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Post by melindajo2000 on Jan 16, 2013 5:45:09 GMT -6
oh this is getting so good, I love it cant wait for more!
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Post by jessie on Jan 19, 2013 21:20:44 GMT -6
Chapter 6
Jake jumped up when Barbara Jean walked into the house, and slammed the door shut.
"Jake where is your Mom"?
"She is resting"
"Jake I need you to go to my place, and stay with Henry can you do that for me"?
"No I'm not leaving my Mom"
"Your Mom is a big girl she can take care of herself go now"
"You are not my Mom"
"Jake now Henry is alone"
Jake was confused, "You left him alone where is my Dad"?
"Who knows go" Jake ran out worried about Henry, Barbara Jean knew Henry was safe, but she had to get Jake out of the house when she confronted Reba. Barbara Jean went to the bottom of the stairs, and screamed upstairs telling Reba to come down, and face her.
Reba sat up she put her hands to her face she really wasn't up to facing Barbara Jean right now.
"Come down now Reba or I swear I will come up there". Reba got off the bed, she walked out of her room, and walked downstairs.
"There you are I need for you to tell me to my face that you are trying to take my man away from me"
"Barbara Jean where is Jake"?
"He left to go see Henry, but I asked you a question answer it"
"First of all this is my home, and lose your tone or I will ask you to leave"
Barbara Jean screamed, "Answer me you home wrecker"
Reba couldn't believe her ears she ran over to Barbara Jean.
"Who is calling who a home wrecker"?
"I'm calling you one Reba you have waited all this time to stab me in the back. You couldn't keep your man, and you hated me because he wanted me not you"
Reba lost it, and almost smacked her but she got a pain in her side, and she needed to sit down. Reba walked over going to the couch but Barbara Jean was yelling at her making Reba's head spin she wanted to tell her to shut up but the pain was to much to bare. She sat down, and Barbara Jean was yelling but Reba couldn't understand a word she was saying. Barbara Jean walked over grabbing Reba's favourite vase, and threw it across the living room making Reba jump.
"Get out of my home now"
"I will not let you take my man he is mine, and I swear I will do anything to keep him from you"
"Do what you have to Brock is leaving you because you cheated on him you idiot"
"I will not allow you to call me names Reba, I want to kick myself in the head for thinking you were a friend"
Reba stood up trying to block out the pain. "I have been nothing but good to you Barbara Jean. You walked into my marriage, and ruined everything, and hurt me, and my children. I accepted you into my home, I took your crap, and I even tried to be your friend. You pushed yourself into my life, and sucked the life out of me, but I took it. I will not stand here, and allow you to disrespect me in my home"
"You think you are better than me don't you Reba"?
"No I don't think anything , but I do think it is time you leave before we both say something that will make matters worse"
"What can be worse than you trying to get Brock back in your bed? Why don't you focus on your kids, and not trying to take my kids Father away from him"
"My kids are fine so don't you dare say otherwise"
"Really that is why your Daughter wanted to live with us because she couldn't stand living here. Your teenage Daughter got pregnant, and you pretended it was OK, and allowed the boy to live here. I know you want your kids to love you Reba but they need a Mother not a friend"
Reba was beside herself this woman was going into a area that she was soon going to regret. Reba was many things but a bad Mother was not one of them, and she would never tolerate anyone saying she was.
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Post by Sanda on Jan 19, 2013 22:30:57 GMT -6
Great update Jessie. Poor Reba. I feel bad for Reba now that Barbara Jean attacked her and called her a bad mother. I hope you update this awesome story again really soon.
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Post by jessie on Feb 20, 2013 22:23:52 GMT -6
Chapter 7
Reba was shaking she was so angry, Barbara Jean laughed as she said.
"The truth hurts doesn't it Reba"
"You really want to play this game Barbara Jean I will give you one chance to get the Hell out of my house before I do something I won't regret"
"You wouldn't dare lay a finger on me I would sue you for everything you own"
"God you truly are a disgusting little Bimbo Barbara Jean. You call me a bad Mother have you looked in a mirror recently. You think you can destroy peoples lives , and get away with it. I had Brock first he was my husband, I loved him but we were having problems because we were going through a rough patch when we had money issues, and children but you walk in, and pounce on my Husband like a cheap floozy"
"How dare you Reba Brock left you because you didn't satisfy him anymore, and I can see why you are pathetic"
Reba ran over but Barbara Jean pushed her making Reba fall backward landing on the floor. Reba tried to get up but the pain in her side was unbearable but she wasn't going to give Barbara Jean the satisfaction. She got up Barbara Jean could see she hurt her.
