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Post by jessie on Oct 7, 2011 15:55:13 GMT -6
Maybe I shouldn't write anymore. I updated this earlier was just going to submit it, the computer froze before I could save it, and I lost it so I'm writing it all over again. Chapter 6 It was 12 midnight Luke had fallen asleep around 10:30, Reid was getting tired. He stopped at a Hotel this time he wasn't going to take any chances. He leaned over waking Luke up, "Luke wake up we are at the Hotel" "Oh God how long was I sleeping for"? "About 1/1/2hours you were suppose to keep me awake Bud" "I'm sorry I was so tired, I hate long trips in the car" "Oh even when your with me"? "Well you make it worth while". Luke leaned over, they kissed they got out, Luke grabbed their overnight bag. They went inside the hotel, a young lady smiled. "Welcome to the Holiday Inn, would you two like 2 rooms". Luke smiled, "No we need 1 room, we are together" "Oh sorry" Reid handed her his credit card as Luke held his hand. They smile at each other, as the young lady told them they had room 6b, she asked if they needed someone to help them to their room? "No thanks we are fine we only have one bag". They walked to the elevator, they got in, and pushed the 6th floor. Another couple came on they started kissing they didn't care that Luke and Reid were there. Luke walked over in front of Reid pulling him into a kiss. Reid was shocked he wasn't a person who loved public affection but he kissed Luke back. The couple stopped, and were staring Reid smiled, "Sorry he loves me". They got off the elevator as the young lady yelled, "Oh man that was hot". Reid turned but her boyfriend smiled, "Hot really"? Reid smiled, "Yeah it was for me too". The door shut Luke ran down the hall. "Sorry don't kill me they deserved that". Reid ran down grabbing Luke as they kissed again, they walked to their door, Reid opened it. Luke jumped on his back, Reid kicked the door shut locking it. He walked over to the bed dropping Luke on it. He fell next to him, as they kissed, it wasn't long before they completely undressed each other. They made love like never before, it was like all the months of holding off, was releasing something in both of them. They made love collapsing beside each other, both trying to catch their breaths. Luke jumped up, "Last one in the shower has to give the other one a complete body rub". Luke couldn't help but Laugh as Reid got up knocking him to the bed as he ran to the washroom turning, "You lose Richie Rich". Luke smiled, as he got up running into the bathroom, almost jumping into Reid's arms.
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Post by Sanda on Oct 7, 2011 17:39:47 GMT -6
Jessie, I am so sorry that your computer froze on you when you were writnig your update. Cute update Jessie. OMG I would be exactly like Luke falling asleep on Reid in the car if I was the one that was suppose to be talking to keep him awake while he is driving. LOL I LOVE that the 2 couples were kissing on the elevator. Reid and Luke are soo cute and adorable in this chapter.
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Post by Sanda on Nov 15, 2011 10:38:01 GMT -6
Jessie, I hope you update this awesome story again really soon. I LOVE this Reid and Luke story so much.
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Post by melindajo2000 on Nov 15, 2011 11:16:54 GMT -6
this was a great chapter, I love that they weren't afraid to show affection and they make a cute couple. I love this story I hope you update soon! I'm sorry I missed it
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Post by jessie on Nov 15, 2011 12:48:00 GMT -6
Chapter 7
Luke and Reid were in the shower, they let the water roll over them, while they kissed. Luke whispered, "I'm wide awake now we can play all night"
"I'm tired so no we can't"
Luke pouted making Reid laugh as he whispered, "Well I can play for a little while". They kiss, and before they knew it they were making love again in the shower. Luke leaned against the wall after, "I hate that I wasted so much time Reid"
"Well we are making up for it now right". Luke smiled, "Who would have thought you would be such an amazing lover". Reid turned, "What does that mean'?
"Well you know what I mean"?
"No I don't"
"Your mad at me"?
"No but why wouldn't I be an amazing lover"?
"I thought you would be one of those lovers that just wanted to get it over with. You always seemed like your in a rush to do something else but you give me your full attention, and I love it"
"Well now you know"
"I have never been with anyone like you"
Reid jumped out of the shower, "Well I'm one of a kind" Luke got out they wrapped their towels around each other. They heard Reid's cell phone go off. Reid ran in holding his towel in place opening his cell phone.
