Oh You Fool

[jessie]

This is a short story for you Sanda, shocking story, but it will turn out ok . lol

Oh you fool

Reid was on a Night cruise ship, it was a event for the Hospital. He was seeing Noah, and Luke together all night, and he saw Noah yelling at Luke as always. Luke walked outside, and Noah followed him after giving Reid a dirty look. Reid was fed up he put his beer down, Chris grabbed his arm, "Don't bother Reid he is with Noah, move on"

"You get your hand off me Chris or you will be sorry"

"Fine go make a fool of yourself, I don't care"

"Thanks". Reid walked out on the deck, and stood in the doorway.

"Luke how dare you talk to me like that in front of your Mother"? Noah yelled

"You care more how she feels than me. I'm sick of this Noah, I gave up everything for you"

"What did you give up"?

"The last year, and a half of my life. I brought Reid Oliver here to help you. I stood by you with your shame of a wedding, do you want me to go on, I can for about 1 hour, and I still wouldn't be finished"

"You selfish rich punk"?

"I'm selfish, I do everything for you"

"What do you do for me, well maybe the occasion night of fun". Noah smiled but Luke pushed him, but Reid walked over.

"Bravo Noah you truly shocked me your even a bigger idiot than I thought"

"Reid go away this is all because Luke has some hot dreams about you"

"Really he dreams of me, oh that makes me all warm inside"

Luke walked over, "Reid go away, this is between me, and Noah"

"Is this what you want Luke, he treats you like crap can't you see that"?

"Yeah I see it, I feel it, but what do you want me to do"?

"Oh I don't know make a choice him or me"?

"Reid not now"

"I'm tired of the game, you either want him, or you want me. You choose before this cruise is over, you walk away with him it is over, I will never look at you again"

"Reid"

"No Luke I have made it clear I adore you, but if you think Noah is the one, I will understand, and I will be happy for you"

Noah smiled, "You are pathetic Reid, you can't find your own guy"

"Noah this isn't all me Luke knows this was both of us. He has liked me, but there is something holding him back some kind of dedication to you. You don't deserve him, maybe I don't either but I would make him happy, you obviously can't do that"

Luke put his hands over his ears, "I'm going to be by myself for 5 minutes, I need to be alone". He walked away, Noah stood beside the edge of the railing smiling.

"What are you smiling at Noah"?

"You don't think he would pick you do you"?

"It is his choice"

Noah jumped up on the railing, he smiled, "I will jump if he picks you".

"I hope you can swim bud because I wouldn't jump in to save you"

"I can't swim Reid I bet you want to push me don't you"?

"Noah for God sake you fool get down, I don't need to be blamed for pushing you "

Noah smiled, "Oh you are worried about old Noah"

"No but I don't want to get my suit wet, get down now"

Noah turned, "Have you see the movie, the Titanic"?

"Yeah it was a downer just like you Noah"

"I loved the scene where she trusted her guy, he didn't let her down. I bet Luke will do that for me, maybe later we can reenact that scene, than after I'm going to make love to him all night"

"Well I'm happy for you Noah, I'm going inside"

"Reid"

"What"?

Noah went to get down but he screamed as he lost his balance, and fell backward. Reid was in shock but he ran to grab him, but he didn't get there in time, and he fell to the cold water below"

[Sanda]

Great start to your new story Jessie. OMG I hope that Reid isn't going be accussed of pushing Noah over the balcony of the crusie ship. OMG Noah really was an ass in this chapter.

[jessie]

Chapter 2

The alarm went off on the Cruise ship, Reid didn't think it was so dark, but he jump off the ship, he had to find Noah. He hit the water it was cold shocking his body. The Ship pressure almost sucked him under. He finally got his wits about him, he yelled out Noah's name. He didn't hear him but than he heard, "Help me". Reid looked around as water was splashing in his face, he could see lights coming up from above. He heard some yelling over a speaker , that help was on the way. Reid saw Noah struggling, he started to swim toward him. He yelled out, he finally got to Noah, but Noah was so frantic he started to pull Reid under with him.

