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Post by jessie on Aug 17, 2011 16:22:12 GMT -6
Dallas Bound New Story for Sanda, Yes with Reid and Luke. Reid wanted to leave Oakdale after he had the almost near fatal accident on the train tracks. If it wasn't for the good Samaritan he would have been killed. His seatbelt got jammed, the man had a pocket knife, and helped him get loose just in time before a train smashed his car down the track. Reid still hears the sound of the train hitting the car, and he knew just how lucky he was. He also knew life was short, and it could end at any moment so he decided to make a life change , and return to his hometown Dallas. He thought at first Luke wouldn't go with him but he didn't really complain he said he would do anything for Reid. They had some complaints from Luke's family they thought Reid was being selfish. He wasn't he just had to get away from Oakdale but he knew he would miss his friends Katie, and Jacob but they could visit all the time. They were going to buy new stuff in Dallas so they sold or gave away most of their furniture, and only took their personal belongings with them. Reid and Luke were leaving Oakdale today , and were going to drive to Dallas, and stop at a hotel on the way. Luke and Reid were excited but they got emotional when they went to say goodbye to Luke's family, than Katie and Jacob. They were leaving they both were quiet for the first hour, but they started to talk, and they became excited about the change, and the start to their new lives together. "Reid what is Dallas like, I saw it when we first met, but not enough of it really"? "It is a great place to live but it gets hot real hot in the summer. I never did the nightlife much, but I'm sure that is cool too" "Is there a lot of cowboys there"? "Yeah pretty much but not so much in the city. Why are you looking forward to seeing the cowboys Richie Rich" "No but I wouldn't mind to see you in a cowboy outfit, and hat" "Oh you are bad I'm driving Luke Snyder" "I know but I can't wait to see our new place. I never traveled much as a child so this is a big change for me" "I know it was hard leaving your family, but you can visit, and they can to. I wouldn't mind Faith, Natalie and Ethan coming for a few weeks, and of course Katie and Jacob" "Do you think Sanda was really serious she said she would move to Dallas if we moved there"? "I think she would we could get a big place she could have the basement" "That would be cool but her Parents wouldn't let her leave San Antonio would they"? "I think they know she would be safe, maybe she needs a change beside she could maybe be my secretary at my new Clinic" "That is exciting your opening up your own Clinic, that is scary, and exciting" "I know and I'm grateful your willing to help out until I'm on my feet, and running" "Well I can keep my eyes on my Guy, beside you have to show me around Dallas" "I can't wait" They both smile as they continued driving.
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Post by melindajo2000 on Aug 17, 2011 21:26:22 GMT -6
great start to your new story, can't wait to see where this is going!
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Post by Sanda on Aug 17, 2011 22:15:46 GMT -6
Great start to your new story Jessie. I can't wait to see where this is going. Reid is absolutely right that it is hot in Dallas, TX in the summer. I so wish that Reid and Luke were going to be on the new Dallas TV show next year. I hope that my parents will be ok with me wanting move to Dallas with Reid and Luke.
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Post by jessie on Aug 20, 2011 0:37:11 GMT -6
Chapter 2
Reid was driving he was starving he smiled at Luke. "I'm stopping over for a burger, and fries , don't you say a word"
"You are hungry already we had a bagel 2 hours ago"
"A bagel do I look like Jacob, I'm a man not a child the bagel didn't fill me up"
Luke laughed, "Fine stop wherever you want as long as it is clean"
"No I thought we can stop somewhere gross really Luke"
"You get so moody when your hungry lover"
"Stop or we will be stopping at a hotel, and I'm not ready for that yet, I want to get at least half way there before we pull over"
"But we can eat"?
"Yeah are you kidding"
Luke was laughing Reid smiled, Luke whispered, "I would rather the hotel"
"Stop I'm going for my burger, don't distract me"
"Reid are you scared moving back to Dallas"?
"Scared why would I be scared Luke"?
"The change we have to find a place, it is scary leaving Oakdale and starting fresh"
"I'm looking forward to it, I hope you are too"
"Yes the change will be nice, but I want a beautiful house. It is painted white, it is big, and it has a huge backyard, and 3 floors, and a huge pool, that we can go for a swim after a hard days work."
"Wow we are going to be living good in Dallas"
Luke smiled, "Yeah I have money, I'm still going to do business from home until I get a office in Dallas. You are a Surgeon we can afford it, and if Sanda comes to live with us we need to give her some space, she might want to entertain without us being in the way"
"Sanda entertain what are you talking about"?
