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Post by jessie on Jan 10, 2014 0:57:27 GMT -6
My first Breaking Bad story, I hope you like the start of it. This is for you Melinda, and Sanda. You both loved the show so much, I gave it a try, and now I can say it is one of my favourite shows too.
Revenge and Friendships
Chapter 1
Walter and Jesse have gone through so much but Jesse has had enough, and he was tired of Walter, and they had a huge fight, and Walter called him a loser that would die with a needle stuck in his arm one day. Jesse has done so much for Walter, and he was man enough to realize Walter was maybe the brains behind the whole business they created together but Walter could not survive without him. Jesse has taken beatings, and so much, and he always was there for Walter but he was tired of Walter treating him like a common drug dealer he was a partner, and he deserved respect. Jesse knew he made a lot of mistakes, and he was not the man Walter was but he was happy about that. Walter was cold, and smug, and he was digging a hole so deep he was never going to get out alive Jesse was smart enough to know that. Walter had so many enemies, and they both were kidding themselves if they thought this business adventure would lead into anything more than getting themselves killed or worse their families. Jesse was walking away, and he never wanted to see Walter again. He would tell Walter to his face, and than move on with his life, and hope he could find a better life than he was living. He had money, women, friends who cared because he had money, but what else did he have? The love of his life died because he was to out of it to notice her choking in her own vomit. He could have saved her but no he laid beside her while she died all alone, and the image of her suffering plays in his head over, and over, and over, and it drives him insane. He wanted peace he wanted to find someone to love, and he wanted to get out of this business, and as far away from Walter as he can get. Little did he know doing that just might not be as easy as he thinks.
Jesse ran out getting in his car, and drove over to the car wash, and got out walking up to the front door. Walter was talking to Flynn and Skylar they had their back to the window but Walter saw Jesse, and he knew this was not going to be good. He told them he needed to go outside there was a problem with one of the machine he would be right back. He walked out Skylar, and Flynn went back to working not noticing Walter walking over to Jesse grabbing his arm.
"Don't touch me we need to talk, and I don't give a crap if you don't want me at your establishment Walt"
"Jesse you were told never to come here you know how Skylar feels about you"?
"I don't care man I need to say this, and than I will leave"
"Fine go to the park down the street , I will be there in 10 minutes"
"I don't take orders from you we are equal partners remember so stop talking down to me"
"You are acting like a punk Jesse go before my family sees you acting this way"
"Fine you stand me up I swear I will come back, and tell your family all about our business Adventure"
"Don't threaten me Jesse I will not tolerate that not from a smart mouth drug addicted punk like you"
"Screw you Walt be there in 10 minutes don't cross me you will be sorry" Jesse ran to his car, and got in, and drove off. Walter was looking he turned back, and was glad Skylar or Flynn were not watching from the window. He had to give them a excuse of why he needed to leave. He had to deal with Jesse, and he had to make him realize they were in this together, and there was no walking away now they were in to deep to give up now. The real truth was Walter needed Jessie, and he was not willing to give up his dream of providing for his family. He told himself that everyday but he had more than enough put away to make them comfortable for the rest of their lives. He was greedy, and he said to himself he would never do anything to harm his family but that was a lie. He knew he dealt with shady people that would come in, and kill his whole family if he crossed them. He should walk away but Walter loved the power, and the money, and being in charge, and knowing he was doing something that could have him arrested or killed actually gave him some kind of rush that he strived for. He was not the man he was before he got cancer that man was not existent really. He had a family he loved dearly but he had a job that he enjoyed but barely making ends meet. Having to work around the clock to feed, cloth, and give his family the home they deserved got to be a life he hated. He walked around letting so many people walk all over him, and he could even see Skylar didn't respect him like she should. She loved him at least he thought she did but when she got pregnant a second time that was when Walter felt like he couldn't breath. He had another responsibility another child, and it scared the crap out of him. He loved Flynn he was the love of his life, and seeing how amazing Flynn has grown up actually made him feel like he did one thing right. He knew he should stop what he was doing for his kids but they were the reason he was doing all this in the first place. He just hoped one day when they find out what their Father has done they will not hate him because if they did Walter knew that was the day he should just crawl up, and die because they are the reason he is fighting each day to give them the life he couldn't give them the way he was living before. He was many things, and mostly bad but he knew in his heart he loved his kids, and he would do anything for them.
