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Post by jessie on Apr 19, 2011 16:44:35 GMT -6
OK guys don't kill me on this one. I'm doing a really sad I dream of Jeannie story ok. Chapter 1 Jeannie was sitting on the couch, when the phone rang. "Hello" "Hey Jeannie, it is Roger, how is the Major"? "The same Roger" 'Can me and Alfred come over today to see him"? "Sure if you like, what time are you thinking about coming over"? "Oh 2pm if that is ok with you"? "Sure I will be here" "Jeannie are you ok"? "Me sure I'm fine, I will be waiting for you". She hung up, but tears came to her eyes, she grabbed a kleenex, and wiped her eyes. She was so depressed, she didn't know what to do, but she knew her guy needed her more than ever. She got up going upstairs, and walked into their room. They had been married for 15 years, he was the love of her life. She walked over, she sat down, touching his face. Major Nelson opened his eyes, and smiled, "There you are beautiful, I wondered where you disappeared"? "Oh I was downstairs, I'm sorry did you need something"? "Yes you Jeannie, please stop with the sad eyes, I need to see that beautiful smile" Jeannie smiled, but she had to force it, she felt so angry, and bitter, that she could grant so many wishes, but the most important one, she couldn't. She got up walking to the door, he yelled out, "Please don't leave me ". She turned, "I"m so sorry Master, I can't believe this is happening." "It is life Sweetie, this happens, you can't stop this. This isn't your fault, please come here, I need you beside me" "Major Roger, and Dr Alfred are coming for a visit" "Oh you better help me change into something more appropiate" "You look fine, you don't have to change" "Jeannie don't push me away, I need you now more than ever. I have never been scared, but I am now. I'm not scared because I'm dying, I'm scared for you. I'm afraid you will allow yourself to get sick once I'm gone. You are so beautiful, and so kind you deserve to go on with your life, promise me you will not give up once, I'm gone". "I can't promise you that, once you are gone, I have nothing, I won't survive". Jeannie ran out of the room, leaving Major Nelson speechless, and in shock. To be continued
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Post by Sanda on Apr 19, 2011 17:01:57 GMT -6
Great start to your new story Jessie. I don't mind that you are doing a sad I Dream Of Jeanine story.
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Post by melindajo2000 on Apr 19, 2011 17:04:18 GMT -6
oh this is going to be beautiful and so sad, I'm going to cry glad to see you branching out, awesome job Jessie
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Post by jessie on Apr 21, 2011 17:14:58 GMT -6
Chapter 2
Jeannie was sitting on the couch, she had been crying for the last hour. She jumped when the doorbell went off. She got up, wiping her eyes, and opening the door.
"Hello Major Roger, and Doctor Alfred"
"Jeannie, how are you"?
"Not good". She started to cry, they both didn't know how to react? Roger hugged her, and whispered, "You have to be strong for him"
"How can I, he is dying, and I can't help him".
"Jeannie he needs you now more than ever. We are there for him, but it is you, he adores, don't push him away".
"I'm not but the one wish I want, I can't grand how fair is that"?
"This is out of your hands, he knows you can't do anything Jeannie"
"He is trying to be strong, but he is failing so quickly Roger"
"How about we go up, and see him . We promise we won't tire him out"
"Go up he would love to see you, I will bring up some coffee"
"You don't have to do that"
"I want to, you like it black Aurthur, and you like double double Roger"
"Yes you got it". Jeannie smiled as they walked upstairs. She walked to the kitchen. She started their coffee, she knew Anthony loved his coffee, but he couldn't stomach it anymore. She got him a ginger ale, she put some cookies on the tray, and went upstairs. She walked into the room, they all looked at her. She smiled, "Here is your coffee, and Sweetie, I brought you a ginger ale".
"Oh coffee it smells so good". Jeannie smiled, "Would you like to try, but it normally makes you sick"?
"Ginger ale is fine, why don't you join us Jeannie"?
"No, I have stuff to do downstairs". She turned but Anthony yelled, "Please stay, I need you ". She turned, "Major wouldn't you like to have some alone time with your friends"?
"They don't mind, come sit down beside me". She felt tears come to her eyes.
