A night of fun that went all wrong.

[jessie]

New story with Jessie, Melinda and Sanda. Hope you like this one, it is different.

Chapter 1

Sanda, Jessie , Melinda and Susie were best friends since grade 3. They lived in New York City, Manhattan. They loved the City life, and they were excited when they all moved into a condo . It had four rooms, a balcony, and it was absolutely beautiful. The view from their balcony was awesome. They saved up for years, and they were so excited that they put a big down payment down on the Condo, and they were doing really well. Sanda was a Veterinarian, she loved her animals, she had a cat Tegan. Jessie was a writer for a small magazine, her dream was to write for a big time magazine, and write a book one day. Melinda was a Child psychologist, she loved it. She loved helping young children, and their families. She especially worked with young autistic children. Susie was a singer she only worked at a bar right now, but she was really good. She was hoping someday she would get a big time music producer coming into the bar, and sign her to a record deal.

It was Friday night, they all were off work, and getting ready for a night on the town. Susie had to sing at the bar, so they decided to go see her, and after they could have a few drinks. They would take a cab, none of them wanted to take a chance drinking, and driving. They were all dressed, they called a cab, and left the condo. They got in, they all were in such a wonderful mood. They got to the bar, and Susie said she had to go get ready for her stage act. They got a booth at the front so they could see her. Sanda ordered a Margareta, Melinda ordered a glass of white wine, and Jessie loved her Singapore sling. They were talking, they decided to order some wings after Susie was finished singing. They heard the owner say Susie's name, they all clapped when she started to sing. It was 1 hour later Susie came to the table, and sat down.

"What do you think am I getting better"?

"You have always been amazing, but that was awesome tonight". Jessie smiled

They were talking when Alex walked over to the table. Susie hated him, and the stories she told Melinda, Sanda and Jessie they didn't like him either. He asked if he could join them but Susie spoke up.

"No we are having a girls night out sorry"

"Oh you are that way"?

"OMG Alex we are friends go away please"

"You are a stuck up little witch Suzie"

"You know it Alex, I won't say what you are"

Alex was mad he stormed away from the table, not before saying some choice words. Sanda was scared, "OMG he seems crazy, maybe you should be careful around him Suzie"

"I'm not afraid of him, but he is crazy"

They all smiled than they ordered some wings, and other appetizers. They were listening to the other groups, and they even danced to a couple of songs. They all wanted a fun evening, but none of them realized, this night was going to take a turn for the worst, and one of the ladies, may never be seen again.

To be continued.

[Sanda]

Great start to your new story Jessie. OMG Alex is awful.

[melindajo2000]

Great start, the ending line was spooky, I really like this already and hope you update soon!

[jessie]

Chapter 2

They were dancing they finished their dinner, and were talking. Melinda and Sanda wanted to go home, but Suzie asked if they could stay until she did her next act? It wouldn't be until 12, than they could leave at 1am. They were exhausted, but they said they would. Suzie got up walking back stage, while Jessie , Melinda, and Sanda ordered another drink. It was 1/2 hour later, Suzie came to the table she had changed, but she was so upset.

"Suzie what is wrong"?

"Someone got into my locker, and riped up my new dress. I have to wear this, I'm so mad"

"Who would do that"?

"I don't know but I bet Alex he is so sick"

"Maybe but it could be someone else right"?

"It could but after how he acted today, I'm betting him"

"Me too". Jessie said.

"If you guys are tired go home, I will get a cab later"

"No we are tired, but we will stay for you"

"Why don't you go, I will call when I'm leaving one of you can meet me at the front door of our condo building"?

Sanda and Melinda smiled, "That sounds great we are exhausted, Jessie you are coming with us too right"?

"Yeah but Suzie, I don't like the idea of leaving you here"

"I'm a big girl if Alex bothers me, I'm calling the cops"

"I will stay if you want , Melinda and Sanda can go home"

"Jessie stop go home, I'm fine, I might be here until 2am"

They got up paid for their drinks, gave Suzie a kiss, and were leaving. They walked to the back, and saw Alex he waved at them, and they got the creeps. They looked at Suzie she smiled, and waved, than they left. They got a cab, but they all were a little uneasy leaving her, but they knew she would be ok at the Bar. She always got one of the guys to walk her to the cab or her car after. They got home, Melinda and Sanda went to change. Jessie called Suzie's cell phone, and she answered.

"We are home Suzie you ok"?

"I'm fine, I will call when I'm leaving. Love you guys, don't worry about me. Do you have to work tomorrow"?

"No so call I will come down to meet you at the door"

"Love you Jessie"

"Suzie don't talk to Alex don't provoke him anymore. He seems really creepy, I don't want you hurt"

"Ok I will never talk to him again"

"Bye". They both hung up Jessie walked to the couch sitting down.

Sanda walked out in her pajamas and housecoat sitting beside Jessie.

"You ok Jess"?