"Hello"
"Hey Reid how are you , and Luke"?
"Hi Sanda we are fine we just stopped at a hotel"
"Really are you almost in Dallas"?
"Another day driving, I can't wait to see you Sanda"
"Well I can't wait to see the place, you two are buying. I want to move in as soon as possible, I need this"
"Well living with two guys will be a treat"
Sanda laughed, "3 guys remember Tegan is coming"
"Right how is he"?
"Sitting here on my George Strait pillow"
"You still have that thing"?
"Yeah I love it"
"I have to buy you one with me, and Luke now that would be special"
"It would where is Luke"?
"Oh laying on the bed we both are going to turn in soon"
"Yeah Right"
"Angel really"
"Sorry but have fun Reid your on a road trip remember"
"Sanda see you soon, I will call you tomorrow. Luke is saying hi, sweet dreams"
"You too be good to each other"
"Oh we are I love my guy"
"Yeah it only took him long enough to figure out you were his guy"
"Sanda that is over he knows now"
"That is good, bye I better let you go"
"Hugs to you all"
Sanda smiled as she hung up, Reid closed his cell phone.
Luke leaned over, "Sanda can't wait to see you Reid"
"And you she loves you too"
"Yeah but she is a little upset with me over Noah"
"Well yeah , but that is over right"
"Noah who"?
Reid smiled , "Great answer what you saw in that guy I will never know". Reid pulled his towel off making Luke smile, as Reid grabbed Luke's towel, and pulled it off, as he got in bed beside Luke. They laid in each others arms for the longest time, but than Luke whispered, "I owe you a body rub"
"I was kidding"
"No way Doc, I owe you". He jumped out of bed , Reid whistled as he walked to get some oil out of his bag. He jumped on the bed, and poured some on Reid's chest, and started to move his hands over him. Reid shut his eyes the feel of Luke's hands was relaxing him, but also getting him worked up. Luke moved down his body making Reid jump but Luke whispered, "Relax, and enjoy". Reid smiled as he did just that.
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Post by Sanda on Nov 15, 2011 16:21:40 GMT -6
Cute update Jessie. I love the friendship between Sanda and Reid. I love that Reid was teasing me about my George Strait pillow and that he was going to buy me a new one with him and Luke on it.
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Post by melindajo2000 on Nov 15, 2011 17:27:25 GMT -6
love the update... the conversation seemed real with real feelings you are getting to be a real pro, good job
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Post by Sanda on Dec 21, 2011 0:30:08 GMT -6
Jessie, I hope you update this awesome story again soon. I so wish that Reid and Luke were going to be on the new Dallas next year.
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Post by jessie on Dec 21, 2011 13:09:25 GMT -6
Chapter 8
Reid was sleeping Luke was looking out the window. It was 1 week before Christmas, Luke was missing his family a little but there was no where else he wanted to be. He smiled as he saw snow coming down, he jumped on the bed waking Reid.
"Reid wake up it is snowing"
"What time is it"?
"4am wake up come look"
"Luke my God are you a child, snow makes you this excited"
"Yes it is snowing, it is starting to look a lot like Christmas" Reid got up looking out the window. "Wow it is coming down hard this is wild"
Luke wrapped his arms around Reid, "I love Christmas, this will be our first Christmas together"
"Yeah this will be my best Christmas ever" Luke smiled, "Lets go outside, just for a few minutes"
"Luke really"
"Please"
Reid smiled as he got dressed, and so did Luke. They grabbed their coats, and put on their shoes, and went outside. Luke smiled, "I love snow it is so beautiful". Reid laughed as Luke's hair was covered in no time. Reid was not as excited but he loved that it made Luke so happy. Reid bent down grabbing enough snow to make a snow ball, and threw it at Luke. Luke laughed doing the same, they were laughing. Reid whispered, "Be quiet people are sleeping, we should be too"
"Reid do you know how much I love you"?