"Reba I didn't mean to push you but you attacked me"
"Get out of my house, I never ever want you to step foot in my place again. You are no longer welcome here, and I swear I will never forgive you for this. I have been nothing but a friend all these years. I hated you at first but for Brock, and kids, and for you I let my hatred go. I didn't ruin your life Barbara Jean you did the minute you slept with another man. You ruined my marriage, and now you ruined yours, and I hope you live the rest of your life knowing you deserve exactly what is about to happen to you"
"What is going to happen to me Reba"?
Brock ran in the house, and slammed the door.
"Barbara Jean what are you doing here"?
"I came to see Reba I wanted her to know she is not going to get away with this. We are going to talk about this Brock, and we will work through this like we have done in the past"
"You had other affairs" Reba said but Barbara Jean screamed at her.
"Shut up no I didn't it happened once, I regret it but Brock loves me not you"
Reba started at Brock who walked over to Reba.
"Are you OK Reba"?
"Can you get her out of my house"?
"Sure go upstairs, and I will get rid of her"
"Get rid of me how dare you Brock"
Brock turned and she has never seen Brock more angry.
'Go home you had no right coming here, go home, and be with Henry. I'm not coming home, I'm staying here with Reba"
"Oh no your not"
"You have no say in it go home Barbara Jean"
Barbara Jean walked over facing Reba face to face but she said.
"You think you won Reba think again you will regret this" She turned, and walked out of the house. Brock walked over shutting the door, and locked it.
"Reba I'm so sorry"
"I hate that woman God you left me for her"
"Reba you look pale maybe I should help you up to bed"
Reba was to tired, and sore to argue she walked over and Brock wrapped his arm around her, and he helped her upstairs.
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Post by Sanda on Feb 20, 2013 22:41:33 GMT -6
Great update Jessie. Poor Reba. I feel horrible for Reba in the chapter. Barbara Jean is awful going after Reba in this chapter and attacking her not even know that she is sick with cancer. I am so glad that Reba and Brock throw her out of Reba's house and sent her home packing to her and Bock's house to take care of their son Henry. I am looking forward to your next update to this awesome story.
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Post by melinda on Feb 21, 2013 8:26:48 GMT -6
this is outstanding I love this story. please update soon, you write the characters so well!
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Post by jessie on Feb 24, 2013 18:35:01 GMT -6
Chapter 8
Brock got her to the bed, and Reba sat down. Brock ran to the bathroom, and grabbed a cloth, and got some cold water on it, and walked back to the bedroom, and sat down telling her to lay back he would put the cool cloth on her forehead.
"I don't want a cool cloth Brock God how is that going to help me"?
"I remember when you were stressed in the past you put this on your forehead, and you said it relaxed you"
"I'm more than stressed your Wife said some hurtful things to me, I can't stand that woman"
"I didn't know she came over here I'm so sorry"
"She has nerve calling me a bad Mother that is one thing I'm not"
"I know she is angry she wants to lash out at me but she took it out on you"
"No she pretty much wanted to hurt me, and she did just that. I swear if I was not hurting before she arrived I would have done a scene right out of Dynasty, and I would have ripped out her blond hair by the roots"
Brock smiled, "Oh man that sounds painful"
Reba started to cry, Brock touched her shoulder, and said.
"Reba forget about her what she said we all know is not true. You are amazing with the kids you are the most amazing Mother. You would do anything for them, and she knows it"
"Brock I'm so scared, how are the kids going to react to hearing I have breast cancer"?
"We will help them, we will explain you will have the surgery, and treatment, and than we will help you until you are your old self again"
"I will never be my old self again Brock"
"Yes you will Reba"
"I'm going to lose all my hair Brock how will you like that"?
"We will get you wigs one in every color wouldn't that be cool"
"No I like my color"
"Me too Reba I'm trying to cheer you up, I really don't know what to say"
"The truth would be nice"
"Reba I am saying the truth we are going to get you through this. I will be here for the kids, and you, and finally I can be the husband you deserve"
"You are married to Barbara Jean she will never give you a divorce"
"She has no choice it is over between us"
"Brock look me in the eyes and tell me this isn't you feeling sorry for me because that will kill me"
"I'm here because I want to be here, I never should have left you Reba I'm so sorry"
Reba went into his arms, and he held her tight, but they jump when the phone rang. Reba reached over grabbing it.
"Hello"
"Reba it is Mary from Dr. Allan's office we got you a surgery date it is the day after tomorrow at 7am can you be there"?