"Yeah I have a bad feeling about that Alex guy. I should have stayed with her"

"She is fine she told us about Alex 1 month ago. He hasn't done anything yet, so he won't now"

"Didn't you see the look he gave us all"?

"Yeah"

"It was evil"

Melinda walked into the living room. "Stop with the evil Jessie, he is just a man that can't take no for a answer"

Melinda smiled, "Anyone want a tea before bed"?

"Me" Sanda said as she got up going into the kitchen with Sanda. Jessie got up, and followed them.

[melindajo2000]

I have a bad feeling about Alex. The girls should have waited. good job Jessie

[Sanda]

Great update Jessie. I have a bad feeling about Alex. I agree that the girls should have stayed with Suzie.

[jessie]

Chapter 3

Sanda, Melinda and Jessie were talking, but they were trying to be positive, but they all were worried about Suzie. Sanda and Melinda had to work in the morning, so Jessie said she would stay up waiting for the call from Suzie. They hugged Jessie, and went to bed. Jessie was sitting on the couch, she put the TV on, and was flipping channels. It was midnight, and all she got was crime shows. She got the chills watching Criminal Minds, she loved the show, but it was about a rapist killer. She turned the TV off, she held her cell, and decided to call Suzie.

"Hello"

"Suzie are you ok"?

"Jessie I'm fine, I'm going on stage now, I will be another 1 1/2hour maybe 2. Why don't you sleep, I will call you will wake up"

"Suzie I'm so sorry we all are we should have stayed"

"You guys are creeping me out, Ben is going to walk me to my car. You will meet me at the door, you will see me drive in. I'm fine Jess stop please"

"Sorry I'm scared for you"

"I love you three but you all worry to much. I'm a big girl, if that creep comes near me he will be walking funny for a year". Jessie smiled, "You would kick him where the sun don't shine wouldn't you"

"You bet girl"

"Ok I will let you go, but call"

"I will" Jessie hung up, and laid her head on the pillow, deleting some messages off her phone. It was 1/2hour later, she fell asleep, waiting for the phone call.

Suzie finished her number at 1:30, and went to change in the dressing room. She put her stuff in her bag, and walked up to the front. She walked over to Ben, "Can you walk me to the car"?

"Yeah 10 minutes, wait don't go" Ben walked over talking to a man that was getting out of hand at the bar. Suzie looked at her watch, and decided to run to the car, she didn't want to wait. She was walking she was glad she didn't see Alex, she knew he left the bar. She pulled out her cell phone, and pushed Jessie cell number.

It was the 2nd ring when Jessie answered".

"Hello"

"Jess I'm walking to my car, I will be there in 15 minutes, I will call when I turn down the street ok"

Jessie smiled, but she suddenly heard Suzie scream. Jessie yelled, "Suzie what is wrong"? She heard Suzie struggling with someone, and she kept screaming Suzie's name. She heard breathing on the phone, and Jessie froze.

"Suzie"

"No she can't come to the phone, she should have known better not to walk to her car alone"

"Don't you hurt her, I beg you"

"Oh she won't be hurting for long Sweetie, we have to go"

"No please put Suzie on the phone"?

The phone went dead, Jessie grabbed the home phone calling 911. She was frantic, Melinda and Sanda came running out. Jessie explained everything to the 911 operator, they said they were sending a car over to the Bar, and to their place. Jessie hung up, and started to cry.

"What is going on Jessie"? Melinda grabbed her, trying to get Jessie to calm down.

" I told her to be careful, he got her, he has Suzie".

[melindajo2000]

great update, poor Suzie I know Jessie Sanda and Melinda will be devestated if something bad happens to her

[Sanda]

Great update Jessie. I hope that Suzie is going to be OK.

[jessie]

Chapter 4

Melinda , Jessie and Sanda were frantic, but they kept calling Suzie's cell phone, but no one answered. They heard knocking at their door, Sanda ran over asking who it was?

"The Police"

Sanda opened the door, 2 officers were standing there. They showed their badges, "I'm Detective Olivia Benson, and this is my Partner, Detective Elliot Stabler". Sanda shook their hand, and they went inside. Jessie and Melinda jumped up, "Have you found Suzie"?

"We have Detectives over at the Club where she works. We haven't heard back from them, but we need to ask you a few questions"

"Questions our friend is missing he kidnapped her, he could be raping or killing her this moment". Melinda yelled.

Elliott walked over to her, "I understand your upset, but we need to know why someone would do this to Suzie"

Jessie sat down, "We left her we never should have left her."

Olivia sat beside her, "Someone was harassing her."

"Yes this guy named Alex, he just said stuff but it was him I know it"

"OK we will check him out, but what is his last name"?

"I don't know Suzie never said"

"OK that is fine if he frequented the bar a lot, someone might know"

"Please help her she is our friend, she must be so scared". Sanda started to cry, Melinda walked over hugging her. Jessie put her hands over her face, Olivia and Elliott looked at each other. They knew it might be possible that Suzie might be already dead, or being violated somewhere, but it might be to late for her. They didn't say that to the girls, they took all the information, and was about to leave. Olivia answered her cell phone, "Detective Benson"

"Olivia it is Fin"

"Hey any news"?

