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Post by Sanda on May 15, 2011 18:20:56 GMT -6
Thank you Jessie for giving me this idea for my new Reid and Luke story. I hope you like my new Reid and Luke story. Chapter 1 Sanda, her best friend Jessie, and her father Frank were sitting out in Sanda, Carol, and Frank's backyard. Sanda and Jessie were reading Soap Opera Digest magazine while Frank was reading Newsweek magazine. Sanda's cat Tegan was sitting on the patio table when suddenly he sat up, jumped off the patio table and ran into the house. Sanda, Jessie, and Frank look up from what they are reading when they hear Reid and Luke arguing from next door. "Mr Snyder you are an idiot." "Why am I an idiot Reid?" "I found your ex boyfriend Noah's cell phone number still programmed into your cell phone. Are you still seeing Noah behind my back Luke?" "No Reid, I am not seeing Noah behind your back." "I don't believe you Luke." "Reid, I swear I am not seeing Noah behind your back. We are just friends." "I don't believe you Luke. I am very hurt that you still have Noah's cell number programmed in your cell phone. I can't stand to look at you right now Luke. Please leave now Luke." "Reid for a nuerosurgeon you are very stupid sometimes." Luke walks out the door, slamming it behind him very loadly. Luke drives off in his car leaving Reid behind fuming mad. Sanda, Jessie, and Frank are staring at each other with their mouths wide open. They are very stunned at what they just overheard. The three of them are figuring out how they can help Reid and Luke patch things up.
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Post by jessie on May 15, 2011 18:34:19 GMT -6
I love your story Sanda, and thanks for adding me to the story. Oh poor Luke and Reid, but I don't blame Reid for being angry. Luke has to forget about Noah he is the past, and Reid is his future. Can't wait to see what will happen next?
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Post by Sanda on May 15, 2011 18:43:48 GMT -6
I love your story Sanda, and thanks for adding me to the story. Oh poor Luke and Reid, but I don't blame Reid for being angry. Luke has to forget about Noah he is the past, and Reid is his future. Can't wait to see what will happen next? Thank you Jessie for your awesome comments about my new story. I'll try to update my story tomarrow. I am scared to write a story where Reid and Luke are separated becuase I love them soo much as a pairing.
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Post by jessie on May 15, 2011 19:09:26 GMT -6
Sanda I'm happy you are trying something different. We know they will end up together, but seeing them apart might be fun to read, well maybe not for them. ;D I'm glad you tried writing a different type of story, but I know it is hard for you.
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Post by Sanda on May 15, 2011 20:19:06 GMT -6
Sanda I'm happy you are trying something different. We know they will end up together, but seeing them apart might be fun to read, well maybe not for them. ;D I'm glad you tried writing a different type of story, but I know it is hard for you. Jessie, thank you for the encouragement. Yes it will be hard for me but I am looking forward to the challenge. ;D I have been told that I am a drama queen and that I LOVE drama. LOL ;D
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Post by melindajo2000 on May 15, 2011 20:58:03 GMT -6
oh I love this already.. I love drama lol in stories anyways so this is a great start, especially with you writing it. I dont blame Reid for being angry but he still shouldnt be so quick to throw away something good I hope they can talk things out. Great job!