More to Come
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Post by Sanda on Jan 10, 2014 2:00:04 GMT -6
Great start to your new Breaking Bad story Jessie. You are doing an outstanding on your very first Breaking Bad story. You write all of the different characters of Breaking Bad perfectly. Thank you so much for dedicating this Breaking Bad story to me and Melinda. I hope that Melinda loves this story just as much as I already love it. Please update this story again really soon. I can't find what happens next.
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Post by melinda on Jan 11, 2014 17:32:07 GMT -6
I love this so much! I am so impressed, this is different than your usual stories but it is really amazing, I can't wait for more. I love how you captured everyone, this should be very interesting to read. I would post it on ff it is so good!!! I know Andrea would love it, this is so remarkable you should be proud of it!!!
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Post by jessie on Jan 11, 2014 18:25:34 GMT -6
Thank you for the nice comments about my story. I love the show but I don't know why I feel scared to write for this show, but I don't mind posting here because you guys are nice, and not mean so I don't have to worry.
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Post by jessie on Jan 11, 2014 18:58:10 GMT -6
Chapter 2
Jesse parked his car, and got out, and locked it. He walked up the hill he knew Walter would be here any moment, and he knew Walter was not going to be happy. He didn't give a crap Walt has ruined his life. He almost killed Brock all to get him under his thumb. He knew he had to get away from Walter, and try to start over somewhere else. He sat down on a bench his hands were shaking so bad when he saw Walter's car drive up, and park. He got out of the car, and he noticed Jesse right away he came storming up the hill. Jesse for a moment wondered if Walter would be crazy enough to show up with a gun, and kill him at the park but he knew Walter was not that stupid there were to many people around. Walter walked up to him, and right away he was angry, and for a minute it made Jesse laugh which only made Walter more upset.
"I told you never to come to my place of business"
"Which one the car wash or our place of business"?
"You really are stupid Jesse do you really want to piss me off"?
"I am not scared of you Walter, I don't even care anymore what you do or what you think you can do to me"
"I don't get you Jesse why do you want to make a enemy out of me"?
"I don't know maybe you almost had my Girlfriend's kid killed just so I would help you kill Gus. I know it was you, he was a kid"
"He is alive so stop it Jesse"
"You ruined any chance of me having a relationship with Andrea, and Brock didn't deserve to be hurt like that. You are married, and have kids what if someone did that to your children what would you do than Walter"?
"I would kill anyone that hurt my children Jesse."
"Yeah I thought so maybe I should kill you for what happened to Brock"
"Brock is not your son, and he never would be. You, and Andrea are addicts, and eventually you both would have screwed up."
"She was clean she is so upset you could be right she could go back to meth, and that would be another one of your accomplishments. You know I lost Jane, and you knew that killed me, and I was happy for the first time since Jane's death, and you ruined it for me"
"Ok I am sorry but why did you show up at the Car Wash"?
"I came to see you"
"You lie there was a reason were you going to tell my wife. I swear you hurt my family, I will make you pay, and I will make you suffer first"
"I am not you Walter you take other peoples lives not me. I thought you cared about me but I was only a means to a end you never cared about me"
"I am not your Father but I do care, and we need each other"
"I don't need you it is over, and I am not doing this anymore".
Walter was staring at Jesse he didn't say a word he was just staring making Jesse turn to walk away but Walter grabbed his arm, and pull him close.
"You are not going anywhere you will finish what we started. We have a shipment to complete, and you will help or your usefulness will end, and for that I am truly sorry"
"Are you threatening to kill me"?