"Noah calm down, I have you they are going to get us"

"I can't swim, I'm cold"

"I know calm down".

"I can't swim". He was pushing Reid, and than he grabbed onto him holding him tight. Reid was getting frantic now, he was frozen, and Noah was making it so hard to stay above water. Reid turned trying to shake him, but Noah was out of it. He hit Noah knocking him out as he grabbed him yelling for help.

Luke was watching from above, they lowered a small boat down, and they were coming over to Reid , and Noah. They grabbed Noah first taking him to safety. Than they pulled Reid, and got him on the small boat, and than he was taken up to the ship with ropes. Noah was laying on the deck, when Luke ran over running to Noah, touching his face.

Reid was hurt Luke didn't even look at him, but Luke turned looking at him.

"What happened how did you end up in the water"?

"It was a accident"?

"How could it be a accident"?

"You think I pushed him"?

"No but you both were safe when I left"

"I jumped in to save him Luke, God I can't believe you"

"Reid I'm sorry, I'm scared"

"Yeah for Noah take care of him he will be fine". Reid went to walk away but the Captain grabbed his arm.

"No you are not going anywhere until we find out what happened"? Noah started to come to, he looked around, than he looked at Reid.

Luke ran over, "Noah your OK, God what happened"?

Lily knelt down, "Did Reid do this to you"?

"No he saved me, I was fooling around, I lost my balance. Why did you jump in to save me, this was your chance to win Luke"

Lily looked at Reid, he turned , and walked out. Luke was staring at Noah, he whispered, "I'm sorry Noah, I love him"

"Go to him, God go to him". Luke got up running, he ran in the hall looking for Reid he couldn't see him. He yelled, "Reid where are you, I'm so sorry, I love you"

[Sanda]

Great update Jessie. Thank you for writing this awesome story for me. I am so happy that Reid saved Noah even though I don't think that he didn't deserve it. I hope that Reid and Luke will be able to patch things up soon.

[melindajo2000]

awesome story, I love that you mentioned Titanic, that is Max's favorite movie at the moment . I hope Luke and reid get together. Love this!

[jessie]

;D
Chapter 3

Luke was frantic he couldn't see Reid, but he knew he had to be on the cruise it hadn't docked yet. He suddenly saw Reid come out of the washroom, Luke yelled, "Reid"

Reid turned, Luke went running down the hall. He went right into Reid's arms knocking him against the wall.

"Oh God what are you doing, why are you not with Noah"?

"It is you I want to be with, I have wanted you for months, I was a fool"

Reid smiled, "Are you saying you want me, just a minute ago you thought I pushed Noah overboard"

"I knew you didn't but you saved him, that was amazing"

"Well he was being a fool talking about that scene from Titanic. He slipped, I couldn't let him die, you would never forgive me, I wouldn't forgive myself"

"You could have died"

"Yes, he almost brought me under that guy sucks the life out of everyone"

Luke smiled, "Forget about Noah, do you want me or not"?

"Well let me think about it"? Reid smiled as Luke whispered, "Well"?

"Yes I want you Luke Snyder". Reid pulled him close as they kissed, Luke giggled, "You are all wet"

"You think"?

"Oh Reid you are so cute".

"Cute no way, but Sexy I can deal with". Luke smiled as he grabbed his hand, "Come with me". They ran down the hall, Luke pushed Reid into the coat room, slamming the door.

"Luke what are you doing"?

"Oh I want you this minute, I'm not waiting we will not be docking for another hour"

"In a coat room no way Luke Snyder". Luke threw his coat off, Reid smiled as he walked over to Reid.

"What if someone comes in here, we will be arrested"?

"Oh it would be worth it, live a little Reid Oliver"

"Me you should talk"

Luke moved away taking off his shirt, and smiled as Reid stood with his mouth open. Luke threw his belt off his pants, as he pulled them down. Reid was laughing, "No way Goofy boxers, that is to much"

"What Goofy is way cool, let me see your boxers"?