"I'm so sorry, I can't". She ran out, leaving them all speechless. Alfred, and Roger looked at him, they could see he was heartbroken, and it killed them. Roger excused himself, saying he had to go to the washroom. He walked out, and ran downstairs, he couldn't see Jeannie, so he went to the kitchen. He walked out, and noticed her outside, standing in the garden.
"Jeannie"
"Oh Roger you scared me, what are you doing out here"?
"I need to say something to you"
"What I know I was wrong upstairs, but I can't"
"Can't what Jeannie"?
"I can't watch him die, it is killing me inside"
"What you did upstairs shocked me Jeannie. You have been his life for over 15 years. He talked about you all the time, he adores you, he wants to protect you, and he hates seeing what this is doing to you. He can't help it, he needs us all to help him get through this. He is dying, there is nothing any of us can do. We can be there for him, make this time comfortable for him. He doesn't need the stress of worrying about any of us. We will help you when the time comes. You think you won't survive, but you will, because of Anthony. You will regret this Jeannie, don't push him away now, please don't hurt my friend. I know I have no right to do this, but I'm sorry you are being selfish, thinking of yourself, think of him, he has devoted his life to you for so many years. He wouldn't do this to you, I know it. Hate me if you must, but I'm not very impressed with you, at the moment Jeannie, I thought you would love him more now, than ever before. You do what you must, but I promise you, when the time comes, you will wish you had this time back, and you will have no one to blame but yourself". Roger turned, and walked into the house, and went upstairs to his friend. He hated hurting Jeannie, but at the moment, he felt she needed that talk, because he loved her too, and he would hate for her to regret losing precious moments, with her husband, bestfiend, and her sole mate. He walked in the room, Anthony smiled, "we wondered where you went"?
"I'm here, you didn't drink my coffee did yeah"?
"No", They all smile, and continued to talk.
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Post by melindajo2000 on Apr 22, 2011 11:18:53 GMT -6
Roger was blunt but Right, Tony needs her more than ever so hopefully she can get past her worst fears and be there for him. excellent chapter Jessie
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Post by jessie on May 31, 2011 19:30:49 GMT -6
Chapter 3
Jeannie walked downstairs with Major Roger, and Doctor Alfred. They both were leaving, they had a lovely visit with Anthony, every time they left, they prayed it wouldn't be their last. Jeannie hugged them both, Roger walked over.
"I'm sorry if I hurt you earlier, but you needed that talk". She kissed his cheek, "I know and I understand".
"We will be back to see him but if he needs anything call us ok"
"I will thank you". They left, Jeannie went upstairs to Antony.
"Oh are they gone Sweetie"?
"Yes, are you tired, they stayed a long time today"
"I think they are afraid I won't be around much longer"
"Shh Major, I don't want to hear that from you".
"I'm scared Jeannie, that makes me a coward"
"Of course you would be scared, but you are not leaving anything soon. We will have so much more time together. Would you like anything to eat"?
"No, but I would love some dessert"
"Major you are not taking about making love"?
"I'm not dead yet, I want to make love to my beautiful wife"
"We can't you are so weak, but I so want to make love to you". She saw tears in his eyes, and she knew it felt like a rejection to him. She could feel the tears coming, but she hated to cry in front of him. She wanted to be so strong, but she was dying inside. She went to get off the bed, but he grabbed her arm.
"Jeannie please don't leave"
She turned moving closer to him, as she brought her lips to his.
"Please Jeannie". She touched his lips, as she whispered, "I can never resist you". They both smile, as she moved over him, he shut his eyes. She whispered, "I love you Anthony". She slowly kissed him as they removed their clothes. They made love, it was so gentle, and slow. It was the most romantic moment, of her entire life. She was laying beside him, after they finished. They both giggle but she could see it took a toll on him. She pulled the blanket up, and moved real close to him. She could hear his fast breathing, it was scaring her. She whispered, "Major do you know how much I love you"?
"Yes Jeannie, you don't have to keep saying that to me"
"What will I do without you Major, you are my whole life"?
"You will go on, but you will never find a love like we had. I love you Jeannie, the day you walked into my life, was the most amazing moment of my life. Oh you have annoyed me over the years, but you made me so happy".