"I am tired of your crap Jesse, I don't owe you anything, and you will do what you are told. You think you are smart Jesse but you are nothing but a punk that I gave a break too. You will not walk away and survive, and I for one would hate to see you make the wrong choice"
Jesse pulled away, "You want someone that hates your guts working for you? You might have to watch your back I may stab you in the back Walter"
Walter smiled, "See you tomorrow at 2pm you know the place Jesse. Clean up a little you like like a drug addict, and smell like one too. I know where you are at all times Jesse so don't make me come looking for you. Get a goodnight sleep, and listen to this very clearly. You ever show up at the Car Wash again, and try to cross me you will leave town but not of your free will if you know what I mean"
Walter walked away Jesse was angry but he sat on the bench, and put his hands to his face. He let Walter do it again but he was not going to win this time Jesse was going to hit Walter where he knew it would hurt most. Jesse got up, and ran to his car, and got in, and drove home thinking tomorrow Walter will see what it is like to be scared.
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Post by Sanda on Jan 11, 2014 19:17:11 GMT -6
Great update Jessie. You are doing an outstanding job writing your first Breaking Bad story. I can't wait to find what happens next between Jesse and Walter. I also can't wait to find out how Jesse going to hurt Walter where he least excepts it. I hope you update this story again really soon.
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Post by melinda on Jan 12, 2014 19:28:45 GMT -6
ooh this is so exciting! I am on the edge of my seat dying to know what happens next. I am so proud of you for writing this, this is just amazing!
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Post by jessie on Jan 14, 2014 22:50:35 GMT -6
Chapter 3
The next day Walter was sitting at the kitchen table with Skylar, and Holly. Walter was feeding Holly, and she was giggling making Skylar smile.
Flynn walked into the kitchen, and said he was late he was going to miss his bus for school.
Walter turned, and said he would drive him
"Really Dad"?
"Yeah your Mom is going in late so I will drop you off, and than drive to the Car Wash"
"Maybe I can skip school Dad, and I can help you"?
"No school is more important you can help on weekends I will be fine until your Mom gets there"
"Why are you going in late Mom"?
"I have a Doctor appointment for Holly"?
"Is she sick Mom "? Flynn walked over looking at Holly, Skylar walked over touching Flynn's arm,
"She is fine it is a regular check up so don't you worry about your Sister"
"I will always worry about her Mom she is my baby sister"
"Of course, I better go get her a bath, and dressed for her visit. I have your lunch in the fridge, and you too Walter"
"Oh Mom I could grab a slice of pizza I hate taking a lunch everyone makes comments about me brown bagging it"
"I doubt you are the only one taking your lunch, and since when do you care Flynn"?
"Well I don't but I like pizza better than peanut butter sandwiches"
Skylar smiled, "I will order pizza today can you give me a break, and enjoy the lunch I made for you"
"Fine" Flynn grabbed her sandwich, and Walter took his, and they walked out to the car, and got in. Walter's cell buzzed so he looked, and it was Jesse he was going to ignore it but it could be important.
"I have to get this Flynn we will be off in a minute" Walter answered the phone, "Hello"
"Yeah it is me , I can't meet you today, I am really feeling sick"
"No you are meeting me today"
"I am sick man remember your words I am a junkie, I went out with my junkie friends, and guess what I had a big old Junkie party"
"Fine I will deal with this later"
"I will be in tomorrow"
Walter hung up Flynn was looking at him, and Walter smiled.
"Oh that was my accountant at the Bank he cancelled a meeting I had with him today nothing important"
"Dad are we having money problems"?
"Us no why would you ask that"?
"I am not deaf you, and Mom fight a lot , and I heard her talking about money, and I was thinking maybe I should work Dad"
"You do work on weekends don't you worry about us we are fine your Mom just worries to much"
"Yeah I know she is always calling me it drives me crazy" Flynn said making Walter turn to him, and stare.
"Sorry Dad I was just saying she has to realize I am to old for Mommy to call me 10 times a day"
"She loves you Flynn, and we both worry but I will talk to her"
"No don't it will make her upset, I can handle the calls"
Walter smiled, "Have I told you lately how proud of you I am"?
