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Post by jessie on Feb 3, 2013 21:44:09 GMT -6
Happy Birthday Melinda, a birthday story for you. I thought I would do a Walking Dead short story, hope you like it.
Birthday Surprise.
Carol was sitting on a rock watching some of the other ladies as they talked, as she dreamed about a time when she was truly happy. She was not really happy when she was married, but as a teen she had some good times. It was her Birthday today, but no one knew she never told anyone, and she was OK with that. She got up, and decided to go for a walk, she knew it wasn't really smart but she needed to get her mind clear before going back to the farm house. She was walking, she wasn't really paying attention but she jumped when she heard a stick break, and she looked around. Her heart was racing, she knew it was a walker she just knew it. She was going to die on her Birthday because she didn't listen to Daryl who told her never to walk alone. Did she listen no she has seen with her own eyes the evil that lurked out there, she lost her girl , but she still took chances, and now she didn't know where to run she didn't know where the noise came from, and she knew if she screamed she would probably bring more walkers so she started to walk, but she was saying a prayer in her head, she didn't want to die today, she has said in the past she wanted to go to her Daughter but she wanted to get back to the farm, and be safe she felt tears come to her eyes, she wanted to be brave but she couldn't she started to cry, and than all of a sudden she started to run. She heard footsteps behind her she didn't want to look back she knew it was a walker, and she wanted to focus on what was ahead of her not behind her. She was running branches hit her making her face bleed but all of a sudden she felt arms grab her from behind, and pull her close. She struggled as she cried out but she turned to come face to face with Daryl. She was angry but her anger was nothing compared to his.
"God you scared me Daryl that was cruel, and I can't believe you"
"Me you want to die Carol is that it"?
"No I wanted to go for a walk do you mind God you could have let me know it was you. I thought it was a walker , and you knew it"
"Yeah I wanted to scare the crap out of you. I swear one day Carol I will have to put a bullet in your head when you let yourself get captured by a walker because you never get it through your head. You are in danger, you are not strong enough to fight them alone. I told you, and the men never go out alone, and you are the only one that has so what does that say about you"?
"I don't know but I'm sure you are going to tell me"
"You are so annoying and stubborn Carol you drive me insane all the time"
"You are not a ball of fun either Daryl, and I can take care of myself"
Daryl smiled, "Is that why you ran, and Carol you wet yourself you were scared admit it"
Carol looked down, and realized she did have a accident she was never more embarrassed. She turned, and started to run, Daryl ran after her, and lifted her in his arms while she kicked, and screamed but he whispered.
"Lets get you home, there is nothing to be ashamed of"
She laid her head on his shoulder, and he carried her back to the farm.
To Be Continued.
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Post by Sanda on Feb 3, 2013 22:06:49 GMT -6
Great start to your new story Jessie.  Melinda I hope you have a very Happy Birthday tomorrow. |
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Post by melindajo2000 on Feb 6, 2013 7:15:34 GMT -6
this was such a nice surprise, I love it so much please update soon, I'm proud of all you've picked up you've nailed it . good job!
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Post by jessie on Feb 8, 2013 5:08:59 GMT -6
Chapter 2
Daryl got close to the farm house, and put Carol down, and took his jacket off for her to wrap around her waist.
"I'm so embarrassed I can't believe I wet myself like a child"
"Well you thought a Walker was chasing you but again you deserve to be scared to death"
"Daryl you are a ball of compassion I guess you are proud of yourself"
Daryl rarely was a person that laughed but he did making Carol mad but she had to laugh too, but how would she explain this to the others.
'Carol promise me in the future you won't do something so stupid as walk alone in the Forest"
"I hate the notion going for a simple walk can get you killed. I just wanted to feel normal one day especially on my Birthday"
"Your Birthday I didn't know"
"I know we don't celebrate Birthday's but can you blame me for wanting a simple walk alone"
"Can I blame you yes a simple walk could end your life. Just think how special it would be if walkers got you, I bet that would have been a real treat"
"You are cruel Daryl do you even have a heart"
Daryl grabbed her arm, "Yes I guess I do I'm here right"
"Yes your breathing, and walking around, and on some power trip but do you have a ounce of love in your heart for anyone"
"Love is a joke your heart gets broken anyway. I'm trying to keep my group alive and if that is a power trip so be it"
"I'm sorry I didn't mean to hurt your feeling"
"I don't have a heart so I have no feelings to get hurt"
"Daryl do you ever dream about a better life"
"Yes everyday"
"Really I had a wild dream last night, and guess who was in it"?
"I have no idea"
"You"
"Me so it was a nightmare I see"
"No it was kind of sweet"
"I was in a dream that was sweet can't picture that"
Carol smiled as she moved close, and Daryl went to turn away but Carol put her hands to his waist, and he looked into her eyes, and they just stared at each other.
Daryl felt like he couldn't breath he wanted to kiss her but everything in him was telling him not to. She moved close, and whispered.
"Kiss me Daryl what are you waiting for". He moved close but all of a sudden Daryl grabbed her hand, and said.
