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Post by Sanda on Jul 21, 2011 16:01:01 GMT -6
Great update Jessie. I am glad that Sue Ellen invited JR back to her place. I really hope for Sue Ellen's sake that JR has really changed.
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Post by melindajo2000 on Jul 21, 2011 16:12:18 GMT -6
I'm so glad the are going to be together I hope he doesnt mess it up. awesome update
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Post by jessie on Jul 23, 2011 18:41:14 GMT -6
Chapter 8
Sue Ellen and JR got to her place, she got out of the car waiting for JR. He got out locking his door, and walked over to her.
"Wow nice place Sugar"
"Yeah it is no Southfork, but it is nice"
"Does it have a pool"?
"Sure does, and a sauna, and some other fun stuff"
"Fun stuff what does that mean"?
"Well if your a good boy maybe you will find out"
"I'm always a good boy"
"Sure you are". She turned , and ran up the steps, and he followed. She opened the door, and they went inside. He smiled, "No help Sugar"?
"I gave Meg the day off she helps out around here. I do some of the work myself, I have changed JR"
"Sure you have "
"I have I'm not the spoiled girl you remember, I cook and everything"
"Oh man"
Sue Ellen moved close, "Be nice JR, because I'm tired of bad boys"
"Sure you are, I can see you love bad boys"
"Yeah I do, but lets go into the living room". They walk in JR was looking around, this place was pretty amazing. She walked over to the bar, "Want a drink"?
"You keep that stuff in the house"?
"For guests, I'm completely recovered JR, I don't have any cravings"
"Not even for me"?
"Well maybe for you JR"
She handed him a bourbon, than she walked over to the stereo, and put some music on. He laughed she put on Footloose by Kenny Loggins one of her favourites songs, and movies. She walked over but was dancing as JR put the drink down.
"I see you haven't outgrown your dance films"
"No way I love them, you know how much". He got up, pulling her close, "Sugar you look so sexy right this minute, your driving me crazy"
She moved extra close as their lips touched but they stood still looking at each other, as they finally kissed so passionately.
He started to open her sash of her dress he pulled it off. She whispered" what are you doing JR"?
"I want you Sue Ellen"
She stood in front of JR, as he lifted her dress off, and let it drop. JR smiled he touched her stomach and pulled her close. She helped JR , undress and he got on the couch. She whispered" let me show you how much I love you."
She touched JR, and he moaned grabbing Sue Ellen whispering" I need you. She brought her lips to his, as he wrapped his arms around her, pulled her into his body, caressing her, savoring her softness. She feathered his torso with kisses, caressing his body with her hands. His mouth met hers as she took JR and she moved as they both set a pace , that drove them both crazy. He held her hips, and she grabbed his shoulders, as they both released. Sue Ellen laid on JR's chest, and held him tight. She wanted to feel she made the right choice being in JR's arms felt so right.
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Post by melindajo2000 on Jul 23, 2011 21:06:42 GMT -6
I hope JR isn't just caught up in the moment and that he really wants to be with her. awesome update
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Post by Sanda on Jul 23, 2011 23:16:10 GMT -6
Great update Jessie. I hope that JR isn't just caught up in the moment and that he really wants to be with her.
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Post by jessie on Jul 25, 2011 15:18:02 GMT -6
Chapter 9
Sue Ellen woke up the next morning, and sat up seeing JR was gone. She grabbed her housecoat, and ran down the stairs, and went into the kitchen. She was devastated he wasn't there, but she saw a letter on the table.
Sue Ellen walked over, and picked it up.
Sugar
Last night was amazing, just how I dreamed it would be. I had to go I have some important meetings today.
Luv JR
Sue Ellen dropped the note, and walked back to the stairs. She turned looking at the couch. She fell to her knees, "Oh he did it again". She got up , and ran upstairs, and into the shower. She put the water on as hot as she could stand it. She got in tears rolled down her cheek, she never felt more disappointed in herself. He would never change he just wanted to prove just how weak she was, and she hated herself. She held the wall remembering how she felt with JR, she screamed, "How could you JR"? She fell to her knees, putting her hand over her face. She was there for 1 hour, her skin was burning up. She got out of the tub, wrapping the towel around her. She walked into the bedroom she couldn't even lay on the bed, all she could see was JR. She walked over to the dresser grabbing her favourite sweatshirt, and a pair of shorts. She walked downstairs, and saw her housekeeper, she smiled, "Hi Sue Ellen would you like something to eat"?
"No, I'm going outside"
"Sue Ellen are you OK"?
"Yeah" She walked outside, and walked over to a lounge chair, and sat down. She laid there remembering every word he said, it was all a lie. How could he leave without having the guts to face her? He was laughing, and she deserved it she knew this would happen.