"Yeah always everyday" They smile as Flynn said they better get going or he will be late for school. Walter started to start the car, and they started to drive to Flynn's high school. They were to busy talking to notice a car following them all the way to the school. Walter let Flynn off than he drove off as the other car stopped , and the man watched as Flynn walked into the school.
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Post by Sanda on Jan 15, 2014 0:18:53 GMT -6
Great update Jessie. You are writing all of the different characters of Breaking Bad perfectly. I wondering who is following Flynn and Walter to Flynn's High School. Enquiring minds want to know who was following Walter and Flynn to Flynn's High school and who was watching Flynn going into his high school. I bet that Jesse is following them or I am thinking maybe Jesse hired someone to follow them. I hope you update this awesome Breaking Bad story again really soon.
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Post by melinda on Jan 15, 2014 18:12:42 GMT -6
this is so good, I love that you wrote Flynn in this awesome story. I hope nothing bad happens to him, he is so sweet, please keep going with this, it is excellent!
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Post by jessie on Feb 11, 2014 23:28:48 GMT -6
Chapter 4
It was 5pm Flynn came out of the school with his school bag draped over his shoulder. It was Tuesday, and he always stayed late after school Tuesday's, he took a after school computer class. He sat on the front step , and opened up his phone, and called his Mom.
"Hello"
"Mom it is me where are you"?
"Oh my God Flynn, I forgot I had to pick you up today it is Tuesday isn't it. I don't know where your Father is, I can't leave. I will call Marie to see if she can pick you up"
"No Mom I will just take the bus please don't ask Aunt Marie to pick me up. I am not a baby, I will be fine, I will see you at home"
"Ok but as soon as you get home please call me"
"I will Mom see you later maybe you can bring home Pizza since you forgot about me"
"Deal"
Flynn said goodbye, and hung up, and went to get up when he felt someone grab his arm, and help him up.
"Thank you but I could have managed"
" I know, I just thought I would help my name is Jesse what is your name"?
"Flynn"
"Hi Flynn you have detention or something why are you at school so late"?
"I have a computer class do you go to this school Jesse"?
"No I use to I was over at the library returning some books, and I was going to my car, I thought you might need some help"
"No my Mom was suppose to meet me but she kind of forgot she has a lot on her mind. I better get going I have to catch the bus"
"Bus why don't you let me drive you home"
"I don't know about that my Mom would flip"
"Why"?
"Because I don't know you, and she doesn't know you"
Jesse smiled, "Oh you are a Momma's boy I see that is cool I guess"
"I am not a Momma's boy, I just don't feel like getting a lecture about getting in a car with a stranger"
"Fine but my car is right there you sure you want to take a bus"?
Flynn smiled, "You sure you are not a serial killer or anything like that because I sure want to at least have a girlfriend before I die"
Jesse smiled, "I am no serial killer come on" Flynn walked to Jesse's car, and got in the passenger side as Jesse smiled, and ran over to the driver side , and got in, and started the car.
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Post by Sanda on Feb 11, 2014 23:51:56 GMT -6
Great update Jessie. :)Flynn is way too trusting. ;)He shouldn't have gotten into the car with Jesse. I hope that nothing bad happens to Flynn now that he gotten into the car with Jesse. :'(I love this Breaking Bad story that you are writing. I hope you update this story again really soon. :)I love reading and commenting on all of your awesome stories and one shots that you are writing and posting on my awesome message board.
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Post by jessie on Feb 12, 2014 2:22:41 GMT -6
Chapter 5
Flynn told Jesse where he lived, and Jesse smiled asking him if he would like to go for a drive first than he would take him home?
"I don't think so where would we drive to"?
"Just for a drive no where special come on Flynn live a little"
Flynn smiled, "My Mom will be home about seven I better be home by than"
"Sure I will have you home by seven"
Flynn smiled as Jesse started to drive, and turned off the main rode, and got on the highway, and than he asked Flynn about his family.
"Why do you want to know about my Family"?
