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Post by jessie on Apr 13, 2011 22:39:43 GMT -6
Short story for Sanda, hope you like this one. ;D
Chapter 1
Reid walked to the back , and went in to see Penelope.
"Hey kid you visiting me again"?
"Yeah I just have a spare moment, you don't mind do you"?
"No Sweet boy but it isn't me, it is Sanda that your visiting, admit it"
"Penelope stop it, she will hear you". Sanda turned, "I already did Reid, I think it is sweet you came to visit me". Reid blushed, and Sanda giggled, "Oh you are too cute Reid". He walked over, "Would you like to go out on a date friday"?
"With me"?
Penelope laughed, "OMG you two are the cutest people, OMG you belong together, say yes already Sanda"
"Penelope stop it you are embarrassing poor Reid"
"He likes you girl, you talk about him all the time, so say yes, and put him out of his misery".
Reid smiled, "Say yes, she will bug you all day until you do"
"I would love to go out with you Reid".
He kissed her cheek, and walked to the door, and turned smiling. Penelope smiled, "Oh no kiss for me Reid"? She pouted, Reid walked over kissing Penelope on the cheek, and than left.
"Oh Sanda you like him don't you"?
"He is different but he is so cute, don't you think so"?
"Oh yes, he is adorable, I think Morgan is Sexy"
"Penelope you are not shy girl"
"No Sanda, I'm not, and I'm going to change you big time. I'm taking you out after work, and I'm helping you pick out your outfit. You will love my help, I will make you look wild".
"Oh no Penelope not to wild"
"Oh yes Sanda, wild is fun". Penelope turned away, and smiled knowing, she was scaring Sanda, but in a good way. Sanda was trying to do her work, but all she could think about was Reid, she likes him a lot, she just hoped, there date will be perfect, she sure would love to have a boyfriend, and Reid would be the perfect one for her.
To be continued.
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Post by Sanda on Apr 13, 2011 22:50:49 GMT -6
Great start to your new story Jessie. I can't wait to see how Penelope is going to change me. I LOVE her wild wardrobe on the show. I LOVE that you have me having a crush on Reid. He is my favorite character on Criminal Minds.
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Post by melindajo2000 on Apr 14, 2011 11:16:11 GMT -6
great start to your new story Jessie
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Post by jessie on Aug 16, 2011 1:07:03 GMT -6
Chapter 2
Penelope grabbed Sanda after work, and they left to go out shopping. Sanda was going on a date tomorrow with Reid, and she was going to make her look perfect for her friend. Sanda was nervous she adored Penelope but she dressed a little wild for her. She could imagine her parents faces seeing her with Penelope wild hairstyles, and clothes. She also had a part of her that thought it would be fun too. Penelope drove her to her favourite dress shop, and they went inside. The man walked over, and Sanda wanted to laugh. He was dressed so wild to she looked around, and knew she was going to have a fun time shopping. Penelope was getting her to try on so many different outfits. Sanda looked in the mirror she wasn't sure about them. Penelope thought they were perfect. She ended up trying on one dress that she actually really liked on herself. She turned to Penelope, and said, "How does it look"?
"Oh that is you girl he will love you"
"Or run away this is not how I normally look"
"I know the new Sanda is coming out, and presenting herself"
"I didn't mind my old self Penelope"
"Me either but live a little, come on do this for me"
"Ok I will get this dress, and this outfit is cute". They grabbed a few more things, and shoes too. They paid and put the stuff in the car, than they walked to a hair salon. They went inside, and the man called Seth walked over looking at Penelope. "Oh girl you have been doing your own hair haven't you"?
"Yeah why"?
"I'm sad you use to trust me now you trying to take my job away"
"Stop it Seth I'm here for Sanda, I want her to have a whole new look"
"Oh she is beautiful I say go shorter and wild, and change the color to a lighter look"
"Oh I don't know"
"Trust me Sweetie you will love it". Sanda was nervous but she went alone with Seth, and let him do his thing. She didn't see herself until after, and was shocked at her new look. She stared at herself for the longest time. Penelope walked over, "OMG you are adorable what do you think"?