She heard the phone ring, and her housekeeper walked out.
"Sue Ellen it is JR on the phone".
Sue Ellen motioned "No" and turned away, not getting up.
"Hello she can't come to the phone JR"
"Why"?
"Please call back later please"
JR hung up, and stared at the phone, but really didn't realize he hurt her deeply by leaving without saying goodbye. He planned to go back, but would she ever let him back in that was the question.
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Post by melindajo2000 on Jul 25, 2011 15:56:32 GMT -6
I hope he didn't blow things for good. great update!
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Post by Sanda on Jul 25, 2011 16:28:00 GMT -6
Great update Jessie. JR should have woken Sue Ellen up and told her goodbye before he left for his meetings. I don't blame Sue Ellen for being mad at JR.
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Post by jessie on Jul 26, 2011 14:45:30 GMT -6
Chapter 10
JR tried several time throughout the day but was told Sue Ellen couldn't come to the phone. He was sitting at his desk when Bobby walked in.
"JR what is the matter you look worried"?
"Bobby last night me, and Sue Ellen were together, I won her back. She won't talk to me all day today, every time I call, I can sense she is telling her housekeeper, she doesn't want to talk"
"What happened last night"?
"Bobby that is kind of private"
"Shut up JR, I know you , and Sue Ellen, I roomed beside you both"
"Bobby"
"You slept together right"?
"Yeah it was amazing"
"Ok I get it, but when you left was she ok"?
"Well she was sleeping, I didn't want to wake her we were up most of the night. I left her a note saying last night was wonderful, but I had to leave for meetings"
"You idiot you didn't wake her up"?
"No why"?
"She said you didn't respect her before, you were out at all hours. She was alone more than I am now since Pam left. You walked out after a night of passion, without waking her telling her what it meant to you in person. You idiot you probably lost her for good now"
"Oh God I never thought of that what should I do now"?
"Your still sitting there go to her, but you may get a earful when you get there" JR grabbed his coat, and yelled, "See you tomorrow Bobby". He ran out telling Sly he was leaving for the day. He waited for the elevator, he got on going to the garage, and got in his car, and drove off.
Sue Ellen couldn't eat lunch, she knew she wouldn't keep it down. She got up she went inside, and walked to the guest room, and laid on the bed. She shut her eyes, but she kept seeing JR , and what happened the night before. She knew she should have waited but JR being around her, she couldn't resist him. She would never let him back in, she felt something inside of her die when she realized she made the same mistake she has made since the day she married JR for the first time. He loved the chase but once he got her, he could careless. She sat up, "Ok you let him use you, why are you sick about it now"? She laid back, and started to cry she thought of John Ross, and realized she had to put this in the past, and get on with her life. She grabbed the pillow, and threw it across, the room. She screamed , "I hate you JR Ewing, I hate you". She jumped when she heard him say.
"Sue Ellen OMG Bobby was right"
"How dare you come here do you think you will get another quickie you sick freak"? She pushed him out of the room, but he tried to get back in the room. She screamed, "Go I'm not playing this game anymore, I will not let you use me again"
"I didn't use you listen to me"
"You left me for the last time". She screamed as she sat on the bed.
"I love you listen to me". Sue Ellen glared at him, as he put his hands up. "Please just listen to me"
Sue Ellen was shaking but she didn't say anything, she just stared at him.
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Post by melindajo2000 on Jul 26, 2011 14:55:41 GMT -6
I hope JR has something good to say and that she will listen to him. awesome update
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Post by jessie on Aug 3, 2011 1:10:50 GMT -6
Chapter 11
Sue Ellen was looking at JR, he could see he hurt her badly. He really didn't mean to but he understood why she was angry. He walked over sitting beside her, she moved away.
"Sue Ellen stop you have to believe me, I didn't mean to hurt you"
"You will never change you got what you wanted, and walked away. I'm such a idiot, I let you in every time, I deserve what I got"
"I woke up, and didn't want to wake you that is all"
"Shut up, you know that is not what I would have wanted. I want you to respect me, but how could you, I threw myself at you last night, but I have dreamed of us getting back together for so long. I thought it would be perfect, but you hurt me again". Sue Ellen was crying , JR went to touch her. She screamed, "Don't touch me it is over, I can't do this anymore"
"It isn't over, I love you, I was a idiot this morning. I swear I never thought I would hurt you. I left a note, I thought you would understand"
"No I didn't it felt like all those times you left me home alone wondering who you were with? Who you were making love to, do you have any idea how that felt"?