"A boyfriend Reid she is a beautiful young Lady she is single. I don't get it actually but I think she is shy. You can invite some cute Doctor friends over, and she might like one"
"Stop she hasn't arrived, and your setting her up already"
"You act like her big Brother be cool Reid"
"Stop being a romantic, well be romantic in bed, but not all the time"
"Oh Reid you are to much, you love when I'm romantic"
"No naughty but romantic is cool too, I love when you massage my back, but you won't rub my feet that isn't cool"
"I don't touch feet gross"
"Not even the guy you love, I adore foot rubs"
"Well you have two hands go for it"
Reid was laughing, "You are not nice Richie Rich".
Reid pulled into a diner, and Luke smiled, "Burger Joint, wow nice place Reid"
"What it has Burger in the name, and I want a burger so what is the problem"?
"Lets hope we are ok, but lets go in". They walked in, the waitress told them to sit wherever they wanted. Luke and Reid sat in a booth, and they grabbed the menu. Reid smiled, "Oh Double burger with bacon , swiss cheese , onions , pickles and mayo , this is good"
"Oh God Reid you will be sorry you will be sick for sure"
"Not me Richie Rich"
The waitress walked over, Reid said he wanted the special burger, and Luke laughed and went for it ordering the same. They ordered two Pepsi, the waitress said she would bring them right over.
Reid smiled, "You are going for the Special Burger"
"Yeah I'm game but if I'm sick it is your fault"
"Why I didn't say you had to get what I'm having". Luke whispered, "Well I wanted what your having, I trust my Guy". Reid smiled as they both talked, and laughed, and waited for their food.
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Post by Sanda on Aug 20, 2011 1:14:29 GMT -6
Cute update Jessie. OMG Reid is something else already wanting to pull over and eat after they had breakfast 2 hours earlier. Reid and Luke are soo cute and adorable together in this story. I hope that Sanda does come to live with them in Dallas. I LOVE the house that Luke wants to get for them to live in in Dallas. ;D
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Post by melindajo2000 on Sept 5, 2011 12:37:26 GMT -6
sorry I missed this awesome chapter! loved the bantering, very well written
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Post by jessie on Oct 1, 2011 16:47:15 GMT -6
Chapter 3
Reid and Luke finished eating, they paid, and tipped the waitress. They went out getting into the car, and drove off. Luke smiled, "That burger was great but I ate to much"
"Well I told you not to try to keep up with me. Well you can't Luke, I could have went for another one"
"Luke smiled, "I bet you could, you have a bottomless pit stomach"
"Yeah do you want to stop for a donut, I didn't have dessert"
"Oh God stop Reid Oliver, I will be sick". Reid smiled, "Fine will will wait".
Luke whispered, "Are we there yet"?
"No don't you are not Jacob, he does that to me all the time"
"I'm kidding when are we stopping at a Motel for a rest"?
"Luke you are not driving, I am"
"I know but I have to burn off my calories, I have a image to upkeep"
"Oh man you are something Pretty Boy"
"Pretty boy, nice Reid"
Reid smiled, "We will stop at a Hotel when it gets dark"?
"Don't stop at some creepy Norman Bates Hotel"?
"Why he was cool, he was just a guy trying to make a living"
"Reid Oliver he killed his Mom, and left her in a room, and dressed like her killing his guests"
"A movie Snyder calm down beside I wouldn't let anyone hurt my guy"
"Well you say that now but you would save yourself, and I would be a goner"
Reid smiled, " Probably but don't worry about it"
Luke laughed, "I can't believe we are on our way to Dallas. We are starting over, I know we will be happy , maybe we needed a break from Oakdale"
"Yeah I will miss Jacob, and Katie, but I'm happy to move back to Dallas"
"I will miss my family Reid, I know they were not nice to you"
"I understood they didn't like me, but nothing was going to keep me from you"
Luke smiled, "You have the most beautiful smile, we don't see it enough"
"Well I'm a moody guy can't help it"
"Yeah my Moody Guy, that is you"
Reid smiled, "6 months ago, I never thought we would be together."
"I know I pushed you away, but I wanted you from the first moment, I met you"
"Really the first moment"
"Actually I wanted to kill you, and Kiss you, yeah I had it bad"
"I treated you badly, that is funny"
"No it wasn't Reid, I had many sleepless nights thinking about you"
"Well you deserved it pining over Noah, what were you thinking"?