"I think I do Richie Rich"
"I was a fool, but my heart was always with you, I want you to know that"
Reid touched his lips, "Enough about the past, lets focus on the future, and our life together"
"We are going to be happy, I just know it"
"I think so to, I'm happy already, and we are not even settled yet"
"I hope one of the three houses are what we want"
"I'm sure one will be, we have to agree, and than Sanda can come move in with us"
"You really love Sanda Reid, she means a lot to you"
"Yes she does, she was there for me when I was pretty alone. She kept me focused, and she always was there when I needed someone. I was grumpy most of the time, but she never got sick of me. She along with Katie are my best friends, and they both think we are perfect together, so that makes everything just perfect"
"Reid what would you want for Christmas"?
"All I want for Christmas is to have you, and my friends, and our home, and all of us to be healthy" Reid smiled as Luke whispered, "All I want for Christmas is you".
"Lets go inside, I'm freezing Luke"
"I will warm you up" Reid laughed, "Come on I can't wait to see how" They both laugh as they walked back to their room, and went inside.
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Post by Sanda on Dec 21, 2011 16:52:08 GMT -6
Cute update Jessie. Reid and Luke are soo cute and adorable together in your story. OMG I think it would be soo sweet if Sanda and Tegan could join Reid and Luke in Dallas for Christmas before they all move into their new house together in Dallas. ;D I am just like Luke when it comes to seeing snow outdoors because we don't get to see it too often in San Antonio, TX. ;D
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Post by melindajo2000 on Dec 21, 2011 18:52:52 GMT -6
this was very sweet I especially like the end part, you really know how to close off a chapter
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Post by jessie on Dec 21, 2011 19:21:58 GMT -6
Thanks Melinda and Sanda glad you like the update. Sanda you gave me a idea. Hope you like this update. Chapter 9 Reid and Luke undressed, and got in bed, Luke snuggled close. Reid smiled, 'Oh your feet are cold keep them off of me" Luke whispered, "Oh warm them up for me than" Reid whispered, "I don't do feet" They both laugh as they kiss, than Luke whispered, "I'm not so tired are you"? "I am but what do you have in mind" Luke moved his hands down Reid's body making him moan. "Oh Luke don't you know that drives me crazy" Luke brought his lips over his, and they kiss, as Reid moved over Luke. They soon became one, as they couldn't keep their hands off each other. His arms wrapped around him, her tongue hungrily exploring his mouth, with each stroke he took , delving deeper within him, he could hear his soft moans of pleasure and his own passion brought them closer to the peak of fulfillment. Now, Luke, shuddered as his body was racked by fierce momentum of his own release. Passion fading slowly , they still clung tightly to each other. Reid collapsed laying his head on Luke's shoulder, both of them couldn't catch their breath. Luke whispered, "Now I'm tired" Reid whispered, "Richie Rich I love you" "Love you more" They both cling to each other, and before they knew it they fell asleep. It was 8am when Luke woke up, and got out of bed. He walked over to the bathroom but grabbed his cell phone first. He went inside calling Sanda's cell phone number. "Hello" "Hi Sanda it is Luke did I wake you"? "No I was up Tegan has a schedule, I had to get up to feed him" "Sanda I have a idea that I want to run by you" "What it is"? "Can you come to Dallas for Christmas, maybe Christmas Eve" "I could did you find your house already" "Well we see them tomorrow, but I want to give Reid the best Christmas present. I know Katie can't come she is having dinner with Chris's family, but I wonder if you can come. I know he would love to see you, and so would I" "I will talk to my parents, I'm not sure what they will think"? "Try but don't call Reid I want this to be a surprise for him" "Ok I will text you ok" "Sanda try, Reid deserves a wonderful Christmas after the year he had" "I will try, I would love to see you both" "Bring Tegan if you like, talk to you later" "Luke" "Yeah Sanda" "You and Reid are so great together, but I was so angry with you, when you pushed him away. I understand it is not my business, but I don't want to see him hurt ever again" "I will never hurt him Sanda, that is a promise" "I believe you Luke, I love you both" "We love you too" "Where is Reid now"? "Sleeping we had a long night guess what"? "What"? "It snowed last night, it was so beautiful" "Oh I rarely see snow, I wish I was there" "I wish you were too, but we will see you soon" "Bye Luke" "Bye Sanda" Luke hung up, he walked out looking at the bed. He walked over sitting beside Reid touching his face. "Reid" Reid opened his eyes, "Oh man not the snow again" "No it is 8am , I thought we should get going, I want to get to Dallas" "8am, I thought we would be on the road by 7" Luke laughed, "You needed some sleep" "Yeah someone woke me up at 4am to see snow, oh yeah it was you" "Sorry I love it" "And I love you" Reid touched his face, giving him a kiss. Reid got up, and walked to the bathroom, as Luke sat on the bed hoping his plan worked, he knew Reid would love to see his best friend again, and he wanted to give Reid the best Christmas present he ever had.
