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Post by Sanda on Mar 17, 2011 23:39:09 GMT -6
OMG Jessie I LOVED part 2 of Alone with Only Memories part 2. You wrote John and Lucinda's reunion perfectly.
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Post by melindajo2000 on Mar 18, 2011 12:24:15 GMT -6
that was so romantic, I hope you write about other couples of ATWT.. I really loved that
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Post by jessie on Mar 19, 2011 18:48:25 GMT -6
One stormy night One shot, Melinda, Sanda I know you love Carly and Jack, hope you like this story. Carly and Jack decided to go for a long ride, on a Friday night. Gwen and Will were looking after the kids, and Carly and Jack needed some alone time. They both had been waiting all week for this. Carly got dressed, but casually because they were just having fun, not going anywhere really special. Jack came home from work showered, put on some jeans, and a t-shirt, and came downstairs. Carly was giving the kids their dinner. She smiled, she loved Jack, and she couldn't wait for Gwen and Will to arrive. Jack walked over, "Now you kids be good for Will, and Gwen. You go to bed, when they say. We will be home late, but if your good tomorrow, all of us will go to a movie. " Carly laughed, "Madison can't go to a movie Jack" "Well we will find someone to babysit, but we will see something cool". JJ laughed, "Something cool, not girly for Sage" "Me and Mom will go see something good, you, Dad and Parker can go see your car chase movies" Jack laughed, "No we are watching something we all can go together. I'm sitting beside your lovely Mom, we are going to share popcorn, and hold hands, and kiss whenever we want'. He walked over kissing Carly , for a moment, they forgot about the kids. They both laugh, when JJ and Sage yell, "Get a room you two". Madison who was 18 months was clapping her hands, and giggling, she loved everything, she was so happy all the time. Jack walked over, "Here is my biggest fan right Maddy". He lifted her up swinging her around. Carly yelled but it was to late, she had just ate, and got sick on Jack. Parker laughed, "Yeah she is your greatest fan Dad". Jack looked at Carly, "Here is our Angel, I will go change". Carly whispered "She just ate, sorry". "That was my own fault, I never learn". Maddy yelled, "Daddy sorry" "Oh Angel, that is ok, Daddy never should have swung you around". Jack ran upstairs, and changed, and was walking downstairs, and the doorbell rang. Carly and Jack both yelled, " Will and Gwen". Jack opened the door, "Will and Gwen walked in, and smiled, "we are early , but we didn't want to be late". "The kids ate, you can have anything in the fridge you want. There is tons of movies in the cabinet over there. Don't put anything scary on for Sage, she won't go to bed. There is snacks on the counter, we will be home, around 12 ok" "Yes, have fun, the kids will be fine". Jack and Carly , kissed them all, Carly grabbed her purse, and coat, and they left. They ran to the car, and they couldn't get away from the house fast enough. Jack smiled, "Where too Carly"? "How about we drive, and we stop when we are hungry"? Jack laughed, "Sounds like a plan, I can handle". They were driving, and talking, and they were listening to music. Carly was singing, and Jack was singing along. They needed this time alone, it has been months since, they just had time to themselves. They didn't mind, they loved their kids, but they needed this time alone". They stopped, at a little diner, and were eating burgers, and fries. They loved them, it has been the best meal they had in ages. They were finished, they paid, and walked out, and they looked up in the sky, and realized, a storm was coming. They thought they better head back to Oakdale, before the storm hit. They got in the car, and were heading back, but the rain started, and the wind was really bad. They couldn't see 5 feet in front of them. Carly got scared, "Jack we shouldn't drive in this". Jack saw a motel, he drove in, and parked his car. He turned, "Should we get a room, and we will head out, once the storm is over"? "Yeah it might be a while, lets get a room". Jack got out, running in getting a room, and he came back, and got Carly. They both were soaked but they were laughing. They got inside, and Jack said they should hang up the wet clothes, so they would dry a little". "What will we wear Jack"? "Well do we need anything, we are alone". Carly smiled, "Did you plan this night Jack"? "No, I didn't know we were expecting a storm did you"? "No, they said the weather was going to be nice for the next few days". "We better phone Will and Gwen, and say we will be late for sure". Jack picked up the phone, and called home. Carly was taking off her wet clothes. Jack told Will what happened, he said if they had to stay at the Motel overnight, they would be fine with that. They are having fun with the kids, so don't worry if you can't make it home tonight" "Thanks Will, I