"Yeah it isn't good"

"What do you mean Fin"?

"Olivia she is dead they found her 2 stores down behind a dumpster. She probably was raped, and stabbed to death, they are collecting evidence, she will be brought into the Medical Examiner's office in a few moments"

"Thanks Fin"

"Olivia I hate this job, why do we do it"?

"I don't know Fin, see you at the Office". Olivia hung up she turned, they all knew by her face, something bad happened. Sanda started to scream, Melinda froze but she walked over.

"Please tell me Suzie is OK, she is in the hospital , we have to go to her"

"I'm sorry Melinda she is not at the hospital, she is being taken to the Medical Examiner's office. She was murdered, I'm so sorry".

Sanda fell to her knee's, Melinda fainted Elliott grabbed her carrying her to the couch. Jessie was in a trance Olivia didn't know who to go to Sanda, or Jessie. She knelt down touching Sanda's face. "I promise you we will find this animal, and he will pay"

"We left her, we left her".

Jessie whispered, "This is a dream, this can't be real". Elliott told Olivia to call for help the three of them had to go to the hospital they were in shock. Olivia called for help as she got Sanda off the floor sitting her down. Melinda was coming too but she saw Elliott sitting beside her touching her shoulder. She cried out because she wished it was a dream, but she knew it wasn't she knew none of them would be the same, and she missed her friend so much already.

[melindajo2000]

that is sad I know the girls are going to be devestated, I hope nothing bad happens to them.. love this story

[Sanda]

Sad update Jesssie. OMG Sanda, Melinda, and Jessie are going to have a hard time dealing with Suzie's death.

[jessie]

Chapter 5

The girls were taken to the hospital, Olivia, and Elliott drove over to make sure they were OK.

Olivia asked one of the Nurses how they were?

" I will get the Doctor do you have to interview them some more"?

"Not right now we are just worried"

"Just a minute I will get Dr. Peters" The Nurse walked away, Olivia sat down, and Elliott sat beside her.

"Elliott do you ever want to walk away from this job"?

Elliott touched her hand, 'Everyday, but when you save just one person I know I'm in the job, I have to be in"

"She was so young, she was trying to make a living, she leaves her job only to be raped, and murdered, is that fair"

"No the guy is sick, but we don't know if it is the guy that was stalking her"

"Really we seen this before, I know this guy is the one, and I'm going to bring him down Elliott"

"We both will Olivia"

"Yeah of course". Dr. Peters walked out, and walked over to them.

"Hi your here for Melinda, Sanda, and Jessie"?

"Yes we were with them when they got the news about the death of their roommate."

"They all are in shock, I think I'm going to keep them overnight, I want to make sure they are OK before I release them."

"That is good maybe we will come by tomorrow morning to talk to them again"

"That would be best, I'm am going to put them in the same room, I think that would make them more comfortable. I'm worried that the person who murdered their friend may hurt them so I am putting a guard outside their room"

Elliott gave him his card.

"Please give the guard my card, I want a call if anything comes up that we have to worry about"

"I will but they will be safe for sure"

Olivia, and Elliott left as Dr. Peters went back to Jessie, Melinda, and Sanda to tell them they had to spend the night.

Elliott, and Olivia left, and went over to the Coroners office to see when the autopsy was going to be performed. They went inside, and the Coroner came out she was talking to them, and she said the results should be ready tomorrow afternoon.

Olivia, and Elliott left, and were going home they were exhausted, Elliott dropped Olivia at her building, and left. Olivia went upstairs, she locked the door to her apartment, and leaned against it. She shut her eyes, she remembered her Friend Lisa, she was her best friend in University. They were roommates, and she remembered how they were out at a bar one night, and Lisa wanted to stay, and she wanted to go home, and study. She knew leaving her would be a mistake but she did, and to this day she would never forgive herself. She remembered waking up for classes, and noticed Lisa never came home. Lisa loved to party but she always came home. Olivia was worried but she knew Lisa was OK she must have stayed at a friends house or she met someone. She hoped she didn't meet some creep, but Lisa was a strong person she would never let someone take advantage of her. Olivia grabbed her books, and purse, and left to go to classes. She remembered coming back to the dorm , and she was greeted by two Officers, and they told her Lisa was murdered, and Olivia froze she couldn't believe what she was hearing. She went into shock, she hated herself, and she hated Lisa for allowing this to happen. If she only came home, and not put herself in harms way. It took her years to forgive Lisa, but she never forgave herself so she knew Melinda, Jessie, and Sanda had a long road ahead of them she only hoped they would not blame themselves but she knew they would.

[Sanda]

Great but sad update Jessie. Poor Sanda, Melinda, and Jessie having to daal with the death of their friend Suzie.

[melindajo2000]

good chapter i enjoyed this a lot