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Post by melindajo2000 on Jul 26, 2011 16:12:09 GMT -6
I love this story! I hate that they are fighting but am glad they have safe places to go
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Post by Sanda on Jul 26, 2011 16:36:27 GMT -6
I love this story! I hate that they are fighting but am glad they have safe places to go Thank you MelindaJo for your awesome comments about my story. I agree that Reid and Luke have safe places to go. I HATED that Lily supported Noah and not Reid on the show. Noah didn't deserve any support becuase he treated Luke like crap most of the time.
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Post by jessie on Jul 26, 2011 16:44:55 GMT -6
Thanks for telling me about the rest of your story. I loved it, and I love Lily being supportive in this story. Great Luke is going to be with family, and Reid has his friends. Your stories are awesome Sanda, hope you update again real soon.
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Post by Sanda on Jul 26, 2011 16:46:57 GMT -6
Awesome update Sanda, I love your story. Awe poor Luke, I'm glad Lily is on Reid's side in this story. Can't wait until you update again. I love your writing, you really know the characters so well. Thank you Jessie for your awesome comments about the lastest chapter of my story. I am glad that Lily in on Reid's side as well in this story. I HATED that she never supported Reid on the show and that she stuck up for Noah who wasn't worth it.
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Post by Sanda on Jul 26, 2011 16:49:16 GMT -6
Thanks for telling me about the rest of your story. I loved it, and I love Lily being supportive in this story. Great Luke is going to be with family, and Reid has his friends. Your stories are awesome Sanda, hope you update again real soon. Thank you Jessie for your awesome comments about the rest of my chapter. I love Lily being supportive as well. Reid needs someone sticking up for him. ;D Noah didn't deserve all the praise he got on the show. I LOVE the movie Pleasantville. ;D That is awesome for them to watch together. ;D
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Post by melindajo2000 on Jul 26, 2011 18:31:37 GMT -6
this was a wonderful update and I'm so happy you updated so soon. Keep up the great work, your knowledge of Reid and Luke is impressive!
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Post by Sanda on Aug 3, 2011 16:07:01 GMT -6
I had fun writing this chapter becuase I got to tell Noah off. ;D I couldn't stand Noah at all becuase of how he treated Luke on the show. Chapter 7 Sanda and her father Frank are walking towards Reid and Luke's place with their stuff when they see Noah appoarching them. Sanda whispers,"Daddy, what do you think Noah wants? I don't want Reid to see him right now." Frank whispers,"I don't know what Noah wants sweetie. We will find out and get rid of him." Sanda hollers,"What are you doing here Noah? Haven't you caused enough damage for one day?" "Where is Luke?" Sanda hollers,"He isn't here right now. Reid found your cell phone number programmed into Luke's cell phone and he threw him out." Noah hollers,"Hey Sexy Thing are you sleeping with Dr. Oliver now that he threw Luke out of their house?" Sand hollers,"Oh my god Noah don't call me sexy thing. You are an idiot, I am not sleeping with Reid. We are just friends." "If you are just friends with Reid, why are you with him? Is he your boyfriend." Noah is glaring at Frank and pointing his finger at him. Frank hollers,"Are you speaking to me Noah? Do you know that it rude to point and stare at people?" Sanda hollers,"This man you are pointing at is my father Frank not my boyfriend. Reid and Luke don't deserve to separated becuase of you. I will never understand what Luke saw in you. You don't deserve to have a friend like Luke." Noah hollers,"I don't know how anyone can like Reid. He is so rude and arrogant." Sanda hollers,"Reid is a good man. He is very protective of the people he loves and cares about." Noah hollers,"I hate you for sticking up for Reid and Luke." Meanwhile inside Reid and Luke's house Reid, Jacob, Carol, Jessie, Katie and Tegan are sitting on the couch watching The Odd Couple when Jacob hollers, "Uncle Reid I hear Aunt Sanda and Uncle Frank hollering outside. We better go outside and see what is going on." Reid, Jacob, Carol, Katie and Jessie get up off the couch and run outside just in time to see Noah punching Sanda in the face as she falls to the ground. They are staring at Noah with their mouths open. Frank hollers,"Get your hands off of my daughter you filthy pig," as he grabs Noah. Reid and Jacob run over to Sanda who is laying down on the ground. Reid and Jacob help Sanda up from the ground and whisper, "Angel, Aunt Sanda are you ok?" Sanda whispers,"Yes, I am ok. My head hurts from where Noah punched me." Reid hollers,"Why did you punch Sanda Noah? She is an amazing woman. She didn't deserve to be punched by you." Noah hollers,"I punched her becuase she was defending you and Luke to me." Reid hollers,"You are an ass Noah for hurting Sanda. I will never forgive for hurting Sanda. I will tell Luke what you did to Sanda as well. Luke will hate you for hurting Sanda. Get off of mine and Luke's property now. Frank will be please escort Noah to his car and make sure that he leaves?" Frank smiles," I will be my pleasure to escort Noah to his car." Frank grabbed Noah by the arm and escorted him to his car as Noah hollered, "You are hurting me Frank." Frank hollers," I am glad that it hurts. You deserve it after punching my daughter in the face." Reid and Jacob help Sanda into the house as Reid whispers,"Angel, lets get you inside to the couch so I can examine you." Carol, Jessie, and Katie followed them into the house followed by Frank with everyones stuff after he sent Noah packing.