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Post by melindajo2000 on Dec 21, 2011 20:58:48 GMT -6
this was really good, I really am liking the direction you are taking this
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Post by Sanda on Dec 21, 2011 21:04:12 GMT -6
Cute update Jessie. I hope that Sanda's parents let her and Tegan come to Dallas to meet Luke and surprise Reid for Christmas.
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Post by jessie on Mar 30, 2012 20:34:40 GMT -6
Chapter 10
Luke was dressed sitting on the bed, that he made. Reid came out in his boxers, and Luke wanted to make love to him all over again, but they needed to get on the road. Reid was getting dressed Luke got their stuff ready, and they both left, and settled the bill. Reid got in the car, and said they were going to stop, at the first diner to get something to eat.
"Sure but can we find a deceit place so I can get some fresh fruit, and waffles"
"Oh you are to much Richie Rich"
"Reid do you think we will find a house right away?. It is almost Christmas, I want to get a tree, and decorate the house."
"Hopefully we will find one soon, but staying at a hotel wouldn't be so bad either"
"No we have to find a place, I have so many plans for our place. I want a big backyard, and a pool if we can find one"
"I just care about a nice space for Sanda and Tegan. I want a 50" flat screen TV, and a nice king size bed for us"
"I would think the kitchen would be on your list too"
"That is your thing Luke, I would have take out food every night"
"No take out you are going to have home cooking every night. I must say every Saturday we will have burgers, I have had burgers every Saturday since I was young. My Dad Holden is a burger freak, it drove my Mom nuts. "
"Burgers every Saturday I could handle that".
Luke smiled they drove into a diner, and went inside. Luke said he was going into the washroom to wash up for breakfast. Reid said he would order some fresh fruit, and waffles for him. Luke walked in, the waitress came over, and he ordered the food. She brought over 2 coffees, and said the food would be over shortly. Reid said OK, but he grabbed his cell phone, and called Sanda.
"Hello"
"Hey Angel, how are you doing"?
"OK how is the trip going"?
"Great can you believe it Luke chats more than you Angel"
"Reid you be nice or you will get no cookies, when I come to live with you both"
"Sorry just kidding, I can't wait to see you again, I'm so happy you are coming to live with us. Sanda I really love Luke, I never thought I would be this happy, but he is amazing. He was like a child last night when it snowed. He woke me up at 4am, we had to go out, and play in the snow"
"I would have paid to see that"
"I wanted to ask you something Sanda"?
'What Reid is something wrong"?
"No everything is right, this is going to be the best Christmas ever. I know your Parents normally take you away to visit family, but do you think they would mind if you spend it with me, and Luke. I want to make this the best Christmas ever, and I thought having you here with us , it would be a Christmas to remember"
"I will try Reid , I hope you find a house fast"
"Well I have one in mind my friend says it is the most amazing place. It has a furnished basement, a washroom, and a kitchen down there. I was thinking you would love to have your own space, but that doesn't mean you can't eat with us, I love Luke's cooking but don't tell him, I would love your home cooking, you spoil me, and you don't nag as bad as Luke about my bad eating habits"
"I will love to cook for you both"
"I better let you go before Luke comes back , but I will call you tonight. Can you ask your Parents, tell them we will take great care of their girl, and we will have them down for a visit, as soon as we all our settled"
"Love you Reid call me tonight, I will talk to my parents"
"Bye love you Angel"
"Love you to, take good care of Luke, I would be lost without you both"
"You won't lose us". Reid smiled as Sanda said goodbye, and they hung up. Luke walked over, and sat down, and Reid said he ordered the food. Luke smiled as they both sat , and talked , both of them were excited looking forward to their future together, and both of them were happy their friend Sanda was going to join them, and together they were going to be a family, and that sounded perfect to them.
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