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Post by Sanda on May 15, 2011 21:11:10 GMT -6
oh I love this already.. I love drama lol in stories anyways so this is a great start, especially with you writing it. I dont blame Reid for being angry but he still shouldnt be so quick to throw away something good I hope they can talk things out. Great job! Thank you MelindaJo, for your awesome comments about my new story. I couldn't resist having Reid and Luke's neighbors witness their argument. LOL We are all going to want to help them straighten out their problem becuase we love them both. ;D
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Post by Sanda on May 16, 2011 17:25:22 GMT -6
Poor Reid in this chapter. He really misses Mr. Richie Rich. I couldn't resist having Reid and Luke's fight affecting my cat Tegan. Chapter 2 Reid walks into the kitchen, opens up the refrigerator, grabs a beer, and walks over to the couch and sits down. Reid opens up the beer, takes a sip of the beer and puts it down on the coffee table, and grabs a pillow puts towards his chest hugs it and whispers, "I love you and miss you Richie Rich even though I am so angry with you right now for having Noah's cell phone number still programmed into your cell phone." Meanwhile, nextdoor Carol and Tegan walk outside to where Sanda, Frank, and Jessie are sitting at the patio table. Carol sits down in the chair next to Frank and grabs his hand while Tegan climbs into Sanda's lap. Sanda pets Tegan on the head and whispers,"We will make things better for Reid and Luke I promise because I know you love them so much." Carol tries to smile,"Oh my god, Frank I can't beleive the fight that Reid and Luke had earlier. It was really intense. Tegan was really nervous when they were arguing. He was pacing back and forth in the house." Frank also tried to smile," I am not surprised that Tegan was pacing in the house, because their fight really intense. Reid was really angry with Luke for having Noah's Cell phone number still programmed in his phone." Jessie even tried to smile,"I don't blame Reid for being mad at Luke for having Noah's cell phone number still programmed in his cell phone either." Sanda also tried to smiled as she was petting Tegan. "I really don't blame Reid for being angry with Luke either. Do you guys think I should call Katie?" Frank, Carol, and, Jessie smile, "Yes, you should call Katie. She will know how to help Reid." Sanda picked up her cell phone off of the patio table. She dialed Katie's cell phone. Katie and Jacob are sitting on the couch watching TV when Katie cell phone rings. Katie smiles when she notices Sanda's phone number on her cell phone. Katie answers her cell phone. "Hi Sanda, How are you?" "Hi Katie. I am not doing too well. We have a huge problem." "What is the matter Sanda?" "I am outside in the backyard with my parents, Jessie and my cat Tegan. We overheard Reid and Luke having a huge argument about Noah. Reid found Noah's cell phone still programmed in his cell phone. Reid was soo angry with Luke that he threw him out." "Have you guys seen Reid since he threw Luke out?" "No, we haven't seen Reid." "I am coming over to your house right now." "Can you bring Jacob with you? You and Jacob can spend the night at our house." "We will love to spend the night tonight. I will pack some of mine and Jacob's things and we will be at your house in 30 minutes." "Good bye Katie. Drive safely. See you soon." "Good bye Sanda. See you soon." Katie gets off the phone, grabs Jacob's hand and takes him upstairs to pack some stuff to spend the night at Sanda and her parents house. Meanwhile, Sanda gets off the phone and says,"Katie and Jacob will be here in 30 minutes." Sanda, her parents, and her best friend Jessie look at each other and they are all secretly hoping and praying that Katie and Jacob will be able to help them get Reid and Luke back together.
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Post by jessie on May 16, 2011 17:43:59 GMT -6
Great update Sanda, poor Reid hugging his pillow . I can picture that, I remember him doing that on the show. Poor Tegan being upset , I'm glad Jacob and Katie are coming by. Awesome writing Sanda, hope to see a update soon.
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Post by Sanda on May 16, 2011 20:10:07 GMT -6
Great update Sanda, poor Reid hugging his pillow . I can picture that, I remember him doing that on the show. Poor Tegan being upset , I'm glad Jacob and Katie are coming by. Awesome writing Sanda, hope to see a update soon. Thank you Jessie for your awesome comments about chapter 2 of my story. I agree Poor Reid and poor Tegan. I also hope that Katie and Jacob will be able to comfort Reid. This story is hard to write becuase I HATE to see Reid and Luke separated.
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Post by jessie on May 16, 2011 20:13:57 GMT -6
Great update Sanda, poor Reid hugging his pillow . I can picture that, I remember him doing that on the show. Poor Tegan being upset , I'm glad Jacob and Katie are coming by. Awesome writing Sanda, hope to see a update soon. Thank you Jessie for your awesome comments about chapter 2 of my story. I agree Poor Reid and poor Tegan. I also hope that Katie and Jacob will be able to comfort Reid. This story is hard to write becuase I HATE to see Reid and Luke separated. I know it is hard for you to write, but this is one of your best stories. I love the drama, and we know they will reunite, you wouldn't have it any other way. Great story Sanda, I love reading it.