"Well I didn't know what to do"
"Well lets forget about it now, we are happy right"
"Yeah you bet"
Luke reached over putting his hand on Reid leg. "You sure you want to wait until tonight to get a hotel". Reid smiled, "Stop we will have a accident"
"Well I kind of can't wait, can you"? Reid saw a motel, he drove in, and smiled, "You want to play Mr. Snyder"
"Yeah all afternoon". Reid kissed Luke, and got out of the car to get a room.
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Post by melindajo2000 on Oct 1, 2011 17:12:27 GMT -6
this was a cute chapter, loved all the playful teasing and bantering. you write conversations so well good job with this
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Post by Sanda on Oct 1, 2011 17:19:13 GMT -6
Cute update Jessie. Reid and Luke are so cute and adorable together in this chapter. I Loved the playful teasing and banter you wrote between Reid and Luke as well in this chapter. Please update this awesome story soon. ;D
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Post by jessie on Oct 2, 2011 21:56:11 GMT -6
Chapter 4
Reid and Luke went to their room, Reid smiled, "Well it isn't the greatest but it will do". Luke shut, and locked the door walking over wrapping his arms around Reid.
"Slowdown Luke"
"Slowdown, no way". Luke pushed Reid on the bed, jumping on the bed beside him bringing his lips over his. Reid kissed him back, but laughed, "Oh man you are in heat"
"Yeah I am, and you are to"
Reid put his hand on Luke's cheek, "I can't believe you chose me Luke"
Luke leaned on his chest, "I love you, don't you get that yet"?
"Well it took you long enough to admit it Luke"
"I know but I finally did, and I told you I wanted you from the first moment, I saw you"
"You know life won't be easy, but together we will be fine"
"Well we have people who love us, and Sanda is going to take care of us too"
"She will spoil us won't she"
"You know she will but that will be nice having her near by"
"Luke what are you waiting for". Luke smiled, "Oh who is in heat now"? Luke brought his lips over his. He sat up taking off his shirt while Reid watched. Luke put his hands to Reid's chest, and unbuttoned his shirt bringing his lips over his chest. Reid shut his eyes Luke was driving him crazy. Luke got up , so did Reid as they completely undressed, and got in bed pulling the blankets over them. Luke moved close as they became one, they both gave themselves completely to each other. They came to their release as Reid smiled, "OMG Luke that was amazing"
"Yeah we needed that". He sat up giving Reid a massage as he brought his lips to his neck. "Oh Reid what would I do without you"? Reid turned around knocking Luke on his back as he raised above him bringing his lips down Luke's chest, and than to his mouth. They both made love again, and laid in each others arms. Luke whispered, "Maybe we can just snuggle for 1 hour, than get back on the road"
"Yeah I could use some rest you wore me out". Luke smiled as he snuggled close. Reid shut his eyes, but laughed, "OMG Luke your not tired yet"?
"What"?
"Your rubbing your feet up my leg, that is grossing me out"?
"I'm not touching your leg"?
"Shut up you are so". Luke pulled down the blanket seeing a bug, Luke jumped up yelling. Reid practically fell off the bed, he jumped up jumping up, and down.
"OMG where is it"?
"There"
"Oh God it touched me"
"It is a bug" Luke was laughing.
"It is a big bug I hate bugs OMG"
Luke was laughing as Reid ran into the bathroom. "I'm taking a shower, than getting out here. OMG Luke the towels are gross, I can't"
Luke and Reid dressed, and ran out to the car. They already paid for the room, Reid got in the car. "That was so gross"
"Yeah he was in bed with us the whole time"
"What"?
"Well you know"?
"Be quiet Luke stop or I will be sick"
"I bet we freaked him out"
"Luke if that thing touched your leg you would be going crazy right now"
"Yeah I'm kind of angry he was getting fresh with my guy"
"You are sick Richie Rich". They both laugh as they drove off. Reid looked over, "I swear if you didn't get all hot, and bothered, this would have never happened"
"I'm glad it happened, well Mr. Roach had to ruin everything"
"Roach no way"
"I think so Reid calm down, you didn't bring him with you in your pants did you"?
Reid looked at him he drove off the highway, and went to the side of the road. He got out of the car jumping up, and down, Luke couldn't stop laughing he was never going to let Reid live this down as long as he lived.