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Post by melindajo2000 on Aug 3, 2011 17:09:17 GMT -6
Noah was awful to hurt Sanda and for the way he talked to Frank and Sanda. I also hated the way he glared at Frank. I enjoyed this chapter a lot Sanda.
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Post by Sanda on Aug 3, 2011 17:24:01 GMT -6
Noah was awful to hurt Sanda and for the way he talked to Frank and Sanda. I also hated the way he glared at Frank. I enjoyed this chapter a lot Sanda. Thank you MelindaJo, for your awesome comments about the lastest chapter of my story. I didn't like Noah hurting me either but it would be something that he would do since he punched Reid out on the show.
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Post by jessie on Aug 3, 2011 17:56:11 GMT -6
Awesome update, OMG Noah was horrible , I can't wait to hear what Luke thinks about how he treated Sanda and Frank. Can't wait to see what will happen next?
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Post by Sanda on Aug 3, 2011 19:59:14 GMT -6
Awesome update, OMG Noah was horrible , I can't wait to hear what Luke thinks about how he treated Sanda and Frank. Can't wait to see what will happen next? Thank you Jessie for your awesome comments about the lastest chapter of my story. Luke is going to be furious when he founds out how Noah treated Sanda and Frank.
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Post by tammie on Aug 7, 2011 13:49:39 GMT -6
Hi Sanda Wow...Noah seems to be showing..his true ...colors. Can he ...sink any LOWER...then to accuse you of sleeping with ...Reid.(Yes, it seems he can!). If anyone ...is being..RUDE...beyond RUDE...its Noah. I have to say..this chapter...PISSED me ...OFF. The way...he glared at ...Frank, and then he..Punched...you in the FACE. Oh its time...to do...an MADEA. WHOOP...that ASS....(Noah's). Im glad..that Frank...helped..escorted Noah to the...curb! Talk about....kicked to the curb.. . Wish Frank...would have TWIST that ..ARM off..that LOWER LIFER!.... Thanks for sharing.
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Post by Sanda on Aug 14, 2011 13:55:55 GMT -6
Chapter 8
Sanda is laying down on the couch. Reid is checking Sanda out making sure she is fine while Jacob is holding her hand. Jacob whispers,"Aunt Sanda everything is going to be ok. Uncle Reid and I are going to take good care of you."
Sanda whispers,"Reid and Jacob don't worry about me. I am really fine. My head just hurts."
Reid whispers,"Angel, just humor me. Let me check you out. I want to make sure you are fine."
Carol is crying as Frank is holding her. "Frank is Sanda going to be ok?"
Frank is rubbing Carol's back. He whispers,"Honey, our daughter is going to be fine. I should have broken both of Noah's arms when I had the chance for hurting our daughter. I just hope and pray that Noah doesn't go after Luke."
Carol whispers,"Oh god Frank, hurting Noah just because he hurt our daughter isn't the right thing to do. Violence isn't the anwser to your problems. Oh Frank, I just hope and pray Noah doesn't go after Luke."
Frank whispers,"Honey, you are right violence isn't the answer."
Katie and Jessie walk over to Frank and Carol and take them by the hands and whisper," Sanda is in excellent hands with Reid and Jacob. Reid is an excellent doctor, he loves you both and your daughter like family. Reid would risk his life for the three of you and Luke."
Frank and Carol smile and say,"Thank you Katie and Jessie for your encouraging words. We feel so much better ."
Reid finishes examining Sanda. He grabs her hand and whispers,"Angel, you are going to be just fine." Reid is still holding her hand when he turns and says,"Sanda is going to be just fine, She has a nasty bump on the head and a start of a bruise on her right eye. She will have a nasty headache and a black eye in the morning. We are going o have to wake her up every two hours tonight to make sure she doesn't have a concussion."
Katie, Jacob, Jessie, Frank and Carol smile and say, Thank god she is going to be ok."
