I can't lose you

[Sanda]

Apr 30, 2013 10:28:34 GMT -6 jessie said:

Apr 28, 2013 21:03:18 GMT -6 Sanda said:

Great update Jessie. I LOVE how you write all of the different characters from the TV show Reba. I LOVED the talk between Kira and Cheyenne in this chapter as well. I LOVE how you write the sibling relationship between Kira, Cheyenne, and Jake as well. Cheyenne and Van's daughter Elizabeth is so cute in this chapter. I hope that Cheyenne doesn't give her mom Reba a hard time when goes upstairs to talk to her. I also feel bad for Barbara Jean when Kira arrives at her house to give her a piece of her mind. LOL ;D

Thanks Sanda your comments always make my day, thanks Friend. I love writing this story Reba is one of my favourite shows. You should try writing a one shot or story for this show.

Jessie, ou are very welcome for the sweet comments about your Reba story. I am so glad that my comments made your day. I will try hard to write a one shot for this show sometime in the future. . I haven't watched this show in so long that I wouldn't know where to start in regards to writing a story or a one shot for this show. LOL

[Sanda]

Great update Jessie. I LOVED the talk between Cheyanne and Reba in this chapter. I feel bad for Reba and Brock in story having to deal with Reba's breast cancer and Brock's problems with Barbara Jean. I hope that everything works out for Reba and Brock and that Reba survives her breast cancer. I don't want Reba to die in your story.

[jessie]

Chapter 12

Reba finally opened the door, and she walked right into Brock's arms as he hugged her real tight.

"I'm sorry Cheyenne upset you she is upset, I think Kira has her all freaked out"

"She said some horrible things she thinks I'm up here in my room feeling guilty that you are here"

"I will have to tell them that I'm having problems with Barbara Jean. I really don't want to go into details about that right now, I want to be here for you. I know you need love, and all the support from your family to fight this horrible disease. I know you are strong but you need this family to be together, and this fighting has to stop now"

"Brock I'm scared they will treat me different, I don't want pity"

"No one would pity you Reba, but I was thinking we should invite your Parents over to tell them"

"Are you serious they will freak out for sure, and I don't know if I can deal with them right now"

"Reba they deserve to know they would be so angry if they are not told, and personally it wouldn't be fair"

"Brock you are scaring me it is like you are thinking the worse"

Brock put his finger to her lips as he whispered.

"You hush I know you will be fine, and I know it is going to hard, and scary but you are a Survivor"

"Brock call my Parents, I want to tell everyone tonight. I was going to wait until tomorrow but I'm ready to tell them tonight"

"I will be right beside you"

"I want to change, and I need to wash up, I will be down in about half hour or so"

"I just have to put the dinner in the oven, I will call your Parents, and I hope they can come"

"They will hear your voice, and they will come for sure"

"Yeah you are probably right, you take your time"

Brock walked to the bedroom door as Reba ran over touching his shoulder.

"Brock I really appreciate everything you are doing for me"

Brock had tears in his eyes he knew if he spoke he would probably cry. He just leaned over kissing her lightly on the cheek, and left the room as Reba shut the door. Brock walked to the guestroom, and shut the door, and sat on the bed. He felt like he couldn't catch his breathe. He was so angry why was this happening to Reba he would do anything for this to be a bad dream but he had to find the courage to be the man that Reba needed. He let her down once he couldn't let it happen again. He didn't know what would happen with Barbara Jean but right now that was the least of his worries.

Brock grabbed the phone he didn't know how but he somehow remembered Helen's phone number. He dialed, and waited for someone to answer. He almost gave up but Helen answered.

"Hello"

"Helen it is Brock"

"Brock oh my God is something wrong where is Reba"?

"She is here she needs for you, and J.V to come here as soon as you can"

"Something is wrong why isn't she talking to me"?

"Will you come Helen"

"Of course but it will take a few hours to get there"

"That is fine we will be waiting for you"

Helen hung up, Brock held the phone for a few moments than he hung up. He got up he needed to go see Cheyenne, and make sure she was OK. He walked out, and walked to Cheyenne and Van's room, and knocked on the door.

'Who is it"?

"Your Father can I come in"?

"If you must"

Brock walked in, and shut the door he walked over sitting beside Cheyenne, who wouldn't look at him.

"Cheyenne please look at me"

"Dad I'm angry right now maybe it would be best you leave me alone"

"Cheyenne I hate that your upset but I'm having the worst day of my life, and I need for you to calm down, and tell me you will be supportive of your Mom tonight"

"Supportive are you serious"?

"Yes dead serious young lady you are a Mother now, and your Mother has been there for you ever since you were born, and she needs you now, and I will not tolerate you disrespecting her. She is going through a lot right now, and she will explain tonight after dinner. I just want her to have a deceit meal that is not much to ask"

"Daddy what is wrong"?

Brock was holding in his fear, and emotions all day but at this moment he started to cry making Cheyenne reach over , and hug him. She knew something was wrong, and she knew it was something to do about her Mother, but she was afraid to find out what it is because she didn't know if she could be brave like her Mother she was the rock that held this family together.

[Sanda]

Great update Jessie. Reba and Brock are so cute and adorable together in this chapter. I LOVE how strong Brock is being for Reba in this story. :)I also loved the talk between Brock and Cheyenne in this chapter as well. I hope that the family doesn't give Reba a hard time when they learn that she is sick. Please update this awesome story again really soon.

[melinda]

this is one of your best stories, I'm glad you're continuing. I'm anxious to see what happens next!

