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Post by Sanda on Aug 28, 2011 16:21:50 GMT -6
Great update, I'm glad Noah was arrested, and I hope Luke and Reid will be ok now. I think he should delete the phone number from his Iphone in front of Reid. Noah was a idiot, he should pay for being so violent. Great story glad you updated, the friendship between Sanda, and Reid is cute. Jessie, thank you so much for your awesome comments about the lastest chapter of my story. I have plans for Luke to delete Noah's number out of his IPhone in the next chapter. I couldn't stand Noah on the show at all. Reid was so much better for Luke instead of Noah.
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Post by Sanda on Sept 1, 2011 16:58:15 GMT -6
Reid and Luke reconcile. ;D
Chapter 11
Reid and Luke are standing on the porch staring at each other. Reid smiles at Luke and whispers,"Richie Rich we better kiss and make up or Sanda is going to come out here and kill the both of us."
Luke smiles,"Sanda, isn't going to kill either one of us becuase she loves the both of us so much."
Reid smiles,"Yes she does love us both so much Richie Richie."
Reid grabs Luke's hand and walks them over to the porch swing. Reid sits down and pulls Luke into his lap and kisses him passionately. Reid and Luke are touching foreheads when Reid smiles and whispers,"Richie Rich, I love you soo much. I would never have forgiven myself if Noah would have hurt you, Ethan, Natalie or Jacob. I am so angry at Noah for hurting Sanda. She didn't deserve to be hit in the face by Noah."
Luke whispers,"Sexy doc, I love you more. You are right Sexy Doc Sanda didn't deserve to be hit in the face by Noah. I can't believe that Noah hurt Sanda either. Sexy doc, is Sanda really going be ok?'
"Yes, Richie Rich Sanda is really going to be ok. We have to wake her up every two hours tonight to make sure that she doesn't have a concussion."
"Sexy doc, I am so grateful that you were here to take of Sanda after Noah hit her."
"Richie Rich, Jacob is such a sweet boy. He helped me take care of Sanda after Noah hit her. Jacob let me and Sanda both barrow his teddy bear so we wouldn't be so sad and lonely when you were gone after our fight. Sanda and Jacob both took excellent care of me when you weren't here after our fight. Richie Rich, we need to something really special for Sanda and her amazing parents Frank and Carol since they helped us out so much with Noah tonight."
"Yes, Sexy Doc we need to do something really special for Sanda, Frank, and Carol."
" Richie Rich, I need you to do something for me."
"Yes Sexy doc, I will do anything you ask of me."
"Richie Rich, I need you to take out your IPhone and remove Noah's number from your IPhone."
Luke smiles,"It will be my pleasure to remove Noah's number out of my IPhone after what he did to Sanda this evening. I never want to see or speak to Noah ever again. I hope that Margo and Jack throw the book at him."
Luke pulls his IPhone out of his pocket and delete's Noah's number out of it in front of Reid.
Reid grabs Luke's hand and whispers,"Richie Rich, I am so proud of you for removing Noah's number out of your IPhone."
Luke smiles,"Sexy Doc, I am so sorry that I called you stupid earlier tonight when you found Noah's number in my IPhone. I hope you forgive me for calling you stupid."
"Richie Rich, I forgive you. We both said somethings that we should haven't said earlier because we were both angry at the time. We shouldn't have been arguing so loudly for our neighbors to overhear our arguiment."
Luke laughes,"Sexy Doc, I don't like fighting with you but making up with you is so much fun."
"Yes, Richie Rich I agree that making up is so much fun. I love our wonderful family and friends inside our home but you are my life and my home. I don't want to ever have to wake up alone in the morning or fall sleep without you lying next me in our bed every night."
"I feel the same way Sexy Doc. I love you so much Sexy Doc."
"I love you more Rich Richie."
Reid and Luke are both crying. They both wipe the tears away from each other eyes as Reid grabs Luke and kisses him passionately when the front door opens, Ethan, Natalie, Jacob come out come running out in their pajamas, Jacob is holding Tegan. They smile and stare at Reid and Luke and holler, "Yeah Aunt Sanda is going to be so happy that Reid and Luke made up and that they are kissing now," as Reid and Luke continue to kiss blissfully unaware that Ethan, Natalie, Jacob and Tegan are standing in front of them.
To be continued.............................. ;D
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Post by jessie on Sept 1, 2011 19:16:41 GMT -6
Awesome update Sanda, real romantic, and sweet. I'm glad he deleted Noah's phone number, that was great. I loved that they kissed at the end. Awesome story Sanda, I really love reading this.