She smiled, "I annoyed you did I"?
"In a cute way". They both laugh, as they moved close, and kissed. He fell asleep in her arms, she held him close, she was afraid to let him go. She couldn't sleep, she was so afraid she wouldn't hear him cry out. She was just happy that they had this special moment, she just hoped it wasn't to much for him.
"To be continued.
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Post by Sanda on May 31, 2011 19:49:19 GMT -6
Great update Jessie. OMG I feel so bad for Jeanine in the story knowing that she can't save Major Nelson's life.
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Post by melindajo2000 on May 31, 2011 20:35:57 GMT -6
OMG I almost cried reading this, it was so sad knowing Jeannie can't do anything to help. love this story and I'm glad you updated
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Post by jessie on Mar 1, 2012 0:42:45 GMT -6
Chapter 4
The next morning Jeannie woke up, and looked at the Major he was sleeping but his breathing was not good. She touched his cheek, and he slowly opened his eyes, as she started to cry.
"I'm going to call the Doctor, maybe it is time you go to the hospital"
"Wait"
"No Major you are having trouble breathing"
"It is time Jeannie, I don't want to do this to you, but I can't hold on any longer"
"You must I need you , I will not survive without you"
"Promise me you will go on, I will always be here in your heart"
"I want you here please listen to me, I will call the Doctor"
He grabbed her hand, but he was so weak, and Jeannie knew he was going to leave her, and she wanted to run, she couldn't deal with this. She knew she had to be brave, but she was so angry, she could do so many things, but the one wish she would want she could not grant. She touched his face, and whispered, " I love you, I will never stop loving you"
"Hold me Jeannie" She pulled him into her arms, and he laid his head on her chest, as she touched his head, and started to cry. He was so weak but he pulled himself up, and faced her, as he tried to kiss her one last time. She was shaking as their lips came together, and she pulled him close as he laid back, and she could see he was slipping away. She tried to stay in control but she cried out, as he shut his eyes, and she knew he took his last breath. She whispered his name, but he didn't answer, and she pulled him into her arms, and rocked him. She didn't want to let him go , she knew her life was never going to be the same. She laid him back just staring at him. She finally got up covering him with a blanket, and she walked over calling 911. She said that her husband was gone, she needed someone to come right away. They said they would have someone there as soon as possible. She called Roger, and he was devastated, but she asked him to call Alfred, because she couldn't talk to anyone else. He said he would come over to be with her but she said she wanted to be alone. He knew she was in shock but he said he would abide by her wishes. She hung up, and walked downstairs to wait for the Coroner, she sat on the couch, she wasn't crying she was just cold inside. She was replaying the night before in her head, and wondered if she caused him to get worse. She knew he wanted to make love but she never should have. She jumped when someone knocked at the door. She opened the door, it was the Police, and two Paramedics. She told them her husband was upstairs, but he was gone. They ran up to make sure as she stood by the door. The cool air was hitting her, she felt tears fall down her cheek. She wanted to scream she never felt so alone, and angry. Why was she angry with him it was not his fault he got sick. She was suppose to take care of him, and she didn't even know he was sick until it was to late. She let him down, but she knew it was out of her hands, but she blamed herself anyway. The Officer came down, and told her the Coroner was on the way. He asked her if there was anyone they could call for her. She shook her head, he touched her shoulder, and told her to sit down. She walked over to the couch, and sat down just staring into space. She was wishing this was a dream but it was real, and it was the worst day of her life.
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Post by melindajo2000 on Mar 3, 2012 19:55:20 GMT -6
omg I cried this was so sad, I love this story you made me miss this show, you did such a good job writing this. please update soon
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Post by melindajo2000 on Dec 2, 2012 15:24:27 GMT -6
I cried rereading this. I hope you can continue, it would be a great tribute to Larry Hagman. I understand if you can't but it is a beautiful story and You are so good at writing powerful emotions
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Post by Sanda on Dec 2, 2012 17:57:50 GMT -6
Great update Jessie. Poor Jeannie. Jessie I agree with Melinda, I hope you continue this awesome story in honor of Larry Hagman who played Major Anthony Nelson.
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