"Is that me, I'm totally different"
Seth smiled, "That is you Angel"
"I like it , I really do"
Seth smiled, "Thank God for a minute there I thought you were going to cry"
"No it is different but I like it". She paid , Penelope and Sanda left, and got their nails done. They left and had a coffee, than Sanda went home. She had to work in the morning so she needed her sleep.
The next morning she arrived at work, Penelope was talking to Morgan and Reid by their desks. Sanda walked down the stairs, both Reid and Morgan almost dropped their coffee's. Sanda wasn't wearing the new dress, but she was wearing the new outfit. It was fine for work, but she sure looked different. Reid walked over, "Sanda what did you do"?
"Oh God you don't like my new look"?
"Oh yes I do"
Sanda smiled, "Good you scared me"
"Oh I didn't recognize you at first your stunning"
"Thank You Reid"
"We are still going out after work right"?
"Yes you still want to right"?
"Yes I can't wait". Sanda whispered, "We better do some work before they fire us"
"Oh right see you soon Sanda"
"Yeah come and see me for a coffee break"
"I will". Sanda walked to her office, Penelope smiled at Morgan. "They make the sweetest couple"
"She is gorgeous who knew that shy girl could dress like that"
"Morgan have some respect". She walked away, "What I was just saying"
"I know what you were saying Morgan do some work". Reid walked over, "What is wrong with her"?
"Don't know". Morgan watched Penelope walk away mad, and he sat down wondering why.
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Post by Sanda on Aug 16, 2011 1:25:52 GMT -6
Cute update Jessie. I LOVE that me and Penelope went shopping together. ;D OMG Penelope does have some the wildest clothes on Criminal Minds.
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Post by melindajo2000 on Aug 16, 2011 9:15:46 GMT -6
great update, love her new style
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Post by jessie on Nov 17, 2011 14:40:08 GMT -6
Chapter 3
Sanda was working she couldn't function she was daydreaming all day about her date. Her stomach was doing flips, she wondered if Reid would go for it , and kiss her. She touched her lips she wondered what kissing Reid would be like. She knew it would be sweet, he was so adorable. She was looking at some papers, when someone touched her shoulder. She jumped, Reid whispered, "Oh my God, I'm so sorry are you ok"?
"Yeah you startled me, I was daydreaming I guess"
'About what"? Sanda went so red Reid smiled, "Were you thinking about me"?
"Yeah maybe I was"
Reid blushed, "I was thinking about you too it is 11, want to have a coffee with me"?
"Sure I haven't had break yet, I haven't really started working yet"
Reid laughed, "We will keep that our little secret" Sanda grabbed her purse, and sweater, and they walked next door to the coffee shop. They sat at a booth, the waitress came over they ordered a coffee, and a bagel.
Reid reached over touching her hands, "I love your new look it is so pretty, but I loved your old look too"
"Thank you Reid to be honest Penelope helped me with this look"
"Really I would think she would have gone for more flashy"
"She tried but this is as flashy as I get"
"You are so pretty Sanda, I have wanted to ask you out for months'
"Why didn't you"?
"I was afraid you would say no, I was a fool I guess"
"No you are shy, and that is sweet"
"I'm a nerd"
"No your not"
Reid laughed, "I can't wait for our date tonight"
"Me either I hope nothing ruins it for us"
"You mean I get a call, and I have to run off on another case"
"Yeah basically but I understand that is your job, and I respect that"
"I know I am praying tonight I have a night of no business, I so need this"
"Me too"
"I been thinking Sanda , and you know I think a lot. I try to analysis stuff, but I wanted to ask you something really important. "
"Anything"
Reid took a chain off his neck with a class ring, he smiled, "I was wondering if we can go steady so we know this is for real, and I can feel I have someone real special in my life"
Sanda smiled, "You want me to wear your class ring"?
