freak out, I could take a cab my Parents will pay for it"
"Don't be silly stay awhile, and if you don't like it I will take you home"
Flynn had a bad feeling but he wanted to trust Jesse but he didn't. Jesse pointed to the living room, and told him to come in. Flynn walked slow while Badger walked up to Jesse, and said.
"Jesse I hope you know what you are doing this kid is underage"
"He is fine just make him feel at home where is Cindy or Mandy"?
"I saw Cindy in the kitchen, and Mandy was here a few minutes ago she is probably upstairs with one of the guys"
"Get Flynn a drink, I will find Cindy". Jesse walked away, and Badger walked over to Flynn.
"Hey kid would you like a beer or something stronger"?
"No I would like a soda"
Badger smiled, "A soda really kid"
"Yes, I am not 21, and my Mom will kill me if I drink"
"Ok a soda coming up". Badger walked over to the ice cooler, and grabbed a Pepsi, and walked over handing it to him.
"Thanks where is Jesse"?
"He will be back in a minute why don't you relax, and sit down, and enjoy yourself"
Flynn walked over to the couch, and sat on the end. He looked around as he opened his Pepsi. He saw a couple making out, and he turned his head. He was about to get up when Jesse came back, and touched his shoulder.
"Hey you having fun yet"?
"I really should go"
Jesse smiled, "I have someone I want you to meet." Flynn smiled as Jesse called Cindy. She walked over, and Flynn has never seen anyone like her before. She was beautiful, and how she was dressed made him stare. She walked over sitting beside him, and said.
"Hi I am Cindy, I hear you are a friend of Jesse"
"I guess we just met my name is Flynn"
"Cute name and you are so cute"
Flynn smiled as Jesse said, "Cindy will take care of you Flynn"
Flynn didn't hear what he said he was to busy looking at Cindy as she moved real close, and smiled.
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Post by jessie on Jun 13, 2014 0:22:53 GMT -6
Chapter 9
Walt and Skylar were freaking out, Walt wanted to kill Jesse for taking his son. He really didn't think he would harm him but how Jesse has been acting he was not so sure. Skylar was so upset she knew one of Walt's friends took Jesse but Walt didn't want to go into to much detail. Skylar had called Hank and Marie, and they were on there way to the house.
Skylar heard the doorbell, and she ran to the door, and as soon as she saw Marie she went into her arms crying.
"Skylar calm down we need to know who took Flynn, and why"?
"Walt said one of his friends took him, but he will not say why. We have been calling him, and he has not answered his cell phone"
Hank walked into the house, and into the living room, and started asking Hank questions.
"Who is this guy that took Flynn, and why would he take him"?
"He is mad at me, I know the guy he would not hurt Flynn he is trying to scare me"
Marie walked over, "We all are scared Flynn must be so terrified, and you are taking this so lightly. What did you do to make this person so mad"?
"It doesn't matter, I will find my son"
Hank yelled, "I am going to call work, and have them put a trace on Flynn's cell phone. Skylar I will need the company, and his other phone details in order to put the trace on the cell phone"
Skylar ran to the kitchen, and got the bill, and handed it to Hank. He ran to the phone, and was talking to someone from work. He hung up, and said they will call as soon as they get any information. If Flynn has his cell phone on it can be traced to a location by cell towers"
Walt walked down the hall, and into the bathroom. He leaned against the door as he called Jesse. The phone rang about 6 times but Jesse finally answer.
"Yeah Walt"
"Where is Flynn send him home because if you don't I promise you my Brother in Law will have your butt in prison before you can count to ten. You better hope Hank finds you before I do"
"Awe are you worried about Flynn he is having a ball. He is with one of my friends her name is Cindy, and she is taking really good care of him"
"What are you up to if Flynn gets hurt I will kill you"
"I have to go don't worry about Flynn I am taking real good care of him" Jesse hung up, and Walt shut the phone. He didn't know what to do but he had to find Flynn because if something happened to him he would never forgive himself.