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Post by Sanda on Jun 1, 2011 15:45:00 GMT -6
Poor Reid in this chapter. I LOVE the talk between me and my mom in this chapter. Chapter 3 Reid is sitting on the couch hugging a pillow. He is staring at a picture of him and Luke on his IPhone. Reid whispers, "I miss your hot and very annoying body Mr. Richie Rich." Meanwhile, next door Frank and Jessie are sitting on the couch watching ABC Nightly News with Diane Sawyer. Tegan is sitting in between them staring into space. Sanda and her mom Carol are in the kitchen. Carol is making fried chicken, biscuits, and mash pototoes for dinner which are Reid's favorite foods. Sanda is making chocolate chip cookies for dessert. Sanda's mom smiles and says,"I am so proud of you for being Reid and Luke's friend. Not many people would understand or support you for being friends with a same sex couple." Sanda smiles,"Thank you Mom. I know you are proud of me becuase I am friends with Reid and Luke. I am very worried about Reid since he throw Luke out of their house." Carol smiles, "Sanda you and Katie should take Tegan and Jacob over to visit Reid." Sanda smiles, "Mom we should all go over to visit Reid and take him dinner." Carol smiles, "Reid, will probably be upset that we all know about his fight with Luke if we all show up at his house with dinner." Sanda smiles,"Mom, I know that Reid will probably be mad but he R needs all off us right now." Sanda and Carol finish getting dinner and the chocolate chip cookies ready to take over to Reid when the doorbell rings. Carol hollers,"Frank, I am busy in the kitchen. Please answer the door." Frank hollers,"Yes, Carol I will answer the door." Frank gets up to answer the door. Frank smiles when he opens the and sees Katie and Jacob. Frank gives Katie and Jacob a hug and helps them with their bags. Jacob shows Frank his teddy bear and says,"My teddy bear is sad becuase my mommy told me that Uncle Reid and Uncle Luke had a fight and that Uncle Reid told Uncle Luke to get out. Uncle Reid needs a hug from my teddy bear." Frank tries to smile, "Our cat Tegan is also very sad as well becuase Reid and Luke broke up. Carol and Sanda are in the kitchen making all of Reid's favorite foods for dinner." Katie smiles,"Jacob and I stopped off at Wal-Mart on our way over here. We picked up 2 gallons of Rocky Road ice cream which is Reid's favorite flavor of ice cream." Carol comes out of the kitchen carrying dinner, while Sanda is carrying Tegan. Sanda whispers,"Buddy, we are going to go and see Reid now. " Tegan meows as Jessie comes behind Sanda, Carol, and Tegan to the front door. Sanda, Carol, and Jessie smile, "Let's go and visit Reid." Katie smiles,"I hope we are doing the right thing." Sanda smiles,"We won't know until we try." Katie grabs Jacob's hand and has the Rocky Road ice cream in her other hand, while Frank locks the front door. Frank Carol, Sanda, Tegan, and Jessie follow Katie and Jacob as they all walk next door to Reid and Luke's house with dinner for Reid. Reid is getting out a TV dinner from the freezer and is putting it into the microwave when he hears a knock at the front door.
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Post by jessie on Jun 1, 2011 16:05:11 GMT -6
Awesome update poor Reid, he was going to eat a TV dinner . I have them once in a while too. ;D I hope he is happy to see everyone, I loved little Jacob's line. His Teddy bear was sad, because Luke and Reid are fighting. I love that Tegan is going over to see Reid too. Love your story, I feel bad for poor Luke too. I hope they patch things up real soon.
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Post by Sanda on Jun 1, 2011 16:12:20 GMT -6
Awesome update poor Reid, he was going to eat a TV dinner . I have them once in a while too. ;D I hope he is happy to see everyone, I loved little Jacob's line. His Teddy bear was sad, because Luke and Reid are fighting. I love that Tegan is going over to see Reid too. Love your story, I feel bad for poor Luke too. I hope they patch things up real soon. Thank you for the awesome comments about the lastest chapter of my story. I eat TV dinners every once in a while as well. ;D I promise that Reid won't be to un happy to see all of us. I couldn't resist having the Teddy Bear and the cat being upset because they are fighting. I am trying to figure out how write a Luke chapter becuase I really don't like Lily and her constant supporting of Noah on the show.
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Post by Sanda on Jul 13, 2011 14:36:10 GMT -6
I had to bump up this story. I had forgetten what my mom and I made for dinner to take over to Reid and Luke's house. I'll have an update for this story later today.
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