"Only if you want to, I would be real happy if you would"
Sanda took the necklace, and put it around her neck. She smiled, "How does it look"?
"Perfect just like you"
Sanda touched Reid's hand, "We are official we are going steady"
Reid laughed, "Yes we are"
The waitress walked over, "You two are to cute, son giving her your class ring is adorable"
"You were watching"?
"At my age yes I love seeing people in love, but I hope you are more happy than I was when I was younger. I hate being alone it sucks, but that is my life so yes watching other young couples is a pastime with me. I have a feeling you two just might make it" She put the coffee down, and walked away"
Reid and Sanda smile at each other , as they both ate their bagel not knowing what to say next?
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Post by melindajo2000 on Nov 17, 2011 15:38:24 GMT -6
this was so good, they make a cute couple
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Post by Sanda on Nov 17, 2011 23:17:02 GMT -6
Cute update Jessie. I agree with MelindaJo that Sanda and Reid make a cute couple.
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Post by jessie on Feb 8, 2013 15:57:25 GMT -6
Chapter 4
They finished their lunch but they were talking. Reid was in his own little world. He couldn't believe she liked him she was cute, he loved her giggle it was was so adorable it made him laugh. She got him his silly jokes, and when he would ramble on about something she probably didn't care about she listened like he was saying the most amazing thing. She was talking her stories about her Parents, her cat, and her best friend made him smile. She was someone he could relate to, and he sure hoped this turns into something permanent. He knows his job scares people away, but she knows what he does, and understands, and has helped him by listening to him when he has had a bad day. He couldn't wait for their date tonight. He knew the afternoon would go on forever because each phone call or every time Aaron came out of his office Reid's heart would stop thinking he would have to leave, and only have enough time to cancel their date. He deserved this night, and he hoped nothing came in his way to taking out the girl that has captured his heart.
Reid felt her hand go over his, and he realized he was daydreaming, and she probably thought he was rude.
"Reid are you OK you seem miles away"
"No just thinking about what is important in life, and how happy I am this moment"
"Me too I am enjoying myself, and I can't wait until tonight"
"We better get back we don't want to have to do overtime, but tonight we are going to have so much fun"
They got up after Reid paid for breakfast he tipped the waitress , and they walked back to the office. They were on the elevator on their way up when Reid turned to Sanda, and took her by surprise. He brought his lips over hers, and kissed her so passionately it took her breathe away. The door of the elevator opened, and they didn't realize until they heard Morgan and Penelope laugh.
Sanda smiled as she got out of the elevator, and said.
"See you later Reid thanks for bagel, and coffee" She looked at Morgan, and Penelope as she said goodbye, and almost ran to the lab. Reid got off the elevator Morgan went to say something but Reid put his finger up.
"Don't you dare say something bad Morgan"
"Me never she is adorable she has a new haircut it is so adorable is she single"?
"She is mine Morgan don't you dare ask her out"
"She is single why not"
"She won't be single long we are dating, and I really like her"
"I know man I saw that kiss"
"She is so sweet, I never felt this way for anyone really. I have dated but not much but she makes my heart beat so fast"
"Oh Reid has a girlfriend about time my Friend" Morgan said, but Penelope whispered.
"Don't tease him but she is perfect for him"
Reid smiled as he walked away thinking she sure was perfect, and he sure hoped they would be more than just friends he wanted someone special in his life, and he thinks he finally just found her.
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Post by Sanda on Feb 8, 2013 16:33:51 GMT -6
Cute update Jessie. Reid and Sanda are so cute and adorable together in this story. I love that Morgan was teasing Reid about dating me. I love that Penelope said that me and Reid were perfect for each other. I hope you update this awesome story for me again really soon.
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Post by melindajo2000 on Feb 9, 2013 8:38:22 GMT -6
really good can't wait for more!
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