"Come on we have to get you safe it is getting dark we are targets out here". He pulled her along but she wanted to scream she wanted to see if a real kiss from Daryl would be as sweet as the kiss in her dream was.
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Post by Sanda on Feb 8, 2013 13:03:53 GMT -6
Great update Jessie. Daryl and Carol are so and adorable together in this chapter. I am so happy that Daryl is taking hm and Carol to safety. I can't wait for them to share a real kiss now that Carol told Daryl that she had a dream about them sharing a kiss together. |
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Post by jessie on Feb 8, 2013 16:42:04 GMT -6
Great update Jessie. Daryl and Carol are so and adorable together in this chapter. I am so happy that Daryl is taking hm and Carol to safety. I can't wait for them to share a real kiss now that Carol told Daryl that she had a dream about them sharing a kiss together. Thanks Sanda I know you don't watch the show but reading this story means a lot to me. I am writing it for Melinda but knowing others like it means a lot. I don't know the characters well but I'm trying but I think I will only write a couple for this show, I have to know the characters better, and I might be writing them wrong, if I am I'm sorry.   ' |
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Post by Sanda on Feb 8, 2013 17:34:24 GMT -6
Great update Jessie. Daryl and Carol are so and adorable together in this chapter. I am so happy that Daryl is taking hm and Carol to safety. I can't wait for them to share a real kiss now that Carol told Daryl that she had a dream about them sharing a kiss together. Thanks Sanda I know you don't watch the show but reading this story means a lot to me. I am writing it for Melinda but knowing others like it means a lot. I don't know the characters well but I'm trying but I think I will only write a couple for this show, I have to know the characters better, and I might be writing them wrong, if I am I'm sorry. ' Jessie, you are very welcome for the sweet comments about this awesome story you are writing for Melinda. I am so sorry that Melinda hasn't been commenting on this awesome story in a timely manner. |
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Post by melindajo2000 on Feb 9, 2013 8:37:13 GMT -6
youare doing a wonderful job, I can't wait to see where this leads, i love how daryl takes care of carol!
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Post by jessie on Feb 18, 2013 2:55:05 GMT -6
Chapter 3
Daryl got Carol to the campsite she said she had to change her clothes, as she ran to her tent, and Daryl wanted to follow her but he watched as she went inside. He walked over sitting down putting his hands to his face, and realized he would rather face a walker than to face his fear of falling in love only to lose the person he fell in love with. He lost someone in the past, and he promised himself he would never let that happen again. He was fooling himself he was falling in love with Carol. He had feelings for her the moment he saw her she was such a sweet person, and watching how Carl treated her drove him insane. He knew she was being abused by him but she told him on many occasions she was fine so he couldn't help her if she didn't want to help herself. He remembered the day Ed died, and when she had to put him out of his misery she saw the pain, but he could see the hurt, and anger come out of her as she hit him more than once to keep him from being a walker. He basically was worse than a walker they didn't know what they were doing he abused his wife, and sometimes Daryl wondered if he abused his daughter too.
Daryl was looking over Carol came out of the tent carrying some clothes, and a towel, and he knew she was going to wash up by the Pond but he hated her going over there at this time, but there was no other way for her to clean up. He saw her go toward the pond, and he noticed the others were all doing their chores getting ready for dinner, they were eating late tonight. He got up, and he didn't know what came over him but he started to follow her but he kept his distance he didn't need her freaking out on him again. She got to the water, and she looked around, and noticed she was alone but she didn't realize she wasn't Daryl was watching her every move. She started to strip naked as she got in the water, and started to wash herself as Daryl watched. Carol was the girl next door Daryl was feeling things he has fought feeling for a long time. Love was for fools but why was his body reacting this way. He was about to explode he wanted to turn away but he couldn't keep his eyes off of her. She was beautiful, she had a pretty hot body under her baggy clothes she loved to wear. Daryl knew he should give her privacy, but he couldn't move, and he knew if she saw him she would freak out, and the whole camp would hear what he has done, but at this moment he couldn't move even if he wanted to.
Carol went to get out of the pond but she saw Daryl, and she froze. She couldn't' believe he was watching her, but part of her was flattered, and she could see he liked her even if he wouldn't admit it. She grabbed the towel wrapping it around her as she walked over to him.
'Daryl what on earth are you doing watching me"?
"I'm sorry you were alone I was worried"
"God you have to be the most annoying man admit why you are here"
"I was keeping you safe Carol that is all"
"Really is that a gun in your pants or are you happy to see me"
Daryl looked down, and couldn't help but laugh as he said.
"I'm sorry you did turn me on, but I haven't seen a naked lady in a long time, and you are pretty hot under your pretty ugly clothes"
"Well I don't have much to choose from do I"
"Carol I'm sorry I never should have looked, please don't think I'm kind of sick freak I'm not"
Carol smiled, "I think you are human , and I'm kind of flattered I got that kind of rise out of you"
"Carol you are sweet but you have a dirty mouth sometimes"
"Yeah only with you"
Daryl walked over , and pulled her close as he brought his lips over hers, and kissed her making her wrap her arms around him, but they both jump with Rick came down, and saw them. He was shocked but he put his hands up, and said.