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Post by Sanda on Sept 1, 2011 19:47:10 GMT -6
Awesome update Sanda, real romantic, and sweet. I'm glad he deleted Noah's phone number, that was great. I loved that they kissed at the end. Awesome story Sanda, I really love reading this. Thank you Jessie for your awesome comments about the lastest chapter of my awesome story. I am glad that you thought it was real romantic and sweet.
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Post by melindajo2000 on Sept 2, 2011 19:20:31 GMT -6
This was my favorite chapter I am glad he deleted Noah's number and that they made up, great job
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Post by Sanda on Sept 2, 2011 23:10:55 GMT -6
This was my favorite chapter I am glad he deleted Noah's number and that they made up, great job Thank you so much for your awesome comments about the lastest chapter of my story.
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Post by tammie on Sept 3, 2011 17:19:21 GMT -6
Hi Sanda Yahoo...finally...Goodbye...to that...sorry..what a be. See ya Noah...Now if Luke..could just DELETE..Noah...from his mind... . Good to see...some Romance..it was Sweet. I love your friend..with Reid... Nice...that your family...Care enough about Reid and Luke..to be there..for them... Good writing!
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Post by Sanda on Sept 3, 2011 21:10:33 GMT -6
Hi Sanda Yahoo...finally...Goodbye...to that...sorry..what a be. See ya Noah...Now if Luke..could just DELETE..Noah...from his mind... . Good to see...some Romance..it was Sweet. I love your friend..with Reid... Nice...that your family...Care enough about Reid and Luke..to be there..for them... Good writing! Thank you Tammie for your awesome comments about the latest chapter of my story. Reid is definitely going to be helping Luke delete Noah from his head. ;D Luke needs alot of help to delete Noah and mind games out of his sweet head. ;D Reid and I will help Luke delete Noah out of his head. ;D
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Post by Sanda on Sept 22, 2011 15:49:59 GMT -6
I LOVE how protective Ethan, Natalie and Jacob are of me in this chapter. ;D
Chapter 12
Reid and Luke are still kissing when Tegan meows and Jacob, Ethan, and Natalie tap Reid and Luke on the face and holler, "Uncle Reid and Luke we are so happy that you are back together but you need to stop kissing now and put on your pajamas. Aunt Sanda says we are going to make some popcorn and watch the movie Pleasantville."
Reid and Luke stop kissing and are touching foreheads when Reid whispers,"Oh my god Richie Rich we have an audience because Sanda sent her 4 little spies out here to check up on us. Our kissing is to be continued later Richie Rich. "
Luke whispers,"Yes to be continued later Sexy Doc."
Reid and Luke smile at Jacob, Ethan, Natalie and Tegan, they grab them and pull them in their laps. Tegan is trying to wiggle out of Jacob's arms as Reid and Luke wrap their arms around Jacob, Ethan and Natalie. Reid and Luke kiss them on the cheek and whisper,"We love you guys so much. We would have been devastated if Noah would had hurt any one of you."
Jacob, Ethan, and Natalie hug Reid and Luke and whisper, "We love you guys too. Noah is so mean for hurting Aunt Sanda. We hope that Noah rots in jail for a long time hurting Aunt Sanda."
Reid and Luke smile at each other as Reid grabs Luke hand. Reid kisses Luke on the cheek as Reid and Luke both whisper, "We hope so too guys. Let's not talk about Noah anymore tonight."
Jacob, Ethan, and Natalie smile and whisper, "Thats a deal."
Reid whispers,"Is Sanda laying down on the couch?"
Jacob, Ethan and Natalie smile and whisper,"Yes Aunt Sanda is laying down on the couch but she isn't asleep."
Reid whispers,"I am not surprise that Sanda isn't asleep. Sanda is pretty stubborn about listening to people."
Luke whispers,"Sexy Doc, you are a fine one to talk about Sanda being stubborn, you are pretty stubborn yourself."
Reid whispers,"No, Richie Rich I am not as stubborn as you are Richie Rich."
Luke whispers,"Oh yes you are very stubborn sometimes Sexy Doc especially when it comes to wearing your glasses. You need to wear your glasses all of the time without being told to put them on."
Reid whispers,"I know that I need to wear my glasses all the time but I am not stubborn Mr. Snyder."
Luke whispers,"Oh yes you are Sexy Doc."