will let you know in the next hour or so". "Bye Jack , drive home safely" "I will bye, tell the kids, we love them" "I will bye". Jack hung up, Carly walked out of the bathroom. Jack smiled, "Wow I love what your wearing" "I'm not wearing anything Jack". "Exacly I love that". "Go hang up your stuff, I will jump in bed" "Ok", Jack went and undressed, hanging up his wet clothes. He came into the bathroom. He stood staring at Carly, she smiled, "Oh come here G Man". He ran over jumping in bed, and she giggled, as he got real close. He leaned over her, and brought his lips over hers. She touched his face, "Oh Jack , I love you". She caressed his shoulders, and put her hands on his chest, and could feel his heartbeat thru her fingers, and the heat coming off his body. They didn't take their eyes off each other, and they knew exactly what the other wanted and needed.They made love, and after Jack laid on top of Carly, smiling you take my breath away . I don't know, but I never felt so completely filfulled, Carly I love you, and I will until the day , I die". Carly has tears in her eyes, she touched his face, "I will have to go first, because I never would survive a day without you Jack Snyder". They both laid in each others arms, they called home, and told them they would be home in time for breakfast. They both laid awake talking, and they both were never more happier, than this moment. They both laughed, they were glad it stormed out today, because this night was special, and they would never forget it as long as they lived. The End
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Post by jessie on Mar 19, 2011 18:58:58 GMT -6
OMG Sanda I love your one shot, so romantic, way to go girl.. ;D I love that Reid was wearing Batman underwear, I was trying to picture that. ;D I'm being bad, he probably would look sexy in his batman underwear. I loved your one shot, one of your best. Thanks for sharing.
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Post by Sanda on Mar 19, 2011 19:08:12 GMT -6
OMG Sanda I love your one shot, so romantic, way to go girl.. ;D I love that Reid was wearing Batman underwear, I was trying to picture that. ;D I'm being bad, he probably would look sexy in his batman underwear. I loved your one shot, one of your best. Thanks for sharing. Thank you Jessie for your awesome comments about my Reid and Luke oneshot. I agree that it was soo romantic. ;D I had fun writing it. ;D I HATED when Noah punched Reid in the face in front of Mona Cross and Bob Hughes at the Lakeview. BTW I LOVED your Jack and Carly one shot as well. It was soo sweet and so romantic as well.
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Post by melindajo2000 on Mar 19, 2011 21:35:58 GMT -6
Sanda I like your one shot very much I didn't know Noah punched him
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Post by melindajo2000 on Mar 19, 2011 21:42:14 GMT -6
very romantic one shot Jessie, I love Carly and Jack so I'm glad you did this one shot, very nice
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Post by Sanda on Mar 19, 2011 22:21:06 GMT -6
Sanda I like your one shot very much I didn't know Noah punched him Melindajo, I am soo happy you liked my Reid and Luke oneshot. Here is a link to the scene where Noah punched Reid at the Lakeview. www.youtube.com/watch?v=4BPDdJod2GQ
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Post by jessie on Mar 21, 2011 13:23:31 GMT -6
One shot for Sanda, this is your idea, hope you like this Reid and Luke one shot. ;D A shock of a lifetime Reid and Luke were downstairs, they were fighting again, and Reid walked toward the elevator. Luke ran over grabbing his arm, and said, "don't you walk away from me" "Listen here Luke, I saved your boyfriend's eyesight, he will be better in no time. I'm tired of your nagging, go be with Noah, and stop following me around". "I told you, me and Noah are no longer together that way. We are friends, I wanted you to help him, why can't you just for once be normal, and stop being so grumpy"? Reid walked into the elevator, Luke ran in, and Reid went to get off, but the door slammed shut. Reid pushed the third floor, and Luke was upset he pushed the stop button, and the elevator stopped suddenly, then bounced scaring them both. Reid grabbed on to Luke, "are you crazing, OMG now we are stuck". Luke laughed, "Ok lets me start it up again, you are a big baby". Luke pushed the button, and nothing happened. Reid was yelling now, and Luke thought he was dead if it didn't start. "OMG Reid it won't start" "Oh don't joke around, get it moving now" "It won't move, I'm sorry, I'm trying". Reid slid to the floor, and Luke ran over, "Are you ok"? " I can't be locked in here, I can't breath, you are taking all the air" "Stop it, they will get us out in a minute or two" "Why did you push the button, you don't play around with mechanical thing's Luke" "I'm sorry, God you are sweating, calm down". Luke walked over grabbing the phone, and someone answered. "We are