[jessie]

Chapter 13

"Dad I am so sorry, I should go talk to Mom, I was real rude to her"

"No let her change what I need from you right now is to go down, and set the table. I want your Mom to have a nice meal, and after your Grandparents will be here, and your Mom will explain everything to you , and the others than."

"Is Mom sick Dad"?

"Cheyenne please let your Mom explain everything can you do that for me"?

"Yes" She gave her Father a hug, and got up grabbing a Kleenex wiping some tears from her face.

"Dad are you coming down "?

'I have to go get Kira she has to be here for dinner"

"You know Kira she is angry you are best to leave her be"

"No she is part of the Family, and your Mom needs you all so I will go get her. Cheyenne please don't let the dinner burn it should come out in 20 minutes"

"I can manage Dad go get Kira"

Brock got up, and they went downstairs together, Brock left the house. Van got up, and walked over looking at Cheyenne. He could see she had been crying, and he hated it.

'Cheyenne is everything ok"?

"Van something is terribly wrong with Mom, I just know it"

"Your Mom is fine you didn't fight with her did you"?

"I said some awful things to her because I was angry. Dad is scared he cried Van my Dad cried, and it scared me. He wants this dinner for my Mom to go perfect, but my Grandparents are coming after my Mom has something to tell us all"

"Oh man something is wrong"

"You keep Elizabeth and Jake busy, I will go set the table, and make sure supper doesn't burn"

"Ok" Cheyenne went to the kitchen, Van walked over to the kids they were watching a TV show. Van stared at the TV but he couldn't get his mind off Mrs. H. She had to be ok she was like a Mother to him, and he couldn't imagine life around here without her keeping them all focused.

Over at Barbara Jeans' and Brock's place

Kira was sitting on the couch with Barbara Jean who was going on, and on about how important it was for Henry to have his Daddy here. Kira's head was hurting she didn't want to talk, and she didn't want to hear how bad her Mom, and Dad was but she had to admit she was not very proud of her Mom at the moment. She couldn't believe she would do this to Henry, and allow her Father to hurt Barbara Jean, and Henry.

"Kira are you listening to me you seem like you are a million miles away"?

"Barbara Jean I know you are upset so am I but can we not talk about this anymore"

"What my life is being turned upside down, and you think I can be quiet about it"

'You should talk to my Dad about it not me, I can't do anything about this"

"You have always been here for me Kira, I loved when you moved in here with us, and I knew your Mom hated it"

"Yeah I was happy here but to tell you the truth I was surprised Mom let me stay as long as she did. My Mom is a good woman, and I know she is not to blame for all this going on, but I wish she would stand up to my Dad. I wanted them back together for so long, but he belongs here with you, and Henry now. I don't know what my Dad is thinking but he will end up back here, and I will have to watch my Mom hurt again. I hate thinking this but this time I will have no pity for her because it will be her own doing"

"Kira you are a old sole you are very smart, and I love how you tell it like it is"

'Barbara Jean what you did to my Mom all those years ago was cruel, but my Dad is the bad guy for doing this to you both"

"Your Dad is a great guy, and I know he loves me but your Mom has set her sights on him, and by taking him in he doesn't have to face his problems here with me"

"What really happened Barbara Jean"?

"That is between us , I just wish he was here so I can work this out with him" Kira and Barbara Jean heard a knock at the door, Barbara Jean got up , and walked over to the door, and opened it.

"Brock you came back"

"No Barbara Jean I need to speak to Kira she has to come home right now we are having a family dinner"

"No she is going to have pizza with us Henry is all excited about it Brock. Do you want to hurt Henry"?

"No don't say that Henry can come with us if he likes. I'm not here to fight I'm to tired right now."

"Why you and Reba got busy all afternoon"?

Kira got up, "Dad go home I don't want to hear what you , and Mom are doing while your other family is suffering here"

"I don't know what load of Crap Barbara Jean is filling your head with but you are coming home now. Your Mom has to tell you something after dinner your Grandparents are coming later this evening. I don't want to fight with you Kira can you do this for me please"

"Kira you can stay you know I love you " Barbara Jean said but Brock grabbed her arm.

'Stay out of it Barbara Jean this is between me, and my Daughter. Kira lets go supper will be ready any time now"

"Dad I don't want to hear what Mom says I'm staying here"

Brock was a fairly calm guy but he lost it , and yelled.

"I am not asking you Kira get home now your Mother needs you tonight, and I swear I will not tolerate you ruining this for her"

Kira even Barbara Jean were shocked they never seen him this angry. Kira realized she better go but she was not happy about it. She walked past her Dad, and started walking home. Brock was leaving too but Barbara Jean grabbed his arm, and cried out.

"I'm sorry Brock don't do this Henry needs you so do I"

"Barbara Jean not now I will talk to you tomorrow when I am calm because right this minute I can't stand to look at you". He pulled away, and walked away leaving Barbara Jean alone. She knew she lost him, Reba won she wanted Brock back, and she got him. She turned, and Henry was staring at her with tears in his eyes.

'Henry I am sorry you heard all that Daddy is just upset"

Henry turned, and ran upstairs as Barbara Jean shut the door, and all her emotions came flooding out as she sank to the floor crying.

[Sanda]

Great but sad update Jessie. I feel horrible for everyone in this awesome Reba story that you are writing. I hope that things work out for everyone in your awesome Reba story you are writing.

[melinda]

such a great story, please update soon! great job on this you have a knack for writing Reba stories