"Maybe I wear briefs"

"Or nothing let me see"

"No maybe I'm shy". Luke laughed, "Yeah right as he pushed Reid back, and they both fell to the floor laughing. Luke laid over Reid, and whispered, "If you want to wait, I will but I don't want to, and by the feel of it, I already have you excited"

"You are killing me Luke Snyder, months of wanting you, and now your like a bee on honey". Luke smiled as he brought his lips over Reid's , as his hands started to undress him.

[Sanda]

Cute update Jessie. OMG I LOVE that Luke was wearing Goofy boxers underneath his jeans. ;D Reid and Luke are soo cute and adorable together in this chapter. I LOVE that Reid and Luke are gong to make love in the coat closet. ;D I am so happy that Luke dumped Noah for Reid. Please update this awesome story again soon.

[melindajo2000]

this was an awesome chapter. I love where this is headed keep it going please

[jessie]

Final Chapter

I hate ending my stories , but I have to end some. Hope you like the end of my story.

Chapter 4

Luke and Reid were undressed, they kissed, when Reid pulled Luke close, and they knew all their frustrations, and desires for each other, were going to be resolved tonight. Luke whispered, "What about protection, I didn't bring any"

Reid grabbed his wallet, and laughed saying , He never leaves home without it." He held up a condom , Luke whispered, "I'm so nervous, I have dreamed of being with you Reid Oliver"

"Me too" Reid grabbed the condom, and started to put it on. It didn't take long before they were making love, it was even more beautiful than they both imagined. They both came to their release, and collapsed side by side holding hands, and still kissing. Luke leaned on Reid's chest, and looked into his eyes.

"Reid can I ask you one question"?

"Yes anything"?

"Why did you jump into the water to save Noah?. You could have called for help, but you saved him"

"I'm a Doctor I save lives even someone I'm not really fond of. He was fooling around, and he went in, I couldn't leave him there to die"

"I love you Reid more than ever just because of what you did today. You are all tough on the outside, but inside you are a big teddy bear"

"They can be mean"

"Yes but I love you just the way you are"

"Luke does this mean we are together, the thing with Noah is over right"

"It has been over for a long time, I just didn't want to be the one to end it. I have loved you from the first moment we met. I thought you were mean, stubborn, rude but so sexy, and I couldn't stay away from you"

"I noticed you were annoying, but you were cute"

"I don't want this night to end Reid"

"Hey it doesn't have to we can go to a hotel after we get off the cruise. I want to hold you all night, and maybe next week we can find a place together, something we both love. I just want a nice bedroom a fridge , my TV, and my Guy"

'What about food, and how about a puppy or a cat"?

"Really you want a pet they are messy, they love to eat. They beg for food, they leave hair all over the place, and they can be annoying"

"So are you Oliver but I love you anyway"

Reid couldn't help but laugh, he pulled Luke close, and they kiss. They made love again, than they got dressed, and went out to the deck. They could see everyone looking at them, it made them laugh because they didn't care they were together finally. It took months to find each other, but now that they are together no one was going to keep them apart. Reid was even impressed with Noah, he walked over thanking him, and told them he was not going to stand in between them. Reid was mouthy at times but he didn't say anything rude. He knew Noah probably loved Luke, but he never showed him in the way Reid planned to in the future. Reid was going to love Luke until the day he died. That was a promise he was going to keep.

The End

[Sanda]

Great ending to your awesome story. Reid was waay too kind saving Noah's life. Reid and Luke are so cute and adorable together in your story. I LOVE reading all of your awesome Reid and Luke stories.

[jessie]

Apr 5, 2012 17:32:10 GMT -6 Sanda said:

Great ending to your awesome story. Reid was waay too kind saving Noah's life. Reid and Luke are so cute and adorable together in your story. I LOVE reading all of your awesome Reid and Luke stories.

Thank you Sanda it is great that you are so kind, and love all my stories. I hate ending them, but I have to end some.

[melindajo2000]

this is so good, sad that it is ended, I hope you have more like this, I do love reading your stories as well even if it takes me awhile to get caught up. I'm sorry keep up your excellent work