Reid smiles and says,"Carol, can you please go into the kitchen and get her a glass of water and make ice pack for her eye while I run upstairs and get her some Advil. Reid runs upstairs to get Sanda an ice pack while Carol goes into the kitchen and makes an ice pack and gets Sanda a glass of water. Jacob covers up Sanda with a blanket and hands him her teddy bear. Tegan jumps up onto Sanda's chest as she whispers,"Mommy is going to be ok buddy." Reid comes back downstairs with the Advil while Carol comes out of the kitchen with the glass of water and an ice pack." Carol gives Sanda the ice pack and glass of water.
Sanda takes the Advil with the water She hands the glass back to reid and puts the ice pack on her eye. Sanda whispers, "Reid."
"Yes Angel, You need to rest."
"Reid I am not going to rest until you call Luke and tell him about what Noah did to me. You need to tell Luke to come back home. Luke shouldn't be alone right now. I don't want Noah to hurt Luke."
Reid smiles,"OMG Angel you are too much girl. What I am going to do with you?"
Sanda smiles,"Reid, quit being so stubborn and call Luke."
Reid smiles,"Yes, mother dear I will stop being stubborn and I will call Luke."
Reid picks up his I Phone and calls Luke. Sanda grabs Reid's hand while he is waiting for Luke to answer his I Phone.
Over at Lily and Holden's house Lilly, Holden, Luke, Ethan and Natalie are sitting on the couch watching The Little Mermaid when Luke's I Phone goes off. Luke smiles when he sees Reid's name on his I Phone. Luke answers his I Phone.
"Hi Sexy Doc."
"Hi Richie Rich. Have you seen Noah this evening?"
"No I haven't Sexy Doc. I came straight over to Lily and Holden's house after you threw me out. Why what happen?"
"Sanda and her father Frank had a confrontation with Noah earlier this evening. Sanda was defending us to Noah. He got angry, punched her in the face and pushed her to the ground."
Luke hollers,"Oh my god Reid is Sanda ok?"
"Richie Rich, please calm down. Sanda is going to be just fine. She just has a nasty bump on her head. She is also going to have black eye as well. She will have a huge headache in the morning. I am trying to get her rest right now. Sanda told me that she wouldn't rest until you came back home to me where you belong. Will you please come back home?"
"Sexy doc yes I will come back home. Please tell Sanda to rest and that I will be home soon. I love you sexy doc."
"I love you to Richie Rich."
"See you soon Sexy Doc."
"See you soon Richie Rich."
"Good bye Sexy Doc."
"Good bye Richie Rich."
After Luke gets off the phone with Reid, Ethan and Natalie are staring at him with tears in their eyes. They holler, "Is is true that Noah hit Aunt Sanda?"
"Yes Ethan and Natalie it is true that Noah hit your Aunt Sanda."
Ethan and Natalie whisper, "Can you we go with you to see Aunt Sanda to make sure that she is ok."
Luke smiles,"Yes Ethan and Natalie you can come with me to see your Uncle Reid and your Aunt Sanda. Go upstairs and pack an overnight bag."
Ethan and Natalie run upstairs to pack a bag.
Holden and Lily holler,"Oh my god Noah is crazy to hit Sanda."
Luke tries to smile,"Yes mom and dad Noah is crazy. Reid said that Sanda is going to be fine. She is going to have a nasty headache and a black eye in the morning. Noah also yelled at Sanda's father Frank because Sanda was defending us to Noah."
Lily and Holden try to smile,"Sanda is an amazing friend to you and Reid being worried about the both of you when she is one who got hurt by Noah."
Luke smiles, "Yes, Mom Sanda is an amazing friend to us."
Natalie and Ethan come running down the stairs with their overnight bags and holler,"Luke, we are ready to go and see Aunt Sanda and Uncle Reid."
Luke smiles,"Let's go." Luke, Ethan, and Natalie hug Lily and Holden good bye and leave for Reid and Luke's house unaware that they are being followed.
Over at Reid and Luke's house Frank, Carol, Katie, Jessie, Jacob, Sanda and Reid are sitting on the couch. Reid is holding Sanda and Jacob in his arms. He is rubbing their backs as he whispers, "Sanda and Jacob please close your pretty eyes and go to sleep. Luke is going to be home soon." Sanda and Jacob whisper,"Ok," as they both pet Tegan who is sitting in Reid's lap. Sanda, Jacob, and Reid fall asleep in each other arms waiting for Luke to come home as Frank, Carol, Katie and Jessie watch them.
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Post by melindajo2000 on Aug 14, 2011 20:40:38 GMT -6
I'm glad Sanda is ok and that they will be watching her for a concussion. Thank goodness they got ahold of Luke and he's going back safely. Really outstanding chapter
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Post by jessie on Aug 14, 2011 21:01:55 GMT -6
Great chapter Sanda, I feel bad for Sanda but she is in good hands. I hope Luke is ok someone was following him. I'm sure Noah won't give up so easily. He should be arrested for assault. Please update soon, I love this story so much.
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