"That soon"?
"Yes Reba it is very important to get this now before it gets worse he pushed to get you in as soon as he could"
"I will be there"
"Reba can you come in tomorrow he has some papers for you to read over, and he will explain everything to you"
"Yes I will be there thank you Mary"
"Reba"
"Yes"
"I'm praying for you , I just know you will be OK"
"That means a lot to me Mary thank you". Reba hung up, and Brock touched her shoulder.
"Was that the Doctor"?
"Yes his Secretary Mary they booked the surgery for the day after tomorrow at 7am"
"Reba we have to tell the children"
"Can we wait until tomorrow we can make them their favourites for dinner, and maybe watch a movie, than tell them"
"Anything you want"
"I want this all to be a dream Brock"
Brock pulled her close as they held on to each other both scared to death wondering what their future held for them. Brock made a lot of mistakes in his life but he knew for once in his life he was going to be there for Reba, and do whatever it took to get her healthy again. He wasn't going to lose her not now that he realized just how much he loved her, and needed her in his life. She couldn't die because if she did he knew he would never forgive himself for wasting so much precious time away from her, and their family.
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Post by melinda on Feb 24, 2013 19:11:38 GMT -6
you have a real knack for writing romance and it pays off in your reba story. good job@
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Post by Sanda on Feb 24, 2013 20:56:41 GMT -6
Great update Jessie. I feel horrible for Reba becuase she had breast cancer, I am so glad that Brock is there for her and the kids. I hope that Reba and Brock get back together after she beats her breast cancer.
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Post by jessie on Apr 2, 2013 19:17:51 GMT -6
Chapter 9
Brock told Reba to have a nap, and he would go down, and get supper ready for the family. Reba was so exhausted, and nauseous so she really didn't want to argue with him. She laid back Brock had to laugh she was out as soon as her head hit the pillow. He pulled the blanket up , and gave her a kiss on the cheek, than he got up, and left the room, and walked downstairs. He got to the bottom step he felt so overwhelmed he sat down on the step, and put his hands over his face. He sat there for the longest time but jumped up when Jake came into the house, and slammed the door shut.
"Jake your Mom is resting why are you slamming doors"?
"Barbara Jean makes me so angry"
"She is angry don't take what she says to heart"
"She said Mom is a cheat, and that she feels sorry for me. This is your fault Dad not Mom's"
"I just said what is going on between me, and Barbara Jean is our business"
"Mom is my business Dad"
"Yes she is but Barbara Jean is mad at me not her really"
"Really she said Mom wanted to take you away from her from the minute you left us. She is right you left Mom, and now you want her back what is up with that Dad"?
"Jake not now I am going to make dinner, and I want everyone to get along tonight, and I don't want you bringing up Barbara Jean when your Mom comes downstairs"
"Dad"
"Yes Jake"
"Barbara Jean said she would move so far away, and take Henry away, I don't want him to leave"
Brock walked over, and knelt down, and said.
"Son I won't let her take Henry away she is letting her anger talk, but she had no right saying anything to you, and Henry"
"What if she doesn't let me see Henry anymore"?
"She loves you, Cheyenne , and Kyra so much she would never keep Henry from you"
"I hope not but Dad why are you here"?
" I will explain more to you later, but your Mom has nothing to do with me leaving Barbara Jean. You are young, and I know things confuse you but I promise you I'm not going to hurt your Mom, and I don't want to hurt Barbara Jean but I'm not going back to her Son"
"You are divorcing her"?
"I will discuss that with her, but your Mom is going to allow me to stay here, I will be in the guest room"
"Mom is going to let you stay"?
"Yes but how about you tell me what everyone would like for dinner"
" You are not cooking are you Dad"?
"Well I was thinking about it"
"Oh can we order pizza, and garlic bread, and chicken wings"
"For you anything"
"You better get Kyra a salad she is on a health kick recently"
"OK maybe I can make a salad"
Jake smiled as Brock was walking to the kitchen, but Jake said.
"Dad"
"Yes Jake"
"Is it bad that I say I like having you home again"
"No it isn't bad do you have homework to do Jake"?
"Yeah"
"Why don't you do it now, and after dinner we can have fun maybe playing a game or watching a movie"
"Cool one we will like not one that Cheyenne picks she always picks movies that makes Mom and Cheyenne cry"
"Well we don't want that maybe a nice family film"
"Not Disney Dad"
"Jake do your homework, I will be in the kitchen making the salad, and I will order dinner"
"OK Dad"
Brock went into the kitchen, Jake sat on the couch, and flipped the TV on, and grabbed his math book but he held it on his lap as he watched one of his favourite shows. Brock could see from the kitchen he yelled out Jake's name making Jake shut the TV off, and yell back.