stuck in elevator 2, can you get us out"? "We are trying we need the elevator repair man to come in. We called it will be about 1 hour" "No Dr Reid Oliver is in here, I'm Luke Snyder, he can't wait 1 hour" Reid screamed, "No I can't be in this box with you for 1 hour". Luke turned, "Well you have no choice, stop yelling or we will run out of air". Luke told the man to hurry, and hung up. Luke stood by the wall, Reid started to take off his sweater. Luke smiled , "Are you getting naked now"? "Yeah I'm boiling up in here, so don't look if you don't like it" "Oh I like it Reid, nice abs" Reid laughed, "I knew you liked me Snyder, you are to much" Luke walked over, and sat beside Reid, and they both were quiet. Luke whispered, "It is hot in here, but I think you getting undressed made it worse" "Why"? "You have to ask"? Reid smiled, but was shocked when Luke brought his lips over Reid's. He kissed Reid so fast , and hard, Reid couldn't catch his breath. He grabbed hold of Luke's shoulders, and they both were kissing, and pulling each others clothes off. They both couldn't stop the passion that has been boiling up for weeks. Reid and Luke were looking into each others eyes, when Luke whispered, "make love to me Reid". He didn't have to ask a second time, they were making love, and they both were being brought over the end. They both collapsed beside each other both laughing, both not really sure what just happened. Oh they both wanted it, but how it happened shocked them both. Reid got up pulling on his shirt , which shocked Luke who stood up, and touched Reid's arm. "What is the matter, you don't regret what just happened do you"? "Are you kidding, I have wanted this for weeks. You have drove me crazy, but I never expected this to happen like this". "This was amazing, and beautiful, even though our first time was on a floor in a elevator, that is fine with me" "Me too Luke, but we better get dressed , they might be getting us out any moment". They both got their boxers on, and shirts, they both were smiling. They were about to put their pants on, when the elevator opened up. Reid was shocked, he couldn't believe how many people were standing their watching. Reid pulled his pants up, and he covered Luke as he changed. Bob Hughes looked at him, and Reid tried to explain, it was to hot, but no one was buying that explanation. Luke turned, but the only person he saw was Noah, standing their in his hospital gown, just staring. Luke saw how disappointed, and upset he was. Luke looked at Reid, "I will see you later right" "You bet, after my shift". Reid walked out, and Bob whispered, "My office now". Bob walked down the hall, Luke looked at Reid, and whispered, "Sorry" "I will be fine, see you at 5" Reid followed Bob to his office. Luke turned, "Noah, I'm sorry you saw us like that, but I love him, I have for weeks. You can see perfect now, can't you"? " Yeah I can see perfect, thanks to Reid, but did he have to steal you away from me"? "He didn't Noah, it was over before you even needed his help. You know it, and so do I, Reid Oliver is the man I want to be with" "Yeah I see, maybe you should stop coming around Luke. You go be with Reid, I don't need either of you anymore" "You can be mad Noah, but be grateful to Reid Oliver, he gave you the gift of sight back" "Yeah after what I saw, I'm not so grateful Luke. Have a wonderful life, and if Dr. Feel good hurts you, don't run to me, because it is over". Noah walked down the hall, and Luke whispered, "It was over the moment, I met Reid Noah, and he won't hurt me". Luke smiled, and walked to the cafeteria to get a coffee, hoping Reid would be ok, but he wished he was a fly on the wall in Bob's Office. He would love to hear how Reid, explains what just happened, in the elevator.
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Post by Sanda on Mar 21, 2011 15:36:52 GMT -6
OMG Jessie I LOVE your Reid and Luke one shot Shock of A Lifetime. I was laughing hysterically all the way through this one shot. It was soo sexy, so sweet, soo funny. and so romantic all at the same time. I LOVE that Dr. Bob Hughes witnessed Reid and Luke half naked in the elevator whe the doors opened up at the hospital. ;D You should definitely write a part 2 where Reid tries to explain to Bob Hughes what happened him and Luke in the elevator. ;D It think would be hillarious if someone snapped a picture of Reid and Luke half naked when the elevator doors opened up and it landed on the cover of the towns local tabliod. LOL
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Post by tammie on Mar 21, 2011 19:56:54 GMT -6
Hi Jessie Oh my...my my..alot better..then what the writers of ATWT..did! It was...Hot, Funny, Sweet. I was... Cheering when ...Noah saw them. Bob...to my office...Funny!What a way..to get over..or forget..for a moment...a fear. Glad..you had..Luke tell of..Noah about getting his..sight back! This was....very very Good! Thanks for writing. I hope you...add..just abit more. I really enjoyed...This! .