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Post by Sanda on Jun 13, 2014 11:59:50 GMT -6
Great updates Jessie. Poor Flynn in this story. I hope that Marie, Hank, Skylar, and Walter find Flynn really soon before Jesse and Cindy hurt him. :'(Please don't let Walter, Skylar, Marie, or Hank die in your Breaking Bad story that you are writing. :)I hate that the writers of Breaking Bad killed off Walter and Hank both on Breaking Bad during the final season of the show. I miss the TV show Breaking Bad so much. :'(I am so happy that Bryan Cranston won a Tony on Sunday for is portrayal of LBJ on the stage. Please update this story again really soon.
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Post by melinda on Jul 5, 2014 17:52:21 GMT -6
please don't let Jesse do anything bad to Jr. He's so cute, I would cry lol.
Great job thanks for updating!!
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Post by jessie on Aug 12, 2014 23:13:11 GMT -6
Chapter 10
Flynn was sitting on the couch he felt like he couldn't breath because Cindy was so beautiful and she was kissing his cheek, and saying how cute he was. She was older than him, and he knew she was on something he could tell by her eyes. He wanted to go home but he didn't know where he was, and he didn't have his cell phone.
"Hey cutie how about you come with me and we can talk where it is private"
"I don't think I should I need to go home"
"Come on I will not bite you I promise" Flynn got up, and Cindy looked over at Jesse who put his thumb up as she felt a little uneasy seeing Flynn and his crutches. She touched Flynn chest telling him to go to the first bedroom on the left and she would be in there in a minute. She pointed to the hall and Flynn walked down trying not to lose his balance because some people were laying on the floor. He felt kind of sick because the house was so full of smoke, and he knew it was drugs not from cigarettes. He got to the room, and walked in seeing a bed and he walked over sitting down. He scanned the room hoping to find a phone but there was not one in the room. He knew most people use cell phones so he sat there feeling nervous, and he hated to admit it kind of excited to. He has never really been around a lot of young ladies his age and Cindy was being so nice to him. He just felt uneasy it was like he was being played as a joke and everyone was going to laugh at him after. He felt like he was going to cry he hated being laughed at. He just felt he had to somehow find a cell phone so he could call his Dad or his Uncle Hank.
Cindy walked over to Jesse and moved real close.
"What am I doing how old is the kid he is underage I know it"
"He just looks young because he has been ill. I know his Dad and he wanted me to invite him out so he can get out of the house and meet people. I think he is a virgin, and he is scared of you Cindy. I remember our first time Cindy so go be with Flynn show him what it is like to be with a real woman."
"Jesse he seems like a sweet guy and he doesn't drink and he doesn't smoke weed so why would his Father ask you to be his Party guide"?
Jesse grabbed Cindy and whispered, "Remember you owe me five thousand dollars, and I could call up the loan right now"
"You said you would give me a couple of months"
"I will keep that promise if you go be with Flynn and show him a good time"
"I am not a hooker I thought we were together"
"Not tonight maybe tomorrow go on". Cindy knew she could not pay Jesse back right now so she pulled away from Jesse and said she would do it.
"I knew you would Beautiful". Jesse grabbed two beers and told her to go Flynn is waiting. She walked down the hall but she felt horrible but she was going to get this night over with, and find someway to pay Jesse back and never see him again.
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Post by Sanda on Aug 12, 2014 23:54:45 GMT -6
Great update Jessie. Please don't let Cindy hurt Flynn in this story. Flynn is so cute. Jesse is awful in this story forcing Cindy to go after Flynn. I hope and pray that Walt, skylar, Marie and Hank find Flynn soon before Jesse and Cindy hurt Flynn. I love this Breaking Bad story you are writing for me and Melinda. I miss the TV show Breaking Bad like crazy. I hope you update this story again soon.
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Post by jessie on Aug 13, 2014 0:18:44 GMT -6
I promise I would not have anything really bad happen to Flynn. Thanks for reading my story.
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