"Doing my homework Dad"
"Good I could have sworn I heard the TV on"
"Sorry Dad"
Brock smiled, "No problem Son" Jake opened his book, and started his homework when Kyra walked in hanging up her coat.
"Kyra guess what"?
"Jake I'm not in the mood for guessing what do you want to say"?
"You will never guess who is moving back in"?
"Moving in who"?
"See for yourself he is in the kitchen". Kyra put her purse down, and walked to the kitchen, and opened the door. She saw her Dad washing some lettuce by the sink. She walked up behind him, and touched his back.
Brock turned, "Oh Kyra your home before Cheyenne , Van and Elizabeth we are having Pizza , and I'm making you a salad you like"
"What is going on"?
"Kyra I know seeing me here making a salad is confusing you"
"Yes I feel like I'm dreaming, and I'm in a Leave it to Beaver episode"
Brock smiled, "You are not dreaming I'm here, and I'm not going anywhere"
"Your moving in here what about Barbara Jean"?
"We are separated, I really don't want to discuss why"?
"Mom said you can move in"?
"Yes"
"Where is she"?
"In bed resting she will be down for dinner don't go up there making a scene"
"I think she needs to explain this to me"
"Explain what she invited me to move in, and we all are going to make this work Kyra"
Kyra was staring at her Dad he smiled as he continued making the salad, and for the first time in a long time she was speechless.
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Post by Sanda on Apr 2, 2013 20:28:14 GMT -6
Great update Jessie. I LOVED the talk between Jake and Brock, and Kyra and Brock in this chapter. Brock is a wonderful father to Cheyenne, Kyra, Jake, and Henry. Barbara Jean needs to keep her negetive opinions about Reba to herself in front of the kids.
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Post by jessie on Apr 28, 2013 20:02:23 GMT -6
Chapter 10
Kyra walked out of the kitchen, and looked at Jake who was doing his homework. She walked over sitting beside him, and grabbed the book out of his hand.
"Give that back to me, I want to finish so I can watch TV after dinner"
"What is going on why is Mom sleeping , and Dad in there acting like he never left"?
"I don't know Kira but I like it"
"OK this is really crazy I'm going up to talk to Mom"
"Wait she is sleeping leave her alone"
"I need to talk to her" Kira got up she was about to go upstairs but she stopped when Cheyenne , Van, and Elizabeth came in.
"Hey where is Mom"?
"Upstairs sleeping while Dad is in the kitchen making dinner"
"Couch is here great" Van walked into the kitchen, Cheyenne put Elizabeth down, and she ran over to Jake who moaned when she was trying to get his attention.
"Guys I am trying to do my homework here"
"I will get her in a minute she loves you Jake"
"I know but she is ripping my papers she wants to color".
Kira turned, "Jake just watch her for a moment, I need to talk to Cheyenne for a minute".
"Fine don't yell at me Kira"
"Well stop whining baby"
Cheyenne grabbed Kira's arm, "Not in front of Elizabeth, I don't want her to see fighting"
"I'm not fighting"
Cheyenne pulled her out on the front porch, and shut the door.
"OK Kira your upset more than usual, what is going on"?
"Mom is upstairs sleeping , and Dad is in the kitchen pretending he never left, and I feel like I'm in some bad movie, and I just woke up from a bad dream, and my Parents never divorced, and my Dad never left us to hook up with his Office Assistant"
"Have some respect hush Dad, and Mom could hear you"
"Oh come on it happened he has a family down the street. He said Mom is letting him move in, and we have no say in it"
"OK maybe he is having trouble with Barbara Jean, and Mom is feeling sorry for him"
"Well I'm not happy about this Mom will get hurt, and he will leave, and we have to watch her mourn again , I for one am not going to do it again"
"This is Mom's house, and I for one will respect her wishes"
"I'm out of here I thought maybe you would understand" Kira ran down the steps, and down the street, Cheyenne yelled out for her to stop but she kept going. She stood for a minute thinking but she turned, and went back into the house. Jake was playing with Elizabeth on the floor making Cheyenne smile.
"Jake I can watch her now if you want to do your homework"
"It is OK I'm fine". Van came out of the kitchen, and over to Cheyenne , and whispered.
"Your Dad is moving in, I think there is trouble in his marriage he didn't go into details but he seems fine."
"Kira is so angry I'm worried about her"
"Where did she go"?