"Just being polite, I basically have a family that don't want anything to do with me, I was just thinking you seem lucky, but it sucks you Mom forgot about you"
"Well she is busy she was going to get my Aunt to pick me up. I love my Aunt Marie, but my Uncle Hank is amazing he is so great you would like him"
"What about your Dad"?
"My Dad is cool he works to hard he was sick for a long time but he is better."
"What does he do"?
"Jesse you are asking a lot of personal questions what is going on"?
"I am not we are just making small talk don't talk about your family if you don't want"
"I am sorry, I just feel weird I don't know you , and I don't know where we are going. I should call my Mom, and tell her just in case she calls home she will worry, and than my Dad will be freaking out, and I will get this big lecture, and I really don't need that right now"
"Want to stop for a soda there is a place coming up"?
"Sure" Jesse drove, and when he stopped he told Flynn to stay in the car. He asked him what he wanted, and Flynn said a Pepsi. Jesse got out, and was walking into the service station store. He grabbed a couple of Pepsi's, and a bag of chips, and a couple of chocolate bars. He paid but he than grabbed his cell phone, and made a call.
"Hello"
"Hey Walter just thought I would give you a heads up"
"What are you talking about Jesse"?
"You will never guess who I have in my car right this moment"
"One of your junkie friends I suppose or some hooker you picked up"
"No I have a rather nice young man in my car, but I can't say that won't change as the evening goes on"
"Jesse are you high, I thought you were to sick today"
"You ruined my life Mr. White, and guess what I am going to ruin yours"
"Jesse what is going on"?
"I have to go your son Flynn is waiting for his soda, tell Mom he won't be home for dinner"
"You do not have Flynn in your car you better stay away from my family"
"Like you stayed away from the ones I loved"
"Jesse I swear I will hurt you if you touch my son"
"Bye Walter I have a busy night ahead of me" Jesse hung up, and laughed as he walked out to the car, and got in handing him his soda, and a bag of chips. Flynn's cell phone went off, and he looked at it, and than he whispered.
"It is my Dad what am I going to do"?
'Answer it Flynn, and tell him Jesse says Hi" Flynn looked at Jesse, and he knew something was wrong, and for the first time since meeting Jesse he got scared.
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Post by Sanda on Feb 12, 2014 2:38:37 GMT -6
Great update Jesse. I feel horrible for Flynn. I hope nothing bad happens to Flynn. Jesse is horrible taking Flynn away from his parents Skylar and Walt and for taunting Walter that he has Flynn. I hope you update this story again really soon. I miss the TV show Breaking Bad like crazy.
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Post by jessie on Feb 24, 2014 0:22:31 GMT -6
Chapter 6
Flynn answered his cell phone, "Hello"
"Flynn where are you right now"? Walter said but he sounded frantic.
"Dad I am with Jesse do you know him"?
"Flynn how many times did we tell you never to get in a car with someone you didn't know"
"Dad what is going on, Mom was suppose to pick me up. She was running late so I told her I would take the bus, but Jesse offered me a ride he seemed cool"
"Ok Flynn where are you"?
"At a gas station off the highway, we were just going for a little ride. You didn't answer me Dad how do you know Jesse"?
"It doesn't matter you tell him he better bring you home right this minute"
Flynn looked at Jesse , and said, "My Dad wants you to bring me home right now"
"Oh tell Daddy you will be home soon, and tell him I don't take orders from him." Jesse grabbed Flynn's cell phone, and brought it to his mouth, and said.
"Walter how does it feel being scared"?
"You hurt my Boy, I will kill you" Jesse hung up on Walter, and than opened his window, and threw the cell phone out the window making Flynn yell out.
"Hey that is my phone my Parents will never get me a new one now"
"Sit back and relax, I promise you tonight will be a night you will never forget"
"You will be sorry my Dad will phone my Uncle Hank, and they will come looking for us, and when they find us you will be sorry"
Jesse started the car, and smiled as he drove off, and just let Flynn say what he wanted knowing Walter was going crazy right now, and for that it made his day.
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