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Post by jessie on Mar 22, 2011 17:04:19 GMT -6
Thank you Tammie and Sanda, here is part two of A shock of a lifetime .
Reid followed Bob Hughes into his office, and sat down, while Bob sat across from him, in his chair.
Reid wanted to laugh, Bob was so serious, he didn't know what he was about to say?
"Reid what were you thinking"?
"About what"?
"Please it was obvious what took place in that elevator today"
"Obvious Bob what happened than, you seem to know already"
"You and Luke Snyder did something so improper, I could fire you on the spot for, but I won't"
"Oh you are to much Bob, you don't know what happened, and I'm not ashamed of it either"
"Really you are a Doctor"
"Yeah I am, and I can tell you stories about many Doctors in this hospital including your son. I was trapped in the elevator with Luke, I'm sorry you were shocked, and embarrassed to see us, partially undressed. You are lucky it wasn't 7 minutes earlier that would have shocked you"
"Oh you are funny Reid, this is a hospital not some Stud services for men"
"Is it your unhappy we were trapped alone in there. You know we are two gay men, does that make you uncomfortable. I think you have a problem with my lifestyle, and I personal don't care Bob. I didn't do anything wrong, and what you didn't see won't hurt you"
"You did make love in the elevator, OMG what if the doors opened during that time"?
"They didn't don't worry it won't happen again, I can't say my office is off limits though"
"OK Reid, you are being nasty , and rude"
"No you are Bob, you have a problem with my sexuality, and I have noticed it for a while now. I'm proud of myself, this is me, and if you have a problem with it, ask me to leave, another hospital would snap me up in a minute"
"You are really confident in yourself Reid, and for your information, I don't have a problem with your sexuality. You are a Great Doctor, and I wouldn't want to let you go, but fooling around in elevators with Mr. Snyder is not right"
"If it was me and a female nurse would we be having this conversation Bob"?
"Yes Reid , I would". Reid stood up, "Ok I'm sorry, it won't happen again, can I go, and finish my rounds"?
"Yes, but can I ask you one thing first"?
"Yes, what is it"?
"Do you like Luke or are you playing a game with him? He is a young man with a wonderful Family, and they would be hurt, if he got hurt Reid"
Reid walked to the door, "Bob yes I like Luke a lot, or I wouldn't have done what we just did. I'm not the type to get involved with just anyone, you have watched to many movies about gay men. I want what you have Bob, a Partner who I will marry someday, someone to share the good and bad days with. I'm just like you Bob, it is to bad, you can't see that on you own". Reid walked out, Bob sat looking at the door. Reid walked over to the elevator he was going to go to the lab in the basement, when Luke walked up to him.
"Reid I'm so sorry, did Bob give you a hard time"?
"Yeah sort of, I was wrong, but my temper gets the best of me"
"You don't regret what happened do you"?
"No, but maybe we should have waited until we were somewhere else like my place Luke"
"I think it was wild, I'm not ashamed of what happened Reid"
"I'm not either, I'm just mad that is all"
"Reid you want to go out to dinner tonight my treat"?
'Lets grab a couple of burgers, and go to my place, and watch Hockey"
"Hockey"?
"Yeah, it is playoff time soon, I'm not missing it"
"Sure, I will meet you at your place, I will bring the beer, and burgers" Reid smiled, "Cool my place, and you treat sounds awesome".
The elevator opened, Luke got in, and Reid smiled, "I'm not getting in there with you, I don't trust myself". The door shut, as they both stood staring at each other, and they both laughed.
The end
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Post by Sanda on Mar 22, 2011 17:34:07 GMT -6
Jessie, I LOVED part 2 of Shock of A Lifetime. I don't blame Reid for not getting in the elevator again with Luke. I LOVED the conversation between Reid and Luke in part 2 of your one shot. BTW, I can understand that Bob might have a problem with Reid and Luke as a couple becuase unfortunately he and Kim come from a different generation.
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Post by jessie on Mar 22, 2011 17:45:01 GMT -6
Thanks Sanda for all your kind comments about my stories. I'm glad you like Part one, and two of my story, A shock of a lifetime .
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Post by tammie on Mar 22, 2011 20:59:45 GMT -6
Hi Sanda Tender Loving Care....your story....WAS...Sooo much better..then what happened..on ATWT. There was no..Bob..coming in...interputing. Luke was...sooo sweet..to Reid. Reid...was a bit..of hisself.. . Funny....with the batman underwear. You made it ..sounds sooo wonderful, tender...to make love in the shower. ...Awesome...just Awesome! Thanks..for sharing
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