"Who knows but I have a feeling to Barbara Jean's, I thinks she should mind her own business, but she is afraid for Mom. I love my Dad but I don't want my Mom hurt again"
"Couch loves your Mom"
"He is married Van to Barbara Jean"
"I know but he could still love your Mom don't yell at me Cheyenne"
"Sorry I think I'm going to go up, and see my Mom"
"Your Dad said she had a bad day so take it easy on her"
"I will she is my Mom"
"I know I will watch Elizabeth dinner is ready soon". Cheyenne smiled she went upstairs as Van turned, and walked over to Elizabeth, and Jake, and sat on the floor with them, and Elizabeth handed her Daddy a toy tea cup, and pretended to pour him some tea as Jake smiled.
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Post by Sanda on Apr 28, 2013 21:03:18 GMT -6
Great update Jessie. I LOVE how you write all of the different characters from the TV show Reba. I LOVED the talk between Kira and Cheyenne in this chapter as well. I LOVE how you write the sibling relationship between Kira, Cheyenne, and Jake as well. Cheyenne and Van's daughter Elizabeth is so cute in this chapter. I hope that Cheyenne doesn't give her mom Reba a hard time when goes upstairs to talk to her. I also feel bad for Barbara Jean when Kira arrives at her house to give her a piece of her mind. LOL ;D
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Post by jessie on Apr 30, 2013 10:28:34 GMT -6
Great update Jessie. I LOVE how you write all of the different characters from the TV show Reba. I LOVED the talk between Kira and Cheyenne in this chapter as well. I LOVE how you write the sibling relationship between Kira, Cheyenne, and Jake as well. Cheyenne and Van's daughter Elizabeth is so cute in this chapter. I hope that Cheyenne doesn't give her mom Reba a hard time when goes upstairs to talk to her. I also feel bad for Barbara Jean when Kira arrives at her house to give her a piece of her mind. LOL ;D Thanks Sanda your comments always make my day, thanks Friend. I love writing this story Reba is one of my favourite shows. You should try writing a one shot or story for this show.
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Post by jessie on Apr 30, 2013 10:48:32 GMT -6
Chapter 11
Cheyenne went upstairs she knew her Mom hated when they didn't knock but she opened the door, and saw her Mom laying on the bed. She went in shutting the door, and walked over to the bed, and sat beside her Mom, and touched her arm.
"Mom wake up" Reba was startled, and sat up, she put her hands to her face.
"Oh God what time is it how long did I sleep"
"I'm not sure I just came home, and Kira is real upset Mom, and Dad is making dinner, and Jake is real happy what on earth happened from this morning until now"?
"Kira is upset why"?
"Take a guess Mom she talked to Dad, and he told her he was moving in"
"He is staying here for now Cheyenne"
"What about Barbara Jean , and Henry"?
"Don't mention her name in my home again, Henry is a sweet boy he is welcome anytime without his Mother"
"OK I'm officially freaking out did you, and Dad sleep together, and she found out"?
"No I wouldn't do that"
"Mom you said you were over Dad, and now he is back"
"He is having problems in his marriage, and he can tell you what they are not me. I always cared for your Father, if you must know I never stopped loving your Father. He needs me right now, and I'm here for him, and he is helping me to"
"Helping with what"?
"I don't want to talk about it right now"
"Mom tell me what is going on, I'm afraid you are heading for trouble. Dad will go back to her, and you will be the one alone again you know it"
" Cheyenne stop I don't feel well, and I just want to be with my family today, and no fighting can you manage that"?
"You expect us to just pretend everything is normal"
"For one night Cheyenne" Reba actually screamed at her making Cheyenne stop, and just look at her. Reba got off the bed, and was walking to the bathroom, but she turned.
"Cheyenne I'm sorry I never should have yelled at you"
"You are ashamed of yourself Mom you are the other woman now"
"Get out of my room now". Brock came running into the room, and Reba ran into the bathroom slamming the door. She held on to the sink but she started to cry, she was so tired, and she just wanted the pain to stop, how was she going to explain she might die to her kids. She has cancer , and all this crap with Brock, and Barbara Jean could not have come at a worse time.
Brock walked over, "What did you do Cheyenne"?
"You did this Dad , you ruin everything" She ran out of the room, and Brock went to go after her , but he was worried about Reba too. He ran to the bathroom, and knocked.
"Reba are you OK"?
"Yes Brock give me a few moments please"
"I'm here for you Reba"
Reba held back tears, and barely could get words out but she said.
"I'm scared Brock"
Brock touched the door, and whispered, "Me too Reba"
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