"Yes but you did it to me too Sugar"
"Don't you put this on me, you don't get it. I need someone to love me, and cherish me, and that isn't you. I think you care, but not enough to truly make me happy. You think relationships are all about sex, that is great, but I want more than that. I know I was all over you last night, I hate myself for that. I guess I knew deep down that would be the only thing you wanted, you got it move on"
No, I made love to you last night it was so special. I needed that, and I dreamed about that for so long. I never thought you would forgive me, and you did. I loved how you took over last night, it was different"
"What I'm a Tramp, Oh great get out of my house"
"No, what is this calling yourself a Tramp"?
"I feel like one walking up alone seeing you gone. My heart broke, how could you do that to me JR"? JR hated himself her face was covered in tears. He touched her face, "I'm so sorry forgive me"
"What you don't have a date for tonight, you need another quickie, don't look at me. I learned my lesson, and I learned it well. You won JR, you finally broke me down so much, I hate myself. Please go I need to be alone, I can't look at you anymore"
JR got up, "I don't want to go, I love you"
"Sure you do, it is ok JR, I will be fine, I will survive this I always do"
JR walked to the door, but he slammed it shut. "No I'm not leaving here, I love you , can't you see that"?
"No"
JR knelt down, "I don't know what you like, or what you want. I need you to show me, and tell me what you expect from me. I can't walk away Sugar, it will kill me if I do"
"If you don't know what I like, and want you don't know me JR that is so sad"
"I'm trying please". JR stood up, he started to cry, Sue Ellen only saw him cry twice. When he found out that John Ross's was his, and when his Dad died. She was shocked, he walked over sitting in a chair. Sue Ellen stayed on the bed, she didn't know how to react to this emotion, she wanted to run to him, and tell him everything is ok, but was it?
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Post by melindajo2000 on Aug 3, 2011 8:31:23 GMT -6
I really hope that she forgives him. gret job
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Post by Sanda on Aug 3, 2011 22:47:40 GMT -6
Great update Jessie. I hope that Sue Ellen forgives JR as well.
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Post by jessie on Aug 4, 2011 23:03:55 GMT -6
Chapter 12
JR sat in the chair, Sue Ellen got up walking over to him. "JR are you ok"?
"No I'm feeling like crap, I didn't intend to hurt you, but I obviously did. I will leave, maybe you would be better without me". JR got walking to the door, he was shocked when he was hit from behind, Sue Ellen pushed him to the ground. "Your walking out after that speech you are a idiot. I was just believing you, get out, and I never want to see you again"
"You were going to forgive me, why didn't you act like that"?
"I have a right to be angry, go I'm not playing this game anymore". She turned JR grabbed her leg she tried to pull away, but she fell on her butt. She screamed, "What is wrong with you, I said leave". JR started to laugh, "Now we are even"
"What are you 2"?
"No but you pushed me, I grabbed you, can we just stop, and talk"
"Talk about what"?
"Us"
"What about us it is over, you said just now. I'm to good for you JR, I deserve someone that will treat me like a lady not a piece of property"
"A lady you like being my plaything Sugar, I would love you to be my wife again, if you will shut up long enough to let me kiss you"
"You are telling me to shut up now how dare you". JR smiled, "Oh you are so sexy when your mad"
Sue Ellen smiled, "You are really pushing me JR, I'm about to lose it in a minute"
"Oh you haven't lost it yet"
Sue Ellen got up , "JR get off the ground, go home". JR got up, he walked over grabbing her, and kissed her so passionately. She pushed away, "No I'm not biting"
"Oh no why not"?
"JR this isn't a game, this is my life".
"Sugar you know you want me, come here"
"No'
"Should I come to you"?
"No"
"Do you want me to leave, and never come back"?
Sue Ellen was looking at JR, he moved closer. "Do you Sugar"?
"No"
"Was that so hard"?
"Yes"
"I love you Sue Ellen"
"I can't take you hurting me again, I can't"
"I won't"
"Promise"
"Yes I promise"
Sue Ellen moved closer, "You ever leave without saying goodbye, I will lose it JR"
"Never again every morning, I will give you a morning surprise you will never forget"
"Oh that sounds like fun"
"Sugar move back to Southfork it is crazy you living here"
"No not yet, I want you to court me, I want a fresh start"
"Court you"?
"Yeah can you handle that"?
"Yeah but this is crazy we are not teens"
"JR I want this stop making jokes"
"Ok courting it is, but that doesn't mean no sex before we marry"?
Sue Ellen smiled, "Hell no", as she jumped into his arms, and they kiss.
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Post by melindajo2000 on Aug 5, 2011 13:40:05 GMT -6
you have their chemistry down perfectly..awesome
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