"Oh man I'm sorry I was told to come, and get you two for dinner but take your time" Rick turned, and almost ran up the hill away from them.
Carol smiled, 'Great I will be the talk of the camp now thanks Daryl"
"Rick has the worse timing but I guess we should get back up there"
Carol smiled, "Yeah if you say so". She walked over picking up her shorts, and was putting them on. Daryl kicked the tree he was so frustrated he wanted Carol in the worst way, but he didn't want the others to think bad of her. She was a lady in ever sense of the word but she also needed someone to love her, but he knew he wasn't that person, but he sure wished he was.
More to come.
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Post by Sanda on Feb 18, 2013 13:02:53 GMT -6
Great update Jessie. Carol and Daryl are so cute and adorable together in this chapter. I don't blame Daryl for checking out Carol naked. Lol ;D  OMG Rick has the worst timing interrupting them while they are kissing. Please update this awesome story again really soon. |
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Post by melinda on Feb 19, 2013 12:54:49 GMT -6
wow I loved this chapter thank you so much for writing wd stories I love how you write daryl and carol. This was sweet and fun I can't wait for more |
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Post by jessie on Feb 9, 2014 17:24:39 GMT -6
Chapter 4
Carol was fixing her shorts when she felt Daryl come up behind her, and whisper in her ear.
"Carol"
She leaned against him as he moved his lips to her neck, and nibbled on her neck making her go weak in the knees. She has dreamed of making love to Daryl over years, and just being this close was making her whole body shiver in anticipation of what was going to happen next.
Daryl stopped Carol turned, and stare at Daryl as he said.
"Carol are you sure this is what you want"? Carol moved close as she put her hands in his shirt making Daryl move against the tree as Carol was helping him undress. They look around praying no one was watching but at this moment they couldn't stop they were frantically undressing. They were standing in front of each other kissing when Daryl put his finger to her lips as he grabbed his clothes, and laid them down like a blanket as he lifted her up, and laid her down as he moved over her. They first just laid there caressing each other, and touching each other before Daryl used his legs to separate hers as he positioned himself above her as they became one. Carol shut her eyes, and he stopped for a moment thinking he was hurting her, but she whispered.
"Don't stop Daryl" He continued as they both were kissing, as he moved totally taking control of the moment, she cried out, as she came to her release, and he came to his release after. He collapsed leaning over her, they both could not catch their breaths.
Carol smiled, "Wow the best Birthday Gift I ever received"
"Today is your Birthday why didn't you tell anyone"?
"Like anyone would care Daryl not like anyone could buy me a cake. I miss the simple things in life like baking a cake. I use to make cakes for Sophia all the time Ed use to tell me I was a horrible cook but Sophia enjoyed my meals. I sometimes wonder why I am here while my little girl was dead it isn't fair"
"I am not a really religious person Carol but I do believe things happen for a reason. I believe Sophia is watching over you all the time, and she is the reason that gives you the strength to go on. I know you miss her, and I wish I could have brought her back to you. I have not heard you talk about her much, and I often wondered why?"
"It hurts, and I never wanted to upset Rick. I know he did what he thought was right that day when he found Sophia. I don't blame him but Lori told me once he blamed himself, and he knows I hate him for ending her life that day at the barn"
"I never could have done it Carol, I have to say I don't know how Rick did it"
"He had to , and I am glad you didn't have to. I know Shane was out of control that day, and the way he acted was way out of line, but he stopped her suffering that day. I know she is looking over me, but lets hope she didn't see this"
Daryl smiled, "Now you are freaking me out girl"
Carol smiled, "This was amazing but you know everyone will be talking about us now don't you"
"Well lets give them something to talk about"
"What do you mean"?
Daryl smiled as he laid her back as he whispered, "Supper can wait, but this can't". He moved over her again, and they made love a second time. They finally got washed, and dressed, and went back up to the campsite. They sure did have everyone's attention. They knew Daryl and Carol took their relationship to the next level just by the looks on their faces. Carol was not ashamed today was a good day one where she felt hope, and inspiration to go on. She didn't know what the future held for any of them but she knew whatever time she had left she would have someone that loved her. That alone gave her hope to keep fighting, because just maybe there would be a happy ending to this life of hers.
The End
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Post by Sanda on Feb 9, 2014 22:44:09 GMT -6
Jessie, I love the ending you wrote to Melinda's Carol and Daryl story you wrote for her birthday last year. I am so happy that Carol and Daryl got a happy ending in your and that they finally took their relationship to the next level and made love to each other twice on Carol's birthday before they joined the other for dinner at the campsite. I hope that Melinda enjoys reading the last chapter of this awesome Carol and Daryl story I enjoyed reading it and commenting on it.
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Post by melinda on Feb 15, 2014 18:16:52 GMT -6
I hate to see this end, it was so cute and sweet. I really love your carol and daryl stories, you write them just perfectly better than mine! keep writing I am obsessed I need more caryl stories lol
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Melinda I hope you have a very Happy Birthday tomorrow. 
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OMG Rick has the worst timing interrupting them while they are kissing. 