Jacob, Ethan, and Natalie smile and holler,"Uncle Reid and Luke you are so cute and aborable together. You need to stop arguing. Aunt Sanda is going to be so upset if we go back inside and you both are still arguing."
Reid and Luke smile and whisper, "We are so sorry we were arguing about who was more stubborn."
Jacob, Ethan, and Natalie smile and whisper, "Both of you are equally stubborn. You need to kiss and make up right now."
Reid grabs Luke and kisses him passionately. Reid whispers,"I am so sorry that I called you stubborn Richie Rich. I love you soo much Richie Rich."
Luke whispers,"I am so sorry I called you stubborn as well Sexy Doc. I love you more Sexy Doc."
Jacob, Ethan, and Natalie smile and whispers,"Yeah Uncle Reid and Luke made up."
Reid whispers,"Let's get inside and check on Sanda before she sends out a search party for the 6 of us."
Luke whispers,"Yes Let's go inside and check on Sanda."
Reid grabs Luke's hand and whispers in his ear,"After we check on Sanda we can go upstairs and make love before put on our pajamas."
Luke blushes and whispers,"I love that idea Sexy Doc."
Jacob, Ethan, and Natalie smile and holler, "Uncle Reid and Luke are going to get naughty later on. We are going to tell Aunt Sanda on you." as they get up off of Reid and Luke's lap. Reid and Luke whisper,"Oh my god we are so busted. We will never hear the end of it from Sanda, " as Jacob, Ethan, and Natalie are helping Reid and Luke up off of the porch swing when the front door opens. Sanda is smiling at the 5 of them as she whispers,"It's about time the five of you decided to get up off of the porch swing and come inside." Reid grabs Luke's hand as the five of them smile at Sanda. Jacob hands Tegan over to Sanda as the six of them walk into the house and shut the front door.
To be continued.................
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Post by jessie on Sept 22, 2011 16:30:25 GMT -6
Sanda awesome update, I love your story. I'm so happy you updated this one. I love the kids in the story, you write them well. I love the scenes with Luke, and Reid they needs some naughty time together. ;D Sanda is cute she is a good friend, and is wonderful with the kids. Update soon please.
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Post by Sanda on Sept 22, 2011 16:36:18 GMT -6
Sanda awesome update, I love your story. I'm so happy you updated this one. I love the kids in the story, you write them well. I love the scenes with Luke, and Reid they needs some naughty time together. ;D Sanda is cute she is a good friend, and is wonderful with the kids. Update soon please. Jessie, Reid and Luke will definitely get some naughty time in the next chapter. ;D It is hard for them to get some naughty time in with a house full of people. LOL
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Post by melindajo2000 on Sept 22, 2011 17:06:32 GMT -6
I love them fighting about being stubborn...that was so cute I agree with Jessie they need some alone time . I am so happy you updated your wonderful story. You are such an awesome author. You put most of the ff.net authors to shame.
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Post by Sanda on Sept 22, 2011 17:31:46 GMT -6
I love them fighting about being stubborn...that was so cute I agree with Jessie they need some alone time . I am so happy you updated your wonderful story. You are such an awesome author. You put most of the ff.net authors to shame. Thank you MelindaJo for your awesome coments. Reid and Luke will get some alone time in the next chapter. ;D
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Post by tammie on Sept 24, 2011 15:14:25 GMT -6
Hi Sanda I LOVE how you..had them fighting..whos the most stubborn of the two..but what got me..to LOLing..was when..Reid called Luke..Mr Snyder...too funny! Glad to see..No talking about that... Lower Lifer...NOAH! Cute the kids..were the spies...theyre going..to become the informants...LOL. Now...if they could only...have some....quiet time...to make up... BRIING ON...already.... . Loved this...update..thanks for writing..and sharing.
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Post by Sanda on Sept 24, 2011 20:28:25 GMT -6
Hi Sanda I LOVE how you..had them fighting..whos the most stubborn of the two..but what got me..to LOLing..was when..Reid called Luke..Mr Snyder...too funny! Glad to see..No talking about that... Lower Lifer...NOAH! Cute the kids..were the spies...theyre going..to become the informants...LOL. Now...if they could only...have some....quiet time...to make up... BRIING ON...already.... . Loved this...update..thanks for writing..and sharing. Tammie, thank you so much for all of your awesome comments about the lastest chapter of my story. OMG Tammie Reid calling Luke Mr. Snyder instead of Luke always made Luke so mad on the show. LOL ;D I thought it was kind of sweet when Reid would call Luke Mr Snyder or Richie Rich. ;D
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