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Post by melindajo2000 on Oct 2, 2011 22:32:32 GMT -6
this was awesome, I am happy that Reid and Luke are so happy together, and I love the mention of Sanda...good job
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Post by Sanda on Oct 3, 2011 0:16:10 GMT -6
OMG Jessie, I LOVED this chapter so much. I LOVED that Mr. Roach messed up their romantic time at the motel. One time I stayed at motel their was a rat in my room that eat my food. I LOVED that Reid and Luke were talking about me taking care of them in this chapter.
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Post by jessie on Oct 4, 2011 8:09:08 GMT -6
Chapter 5
Reid got in the car, and looked at Luke, "Stop laughing, and no more jokes. I'm grossed out, and yes I'm a baby when it comes to bugs, I hate them especially spiders, and whatever that thing was on my leg pissed me off." Reid started the car Luke looked out the window he was holding in his laughter, and Reid knew it.
"Luke it isn't funny"
"It is sort of a tough guy like you afraid of a little bug"
"Roach, and yes I was afraid, it is gross"
"OK fine it was gross but your reaction was priceless"
"Stop it isn't funny"
"OK I'm going to be serious, no more laughing, I'm sorry". They were driving when Luke started up again making Reid laugh. "You are going to text Katie, and tell Sanda, and I'm never going to live this down"
"Probably , I have to tell someone"
"Payback is sweet Luke, your day will come"
"Oh come on just joking around". Reid smiled, "Maybe we should drive right though, and forget another hotel or Motel"
"No we have to stop we can't go through the night beside I like my alone time with you"
"Really we were not alone that thing will forever know what we did". Luke smiled, "Thank God he can't tell anyone"
"Yeah I wonder who his next visitor will be. Can you imagine a lady having that thing run up her leg"
"Yeah but you were more funny, you were priceless, I swear I should have taped it, we would have won on America's funniest videos"
"Oh funny Luke, you are lucky you didn't tape it"
"Can I call Sanda"?
"Now"?
"Yeah just to say we are on our way"
"You just want to tell her about Mr. Roach Luke"
"No really I would love to hear her voice"
"Me too"
Luke dialed Sanda's number Frank answered, and put Sanda on the phone.
"Hey Luke"
"Hey Angel guess what we on our way to Dallas"?
"I was wondering if you left, how is the trip , I bet long. Reid gets so cranky, and hungry, how is he"? Luke put the phone to Reid's eat, "Hey Sanda"
"You driving"?
"Yeah nice to hear your voice'
"You to Reid"
Luke pulled the phone back, 'So you really are coming to Dallas once we find our place"?
"Yeah if you want me"
"Like we wouldn't we need someone to help us, and take care of us"
"I can't wait to see you guys again"
"Guess what Sanda"
Reid smiled, "I knew it Luke"
"We had a bit of a fright today, well Reid did. A roach crawled up his leg at a Motel we were staying at, you had to see him freak out"
"Oh my poor baby, I would have freaked out to. I once had a rat in my Motel room, it ate my food
"A rat" Reid laughed, "Oh God I would have died"
"Me too" Luke smiled, "When we get to Dallas we will call you"
"Drive safely, and don't forget to call, and be nice to each other"
"We will say hi to your family"
"I will bye Luke, give Reid a big kiss for me"
"I will". Luke hung up, "She is real special, and so sweet"
"Yeah she is you had to tell her about Mr. Roach"
"She felt bad for you, but a rat that would have been worse"
"Ok stop I'm going to freak out again". Luke smiled, "Oh man I found out what bothers Reid Oliver, this is so fun". Reid smiled, "I know what Luke Snyder doesn't like so he better stop teasing me, or I will get 2 rooms, at the next motel"
"You wouldn't dare"
"Try me I'm cranky remember that". They both smile as they continued driving.
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Post by melindajo2000 on Oct 4, 2011 10:00:38 GMT -6
Aw I feel bad for Reid, Luke is joking but Reid is embarrassed glad Sanda didn't make fun of him. great update, awesome writing~
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Post by Sanda on Oct 4, 2011 12:37:06 GMT -6
Cute update Jessie. I LOVE the friendship between Reid, Luke, and Sanda in this chapter. Reid, Luke, and Sanda are so cute adorable together in this chapter. I LOVE Luke teasing Reid about the bug. I am so glad you did have me make fun of Reid and roach. Reid and Luke should have reported the bug to the manager at the front desk before they left. I actually stayed in a motel where their was a rat in my room that ate my food in the middle of the night. my dad witnessed the rat eating the food.
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